1. Easy (1.28 stars, 85 notes)
2. Hard (3.03 stars, 223 notes)
3. Normal (1.95 stars, 129 notes)

Modders

Thank you guys~!!
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BeatofIke
Natsu
UndeadCapulet / Mako Sakata / Log Off Now
Ayyri
Sonnyc
Sonnyc
Ayyri
IamKwaN
IamKwaN

My Angel RangE wrote:

hii~

Easy

01:20:868 (5,6) - DS error Fixed~

Normal

widescreen support cheek off please Fixed~
beat very Instability Vocal ? beat ? (kiai time not.)

00:54:049 (3,4,5,6,7) - is that confusing Fixed~

Darling

widescreen support cheek off please Fixed~
3.1 star cs 4.4? i think cs 4.. Fixed~
Hard..? then..

00:05:185 (5,1,2) - DS different I made it smaller.
00:08:822 (5,1,2) - ^ I want to keep the emphasis on downbeat.
00:09:731 (3,4,5) - I made it smaller.
00:26:095 (3,4,5,6) - ^ I made it smaller.
00:32:004 (4,5,1) - ^ I want to keep the emphasis on downbeat.
00:37:913 (6,1) - big DS I made it smaller.
00:41:322 (4,5,1) - Owo..DS different I removed the anti-jump.
00:44:958 (5,6,1) - ^ It's not that bad here.
00:49:049 (1,2,3) - ^ I lowered it.

o good luck

sonic8889 wrote:

my mod from my queue

Darling
tbh i can barely find anything in the diff. it's really good ;'(

00:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Cant hear hitsounds ;'{ you should bump up the volume That would be because there are no hitsounds. I added a few whistles in every difficulty.

01:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - All these straight sliders made it feel too repetitive when I was playing, even though its only 5 notes. Maybe the one all the way on the top ( 01:04:731 (4) ) can be changed into a curve? I've seen worse.

01:21:322 (6) - I'd take off the repeat, as it doesn't fit the vocals which is the only sound playing in this section. Fixed~

00:49:049 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I think this section should be doing something alike to this section: 00:45:413 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) because the vocals + background instruments sound the same in both. Not exactly the same, but same pattern of hitcircle/slider. Fixed, slightly~

00:57:231 (3,4,1,2,3) - I feel there are too many sliders here for a normal part of the song. Like, the rest of the song has hit-circles in between every 1 to 3 sliders. Or you can keep it because spinner recovery, up to you. I changed 00:58:595 - this into circles.

that's it for this diff. I feel like it's already really good and you'll probably need someone with much more experience than me to catch anything in this diff, if there is anything to catch. ;o Yay (ﾉ^∇^)ﾉﾟ

Normal

00:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - I can't hear any hitsounds here ;oo either that or it's barely audible. You should bump up the volume. Same as Darling ^ Fixed~

00:29:504 (4) - You might want to have this stacked under the other note, to do the same thing you did in Darling. It's not necessary. I did it in Darling for spacing. In Normal, I'm using stacks mostly to indicate 1/2 rhythms and I want to keep that consistent.

01:21:322 (7) - Same as Darling, you might wanna remove repeat. ^ Fixed~

00:37:231 (7,8) - For sections like this, where the drum is being hit 4 time in the background, you should have 2 1/2 sliders instead of a slider and a hitcircle. Adds more emphasis on the drums, which is what you want. That's too much for a Normal difficulty which already goes over the recommended star difficulty (2.25*).

00:30:867 (1) - You should blanket this closer to the next slider. That's not a blanket. I'll change it.

I played this diff with ar 10 and noticed the map literally has you going in circles, which I think is a great strategy and makes it easier to follow the notes. True, it does flow well this way, but I have to be careful it doesn't become dull. For example, from 00:34:958 - here to 00:44:049 - here, almost 10 seconds, the player only has to move clockwise. It's boring to play. I switched it up a bit. The same thing also happened 01:06:322 - from here to 01:17:231 - here, but I changed it.
again, really good diff. I probably skipped over some things oh yeah, also, this diff (in star rating) is a hard. might want to tone it down some way to be normal rather than hard. Normal is 2.25 and below to 1.50 stars, this is 2.30 stars. As long as the spread is good it doesn't matter.

Easy

00:03:595 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Cant hear hitsounds, bump it up ;o ^ Fixed~

00:45:413 (1) - Move it a bit down to align better with the hitcircle before it. It's a straight slider, so the ideal flow would be a straight line.

00:41:777 (1) - You might wanna curve this up rather than down, so that 1. it doesn't look like the same slider twice and 2. it creates a better-looking pattern ;o. When I say curve up i mean the middle point, move it up instead of down. Fixed~

00:59:959 (1) - Same ^^ ^ Fixed~

01:01:777 (3) - Same ^^ ^ Fixed~

01:11:322 (2) - Might wanna change this slider into a simple curve, because the repeat arrow direction can confuse an easy player. I don't see what's so confusing about a bend. >> I changed the shape slightly.

Sorry for short mods xd
I think all 3 diffs. are already really good. The way the repeating patterns are make it easy to play but the overlapping notes make it a bit tricky in normal and Darling, which is perfect for people playing this range of diff.
im 100% sure that i'm skipping over some stuff, but other modders should be able to catch anything I didn't/couldn't ;o
good luck ranking

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hiya! from my queue~

Sorry for the delay >_> been really busy. 2 days is nothing. I've kept people waiting for 2 weeks sometimes.

Hard

Theres a lot more you can do with this, because you used 1/2 divisor just listening to it, it sounds like you could add triplets in places, etc. Because you used 1/2 also, it's A LOT cleaner, and just generally easier to mod. So there isn't a whole lot i could say SYMMETRY

00:14:049 (5,1) - Put these on the same y axis I'm going for Ctrl+j and Ctrl+h here.

00:37:685 (5,6,1) - I would make this a stream, It'll fit the music, add some more challenge to your map I made a doublet in some places for difficulty.

00:44:958 (5,6,1) - Something like this ^

01:02:685 (3,4,5,6,1) - Just add a note after 6 leading into the next slider ^

Sorry i couldn't find a whole bunch... It looks really clean though so, good luck!!

Lefia wrote:

Hi from M4M queue (i'm late? No you're not.)

mod

[general]

- Video's audio needs to removed in order for mapset to be ranked
- Audio's volume is low, set it into 100% with mp3gain
- About metadata:
- Change the artist to 西内まりや
- Change the song title into Don't Let Me Down (TV SIZE)
- You can check it here
All fixed~

[Easy]

- 00:14:049 (4,1,2) how about like this? I did something similar.

SPOILER

- 00:24:049 (2) ctrl + > 2 times and ctrl + g or try smth like this at 00:22:685 (4,1,2) (blanket 2 with (1) before) I prefer the current pattern, it feels more structured.

- 00:37:231 (5,1,2) how about like this? I dislike the flow and the stacking in that pattern.

- 00:52:685 will better if like this Fixed~

- 01:18:140 ^ Fixed~
- 01:21:322 i think you should 1/2 slider because is the last you use the slider or circle Fixed~

[Normal]

- You can reduce the star rating with set the CS into 3 Fixed~
- Set AR into 5 or 5,5 because 4 is too low Fixed~

- 00:05:18 (3,4,5,6) looks bad, because there is a strong beat at 00:05:867 how about like this? Fixed~

- 00:08:140 (2) make this slider have reverse How? It's unnecessary.
- 00:08:822 (3,4,5,6) again... it looks bad, try like this Fixed~

- 00:12:458 (3,4,5,6) how about like this? Fixed~

- 00:30:867 (1,2) ctrl + h and make it blanket with (2) Fixed~
- 00:47:685 strong beat here, don't ignore it Fixed~
- 00:49:049 (1,4) overlap, i recommend you to change the AR 5.7
- 00:51:322 strong beat again, don't ignore it Fixed~
- 01:13:140 ^ Fixed~
- 01:16:776 ^ Fixed~

[Hard]

- HP 7? Change it into 6 or 5 because 7 is for insane and extra Fixed~
- Set OD into 6 or 5 Fixed~

00:04:504 (3,4) for better rhytm, it'll better if like this

00:05:413 (1,2) for better rhytm, how about like this?

00:08:140 (3,4) again... how about like this?

00:09:049 (1,2) .....

00:11:776 (3,4) if you still not understand what i mean, find out it with yourself. (sorry) No change. I understand that starting sliders on red ticks is usually frowned upon, but I think it's okay here. It's being used to emphasize the guitar notes that start on the red ticks. And, it's fun for me to play.

Nice diff, you should focus to the rhythm too

Good luck~

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi m4m from my queue Heyyyy

I hope this helps (ᵔᴥᵔ)

MOD

Normal
00:05:185 (3) - i hear no beat there maybe move this to the downbeat white tick here 00:04:958 - There's a guitar tick there. There's a vocal there. Moving it would ruin the polarity. ask me what polarity is if you don't know
00:08:822 (3) - same for this A guitar tick is there.
00:12:458 (3) - ^ ^
01:22:004 (1) - i think spinner ends here 01:27:231 - will be better The spinner should reflect where the song ends, 01:27:004 - here.
hard
00:04:504 (3,4,1,2,3) - its better if the rhythm be like this
because these sliders 00:04:731 (4,2,3) - starts from red and end at white tick which is the main beat that i think its better to start from white tick
to be more clickable and emphasize the beat on white tick it will flow better so make the sliders start from white tick and place these 00:04:731 (4,2,3) - after the sliders like in the picture ( i hope u get what i mean D:) Yes, it is usually better to give the downbeat emphasis, but if you do it too often, it will subtract from the rhythm. I am following the guitar, and some of the emphasized guitar ticks are on red ticks, so no change.
00:08:140 (3,4,1,2,3,3,4) - same here and u can go through the map and see for urself if u want and agree ^
01:22:004 (1) - idk why u keep ending the spinner here when everything stops here 01:27:231 - maybe extend the spinner to white tick because it's where the song ends

Good luck with your map its well mapped

eclipselotus wrote:

well i dont find stuff that really annoying me here
kds shoot instead .w.
goodluck on this
does the insane diff open slot .w.? i could do a gd if you want

Jonawaga wrote:

eclipselotus wrote:

well i dont find stuff that really annoying me here
kds shoot instead .w.
goodluck on this
does the insane diff open slot .w.? i could do a gd if you want

Someone just took it, but you can do another Insane or an extra if you want. ^^

Xayler wrote:

I would also do a GD, but I see that the slots are kinda taken.

Xayler wrote:

Heya, song's cool, you better would've better just told me to mod, but here the M4M comes.
Idk if I find anything that much, but I'll give my best opinions!
Quick clickbait to my map //clickbait indeed

ApplePie's Insane
Use same kiai's as Jonawaga does? // I don't really think the other two parts are suppose to be kiai, and quite abusing it for a 1 min + map
00:05:640 (2,3) - too high spacing I think for start (others after that play well) //decreased
00:14:504 (1,2) - would higher the spacing here like previously // just a little bit .-.
00:15:640 (4) - this fits as a single circle better I think, the previous kickslider may fit //sure
00:25:867 (3) - make this also as a kickslider like the previous two //ye
00:28:595 (5,6) - make this as normal spacing, doesn't fit I think // didn't make it into a "normal spacing" but something else
00:52:004 (3,4) - this is very weird for me as the previous kicksliders have tremendous distance and this circle doesn't have it //the previous one had a big distance cause after that is a stream which you can regain hp (?) .-. after the two kick slider which people might get 100. this one had a smaller distance cause no streams after that~
00:57:686 (6,7) - you can make the spacing higher here //yeaa
00:59:504 (5) - make this also as a kickslider // yea
01:08:368 (4,5,6) - I would have same spacing here as like 01:04:731 (4,5) //not sure about this but changed
01:15:413 (3) - not sure about this one, but maybe a kickslider would fit better again // i think it fits perfectly ^^
01:27:004 (3) - I would change this to a bit more spacing as the previous have that increase //i guess this spacing isn't too much .-.

Well I hope that'll be helpful, message me in game if you want me to explain or smth. Good luck with the set, I would also do a GD, but I see that the slots are kinda taken.

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UndeadCapulet wrote:

At your req:

General

bg is really low quality, it looks like a youtube screenshot
and tbh probably counts as nsfw orz

Is the song supposed to cut out at the end like that? Seems kinda weird o.O

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ApplePie's Insane

Kiai doesn't really make sense to me, 00:42:004 (2,3,4,5,6) - is just as intense as what comes before it. I think you should extend the kiai to 00:45:413 (1) - , or even all the way to 00:52:685 (1) - . And then extend the second kiai to 01:10:867 (1) - or 01:19:959 (1) - for similar reasons.
//I second this!

You use a lot of additive triplets/quints throughout the map. This is okay I suppose (maybe pushing it w/ quints), but you also skip a lot of the song's actual triplets, like at 00:26:095 (4) - . I think you should try to focus more on the song's true rhythms instead of adding so many of your own.
// I'm actually following vocal, when there is, and rhythm when there's no vocal.


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Also, long additive sections like 01:09:049 (1,2,3) - aren't really acceptable for ranking, since it's too far from the actual song.
//erm, I don't get what you meant here but if you say it's not following the song, it actually is? the "Oahhhhhhh part"

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And adding extra notes to 1/4 drum stuff like 01:10:413 (5,6,7,8,1) - takes away from the song's rhythming :<
//What. HOW!? maybe i'm just dumb

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You should make sure that the rhythms you use are consistent for similar sounding parts of the song. See 00:49:049 (1,2,3) - vs 01:14:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . It's the same part of the chorus, so you should express it with the same rhythms (or at least close to the same). Rhythm structuring like this is what separates ranked maps from unranked maps.
// I agree about this. But one thing is, I found this two different beats, and I'm still wondering which is better .-.


Suggestions on which is better is appreciated c:

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Rhythmic consistency is especially true for your additive notes, //are they really addictive lol .-.

if you put an extra triplet down somewhere, you should also put it down for any similar-sounding part of the song. Otherwise the triplet seems out of place, and may as well be removed.
// Yes, I do know about this lol. But for some parts I feel like it needs an extra triplet here but not the front part as sometimes the front part will not have that beat while the back part has it.
And THIS IS WHY we have modders to actually pick out those extra triplets as mappers like me *pew pew* are actually very blur and mapped an extra beat there. If they find it weird/un-normal with a reason of course i'll change [if it's reasonable lah]
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gl! // thanks!

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Xayler wrote:

Heya, song's cool, you better would've better just told me to mod, but here the M4M comes.
Idk if I find anything that much, but I'll give my best opinions!
Quick clickbait to my map

General
Do you have 192 kbit/s of the song? I think that the quality would be even better, although doesn't really matter if it doesn't matter then no change
01:21:777 (1) - listen to it in 25% ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) aaaa

Easy
00:14:504 (1) - I would rotate it by -60 and move the next circle, I think that you don't need to move the next slider with this change Ruins symmetry
00:36:322 (3) - move this to x:264 y:140 , better to click that way The sound changes, so the flow break is good.
00:50:868 (3,4) - idk I'm not blanket hunter usually, but I think that you can fix it quickly, or my eyes suck Fixed, your eyesight is fine...
01:00:868 (2) - copy this from 00:59:959 (1) ? That is how it originally was lol. I think the current pattern looks nicer and flows better.

Normal
00:07:231 (1) - rotate this -30 , flows better I think Fixed~
00:11:549 (2) - add a circle here and place it on top of 00:11:776 (3) There is a circle there, and if I added another circle, it wouldn't follow the guitar.
00:12:913 (6) - I would end it on white tick instead and add a circle 00:13:367 (7) - here, plays better I dislike that rhythm
00:23:140 (6) - rotate this by -30 again, flowy flowz The flow is good enough, and your suggestion breaks symmetry.
00:34:504 (1) - move this to left, near 00:34:049 (8) - sliderend I am not messing up the symmetrical blankets there. Also, the flow change is fine because NC.
01:13:822 (8) - move this on top of 01:14:049 (9) I did something similar.

Hard
SV is quite high I think, especially in kiai's I chose a high SV because of the lower bpm and to get good-looking 1/2 sliders.
00:07:231 (1) - make this as a long slider to the white tick 00:07:685 - this neeeeds to be clickable
00:21:776 (1) - CTRL+H that makes a huge jump
00:22:458 (3) - ^ ^
00:44:958 (5) - hmm, make this circle as a slider to the red tick, and then place the circle in blue tick between those sliders, seems to flow well the flow is fine though
01:01:549 (6) - move this to x:352 y:192 there's nothing wrong with auto stacks

Well I hope that'll be helpful, message me in game if you want me to explain or smth. Good luck with the set, I would also do a GD, but I see that the slots are kinda taken.

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

Xayler wrote:

I would also do a GD, but I see that the slots are kinda taken.

Pls do another Insane if he permits AHAHAHA No thanks. mine sucks :c Your map is fine. Please be a bit more confident about it.

UndeadCapulet wrote:

At your req:

General

bg is really low quality, it looks like a YouTube screenshot it is
and tbh probably counts as nsfw orz but fairy tail is nsfw Switched to something more sfw.

Is the song supposed to cut out at the end like that? Seems kinda weird o.O yes

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Hard

Same thing about kiai as Insane diff, cutting it off at 00:41:776 (1) - and 01:07:231 (1) - is weird to me, the song doesn't change intensity here. If you just want another fountain you can turn it off around 00:45:185 (6) - and then back on again, that's perfectly rankable. Applies to all diffs. I changed it to what ApplePie did actually.

01:19:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern seems too hard for such a quiet part of the song, it's much more singletappy than the rest of the map. Maybe just do some 1/2 stacks pattern if you really want the clicking rhythm. Fixed~

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Easy

01:10:868 (1,2,3,4) - Weird how different in rhythming this is from before, such a long sliderhold. tbh it fits well, maybe you should do that for this vocal every time Fixed a little

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gl!

Hobbes2 wrote:

thanks for posting in my m4m queue \o/

[Easy]

00:21:777 (3,4) - I think this blanket needs work as it's thicker at the heads of the slider than at the tails I tried

00:42:686 (2,3) - usually these blankets work better if the sliders are the same shape I tried

00:54:504 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many single taps in a row for an easy, I think. Maybe add a 1/2 slider in here. Fixed~

01:00:868 (2,3) - the gap between these is thicker in the middle than on the left and right, maybe adjust it a bit for visual neatness I tried

01:20:867 (4,5) - its probably fine but this is the only time in the diff that you use red ticks, so it might be confusing for the player. Fixed~

01:21:777 (1) - you can actually make this spinner louder as it progresses since the sound gets louder throughout it. This applies to all diffs C: Fixed~

[Normal]

Your whistle usage seems kinda random in this diff, like it's not very consistent as to how you use them. The lack of consistency isn't inherently a problem, just that it feels really weird to me. I suggest going through this diff and making sure all the whistles are placed as you want them. I messed with all of the hitsounds and volumes in Hard, then copy/pasted, so it should be fine now

Otherwise, this diff is very solid. Good work! yay!

[Hard]

00:05:413 (1,2) - Have to disagree with this jump. I think it's more appropriate to have a jump to 00:05:413 (1), as it's a strong vocal / downbeat. Fixed somewhat, I am following the guitar...

00:36:322 (1) - A slightly larger jump to this slider seems appropriate. Fixed~

00:39:731 (5) - dont agree with this jump, I'd position it so that the jump is from 5 to 1 instead of 4 to 5. Fixed~

00:56:322 (1) - if you pause at 00:55:981, you can actually blanket this slider around the spinner (lol) lol adjusted slightly

good luck! ill mod your other map tomorrow mostly likely thanks in advance for that~!!

MrSergio wrote:

giving back a M4M, sorry for being late

General

• add フェアリーテイル into tags since it's the japanese for "Fairy Tail" Fixed~
  
  Move TV Size into tags ok, I'll change the title after receiving ApplePie's diff
  

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Hard

• 00:05:413 (1,2) - following vocals no, the guitar, I'd say you should place the slider on 1, not on 2. To fix that up you should probably do something like this, but it can be anything as long as you have a slider on 00:05:413 -
  Actually, by checking later on the map looks like it's a pretty solid rhythm what you have there, but I still must point out that sliders on red ticks feel strange if not supported by strong notes in the music the guitar beats are strong though (and most of your sliders aren't like that imo)
  
  00:32:004 (4) - what about circles here instead? Fixed~
  
  00:45:185 (6,7) - idk, these don't look stacked properly (nazi stuff) I tried
  
  00:54:504 (1,1) - you have to give the player at least 1 measure of rest after every spinner on Hard diffs, as stated here It says "1 beat" not "1 measure" I changed it to 1 beat
  
  00:59:958 (1,2) - again, this strong beat on 1 should be emphasized with a slider imo Fixed~
  
  00:58:822 (3) - what about stacking this on 2? I tried
  
  01:01:549 (6,1) - nazi stack I tried
  

wow, it looks like I went back in time with this diff :3 lmao :3

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Normal

• 00:04:504 (2) - I'd just keep a simple circle here, since it misleads the player on how to play 00:05:185 (3,4) - properly (a single circle will tell the player "follow the kick sound of the bass" while your current slider tells him "follow the guitar" which makes no sense once you see 00:05:185 (3,4) - which follows drum again) Well, it was originally supposed to follow the guitar. Modders didn't like that, so I changed it. I'll change it back to mostly the guitar for consistency.
  00:08:140 (2) - same (and all the others) ^^^
  
  00:15:413 (2,3,1) - when I see the same kind of object with the same shape I think that there should be a similar sound supporting all those objects into the music. In this case there isn't, since 00:16:322 (1) - is distinctively different from 00:15:413 (2,3) -
  What about using circles for 00:15:413 (2,3) - ? It will easily fix this problem imo Fixed~
  
  01:19:958 (4) - what about a NC here to tell the player a new rhythm started? Fixed~
  

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Easy

• nothing to say here, good job =w=b o(〃＾▽＾〃)o
  

That's all from me :3/

1. 00:49:504 (2) - add whistle+clap to slider end. After looking at your other diffs I saw an alternating pattern between whistle and whistle+clap in this non-kiai section, so I figured it should be the same here.
2. 00:59:959 (1) - Nitpick: slider isn't the same as the next three (not symmetrical); changed points to (132,268), (171,273), (210,268)
3. 01:01:776 (3) - flip this one upside-down - i.e., change middle point to (340,364)

1. After playing ~10 times I can't find a single thing I want to change.

1. Nitpick: 00:49:504 (2) - and 00:50:867 (1) - move both to (316, 248) (first note for even spacing, second note for alignment)
2. 00:49:049 (6) - How about a curved slider? Seems to have better flow. Points are (468,188), (460,238), and (431,279). If you do change this, the two notes in my previous suggestion might have to be shifted a bit lower.

1. 00:25:413 (1,2,3) - Regarding these "falling sliders": After hitting the third one I'm tempted to keep moving the cursor, but 00:26:095 (4) - is right next to 00:25:867 (3) - and it throws me off. I suggest staggering the sliders to something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5664210.
2. 00:48:367 (3) - This jump feels too huge (4.5x, compared to similar jump at 01:13:595 (2,3) - which is 3.9x), especially since the sliders are pointed opposite directions. Probably best to simply narrow the gap a bit and shift them a little to the right.
3. 00:54:504 (1,2,3,4) - Up until here the single note jumps have generally been fairly large and more exciting to play; you could probably space these out and even stagger them side-to-side like in my previous suggestion (my crappy example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5664268)
4. 00:55:640 (2) - I feel the drums take precedence over the vocals here; turning this and even 00:55:413 (1) - into notes for a longer stream feels better.

Narwhal Prime wrote:

Hi Jonawaga and _IxApplePie_, here's a mod from my GIVE ME ANYTHING queue!

[Easy]

1. 00:49:504 (2) - add whistle+clap to slider end. After looking at your other diffs I saw an alternating pattern between whistle and whistle+clap in this non-kiai section, so I figured it should be the same here. Fixed why didn't you just link me the sliderend >>
2. 00:59:959 (1) - Nitpick: slider isn't the same as the next three (not symmetrical); changed points to (132,268), (171,273), (210,268) 00:58:595 (6,1) - notice the blanket here
3. 01:01:776 (3) - flip this one upside-down - i.e., change middle point to (340,364) why? that just makes the flow worse, and it breaks symmetry

[Normal]

1. After playing ~10 times I can't find a single thing I want to change.

[Hard]

1. Nitpick: 00:49:504 (2) - and 00:50:867 (1) - move both to (316, 248) (first note for even spacing, second note for alignment) This originally broke symmetry, but I found a way around it. It seems like a lot of work just for even spacing, but, fixed~
2. 00:49:049 (6) - How about a curved slider? Seems to have better flow. Points are (468,188), (460,238), and (431,279). If you do change this, the two notes in my previous suggestion might have to be shifted a bit lower. Doing this would make it look like I was failing at making 00:49:049 (1,2,3) - these look symmetrical, with them being a similar shape.

Yay a happy song! I wonder if the anime is any good. Imo, Fairy Tail is often dismissed as being "too mainstream". I, personally, really like it though.
Solid map overall, had to spend quite a while to find anything worth mentioning. Good luck with ranking!

Regards,
NP

• I’m not too happy with some of the overmapped triples and short streams. They seem to compliment the music reasonably well, but I’d recommend toning down.
  
  00:05:413 (1,2,3,4) - I don’t like how these jumps are symmetric and almost have same distance from each other (I don’t think DS difference of 1.0 is noticeable). That implies that the each beats in the music is equally strong in the music. However, I think that’s not the case. 00:05:413 (1) - is strong vocal downbeat, 00:05:640 (2) - is weak without vocal, 00:05:867 (3) - is weak vocal, and 00:06:095 - is stronger vocal. At least that’s how I’d interpret.
  
  00:04:504 (3,4,1) - 00:05:867 (3,4,5) - I don’t think these wide angles flow very well ><;
  
  00:31:549 - This is strong vocal, consider making it clickable (Especially because you’re following vocal throughout most of the map. )
  
  00:38:140 (3) - NC?
  
  00:43:367 (6,1) - Wide angle does a poor job emphasizing a strong sound.
  
  00:44:049 (2,5) - Doesn’t seem to be stacked properly
  
  00:52:913 - 00:53:595 - I am grumpy these drum beats are buried in the slider. I could understand 00:45:640 - 00:46:322 - 00:47:004 - 00:47:685 - because vocal is the dominant sound, but consider a change for 00:52:913 - 00:53:595 -. I know you’re following guitar here, but I think a good map should capture all the prominent sound in the song when possible.
  
  00:54:845 - 00:55:072 - 00:55:299 - Since you’ve overmapped some of the streams, I think it doesn’t make sense not to map these 1/4 drum beats.
  
  00:56:776 (3,4,5,6,7) - I don’t think 00:57:913 (7,8,1) - is emphasized properly here (wide angle, smaller DS)
  
  01:04:049 (2,3,4) - I think it would be more intuitive if 01:04:276 - was clickable. Also, I don’t think this straight line ( https://puu.sh/qb61X/af4a70d4c8.jpg ) makes good flow in large jumps
  
  01:19:959 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This must be one of the calmest part of the music, I don’t think this kind of intense patterns fit well.
  
  01:18:367 - 01:19:049 - Another mod about missing drum beats
  
  01:19:731 - woah drum beat too strong here burying it under slider doesn’t do justice > <;

• Nice Spinner xD
  
  00:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This is more than half of the map, and there is not a single 1/1 sliders. Mostly 1/2 beats and some triples. I think it would be much more enjoyable if you emphasized some vocal sounds to make them long sliders >_<!
  
  00:05:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe you’re following the guitar sound here? But I think that following vocal with this beat ( https://puu.sh/qb6Hs/72ffdf691a.jpg ) might be more intuitive. Vocal seem to be dominant here.
  
  00:29:504 (2) - This is the first time you broke the consistent 1/2 beat clicking. I think NC is needed to let the players know that there is a whole beat between clicks.
  
  00:37:458 (4,5,6,7,1) - 00:44:504 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Usually, wide angle does a poor job emphasizing a sound.

• The notes seem to be sort of clumb up toward the center of the screen. I hope that some of the notes were closer toward the edges and corners. This applies to easy and hard to some extent as well. ( https://puu.sh/qb7Cc/ca448144f1.jpg )
  
  00:26:776 (6,1) - 00:30:867 (1,2) - Nazi blanket mod