Pata-Mon wrote:

卧槽
感谢 斯沃德神 带小的 飞gd
快去找karen

[Crz]Sword wrote:

Pata-Mon wrote:

卧槽
感谢 斯沃德神 带小的 飞gd
快去找karen

我先去找了歪果aji人

Pata-Mon wrote:

nely？

Xinely wrote:

Pata-Mon wrote:

nely？

!summon nely

Regraz wrote:

既然已经泡了就加油吧~

1. 00:20:150 (2,3) - 这种diff不应该出现这么大距离的1/4
2. 00:26:425 (2,3) - 这个也有点远了，把握距离要在附近对比，这个1/4都跟旁边00:26:033 (1,2) - 的1/2差不多距离了当然是不行的
3. 00:28:778 (6,1) - 这里就应该做跳了，圈是在大白线上的，后面那个跳反而有些莫名
4. 00:30:739 (6) - 这个圈要放到滑条5的尾巴附近而不是头，多次折返滑条一定要看最后一次是在尾巴还是头 http://puu.sh/q3FAU/6d39e5a61a.jpg
5. 00:36:033 - 这里有个重音用滑条跟好，你这二连是overmap的一听就听出违和了，00:36:327 - 这里有音可以跟，不要被所谓的红线三连白线滑条束缚 http://puu.sh/q3FFN/78b297b1f9.jpg
6. 00:40:542 (1,2,3) - 这3个flow比较不行，排的也很丑，00:40:542 (1,3) - 这两个拉远一点然后做了blanket什么的
7. 00:49:562 (8) - 这圈跟前面滑条反方向的，十分别扭，换一种摆法 http://puu.sh/q3FPv/59c4f56679.jpg
8. 00:54:268 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这种组合跳就摆好看点，不要让它们互相碰到，NC加得也有点太多，这里不是读图点
9. 00:57:013 (5,1) - 太远了容易断
10. 00:57:993 (2,3,4) - 这距离怎么跟00:58:386 (4,5,1) - 不一样
11. 01:08:778 (2,3,4) - 这3个滑条尾可以插个5%音量绿线，效果比较好
12. 01:10:739 (1) - 这里不用NC，
13. 01:15:052 (2,3,4) - 这滑条尾二连，要么叠尾巴上，要么按DS摆，哪有这样子的嘛
14. 01:32:307 (2,3) - 离近一点，这距离跟01:30:739 (2,1) - 这个一样了，会误读
15. 01:38:582 (2,3,4) - 01:41:131 (1,2,3) - 01:43:288 (2,3,4) - 上上条，越看越诡异
16. 01:47:209 (4,1) - 前面说过了，这里跳比较好
    音效：（连着其它diff一起改）
17. 00:06:987 - whistle?
18. 00:18:190 - 00:22:699 - finish
19. 00:26:425 - clap，00:26:817 - 这里去掉
20. 00:29:562 - clap呢
21. 00:29:954 (4,5) - 音乐里这种1/4音可以用些drum finish或者clap来跟，当然不是全加，总比什么都没有好
22. 00:30:739 - finish
23. 00:37:013 - ^
24. 00:49:562 - ^
25. 01:06:817 -01:07:601 - 01:08:386 - 01:08:778 - 01:09:170 - 01:09:562 - 全部 finish，跟着音乐来 drum-finish没有一点强度
26. 01:11:523 - finish，这种超级重音kiai开头肯定是要finish的
27. 01:17:797 - ^
28. 01:24:072 - ^
29. 01:30:346 - ^
30. 01:36:621 - kiai尾finish
31. 01:41:131 - ^
32. 01:49:170 - ^
33. kiai后面的clap呢？？？

1. 00:06:987 (2,1) - 想办法弄远点吧
2. 00:47:895 - 可以加圈
3. 01:08:582 (1,1) - 这unrankable，必须隔一条白线
4. 01:49:268 - 转盘这里开始

1. 01:19:758 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 每次看你normal你总能搞出这种东西，连续1/2太多会很难的
2. 01:38:190 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
3. 你们都这么喜欢漏finish，该加的一个都没加

1. 00:29:366 - 这后面4拍空得有点不明所以，还是补上吧
2. 01:47:601 - 这里可以1/2滑条 后面也可以放滑条 http://puu.sh/q3Hjg/802ac450ec.jpg

Karen wrote:

Happy Zone

1. 00:20:150 (2,3) - 这种diff不应该出现这么大距离的1/4
2. 00:26:425 (2,3) - 这个也有点远了，把握距离要在附近对比，这个1/4都跟旁边00:26:033 (1,2) - 的1/2差不多距离了当然是不行的
3. 00:28:778 (6,1) - 这里就应该做跳了，圈是在大白线上的，后面那个跳反而有些莫名
4. 00:30:739 (6) - 这个圈要放到滑条5的尾巴附近而不是头，多次折返滑条一定要看最后一次是在尾巴还是头 http://puu.sh/q3FAU/6d39e5a61a.jpg
5. 00:36:033 - 这里有个重音用滑条跟好，你这二连是overmap的一听就听出违和了，00:36:327 - 这里有音可以跟，不要被所谓的红线三连白线滑条束缚 http://puu.sh/q3FFN/78b297b1f9.jpg
6. 00:40:542 (1,2,3) - 这3个flow比较不行，排的也很丑，00:40:542 (1,3) - 这两个拉远一点然后做了blanket什么的
7. 00:49:562 (8) - 这圈跟前面滑条反方向的，十分别扭，换一种摆法 http://puu.sh/q3FPv/59c4f56679.jpg
8. 00:54:268 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这种组合跳就摆好看点，不要让它们互相碰到，NC加得也有点太多，这里不是读图点
9. 00:57:013 (5,1) - 太远了容易断
10. 00:57:993 (2,3,4) - 这距离怎么跟00:58:386 (4,5,1) - 不一样
11. 01:08:778 (2,3,4) - 这3个滑条尾可以插个5%音量绿线，效果比较好
12. 01:10:739 (1) - 这里不用NC，
13. 01:15:052 (2,3,4) - 这滑条尾二连，要么叠尾巴上，要么按DS摆，哪有这样子的嘛
14. 01:32:307 (2,3) - 离近一点，这距离跟01:30:739 (2,1) - 这个一样了，会误读
15. 01:38:582 (2,3,4) - 01:41:131 (1,2,3) - 01:43:288 (2,3,4) - 上上条，越看越诡异 全叠了
16. 01:47:209 (4,1) - 前面说过了，这里跳比较好 这不跳了，感觉有点怪
    音效：（连着其它diff一起改）
17. 00:06:987 - whistle?
18. 00:18:190 - 00:22:699 - finish
19. 00:26:425 - clap，00:26:817 - 这里去掉
20. 00:29:562 - clap呢
21. 00:29:954 (4,5) - 音乐里这种1/4音可以用些drum finish或者clap来跟，当然不是全加，总比什么都没有好
22. 00:30:739 - finish
23. 00:37:013 - ^
24. 00:49:562 - ^
25. 01:06:817 -01:07:601 - 01:08:386 - 01:08:778 - 01:09:170 - 01:09:562 - 全部 finish，跟着音乐来 drum-finish没有一点强度
26. 01:11:523 - finish，这种超级重音kiai开头肯定是要finish的
27. 01:17:797 - ^
28. 01:24:072 - ^
29. 01:30:346 - ^
30. 01:36:621 - kiai尾finish
31. 01:41:131 - ^
32. 01:49:170 - ^
33. kiai后面的clap呢？？？

Hard

1. 00:06:987 (2,1) - 想办法弄远点吧
2. 00:47:895 - 可以加圈 还是不加了 Hard 1/4没怎么放的
3. 01:08:582 (1,1) - 这unrankable，必须隔一条白线
4. 01:49:268 - 转盘这里开始

Easy

1. 00:29:366 - 这后面4拍空得有点不明所以，还是补上吧
2. 01:47:601 - 这里可以1/2滑条 后面也可以放滑条 http://puu.sh/q3Hjg/802ac450ec.jpg我放了个圈，和前面一样

就这样吧
算了补个戳泡吧，不然对不起我的群名片

Pata-Mon wrote:

再加一点吧

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408,249,60150,2,0,L|400:189,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,160,60542,6,0,B|235:189|235:189|197:176|197:176|156:190,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,258,61327,2,0,P|137:271|77:274,1,120,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
30,213,61915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,141,62111,6,0,L|48:82,2,60,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,131,62699,2,0,P|194:115|244:82,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,26,63288,2,0,L|358:32,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,98,63680,6,0,P|406:157|399:216,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,283,64268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,340,64464,2,0,P|246:326|186:324,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,259,65248,6,0,B|17:205|17:205|23:145,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,51,66033,1,4,0:0:0:0:
215,12,66229,2,0,L|274:6,2,60,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,89,66817,6,0,P|204:148|181:203,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,243,67405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,310,67601,2,0,P|210:332|269:343,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,343,68190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,282,68386,5,4,0:2:0:0:
396,126,68778,1,4,0:2:0:0:
248,77,69170,1,4,0:2:0:0:
156,203,69562,1,4,0:2:0:0:
247,331,69954,6,4,P|206:348|162:357,2,90,4|0|0,1:2|1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
286,263,70739,2,0,P|280:203|285:143,1,120,4|0,1:2|1:0,1:0:0:0:
436,102,71523,6,0,P|441:161|436:221,1,120,4|4,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,297,72111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,333,72307,2,0,B|265:336|265:336|233:320,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,312,73091,6,0,P|57:255|51:196,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,86,73876,2,0,L|222:86,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,48,74268,2,0,L|350:48,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,20,74660,6,0,B|451:50|451:50|444:128,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,171,75248,2,0,L|384:230,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,274,75640,2,0,L|443:333,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,354,76033,6,0,B|284:351|284:351|249:363,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,381,76621,1,4,0:0:0:0:
133,315,76817,2,0,L|73:305,2,60,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,255,77405,2,0,L|242:245,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,245,77797,5,4,0:2:0:0:
436,141,78190,2,0,B|460:97|460:97|452:27,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,193,79170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,117,79366,5,4,0:2:0:0:
228,198,79758,2,0,B|194:219|194:219|114:211,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,122,80739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,62,80935,6,0,P|320:55|379:61,2,120,4|4|4,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
211,122,81915,2,0,L|151:122,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,196,82503,5,4,0:2:0:0:
77,242,82699,2,0,L|71:301,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
112,368,83091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,299,83288,2,0,P|208:295|268:298,1,120,4|4,1:2|1:2,1:3:0:0:
345,315,83876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,274,84072,6,0,B|431:235|431:235|424:158,1,120,4|4,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,94,84660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,134,84856,2,0,P|257:118|203:91,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,147,85640,6,0,B|44:181|44:181|51:263,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,86425,2,0,L|198:355,2,60,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,272,87013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,194,87209,6,0,P|343:163|401:148,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,144,87797,2,0,L|475:203,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,247,88190,2,0,L|413:306,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,299,88582,6,0,P|275:301|216:315,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,379,89170,1,4,0:0:0:0:
139,309,89366,2,0,L|144:249,2,60,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,373,89954,2,0,L|35:359,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,290,90346,5,4,0:2:0:0:
1,134,90739,2,0,L|59:120,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,49,91131,2,0,B|123:26|123:26|202:26,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,175,91915,6,0,B|279:198|279:198|358:198,1,120,4|4,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,175,92503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,100,92699,2,0,P|500:136|508:194,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,342,93484,6,0,P|393:348|333:350,1,120,4|4,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,358,94268,2,0,L|120:375,2,60,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,284,94856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,239,95052,5,4,0:2:0:0:
69,194,95444,1,4,0:2:0:0:
183,87,95837,2,0,L|242:80,1,60,4|0,1:2|1:3,1:3:0:0:
301,28,96229,2,0,L|360:34,1,60,4|0,1:2|1:3,1:3:0:0:
418,87,96621,6,0,B|436:116|436:116|421:200,2,120,4|4|4,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,141,97797,1,4,0:0:0:0:
126,195,98190,6,0,B|108:166|108:166|122:81,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,45,98778,2,0,L|250:38,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,38,99170,2,0,L|387:44,2,60,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,106,99758,6,0,L|289:226,2,120,4|4|4,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,38,100739,2,0,L|191:45,1,60,0|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,76,101131,6,0,B|106:121|106:121|117:138|117:138|101:192|117:250,1,180,0|4,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,295,101915,2,0,L|239:288,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,236,102307,2,0,L|357:242,2,60,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,185,102895,6,0,P|242:125|258:67,1,120,4|4,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,55,103484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,114,103680,2,0,P|445:120|499:145,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,223,104268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,285,104464,6,0,P|401:278|347:253,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,208,105052,2,0,L|224:208,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,172,105444,2,0,L|95:172,2,60,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,98,106033,6,0,P|240:92|300:97,1,120,4|4,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,120,106621,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,98,106817,2,0,B|479:120|479:120|493:202,1,120,4|4,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,304,107601,5,4,0:2:0:0:
312,257,107797,2,0,L|301:197,1,60,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,219,108190,2,0,B|169:219|169:219|127:269|60:271,1,180,4|4,0:2|0:0,1:3:0:0:
256,192,109170,12,0,113680,0:0:0:0:

Karen wrote:

额忘了你用的默认drum音效，前面音效建议里的finish指的是soft-hitfinish，左上角Additions调成soft再加

Karen wrote:

还有关于metadata如果你用的是tv版的话title是 Wonder zone(TVサイズ) romanised tile Wonder zone (TV Size)
http://puu.sh/q4qzZ/2da43be53e.jpg
http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/otonokizaka/release.html

Karen wrote:

额忘了你用的默认drum音效，前面音效建议里的finish指的是soft-hitfinish，左上角Additions调成soft再加

ZZHBOY wrote:

recheck, no kd
[General]
把ez的sl改到7吧
wide screen support我这边看两个没开两个开了 把都关了吧all fixed
[Normal]
00:55:837 - 这里本来应该nc的 你可以试试这样 反正那个旋律都是1/2没必要刻意用折返 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5627572
[Hard]
00:33:876 (1,4) - 移开 k
[happy zone]
01:11:523 (1) - kiai一开始来个折返太蛋疼了 不要折返 一个1/1滑条后面跟1/2的音改成1/1+1/2比现在蛋疼多了...节奏有些乱

1. 00:22:307 (5,6) - this doesnt fit the music imo - turning it into a slider - or changing it into something like THIS is much more fitting i think.
2. 00:29:954 (4,5,6) - nothing wrong with these - but i think you could make a lil more special if you had the first note of each slider louder then the rest (maybe 80% vs 60%)
3. 01:00:150 - i think its bad to keep this super prominent snare unmapped - however its your choice (remember if you change it here you also need to change 01:03:288 - here to ^^)
   01:36:621 (1,2) - rotate these 20° and reposition pls
   01:41:131 (1) - you can improve the curve in this slider ~ i believe in you! (pretend to blanket it if you need help shaping it)
   01:42:797 - i believe if you add a note here to make it a triple it will be more consistent with the rest of your map

NucleaRaven wrote:

hi o/

[Happy Zone]

1. 00:22:307 (5,6) - this doesnt fit the music imo - turning it into a slider - or changing it into something like THIS is much more fitting i think.changed in my way.
2. 00:29:954 (4,5,6) - nothing wrong with these - but i think you could make a lil more special if you had the first note of each slider louder then the rest (maybe 80% vs 60%)it's ok now imo.
3. 01:00:150 - i think its bad to keep this super prominent snare unmapped - however its your choice (remember if you change it here you also need to change 01:03:288 - here to ^^)I set there a relax part so I followed the vocal.anyways It's ok now.
   01:36:621 (1,2) - rotate these 20° and reposition plsk
   01:41:131 (1) - you can improve the curve in this slider ~ i believe in you! (pretend to blanket it if you need help shaping it)lol I think it's good now.
   01:42:797 - i believe if you add a note here to make it a triple it will be more consistent with the rest of your mapgood,accepted.

pre good map youve got here - nice flow - nice song - nicely mapped - and plays well - however i think your slider shapes could be a lil better in some places (just my opinion tho).
Good luck with ranking it!!

1. This plays better with AR 8,5
2. 00:01:680 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but this sliders doesn't looks nice, I guess you tried to make an ¨S¨ shape?
3. 00:12:756 (4) - missing NC, I suppose, since you're using a NC every 2 stanzas at the beginning.
4. 00:14:372 (5,1) - not a big deal, but you should work more in your blankets.
5. 00:20:935 (5) - ctrl G? to make a jump to 00:21:327 (1) -
6. 00:21:327 (1) -
7. 00:21:327 (1) - missing finish
8. 00:22:699 (1) - this ¨S¨slider shape is really bad, do you mind remaking it? there are some simple ways to build them properly
9. 00:50:346 (2,3) - blanket this? at the moment it looks like you tried to blanket, but you failed, so I guess is better if you just blank this properly
10. 00:52:699 (7) - seems you're missing a hit sound here
11. 00:54:856 (4) - why you didn't added a finish here? there is a cymbal in the music
12. 00:56:033 (2) - same as above
13. 00:57:013 (5) - ^
14. 01:09:954 (1) - no hitsounds? I guess you should add something here.
15. 01:27:111 (7) - 01:33:386 (4) - 01:34:954 (7) - nothing in the music here, remove those circles
16. 01:35:052 (1) - missing finish in the head, also adding it in the repeat will be nice, there is also a cymbal
17. 01:39:758 (1) - add finish?
18. 01:42:895 (1) - missing finish there is a cymbal in the music
19. 01:46:033 (1) - same as above

1. 00:15:064 (2) - I guess you should add a NC here.
2. 00:24:856 (2) - off screen
3. 00:29:954 (3,4,5) - why the spacing is different? make it the same, that's better for a hard diff.
4. 00:42:503 (3,4,5) - same as above, also the spacing is not similar to the above case.
5. 00:44:856 (1,3) - is this supposed to be a blanket? if so, can you improve it? its super off.
6. 00:53:484 (2) - tail is so close to the HP bar, do you mind moving this a bit down? be careful with overlapping other objects tho!

Shad0w1and wrote:

主难度外观还是好好review一下吧。。很多nazi不修好以后看first ranked会后悔。你的新图都比这个好多了。

SPOILER

fixed.
00:41:327 (3,2) - 00:45:248 (2,3) -
00:49:954 (1,2,3,4) - 视觉等距
01:14:268 (5,1,2) -
01:15:640 (5,1) -
01:18:582 (2,3) -
01:26:033 (2) - 224-208尾巴五角星呀 虽然手摆的。。。
01:26:817 (5,2) - 叠在尾巴上
01:28:190 (4,6) - 真的太近了，和整个图的间距形成对比

SPOILER

还有很多不想提了。
总的来说，开AR4重排一次吧。能修多少算多少，别留遗憾

Natsu wrote:

Hi

Happy Zone

1. This plays better with AR 8,5 ah,in fact I mean to make it more easy to read for dt lol,I will ask someone who only can play it with none and decide change or not xD
2. 00:01:680 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but this sliders doesn't looks nice, I guess you tried to make an ¨S¨ shape?
   changed,I changed a W adn Z,means to show "W"onder "Z"one
3. 00:12:756 (4) - missing NC, I suppose, since you're using a NC every 2 stanzas at the beginning.fixed.
4. 00:14:372 (5,1) - not a big deal, but you should work more in your blankets.yes,fixed.
5. 00:20:935 (5) - ctrl G? to make a jump to 00:21:327 (1) - cool~fixed!
6. 00:21:327 (1) -
7. 00:21:327 (1) - missing finishadded.
8. 00:22:699 (1) - this ¨S¨slider shape is really bad, do you mind remaking it? there are some simple ways to build them properlymade a to a simple slider.
9. 00:50:346 (2,3) - blanket this? at the moment it looks like you tried to blanket, but you failed, so I guess is better if you just blank this properlyya...I just want to make it more fun,if I keep blanket it will break the "big circle"00:50:739 (3,4,1) - ,there are only 3 objects so if I keep blanket it doesn't look good.
10. 00:52:699 (7) - seems you're missing a hit sound here
11. 00:54:856 (4) - why you didn't added a finish here? there is a cymbal in the music
12. 00:56:033 (2) - same as above
13. 00:57:013 (5) - ^
14. 01:09:954 (1) - no hitsounds? I guess you should add something here.
15. 01:27:111 (7) - 01:33:386 (4) - 01:34:954 (7) - nothing in the music here, remove those circlesjust delete 01:27:111,others I think make a little overmap to show the music is better,I asked many testplayers ideas and almost they said no problem,so I want to keep it.Of course if another BN mention it again I will fix it.
16. 01:35:052 (1) - missing finish in the head, also adding it in the repeat will be nice, there is also a cymbal
17. 01:39:758 (1) - add finish?
18. 01:42:895 (1) - missing finish there is a cymbal in the music
19. 01:46:033 (1) - same as above

hitsounds all fixed.
Hard:

1. 00:15:064 (2) - I guess you should add a NC here.ok.
2. 00:24:856 (2) - off screenfixed.
3. 00:29:954 (3,4,5) - why the spacing is different? make it the same, that's better for a hard diff.
4. 00:42:503 (3,4,5) - same as above, also the spacing is not similar to the above case.both them adjusted.
5. 00:44:856 (1,3) - is this supposed to be a blanket? if so, can you improve it? its super off.fixed.
6. 00:53:484 (2) - tail is so close to the HP bar, do you mind moving this a bit down? be careful with overlapping other objects tho! changed a lot of objects lol

Hitsounds suggestions at the hardest diff may apply to the rest, so make sure to check them toocopied.

bubble pop: off screen object and hitsounds

Call the previous BN for a rebub

Pentori wrote:

[Easy]
00:09:526 (1,2) - blanket could probably be better fixed.
00:42:307 (3) - what is this snapped to? the sound is on the white tick not the blue tickas there a 1/4 drums during the slider,I try to use many snap like 1/1 or 2/1,but in fact the setting now sounds best,and there surely has a sound in blue tick.

[Hard]
00:06:987 (2) - why do this lol? you ignore the beat on 00:07:910 I think the overture doesn't need catch every sound,and my mean is only to catch the main rhythm.I have looked through many ranked maps and find it's ok to miss some unnecessary rhythm at start.
00:12:756 (1) - doesn't need nc, since you nc'ed only every 2nd downbeatok.
00:43:288 (5,1) - not stacked on purpose?fixed.
00:59:562 (3,1) - could you make this parallellol ok.
01:18:190 (1,2,3) - this whole combo is 1/1 while others use lots of 1/2 so feels quite undermapped. y not do something like http://puu.sh/rmPmr/2684abf3f0.jpg
01:30:739 (1) - ^here just a small relax time.you can see my highest diff has same setting.I asked some elite mapper and found it's ok.
01:41:131 (1,2,3) - overmapped since theres no actual sound on 01:41:621removed.
01:46:425 (2,3) - missed triplet here why dont you include this one?
01:37:307 - 01:38:876 - 01:40:444 - 01:42:013 - actually there are heaps of missed triplets but u only mapped 01:43:288 (2,3,4) - seems kinda weirdremoved triple.

[Happy Zone]
00:03:526 (2) - eh, imo it looks better to use red nodesfixed.
00:06:987 (2) - again i kinda dislike how it misses many beatsbut it is not unrankable -.-
00:12:756 (1) - E? this slider looks really ugly because you use white nodes ._.It's looks ok...white points doesn't mean very ugly...
00:53:091 (1) - finish on slider end isn't really good for playability because it indicates no emphasisI heard a strong gong here so I put a finish.
01:39:758 (1,4) - avoid overlapfixed.
01:40:346 (4,1) - could be improvedohhhhh
01:41:131 (1,2,3) - this triplet is especially awkward because its a white tick triplet. its ok to include triplets that aren't in the music as long as they play well like for downbeats eg. 01:45:837 (5,6,1) - because the last note of the triplet is the one emphasised but when you have them on white ticks, the first click is emphasised and feels really weird to playRESET ALL TRIPLE.

this doesn't really meet my standard of quality and i reckon triplets could use some work
good luck!

Karen wrote:

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