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01:48:460 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Stream after jump part starts in strange and uncomfortable place
02:03:630 (2) - It could be a double on a slider
02:49:482 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This pattern could be more symmetrical
03:35:505 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - In my opinion spacing on these jumps is quite random
03:37:892 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Maybe try to move entire stream to the right side
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Wilchq wrote:

01:48:460 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Stream after jump part starts in strange and uncomfortable place reworked
02:03:630 (2) - It could be a double on a slider probably fixed if i know what you mean
02:49:482 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This pattern could be more symmetrical fixed
03:35:505 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - In my opinion spacing on these jumps is quite random tried doing something like higher-lower etc
03:37:892 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Maybe try to move entire stream to the right side made blanket
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XVoIR mogę dać Ci normala do zestawiku? :V
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Jak będzie dobry to nawet dwa wezmę!
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Powinno być git, ale jak to ja pewnie jak zwykle coś przeoczyłam. :V
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Title:Mloda krew
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Artist:ZBUKU ft. Sliwa, Sztoss
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Sorka, pomyliłam się T.T
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[Young Blood]
00:49:056 (8) - this entire thing shouldn't exist as a stream. If you want to capitalise on the lyrics, then make it a triple instead and delete the note I highlighted.
00:51:357 (1) - passive slider doesn't fit here
00:52:380 (2) - ^
00:53:573 (1,2) - these kind of patterns really trouble the map and make it too simple and overall too gimmicky spacing-wise. For example, ctrl+g here would make spacing work with the spacing you used before and after this pattern. Such inconsistencies really plague the whole map. At least ctrl+g makes this kind of play dynamic, while what you have now is only gimmicky and cancer at best.
00:55:278 (2,3) - ^ read above
00:57:494 (8,1) - ^
01:04:483 (1,2,1,2) - this is optional, but the rhythm feels like this part has a stronger beat than others. consider downscaling 01:04:143 (1,2) - to make 01:04:483 (1,2,1,2) feel more special.
01:08:403 (5,1) - nothing in the music that justifies this kind of flow and this kind of spacing.
01:28:005 (2) - this tick is undermapped. Tip: capitalise on such weird rhythm placements, it could give your map some sort of flavour, right now it's just 2/4 tick sliders and hitcircles, only the jumps are fun.
01:32:267 - overmapped, this beat does not exist in the song
01:48:460 (1,5,6,7,8) - I agree with such spacing, but the flow is just wrong, make it more lineair or something
01:51:784 - undermapped blue tick
01:53:914 - delete this and make it two doubles. This tick is overmapped.
01:55:534 - undermapped
02:09:085 (2,3,4) - make it kick sliders. I don't think that is the optimal kick slider pattern here, but there definitely has to be more kicksliders in ( 02:08:914 (1) - 02:09:767 (2) - )
02:10:960 (5,6,7,8) - too cruel, make it a half-circle or something, or at least something that is much closer to that than a whirl thing.
02:29:880 (6,1) - this overlap isn't too good
02:30:050 (7,2) - neither is this one
02:31:755 (1,2,3) - you can do something much more fun with the "brboj brboj" vocal line instead of playing. However, if you want to map according to the slowing-down-beat, you have to extend 02:32:437 (3) - slider to 02:33:034 -
02:58:005 (2,3) - just a reminder about spacing and flow which you have to fix, way too many of such inconsistencies lie throughout the song
03:15:392 (1,2,3,4) - this goes over the line as too cruel because if you look at the follow points, you can see that instead of jumping to the left, you suddenly have to start jumping to the right
03:15:903 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I just can't explain how wrong this is, I hope someone else can do that for me. We have a jump that is anti-flow, very agile and after it we have a stream that is by itself very antiflow and which makes the player change his cursor speed drastically just by starting it. The jump is already pretty bad, put an anti-flow stream on an anti-flow jump and you get this pattern. Change it and make it more flow-sufficient.
03:38:595 - optional spinner

[Insane]

Overall has little to no problems and fewer inconsistencies, all problems in this map are because of rhythm overmaps/undermaps from Young Blood, 00:48:801 (3,4,5,6) - this stream for example. Not going to go over the entire map.

[Overall thoughts]

Love the song and I think Young Blood is fun, however, it lacks uniqueness out of jump sections and it has quite a few inconsistencies and flow errors that have to be fixed if you want to assure the quality of it to get it ranked. Good luck, commonwealth brother ;)
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Haganenno wrote:

[Young Blood]
00:49:056 (8) - this entire thing shouldn't exist as a stream. If you want to capitalise on the lyrics, then make it a triple instead and delete the note I highlighted. did it like that to break 1/2 only but i'll think about it later
00:51:357 (1) - passive slider doesn't fit here CTRL+G
00:52:380 (2) - ^ nah
00:53:573 (1,2) - these kind of patterns really trouble the map and make it too simple and overall too gimmicky spacing-wise. For example, ctrl+g here would make spacing work with the spacing you used before and after this pattern. Such inconsistencies really plague the whole map. At least ctrl+g makes this kind of play dynamic, while what you have now is only gimmicky and cancer at best.
00:55:278 (2,3) - ^ read above
00:57:494 (8,1) - ^
01:04:483 (1,2,1,2) - this is optional, but the rhythm feels like this part has a stronger beat than others. consider downscaling 01:04:143 (1,2) - to make 01:04:483 (1,2,1,2) feel more special. downscaled to 0.9x
01:08:403 (5,1) - nothing in the music that justifies this kind of flow and this kind of spacing. there's word "FLOW" or something like that
01:28:005 (2) - this tick is undermapped. Tip: capitalise on such weird rhythm placements, it could give your map some sort of flavour, right now it's just 2/4 tick sliders and hitcircles, only the jumps are fun.
01:32:267 - overmapped, this beat does not exist in the song but there's PAmiętam
01:48:460 (1,5,6,7,8) - I agree with such spacing, but the flow is just wrong, make it more lineair or something imo it's fine
01:51:784 - undermapped blue tick idk if did right
01:53:914 - delete this and make it two doubles. This tick is overmapped. mixed mapping for vocal/beat :^)
01:55:534 - undermapped did triple but it doesn't feels fine tho
02:09:085 (2,3,4) - make it kick sliders. I don't think that is the optimal kick slider pattern here, but there definitely has to be more kicksliders in ( 02:08:914 (1) - 02:09:767 (2) - ) tbh I have problem with this coz it highlights idk what
02:10:960 (5,6,7,8) - too cruel, make it a half-circle or something, or at least something that is much closer to that than a whirl thing. IMO not cruel
02:29:880 (6,1) - this overlap isn't too good
02:30:050 (7,2) - neither is this one moved this whole star away lol
02:31:755 (1,2,3) - you can do something much more fun with the "brboj brboj" vocal line instead of playing. However, if you want to map according to the slowing-down-beat, you have to extend 02:32:437 (3) - slider to 02:33:034 - extended!
02:58:005 (2,3) - just a reminder about spacing and flow which you have to fix, way too many of such inconsistencies lie throughout the song
03:15:392 (1,2,3,4) - this goes over the line as too cruel because if you look at the follow points, you can see that instead of jumping to the left, you suddenly have to start jumping to the right IMO it works fine as rotating square soo
03:15:903 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I just can't explain how wrong this is, I hope someone else can do that for me. We have a jump that is anti-flow, very agile and after it we have a stream that is by itself very antiflow and which makes the player change his cursor speed drastically just by starting it. The jump is already pretty bad, put an anti-flow stream on an anti-flow jump and you get this pattern. Change it and make it more flow-sufficient. uh I don't have any problem with this and is fun to play for me
03:38:595 - optional spinner not sure

[Insane]

Overall has little to no problems and fewer inconsistencies, all problems in this map are because of rhythm overmaps/undermaps from Young Blood, 00:48:801 (3,4,5,6) - this stream for example. Not going to go over the entire map.

[Overall thoughts]

Love the song and I think Young Blood is fun, however, it lacks uniqueness out of jump sections and it has quite a few inconsistencies and flow errors that have to be fixed if you want to assure the quality of it to get it ranked. Good luck, commonwealth brother ;)
thank mr trump! also if nothing is wrote next to suggestion then i just didn't know how to approach it
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thank mr trump! also if nothing is wrote next to suggestion then i just didn't know how to approach it
What I mean is that your map has standard/high spacing yet you throw in some 0.9x distance snap notes into the mix as well. While that plays ok MOST of the time, sometimes it just doesn't fit. I will throw in some examples.

02:11:301 (1,2,3) - not only this straight jump kills the momentum (watch a video about it here:
), the sudden spacing change at 02:11:642 (2,3) - massacres the momentum and finishes the job. The spacing is bad and 180 degrees jump is also bad. while this is not perfect, this definitely plays out infinite times better.
00:51:528 (3) - another example. You just CTRL+G'd it after my mod and didn't finish the job. The difference in spacing between 00:51:528 (3,4,5) - and 00:52:210 (1,2,3,4) - is 1.4x - the music is static, it doesn't change in this part, yet you managed to incorporate jumps of a difference of 1.4x distance snap into one second.
00:55:278 (2,3) - I also tagged this in my mod. Not only is the placement of (3) incorrect, there is also a difference of x1.8 distance snap while the music and the context doesn't allow it. Ctrl+G would partially fix it, but some patterns in your map have to be remapped instead of just ctrl+g'd because of it. For example, 00:57:494 (8,1) - this also feels terrible, the angle and the spacing has to be changed, ctrl+g would make it worse.

Hope that explains it somehow, as it's really hard to explain :D

Edit:
02:34:142 (5) - this slider is out of play area btw
And put "Polish" as a tag for the song
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oh well
I'll try to fix this all when I get back home (about 2 weeks) coz i'm going to be away from home
thanks!
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gl, nice map
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IS THIS GOING FOR RANK????
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i would like to
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01:00:393 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Special
01:22:210 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Kneesocks
02:27:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - STAR PLATINUM

you're the best holy shit i love you
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thank fan
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puki co jedyna twoja mapa ktora mi sie podoba hehs szkoda że znam tylko dwie
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bez kd, mod może kiedy indziej

Oprocz wersu sztosa (śliwy?) gdzie dajesz 1/4 do rapu, nie ma nic co usprawiedliwiałoby streamy, mimo ze pasuja one do mapy i czynia ją jeszcze bardziej zajebistą to rankowanie bedzie raczej niemożliwe.
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Zajebiste ziomek :)
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I love this song, pls rank it!!
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Hejka, mała porada ode mnie, bo mogę. \o3o/

Do tagów prosiłbym wstawić "Polish" żeby wiadomo było że polska nuta, no i oczywiście obowiązkowo trzeba będzie wstawić nazwy "Krfawy", "LukerMaster" oraz "ReFaller" do tagów bo robimy poziomy. Oczywiście można dać tagi dla gatunku "rap", nie wiem czy "trap" pasuje czy nie, no ale, nie wiem (bez "hip-hop" bo wiadomo, ustawi się na forum). Do można wstawić tytuł albumu/EPki z której pochodzi nutka, jeżeli nuta znajduje się na jakimś albumie czy też na jakiejś EPce.

Luker, możesz z łaski swojej zrobić 01:28:346 (1) - aby ten moment był bardziej 1/2 a nie 3/4? Wiem że teraz jest pod wokal, ale rytm przez to cierpi i to boli moją duszę tak bardzo i moje farmokoro również. ;_; 01:32:437 (2) - To jest spoko i pasuje moim zdaniem bo rytm nie jest tak słyszalny jak wokale, 01:33:119 (1) - ale tutaj już jednak rytm jest bardziej zauważalny i osobiście bym znowu dał 1/2 a nie 3/4, itd. :<

XVoiR: 01:31:414 (5) - weź to przesuń tutaj czasowo: 01:31:585 () - a 01:31:414 () - tam weź daj kółko bo gra się kijowo i ta pustka powoduje u mnie depresję i w ogóle kij i tak dalej... no czujesz, co nie? ;_; 02:33:119 (4,1) - A to bym zamienił kolejnością żeby flow był milszy. :3

W ogóle osobiście polecam użyć w całym secie kolorów customowych, włącznie z kolorem dla sliderów. W moim diffie można zobaczyć jak wygląda to wszystko i daję kod do takich kolorów jakich tam użyłem:
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Combo2 : 166,87,89
Combo3 : 176,104,156
SliderTrackOverride : 85,85,125
Poniżej daję kod do normala:
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 87668
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.3
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Mloda krew
TitleUnicode:Młoda krew
Artist:ZBUKU ft. Sliwa, Sztoss
ArtistUnicode:ZBUKU ft. Śliwa, Sztoss
Creator:XVoIR
Version:Krfawy's Normal
Source:
Tags:
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BeatmapSetID:469377

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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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100,335,113232,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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157,8,114937,5,4,0:2:0:0:
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251,91,120392,5,4,0:2:0:0:
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106,278,123460,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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169,280,132664,2,0,P|241:246|259:169,1,160,2|10,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,93,133687,1,2,0:2:0:0:
186,53,134028,2,0,B|147:47|147:47|102:53,2,79.9999999999999,2|2|8,0:2|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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335,88,135392,1,2,1:2:0:0:
407,122,135732,1,2,0:0:0:0:
445,192,136073,2,0,P|454:220|442:290,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|4,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,192,137437,5,10,0:0:0:0:
407,122,137778,1,2,0:2:0:0:
335,88,138119,2,0,B|319:83|319:83|301:34|242:10|202:23,1,160,2|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,67,139142,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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101,223,139823,1,2,0:0:0:0:
95,302,140164,1,8,0:0:0:0:
47,366,140505,1,2,0:0:0:0:
15,292,140846,2,0,P|39:189|26:118,1,160,2|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,56,141869,1,2,0:2:0:0:
97,20,142210,5,4,0:2:0:0:
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216,99,143573,2,0,B|188:174|188:174|174:193|174:193|155:245,2,160,2|10|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,29,145278,1,2,0:2:0:0:
336,29,145619,2,0,P|362:58|374:96,1,79.9999999999999,10|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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218,176,147664,6,0,B|202:260|116:288|116:288|154:312|154:312|218:288|282:264|307:318|341:307|341:307|371:328|440:335|473:259,1,559.999999999999,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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193,57,151755,2,0,P|184:39|178:21,1,40,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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49,280,155847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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164,130,156528,2,0,P|198:98|237:70,2,95.9999970703125,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,162324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,226,162665,2,0,P|402:295|350:369,2,191.999994140625,2|10|6,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,226,164710,5,10,0:0:0:0:
266,173,165051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,77,165392,2,0,B|324:59|324:59|352:60|352:60|445:35,1,191.999994140625,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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500,206,166756,2,0,P|499:259|481:303,2,95.9999970703125,2|0|10,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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409,107,168119,2,0,B|382:166|382:166|414:309,1,191.999994140625,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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1,217,171869,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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177,241,175619,1,10,0:0:0:0:
211,169,175960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,135,176301,2,0,B|362:135|362:135|385:142|385:142|441:142,1,160,2|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,182,177323,1,2,0:2:0:0:
470,250,177664,2,0,P|460:292|463:329,2,79.9999999999999,2|2|10,0:2|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,182,178687,1,2,0:2:0:0:
470,114,179028,2,0,B|446:106|402:106|390:126|366:122|366:122|345:107|345:107|318:98,1,160,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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193,98,180392,1,4,0:2:0:0:
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256,53,184142,1,2,0:2:0:0:
332,74,184482,2,0,P|362:146|304:216,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,226,185505,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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169,190,186528,1,10,0:0:0:0:
205,119,186869,1,2,0:2:0:0:
282,138,187210,2,0,B|324:151|372:151|348:126|396:126|438:138,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,219,189596,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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72,191,197437,5,10,0:0:0:0:
48,267,197778,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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320,334,199142,1,2,0:2:0:0:
380,282,199482,2,0,P|384:229|374:197,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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285,73,200505,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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487,174,201869,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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183,322,203573,2,0,B|69:276|69:276|40:253,1,160,2|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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111,288,206642,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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346,294,208346,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,310,208687,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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139,240,218573,5,12,2:1:0:0:


Poproszę o kudosuczkę za bycie pomocnym. XD

Ciekawe czy ktoś w ogóle będzie modował mojego normala. D:
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