1. Calm (0.74 stars, 19 notes)
2. Frozen in Time (1.41 stars, 18 notes)
3. Relaxing (0.99 stars, 19 notes)

Volta wrote:

i sense speedrank

Stefan wrote:

ctb mod xdd

[Clam]
00:10:168 (3,4,5,6,1) - wouldn't it be cooler if it had some consistency? like you see in the play the notes are not so consistent to theirself imo. You could move (5) to 192;192 and 00:12:168 (1) - to 176;192, looks better to me. - Moved these around a bit in IRC mod with koliron (which isn't finished yet lo) but I made them more consistent, however I don't want to do placements similar to this because I feel the backforth motion may be a bit too hard for the difficulty I'm aiming for, and I want more emphasis on 5 for the stronger sound here with the pitch.

[Relxaing]
00:10:168 (3,4,5,6,1) - dunno if you want a spacing increase at each beat but uh, I don't see the reason why 00:10:668 (4,5) - is by far wider distanced than 00:11:168 (5,6) - are. It looks random imo. - Like mentioned in calm, it's because the pitch on 5 is quite a bit stronger, so the slightly higher distance feels nice to me.

00:16:168 (3,4) - Move (3) to 56;192 and (4) at 200;192, fits better to the music having a consistent spacing at similar sound/beat. - Rearranged slightly, however similar to in calm, I wanted to have the distancing match the pitch and strengths here, and the strength of these notes gradually increases.

[Chalenging]
00:10:668 (4,5,6) - Same case like Relaxing. - Same as then.

00:17:168 (5) - Why not moving on the same spot like 00:16:168 (3) - ? looks cleaner imo - I did this to match the increasing strength of the notes.

[Let it go]
00:12:168 (1) - Move it on the same spot like 00:11:168 (5) - is. - Done.


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RoseusJaeger wrote:

From PM request, bear with my since I'm a scrub modder but I'll give suggestions.

General

I feel that “piano” and “calming” should be in the tags because of the song itself. - Added piano during an irc mod with koliron, added calming though.
Just a comment, “holy CS, Batman” on the last diff. - :^)
I'd make the volume on the final spinner 5% so the spinner bananas don't distract too much from the song. - 10% done instead.

Calm

00:10:668 (4,5) – I understand pitch wise why you'd make that spacing there but mapping wise and I'd personally make the spacing between (4,5,6) more even spread by putting (5) on x=192. - Made it more even in my IRC mod with koliron (this is why you don't get multiple people modding at the same time kids).


Relaxing

I have no comment, looks good.


Challenging

Looks good.


Frozen in Time

Looks good.

RogueKitten wrote:

*maps 4 27-second long cups, steals mp3 and timing from other mapset*
PLZ RANK WORKED SO HARD ON THIS ;_; ;_; ;_;

koliron wrote:

why not undertale bg )': WATERFALL

1. Looking good, although idk if there should be audioleadin for this map. I mean, the song starts super early in the editor, but idk if that audioleadin rule is stil in effect ;-;

1. 00:06:168 (1) - Could use more distance here as the instrument enters at this tick.
2. 00:15:168 (2) - A little bit more distance here from the previous note would be favourable as this note has essentially the same synth like 00:00:168 (1,2) - .
3. 00:24:168 (1) - This would be better with a lower distance, as the pitch of the instrument's going down.

1. 00:06:168 (1) - Like Calm.
2. 00:18:168 (1) - Like you did in Calm, it would be better if this note had more distance to it, to emphasize on the building up of the sound.
3. 00:24:168 (1,2) - In Calm they get lesser emphasizement than in this difficulty, makes me wonder which one is better... Either way, make the distance between these notes in Calm and this difficulty consistent.

1. 00:06:168 (1) - Like Relaxing, would be good if you added some more distance on this note.
2. 00:08:168 (2) - Personally from this difficulty I think you could use some rhythm variety - having no variety in rhythm at all for all these difficulties might be just plain boring. For this one as an example, I would split up into 2 circles to emphasize on the loud sound at its tail.
3. 00:18:168 (1,2) - Another place where you can make the rhythm slightly more denser, you can make (1) either circle triplets, 1/1 slider + a circle, to emphasize better on the buiding-down effect of the song. (Personally I would go for 1/1 slider + a circle to use the circle triplet in Platter)

1. The high CS value here is totally fine; the BPM is already low enough to support the use of this. In terms of playability it's fine too, as there is several ample breaks for players to have a smoother gameplay.
2. 00:06:168 (1) - Lke Relaxing
3. 00:08:168 (2) - Like Challanging
4. 00:18:168 (1,2) - Like Challanging, I would split up the notes so that it has a better gradual build-down; for this case I would go for circle triplet on (1), then use 1/1 slider + circle on (2).

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

RogueKitten wrote:

*maps 4 27-second long cups, steals mp3 and timing from other mapset*
PLZ RANK WORKED SO HARD ON THIS ;_; ;_; ;_;

to be fair i did work pretty hard on this

Like I've said previously, I understand that the shortness of the songs I map means they take less time, however I try to make up for that by putting quite a bit of time into little details, fine tuning the map to make sure it's the best it can be, as to use less of a modder's time. I feel as though a lot of mappers should do this anyway, but a lot don't, having an attitude of "oh the modders will fix it". This is why my maps require less modding, because I spend a lot of my own time self modding. If you're gonna try and be condescending, at least have the decency to explain yourself through the use of a mod. If you think I didn't work hard on it, surely that should be due to some quality issues you have found, right? So please tell me.

And if you have no issues with the map other than that it's easy, please kindly leave, as this is not a map designed for you, nor will it ever be, unless your mindset changes. If you expect me to make a higher diff for this, then, simply, no. It's basically impossible with this song due to the nature of it. If your issue is with the song length, then again, you need to realise that I map music for the music, I don't care about the length.

As for the "4 27 second long cups", you're actually wrong with each point. There is only 2 cups, and the map is just not counting the drain time of the final spinner. The other 2 difficulties are a salad and platter, something you'd notice if you had actually played the map. This just shows you don't care about the quality of the map, which is a real shame.

Either way guys, updated with a tiny bit of self modding, hopefully everything should be fine now.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Special mod for your birthday
Prepare for super nitpicky stuff :3

[General]

1. Looking good, although idk if there should be audioleadin for this map. I mean, the song starts super early in the editor, but idk if that audioleadin rule is stil in effect ;-; - The audioleadin isn't necessary as it does it automatically now.

[Calm]

1. 00:06:168 (1) - Could use more distance here as the instrument enters at this tick. - Done.
2. 00:15:168 (2) - A little bit more distance here from the previous note would be favourable as this note has essentially the same synth like 00:00:168 (1,2) - . - Done.
3. 00:24:168 (1) - This would be better with a lower distance, as the pitch of the instrument's going down. - Done.

[Relaxing]

1. 00:06:168 (1) - Like Calm. - Done.
2. 00:18:168 (1) - Like you did in Calm, it would be better if this note had more distance to it, to emphasize on the building up of the sound. - Increased.
3. 00:24:168 (1,2) - In Calm they get lesser emphasizement than in this difficulty, makes me wonder which one is better... Either way, make the distance between these notes in Calm and this difficulty consistent. - Hmm, they both had less, I thought...

[Challanging]

1. 00:06:168 (1) - Like Relaxing, would be good if you added some more distance on this note. - Done.
2. 00:08:168 (2) - Personally from this difficulty I think you could use some rhythm variety - having no variety in rhythm at all for all these difficulties might be just plain boring. For this one as an example, I would split up into 2 circles to emphasize on the loud sound at its tail. - Whilst it may sound weird, I actually want to keep the idea of the timeline being the same in all difficulties, it's a kinda experimental thing by me, and I feel as though it works pretty nicely.
3. 00:18:168 (1,2) - Another place where you can make the rhythm slightly more denser, you can make (1) either circle triplets, 1/1 slider + a circle, to emphasize better on the buiding-down effect of the song. (Personally I would go for 1/1 slider + a circle to use the circle triplet in Platter) - Same as above.

[Frozen in Time]

1. The high CS value here is totally fine; the BPM is already low enough to support the use of this. In terms of playability it's fine too, as there is several ample breaks for players to have a smoother gameplay.
2. 00:06:168 (1) - Lke Relaxing - Yep.
3. 00:08:168 (2) - Like Challanging - Same as then.
4. 00:18:168 (1,2) - Like Challanging, I would split up the notes so that it has a better gradual build-down; for this case I would go for circle triplet on (1), then use 1/1 slider + circle on (2). - Same as then as well, sorry, I just really like this concept.

Ok what am I supposed to say on such a solid map ;-; Sorry for the half-assed mod.