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sweet ARMS - installation (Short Ver.)

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My Angel RangE
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 7월 16일 토요일 at 오전 10:39:47

Artist: sweet ARMS
Title: installation (Short Ver.)
Source: デート・ア・ライブ 或守インストール
Tags: arusu ars install compile heart sting playstation visual novel date a live ii 2 shio watanabe go sakabe Dailycare Moa
BPM: 215
Filesize: 3531kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dailycare's Normal (2.1 stars, 155 notes)
  2. Easy (1.59 stars, 104 notes)
  3. Hard (3.57 stars, 275 notes)
  4. Insane (4.57 stars, 319 notes)
  5. Moa's Distroy (5.85 stars, 358 notes)
Download: sweet ARMS - installation (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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일단 호랑풍류가먼저..

mod
SherryCherry
Dailycare
Underdogs
domSaur
Trynna
[alt][F4]







Easy 100% done
Dailycare's Normal 100% done
Hard 100% done
Insane 100% done
Extra 100% done
Moa's Distroy 100% done
Last edited by My Angel RangE , edited 37 times in total.
Dailycare
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Dailycare
Normal done.

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: e5.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73858
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.799999

[Metadata]
Title:installation (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:インストレーション (Short Ver.)
Artist:sweet ARMS
ArtistUnicode:sweet ARMS
Creator:My Angel RangE
Version:Dailycare's Normal
Source:デート・ア・ライブ 或守インストール
Tags:arusu ars install compile heart sting playstation visual novel date a live ii 2 shio watanabe go sakabe
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.6
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.95
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg2 (3).jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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56607,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
74468,-100,4,2,2,40,0,1
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Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
맵 나쁘지 않네요.
My Angel RangE
1,055 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
My Angel RangE

Sonnyc wrote:

맵 나쁘지 않네요.
에..?
tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
tatemae
Moa's Distroy

00:15:305 (1) - improve wave-slider, like this 00:22:980 (1) -

Extra
01:27:166 (3) - I would replace this by a 1/1 slider since the beat is really strong here, will feel good to click a slider then
Dailycare
Beatmap Nominator
1,071 posts
Joined May 2012
Dailycare
#modreqs

[General]
전체적으로 디스턴스가 고르지 못한 점이 맵을 어수선하게 만드는 것 같아요. 시각적인 안정감이 떨어진다고 할까..
태그에 겟난 매퍼이름도..

[Moa's Distroy]
ar이 약간 빠른것처럼 느껴졌는데, 9.6정도면 적당할듯

*00:54:933 (2) - 간격 1.0으로
*01:00:654 - 최상위 난이도라면 여기를 서클로 놨을수도 있었을텐데 아쉬운부분이네용
*01:13:003 (7) - 제가 스피커로 들어서 잘은 모르겠는데 3연타가 있을 구간은 01:12:445 - 아닌가요??
*01:13:352 (1,2,3) - 이렇게 일자로 나열할거면 거리를 약간씩이라도 더 벌려주는게 낫다고 생각되네요
*01:19:491 (4,5) - 컨쥐한 리듬이 더 어울리는거 같아요
*01:22:840 (4) - 뉴콤보를 이용해서 (4,5,6)을 개별된 묶음으로 보고 점프를 넣었으면 어땠을까 싶네용

[Extra]
전반적인 노트의 간격이 00:20:887 - 를 기점으로 지금보다 더 명백한 변화를 보였으면 좋았을 것 같아요.

*00:20:607 (6) - 뉴콤, 을 넣는게 더 좋아보여요. 스팸같긴한데 뉴콤이 어울리니까..
*00:23:817 (4,5,1) - 흐름이 애매했고, (5,1)의 거리가 기대 이하로 짧았어요. 고치는거 고려해주세용
*00:56:049 (3,4,1,2) - 음.. 차라리 (1,2)를 ctrl+g한게 어떨까 하네요.. 00:56:189 (4,1) - 의 거리를 줄이면서까지 (2)를 강조해야할 이유를 못찾겠어요 ㅠㅠ
*00:56:607 (3) - Add NC / 00:57:445 (1) - Remove NC
*01:07:491 (1) - 1/2 슬라이더와 서클로 만들어보시는게 어떨까요
*01:08:189 - 음.. 01:07:910 (2) - 에 서클을 놓았으니, 여기에도 노트를 추가하는게 좋을것같아요. 아니면 01:08:049 (3,4) - 를 ctrl+g한다거나..
*01:21:026 (5) - 비록 소리가 약하긴해도 충분히 강조할만한 부분인것 같은데, 블랭킷을 맞추기보단 약간의 점프를 넣는게 어떨까요
*01:23:259 - 여기도 슬라 꼬리로 놓기보단 서클이라던지.. 이런거로 놓는게 더 좋을 것 같아요

[Insane]
*00:18:375 (3) - 뉴콤
*00:47:677 (1,3) - 오버랩된게 부자연스러웠어요
*01:13:491 (2) - 서클 두 개로 만들어보시는게 어떨까요?
*01:20:887 (5,1) - 고 bpm의 인세인에서는 이런것도 약간 혼동을 줄 수 있을거라 생각되네요
*01:22:840 (5,6,7,1) - 전체적인 흐름이 묘했습니다
*01:24:096 (4,5) - 마찬가지로 고쳐보시는게..? 얘네는 차라리 스택을 하는 편이 나을 수도 있을 것 같아요


나머지는 음.. 필요하시면 말씀해주세요..
My Angel RangE
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Topic Starter
My Angel RangE

SherryCherry wrote:

Extra
01:27:166 (3) - I would replace this by a 1/1 slider since the beat is really strong here, will feel good to click a slider then
Not fixed :(

Dailycare wrote:

#modreqs

[General]
전체적으로 디스턴스가 고르지 못한 점이 맵을 어수선하게 만드는 것 같아요. 시각적인 안정감이 떨어진다고 할까..
태그에 겟난 매퍼이름도.. 잊고있었네요.. 수정

[Extra]
전반적인 노트의 간격이 00:20:887 - 를 기점으로 지금보다 더 명백한 변화를 보였으면 좋았을 것 같아요.

*00:20:607 (6) - 뉴콤, 을 넣는게 더 좋아보여요. 스팸같긴한데 뉴콤이 어울리니까.. 고쳣습니다
*00:23:817 (4,5,1) - 흐름이 애매했고, (5,1)의 거리가 기대 이하로 짧았어요. 고치는거 고려해주세용 고쳣습니다
*00:56:049 (3,4,1,2) - 음.. 차라리 (1,2)를 ctrl+g한게 어떨까 하네요.. 00:56:189 (4,1) - 의 거리를 줄이면서까지 (2)를 강조해야할 이유를 못찾겠어요 ㅠㅠ고쳣습니다
*00:56:607 (3) - Add NC / 00:57:445 (1) - Remove NC고쳣습니다
*01:07:491 (1) - 1/2 슬라이더와 서클로 만들어보시는게 어떨까요 고쳣습니다
*01:08:189 - 음.. 01:07:910 (2) - 에 서클을 놓았으니, 여기에도 노트를 추가하는게 좋을것같아요. 아니면 01:08:049 (3,4) - 를 ctrl+g한다거나.. 대신 1/2로 했습니다

*01:21:026 (5) - 비록 소리가 약하긴해도 충분히 강조할만한 부분인것 같은데, 블랭킷을 맞추기보단 약간의 점프를 넣는게 어떨까요 고쳣습니다
*01:23:259 - 여기도 슬라 꼬리로 놓기보단 서클이라던지.. 이런거로 놓는게 더 좋을 것 같아요 고쳣습니다

[Insane]
*00:18:375 (3) - 뉴콤 고쳣습니다
*00:47:677 (1,3) - 오버랩된게 부자연스러웠어요 고쳣습니다
*01:13:491 (2) - 서클 두 개로 만들어보시는게 어떨까요? 고쳣습니다
*01:20:887 (5,1) - 고 bpm의 인세인에서는 이런것도 약간 혼동을 줄 수 있을거라 생각되네요고쳣습니다
*01:22:840 (5,6,7,1) - 전체적인 흐름이 묘했습니다고쳣습니다
*01:24:096 (4,5) - 마찬가지로 고쳐보시는게..? 얘네는 차라리 스택을 하는 편이 나을 수도 있을 것 같아요 ..흠


나머지는 음.. 필요하시면 말씀해주세요..

thx!
고맙습니다!
Underdogs
820 posts
Joined July 2014
Underdogs
annyeonghaseyo o/
2016-07-01 10:20 Underdogs: hello
2016-07-01 10:20 My Angel RangE: hi
2016-07-01 10:20 Underdogs: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1007537 sweet ARMS - installation (Short Ver.)]
2016-07-01 10:22 Underdogs: let
2016-07-01 10:22 Underdogs: us start with easy
2016-07-01 10:22 My Angel RangE: ok,
2016-07-01 10:22 Underdogs: 00:44:328 (2,3) -  I don't think people will like this
2016-07-01 10:23 Underdogs: any thoughts of changing?
2016-07-01 10:23 My Angel RangE: yes.
2016-07-01 10:24 Underdogs: 00:47:677 (1,3) -  also overlap
2016-07-01 10:25 Underdogs: 01:08:887 (4) -  this one is not cool
2016-07-01 10:25 Underdogs: you can mirror 01:07:770 (3) -  instead
2016-07-01 10:26 Underdogs: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5511355 like this]
2016-07-01 10:27 Underdogs: 01:23:259 (1,2) -  i see a bit of a overlap here
2016-07-01 10:27 Underdogs: 01:31:491 (3) -  stack properly with 01:30:096 (1) - ?
2016-07-01 10:29 Underdogs: 01:38:468 (3) -  the end slider doesnt follow the beat properly
2016-07-01 10:29 Underdogs: it should end at 01:38:887
2016-07-01 10:29 Underdogs: i suggest a straight slider
2016-07-01 10:30 Underdogs: that's it for Easy
2016-07-01 10:30 My Angel RangE: :)
2016-07-01 10:31 Underdogs: do you need more modding?
2016-07-01 10:31 Underdogs: or time is not on your side?
2016-07-01 10:31 My Angel RangE: i mod need insane
2016-07-01 10:31 My Angel RangE: :)..
2016-07-01 10:31 Underdogs: ohhh
2016-07-01 10:32 Underdogs: i see what i can do
2016-07-01 10:32 Underdogs: by the start of the map,i suggest you go full force
2016-07-01 10:32 Underdogs: because it's insane
2016-07-01 10:32 Underdogs: the 1/1 circle is not suitable at all
2016-07-01 10:33 My Angel RangE: :o
2016-07-01 10:33 Underdogs: 00:16:840 (2,3) -  this kind of beat is plain
2016-07-01 10:34 Underdogs: i suggest 00:16:980 (3) -  beat to replace 00:16:840 (2) -  and vice versa
2016-07-01 10:34 Underdogs: also 00:17:398 (4) -  stack with  00:17:538 (1) -  slider end
2016-07-01 10:35 Underdogs: an alternative for  00:17:398 (4) -  is that you put it on X:48 Y:280
2016-07-01 10:35 Underdogs: and the  00:17:259 (3) -  to put on X:60 Y:192
2016-07-01 10:35 Underdogs: is what i thought
2016-07-01 10:36 Underdogs: 00:26:328 (4,5) -  not proper blanket. Put 00:26:887 (5) -  deeper in order to see blanket
2016-07-01 10:36 Underdogs: 00:30:235 (2) -  not stacking. Is it intentional?
2016-07-01 10:40 Underdogs: 01:24:933 (2) -  stack with  01:25:352 (4) -  slider end
2016-07-01 10:41 Underdogs: 01:30:514 (2) -  you can put this on 01:30:514 and add a circle on 01:30:933 . It sounded more efficient that way
2016-07-01 10:41 Underdogs: o lol, the link
2016-07-01 10:42 My Angel RangE: lol
2016-07-01 10:42 Underdogs: i think that's it for insane
2016-07-01 10:42 Underdogs: any more modding you wanna do before i submit?
2016-07-01 10:43 My Angel RangE: i thank enough :)
2016-07-01 10:43 Underdogs: alright-o
2016-07-01 10:43 My Angel RangE: thanks for modding (?)
2016-07-01 10:43 Underdogs: good luck on  ranking this map
2016-07-01 10:43 Underdogs: daebak o/
2016-07-01 10:44 My Angel RangE: :)

Sorry i cant speak Korean :(
domSaur
1,263 posts
Joined December 2013
domSaur
how2mod

[Moa's Distroy]
  1. 00:18:375 (3) - maybe turn this clockwise to the left... it kinda feels difficult to get to (1)
  2. 00:25:910 (3) - make this into 2 circles instead.. or at least switch 00:25:910 (3,4) - with each other... the flow here kinda feels disrupted
  3. 01:28:840 (7) - you might wanna NC this
[Extra]
  1. 00:22:282 (2,3,4,5) - this section feels a bit messy/cluttered. maybe you could have 00:22:561 (3,4) - switch places so the patterns goes on a rotation(the next one does anyway so why not)
  2. 00:41:956 (4) - mayb blanket this properly
  3. 00:56:049 (3) - it might be better if you place this in front of 00:55:770 (2) - for a better triangular pattern. the current pattern idk..... makes 00:56:468 (2) - a bit hard to hit
  4. 00:58:142 (5) - why not just copy 00:57:724 (4) - and make it symmetrical.. it looks cleaner that way
  5. 01:15:026 (3) - mayb ctrl+g.. or at least move it a bit further.. the angle here feels oddly sharp. also fix the blanket while you're at it.
  6. 01:27:166 (3) - also ctrl+g.. it feels counter-intuitive.. or if not at least have 01:27:445 (4,5) - switch places

    some of the red-point sliders feels unnecessary and tbh doesn't rly look good
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:538 (1,2) - mayb just reduce the snap to 1.0
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
My Angel RangE
1,055 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
My Angel RangE

domSaur wrote:

how2mod

[Extra]
  1. 00:22:282 (2,3,4,5) - this section feels a bit messy/cluttered. maybe you could have 00:22:561 (3,4) - switch places so the patterns goes on a rotation(the next one does anyway so why not) fixed
  2. 00:41:956 (4) - mayb blanket this properly not fix
  3. 00:56:049 (3) - it might be better if you place this in front of 00:55:770 (2) - for a better triangular pattern. the current pattern idk..... makes 00:56:468 (2) - a bit hard to hit not fix
  4. 00:58:142 (5) - why not just copy 00:57:724 (4) - and make it symmetrical.. it looks cleaner that way fixed
  5. 01:15:026 (3) - mayb ctrl+g.. or at least move it a bit further.. the angle here feels oddly sharp. also fix the blanket while you're at it. not fix
  6. 01:27:166 (3) - also ctrl+g.. it feels counter-intuitive.. or if not at least have 01:27:445 (4,5) - switch places not fix

    some of the red-point sliders feels unnecessary and tbh doesn't rly look good
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:538 (1,2) - mayb just reduce the snap to 1.0 not fix
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
thx!
Cactipiller
74 posts
Joined October 2015
Cactipiller
Moa's Distroy

AR9.8 is really high for this difficulty
00:38:189 (5,6) - Weird flow from 5 to 6 maybe flip 5,6,7,8 vertically
00:56:607 - 01:11:956 - Following the vocals for this whole section seems repetitive and gets boring. I would map either this whole section to the guitar part or switch to the guitar part after 01:05:398
01:22:561 (2,3,4,5,6) - Instead of mapping these all as one pattern separate 2 and 3 from 4, 5, and 6 because 2 and 3 are the end of the previous phrase and 4, 5, and 6 lead into the next

Extra

00:05:328 (1,1) - Shorten the spinner to end on the white tick like the rest of them
00:30:375 (3) - ctrl g to make spacing less awkward
00:30:793 (4) - nc
00:35:259 (4) - ^
00:36:793 (2) - looks weird to have red slider points very close to the starts and ends of sliders
00:47:677 (5) - nc
01:04:282 (3) - Move to the white tick
01:04:421 (4,5,6,7) - Feels like there's a lot of notes left out by this section
01:17:677 (1,2) - Increase spacing to fit vocals
01:21:166 (6) - nc
01:26:468 (5,1) - Replace 5 with a circle, replace 1 with a slider, and then move 1 back a 1/2 so that 1, 2, and 3 all have sliders matching the vocals
01:30:654 (3) - Half the length and make it a repeat slider to fit the guitar part
01:33:305 (1) - Make this a 1/1 slider and add a circle on the white tick

Insane

00:15:584 (1) - Remove nc
00:20:607 (7) - Increase slider velocity because this looks like a 1/4 slider
00:22:980 (1) - Make a 1/1 slider and add a circle to map more notes
00:24:096 (1) - ^
00:26:328 (4) - ^ and nc
00:28:980 (2) - nc
00:39:863 (5) - ^
00:56:468 (8,1) - stack
00:57:724 (4) - nc
00:59:956 (4) - ^
01:02:189 (4) - ^
01:04:421 (4) - ^
01:04:980 (6) - Shorten to a 1/2 slider and add a circle
01:06:654 (4) - nc
01:07:073 (1) - remove nc
01:07:770 (3) - nc
01:10:003 (5) - ^
01:12:514 (2,1) - replace with jumps to match the drums getting louder here
01:17:677 (4) - nc
01:25:631 (5) - ^
01:28:840 (4) - ^
01:30:514 - add circle
01:31:073 (4) - nc
01:37:073 (2) - make this slider straight
01:37:770 (4) - nc

General
Feels like there's a lot of notes missed across all the difficulties which makes the map empty and boring. Also almost every measure should indicate a new combo for future reference.
My Angel RangE
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Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
My Angel RangE
Extra

00:05:328 (1,1) - Shorten the spinner to end on the white tick like the rest of them
00:30:375 (3) - ctrl g to make spacing less awkward
00:30:793 (4) - nc
00:35:259 (4) - ^
00:36:793 (2) - looks weird to have red slider points very close to the starts and ends of sliders
00:47:677 (5) - nc
01:04:282 (3) - Move to the white tick
01:04:421 (4,5,6,7) - Feels like there's a lot of notes left out by this section
01:17:677 (1,2) - Increase spacing to fit vocals
01:21:166 (6) - nc
01:26:468 (5,1) - Replace 5 with a circle, replace 1 with a slider, and then move 1 back a 1/2 so that 1, 2, and 3 all have sliders matching the vocals
01:30:654 (3) - Half the length and make it a repeat slider to fit the guitar part
01:33:305 (1) - Make this a 1/1 slider and add a circle on the white tick

Insane

00:15:584 (1) - Remove nc
00:20:607 (7) - Increase slider velocity because this looks like a 1/4 slider
00:22:980 (1) - Make a 1/1 slider and add a circle to map more notes
00:24:096 (1) - ^
00:26:328 (4) - ^ and nc
00:28:980 (2) - nc
00:39:863 (5) - ^
00:56:468 (8,1) - stack
00:57:724 (4) - nc
00:59:956 (4) - ^
01:02:189 (4) - ^
01:04:421 (4) - ^
01:04:980 (6) - Shorten to a 1/2 slider and add a circle
01:06:654 (4) - nc
01:07:073 (1) - remove nc
01:07:770 (3) - nc
01:10:003 (5) - ^
01:12:514 (2,1) - replace with jumps to match the drums getting louder here
01:17:677 (4) - nc
01:25:631 (5) - ^
01:28:840 (4) - ^
01:30:514 - add circle
01:31:073 (4) - nc
01:37:073 (2) - make this slider straight
01:37:770 (4) - nc

General
Feels like there's a lot of notes missed across all the difficulties which makes the map empty and boring. Also almost every measure should indicate a new combo for future reference.[/quote]

all refuse
thx for modding !
My Angel RangE
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Topic Starter
My Angel RangE
moa's feedback

Dailycare

Moa's Distroy
ar이 약간 빠른것처럼 느껴졌는데, 9.6정도면 적당할듯 ㅇㅋ 9.6

*00:54:933 (2) - 간격 1.0으로 여기전부 1.1로 맞춰서 ㅈㅅ
*01:00:654 - 최상위 난이도라면 여기를 서클로 놨을수도 있었을텐데 아쉬운부분이네용 다음부턴 그렇게하겠음
*01:13:003 (7) - 제가 스피커로 들어서 잘은 모르겠는데 3연타가 있을 구간은 01:12:445 - 아닌가요?? ㄴㄴ 제가 둔곳 드럼에맞춰서 3연타 넣은거
*01:13:352 (1,2,3) - 이렇게 일자로 나열할거면 거리를 약간씩이라도 더 벌려주는게 낫다고 생각되네요 거리벌리면 오프스크린되서.. 우선 다른사람도 그렇게말하면 바꿈
*01:19:491 (4,5) - 컨쥐한 리듬이 더 어울리는거 같아요 5,1이 강조되게 하려고 그렇게 했습니다
*01:22:840 (4) - 뉴콤보를 이용해서 (4,5,6)을 개별된 묶음으로 보고 점프를 넣었으면 어땠을까 싶네용 ㅇㅋ

domSaur

Moa's Distroy
00:18:375 (3) - maybe turn this clockwise to the left... it kinda feels difficult to get to (1) I want emphasize 3->1 so give some distant
00:25:910 (3) - make this into 2 circles instead.. or at least switch 00:25:910 (3,4) - with each other... the flow here kinda feels disrupted ok
01:28:840 (7) - you might wanna NC this ok

Cactipiller

Moa's Distroy

AR9.8 is really high for this difficulty ok i'll change
00:38:189 (5,6) - Weird flow from 5 to 6 maybe flip 5,6,7,8 vertically remake that jump
00:56:607 - 01:11:956 - Following the vocals for this whole section seems repetitive and gets boring. I would map either this whole section to the guitar part or switch to the guitar part after 01:05:398 답변 sry i want emphasize kiai and this song not have breaktime but i want give some rest for player
01:22:561 (2,3,4,5,6) - Instead of map
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna
[General]
  1. Colours don't fit the map well tbh, are too strong and completely light for some reason (bg is kinda dark)
  2. Doesn't matter if combo looks really short or something like that, combo should change in/after every single big white tick (hp things)
  3. OD should be between the same number as ar or 1 less
placing in boxes cuz my mod is a bit large.

Easy
00:00:794 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nc
00:22:282 (3) - nc
00:23:398 (1) - nc
00:24:514 (3) - nc
00:26:747 (3) - nc
00:28:980 (3) - nc
00:31:212 (3) - nc, wrongly distance snapped
00:33:445 (3) - nc
00:34:282 (4) - nc
00:35:677 (6) - nc
00:36:793 (8) - nc
00:37:491 (1) - what? remove nc now
00:37:910 (2) - nc
00:40:980 (3) - nc
00:44:328 (2) - nc
00:45:445 (3) - nc
00:46:561 (4) - nc
00:49:910 (3) - nc
00:54:375 (3) - nc
00:57:724 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - nc
01:12:235 (2) - nc
01:13:352 (3) - nc
01:15:584 (2) - nc
01:16:700 (3) - nc
01:18:793 (5) - nc
01:21:026 (2) - nc
01:24:514 (2) - nc
01:25:631 (3) - nc
01:28:840 (2) - nc
01:31:491 (3) - nc
01:33:724 (3) - nc
01:35:956 (3) - nc
01:38:189 (3) - nc
01:39:026 (4) - nc

Normal
00:00:794 (1,2,3,4,5) - nc nc nc nc nc nc ncn cncnc ncn cncncnc nnc please
00:10:840 (4) - nc
00:13:073 (3) - nc
00:21:863 (2) - nc
00:24:096 (3) - nc
00:26:328 (2) - nc
00:28:561 (3) - nc
00:29:119 (4) - wrongly distance snapped
00:30:793 (2) - nc
00:33:026 (3) - nc
00:35:259 (2) - nc
00:37:491 (3) - nc
00:38:049 (4) - wrongly distance snapped
00:38:747 (1) - wrongly distance snapped
00:39:863 (2) - nc
00:42:096 (2) - nc
00:42:096 (2) - nc
00:46:561 (2) - nc
00:48:793 (3) - nc
00:51:026 (4) - nc
00:53:259 (3) - nc
00:55:491 (2) - nc
00:57:724 (2) - nc
00:58:841 (3) - nc
01:02:189 (2) - nc
01:03:305 (3) - nc
01:06:654 (2) - nc
01:07:770 (3) - nc
01:11:119 (3) - nc
01:13:352 (3) - nc
01:14:468 - all notes from here are wrongly distance snapped. You did a nice choice and realocate the distance snap when move to 1x slider velocity, spacing keeped constant cuz of this, but notes CAN'T change spacing during an easy/normal. Keep using 0.9x spacing please.
01:15:584 (3) - nc
01:17:677 (4) - nc
01:18:375 (5) - highly recommend you yo replace at 01:18:235 -
01:19:910 (4) - nc
01:22:142 (4) - nc
01:24:514 (3) - nc
01:26:607 (4) - nc
01:29:538 (4) - looooooooool nc
01:31:073 (2) - nc
01:33:305 (3) - nc
01:35:538 (2) - nc
01:37:770 (3) - nc

Hard
00:12:514 (1) - remove nc
00:13:073 (5) - nc
00:18:654 (4) - what the.... well, nc
00:24:096 (4) - nc
00:26:328 (4) - nc
00:28:561 (5) - nc
00:30:793 (4) - nc
00:33:026 (4) - nc
00:35:259 (4) - nc
00:37:491 (5) - nc
00:39:863 (3) - nc
00:40:980 (6) - nc
00:43:212 (5) - nc
00:45:445 (4) - nc
00:47:677 (5) - nc
00:50:887 (4) - nc
00:57:724 (4) - nc
00:59:956 (4) - nc
01:02:189 (4) - nc
01:03:305 (7) - nc
01:06:654 (4) - nc
01:10:003 (4) - nc
01:15:584 (5) - nc
01:17:677 (4) - nc
01:19:910 (4) - nc
01:22:142 (5) - nc
maaan I'll stop from here.
Almost every single time you see a big white tick, is a nice time to place a nc, srsly, trust me, you can see it in any ranked mapset

Insane
00:15:584 (3) - idk if nc is really necessary
00:26:328 (4) - forget nc
00:30:793 (4) - same
00:39:863 (5) - same
00:41:956 (4) - ^
00:44:328 (5) - ^
00:46:561 (4) - ^
00:48:793 (5) - ^
00:50:887 (4) - ^
00:55:491 (3) - ^
00:57:724 (4) - ^
00:59:956 (4) - ^
and again and again and again

y'know, just follow the same thing I point on Hard
hp is ridiculous high, consider decrease it by 1

Extra
00:20:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - in my opinion, this diff isn't hard enough to have a strongly hard spacing between streams, for real, this make extra harder than the hardest diff in your set.
00:41:956 (4) - nc
00:47:677 (5) - nc
00:50:887 (4) - nc
00:53:259 (5) - nc
00:57:445 (3,6,3,6,3,6,3,3,1,6,1,5) - for real, you just made 50000 different patterns for the same sound, 01:06:375 (3,1) - these two are completely off too, but this one in special 01:10:700 (5) - is a trouble that you made because of this circle 01:10:980 (6) - , replace circle here 01:10:700 - and slider here 01:10:840 -
00:57:724 (4) - nc
00:59:956 (4) - nc
01:02:189 (4) - nc
01:04:421 (4) - nc
01:06:654 - when you change the wrong slider placed here 01:06:375 (3) - , put a nc here too
01:08:887 (7) - nc
01:10:003 - when you change the wrong slider placed here 01:09:724 (1) - , put a nc here too
01:16:421 (5) - such a strong beat at the slider end, I'm really doubtful about just leave this here without any reason, this part is prob the most important in the whole kiai. You should put a slider here 01:16:700 -
01:21:026 - the constant sound for a slider is here, not in 01:21:166 - or something
01:23:259 - ^ same issue here
01:26:468 - circle here and slider at 01:26:607 -
01:34:003 (3,4) - there are two sliders that should fit the sound that happens starting here 01:33:863 - , but you place a circle that should be placed here 01:34:421 -
Last edited by Trynna , edited 1 time in total.
My Angel RangE
1,055 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
My Angel RangE

Trynna wrote:

[General]
  1. Colours don't fit the map well tbh, are too strong and completely light for some reason (bg is kinda dark)
  2. Doesn't matter if combo looks really short or something like that, combo should change in/after every single big white tick (hp things)
  3. OD should be between the same number as ar or 1 less
placing in boxes cuz my mod is a bit large.

Easy all not fix. but slightly fix.


Hard all not fix but slightly fix.

Insane all not fix too. but slightly fix.


Extra
00:20:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - in my opinion, this diff isn't hard enough to have a strongly hard spacing between streams, for real, this make extra harder than the hardest diff in your set.
00:41:956 (4) - nc
00:47:677 (5) - nc
00:50:887 (4) - nc
00:53:259 (5) - nc
00:57:445 (3,6,3,6,3,6,3,3,1,6,1,5) - for real, you just made 50000 different patterns for the same sound, 01:06:375 (3,1) - these two are completely off too, but this one in special 01:10:700 (5) - is a trouble that you made because of this circle 01:10:980 (6) - , replace circle here 01:10:700 - and slider here 01:10:840 -
00:57:724 (4) - nc
00:59:956 (4) - nc
01:02:189 (4) - nc
01:04:421 (4) - nc
01:06:654 - when you change the wrong slider placed here 01:06:375 (3) - , put a nc here too
01:08:887 (7) - nc
01:10:003 - when you change the wrong slider placed here 01:09:724 (1) - , put a nc here too
01:16:421 (5) - such a strong beat at the slider end, I'm really doubtful about just leave this here without any reason, this part is prob the most important in the whole kiai. You should put a slider here 01:16:700 -
01:21:026 - the constant sound for a slider is here, not in 01:21:166 - or something
01:23:259 - ^ same issue here
01:26:468 - circle here and slider at 01:26:607 -
01:34:003 (3,4) - there are two sliders that should fit the sound that happens starting here 01:33:863 - , but you place a circle that should be placed here 01:34:421 -
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna
hmmmm, yeah, I was really wrong about the easy/normal constant nc, you should just jump 1 big white tick and place another one, I'm really sorry about it.
but consider apply the others, is really important, for real

Good luck in rank process
Dailycare
Beatmap Nominator
1,071 posts
Joined May 2012
Dailycare
@Trynna
lol All NCs you pointed out are set per two downbeats except for the first part. NC setting in the first part was intended for emphasizing the pattern TwT.. And i think such NC setting doesn't make issues of HP drains, reading, or anything else.
Distance snapping is generally recommended in Normal diff. But it's not a rule, it's just a guideline lol. Also you can see it's just recommended technique looking at LeaF - Calamity Fortune by Frostings

So i fixed only 01:18:375 (5) - . i just made it starting at 01:18:235 - as you suggested

Thanks for your mod xD

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vendeveluke
7 posts
Joined September 2013
vendeveluke
OMG nice but on Catch The Beat mode ur HARD become Normal because its slow but still tricky i love it .....Nice Work ~ ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)
anna apple
1,245 posts
Joined March 2014
anna apple
Sorry for delay of modding but wisdom teeth op.

Moa's Distroy
  1. destroy? who is moa xD
  2. honestly I couldn't tell you had hitsounds at all until I turned off the music volume. or until a while into the song.
  3. 00:37:491 (1) - I would change this to a 1/2 slider - extending it to this beat doesn't make too much sense(to me) and extending it to the red tick makes less sense.
  4. 01:04:980 (1,2,3) - I would move 2 up a bit and stack 3 on 2 because this flow feels bad to play imo. or do something like this http://puu.sh/q24H1/a773216c24.jpg
  5. 01:35:398 (4) - 01:35:538 (1) - don't stack 4 on the head of 1 because there is emphasis in the music for 1 and not 4, maybe stack 4 on the tail of 1 --> basically just move 4 and 1 away from eachother so 1 feels emphasized.
  6. 01:37:352 (4) - this takes away beats. like the snare hit on the slider tail. I suggest changing it so 01:37:631 - is clickable
  7. also the hitsound for whistle in your kiai is annoying xDDDD
  8. Pretty good looking diff overall but you need to fix your wave sliders. make sure each wave slider is the same design structure -- refer to https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596/

Insane
  1. 00:00:794 (1) - 00:03:026 (1) - 00:05:259 (1) - 00:07:491 (1) - maybe insert breaks in between these? -- not really needed but no reason not to? idk
  2. this diff is hard for me to talk about but basically I don't agree with your rhythm choices. 00:22:421 (3,4) - I feel stuff like this takes away from downbeats(white ticks) since the white ticks aren't clickable
  3. same with 00:24:096 (1) - 00:26:328 (1) - 00:27:863 (2) -
  4. 00:49:491 (6,7,8) - if there is sounds here they are really quiet so this spacing should be smaller.
  5. 01:05:259 - should be clickable.
  6. im not feeling too well today so I'm done for now. if you want more just pm me I'll get back when I feel better

GL with ranking
Plaudible
1,028 posts
Joined September 2015
Plaudible
Hey!~ M4M from your queue!
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Easy
Aah, throughout this difficulty this DS at spaces like 00:13:073 (4,1) is very uncomfortably close. 1.1x is better for the song IMO, but it's your choice.
00:31:212 (3) - This isn't distance snapped
Overall, this beatmap has a pretty low attractiveness. Shapes that compliment each other would work better, or blanketing things such as 00:46:561 (4,1)
00:56:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not too sure what these are all mapped to. This is a really strong suggestion, please consider it: map like this: http://puu.sh/qjkaU/7b19d04dfd.jpg through this whole section. It fits a lot better and is more playable for the player.
Beyond that, since the rhythm repeats, it'll need some diversity, though I'm not too sure how. However, what it is currently feels like it doesn't go with the rhythm and is uncomfortable.
01:39:026 (4) - Feel like you could do without this note. Dailycare's normal doesn't have a note there either, the sharp end doesn't really need the note imo. It closes the map off and feels better without.

Dailycare's Normal
Whoa... cs 3.6? ;-; even hard only has 3.5.
00:53:259 (3) - Put this on the red tick before it and extend it a bit, fits the vocals a lot better. Adjust spacing appropriately.
01:12:235 (1) - The mapping choice here is a bit odd. There's a drum clearly in the middle of this slider, would be better mapped out than a slider. As it is, it makes reading 01:12:793 (2,3) very hard.

Hard
00:35:259 (4,5) - Improve blanket here. Position to 00:35:468 then adjust it to the approach circle.
01:38:747 (3) - Same thing here, I feel this isn't necessary to make a reverse, end sound closes song itself.
Compared to your mapping in easy, this is significantly better. When I was modding easy I felt like the other difficulties would be similar :o Your mapping here is great and has a lot better flow, and overall looks a lot more appealing. Transfer that to your easy too!

Insane
00:28:980 (2) - I'd NC this
01:08:887 (1,2) - Blanket?
01:38:747 (1,2) - Same as before, I'd just make 2 a circle.
Again, your mapping here is significantly better than I expected from easy, seems like 2 different mappers.

Moa's Distroy
Is the mispell intentional? Don't know if it has to do with the anime or something, sorry D: if it's an error, it's spelled "Moa's Destroy"
This difficulty is very professionally mapped. Fun jumps and fun to play.

The mapset looks really solid, the only part that needs definite improvement is your easy. Good luck!
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