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nomico / DOWNFORCE - BRAVE OUT [CatchTheBeat]

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ZiRoX
Elite Mapper
1,019 posts
Joined November 2009
ZiRoX
Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.

[Cup]
  1. 00:53:473 (1) - The repeat here sounds horrible and is really unfitting with the rest of the patttern. I still think a simple 1/2 slider is better, as I suggested originally.
  2. 00:59:873 (2) - Same here.
[Salad]
  1. 00:01:073 (1,2) - Starting the song with such a strong dash doesn't really feel adequate to me in a diff that's supposed to introduce dashes. Try slanting (1) a bit so the difficulty of the dash is reduced a bit.
  2. 00:07:473 (1,2) - As the first appearance of 1/2 dashes, I think these can be a bit overwhelming. Try moving 00:07:873 (2) - to x:240 to decrease the difficulty a bit.
  3. 00:14:673 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - All these spacings can be a bit quite to walk depending on the player's timing, and the symmetric spacing doesn't induce dashing in any way. I think using ~x1,40 instead of ~x1,60 as a constant spacing is better to make it more walkable.
  4. 00:53:473 (1,1) - Same comment as in Cup, the repeat makes it sound weird, so I'd change them to single 1/2 sliders.[/b]
  5. 01:19:073 (3) - Same thing here, I think the repeat doesn't sound that good. Furthermore, you omitted it at a similar part at 01:22:473 (2) - , so it makes sense to turn (3) into a single 1/2 slider.
  6. 01:24:673 (2,1) - Feels like a really harsh dash. I'd reduce the distance a bit.
  7. 01:25:073 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - All these distances are really harsh to walk (and if you intended them to be dashed it's wrong anyway, having so many dashes in a row).
  8. 01:51:873 (2,3) - It's weird that you suddenly dropped the dash pattern than you used right before. Maybe you can Ctrl+G (3) and then Ctrl+G 01:53:073 (4) - to get the dash back.
  9. 01:55:473 (1,2,3,4) - I'd reduce the distance between the sliders, the dashes can be a bit hard for newer players.
[Platter]
  1. 00:01:073 (1,2) - This distance can be a bit unexpected, so I'd move (1) a bit to the right to make it more lenient
  2. 00:02:673 (1,2,3) - 00:03:473 (3,4,1) - Distances are weird on this type of patterns as a dash is required, but the second distance isn't large enough so it can be a bit ambiguous whether to dash or not. I'd make the dash requirement a bit more clearer by increasing the second distance, for example, by putting 00:03:273 (2) - on x:248 and 00:04:073 (4) - on x:120. The same thing happens at 00:05:073 (3,4,1,2,3) -
  3. 00:28:073 (3,4) - Same here, I'd increase the distance to make it clearer.
  4. 00:28:673 (5,6,1) - Nearly symmetrical distance that's hard to walk and doesn't induce dashing. It's also weird that you didn't add a dash to 00:29:073 (1) - considering you added a HDash to 00:27:473 (1) - , which is a similar note.
  5. The same thing happens at 00:30:273 (5,6,1) -
  6. 00:34:673 (4,5,1) - Why is the distance (4,5) larger than (5,1) when (1) is clearly the stronger note :(
  7. 00:40:673 (2) - I'd Ctrl+G this to make it more lenient, the distance to it can be a bit unexpected after the previous HDash.
  8. 00:46:673 (3,4) - ^Same thing here
  9. 01:02:673 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - On this part you randomly decided to put a lot of dashes. I'd trim their usage a bit.
  10. 01:13:073 (3,4,1) - Weird placement of distances, as (3,4) is stronger than (4,1) when (1) is clearly the stronger than (4).
  11. 01:18:673 (1,2,3) - One would expect a larger distance between (2,3) than (1,2), I'd even put a dash, considering (3) has a noticeable drum sound.
  12. 01:20:073 (4,1) - I'd add a stronger dash here, similar reasons to the previous suggestion.
  13. 01:21:873 (1,2,3) - More awkward nearly symmetrical distances here weee~
  14. 01:33:073 (1,2,3) - Weirdly distancing, why are you making (1,2) larger than (2,3) when <insert what's previously said>?
[Rain]
  1. 00:29:673 (4,5) - I expected a HDash on this, similar as you did on 00:28:073 (4,5) - .
  2. 00:31:573 (6,7) - Similar stuff here, I expected a HDash based on previous patterns.
  3. 00:36:073 (4,5) - And same stuff.
  4. 01:13:073 (3,4,5,6) - 01:14:673 (3,4,5,6) - I think the distance increase is a bit odd here and not hinted too much by the music. Particularly, the (5,6) distance feels really tight to walk and doesn't make me think I have to dash, so I think moving (5) closer to the other objects is good suck fymmetry
Rilene
2,105 posts
Joined April 2014
Rilene
[Cup]
00:50:673 (2) - Why not 1/2 to represent the beat stronger?
01:03:073 (2) - Move the end a bit to the left? Plain straight slider doesn't seem to fit here.
01:10:273 (1) - Same here and be sure to find similar sliders.

[Salad]
00:07:873 (2) - Move a little bit closer?
00:17:073 (1,2,1) - Horizontal flip?
00:24:273 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe make it like?... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6546615 - Just to give a flow instead of straightforward pause between the beat.
01:25:073 (1,2) - Try scale it down by x0.8 with a selection center.
01:26:673 (1,2) - Same as above.

Just some short mod, hope this helps
SYAHME
1,072 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
SYAHME

ZiRoX wrote:

Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.

[Cup]
  1. 00:53:473 (1) - The repeat here sounds horrible and is really unfitting with the rest of the pattern. I still think a simple 1/2 slider is better, as I suggested originally. - Done, changed.
  2. 00:59:873 (2) - Same here. - ^.
[Salad]
  1. 00:01:073 (1,2) - Starting the song with such a strong dash doesn't really feel adequate to me in a diff that's supposed to introduce dashes. Try slanting (1) a bit so the difficulty of the dash is reduced a bit. - Reduced a little bit.
  2. 00:07:473 (1,2) - As the first appearance of 1/2 dashes, I think these can be a bit overwhelming. Try moving 00:07:873 (2) - to x:240 to decrease the difficulty a bit. - Done, changed.
  3. 00:14:673 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - All these spacings can be a bit quite to walk depending on the player's timing, and the symmetric spacing doesn't induce dashing in any way. I think using ~x1,40 instead of ~x1,60 as a constant spacing is better to make it more walkable. - Changed to x1.40.
  4. 00:53:473 (1,1) - Same comment as in Cup, the repeat makes it sound weird, so I'd change them to single 1/2 sliders. - Done, changed.
  5. 01:19:073 (3) - Same thing here, I think the repeat doesn't sound that good. Furthermore, you omitted it at a similar part at 01:22:473 (2) - , so it makes sense to turn (3) into a single 1/2 slider. - Done, changed.
  6. 01:24:673 (2,1) - Feels like a really harsh dash. I'd reduce the distance a bit. - Reduced a little bit.
  7. 01:25:073 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - All these distances are really harsh to walk (and if you intended them to be dashed it's wrong anyway, having so many dashes in a row). - Changed to x1.40.
  8. 01:51:873 (2,3) - It's weird that you suddenly dropped the dash pattern than you used right before. Maybe you can Ctrl+G (3) and then Ctrl+G 01:53:073 (4) - to get the dash back. - Done, changed.
  9. 01:55:473 (1,2,3,4) - I'd reduce the distance between the sliders, the dashes can be a bit hard for newer players. - Reduced a little bit.

Rilene wrote:

[Cup]
00:50:673 (2) - Why not 1/2 to represent the beat stronger? - Sorry, I map the strongest beat only. I think in the middle of the slider, it is okay not to map it.
01:03:073 (2) - Move the end a bit to the left? The plain straight slider doesn't seem to fit here. - Sorry, I want this to be completely vertical and I think it is not plain, instead it give more variety to the pattern.
01:10:273 (1) - Same here and be sure to find similar sliders. - ^.

[Salad]
00:07:873 (2) - Move a little bit closer? - Done
00:17:073 (1,2,1) - Horizontal flip? - Sorry, the flow will become awkward.
00:24:273 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe make it like?... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6546615 - Just to give a flow instead of straightforward pause between the beat. - Sorry, I like this vertical sliders.
01:25:073 (1,2) - Try scale it down by x0.8 with a selection center. - Done, reduce a little bit.
01:26:673 (1,2) - Same as above. - ^.

Just some short mod, hope this helps - Thanks
Thanks for the mod.
Last edited by SYAHME , edited 4 times in total.
JBHyperion
osu!catch Paragon
3,922 posts
Joined September 2014
JBHyperion

ZiRoX wrote:

Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.

[Rain]
  1. 00:29:673 (4,5) - I expected a HDash on this, similar as you did on 00:28:073 (4,5) - . Hdash is on 00:28:273 (5) - for the strong, held synth sound, which is not present on 00:29:873 (5) -
  2. 00:31:573 (6,7) - Similar stuff here, I expected a HDash based on previous patterns. Gave this a hyper for the strong snare sound
  3. 00:36:073 (4,5) - And same stuff. As before
  4. 01:13:073 (3,4,5,6) - 01:14:673 (3,4,5,6) - I think the distance increase is a bit odd here and not hinted too much by the music. Particularly, the (5,6) distance feels really tight to walk and doesn't make me think I have to dash, so I think moving (5) closer to the other objects is good suck fymmetry Reduced slightly
So basically this mod was "add hyperdash back in to the places where it was removed before" lol

Thanks for the suggestions!

Rain
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SYAHME
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ZiRoX wrote:

Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.


[Platter]
  1. 00:01:073 (1,2) - This distance can be a bit unexpected, so I'd move (1) a bit to the right to make it more lenient Moved without losing dash.
  2. 00:02:673 (1,2,3) - 00:03:473 (3,4,1) - Distances are weird on this type of patterns as a dash is required, but the second distance isn't large enough so it can be a bit ambiguous whether to dash or not. I'd make the dash requirement a bit more clearer by increasing the second distance, for example, by putting 00:03:273 (2) - on x:248 and 00:04:073 (4) - on x:120. The same thing happens at 00:05:073 (3,4,1,2,3) - Sure, applied.
  3. 00:28:073 (3,4) - Same here, I'd increase the distance to make it clearer. Distance increased.
  4. 00:28:673 (5,6,1) - Nearly symmetrical distance that's hard to walk and doesn't induce dashing. It's also weird that you didn't add a dash to 00:29:073 (1) - considering you added a HDash to 00:27:473 (1) - , which is a similar note. Dash added to (1), but the difference is that when I added the HDash, it was due to the end of the stanza.
  5. The same thing happens at 00:30:273 (5,6,1) - Dash added.
  6. 00:34:673 (4,5,1) - Why is the distance (4,5) larger than (5,1) when (1) is clearly the stronger note :( Re-mapped that part for a better structure.
  7. 00:40:673 (2) - I'd Ctrl+G this to make it more lenient, the distance to it can be a bit unexpected after the previous HDash. I prefer to leave it as it is, it fits much better.
  8. 00:46:673 (3,4) - ^Same thing here Same ^.
  9. 01:02:673 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - On this part you randomly decided to put a lot of dashes. I'd trim their usage a bit. Re-mapped too.
  10. 01:13:073 (3,4,1) - Weird placement of distances, as (3,4) is stronger than (4,1) when (1) is clearly the stronger than (4). Re-mapped that part.
  11. 01:18:673 (1,2,3) - One would expect a larger distance between (2,3) than (1,2), I'd even put a dash, considering (3) has a noticeable drum sound. Dash added.
  12. 01:20:073 (4,1) - I'd add a stronger dash here, similar reasons to the previous suggestion. Dash added too.
  13. 01:21:873 (1,2,3) - More awkward nearly symmetrical distances here weee~ Fixed.
  14. 01:33:073 (1,2,3) - Weirdly distancing, why are you making (1,2) larger than (2,3) when <insert what's previously said>? Fixed too.
Thanks for the mod, was helpful!

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SYAHME
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Topic Starter
SYAHME
Updated. Hopefully, it much better now.
Last edited by SYAHME , edited 1 time in total.
ZiRoX
Elite Mapper
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ZiRoX
There are some changes that you said you applied, yet aren't changed in the latest pending version. Please ensure you're actually applying them.

SYAHME wrote:

ZiRoX wrote:

Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.

[Cup]
  1. 00:53:473 (1) - The repeat here sounds horrible and is really unfitting with the rest of the pattern. I still think a simple 1/2 slider is better, as I suggested originally. - Done, changed.
  2. 00:59:873 (2) - Same here. - ^.
[Salad]
  1. 00:53:473 (1,1) - Same comment as in Cup, the repeat makes it sound weird, so I'd change them to single 1/2 sliders. - Done, changed.
  2. 01:19:073 (3) - Same thing here, I think the repeat doesn't sound that good. Furthermore, you omitted it at a similar part at 01:22:473 (2) - , so it makes sense to turn (3) into a single 1/2 slider. - Done, changed.
Thanks for the mod.
Some additional comments:
[Platter]
  1. 00:04:273 (1,2) - Kinda ambiguous distance, I'd move 00:04:273 (1) - to x:272 to reduce it and make it more walkable.
  2. 00:08:873 (6,1,2,3) - The flow on this section is a bit weird, with a lot of direction changes. Maybe you could try the following placement:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:21:673 (4,1) - Quite a harsh dash, and it's really large compared to 00:22:473 (4,1) - when they shouldn't be that different. Try moving (1,2) a bit to the left like:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:28:073 (3,4) - (4) isn't such a strong note, so the dash feels really large. Moving 00:28:273 (4,5,6) - to x:224 plays a lot better.
  5. 00:30:473 (6,1) - This is another dash that feels a bit too large. I think moving 00:30:473 (6) - to x:356 feels a bit better.
  6. 00:33:073 (4,5,6) - Same thing here, a slight reduction to x:96 feels better.
  7. 00:40:673 (2,3) - I will insist that this may be a bit harsh after the HDash, considering it has a few direction changes. Maybe you can move 00:40:673 (2,3,1) - like this:
    SPOILER
  8. 00:47:073 (4,5) - You could try something similar here.
  9. 01:00:073 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I think the vocals are the most prominent thing on this part (and the way the other diffs are mapped also imply this), so all your patterns are shifted 1/2 (i.e. slider heads should fall on red ticks to emphasize the stronger vocals). See JBH's diff for reference on the timeline.
  10. 01:07:273 (4,1) - Extremely large dash, reduce it a bit.
Last edited by ZiRoX , edited 1 time in total.
JBHyperion
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JBHyperion
Discussed a weird slider on my diff with ZiRoX in PM, updated code is below:

Rain
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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Title:BRAVE OUT
TitleUnicode:BRAVE OUT
Artist:nomico / DOWNFORCE
ArtistUnicode:nomico / DOWNFORCE
Creator:SYAHME
Version:HYPERION'S REDEMPTION
Source:beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA
Tags:masayoshi minoshima alstroemeria records electrance MAP DX-5 Qprogue Benami Konami Jusenkyo JBHyperion
BeatmapID:1116202
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SYAHME
1,072 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
SYAHME

ZiRoX wrote:

There are some changes that you said you applied, yet aren't changed in the latest pending version. Please ensure you're actually applying them.

[Cup]
  1. 00:53:473 (1) - The repeat here sounds horrible and is really unfitting with the rest of the pattern. I still think a simple 1/2 slider is better, as I suggested originally. - Done, changed. - Sorry, I'm kinda misunderstood, fixed.
  2. 00:59:873 (2) - Same here. - ^. - Same as above.
[Salad]
  1. 00:53:473 (1,1) - Same comment as in Cup, the repeat makes it sound weird, so I'd change them to single 1/2 sliders. - Done, changed. - Same as Cup.
  2. 01:19:073 (3) - Same thing here, I think the repeat doesn't sound that good. Furthermore, you omitted it at a similar part at 01:22:473 (2) - , so it makes sense to turn (3) into a single 1/2 slider. - Done, changed. - I think I want to keep this 1/1 slider because it fit to me.
Thanks for pointing my mistake.
Last edited by SYAHME , edited 2 times in total.
SYAHME
1,072 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
SYAHME

JBHyperion wrote:

Discussed a weird slider on my diff with ZiRoX in PM, updated code is below:

Rain
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 91473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.599999

[Metadata]
Title:BRAVE OUT
TitleUnicode:BRAVE OUT
Artist:nomico / DOWNFORCE
ArtistUnicode:nomico / DOWNFORCE
Creator:SYAHME
Version:HYPERION'S REDEMPTION
Source:beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA
Tags:masayoshi minoshima alstroemeria records electrance MAP DX-5 Qprogue Benami Konami Jusenkyo JBHyperion
BeatmapID:1116202
BeatmapSetID:469487

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
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Cowboy
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Joined November 2011
Cowboy

ZiRoX wrote:

Some additional comments:
[Platter]
  1. 00:04:273 (1,2) - Kinda ambiguous distance, I'd move 00:04:273 (1) - to x:272 to reduce it and make it more walkable. Sure, moved.
  2. 00:08:873 (6,1,2,3) - The flow on this section is a bit weird, with a lot of direction changes. Maybe you could try the following placement: Ok, I hope I made the suggestion right.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:21:673 (4,1) - Quite a harsh dash, and it's really large compared to 00:22:473 (4,1) - when they shouldn't be that different. Try moving (1,2) a bit to the left like: I don't like, seems a bit stacked.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:28:073 (3,4) - (4) isn't such a strong note, so the dash feels really large. Moving 00:28:273 (4,5,6) - to x:224 plays a lot better. Seems better, applied.
  5. 00:30:473 (6,1) - This is another dash that feels a bit too large. I think moving 00:30:473 (6) - to x:356 feels a bit better. Applied.
  6. 00:33:073 (4,5,6) - Same thing here, a slight reduction to x:96 feels better. Applied, looks better.
  7. 00:40:673 (2,3) - I will insist that this may be a bit harsh after the HDash, considering it has a few direction changes. Maybe you can move 00:40:673 (2,3,1) - like this: I like my current pattern, (feels better to me).
    SPOILER
  8. 00:47:073 (4,5) - You could try something similar here. Same here.
  9. 01:00:073 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I think the vocals are the most prominent thing on this part (and the way the other diffs are mapped also imply this), so all your patterns are shifted 1/2 (i.e. slider heads should fall on red ticks to emphasize the stronger vocals). See JBH's diff for reference on the timeline. I'm not following the vocals, i like as it is, but i'll try.
  10. 01:07:273 (4,1) - Extremely large dash, reduce it a bit.
Thanks for the mod, was helpful as always.

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324,256,68873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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48,192,72073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,224,73673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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83,272,78373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,160,80073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,160,80873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,240,93673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,312,104673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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376,312,105073,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,280,105173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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42,192,108073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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384,312,108873,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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SYAHME
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All diffs updated.
ZiRoX
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Last stuff?

Rename soft-hitfinsh77.wav to soft-hitfinish77.wav, otherwise it won't be recognized.
SYAHME
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ZiRoX wrote:

Last stuff?

Rename soft-hitfinsh77.wav to soft-hitfinish77.wav, otherwise it won't be recognized.
Done. JBH and me doesn't aware the hitsound name, sorry.
JBHyperion
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SYAHME wrote:

ZiRoX wrote:

Last stuff?

Rename soft-hitfinsh77.wav to soft-hitfinish77.wav, otherwise it won't be recognized.
Done. JBH and me doesn't aware the hitsound name, sorry.
finsh best hitsound \:D/
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JBH is so innocent -L_-
ZiRoX
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Sorry for having noticed this just yet and not 8 hours ago. There's two timing points with conflicting settings at 00:01:873 - in JBH's diff, and since he wants to keep the volume difference, the uninherited timing point (red line) should me moved to 00:00:273 - .This has to be done on all diffs to keep the uninherited timing point consistent throughout the set.
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I'm an idiot. Apologies for the trouble SYAHME >.<
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I want to cry lol, done.
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And this is certainly looking better now.
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ZiRoX wrote:

And this is certainly looking better now.
Yeay, thanks ZiRoX
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did you just pop your own bubble by accident lol
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Sinnoh wrote:

did you just pop your own bubble by accident lol
When ZiRoX gives the bubble, the bubble pop still doesn't change and when I want to update, it not stated that it will reset the bubble. I think it is okay maybe.
Hunter Howl
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bubbled huh? i guess it's WAY too late for me to mod this :/

sorry
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raianshimuzu wrote:

bubbled huh? I guess it's WAY too late for me to mod this :/

sorry
It is okay, thanks for coming anyway xd
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raianshimuzu wrote:

bubbled huh? i guess it's WAY too late for me to mod this :/

sorry
What? You shouldn't be afraid to take a look and say your opinion even if it is bubbled or even qualified. Every single line matters as there is no perfect map exist.
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Kurokami wrote:

raianshimuzu wrote:

bubbled huh? I guess it's WAY too late for me to mod this :/

sorry
What? You shouldn't be afraid to take a look and say your opinion even if it is bubbled or even qualified. Every single line matters as there is no perfect map exist.
Yeah, maybe it will help me and increase my star/current priority xd.
Xinnoh
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Star priority isn't going to change anyone's opinion on a CtB set

But for platter, 01:29:773 (3,1) - the spinner starts 1/4 of a beat after the circles. The ranking criteria requires anything under 240 bpm to have a 1/2 break. Just saving you from a DQ or something because it's unrankable so fix that.
JBH's diff has the spinner in the correct spot.
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Thank you Sinnoh
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Xinnoh
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do it yourself, not really a thing that you need to bother him for
a post that size should not be awarded kudosu btw
JBHyperion
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Agreed, revoked.

SYAHME it's literally an objective issue, there is no other way to change it (aside from removing the spinner entirely or something weird like that).
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Jusenkyo, I fixed your spinner according to JBH diff.
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SYAHME wrote:

Jusenkyo, I fixed your spinner according to JBH diff.
Thanks for do that, for some reason i can't receive notifications via e-mail ;w;

So i late to reply.
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hello again, noticed no one else is here so recheck

[Cup]

00:01:873 (3) - Distance increase to this would be nice considering the strength on this note is noticably stronger than 2, so having them the same distance is strange.
00:11:473 (1) - Higher distance could be nice considering how strong this vocal is in particular, x:112 would be nice.
00:33:873 (1,2) - Could do with a higher distance to 1 considering the strength of that note, you even used a finish hitsound on it. Moving this section to x:272 would be good.
00:46:673 (3) - x:432 would be nice on this, just to make the distance change more of a noticable one.
01:00:473 (3,1,2) - Moving this section to x:160 would be nice, to get more distance to 3, as the vocal on there is quite strong but is currently not being emphasised.

[Salad]

00:08:273 (3) - A dash to this for the finish sound would be nice, maybe try x:48?
00:10:673 (1) - Slightly stronger distance for the pitch on this, x:192 would work.
00:24:273 (1,2,1,2,3) - I think these feel a little too far away from each other right now. Maybe try 00:24:273 (1) - on x:144, and 00:25:073 (1) - on x:432, and then 00:25:873 (3) - as a dash on x:96.
00:32:673 (4) - Kinda a difficult distance right now, reduce it slightly to x:336.
00:33:873 (2) - A dash to this would be nice, maybe try x:368?
00:37:073 (1,2,3,4) - Backforth is a little too hard for a salad right now, but you could try moving 2 to x:176, and then add a dash to 4 by moving it to x:96.
00:51:473 (3) - Adding a dash to this by moving it to x:128 would be fitting for the strong sound here.
00:53:073 (2) - Dash to this could be nice too, try x:64 on it.
01:02:073 (1) - Could try some extra emphasis on this for the vocal, x:96 would be fine.
01:18:673 (2) - Add a dash by moving it to x:224?
01:25:073 (1) - Add a dash by moving it to x:240.
01:29:073 (5) - x:160 would be nice here, considering the vocal, a tiny bit more emphasis would be good.
01:33:073 (2) - Move it to x:432, in order to add a dash to it.
01:39:473 (2) - x:384, currently not a dash but it really fits one.
01:45:873 (3) - x:416 would be nice here to ensure a dash.
01:47:473 (3) - Dash would be nice here too, x:64 please.
01:49:073 (3) - Again, x:416 for a dash.
01:50:673 (3) - I'd say for vocal decreasing, it'd be a nice emphasis on that if you didn't do a dash here, just a strong movement, by putting it at x:240.
01:52:273 (3) - Dash to this one would be good however, x:416 again.
01:55:473 (1,2,3,4) - Really unsure about this pattern, it seems far too hard for a salad to me. Maybe try moving 1 to x:96, ctrl+H 2 and move it to x:224, move 3 to x:400, and then 4 to x:272.

[Platter]

00:21:873 (1,2,3,4) - A bit strong of a dash distance to this right now, x:208 would feel more comfortable.
00:25:873 (6) - Dash to this would feel pretty nice, x:176 maybe?
01:05:873 (4) - Try ctrl+G and moving it to x:368, feels really good to dash to this note considering the strength, and also makes the flow into the next HDash more comfortable.
01:13:073 (3) - A bit too strong for a normal dash here, try x:208 instead.
01:17:073 (1) - Movement feels very forced against the wall right now, this breaks the guideline and also is just generally uncomfortable to play. x:464 would feel a lot better.
01:42:673 (1) - Again, it feels forced against the wall, try x:480.
01:55:873 (2) - Add dashes to and from this for the strong drums by doing ctrl+G and moving it to x:240.
01:56:673 (4) - Dash to this to by ctrl+G and moving to x:480?
01:57:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - x:352, a normal dash to it would be really nice.

[Rain]

JBH is an old man.

Call me back.
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- Magic Bomb - wrote:

hello again, noticed no one else is here so recheck
Well, I'm here just don't have time, which sucks. :c Thank you for the check. o/
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SYAHME
I will respond after Jusenkyo, will edit this post later. Thank you - Magic Bomb -

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

hello again, noticed no one else is here so recheck - Yeay

[Cup]

00:01:873 (3) - Distance increase to this would be nice considering the strength on this note is noticeably stronger than 2, so having them the same distance is strange. - Nice, changed the pattern.
00:11:473 (1) - Higher distance could be nice considering how strong this vocal is in particular, x:112 would be nice. - Nice, done
00:33:873 (1,2) - Could do with a higher distance to 1 considering the strength of that note, you even used a finish hitsound on it. Moving this section to x:272 would be good. - Increased the distance but at x:256.
00:46:673 (3) - x:432 would be nice on this, just to make the distance change more of a noticeable one. - Okay
01:00:473 (3,1,2) - Moving this section to x:160 would be nice, to get more distance to 3, as the vocal on there is quite strong but is currently not being emphasized. - Nice, done

[Salad]

00:08:273 (3) - A dash to this for the finished sound would be nice, maybe try x:48? - Increased the distance but at x:64.
00:10:673 (1) - Slightly stronger distance for the pitch on this, x:192 would work. - Okay
00:24:273 (1,2,1,2,3) - I think these feel a little too far away from each other right now. Maybe try 00:24:273 (1) - on x:144, and 00:25:073 (1) - on x:432, and then 00:25:873 (3) - as a dash on x:96. - Nice, done
00:32:673 (4) - Kinda a difficult distance right now, reduce it slightly to x:336. - Nice, done
00:33:873 (2) - A dash to this would be nice, maybe try x:368? - Increased the distance but at x:352.
00:37:073 (1,2,3,4) - Back forth is a little too hard for a salad right now, but you could try moving 2 to x:176, and then add a dash to 4 by moving it to x:96. - Nice, done
00:51:473 (3) - Adding a dash to this by moving it to x:128 would be fitting for the strong sound here. - Nice, done
00:53:073 (2) - Dash to this could be nice too, try x:64 on it. - Increased the distance but at x:96.
01:02:073 (1) - Could try some extra emphasis on this for the vocal, x:96 would be fine. - Okay
01:18:673 (2) - Add a dash by moving it to x:224? - Sorry, it will be awkward to catch.
01:25:073 (1) - Add a dash by moving it to x:240. - Nice, done
01:29:073 (5) - x:160 would be nice here, considering the vocal, a tiny bit more emphasis would be good. - Okay
01:33:073 (2) - Move it to x:432, in order to add a dash to it. - I didn't move 2 but I make 1 more horizontal.
01:39:473 (2) - x:384, currently not a dash but it really fits one. - Increased the distance but at x:368.
01:45:873 (3) - x:416 would be nice here to ensure a dash. - Okay
01:47:473 (3) - Dash would be nice here too, x:64, please. - Okay
01:49:073 (3) - Again, x:416 for a dash. - Okay
01:50:673 (3) - I'd say for vocal decreasing, it'd be a nice emphasis on that if you didn't do a dash here, just a strong movement, by putting it at x:240. - Okay
01:52:273 (3) - Dash to this one would be good, however, x:416 again. - Okay
01:55:473 (1,2,3,4) - Really unsure about this pattern, it seems far too hard for a salad to me. Maybe try moving 1 to x:96, ctrl+H 2 and move it to x:224, move 3 to x:400, and then 4 to x:272. - Okay

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- Magic Bomb - wrote:

hello again, noticed no one else is here so recheck


[Platter]

00:21:873 (1,2,3,4) - A bit strong of a dash distance to this right now, x:208 would feel more comfortable. I can not tell much difference, but hey, I will.
00:25:873 (6) - Dash to this would feel pretty nice, x:176 maybe? Excellent suggestion, there was a jump there.
01:05:873 (4) - Try ctrl+G and moving it to x:368, feels really good to dash to this note considering the strength, and also makes the flow into the next HDash more comfortable. Done, looks better.
01:13:073 (3) - A bit too strong for a normal dash here, try x:208 instead. Well, I exaggerated a bit, so I reduced the distance.
01:17:073 (1) - Movement feels very forced against the wall right now, this breaks the guideline and also is just generally uncomfortable to play. x:464 would feel a lot better. I moved it at the suggested distance, but I made a change in the slider.
01:42:673 (1) - Again, it feels forced against the wall, try x:480. Done.
01:55:873 (2) - Add dashes to and from this for the strong drums by doing ctrl+G and moving it to x:240. Looks better, done.
01:56:673 (4) - Dash to this to by ctrl+G and moving to x:480? Sweeeet, done.
01:57:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - x:352, a normal dash to it would be really nice. It looks pretty good, so the end is more dense.

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Thanks for the mod, was helpful! \o/

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SYAHME
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Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
SYAHME

Jusenkyo wrote:

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

hello again, noticed no one else is here so recheck


[Platter]

00:21:873 (1,2,3,4) - A bit strong of a dash distance to this right now, x:208 would feel more comfortable. I can not tell much difference, but hey, I will.
00:25:873 (6) - Dash to this would feel pretty nice, x:176 maybe? Excellent suggestion, there was a jump there.
01:05:873 (4) - Try ctrl+G and moving it to x:368, feels really good to dash to this note considering the strength, and also makes the flow into the next HDash more comfortable. Done, looks better.
01:13:073 (3) - A bit too strong for a normal dash here, try x:208 instead. Well, I exaggerated a bit, so I reduced the distance.
01:17:073 (1) - Movement feels very forced against the wall right now, this breaks the guideline and also is just generally uncomfortable to play. x:464 would feel a lot better. I moved it at the suggested distance, but I made a change in the slider.
01:42:673 (1) - Again, it feels forced against the wall, try x:480. Done.
01:55:873 (2) - Add dashes to and from this for the strong drums by doing ctrl+G and moving it to x:240. Looks better, done.
01:56:673 (4) - Dash to this to by ctrl+G and moving to x:480? Sweeeet, done.
01:57:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - x:352, a normal dash to it would be really nice. It looks pretty good, so the end is more dense.

Call me back.
Thanks for the mod, was helpful! \o/

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