Nanahira - Poka poka Shiteru Dake · forum

CernTheLion

165 posts

Joined February 2015

CernTheLion 2016-07-03T21:54:24+00:00

Hi, from your modding queue ^^
[General]

Keep in mind that if you want to rank this song, you have to do at least another diff because there are 2 diffs that are made by Panda619, check here for more information https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

HO's Easy

00:07:037 (3,1) - this is a beginner diffuculty, so you MUST respect DS in every part of the map, even here
00:27:764 (1,2) - you can make here a blanket if you want

619's Normal

00:09:401 (2,3) - respect DS
00:12:855 (1,1) - ^ (this is too close)

619's Hard

00:12:855 (1,1) - seriously?
00:21:764 (6,1) - fix just a small bit this blanket

Lumin's Light Insane

00:09:583 (6) - this one is totally hidden...try to change its position
00:12:128 (3,4) - blanket(?)
00:12:855 (1,1) - ^
00:28:128 (2,3) - fix this blanket a bit
00:28:492 (3,4) - ^
00:43:764 (1,2,3,4) - make a perfect square here

Niat

00:07:401 (1,5) - fix this blanket
00:24:492 (1,1) - awkward overlap D:
00:41:583 (6,7,2) - you can make a stack with the end of each slider (or at least with this two 00:41:583 (6,7) - )
00:46:673 (1) - it should ends here 00:48:037 -

Nyan

00:29:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a perfect star here
00:36:492 (1,2,3,4) - same (delete the final point, ofc)

Nice map, gl

619

409 posts

Joined May 2015

619 2016-07-03T22:32:49+00:00

619's Hard

00:12:855 (1,1) - seriously? - fixed
00:21:764 (6,1) - fix just a small bit this blanket - fixed

Thx for mod!

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-03T22:51:05+00:00

Keep in mind that if you want to rank this song, you have to do at least another diff because there are 2 diffs that are made by Panda619, check here for more information https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria Its Collab

619's Normal

00:09:401 (2,3) - respect DS fix
00:12:855 (1,1) - ^ (this is too close) fix

~

Nyan

00:29:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a perfect star here fixed
00:36:492 (1,2,3,4) - same (delete the final point, ofc)

-

Nice map, gl Thanks
ty for mod~

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tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-03T22:52:40+00:00

Фантир такой фантир

Last edited by tatemae 2016-07-03T23:11:38+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-03T23:10:26+00:00

Fanteer wrote:
Вот скрин чтобы не мучится http://puu.sh/pPaKd/106e831451.jpg

ахахахаха, лол. Проиграл с этого и случайно закрыл вкладку. Кароч кое-что поменял. Спасибо за мод)

HoloOfficial

34 posts

Joined July 2015

HoloOfficial 2016-07-04T09:16:14+00:00

Easy diff. updated but just in case

Download

http://rgho.st/6ZwchrmLT

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-04T09:17:05+00:00

HoloOfficial wrote:
Easy diff. updated but just in case

Download
http://rgho.st/6ZwchrmLT

updated

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Lumin 2016-07-04T15:21:32+00:00

If you didn't notice that I AM NOT RUSSIAN so I don't understand that language, should have checked my nationality before posting this. I think I understood everything through translator, but I'm not 100% sure tho.

Fanteer wrote:
Lumin's Light Insane
00:01:583 (1,7) - фикс оверлап They are so far away that you can't even notice that in gameplay
00:05:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - желательно реворк эту часть, поналепленно много нот, много оверлапов, нету формы, бланкет можно было сделать но изза кучности его туда не поместить даже. I like this pattern and those arent bad overlaps, because they are meant to overlap. Still blanketet one overlap
00:17:583 (1,6,9) - криво (1) стоит между (6) (9) причем 00:18:128 (5,8,9) - (5) идеально по центру между (8) (9) Well not so necessary but why not
00:23:037 (4,6) - оверлап Again they got much time between but fine this time
00:48:310 (2) - лучше,чтобы не путать картинку джампов, вместо реверс слайдера поставить 3 стакнутых ноты 1/4. I want this section to be singletapped because it is not so intense, so I want to keep rep.

-Bumblebee- wrote:
Hi, from your modding queue ^^
[Lumin's Light Insane]
00:09:583 (6) - this one is totally hidden...try to change its position It's not
00:12:128 (3,4) - blanket(?) Fiiine
00:12:855 (1,1) - ^ it was blanket already but made slightly bigger curve
00:28:128 (2,3) - fix this blanket a bit okay
00:28:492 (3,4) - ^yes yes
00:43:764 (1,2,3,4) - make a perfect square here Well why not
Nice map, gl

Thank you for mods!

ohh yes

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tatemae

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tatemae 2016-07-04T15:25:38+00:00

ohh yes

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248,64,52855,2,0,P|298:104|316:152,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,53219,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,348,53401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,188,53583,1,8,1:2:0:0:
384,336,53764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,188,53946,5,0,1:0:0:0:
428,52,54128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,52,54219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,52,54310,1,8,1:2:0:0:
460,188,54492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,54673,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,76,54855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,244,55037,1,8,1:2:0:0:
272,144,55219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,292,55401,6,0,P|220:328|168:316,1,99.0000030212403,0|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,228,55764,2,0,P|44:268|24:336,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,325,56128,1,0,1:0:0:0:
244,196,56310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,228,56492,1,8,1:2:0:0:
16,104,56673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,156,56855,5,0,1:0:0:0:
228,48,57037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,40,57128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,44,57219,1,8,1:2:0:0:
268,180,57401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,88,57583,1,0,1:0:0:0:
376,236,57764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,236,57946,1,8,1:2:0:0:
224,88,58128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,58310,6,0,B|112:209|112:209|104:264|104:264|138:316|196:344,1,198.000006042481,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
280,364,58855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,59037,1,8,1:2:0:0:
360,92,59219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,59401,1,8,1:2:0:0:
196,92,59583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,220,59764,5,8,1:2:0:0:
120,92,59946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,296,60128,1,8,1:2:0:0:
296,100,60310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,320,60492,1,8,1:2:0:0:

Updated. Thanks you~

Tarrasky

1,203 posts

Joined March 2014

Tarrasky 2016-07-04T18:06:49+00:00

dat kds spam

General

Is highly recommended the background be 1366x768
Maybe you can ask for experient people with this businnes in find another mp3 for you, the quality is just 128kbps, the recommended is 192kbps
just my opinion, but i prefer the preview point in 00:13:219 -, the 00:48:401 - is really next to the end of the song :/

Nyan
00:30:673 (1) - 00:31:037 (2) - change both hitsounds, the correct is clap here 00:31:037 - and finish here 00:30:673 - for consistence
00:39:583 (2,3) - maybe you can increase this distance ^^
00:43:946 (2,3) - /\ same thg
00:55:401 - add finish for consistence

Nattu's Another
00:24:492 (1,1) - avoid overlap?
please add object here 00:26:310 -, looks really weird, since have a intense song in this moment (like you do here 00:37:946 (1) -)

619's Hard
00:13:219 - add finish for consistence

Panderry619's Normal
00:12:855 (1,1) - it breaks a bit the 1,10x consistence distance

hope this helps c:

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-04T18:34:03+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
dat kds spam

General
Is highly recommended the background be 1366x768
Maybe you can ask for experient people with this businnes in find another mp3 for you, the quality is just 128kbps, the recommended is 192kbps
just my opinion, but i prefer the preview point in 00:13:219 -, the 00:48:401 - is really next to the end of the song :/ Fixed

Nyan
00:30:673 (1) - 00:31:037 (2) - change both hitsounds, the correct is clap here 00:31:037 - and finish here 00:30:673 - for consistence i agree
00:39:583 (2,3) - maybe you can increase this distance ^^ I don't see any reason
00:43:946 (2,3) - /\ same thg ^
00:55:401 - add finish for consistence ok

Panderry619's Normal
00:12:855 (1,1) - it breaks a bit the 1,10x consistence distance sure
hope this helps c:

Thanks you for mod!

painlol228

4 posts

Joined November 2014

painlol228 2016-07-04T19:07:55+00:00

Привет o/
00:15:401 (3,4,5,6) -
00:18:310 (3,4,5,6) -
я бы сократил вот эти джампики, уж очень болезненные они :c
Удачи~

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-04T19:10:18+00:00

painlol228 wrote:
Привет o/
00:15:401 (3,4,5,6) -
00:18:310 (3,4,5,6) -
я бы сократил вот эти джампики, уж очень болезненные они :c
Удачи~

Йоу, не знаю, по мне так они соответствуют общей сложности карты :/

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2016-07-05T16:15:22+00:00

We have talked about Nyan diff, fixed some important stuffs. Overal not bad diff tbh

SPOILER

20:40 Shmiklak: я тебе щас мини мод напишу
20:40 Shmiklak: прям тут
20:40 SherryCherry: как хош
20:41 Shmiklak: еба
20:41 Shmiklak: ты даже таких ошибок тупых не допускаешь
20:41 Shmiklak: аж интересно стало моддить
20:41 Shmiklak: я думал щас будут тупые ошибки
20:41 SherryCherry: Ну что за самомнение у этих мапперов
20:41 Shmiklak: 00:10:356 (1,2,3) - ты так задумал?
20:41 *Shmiklak is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1007652 Nanahira - Poka poka Shiteru Dake [Nyan]]
20:41 Shmiklak: не то что бы плохо
20:41 Shmiklak: но
20:42 Shmiklak: выглядит хуево
20:42 Shmiklak: хочешь кастом стак делай красиво
20:42 Shmiklak: и играбельно
20:42 Shmiklak: я сомневаюсь в играбельности этого
20:42 Shmiklak: хотя не
20:42 Shmiklak: играется норм
20:42 SherryCherry: так и было
20:42 SherryCherry: но стак выглядил одиноко
20:42 Shmiklak: но выглядит блять
20:42 SherryCherry: ой
20:42 SherryCherry: доебался уже
20:42 SherryCherry: давай по делу
20:43 Shmiklak: подвинь 00:10:629 (2) - на 480 224 и 00:10:719 (3) - на 488 240 что бы сделать этот кастом стак более симпотным
20:44 Shmiklak: бтв ты говоришь что выглядел одиноко
20:44 Shmiklak: я бы лучше вообще там не делал кастом
20:44 Shmiklak: так как
20:44 SherryCherry: ну не я
20:44 SherryCherry: но я согласился
20:44 Shmiklak: ты их делал в первой части до 00:07:447 -
20:44 Shmiklak: а дальше
20:44 SherryCherry: что выглядит одиноко
20:44 Shmiklak: ты делал одни стаки
20:44 Shmiklak: обычные
20:44 Shmiklak: так что кастом тут лишний
20:44 Shmiklak: делай норм стак
20:45 Shmiklak: ай бля сглазил
20:45 Shmiklak: есть тупая ошибка
20:48 Shmiklak: 00:11:265 (5) - данный бит значительно слабее что по музыке что по ритму но при этом он находится на расстоянии 2,33 в то время как следующий сильный бит на расстоянии 2,02
20:48 Shmiklak: в идеале сильные биты всегда дальше
20:48 SherryCherry: ок
20:48 Shmiklak: бтв старый превью лучше был
20:49 Shmiklak: да и бг старый тоже мне больше нравился
20:49 Shmiklak: ну да ладно
20:49 SherryCherry: ну тип
20:49 SherryCherry: мне тоже
20:49 SherryCherry: нравится
20:49 SherryCherry: старое превью
20:50 Shmiklak: так верни блять
20:50 SherryCherry: но человека 3 об этом написало
20:50 Shmiklak: кто тебе сказал менять
20:50 SherryCherry: что мол странно
20:50 Shmiklak: кто написал блять
20:50 Shmiklak: что странно
20:50 Shmiklak: покажи мне хотя бы одну весомую причину
20:50 SherryCherry: в треде
20:50 Shmiklak: пусть хоть одну весомую причину покажут
20:50 Shmiklak: кроме их личного самомнения
20:50 Shmiklak: странно видите ли
20:50 Shmiklak: и что что странно?
20:51 Shmiklak: это аргумент?
20:51 SherryCherry: У меня не так много опыта
20:51 Shmiklak: кстати о 00:11:265 (5) -
20:51 Shmiklak: куда ты ее поставил?
20:52 Shmiklak: я предлагаю лично на 136 168
20:52 Shmiklak: но это лишь предложение
20:52 SherryCherry: пока не знаю
20:52 Shmiklak: можешь делать с ним че хочешь
20:52 SherryCherry: но поближе к слайдеру
20:52 Shmiklak: но так и флоу приятно смотрится
20:52 Shmiklak: 00:13:992 (3,4,5,6) - обожаю ♥
20:53 SherryCherry: у тебя сердечко постояннно на копипасте находится что ли

20:53 Shmiklak: нет
20:53 Shmiklak: на альт+3
20:53 Shmiklak: ♥
20:53 Shmiklak: ☺
20:53 Shmiklak: вот еще
20:53 Shmiklak: ♂
20:53 SherryCherry: от задр
20:53 Shmiklak: ♀
20:54 Shmiklak: недавно выучил их
20:54 SherryCherry: ;w; хачу хачу
20:54 Shmiklak:

20:54 Shmiklak: ♂♀
20:54 Shmiklak: XD
20:54 Shmiklak: хочешь фокус?
20:54 Shmiklak:
20:54 Shmiklak: та да дам
20:54 Shmiklak:

20:54 SherryCherry: где
20:55 Shmiklak: пустое письмо
20:55 SherryCherry: я моргнул
20:55 Shmiklak: лол
20:55 SherryCherry: не было
20:55 Shmiklak:
20:55 Shmiklak: а щас?
20:55 SherryCherry: тоже
20:55 Shmiklak: бля
20:55 SherryCherry: заскринить?
20:55 Shmiklak: вот почему ни у кого реакции не было
20:55 Shmiklak: оно значит не отправляется
20:56 SherryCherry: ахахха
20:56 Shmiklak: а так вот: http://puu.sh/pRc9I/ad34de06de.jpg
20:56 Shmiklak: альт+255
20:57 SherryCherry: o3o
20:57 Shmiklak: 00:29:265 - ой зря
20:57 Shmiklak: ой зря ты этот бит упустил
20:57 Shmiklak: очень сильно
20:57 Shmiklak: я понимаю всякие там вокалы
20:57 Shmiklak: но
20:58 Shmiklak: 00:27:629 - а тут бы я вообще триплет сделал но это уже пошли минор нази стафы
21:00 Shmiklak: 00:31:447 (3) - выдели с помощью НК. Так смена СВ будет читаться значительно лучше, иначе может запутать игроков
21:00 Shmiklak: да и вообще все смены нк выдели
21:00 Shmiklak: если я где то упустил
21:01 SherryCherry: сменил
21:01 SherryCherry: ок
21:01 Shmiklak: почему все русскоязычные мапперы мапают такие песни
21:01 SherryCherry: Ух ты, ты сейчас меня маппером назвал?
21:02 Shmiklak: а кем тебя надо назвать?
21:02 Shmiklak: все кто мапают уже мапперы
21:02 Shmiklak: просто дальше идет их уровень
21:02 SherryCherry: до этого меня никто так не называж c:
21:02 Shmiklak: а как тебя называли?
21:03 SherryCherry: вообще никак
21:03 SherryCherry: в этом и смысл
21:03 Shmiklak: вообще я заметил что за мистика
21:03 Shmiklak: в последнее время все мои предложения стали принимать
21:03 Shmiklak: а раньше всегда на хуй посылали
21:03 Shmiklak: лол
21:03 Shmiklak: ну да ладно
21:03 Shmiklak: не об этом
21:04 Shmiklak: 00:44:174 (3,4) - о чем я говорил раннее
21:04 Shmiklak: бтв в чем смысл этого НК? 00:41:447 (1) -
21:04 Shmiklak: Не вижу ни одной причины для сохранения его
21:04 Shmiklak: либо докажи мне что надо
21:04 Shmiklak: я ж не отъебусь
21:05 SherryCherry: ну я такую хуйню видел в других мапах
21:05 SherryCherry: антиджампики
21:05 SherryCherry: выделяли нк
21:05 Shmiklak: как тогда к нату с его овермапом на рыжей девченке приебался
21:05 Shmiklak: 00:41:083 (1) - вот это да антиджамп
21:05 Shmiklak: 00:41:265 (2) - а это каким хуем ты смеешь назвать антиджампом?
21:06 SherryCherry: убрал
21:06 SherryCherry: не ори
21:06 Shmiklak: молодец
21:06 Shmiklak: возьми с полки пирожок
21:06 Shmiklak: понюхай
21:06 Shmiklak: и поставь обратно
21:06 Shmiklak: не заслужил еще
21:06 Shmiklak: вот когда ранкнешь
21:07 Shmiklak: и я получу свои пп (еее пп) тогда сожри его
21:07 Shmiklak: да хоть меня сожри
21:07 Shmiklak: все равно не найдешь
21:07 Shmiklak: о3о
21:07 SherryCherry: ну да
21:07 Shmiklak: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/413969 бля я замапал лоли
21:07 Shmiklak: лол
21:07 Shmiklak: да и это
21:08 Shmiklak: 00:44:174 (3,4) - ты про это ничего не сказал еще
21:08 SherryCherry: я видел
21:08 Shmiklak: аргументируй почему ты тут антиджампнул
21:08 SherryCherry: хм
21:08 Shmiklak: 00:49:265 (1,1,2) - напоминает пипиську лол
21:09 SherryCherry: мне просто кажется, что подходит к вокалу
21:09 SherryCherry: спалил
21:09 Shmiklak: ну
21:09 Shmiklak: не сказал бы что подходит
21:09 Shmiklak: сила вокала не меняется
21:09 Shmiklak: а задние звуки усиливаются
21:09 Shmiklak: антиджампингом в таком случае лучше не заниматься
21:10 SherryCherry: ок
21:11 Shmiklak: поменяй это 00:49:265 (1,1,2) - на это http://puu.sh/pRcXF/d716a48c7a.jpg
21:11 SherryCherry: вот это писька
21:11 SherryCherry: хоть юы член норм сделал
21:11 Shmiklak: сделай такую
21:12 Shmiklak: и получи пизды от моддеров
21:12 Shmiklak: бнов
21:12 Shmiklak: катов
21:12 Shmiklak: и даже локтава с пеппи
21:12 Shmiklak: :^)
21:12 SherryCherry: пойду готовить твинка
21:12 Shmiklak: лол
21:12 Shmiklak: думаю это все
21:13 Shmiklak: можно другое не модить?
21:13 Shmiklak: если что я потом
21:13 Shmiklak: а щас это постю
21:13 SherryCherry: ок

Voli

811 posts

Joined April 2013

Voli 2016-07-05T17:59:45+00:00

Hi, from m4m!

Lumin's Light Insane

00:04:538 (1,5) - you can improve this blanket

00:12:356 (4) - two notes so the strong downbeat is clickable?

00:12:901 (1,1) - improve blanket a bit

00:14:356 (5,6,1) - this linear pattern doesnt play so well, i recommend moving 00:14:719 (1) - up to form a triangular pattern like this http://voli.s-ul.eu/V0OPw4Vt

00:28:538 (3,4) - this blue tick slider here is really weird, why don't you just follow the previous rhythm? :p

Nattu's Another

00:02:901 (9) - bring this note down a bit so the spacing isnt so inconsistent with 00:02:356 (6,7) - http://voli.s-ul.eu/DPhxqZEk

00:15:083 (3,4) - make 00:15:083 (3) - one extended slider instead and remove the note? better representation of the music

Nyan

00:01:629 (1,2,3) - doesn't play bad, but would play better if you put 00:01:900 (2,3) - on top of the slider like this: http://voli.s-ul.eu/nfivBb6v

00:03:083 (1,2,3) - you can blanket this slider with 00:02:356 (5) - instead of overlapping it

00:09:447 (4,1) - the downbeats in this pattern are inconsistent with your earlier mapping and feel kinda off, it would be better to do a note>slider>slider rhythm like this http://voli.s-ul.eu/qs4xhv6f

00:10:901 (4) - here too, note>slider would be better and captures both the melody and the clickable downbeat

00:12:356 (4) - ^

00:22:356 (4) - make it symmetrical please so it looks well with your previous symmetrical pattern (press ctrl h and check the points on both sides)

00:36:719 (2,5) - improve blanket a bit

00:45:265 (1) - 2 notes here and 00:45:629 (8) - 2 minisliders? sounds more like it, to me

00:46:629 - shouldnt there be an extra note?

Lower diffs look fine to me.
Cool map, good luck!

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-05T18:18:51+00:00

Nyan

00:01:629 (1,2,3) - doesn't play bad, but would play better if you put 00:01:900 (2,3) - on top of the slider like this: http://voli.s-ul.eu/nfivBb6v Okay

00:03:083 (1,2,3) - you can blanket this slider with 00:02:356 (5) - instead of overlapping it Aesthetically - its better, but for playing - no. I don't like this spacing

00:09:447 (4,1) - the downbeats in this pattern are inconsistent with your earlier mapping and feel kinda off, it would be better to do a note>slider>slider rhythm like this http://voli.s-ul.eu/qs4xhv6f This is my rhythm

00:10:901 (4) - here too, note>slider would be better and captures both the melody and the clickable downbeat same as above

00:12:356 (4) - ^ sorry

00:22:356 (4) - make it symmetrical please so it looks well with your previous symmetrical pattern (press ctrl h and check the points on both sides) I understand why, but no, lol :3

00:36:719 (2,5) - improve blanket a bit i think, blanket is fine

00:45:265 (1) - 2 notes here and 00:45:629 (8) - 2 minisliders? sounds more like it, to me but not for me

00:46:629 - shouldnt there be an extra note? no

Lower diffs look fine to me.
Cool map, good luck![/quote]
Anyway thanks you, dude. Good mod~

frogyfro

144 posts

Joined August 2015

frogyfro 2016-07-05T21:29:58+00:00

This is really well mapped, probably should be ranked soon. I have very little to say about the patterns, but I felt like the hitsounding was inconsistent in the easier diffs. Sorry for not commenting on much, the harder diffs are all really solid and its very hard to suggest changes.

Easy:

00:10:356 (1) - put a clap on the end of this slider so it sounds even with the claps on notes 2 and 4 from the previous combo
00:13:265 (1) - during this kiai sections there's too many finishes, it makes the map sound messy. Keep a few for emphasis but don't have a finish on almost every note
00:24:174 (4,1) - i don't like how close together these notes are. spread them out so its a bit easier to read
00:37:992 (4) and 00:35:083 (3) - put a clap on the end of these sliders so the hitsounds are consistent with 00:41:992 (5).
00:51:090 (4) and 00:53:992 (1) and 00:56:901 (1) and 00:58:356 (2) - i'd put claps on the ends of these sliders. i like how it sounds with a clap on beat 4 and you've been doing it on and off throughout the map
00:56:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - i see the shape you're going for here in the editor but because of the ar you can't actually see it during gameplay, so the two sliders slightly further apart on the left look weird. i'd try something else on these

Normal:
00:09:992 (3) - i could be missing what you were going for but i don't hear anything in the song to warrant changing the sample set
00:46:356 (2) - i think a note on the downbeat is needed. otherwise it sounds like this slider is hanging. add a circle on the downbeat and move the spinner over slightly

Hard:
00:09:992 (3) - in the other diffs you emphasize the bass line here with a slider but it doesn't feel different since you used a slider on the last combo. i'd recommend changing 00:08:538 (3) to circles

Light Insane:
00:05:265 (5) - change this clap to a kick

Another:
00:59:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's odd that the distance between jumps is decreasing during this jump section. maybe reverse selection so that the map builds into the end?

Nyan:
00:24:174 (1) - for some reason I don't like the placement of this note. I can't put my finger on it but i feel like it should be higher
00:43:810 (1,2,3,4) - i think this would play better without the back and forth, just put them all in a row
01:00:356 (2) - again not sure why but this triangle feels flattened to me. i'd lower this note a bit

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-05T21:38:29+00:00

frogyfro wrote:
This is really well mapped, probably should be ranked soon. I have very little to say about the patterns, but I felt like the hitsounding was inconsistent in the easier diffs. Sorry for not commenting on much, the harder diffs are all really solid and its very hard to suggest changes.
Nyan:
00:24:174 (1) - for some reason I don't like the placement of this note. I can't put my finger on it but i feel like it should be higher I agree
00:43:810 (1,2,3,4) - i think this would play better without the back and forth, just put them all in a row I don't see any reason
01:00:356 (2) - again not sure why but this triangle feels flattened to me. i'd lower this note a bit same

Thanks for mod!

619

409 posts

Joined May 2015

619 2016-07-05T22:49:52+00:00

frogyfro wrote:
Normal:
00:09:992 (3) - i could be missing what you were going for but i don't hear anything in the song to warrant changing the sample set - I like it so
00:46:356 (2) - i think a note on the downbeat is needed. otherwise it sounds like this slider is hanging. add a circle on the downbeat and move the spinner over slightly - maybe

Hard:
00:09:992 (3) - in the other diffs you emphasize the bass line here with a slider but it doesn't feel different since you used a slider on the last combo. i'd recommend changing 00:08:538 (3) to circles - it was intended, sry

Thx for mod!

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-07-06T11:28:49+00:00

Ну как так...
Называть нестандартыми названиями можно только сложнейшую диффу в сете, у тебя же названа легчайшая.
Easy вместо Nyan.
проебался, сорь

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Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Lumin 2016-07-06T11:44:11+00:00

frogyfro wrote:
Light Insane:
00:05:265 (5) - change this clap to a kick My bad

Voli wrote:
Lumin's Light Insane

00:04:538 (1,5) - you can improve this blanket It's good enough already

00:12:356 (4) - two notes so the strong downbeat is clickable? That sound definetly goes better with slider

00:12:901 (1,1) - improve blanket a bit Same as earlier

00:14:356 (5,6,1) - this linear pattern doesnt play so well, i recommend moving 00:14:719 (1) - up to form a triangular pattern like this http://voli.s-ul.eu/V0OPw4Vt Okay

00:28:538 (3,4) - this blue tick slider here is really weird, why don't you just follow the previous rhythm? :p My bad

Hilleriteetee pokkaa pokkaa

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104,220,59810,5,8,1:2:0:0:
120,92,59992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,296,60174,1,8,1:2:0:0:
296,100,60356,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,320,60538,1,8,1:2:0:0:

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-06T12:15:42+00:00

Namki wrote:
Ну как так...
Называть нестандартыми названиями можно только сложнейшую диффу в сете, у тебя же названа легчайшая.
Easy вместо Nyan.
проебался, сорь

Бля, лол xD

TAIN

168 posts

Joined January 2012

TAIN 2016-07-06T14:44:31+00:00

Hello M4M

[General]

Panderry619 and '619' unified 619.

[HoloOfficial's Easy]

I would like to give some advice to you.

Easy difficulty is not recommended to put the slider transmission.
you do really not recommend unless necessary.

and

3 Duplicate Inherited point.

00:08:538 (2,3,4,1) - 3 Sliders and 4 circles and 1 slider not a certain distance. While the map, you look that the AI mode.

SPOILER

01:00:174 (4,5) - ^

SPOILER

Hitsound☆

The sound is bigger. 10~15% tuning down the volume and finish is set a NC. It'll be nice to hear more

In general, it is recommended to use a clap and whistle.
I recommend clap put the second and fourth white lines.

00:36:538 (1) - Remove the finish and whistles the end of the slider.
00:49:629 (1) - ^
00:51:083 (4) - Remove the finish and whistles the slider had and end.
00:52:538 (1) - Remove the finish and whistles the end of the slider.
00:53:992 (1) - ^^
00:55:447 (2) - ^^
00:56:901 (1) - Remove the finish and whistles the slider had and end.

Placement of the slider and a circle is a good look!

[Panderry619's Normal]

00:04:538 (1,2,3) - Rather than linear arrangement How about a little more down? I think that it is more prety.

SPOILER

00:09:992 (3) - Not recommended to put the slider to Speed change the normal difficulty setting. Change switching to short slider?

SPOILER

00:12:901 (1) - ^

00:24:901 (1) ~ 00:46:356 (2) - Volume down 30%

[619's Hard]

00:05:629 (4) - x 272 y 244 < End of the slider. 1 Slide the overlap is not properly.
00:12:901 (1) - I recommend put the short replay slider or more slow speed change slider.

Hitsound ☆

00:13:265 (2) - Clap remove and put a Finish?
00:22:719 (3) - Whistle remove and put a finish?
00:24:901 (1) ~ 00:46:356 (4) - volume down 30%. this is Good to hear.
00:59:083 (3) - Whistle remove and put a finish?

[Lumin's Light Insane]

HR + 1 ?

00:01:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It is so different from each interval and this jump section does not fit. It is recommended to put the jump suit singing. This part is a normal circle slider better.
00:05:265 (5,6) - Please place the two sliders jump symmetrically. this more better.
00:28:810 (4) - This rhythm is awkward. Try placing a rhythm on the white line.
00:33:629 (1,2,3,4) - not side by side the two overlapping circles?

The map is like you're in a lot of excessive jumping.
It is recommended that you make the jump to look at to find the right place.
the sound of song, rhythm and vocals.

Hitsound ☆

00:16:174 (1) - This finish 00:13:265 (1) Try using a finishes here.
00:19:083 (1) - Add the finish on the head slider. 00:13:265 (1) this finish sound.
00:30:719 (1) - set a finish?
00:42:356 (1) - ^
00:55:447 (1) - ^

[Nattu's Insane]

00:01:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Since the beginning of the song is not a good idea to create a circle jump.I recommend you to try again using the slider and arranged circles.
00:14:901 (2,3) - This rhythm is awkward.Try different.
00:20:719 (2,3) - ^

Hitsound ☆

00:21:992 (1,5) - set a finish?
00:58:356 (1) - Add the finish on the head slider.
00:59:083 (5) - set a finish?

[Nyan]

HR +1

00:33:629 (1,2,3,4) - Try the same interval of each circle. more better.
00:40:174 (5) - change x 336 y 224 placement of this slider.

Hitsound ☆

00:22:719 (5) - Delete the whistle and finish added. < slider had.
00:27:810 (1) - remove finish. Because it is not highlighted,You do not need to put a finish to continue.
00:33:629 (1) - ^
00:39:447 (1) - ^
00:45:992 (3) - set a finish?
00:59:083 (1) - remove whistle and finish added.

---------

GL !

map is so cute.

NeilPerry

301 posts

Joined May 2011

NeilPerry 2016-07-06T15:49:53+00:00

Здрасте

general

Распишу только по двум ласт дифам. В целом в ласт дифе мне не хватает паттернов. Я бы всерьез задумался о реструктуре всех паттернов в целом. Ну да ладно, что есть.
Не увидел в тегах ник Lumin

Nyan

00:22:356 (4) - нужно сделать эстетично и аккуратнее.
00:29:265 - такие мисбиты звучат странно. но в плане интуативности играются хорошо. Но все же со слайдера в сильный начать не помешает.
00:36:719 (2,5) - бланкет ровнее плиз
00:40:901 - сейм про мисбит
00:49:629 (1,2) - неровная симметрия относительно этого слайдера 00:49:265 (1) -
00:52:356 (4,5) - ужасно некрасивый паттерн и в плане флоу и в плане играбельности, нужно срочно ремапать этот слайдер
00:51:992 (2,4,6) - очень не люблю такие оверлапы, они не красивые

И еще один общий момент. Очень много слайдеров с ноу ризон поинтами. Я не вижу общей логической составляющей, я не вижу причин в саунде их так закручивать. Вот натту в своей дифе закручивает именно в нужные моменты где на воне такой грузный саунд.

Nattu's another

Ничего не нашел. Есть некоторые моменты которые хотелось изменить но дело вкуса - не больше.
Например:
00:15:992 (8,1) - считаю неадекватно большим спейсом
00:17:447 (6,1) - сейм
00:45:992 (7,8) - сейм
А так в целом все OKEI

Гуд лак с ранком.

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-06T16:12:51+00:00

TAIN wrote:
Hello M4M

[General]

Panderry619 and '619' unified 619. lol

[Nyan]

HR +1 why

00:33:629 (1,2,3,4) - Try the same interval of each circle. more better. I so don't think
00:40:174 (5) - change x 336 y 224 placement of this slider. lol, why?

Hitsound ☆

00:22:719 (5) - Delete the whistle and finish added. < slider had.
00:27:810 (1) - remove finish. Because it is not highlighted,You do not need to put a finish to continue.
00:33:629 (1) - ^
00:39:447 (1) - ^
00:45:992 (3) - set a finish?
00:59:083 (1) - remove whistle and finish added.
i will think

---------

GL ! map is so cute.

Thanks you~

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-06T16:16:11+00:00

NeilPerry wrote:
Здрасте

general
Распишу только по двум ласт дифам. В целом в ласт дифе мне не хватает паттернов. Я бы всерьез задумался о реструктуре всех паттернов в целом. Ну да ладно, что есть.
Не увидел в тегах ник Lumin Поправил

Nyan
00:22:356 (4) - нужно сделать эстетично и аккуратнее. норм все
00:29:265 - такие мисбиты звучат странно. но в плане интуативности играются хорошо. Но все же со слайдера в сильный начать не помешает.Мой ритм
00:36:719 (2,5) - бланкет ровнее плиз хорошо
00:40:901 - сейм про мисбит мой ритм, сорь
00:49:629 (1,2) - неровная симметрия относительно этого слайдера 00:49:265 (1) - поправил
00:52:356 (4,5) - ужасно некрасивый паттерн и в плане флоу и в плане играбельности, нужно срочно ремапать этот слайдер окейй
00:51:992 (2,4,6) - очень не люблю такие оверлапы, они не красивые фикс

И еще один общий момент. Очень много слайдеров с ноу ризон поинтами. Я не вижу общей логической составляющей, я не вижу причин в саунде их так закручивать. Вот натту в своей дифе закручивает именно в нужные моменты где на воне такой грузный саунд.

Большое спасибо за мод, хоть что-то полезное <3

MaridiuS

878 posts

Joined June 2014

MaridiuS 2016-07-06T20:21:07+00:00

Ah this song is too good, its distracting me to mod ;v Here is my part of m4m;

[Nyan]
00:02:174 (4,5) - I don't agree that this jump should be higher than this one 00:02:356 (5,6) - . It doesnt sound like that at all ;v
00:02:356 (5) - personally i'd add NC on these kind of patterns.
00:01:992 (3) - my idea is to make this a 1/2 slider, which results in only the beats that sound like this 00:02:174 (4,5,6,7) - to be jumps in the whole section. Or add some diversity with decreased DS.
00:23:810 (1,2) - I wouldn't make this jump that much higher than 00:23:447 (1,2) - considering the sound. Maybe just a little smaller jump
00:12:901 (1) - is too close to 00:12:356 (4) - and isn't blanketed. This doesn't look good like that.
00:20:901 (2) - has disturbingly unsymetrical placement, should be a little lower and to the left.
00:24:538 (1) - the only 1/4 slider in the map
00:26:356 (1,2,3,4) - plays suprisingly well when it's all selected and ctrl + g is pressed
00:32:174 (1,2,3,4) - u could make these jumps more comfortable by having them on a sharper angle
00:43:265 (4,5) - ctrl+g for better flow, because it's difficult to aim on the way it is because of 00:42:719 (2) - reverse flow
00:45:629 (2) - mapping into 1/4 vocals would be fun here since u follow on the most map the vocals.
00:56:356 (4) - can u somehow magically blanket it to 00:55:810 (2) - ?
00:57:810 (4) - can move slot not to be so clsoe to slider?

[lumin's light]
00:07:265 (8,1) - this jump here is really uncomfortable, consider placing (1) on the upper grid
00:12:901 (1,1) - fix blanket
00:13:265 (1) - 00:16:174 (1) - 00:19:083 (1) - em, finish hitsounding wat happened here?
00:51:810 (5,6) - uncomfortable jump considering (4)
00:52:538 (1,2) - (2) is different from (1) for some reason
00:53:447 (4,5) - ctrl+g and 00:53:810 (6,1) - ctrl+g = dream flow
00:54:719 (6,7) - jump too small

[619's Hard]
00:11:810 (1) - I'd make it like this because of the burp on the blue tick hm. http://puu.sh/pSDrv/c3f77bcbbc.jpg
00:15:810 (5,6,1) - i don't like this flow, compared to 00:14:356 (6,7,1) -
00:18:901 (4) - Fix blanket xd
nice blankets though

good luck!

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-06T21:05:58+00:00

MaridiuS wrote:
Ah this song is too good, its distracting me to mod ;v Here is my part of m4m;

[Nyan]
00:02:174 (4,5) - I don't agree that this jump should be higher than this one 00:02:356 (5,6) - . It doesnt sound like that at all ;v I don't see the reasons. 00:02:174 (4,5) - I'm expecting a higher spacing here since these are heavily emphasized in the song
00:02:356 (5) - personally i'd add NC on these kind of patterns. wut? okay
00:01:992 (3) - my idea is to make this a 1/2 slider, which results in only the beats that sound like this 00:02:174 (4,5,6,7) - to be jumps in the whole section. Or add some diversity with decreased DS. I don't agree with such rhythm
00:23:810 (1,2) - I wouldn't make this jump that much higher than 00:23:447 (1,2) - considering the sound. Maybe just a little smaller jump it is consecutive jump. Pattern complies to overall difficulty of the map
00:12:901 (1) - is too close to 00:12:356 (4) - and isn't blanketed. This doesn't look good like that. Aesthetically, I think its good pattern
00:20:901 (2) - has disturbingly unsymetrical placement, should be a little lower and to the left. " should be a little lower and to the left" Fine coordinates! Such spacing is confusing
00:24:538 (1) - the only 1/4 slider in the map Thanks. I didn't know
00:26:356 (1,2,3,4) - plays suprisingly well when it's all selected and ctrl + g is pressed I agree
00:32:174 (1,2,3,4) - u could make these jumps more comfortable by having them on a sharper angle I like this flow
00:43:265 (4,5) - ctrl+g for better flow, because it's difficult to aim on the way it is because of 00:42:719 (2) - reverse flow k
00:45:629 (2) - mapping into 1/4 vocals would be fun here since u follow on the most map the vocals. Example please?
00:56:356 (4) - can u somehow magically blanket it to 00:55:810 (2) - ? remap this part
00:57:810 (4) - can move slot not to be so clsoe to slider? The sound is too silent, and I like this rhythm

good luck!

Thanks you for mod!

Last edited by tatemae 2016-07-06T23:44:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

619

409 posts

Joined May 2015

619 2016-07-06T22:54:29+00:00

TAIN wrote:
[Panderry619's Normal]

00:04:538 (1,2,3) - Rather than linear arrangement How about a little more down? I think that it is more prety. - Then turn on the overlay 00:03:810 (2) -
SPOILER
00:09:992 (3) - Not recommended to put the slider to Speed change the normal difficulty setting. Change switching to short slider? - changed to 1.0
SPOILER
00:12:901 (1) - ^ - ^

00:24:901 (1) ~ 00:46:356 (2) - Volume down 30% - changed to 50%

[619's Hard]

00:05:629 (4) - x 272 y 244 < End of the slider. 1 Slide the overlap is not properly. - why? i like it, sry
00:12:901 (1) - I recommend put the short replay slider or more slow speed change slider. - ^

Hitsound ☆

00:13:265 (2) - Clap remove and put a Finish? - sure
00:22:719 (3) - Whistle remove and put a finish? - why? i think whistle is good
00:24:901 (1) ~ 00:46:356 (4) - volume down 30%. this is Good to hear. - changed to 50%
00:59:083 (3) - Whistle remove and put a finish? - ^

Thx for mod!

619

409 posts

Joined May 2015

619 2016-07-06T22:59:18+00:00

Update

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/pSNSv/ce14c67381.rar

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-07-07T00:50:47+00:00

Vodka and petrol is the best mix you can ever get

Holo's EZ

00:14:719 (1,2) - blanket?
00:56:538 (3) - drag this a little to the left

Collab NM

00:24:901 (1,2,3) - bad flow imo

booyaka booyaka 619's Hard

00:23:083 (4,1) - didnt look like a blanket to me

too lazy *sleeps*

Stamby

83 posts

Joined January 2015

Stamby 2016-07-07T01:01:31+00:00

Hey, random mod

General

01:00:538 - Song should actually end here, I doubt it would be rankable otherwise. I made a new mp3 for this set: http://puu.sh/pSLXm/be11d95ad2.mp3. If you replace it, move all offsets 23 ms later in the timing panel. First one should be 1652 (timestamps here are from the current timing). Press right click - save link to DL

The original name seems to be partially written in Katakana. Replace it by ポカポカしてるだけ

Romanized title should be Poka Poka Shiteru Dake, all words capitalized

This version of the song is not by Hatsune Miku, you should remove it from the tags. Also Nanahira is not a vocaloid so you should delete "vocaloid" too

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5553297 - Song data in "Nyan" should be the same than in the other diffs

I found that hitsound patterns are not the same in all the diffs. I'd suggest fixing this although I don't know if it's actually necessary

HoloOfficial's Easy

Diff needs hitsounds

00:07:447 (1,3) - These sliders could be shaped

00:13:265 (1,1,1) - These three sliders could be placed below the previous slider ends for a more consistent DS (or moved more distantly)

Panderry619's Normal

Nothing to say on this diff :3

619's Hard

00:25:447 - 00:27:265 - 00:28:356 - 00:29:629 - 00:33:447 - 00:30:538 - 00:33:447 - 00:44:719 - I suggest adding circles on these spots

00:56:538 (5,6) - This comeback into the same triangle looks a bit confusing, maybe try to draw a better pattern with 00:56:174 (3,4,5,6)

00:13:265 - This should be a NC because of the 1/1 beat

00:16:174 - 00:24:901 - 00:27:810 - 00:33:629 - 00:39:447 - 00:49:629 - 00:52:538 - 00:59:810 - This finish hitsound would sound better if it was used here instead: 00:21:992 - 00:22:719 - 00:23:447 - 00:45:992 - 00:59:083. This 'pattern' would complement the song's actual timing and I'd suggest using it in all the other diffs as well (said above in General)

Nattu's Insane

00:01:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Whistles are overused

00:35:992 (4) - This slider could be moved to 00:36:174 in the timeline, then you could add 2 circles before it for a better rhythm

Some shapes could be improved, like overlaps here 00:41:629 (6,7) or closed patterns like 00:52:538 (1,2)

Nyan

00:04:538 (1,1,4,4,1,1,1,2,1,2) - Try making these sliders more 'open' for a better flow, like these two 00:14:719 (1,2) and not like these two 00:20:538 (1,2)

00:13:992 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps are cool.

00:27:447 - 00:29:083 - 00:36:174 - 00:39:083 - 00:40:719 - 00:44:901 - 00:48:719 (5) - Try to fill the empty spaces

I hope this mod has been helpful for now, good luck with this map!

619

409 posts

Joined May 2015

619 2016-07-07T01:24:52+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
Collab NM
00:24:901 (1,2,3) - bad flow imo - nice flow imo

booyaka booyaka 619's Hard
00:23:083 (4,1) - didnt look like a blanket to me - fixed

Thx for mod!

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

tatemae 2016-07-07T01:35:45+00:00

Stamby wrote:
Hey, random mod

General

01:00:538 - Song should actually end here, I doubt it would be rankable otherwise. I made a new mp3 for this set: http://puu.sh/pSLXm/be11d95ad2.mp3. If you replace it, move all offsets 23 ms later in the timing panel. First one should be 1652 (timestamps here are from the current timing). Press right click - save link to DL many thanks ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5553297 - Song data in "Nyan" should be the same than in the other diffs fix

I found that hitsound patterns are not the same in all the diffs. I'd suggest fixing this although I don't know if it's actually necessary

Nyan

00:04:538 (1,1,4,4,1,1,1,2,1,2) - Try making these sliders more 'open' for a better flow, like these two 00:14:719 (1,2) and not like these two 00:20:538 (1,2) cha...nge?

00:13:992 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps are cool. Okay, remap

00:27:447 - 00:29:083 - 00:36:174 - 00:39:083 - 00:40:719 - 00:44:901 - 00:48:719 (5) - Try to fill the empty spaces lol

I hope this mod has been helpful for now, good luck with this map!

(ノ･ω･)ノ Thanks you

619

409 posts

Joined May 2015

619 2016-07-07T01:42:56+00:00

Stamby wrote:
619's Hard

00:25:447 - 00:27:265 - 00:28:356 - 00:29:629 - 00:33:447 - 00:30:538 - 00:33:447 - 00:44:719 - I suggest adding circles on these spots - I not quite agree, but some are corrected

00:56:538 (5,6) - This comeback into the same triangle looks a bit confusing, maybe try to draw a better pattern with 00:56:174 (3,4,5,6) - i like it, sry

00:13:265 - This should be a NC because of the 1/1 beat - sure

00:16:174 - 00:24:901 - 00:27:810 - 00:33:629 - 00:39:447 - 00:49:629 - 00:52:538 - 00:59:810 - This finish hitsound would sound better if it was used here instead: 00:21:992 - 00:22:719 - 00:23:447 - 00:45:992 - 00:59:083. This 'pattern' would complement the song's actual timing and I'd suggest using it in all the other diffs as well (said above in General) - i like my hitsounds

Thx for mod!

619

409 posts

Joined May 2015

619 2016-07-07T01:46:40+00:00

U P D A T E

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/pSX9B/e2057ad271.rar

HoloOfficial

34 posts

Joined July 2015

HoloOfficial 2016-07-07T10:23:07+00:00

TAIN wrote:
Hello M4M

[General]

Panderry619 and '619' unified 619.

[HoloOfficial's Easy]

I would like to give some advice to you.
Easy difficulty is not recommended to put the slider transmission.
you do really not recommend unless necessary.

and

-fixed

3 Duplicate Inherited point. -fixed

00:08:538 (2,3,4,1) - 3 Sliders and 4 circles and 1 slider not a certain distance. While the map, you look that the AI mode.
SPOILER
01:00:174 (4,5) - ^
SPOILER
-fixed

Hitsound☆

The sound is bigger. 10~15% tuning down the volume and finish is set a NC. It'll be nice to hear more
In general, it is recommended to use a clap and whistle.
I recommend clap put the second and fourth white lines.

00:36:538 (1) - Remove the finish and whistles the end of the slider.
00:49:629 (1) - ^
00:51:083 (4) - Remove the finish and whistles the slider had and end.
00:52:538 (1) - Remove the finish and whistles the end of the slider.
00:53:992 (1) - ^^
00:55:447 (2) - ^^
00:56:901 (1) - Remove the finish and whistles the slider had and end.
- Done

Placement of the slider and a circle is a good look!

Thanks you so much for mod. !!!!

---------

GL ! map is so cute.

HoloOfficial

34 posts

Joined July 2015

HoloOfficial 2016-07-07T10:26:12+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
Vodka and petrol is the best mix you can ever get

(Thanks for mod )

Holo's EZ
00:14:719 (1,2) - blanket? -fixed
00:56:538 (3) - drag this a little to the left -fixed

[box=Collab NM]00:24:901 (1,2,3) - bad flow imo

booyaka booyaka 619's Hard
00:23:083 (4,1) - didnt look like a blanket to me

too lazy *sleeps*

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Lumin 2016-07-07T12:39:03+00:00

TAIN wrote:
Hello M4M
[Lumin's Light Insane]

HR + 1 ? HR?

00:01:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It is so different from each interval and this jump section does not fit. It is recommended to put the jump suit singing. This part is a normal circle slider better. I'm not sure what you're talking about, I think it fits well
00:05:265 (5,6) - Please place the two sliders jump symmetrically. this more better. I know but then it will have too long jump to next note. A lot of complaints = change
00:28:810 (4) - This rhythm is awkward. Try placing a rhythm on the white line. my bad
00:33:629 (1,2,3,4) - not side by side the two overlapping circles? ?

The map is like you're in a lot of excessive jumping. No it is not
It is recommended that you make the jump to look at to find the right place.
the sound of song, rhythm and vocals.

Hitsound ☆

00:16:174 (1) - This finish 00:13:265 (1) Try using a finishes here.
00:19:083 (1) - Add the finish on the head slider. 00:13:265 (1) this finish sound.
00:30:719 (1) - set a finish?
00:42:356 (1) - ^
00:55:447 (1) - ^
I don't start to spam finishes to places where it doesn't belong, added none

MaridiuS wrote:
Ah this song is too good, its distracting me to mod ;v Here is my part of m4m;

[lumin's light]
00:07:265 (8,1) - this jump here is really uncomfortable, consider placing (1) on the upper grid fixed moving 8
00:12:901 (1,1) - fix blanket Why does everyone point out this blanket??? It is fine.
00:13:265 (1) - 00:16:174 (1) - 00:19:083 (1) - em, finish hitsounding wat happened here? ?
00:51:810 (5,6) - uncomfortable jump considering (4) Nah
00:52:538 (1,2) - (2) is different from (1) for some reason Just for variety :3 More complaints = change
00:53:447 (4,5) - ctrl+g and 00:53:810 (6,1) - ctrl+g = dream flow and then the jump to next note would be a light year long
00:54:719 (6,7) - jump too small It is meant to be like that

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Title:Poka poka Shiteru Dake
TitleUnicode:ぽかぽかしてるだけ
Artist:Nanahira
ArtistUnicode:ななひら
Creator:SherryCherry
Version:Lumin's Light Insane
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Tags:[Panda619] Nattu HoloOfficial neko vocaloid hatsune miku
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