C-Show - PANIC HOLIC (VIP)

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Frey
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年12月3日 at 12:09:42

Artist: C-Show
Title: PANIC HOLIC (VIP)
Source: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
Tags: HootOwlStar Streliteela Mel Regou Kazuto HOLIC FREAK WorkaHolic Crack Traxxxx REFLEC BEAT colette -Summer- CSHOW 道下朗 Akira Michi Hardcore
BPM: 220
Filesize: 5641kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Advanced (2.81 stars, 380 notes)
  2. Hard (3.51 stars, 573 notes)
  3. HOS' Normal (1.92 stars, 221 notes)
  4. Insane (4.18 stars, 689 notes)
  5. Mel's Extra (5.59 stars, 889 notes)
  6. Regou's Extra (5.99 stars, 787 notes)
  7. Stella's Insane (4.86 stars, 770 notes)


Download: C-Show - PANIC HOLIC (VIP)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「Someone you know is watching your every move, someone who means you harm.」


Normal by HootOwlStar
Collab Advanced by me and -Kazuto
Insane by Streliteela
Extra1 by Mel
Extra2 by Regou
- Cappuccino -
前排留名qwq
Avena
Regou's diff is way too good wtf is this
bbj0920

Frey wrote:

Regous Extra
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Topic Starter
Frey

bbj0920 wrote:

Frey wrote:

Regous Extra
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:/ well well, thanks for reminding
Mel
http://puu.sh/qpsK4/be0cbd5b2c.osu

welp it's over 5.3* hopefully thats fine with you
sahuang
shentu
Wintermute
Mod (because I saw it in one of the modding queues and I love this song) :D

I wish there was more I could have done regarding the other difficulties, though. :(

For this difficulty and object density, consider maybe upping the approach rate to 9.3 or 9.4. It's a super meager difference but it helps a lot

01:08:190 (1,2) - the spacing of these is inconsistent with the spacing between 2,3, and 4
01:09:826 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is really kind of ugly, but if you're insistent on keeping it, consider having it start directly on top of where 01:09:007 (4) was
01:14:053 (4,1) - the jump here isn't necessarily hard, but it's weird to read with the object density + approach rate. Consider something like this. And then moving 01:14:462 (1,2) to those positions makes that curve from 01:13:644 (1,2,3,4) not seem totally random.
01:16:371 (3,5) - make 3 a 1/2 slider and put a single note at 01:16:644, that's a major beat and it's weird to have a slider end there.
01:22:781 (4,1) - same issue that I mentioned earlier at 1:14:053
01:30:281 - there's a beat here that I'd really like to hear mapped, the slider doesn't really have any reason being 1/1 there other than aesthetic
02:48:281 (1,2) - shift these towards (3) just *barely* and you can get the spacing between all three perfectly even
02:51:144 (5) - There's a beat at 02:51:281 that I think should be mapped
02:53:326 (4) - Same deal as ^, 02:53:462 Consider butting the slider 1/2 at it, and then a triple from 02:53:326 into it (this'd probably go well on that earlier one too?
02:57:144 (1) - it's weird to have these starting on red ticks in general imo, but I feel that this one is particularly out of place just because it's preceding the new measure. Previously there was at least 02:55:099 (1) to set them up.
03:04:508 (1,4) - blanket could be improved a bit here (generic gib me the free kudosu pls mod ;) )
03:07:781 (2,3,1) - more generic stuff, just kind of a bad overlap here.
03:16:644 (1,2) - make this a triple maybe?
03:19:644 (1,2,1,2) - consider individually reversing these so they go up instead of down, but leave the two prior going down
Zweib
  • HOS' Normal
  1. I don't know but, OD4 seems better?
  • Collab Advanced
  1. AR放高一点吧,感觉不合理,诗人?
  2. 01:02:735 (1,1) - 取消NC,过于五颜六色
  3. 01:07:099 (3) - 按照之前的放法这里可以加一个NC
  4. 01:49:099 (4) - Blanket
Mei
[HOS]

The gap between Adv and your normal is quite large, I suggest you to fill out those blank parts and map more rhythm on 1/1 beats
Better to see a 2/0 star diff to make a perfect spread

00:17:735 - this one could be filled
00:30:826 - add a circle to stress the voice?
00:33:281 (1) - quite lazy to map it like this, you could actually map 00:33:826 - this beat out, this bass sound is too loud to miss.
00:53:462 - 00:55:644 - 00:57:826 - 01:00:008 - still, really unpleasant to see you didn't map those beats out.
01:01:099 (3) - I see you mapped a reverse slider here 00:56:735 (2) - It should be the same as well, clearly we can hear a strong beat on 01:01:235 -
01:37:371 - I can't understand why you didn't map this one out, I have to say if you don't map those necessary beats out. There would be gap problem for this mapset for sure.
01:46:099 - 01:54:826 - 02:03:553 - same as above
02:25:917 (2,1) - it has too much overlap, move the dot at slider(x460 y148) end to x452 y148
03:19:917 - this one can be mapped out
[ADV]

00:33:281 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏好奇怪啊,感觉重音都是在白线上,这样跟没问题吗?
00:47:053 - 这里可以加一个源泉,毕竟这里的节奏听上去有人声的支持。
01:08:190 (1) - 难看,改下啦。
01:35:462 (3) - ......整体一个圆圈不是比圆圈后面加一直线更好?
01:49:099 (4) - Blanket修一下
03:02:190 (3) - 微调一下间距
[HD]

HP可以再调低一点,毕竟和ADV的差距看起来稍微大了一点...
00:33:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里有点绕手啊,不能改成一个滑条两个圆圈 一个滑条两个圆圈的顺序?
00:56:735 (3,4) - 总觉得应该红线起reverse的感觉...
03:11:871 (3) - 这里是不是摸底了啊..?
没了
[Ins]

00:33:826 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+G看起来更爽
00:42:281 (2) - 同上
01:22:371 (1) - 感觉这里面漏了不少节奏,01:22:508 - 01:22:917 -
02:30:553 (4) - x240 y148,这里好的多。至少flow和间距上没有问题
03:02:599 (4) - x144 y120? 这里这个三角形flow更好
[Stella]

00:34:781 (1) - 这里NC是干嘛啊?完全可以取消
00:48:281 (3) - 我感觉这里是不是太远了啊?有点反应不过来,稍微减少一下间距吧?
00:50:871 (2,3) - 这个间距有点反人类了,至少在Insane里面不是很合适
01:09:281 (1,1) - 首先这是BPM220的曲子,这里的1/2势必是很短的。转盘也是接1/4突然出现,和下一个部件的距离又只有1/2,而且下一个滑条距离屏幕中心还特别的远。这里建议完全re掉,这个梗可以在Extra里面当极限的部分,但是在Insane里面不合适。
02:02:735 (1) - 滑条最下面出界了
02:35:599 (1,1) - 还是感觉间距太小给人反应时间太短,不过没之前那个那么严重
02:42:008 (1,2,1,2) - 1/4跳...实话说真的不是很合适,但是首先我觉得可以先缩短这些buzz滑条,让他们和下一个圆圈之间的间隔变成1/2而不是1/4。因为用1/4的话这个间距实在是太不好接了。
02:45:826 (9) - 结尾缩短到02:45:962 - ,避免全图只有个别梗过于困难。
03:20:190 (1) - 仔细听的话03:20:667 - 就该结束了
[Mel]

this diff needs polishing. A map without polishing is unstable.
00:27:826 (1,2,3) - seems out of order, move 00:28:099 (2) - to the right a bit (x252 y230)
00:29:462 (3) - move it to x32 y156 to polish the pattern and spacing
00:32:190 (1) - move it to x224 y296 please. As you can see, the spacing is increasing when 00:31:644 (3,4,5,6) - , why it decreased when 00:32:190 (1) - ?
00:43:371 (1) - remove NC cuz 00:43:099 (1,1,2,3,4) - they are under the same SV
00:51:553 (1) - the same as above
00:52:781 (6) - wouldn't be better that stack it on 00:52:371 (3) - ?
00:58:099 (3,4) - move to x28 y336 to unify the spacing
01:11:871 (3) - stack it on 01:12:281 (5) - . then the flow would be great
01:20:599 (3) - stack it under the end of 01:20:190 (1) -
01:44:190 (1,2,3,4) - if I wasn't wrong, this is 1/3 right?
02:12:008 - add a break time then remove the NC of 02:13:371 (1) - and 02:13:644 (1) -
02:15:144 (2) - x332 y132 for better stack
02:33:962 (4) - move it to x464 y112 to unify the spacing
02:49:099 (3) - move it to x16 y220 for better spacing
02:50:053 (4) - stack it on 02:49:644 (1) - ?
02:54:281 (3) - y284 for better stack
[热狗]

01:16:917 (1,2,3,4) - 弄个正方形出来也行啊...因为看到其他GD也全都是重叠,完全没有创意啊...
01:24:826 - 这个口哨不是误放?
01:25:644 (1,2,3,4) - 同上。
02:06:962 - 这里重音这么明显sampleset还是soft?
02:52:917 (1,2,3) - 同上

Good Luck and 强奸l4d
Vert
req from my bed

[*]01:15:826 (2) - this looks better actually >.<
[*]01:37:371 - 01:46:099 - 01:50:462 - 01:54:826 - 02:03:553 - they sound kinda empty, create circles?
[*]01:40:371 (3) - silence the end?
[*]00:25:644 (4) - blanket
[*]00:30:008 (3) - 碰血条了
[*]01:23:462 (1,2) - blanket
[*]01:48:553 (3,4) - blanket
[*]02:04:917 (1,3) - blanket
[*]02:30:008 (2) - 调整下间距
[*]02:54:281 (5) - 同上
[*]03:02:190 (3) - 同上
[*]01:10:099 (1,3) - 没叠好
[*]01:36:008 (3,1) - blanket可以修一下
[*]02:11:462 (1) - 不叠最好,overlap吧
[*]01:29:326 (2) - 这里没叠好(故意的吗?)
01:34:235 (2) - 没对齐
02:47:462 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这个梗最好距离再拉开一点,要不然贴太近不好看

这曲子给我我能做个7x

gl
ItashaS13
hi from my q, sorry for long wait .-.

  • Regou's Extra
    00:18:417 (2,3) - move the 2 up, more like 00:18:962 (1,2) -
    00:23:326 (5,1) - aren't these too far?
    00:33:553 (3) - stack its end with head of 00:32:735 (1) -
    01:01:099 (4,5) - this jump is too huge for this part imo :l, it should be more like 00:56:735 (4,5) - also, you didnt break the flow here 00:56:735 (4,5) - but here you break it 01:01:099 (4,5) -
    01:03:417 (2) - ctrl+g? the current shape breaks the flow and the sound doesnt fit for a break..
    01:10:917 (3) - ctrl+j and move to its actual position? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6305882
    01:19:508 (3,4) - spacing too short, at least use spacing like 01:21:281 (1,2) -
    01:21:690 (3,4) - ^
    01:24:417 (4,1) - but now here the spacing its huge, and its the same sound of the song..
    01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g on these? the sound changes and the kicksliders direction should change too
    01:45:826 (3) - move the 3 to 436/340, to make the same angle between 01:45:690 (2,3) - and 01:45:962 (1,2) -
    01:46:507 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g
    02:03:963 (1,2,3) - ^
    02:36:826 - this should be clickable
    02:47:462 (1,2,3) - add more spacing in there to avoid the small overlap with the circles?

    Mel's Extra
    00:38:599 (6,1) - le stack
    00:41:326 (4,5) - sound on 5 its different and stronger than 4, this shouldnt be stacked xd
    01:08:190 (1,2) - y no end these on blue ticks?
    01:55:508 (4,5) - ds too short


the other diff are okay for my eyes, I dont feel this was helpful at all so im gonna shot star, nice map
glgl
Topic Starter
Frey
Too many in one moment ;w;

Zweib wrote:

  • Collab Advanced
  1. AR放高一点吧,感觉不合理,诗人? 大圈看起来其实还不错来着,至少星数差还行
  2. 01:02:735 (1,1) - 取消NC,过于五颜六色 还好吧,这里节奏还蛮充实的。
  3. 01:07:099 (3) - 按照之前的放法这里可以加一个NC 感觉影响不大来着
  4. 01:49:099 (4) - Blanket fixed

Mei wrote:

[ADV]

00:33:281 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏好奇怪啊,感觉重音都是在白线上,这样跟没问题吗? ...应该,没问题吧
00:47:053 - 这里可以加一个源泉,毕竟这里的节奏听上去有人声的支持。 没地方放..
01:08:190 (1) - 难看,改下啦。 微调了
01:35:462 (3) - ......整体一个圆圈不是比圆圈后面加一直线更好? fixed
01:49:099 (4) - Blanket修一下 fixed already
03:02:190 (3) - 微调一下间距 fixed
[HD]

HP可以再调低一点,毕竟和ADV的差距看起来稍微大了一点... 我觉得5应该没有问题,至少这个HD的难度我觉得不是特别大,跳很小也不多
00:33:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里有点绕手啊,不能改成一个滑条两个圆圈 一个滑条两个圆圈的顺序? 这不就是吗?...?
00:56:735 (3,4) - 总觉得应该红线起reverse的感觉... 第二声finish声音要响一些,放在滑条头应该没问题
03:11:871 (3) - 这里是不是摸底了啊..? 有点,fixed
没了
[Ins]

00:33:826 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+G看起来更爽 fixed
00:42:281 (2) - 同上 fixed
01:22:371 (1) - 感觉这里面漏了不少节奏,01:22:508 - 01:22:917 - 没跟这条轨
02:30:553 (4) - x240 y148,这里好的多。至少flow和间距上没有问题 nice
03:02:599 (4) - x144 y120? 这里这个三角形flow更好 这里我觉得不怎么样,待定

Good Luck and 强奸l4d 找啪是吧?

Vert wrote:

req from my bed

[Collab Advanced]
[*]00:25:644 (4) - blanket
[*]00:30:008 (3) - 碰血条了 碰一下又不会死!
[*]01:23:462 (1,2) - blanket
[*]01:48:553 (3,4) - blanket
[*]02:04:917 (1,3) - blanket
no
[*]02:30:008 (2) - 调整下间距 这里不好改,真心
[*]02:54:281 (5) - 同上
[*]03:02:190 (3) - 同上 看起来哦都不是很大,我觉得改的必要不大

[Hard]
[*]01:10:099 (1,3) - 没叠好 fixed
[*]01:36:008 (3,1) - blanket可以修一下 fixed
[*]02:11:462 (1) - 不叠最好,overlap吧 ...纠结,待定。

这曲子给我我能做个7x

gl

Thanks for modding guys! :)
Streliteela
啦啦啦啦来水摸~
热狗大神无敌,摸不动

[Mel's Extra]
  1. 00:22:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - something really weird in this part. Why not try a similar pattern like 00:18:008 (1,2,3,4,5) - or 00:31:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , better change 00:23:190 (6) - to two notes.
  2. 00:42:008 (2,1) - swap nc?
  3. 00:43:371 (1,2) - ^
  4. 02:19:781 (4) - Change this note to a 1/1 slider would be better imo, cuz there actually a obvious long tone here.
  5. 02:20:190 (1,2,3,4) - It seems that you choose to follow the vocal from 02:20:190 - to 02:28:508 - except 02:20:190 (1,2,3,4) -
    this part. So it's better to keep the consistency.
  6. 02:28:917 (1,2,3,4) - Also this part ^
  7. 03:19:644 (1) - remove nc here?

Insane和Hard用摸?直接飞号码

[Collab Advanced]
  1. 一股陈年老喵味
  2. AR+1
  3. 00:35:462 (1) - 这位置有点尴尬啊……放x237|y350呗
  4. 01:03:690 (3,3) - 你要说之前01:02:599 (3) - 这里是有音的我可以理解,但后面两个我是实在听不出来有音(听说黑喵耳机上万……好吧即使是有音那也太弱了被鼓点完全掩盖住了根本注意不到);而且个人感觉去掉这两个note打起来也完全没问题,建议删
  5. 01:14:599 - 加个note?声音挺明显的
  6. 01:30:281 (2,3) - 没包好
  7. 01:43:099 (1,2,3) - 节奏有点奇怪,改这样?
  8. 01:52:917 (3,4) - 没包好,略略略
  9. 01:54:962 (3,4) - 也没包好,略略略
  10. 02:04:917 (1,3) - ^, 就是要nazi
  11. 02:44:871 (2) - 这个break感觉蛮奇怪的,把02:45:008 (2) - 提前到红线然后放折返会好些……当然后面也要调我觉得你超懒肯定不会改w

HOS是大师,根本不用摸
敢不给kds就吃掉你OmO!
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