35:208 I think this slider should have a head higher than the tail. Maybe head x=420 and y=68, and tail x=432 y=148? The slider before it goes up, and this slider should go down. The next hit circle, at 35.553 can be at something like x=428 y=324. By doing this, more total distance is required. This is consistent with what you did at 37:105
I would say the flow is fine as it is, but i take your consistency problem to account38:484 Here, again, the tail should be at something like x=392 y=272. I don't find sliders going the same direction aesthetically pleasing. Your choice though.
42:449 This slider seems short to me. Maybe delete the first hit circle, extend the slider time to the beginning of the next measure, with slider tail at x=432 y=184?
That slider is fine as it is, if i were to delete the first hitcirlce it would introduce inconsistency on the usage of the ticks.1:00:724 Switch the position of hit circle 1&2? so that you have more readability and more of a pattern.
I did something else, turns out the flow was bad1:09:518 Doesn't look like this mini stream is very well curved to lead directly into the following slider. Select the four hit circles and move them to the left a little.
Fixed1:23:484 This mini stream could look a little more like a semicircle.
I'm going to keep it as it is until it became a major issue, I'd like to keep it.1:30:380 In the midst of all these clicks, maybe a reverse slider could bring out the beat more. 1:33:139 as well. My preference, your choice.
Between 1:35:898 and 1:36:415 a double reverse slider might be dandy to keep the beat up. I don't understand the sudden
calming of pace here.
Noted1:46:846 Why no move the mini slider more to left? It also makes the player give a bigger jump to the next object after stream.
That stream is fine as it is, playable and not obstructing anything.2:01:415 How about a really low slider velocity slider here instead of a click?
Good thinking2:13:829 To be clearer, switching the positions of hitcircle 2 with 3 and hitcircle 3 with 4 would make it more readable and jumpy.
Added2:22:277 You can move objects 10, 11, and 12 lower down, or maybe to the right a little for the next object. For a map like this, I think the jump is too little for the amount of time you're given.
Woopsie daisie2:49:863 Consider moving 4 to the right more. I do get the vibe that here is sort of a recovery period, but that slider could be positioned better between 3 and 5 imo.
The placing is decent from my perspective, still not obstructing the counterclockwise pattern2:51:070 Also consider separating sliders 1 and 2.
If you're saying its not far enough, that is as far as the DS i have chosen for this part separates the two, it doesn't play bad either3:17:363 It looks like this stream is a little too high up for the slider preceding it. Try moving it down 4 coordinates
moved it down a bit3:42:967 Why not move this slider so that it matches the stream before it? seems a little too far to the left
Fixed the stream4:21:329 Idk, I think you're doing this on purpose, which is ok. If I made the map, the slider stream transition would be smoother. So stream push to the right.
I did that on purpose yea4:35:898 Consider instead of a hit circle another super slow velocity slider that heads towards the left horizontally
same5:16:587 A reverse slider here would be very good. In fact, this is probably the strongest point I'd support in the entire mod
I used triplets instead, to make the pattern consistent.5:18:656 I think the slider tail should end here instead, and the stream's first hit circle should be deleted.
It will introduce timing incosistency of the streams5:22:449 If you want to wind down since the song is ending, don't mind this, but a hit circle that is directly on the y axis at this point can fill in the awkward space.
changed that with 1/2 slider5:33:829 Spinner seems too short. I'd end it here, or the measure right before this.
Nah, that part of the song is meant to be a background song when you finish playing it.Note: First mod ever, I can't even consistently beat extra maps, so take with grain of salt.
even if i took it with a grain of salt, salt makes every dish better. 