Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
Mind writing in the main post that the Victoria diff is an Insane ?
You should make all the diffs end at the same time imo. :/

Easy
01:06:033 (5,1) - I'm concerned about this spacing. In an Easy diff, this kind of spacing is very confusing.

Normal
00:59:889 (5) - This slider's repeat is partially hidden by previous hitbursts.

Victoria
00:23:383 (5,6,7) - Spacing issue: they aren't spaced evenly.

caramel's Hard
This is absolutely not a Hard diff. Rename that to "caramel's Insane".
00:14:527 (1) - I'm not sure this note is a good idea. The spinner is pretty short, and this note comes in right after it.
00:37:660 (1,2,3) - Huh. This is clearly broken unrankable spacing. Fix it.
.00:43:443 (5) - The sudden spacing change here is really surprising, especially after having the rest of the combo spaced "normally" (that is, as in the 1x sections).
00:49:226 (1) - Same as 00:14:527 - .

Lunah wrote:

Hi

Victorica

00:05:672 (4,5) - Add a timing section with +4 audio ?
00:06:395 (1) - Add a timing section with +2 audio ?
00:14:346 (3,4) - Timing + 4 audio ? ^
01:10:913 (1) - New combo and Remove here 01:11:274 (1) -
also new combo here 01:11:997 (3) -

really nice map.

Lissette wrote:

hello~

Victorica
01:19:587 (2) - new combo
01:21:033 (5) - new combo
love it

caramel's Hard
00:03:285 - useless timing section
00:12:178 (1,2) - i don't like how sounds the whistles here
00:46:515 (1,2,3,4) - this combo threw me off, fits more if you follow the vocals in this combo
01:15:792 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - try this

Normal
00:05:581 - useless timing section

Easy
this looks more like a normal
would look more like an easy if you reduce slider velocity since is the same as normal
00:14:979 - useless timing section
01:05:943 - same
01:07:027 - same
01:12:914 - same

Star~

• 00:10:732 (4) - (Startpoint only)
  00:11:455 (5) - (Startpoint only)
  00:59:166 (3,4)
  01:10:732 (1,2)

happy30 wrote:

[General]

The BG seems to have lost its aspect ratio, use this BG please: http://puu.sh/19K9

[Easy]

00:15:792 (3) - Fix the direction of the repeat arrow
00:29:527 (1) - ^
00:38:202 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part wasn't really interesting, maybe differ a bit more in spacing/rhythm
00:55:551 (1) - Fix the direction of the repeat arrow
01:10:732 (3,4) - This rhythm doesn't follow the song

[Normal]

It's kind of annoying that some parts aren't following the rhythm of the song.
Let me point them out:

• 00:10:732 (4) - (Startpoint only)
  00:11:455 (5) - (Startpoint only)
  00:59:166 (3,4)
  01:10:732 (1,2)

00:12:720 (2) - This doesn't look good here because the slider is overlapping this.
00:20:852 (1) - The overlapping also doesn't look good here.

I think you used too many lineair sliders! the map would definitely be more interesting if you could replace them with more curvy sliders

[Caramel's Hard]

00:33:684 (5) - New combo here instead on the next note?
00:48:142 (1) - End the spinner 1/2 earlier? (It just felt a bit weird on my first play)

The claps on the second kiai part could be improved

[Victorica]

00:00:611 (1,3) - try to improve the slider shape a bit? (Like this?: http://puu.sh/19L4)

00:46:515 (1) - This is spaced too far from 00:46:334 (9) -

xierbaliti wrote:

-hitsounds-
00:38:202~00:47:961 - in this part, soft clap don's fit this song well. how about using normal-hitnormal? or using a custom one instead?

-Easy-
01:10:732 (3,4) - try this:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:f7f6a]002.png[/attachment:f7f6a]

-Victorica-
00:36:575 (1) - start at 00:36:756 will be better imo (just suggestion)
00:53:383 (4,5,6) - don't like this part. how about put a note at 00:53:292 and remove 00:53:473 (5)?
00:53:925 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - doesn't fit the rhythm a bit ;_; i prefet to remove (3,5,7) if it's my map. but it's up to you.
00:59:708 (6) - i like use a slider that with a repeat here like this:

SPOILER

[attachment=1:f7f6a]001.png[/attachment:f7f6a]

you should fix all diffs as happy said. some notes are really aren't following the rhythm well.