Your maps are always hard to mod, because everything is usually perfect, and anything that isn't perfect is copy-pasted throughout the whole thing. But oh well. True about my taste, true about my wealth, an accurate sketch of perfect health.
[General]
- Letterboxing has to be consistent on all difficulties, so pick whether you'd like to do it or not.
- Inconsistent kiai on [Easy] and [Hard], yo. For [Easy], the fourth kiai time starts on 01:25:313 and ends on 01:29:250. But wait, on [Hard], the fourth kiai time starts on 01:25:31 and ends on 01:31:219. What an incredible mess. Make your mind up on which kiai you will taaake.
[Hard]
- Stuff is unsnapped, so snap it.
00:15:658 (7,1) - I never thought there would be something so close to an overlap in a Jibbaha map, come on, space them a little more apart.
00:54:694 - You could drag the break to here if you wanted to be a mega troll, like that. I guess this applies for the other difficulties, too, so pretend I said it there.
01:45:094 (1) - Wait, why is this not on the white tick, I don't understand.
01:56:321 (7,1) - Here it goes, here it goes, here it goes again.
02:10:375 (2,3,4,5) - (2) and (5) are under the sheets and killing me inside my head, or, for short, remove the overlap.
[iNiS980]
01:25:067 (10,1) - Yeah, a jump this large probably isn't a good idea. Perhaps do something a bit less crazy.
01:39:079 (4,1) - (1) is sort of touching (4) a lot, if there's any way to possibly remedy this.
01:43:498 (8,9,10) - There aren't any spaced 1/4s for the rest of the map, so doing it here might be sort of mean. Perhaps you could do something else.
01:48:899 - This break is rather long, and it seems possible to map some of it, so perhaps you should do that to reduce the waiting time a little.
[Wheatley's Normal]
01:53:852 (3,4) - This blanket is not very good so maybe it should be better.
01:55:827 (3,4) - Oh look there it is again, hi.
02:31:323 (1) - The end of this slider is unsnapped because it goes through a timing section or something, but by a very small amount. It's not a big problem, but maybe you could consider using circles to avoid it.
[Easy]
01:27:281 (1,2,3,4) - Is it just me or is this spacing slightly inconsistent? Maybe use midgetgrids to fix it.
02:03:708 (1,1) - Hey hey, you should give new players more time to recover after a spinner.
02:23:048 (3,4) - I can't believe I'm complaining about a blanket on a Jibbaha map, but can't it be a tiny bit better?
02:26:454 (3,4) - Here it goes, here it goes, here it goes deja vu.
02:33:282 (3,4) - See, I told you about the copypasting thing.
EDIT: Jibbaha fixed everything, though he says that the inconsistent kiai is okay, because he would prefer to not have kiai during spinners, and he likes the spinners the way they are. I'm alright with this, and I checked with another BAT to make sure. I also asked him about the capitalization and he was like "yeah" so yeah. We're all good here.
(and give me kudosu)
Bubbled!
SECOND EDIT: Timing fixes needed, Gonz sent the PM. Speak now, for yourself.
