:3 just had a little look on Victorika diff
here are my little suggestions
in general . the clap sounds is bit too frequent..(my personal idea , just ignore it)
00:01:840 (3) - add something here sounds better
00:03:285 (6) - 00:04:731 (3) - - here too
00:13:225 (1) - add a finish sound
00:19:370 (1) - position of this note is really low..
00:26:056 (1,2,3) - should keep a same note distance with 00:26:599 (1)
00:32:201 (9) - here can have a finish sound
00:36:538 (1) - same
00:46:478 (1) - spacing
00:52:803 (2) - add a note will sounds better , but may need to change position of 00:52:984 (3) -
01:12:864 (8) - finish
01:13:948 (10) - same
i think add a spinner to the end of song may looks nicer :3

GOSICK>w<

_Kiva wrote:

:3 just had a little look on Victorika diff
here are my little suggestions
in general . the clap sounds is bit too frequent..(my personal idea , just ignore it)
00:01:840 (3) - add something here sounds better
00:03:285 (6) - 00:04:731 (3) - - here too
00:13:225 (1) - add a finish sound
00:19:370 (1) - position of this note is really low..
00:26:056 (1,2,3) - should keep a same note distance with 00:26:599 (1)
00:32:201 (9) - here can have a finish sound
00:36:538 (1) - same
00:46:478 (1) - spacing
00:52:803 (2) - add a note will sounds better , but may need to change position of 00:52:984 (3) -
01:12:864 (8) - finish
01:13:948 (10) - same
i think add a spinner to the end of song may looks nicer :3

00:13:225 (1) - add a finish sound
00:32:201 (9) - here can have a finish sound
00:36:538 (1) - same
01:12:864 (8) - finish
01:13:948 (10) - same
Fixed.
00:26:056 (1,2,3) - should keep a same note distance with 00:26:599 (1)
One idea to keep.
Thankyou

wahahaha (笑)

Fight w

[General]
Your background is much too large for the rankable size, max size is 1024x768 i recommend you resize/crop/whatever to reduce it's size.
mp3 volume is reaaaally low, i recommend you get a better one.

[All difficulties]
00:26:237 - The song becomes stronger in this spot, i would recommend add a timing section with volume slightly higher.

[caramel's Hard]
00:37:623 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It is really unintuitive to extend the spacing while slowing down sliders, it's easy to combo break from overshooting sliders at this point, I recommend to either increase slider speed or reduce the spacing distance like you do here 00:43:406 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6).

[Normal]
Slider speed is much faster than the distance spacing, making it more confusing than it should be, I recommend you change either.
Also i dont think 1.6 slider speed is a good idea for a Normal, specially because the BPM itself is already fast.
00:32:201 (1,2,3) - This section is missing hitsounds, intentional?
00:38:165 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - ^ this one as well.
00:46:478 (1) - A red tick is a weird spot to end this spinner, i recommend you use the white tick from before, it sounds better imo
00:51:177 (X) - Feels like there should be a note in here, plays awkward otherwise.

[Easy]
00:16:478 (X) - I recommend you add a note here, the rythm is steady and makes me think the slider that comes after should be sooner.
00:31:659 (X) - Same here, i think there should be a note because the rythm is broken with this empty spot and makes me want to click the next slider sooner.
00:33:466 (X) - ^
00:46:478 (1) - A red tick is a weird spot to end this spinner, i recommend you use the white tick from before, it sounds better imo
00:56:237 (X) - Add a note to keep consistence with the previous rythm at 00:49:731 (1,2,3).
Actually i should just scratch that last one and recommend that you map the chorus using at least every 1/1 since it's the strongest part of the song it would make sense to have a more constant and stready rythm, but it's up to you, in any case if you're not gonna map every 1/1 i recommend at least you keep the rythm consistent across the chorus because it seems different on every combo. Oh and btw i dont mean to not use other things other than 1/1s but at least all of the 1/1s being there would be good, but if not, a constant rythm makes more sense and adds more fun to the map.

I seriously should enphasize in the point that you should try to keep a constant rythm on [Normal] and [Easy] other than that, nice map, Good Luck!

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Your background is much too large for the rankable size, max size is 1024x768 i recommend you resize/crop/whatever to reduce it's size.
mp3 volume is reaaaally low, i recommend you get a better one.

[All difficulties]
00:26:237 - The song becomes stronger in this spot, i would recommend add a timing section with volume slightly higher.

[caramel's Hard]
00:37:623 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It is really unintuitive to extend the spacing while slowing down sliders, it's easy to combo break from overshooting sliders at this point, I recommend to either increase slider speed or reduce the spacing distance like you do here 00:43:406 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6).

[Normal]
Slider speed is much faster than the distance spacing, making it more confusing than it should be, I recommend you change either.
Also i dont think 1.6 slider speed is a good idea for a Normal, specially because the BPM itself is already fast.
00:32:201 (1,2,3) - This section is missing hitsounds, intentional?
00:38:165 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - ^ this one as well.
00:46:478 (1) - A red tick is a weird spot to end this spinner, i recommend you use the white tick from before, it sounds better imo
00:51:177 (X) - Feels like there should be a note in here, plays awkward otherwise.

[Easy]
00:16:478 (X) - I recommend you add a note here, the rythm is steady and makes me think the slider that comes after should be sooner.
00:31:659 (X) - Same here, i think there should be a note because the rythm is broken with this empty spot and makes me want to click the next slider sooner.
00:33:466 (X) - ^
00:46:478 (1) - A red tick is a weird spot to end this spinner, i recommend you use the white tick from before, it sounds better imo
00:56:237 (X) - Add a note to keep consistence with the previous rythm at 00:49:731 (1,2,3).
Actually i should just scratch that last one and recommend that you map the chorus using at least every 1/1 since it's the strongest part of the song it would make sense to have a more constant and stready rythm, but it's up to you, in any case if you're not gonna map every 1/1 i recommend at least you keep the rythm consistent across the chorus because it seems different on every combo. Oh and btw i dont mean to not use other things other than 1/1s but at least all of the 1/1s being there would be good, but if not, a constant rythm makes more sense and adds more fun to the map.

I seriously should enphasize in the point that you should try to keep a constant rythm on [Normal] and [Easy] other than that, nice map, Good Luck!

thx!

all fixed.

modding~
[caramel's Hard]
HP-1
この難易度だけカラーが多いので統一したほうがいいかも知れないです。
00:10:514 (5) - new combo
00:14:490 (1) - Remove whistle
00:19:370 (6) - new combo
00:38:165 (4) - ^
00:39:068 (1) - Re new combo
00:39:611 (4) - new combo
00:40:514 (1) - Re new combo
00:41:056 (4) - new combo
00:46:478 (7) - ^
00:47:201 (2) - 重ねないようにお願いします
00:55:153 add note
00:58:406 (9) - new combo
00:58:948 (1) - Re new combo
01:10:785 (2) - Remove?
01:12:231 add note
01:13:948 (2) - いきなり0.5はすごい混乱するので0.75にしてみては？
01:15:755 (3) - new combo
01:21:358 (6) - ^

and other diff IRCMOD!!
nice map~

Starー('A`*)!!

mendoi

ｽｯﾀｧｧｧｱｱｱｱｱｱｱｱｱｱｱwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

otsukare~ :3

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oh nice

nicemap

Holoaz さんや MODしていただいた方には kudosu ぽちっとな を忘れず (๑╹◡╹๑)

ganbatte~!

wa

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Star~

Holoさん　val0108 さん My diff Mod Thank you~~

I was first impressed when i've seen your video, then i thinked "wow it's similiar to mine".
It's not similiar. It's the same. before rob a thing from another map, try to ask to the one who encoded it first, you stealer ._.
I don't pray you to remove the video end encode your own, but if i see it happens again, i will.

irc mod

[General]
- Make same tags every diff. You missed caramel.
- Almost timing points off time line. Resnap them.


[Easy]
00:32:419 (1) - Too close to previous note
00:49:666 - Start kiai time at 00:49:768
01:01:347 - Resnap green line
01:01:334 (1,3) - curve slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59199
01:03:503 (5,6,1) - Please don't overlap. They are hard to beginner.
01:06:033 (5) - Is BPM 1.5x really necessary in Easy diff? Change it to 1x please.
01:18:684 (1,2,3) - Try this position.
01:18:684 (1) - x:176 / y:192
01:20:130 (2) - x:336 / y:296
01:21:575 (3) - x:256 / y:56


[Normal]
HPD : 3 / OD : 3
00:49:666 - Start kiai time at 00:49:768
00:59:540 - Remove 0.5x section. It doesn't fit.
01:01:207 - Strat kiai time at 01:01:334


[caramel]
00:29:346 (8) - new combo
00:30:069 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:865 (1) - ^
00:35:130 (4) - new combo
00:36:395 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:560 - Start kiai time at 00:49:768


[Victorica]
00:27:901 (6,1) - Don't stack. I've never seen this pattern anywhere except this.
00:49:575 - Start kiai time at 00:49:768
01:18:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try BPM 0.75x in this part.


Good luck

star

STAR☆ /(>A<)/

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Make same tags every diff. You missed caramel.
- Almost timing points off time line. Resnap them.


[Easy]
00:32:419 (1) - Too close to previous note
00:49:666 - Start kiai time at 00:49:768
01:01:347 - Resnap green line
01:01:334 (1,3) - curve slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59199
01:03:503 (5,6,1) - Please don't overlap. They are hard to beginner.
01:06:033 (5) - Is BPM 1.5x really necessary in Easy diff? Change it to 1x please.
01:18:684 (1,2,3) - Try this position.
01:18:684 (1) - x:176 / y:192
01:20:130 (2) - x:336 / y:296
01:21:575 (3) - x:256 / y:56


[Normal]
HPD : 3 / OD : 3
00:49:666 - Start kiai time at 00:49:768
00:59:540 - Remove 0.5x section. It doesn't fit.
01:01:207 - Strat kiai time at 01:01:334


[caramel]
00:29:346 (8) - new combo
00:30:069 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:865 (1) - ^
00:35:130 (4) - new combo
00:36:395 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:560 - Start kiai time at 00:49:768


[Victorica]
00:27:901 (6,1) - Don't stack. I've never seen this pattern anywhere except this.
00:49:575 - Start kiai time at 00:49:768
01:18:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try BPM 0.75x in this part.


Good luck

All fixed.
Thanks Mod

やほー(・∀・)ﾉ
英語苦手なので日本語で書かせてくださいOrz..

Easy

00:05:672 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの頭にﾎｲｯｽﾙとｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの最後にﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:06:395 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの頭をﾎｲｯｽﾙじゃなくてﾌｨﾆｯｼｭどうですか!?
00:07:804 (2) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの最後にﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:08:563 (4) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの頭にﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:09:286 (5) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:10:009 (7) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭの代わりにﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:10:551 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:11:274 (2) - 上と同じ
00:15:431 (2)と00:16:154 (3)と00:16:877 (4) - クラップ入れてたらどうでしょうか(・∀・)((4)はﾎｲｯｽﾙぬいてください)
00:20:130 (5) -　ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭの代わりにﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:26:636 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:26:997 (2) - クラップ
00:29:527 (6) - にゅーこんぼ
00:49:768 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:52:298 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
00:52:660 (2) - にゅーこんぼ
01:01:334 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ


Normal

00:06:395 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:15:431 (2)と00:16:154 (3)と00:16:877 (5)と00:17:599 (6)にｸﾗｯﾌﾟいれてみてはどうでしょうか(・∀・)
00:19:407 (3) - もう１回リピート
00:20:491 (x) - noteをおく
00:23:383 (5) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭの代わりにﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:32:057 (x) - noteをおく?
00:43:985 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:49:768 (1) - 上と同じ
00:57:720 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
00:58:443 (3) - にゅーこんぼ
00:59:889 (5) - 全体のﾌｨﾆｯｼｭをはずして00:59:889と01:00:611と01:00:973にﾌｨﾆｯｼｭを入れてみたらいいかも！
01:01:334 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
01:07:118 (1) - 上と同じ
01:18:684 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:19:045 (2) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:19:768 (3) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:20:130 (4) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:20:852 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ

caramel's Hard

00:06:395 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:10:551 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:11:274 (3) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:26:636 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:26:636 (1)~ｸﾗｯﾌﾟ入れてもいいかなーっておもいました！
00:49:768 (2) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:51:033 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
00:52:660 (9) - にゅーこんぼ
00:53:563 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
01:01:334 (2) -ｸﾗｯﾌﾟの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
01:03:322 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
01:04:226 (4) - にゅーこんぼ
01:07:118 (2) -ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ


Victorica

00:06:395 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:10:551 (4) -ｸﾗｯﾌﾟの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:11:274 (5) -上と一緒
00:26:636 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:28:081 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭとろうー
00:32:238 (12) - 上と一緒
00:32:419 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:49:587 (1) - ｸﾗｯﾌﾟとる
00:49:768 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:55:551 (3) - 上と一緒
00:58:443 (1) - 上と一緒
00:58:985 (3) - 上と一緒
01:19:768 (3) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:21:214 (6) -ﾎｲｯｽﾙ


すごく長くなってごめん(´；ω；｀)
よかったら参考にしてください！

がんばれ～ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ★゛

y u c a wrote:

やほー(・∀・)ﾉ
英語苦手なので日本語で書かせてくださいOrz..

Easy

00:05:672 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの頭にﾎｲｯｽﾙとｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの最後にﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:06:395 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの頭をﾎｲｯｽﾙじゃなくてﾌｨﾆｯｼｭどうですか!?
00:07:804 (2) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの最後にﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:08:563 (4) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの頭にﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:09:286 (5) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:10:009 (7) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭの代わりにﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:10:551 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:11:274 (2) - 上と同じ
00:15:431 (2)と00:16:154 (3)と00:16:877 (4) - クラップ入れてたらどうでしょうか(・∀・)((4)はﾎｲｯｽﾙぬいてください)
00:20:130 (5) -　ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭの代わりにﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:26:636 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:26:997 (2) - クラップ
00:29:527 (6) - にゅーこんぼ
00:49:768 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:52:298 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
00:52:660 (2) - にゅーこんぼ
01:01:334 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ


Normal

00:06:395 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:15:431 (2)と00:16:154 (3)と00:16:877 (5)と00:17:599 (6)にｸﾗｯﾌﾟいれてみてはどうでしょうか(・∀・)
00:19:407 (3) - もう１回リピート
00:20:491 (x) - noteをおく

SPOILER

こんなｶﾝｼﾞです(・∀・)

00:23:383 (5) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭの代わりにﾎｲｯｽﾙ
00:32:057 (x) - noteをおく?
00:43:985 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:49:768 (1) - 上と同じ
00:57:720 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
00:58:443 (3) - にゅーこんぼ
00:59:889 (5) - 全体のﾌｨﾆｯｼｭをはずして00:59:889と01:00:611と01:00:973にﾌｨﾆｯｼｭを入れてみたらいいかも！
01:01:334 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
01:07:118 (1) - 上と同じ
01:18:684 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:19:045 (2) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:19:768 (3) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:20:130 (4) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:20:852 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ

caramel's Hard

00:06:395 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:10:551 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:11:274 (3) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:26:636 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:26:636 (1)~ｸﾗｯﾌﾟ入れてもいいかなーっておもいました！
00:49:768 (2) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:51:033 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
00:52:660 (9) - にゅーこんぼ
00:53:563 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
01:01:334 (2) -ｸﾗｯﾌﾟの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
01:03:322 (1) - にゅーこんぼなし
01:04:226 (4) - にゅーこんぼ
01:07:118 (2) -ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ


Victorica

00:06:395 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:10:551 (4) -ｸﾗｯﾌﾟの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:11:274 (5) -上と一緒
00:26:636 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:28:081 (1) - ﾌｨﾆｯｼｭとろうー
00:32:238 (12) - 上と一緒
00:32:419 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:49:587 (1) - ｸﾗｯﾌﾟとる
00:49:768 (1) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙの代わりにﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ
00:55:551 (3) - 上と一緒
00:58:443 (1) - 上と一緒
00:58:985 (3) - 上と一緒
01:19:768 (3) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ
01:21:214 (6) -ﾎｲｯｽﾙ


すごく長くなってごめん(´；ω；｀)
よかったら参考にしてください！

がんばれ～ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ★゛

Fixed. thx!

Everything I've said are suggestions. Feel free to ignore everything if you want to ^^

[Easy]
Thought this felt a bit hard for being Easy, but whatever... It's good :3

00:23:744 (3,4) - Remove the claps?
00:33:865 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning and put it at the end?
00:35:310 (1) - End on the white tick before with finish?
00:38:202 (1,2) - I would put this at the center, but that's just me xD
00:38:202 (1) - Finish at the beginning? If you do that, add finish on 00:43:985 (1) too to keep consistent
00:55:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels a bit weird, but I don't have any good suggestions for it either =w=
01:04:226 (1) - Make this start at the same spot as 01:01:334 (1), and then move 01:04:949 (2,3,4,5) so (2) is at the same spot as 01:03:142 (4)?

[Normal]
00:10:371 (3) - This finish sounded a bit out of place... meh idk :p
00:13:624 (4) - Finish at the end?
00:16:515 (4,5) - Line up with 00:15:069 (1,2)?
00:45:431 (2) - Remove finish and extend to 00:46:515?
00:55:551 (1) - clap?
00:56:636 (3) - start and end clap?
00:58:804 (2,3,4,5) - 1 grid up?

[caramel's Hard]
00:26:093 (9) - add clap?
00:26:636 (1) - Remove clap?
00:46:515 (1) - This speedup was a bit sudden, since I was expecting another slow-repeat slider. I didn't miss or anything when I played though, but it surprised me :p
01:01:334 (2) - 01:10:009 (8) I think a normal 0-C-0-C pattern works better here
SS'd on first try, so I can't say the noteplacement was too difficult to read. maybe a bit hard to be a hard?

[Victorica]
00:08:925 (4,5,6) - move these so 6 and 2 overlaps?
00:14:437 (4) - Remove this. I think it plays better
00:25:913 - I feel there should be a note here
00:26:093 (1,2,3) - Remove the other hitsounds and add finish on these 3?
00:49:045 (2) - Finish?
01:06:937 (1,2) - Make the note come first, then the slider? If so, add finish on sliderstart
01:13:443 (1) - Finish?
01:15:792 (1,2) - ^
01:23:021 (2) - Lower the volume so it feels like it tones out?
01:24:467 (1) - Silence this?
Fine too, FC'd on first try, so there aren''t any big surprises here ^^

Nice mapset, star

あ

CXu wrote:

Everything I've said are suggestions. Feel free to ignore everything if you want to ^^

[Easy]
Thought this felt a bit hard for being Easy, but whatever... It's good :3

00:23:744 (3,4) - Remove the claps?
00:33:865 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning and put it at the end?
00:35:310 (1) - End on the white tick before with finish?
00:38:202 (1,2) - I would put this at the center, but that's just me xD
00:38:202 (1) - Finish at the beginning? If you do that, add finish on 00:43:985 (1) too to keep consistent
00:55:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels a bit weird, but I don't have any good suggestions for it either =w=
01:04:226 (1) - Make this start at the same spot as 01:01:334 (1), and then move 01:04:949 (2,3,4,5) so (2) is at the same spot as 01:03:142 (4)?

[Normal]
00:10:371 (3) - This finish sounded a bit out of place... meh idk :p
00:13:624 (4) - Finish at the end?
00:16:515 (4,5) - Line up with 00:15:069 (1,2)?
00:45:431 (2) - Remove finish and extend to 00:46:515?
00:55:551 (1) - clap?
00:56:636 (3) - start and end clap?
00:58:804 (2,3,4,5) - 1 grid up?

[caramel's Hard]
00:26:093 (9) - add clap?
00:26:636 (1) - Remove clap?
00:46:515 (1) - This speedup was a bit sudden, since I was expecting another slow-repeat slider. I didn't miss or anything when I played though, but it surprised me :p
01:01:334 (2) - 01:10:009 (8) I think a normal 0-C-0-C pattern works better here
SS'd on first try, so I can't say the noteplacement was too difficult to read. maybe a bit hard to be a hard?

[Victorica]
00:08:925 (4,5,6) - move these so 6 and 2 overlaps?
00:14:437 (4) - Remove this. I think it plays better
00:25:913 - I feel there should be a note here
00:26:093 (1,2,3) - Remove the other hitsounds and add finish on these 3?
00:49:045 (2) - Finish?
01:06:937 (1,2) - Make the note come first, then the slider? If so, add finish on sliderstart
01:13:443 (1) - Finish?
01:15:792 (1,2) - ^
01:23:021 (2) - Lower the volume so it feels like it tones out?
01:24:467 (1) - Silence this?
Fine too, FC'd on first try, so there aren''t any big surprises here ^^

Nice mapset, star

Fixed. thx!

All opinions/suggestions.

General:

-- Try to make kiai time the same for all difficulties.
-- Add Victorica to tags if it's a guest diff?

Easy:

00:09:648 (6) - Add clap?
00:12:178 (1) - End at 00:14:346? I think it sounds better.
00:35:310 (1) - End at 00:37:479?
00:46:877 (1) - End at 00:49:045?
00:57:720 (5) - Remove finish?
00:58:081 (x) - Add note?
01:10:732 (6,7) - Move from under the slider? I think easy players might get confused. (Also maybe follow the vocal here?)

Normal:

00:20:491 (4) - Add clap.
00:23:383 (5) - ^
01:10:009 (3,1,2) - I think it might be better to follow the vocal here.
01:11:455 (1) - Spinner is very short for a Normal, maybe add some notes instead? o__o

caramel's Hard:

00:03:593 (2) - Delete? It doesn't fit the song.
01:10:822 (2) - Delete? It doesn't fit the song.

Victoria:

-- Some of the streams in this diff sound weird because they don't follow the song.

00:05:672 (4) - Finish?
00:35:852 (4,5,6) - This might look nice as a triangle pattern?
00:38:202 (1) - Finish?
00:43:985 (1) - ^
00:53:925 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I really don't think this stream fits the song ;_;
01:06:214 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ not following the song.

Good luck, star!

Shulin wrote:

All opinions/suggestions.

General:

-- Try to make kiai time the same for all difficulties.
-- Add Victorica to tags if it's a guest diff?

Easy:

00:09:648 (6) - Add clap?
00:12:178 (1) - End at 00:14:346? I think it sounds better.
00:35:310 (1) - End at 00:37:479?
00:46:877 (1) - End at 00:49:045?
00:57:720 (5) - Remove finish?
00:58:081 (x) - Add note?
01:10:732 (6,7) - Move from under the slider? I think easy players might get confused. (Also maybe follow the vocal here?)

Normal:

00:20:491 (4) - Add clap.
00:23:383 (5) - ^
01:10:009 (3,1,2) - I think it might be better to follow the vocal here.
01:11:455 (1) - Spinner is very short for a Normal, maybe add some notes instead? o__o

caramel's Hard:

00:03:593 (2) - Delete? It doesn't fit the song.
01:10:822 (2) - Delete? It doesn't fit the song.

Victoria:

-- Some of the streams in this diff sound weird because they don't follow the song.

00:05:672 (4) - Finish?
00:35:852 (4,5,6) - This might look nice as a triangle pattern?
00:38:202 (1) - Finish?
00:43:985 (1) - ^
00:53:925 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I really don't think this stream fits the song ;_;
01:06:214 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ not following the song.

vic is my diff.
Fixed.thanks for mod

00:53:925 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I really don't think this stream fits the song ;_;
01:06:214 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ not following the song.
How should I put it? ><

ykcarrot y u c a CXu Shulin
Mod thanks ~

Shulin s
caramel's Hard:

00:03:593 (2) - Delete? It doesn't fit the song. → I hope keep note Therefore, left it.
01:10:822 (2) - Delete? It doesn't fit the song. → delete