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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2016-11-10T12:22:36+00:00

I like the changes.

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2016-11-10T12:46:14+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
I like the changes. - <3

Thanks Kurokami

BoberOfDarkness

1,059 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2016-11-10T13:22:35+00:00

As promised, sorry for being late as always ;w;

Cup

00:10:673 (1,2) - swamp NC, new combo should be placed 00:11:473 (2) - because there is new vocals line start and new stanza
00:22:673 - 00:27:473 - I would change pattering here a bit
-00:22:673 (1) - ctrl + g gives some movement between this and previous note
-re:work timeline using 2 1/1 sliders with placing I did here
-delete the 00:27:473 (1) - and place spinner from 00:25:873 - to 00:27:473 -
00:27:473 - 00:37:073 - in this part I don't like the way you place New Combos. In this part of the song placing NC on strongest beats have more sense. For me the place for New Combos are those:
00:29:073 (3) - NC
00:30:673 (2) - NC
00:32:273 (2) - NC
00:33:873 (3) - NC
00:35:473 (2) - NC

Salad

00:50:673 (1,2,3) - feels way to much spaced, try moving 00:51:073 (2) - one grid left is enough to fix the problem
01:23:473 (3,1) - space it a bit more, feels weird without any movement tbh
01:45:473 (2,3) - lower distance by one grid
01:47:073 (2,3) - ^
01:48:673 (2,3) - ^
01:50:273 (2,3) - ^
01:51:873 (2,3) - for consistency that should be more spaced
01:55:473 (1,3) - again one grid less and pattern will be fine

Platter

01:29:873 - here is good place for spinner and all other diffs have spinner placed there, leaving this part unmapped feels at least 'weird' to me

Quote from Guidelines:

Try to have at least one spinner in each difficulty to create variety in the map and fluctuation among scores. However, if a spinner just doesn't fit anywhere in the song, then there's no need to force one.

Rain looks fine to me.

Good luck!

Edit: fixed that blanks xD Sorry I was in hurry

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2016-11-10T22:48:05+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
As promised, sorry for being late as always ;w;

Platter

01:29:873 - here is good place for spinner and all other diffs have spinner placed there, leaving this part unmapped feels at least 'weird' to me Since many ppl asked for a spinner here, i'll put.

Quote from Guidelines:
Try to have at least one spinner in each difficulty to create variety in the map and fluctuation among scores. However, if a spinner just doesn't fit anywhere in the song, then there's no need to force one.

Edit: fixed that blanks xD Sorry I was in hurry

Thanks for the mod.

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 91473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.199998

[Metadata]
Title:BRAVE OUT
TitleUnicode:BRAVE OUT
Artist:nomico / DOWNFORCE
ArtistUnicode:nomico / DOWNFORCE
Creator:SYAHME
Version:JUSEN'S PLATTER
Source:beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA
Tags:masayoshi minoshima alstroemeria records electrance MAP DX-5 Qprogue Benami Konami Jusenkyo JBHyperion
BeatmapID:1116203
BeatmapSetID:469487

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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SYAHME

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2016-11-11T00:57:36+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
As promised, sorry for being late as always ;w; - It's okay.

Cup
00:10:673 (1,2) - swamp NC, new combo should be placed 00:11:473 (2) - because there is new vocals line start and new stanza - Nice, changed.
00:22:673 - 00:27:473 - I would change pattering here a bit - We'll see.
-00:22:673 (1) - ctrl + g gives some movement between this and previous note - Sorry, if I ctrl+g the flow become awkward.
-re:work timeline using 2 1/1 sliders with placing I did here - Sorry, this timeline have a strong beat, so I want to separate them.
-delete the 00:27:473 (1) - and place spinner from 00:25:873 - to 00:27:473 - Sorry, I want to keep this strong note.
00:27:473 - 00:37:073 - in this part I don't like the way you place New Combos. In this part of the song placing NC on strongest beats have more sense. For me the place for New Combos are those:
00:29:073 (3) - NC - Nice, changed.
00:30:673 (2) - NC - ^.
00:32:273 (2) - NC - ^.
00:33:873 (3) - NC - ^.
00:35:473 (2) - NC - ^.

Salad
00:50:673 (1,2,3) - feels way to much spaced, try moving 00:51:073 (2) - one grid left is enough to fix the problem - Done
01:23:473 (3,1) - space it a bit more, feels weird without any movement tbh - Nice, changed.
01:45:473 (2,3) - lower distance by one grid - Done
01:47:073 (2,3) - ^ - ^.
01:48:673 (2,3) - ^ - ^.
01:50:273 (2,3) - ^ - ^.
01:51:873 (2,3) - for consistency that should be more spaced - Sorry, I want this note symmetry with the next one & it fit the vocal.
01:55:473 (1,3) - again one grid less and pattern will be fine - Done

Good luck! - Thanks

Edit: fixed that blanks xD Sorry I was in hurry - It's okay.

Thanks for the mod.

Last edited by SYAHME 2016-11-11T01:24:35+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

SYAHME

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2016-11-11T01:00:02+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:

Platter

01:29:873 - here is good place for spinner and all other diffs have spinner placed there, leaving this part unmapped feels at least 'weird' to me Since many ppl asked for a spinner here, i'll put. - Nice

Quote from Guidelines:

Try to have at least one spinner in each difficulty to create variety in the map and fluctuation among scores. However, if a spinner just doesn't fit anywhere in the song, then there's no need to force one.

Thanks for the mod.

Update

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:BRAVE OUT
Artist:nomico / DOWNFORCE
ArtistUnicode:nomico / DOWNFORCE
Creator:SYAHME
Version:JUSEN'S PLATTER
Source:beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA
Tags:masayoshi minoshima alstroemeria records electrance MAP DX-5 Qprogue Benami Konami Jusenkyo JBHyperion
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SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2016-11-11T01:22:06+00:00

Fix some minor pattern, NC & add spinner in platter.

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2016-11-12T02:05:01+00:00

Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.

[Cup]

00:53:473 (1) - The repeat here sounds horrible and is really unfitting with the rest of the patttern. I still think a simple 1/2 slider is better, as I suggested originally.
00:59:873 (2) - Same here.

[Salad]

00:01:073 (1,2) - Starting the song with such a strong dash doesn't really feel adequate to me in a diff that's supposed to introduce dashes. Try slanting (1) a bit so the difficulty of the dash is reduced a bit.
00:07:473 (1,2) - As the first appearance of 1/2 dashes, I think these can be a bit overwhelming. Try moving 00:07:873 (2) - to x:240 to decrease the difficulty a bit.
00:14:673 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - All these spacings can be a bit quite to walk depending on the player's timing, and the symmetric spacing doesn't induce dashing in any way. I think using ~x1,40 instead of ~x1,60 as a constant spacing is better to make it more walkable.
00:53:473 (1,1) - Same comment as in Cup, the repeat makes it sound weird, so I'd change them to single 1/2 sliders.[/b]
01:19:073 (3) - Same thing here, I think the repeat doesn't sound that good. Furthermore, you omitted it at a similar part at 01:22:473 (2) - , so it makes sense to turn (3) into a single 1/2 slider.
01:24:673 (2,1) - Feels like a really harsh dash. I'd reduce the distance a bit.
01:25:073 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - All these distances are really harsh to walk (and if you intended them to be dashed it's wrong anyway, having so many dashes in a row).
01:51:873 (2,3) - It's weird that you suddenly dropped the dash pattern than you used right before. Maybe you can Ctrl+G (3) and then Ctrl+G 01:53:073 (4) - to get the dash back.
01:55:473 (1,2,3,4) - I'd reduce the distance between the sliders, the dashes can be a bit hard for newer players.

[Platter]

00:01:073 (1,2) - This distance can be a bit unexpected, so I'd move (1) a bit to the right to make it more lenient
00:02:673 (1,2,3) - 00:03:473 (3,4,1) - Distances are weird on this type of patterns as a dash is required, but the second distance isn't large enough so it can be a bit ambiguous whether to dash or not. I'd make the dash requirement a bit more clearer by increasing the second distance, for example, by putting 00:03:273 (2) - on x:248 and 00:04:073 (4) - on x:120. The same thing happens at 00:05:073 (3,4,1,2,3) -
00:28:073 (3,4) - Same here, I'd increase the distance to make it clearer.
00:28:673 (5,6,1) - Nearly symmetrical distance that's hard to walk and doesn't induce dashing. It's also weird that you didn't add a dash to 00:29:073 (1) - considering you added a HDash to 00:27:473 (1) - , which is a similar note.
The same thing happens at 00:30:273 (5,6,1) -
00:34:673 (4,5,1) - Why is the distance (4,5) larger than (5,1) when (1) is clearly the stronger note
00:40:673 (2) - I'd Ctrl+G this to make it more lenient, the distance to it can be a bit unexpected after the previous HDash.
00:46:673 (3,4) - ^Same thing here
01:02:673 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - On this part you randomly decided to put a lot of dashes. I'd trim their usage a bit.
01:13:073 (3,4,1) - Weird placement of distances, as (3,4) is stronger than (4,1) when (1) is clearly the stronger than (4).
01:18:673 (1,2,3) - One would expect a larger distance between (2,3) than (1,2), I'd even put a dash, considering (3) has a noticeable drum sound.
01:20:073 (4,1) - I'd add a stronger dash here, similar reasons to the previous suggestion.
01:21:873 (1,2,3) - More awkward nearly symmetrical distances here weee~
01:33:073 (1,2,3) - Weirdly distancing, why are you making (1,2) larger than (2,3) when <insert what's previously said>?

[Rain]

00:29:673 (4,5) - I expected a HDash on this, similar as you did on 00:28:073 (4,5) - .
00:31:573 (6,7) - Similar stuff here, I expected a HDash based on previous patterns.
00:36:073 (4,5) - And same stuff.
01:13:073 (3,4,5,6) - 01:14:673 (3,4,5,6) - I think the distance increase is a bit odd here and not hinted too much by the music. Particularly, the (5,6) distance feels really tight to walk and doesn't make me think I have to dash, so I think moving (5) closer to the other objects is good suck fymmetry

Rilene

2,105 posts

Joined April 2014

Rilene 2016-11-12T03:48:11+00:00

[Cup]
00:50:673 (2) - Why not 1/2 to represent the beat stronger?
01:03:073 (2) - Move the end a bit to the left? Plain straight slider doesn't seem to fit here.
01:10:273 (1) - Same here and be sure to find similar sliders.

[Salad]
00:07:873 (2) - Move a little bit closer?
00:17:073 (1,2,1) - Horizontal flip?
00:24:273 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe make it like?... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6546615 - Just to give a flow instead of straightforward pause between the beat.
01:25:073 (1,2) - Try scale it down by x0.8 with a selection center.
01:26:673 (1,2) - Same as above.

Just some short mod, hope this helps

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2016-11-12T03:55:59+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.

[Cup]
00:53:473 (1) - The repeat here sounds horrible and is really unfitting with the rest of the pattern. I still think a simple 1/2 slider is better, as I suggested originally. - Done, changed.
00:59:873 (2) - Same here. - ^.
[Salad]
00:01:073 (1,2) - Starting the song with such a strong dash doesn't really feel adequate to me in a diff that's supposed to introduce dashes. Try slanting (1) a bit so the difficulty of the dash is reduced a bit. - Reduced a little bit.
00:07:473 (1,2) - As the first appearance of 1/2 dashes, I think these can be a bit overwhelming. Try moving 00:07:873 (2) - to x:240 to decrease the difficulty a bit. - Done, changed.
00:14:673 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - All these spacings can be a bit quite to walk depending on the player's timing, and the symmetric spacing doesn't induce dashing in any way. I think using ~x1,40 instead of ~x1,60 as a constant spacing is better to make it more walkable. - Changed to x1.40.
00:53:473 (1,1) - Same comment as in Cup, the repeat makes it sound weird, so I'd change them to single 1/2 sliders. - Done, changed.
01:19:073 (3) - Same thing here, I think the repeat doesn't sound that good. Furthermore, you omitted it at a similar part at 01:22:473 (2) - , so it makes sense to turn (3) into a single 1/2 slider. - Done, changed.
01:24:673 (2,1) - Feels like a really harsh dash. I'd reduce the distance a bit. - Reduced a little bit.
01:25:073 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - All these distances are really harsh to walk (and if you intended them to be dashed it's wrong anyway, having so many dashes in a row). - Changed to x1.40.
01:51:873 (2,3) - It's weird that you suddenly dropped the dash pattern than you used right before. Maybe you can Ctrl+G (3) and then Ctrl+G 01:53:073 (4) - to get the dash back. - Done, changed.
01:55:473 (1,2,3,4) - I'd reduce the distance between the sliders, the dashes can be a bit hard for newer players. - Reduced a little bit.

Rilene wrote:
[Cup]
00:50:673 (2) - Why not 1/2 to represent the beat stronger? - Sorry, I map the strongest beat only. I think in the middle of the slider, it is okay not to map it.
01:03:073 (2) - Move the end a bit to the left? The plain straight slider doesn't seem to fit here. - Sorry, I want this to be completely vertical and I think it is not plain, instead it give more variety to the pattern.
01:10:273 (1) - Same here and be sure to find similar sliders. - ^.

[Salad]
00:07:873 (2) - Move a little bit closer? - Done
00:17:073 (1,2,1) - Horizontal flip? - Sorry, the flow will become awkward.
00:24:273 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe make it like?... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6546615 - Just to give a flow instead of straightforward pause between the beat. - Sorry, I like this vertical sliders.
01:25:073 (1,2) - Try scale it down by x0.8 with a selection center. - Done, reduce a little bit.
01:26:673 (1,2) - Same as above. - ^.

Just some short mod, hope this helps - Thanks

Thanks for the mod.

Last edited by SYAHME 2016-11-14T02:27:03+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-11-12T09:43:23+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.

[Rain]
00:29:673 (4,5) - I expected a HDash on this, similar as you did on 00:28:073 (4,5) - . Hdash is on 00:28:273 (5) - for the strong, held synth sound, which is not present on 00:29:873 (5) -
00:31:573 (6,7) - Similar stuff here, I expected a HDash based on previous patterns. Gave this a hyper for the strong snare sound
00:36:073 (4,5) - And same stuff. As before
01:13:073 (3,4,5,6) - 01:14:673 (3,4,5,6) - I think the distance increase is a bit odd here and not hinted too much by the music. Particularly, the (5,6) distance feels really tight to walk and doesn't make me think I have to dash, so I think moving (5) closer to the other objects is good suck fymmetry Reduced slightly

So basically this mod was "add hyperdash back in to the places where it was removed before" lol

Thanks for the suggestions!

Rain

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SYAHME

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Topic Starter

SYAHME 2016-11-12T12:24:26+00:00

Updated, waiting for Jusenkyo.

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2016-11-12T19:15:03+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.

[Platter]
00:01:073 (1,2) - This distance can be a bit unexpected, so I'd move (1) a bit to the right to make it more lenient Moved without losing dash.
00:02:673 (1,2,3) - 00:03:473 (3,4,1) - Distances are weird on this type of patterns as a dash is required, but the second distance isn't large enough so it can be a bit ambiguous whether to dash or not. I'd make the dash requirement a bit more clearer by increasing the second distance, for example, by putting 00:03:273 (2) - on x:248 and 00:04:073 (4) - on x:120. The same thing happens at 00:05:073 (3,4,1,2,3) - Sure, applied.
00:28:073 (3,4) - Same here, I'd increase the distance to make it clearer. Distance increased.
00:28:673 (5,6,1) - Nearly symmetrical distance that's hard to walk and doesn't induce dashing. It's also weird that you didn't add a dash to 00:29:073 (1) - considering you added a HDash to 00:27:473 (1) - , which is a similar note. Dash added to (1), but the difference is that when I added the HDash, it was due to the end of the stanza.
The same thing happens at 00:30:273 (5,6,1) - Dash added.
00:34:673 (4,5,1) - Why is the distance (4,5) larger than (5,1) when (1) is clearly the stronger note Re-mapped that part for a better structure.
00:40:673 (2) - I'd Ctrl+G this to make it more lenient, the distance to it can be a bit unexpected after the previous HDash. I prefer to leave it as it is, it fits much better.
00:46:673 (3,4) - ^Same thing here Same ^.
01:02:673 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - On this part you randomly decided to put a lot of dashes. I'd trim their usage a bit. Re-mapped too.
01:13:073 (3,4,1) - Weird placement of distances, as (3,4) is stronger than (4,1) when (1) is clearly the stronger than (4). Re-mapped that part.
01:18:673 (1,2,3) - One would expect a larger distance between (2,3) than (1,2), I'd even put a dash, considering (3) has a noticeable drum sound. Dash added.
01:20:073 (4,1) - I'd add a stronger dash here, similar reasons to the previous suggestion. Dash added too.
01:21:873 (1,2,3) - More awkward nearly symmetrical distances here weee~ Fixed.
01:33:073 (1,2,3) - Weirdly distancing, why are you making (1,2) larger than (2,3) when <insert what's previously said>? Fixed too.

Thanks for the mod, was helpful!

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SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2016-11-12T19:51:25+00:00

Updated. Hopefully, it much better now.

Last edited by SYAHME 2016-11-21T09:38:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2016-11-20T15:31:17+00:00

There are some changes that you said you applied, yet aren't changed in the latest pending version. Please ensure you're actually applying them.

SYAHME wrote:
ZiRoX wrote:
Manually popping the bubble because I think there are some issues that need to be addressed, which will be marked as bold. All the rest are small suggestions I found while checking for further issues.

[Cup]
00:53:473 (1) - The repeat here sounds horrible and is really unfitting with the rest of the pattern. I still think a simple 1/2 slider is better, as I suggested originally. - Done, changed.
00:59:873 (2) - Same here. - ^.
[Salad]
00:53:473 (1,1) - Same comment as in Cup, the repeat makes it sound weird, so I'd change them to single 1/2 sliders. - Done, changed.
01:19:073 (3) - Same thing here, I think the repeat doesn't sound that good. Furthermore, you omitted it at a similar part at 01:22:473 (2) - , so it makes sense to turn (3) into a single 1/2 slider. - Done, changed.
Thanks for the mod.

Some additional comments:
[Platter]

00:04:273 (1,2) - Kinda ambiguous distance, I'd move 00:04:273 (1) - to x:272 to reduce it and make it more walkable.
00:08:873 (6,1,2,3) - The flow on this section is a bit weird, with a lot of direction changes. Maybe you could try the following placement:
SPOILER
00:21:673 (4,1) - Quite a harsh dash, and it's really large compared to 00:22:473 (4,1) - when they shouldn't be that different. Try moving (1,2) a bit to the left like:
SPOILER
00:28:073 (3,4) - (4) isn't such a strong note, so the dash feels really large. Moving 00:28:273 (4,5,6) - to x:224 plays a lot better.
00:30:473 (6,1) - This is another dash that feels a bit too large. I think moving 00:30:473 (6) - to x:356 feels a bit better.
00:33:073 (4,5,6) - Same thing here, a slight reduction to x:96 feels better.
00:40:673 (2,3) - I will insist that this may be a bit harsh after the HDash, considering it has a few direction changes. Maybe you can move 00:40:673 (2,3,1) - like this:
SPOILER
00:47:073 (4,5) - You could try something similar here.
01:00:073 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I think the vocals are the most prominent thing on this part (and the way the other diffs are mapped also imply this), so all your patterns are shifted 1/2 (i.e. slider heads should fall on red ticks to emphasize the stronger vocals). See JBH's diff for reference on the timeline.
01:07:273 (4,1) - Extremely large dash, reduce it a bit.

Last edited by ZiRoX 2016-11-20T15:43:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-11-20T15:43:15+00:00

Discussed a weird slider on my diff with ZiRoX in PM, updated code is below:

Rain

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 91473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.599999

[Metadata]
Title:BRAVE OUT
TitleUnicode:BRAVE OUT
Artist:nomico / DOWNFORCE
ArtistUnicode:nomico / DOWNFORCE
Creator:SYAHME
Version:HYPERION'S REDEMPTION
Source:beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA
Tags:masayoshi minoshima alstroemeria records electrance MAP DX-5 Qprogue Benami Konami Jusenkyo JBHyperion
BeatmapID:1116202
BeatmapSetID:469487

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SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2016-11-21T09:46:45+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
There are some changes that you said you applied, yet aren't changed in the latest pending version. Please ensure you're actually applying them.

[Cup]
00:53:473 (1) - The repeat here sounds horrible and is really unfitting with the rest of the pattern. I still think a simple 1/2 slider is better, as I suggested originally. - Done, changed. - Sorry, I'm kinda misunderstood, fixed.
00:59:873 (2) - Same here. - ^. - Same as above.
[Salad]
00:53:473 (1,1) - Same comment as in Cup, the repeat makes it sound weird, so I'd change them to single 1/2 sliders. - Done, changed. - Same as Cup.
01:19:073 (3) - Same thing here, I think the repeat doesn't sound that good. Furthermore, you omitted it at a similar part at 01:22:473 (2) - , so it makes sense to turn (3) into a single 1/2 slider. - Done, changed. - I think I want to keep this 1/1 slider because it fit to me.

Thanks for pointing my mistake.

Last edited by SYAHME 2016-11-21T10:17:15+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2016-11-21T09:50:23+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:

Discussed a weird slider on my diff with ZiRoX in PM, updated code is below:

Rain

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 91473
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:BRAVE OUT
Artist:nomico / DOWNFORCE
ArtistUnicode:nomico / DOWNFORCE
Creator:SYAHME
Version:HYPERION'S REDEMPTION
Source:beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA
Tags:masayoshi minoshima alstroemeria records electrance MAP DX-5 Qprogue Benami Konami Jusenkyo JBHyperion
BeatmapID:1116202
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Cowboy

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Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2016-11-25T03:31:23+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Some additional comments:
[Platter]
00:04:273 (1,2) - Kinda ambiguous distance, I'd move 00:04:273 (1) - to x:272 to reduce it and make it more walkable. Sure, moved.
00:08:873 (6,1,2,3) - The flow on this section is a bit weird, with a lot of direction changes. Maybe you could try the following placement: Ok, I hope I made the suggestion right.
SPOILER
00:21:673 (4,1) - Quite a harsh dash, and it's really large compared to 00:22:473 (4,1) - when they shouldn't be that different. Try moving (1,2) a bit to the left like: I don't like, seems a bit stacked.
SPOILER
00:28:073 (3,4) - (4) isn't such a strong note, so the dash feels really large. Moving 00:28:273 (4,5,6) - to x:224 plays a lot better. Seems better, applied.
00:30:473 (6,1) - This is another dash that feels a bit too large. I think moving 00:30:473 (6) - to x:356 feels a bit better. Applied.
00:33:073 (4,5,6) - Same thing here, a slight reduction to x:96 feels better. Applied, looks better.
00:40:673 (2,3) - I will insist that this may be a bit harsh after the HDash, considering it has a few direction changes. Maybe you can move 00:40:673 (2,3,1) - like this: I like my current pattern, (feels better to me).
SPOILER
00:47:073 (4,5) - You could try something similar here. Same here.
01:00:073 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I think the vocals are the most prominent thing on this part (and the way the other diffs are mapped also imply this), so all your patterns are shifted 1/2 (i.e. slider heads should fall on red ticks to emphasize the stronger vocals). See JBH's diff for reference on the timeline. I'm not following the vocals, i like as it is, but i'll try.
01:07:273 (4,1) - Extremely large dash, reduce it a bit.

Thanks for the mod, was helpful as always.

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SYAHME

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SYAHME 2016-11-25T06:15:31+00:00

All diffs updated.

ZiRoX

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ZiRoX 2016-11-27T14:09:19+00:00

Last stuff?

Rename soft-hitfinsh77.wav to soft-hitfinish77.wav, otherwise it won't be recognized.

SYAHME

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SYAHME 2016-11-27T16:03:48+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Last stuff?

Rename soft-hitfinsh77.wav to soft-hitfinish77.wav, otherwise it won't be recognized.

Done. JBH and me doesn't aware the hitsound name, sorry.

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-11-27T17:16:53+00:00

SYAHME wrote:
ZiRoX wrote:
Last stuff?

Rename soft-hitfinsh77.wav to soft-hitfinish77.wav, otherwise it won't be recognized.
Done. JBH and me doesn't aware the hitsound name, sorry.

finsh best hitsound \:D/

SYAHME

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SYAHME 2016-11-27T17:36:19+00:00

JBH is so innocent -L_-

ZiRoX

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ZiRoX 2016-11-27T21:54:01+00:00

Sorry for having noticed this just yet and not 8 hours ago. There's two timing points with conflicting settings at 00:01:873 - in JBH's diff, and since he wants to keep the volume difference, the uninherited timing point (red line) should me moved to 00:00:273 - .This has to be done on all diffs to keep the uninherited timing point consistent throughout the set.

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-11-27T21:55:13+00:00

I'm an idiot. Apologies for the trouble SYAHME >.<

SYAHME

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SYAHME 2016-11-28T01:39:43+00:00

I want to cry lol, done.

ZiRoX

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ZiRoX 2016-11-28T23:38:48+00:00

And this is certainly looking better now.

SYAHME

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SYAHME 2016-11-29T00:28:41+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
And this is certainly looking better now.

Yeay, thanks ZiRoX

Xinnoh

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Xinnoh 2016-11-30T05:53:33+00:00

did you just pop your own bubble by accident lol

SYAHME

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SYAHME 2016-11-30T06:41:16+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
did you just pop your own bubble by accident lol

When ZiRoX gives the bubble, the bubble pop still doesn't change and when I want to update, it not stated that it will reset the bubble. I think it is okay maybe.

Hunter Howl

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Hunter Howl 2016-11-30T07:22:27+00:00

bubbled huh? i guess it's WAY too late for me to mod this :/

sorry

SYAHME

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SYAHME 2016-11-30T08:19:59+00:00

raianshimuzu wrote:
bubbled huh? I guess it's WAY too late for me to mod this :/

sorry

It is okay, thanks for coming anyway xd

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2016-11-30T14:20:32+00:00

raianshimuzu wrote:
bubbled huh? i guess it's WAY too late for me to mod this :/

sorry

What? You shouldn't be afraid to take a look and say your opinion even if it is bubbled or even qualified. Every single line matters as there is no perfect map exist.

SYAHME

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SYAHME 2016-11-30T14:30:32+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
raianshimuzu wrote:
bubbled huh? I guess it's WAY too late for me to mod this :/

sorry
What? You shouldn't be afraid to take a look and say your opinion even if it is bubbled or even qualified. Every single line matters as there is no perfect map exist.

Yeah, maybe it will help me and increase my star/current priority xd.

Xinnoh

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Xinnoh 2016-12-01T09:06:44+00:00

Star priority isn't going to change anyone's opinion on a CtB set

But for platter, 01:29:773 (3,1) - the spinner starts 1/4 of a beat after the circles. The ranking criteria requires anything under 240 bpm to have a 1/2 break. Just saving you from a DQ or something because it's unrankable so fix that.
JBH's diff has the spinner in the correct spot.

SYAHME

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SYAHME 2016-12-01T11:55:14+00:00

Thank you Sinnoh

Last edited by SYAHME 2016-12-01T15:43:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinnoh

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Xinnoh 2016-12-01T12:33:58+00:00

do it yourself, not really a thing that you need to bother him for
a post that size should not be awarded kudosu btw

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-12-01T13:43:17+00:00

Agreed, revoked.

SYAHME it's literally an objective issue, there is no other way to change it (aside from removing the spinner entirely or something weird like that).

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SYAHME 2016-12-01T15:43:03+00:00

Jusenkyo, I fixed your spinner according to JBH diff.

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