Nana Mizuki - VIRGIN CODE · forum

_DT3

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-06-15T15:12:30+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 21, 2016 at 11:55:50 PM

Artist: Nana Mizuki
Title: VIRGIN CODE
Tags: SUPERNAL LIBERTY Elements Garden 上松範康 Hibiki 藤田淳平 Bara- Collab TurtleStuffs
BPM: 212
Filesize: 10989kb
Play Time: 05:41
Difficulties Available:

Blooming Dream (1.79 stars, 404 notes)

Download: Nana Mizuki - VIRGIN CODE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Collab with Bara-!

Constant DS + SV vs. Changing DS + SV

Blooming Dream - 100% done! Ready for Mods!

Modders

RVMathew Wishkey DeRandom Otaku/Renst_stefan SherryCherry Hokichi lazyboy007 Xilver 100bit H4TSUN3 M1KU FoxyGrandpa -Space-23konG Electoz

Last edited by _DT3 2016-07-21T21:56:32+00:00, edited 16 times in total.

RVMathew

985 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2016-06-20T06:21:33+00:00

Hi there. NM request.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

Before I start, the slider art is nice. Kudos for that.

General
1) Hitsounds: Remove either the sliderslide hitsound or the slidertick hitsound. When I was playing it, I felt that the slidertick hitsound was annoying to hear, so I would remove that one.

2) 00:22:021 To me the hitfinish doesn't seem right, but it is not much of a concern yet.

3) Add Bara- to tags if he collabing.

Blooming Dream
1) 00:38:436 (2) - Are the hitsounds here supposed to be like that? What I mean is that shouldn't the clap be at the end of slider 2 instead of at the head? Right now it feels a bit weird playing that, but it may have been intentional.

2) 00:42:115 (4) - Missing a clap? I assume that may be the case considering for 00:40:134 (1,2) - you added a hitclap on note 2.

3) 00:46:785 (1) - Being Mr.Anal here; shift the slider 1 pixel down so it is perfectly tucked underneath the end of 00:46:360 (3).

4) 00:59:379 When I was playing this, the slider speed was nice and quick, and it was fun until you decide to stop mapping here, which just kills all the excitement. I think it is much better to map this whole area.

5) 01:57:115 till the chorus. Note how the music here is much quieter and calmer compared to the earlier section? You can try using a slower slider velocity multiplier for this section, say 0.5x and make the volume around 40-50%, to reflect the calm part of the song.

6) 02:22:021 (1) - You are missing a finish here.

7) 02:51:461 Again the empty area. I think the break time for this section is too long, so map some parts as you see fit. I am interested as to why you do not map this area though?

8) 03:12:964 to 03:26:266 vs. 01:35:040 to 01:48:059. For the first section, you use 0.8x slider velocity, but for the second section, the music is the same as the first section, but you use a much slower slider velocity (0.5x). Is there a reason why you did that, or was it an oversight?

9) 03:42:257 (1) - Shift it 1 pixel up so it is tucked neatly underneath the sliderend of the previous slider.

10) 03:52:587 (2,3) - Alter slider 3 and 2 so it looks like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5431582. This is a design suggestion.

11) 04:45:794 (3) - Not an even blanket imo.

12) 05:06:030 (1) - Shift it 1 pixel down.

13) 05:36:330 (1) - Silence the end of the spinner.

Final Thoughts
I found the rhythm to be solid, and the slider art is really nice imo. However, there are some things that irk me, such as not mapping certain parts of the song, which do deserved to be map. Overall though, this is good stuff.

Good luck, and sorry if the mod did not help (I have not modded in a long time).

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-06-20T11:25:50+00:00

Thanks RV again

I'll review the mod and update when I get back on osu.
But just a few things to say:
1. The empty parts are most probably just unfinished parts on my behalf.
2. I know, the HS os a mess, I'll fix it
3. I'll also fix the SV, was a mistake on my behalf

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2016-06-20T15:04:19+00:00

RVMathew wrote:
Blooming Dream
8) 03:12:964 to 03:26:266 vs. 01:35:040 to 01:48:059. For the first section, you use 0.8x slider velocity, but for the second section, the music is the same as the first section, but you use a much slower slider velocity (0.5x). Is there a reason why you did that, or was it an oversight? I prefer lower SV high DS, as opposed to _DT3. This part is made by me, and I asked him if I could use SV changes for this reason, and he agreed

9) 03:42:257 (1) - Shift it 1 pixel up so it is tucked neatly underneath the sliderend of the previous slider.

10) 03:52:587 (2,3) - Alter slider 3 and 2 so it looks like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5431582. This is a design suggestion.

11) 04:45:794 (3) - Not an even blanket imo.

12) 05:06:030 (1) - Shift it 1 pixel down.

13) 05:36:330 (1) - Silence the end of the spinner.

Final Thoughts
I found the rhythm to be solid, and the slider art is really nice imo. However, there are some things that irk me, such as not mapping certain parts of the song, which do deserved to be map. Overall though, this is good stuff.

Good luck, and sorry if the mod did not help (I have not modded in a long time).

Fixed all unmentioned, thanks!

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263,91,323436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,47,323719,2,8,B|399:40|399:40|460:41,1,105.000004005432
477,136,324285,6,0,B|481:162|471:190|455:220|423:236|373:248|329:199|329:199|258:143|188:196|155:254|186:298|202:340|234:359|281:360|346:352|341:307|341:307|296:290|276:264,1,700,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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277,54,328247,2,0,P|280:88|274:123,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,194,328813,2,0,P|283:209|356:147,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,113,330511,2,0,L|76:176,1,35,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,147,330936,6,0,P|124:147|183:196,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,284,331926,6,0,P|328:292|363:289,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,249,332526,1,2,0:0:0:0:
425,249,332692,2,0,P|437:295|407:353,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,352,333374,2,0,L|334:353,1,35,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,314,333895,6,0,L|199:313,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,245,334821,6,0,P|106:198|111:166,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,132,335626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,86,335978,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,336330,12,0,341625,0:0:0:0:

DT, can you please let the spinner fade out (so I don't need to send over all green lines

)?

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-06-20T15:59:53+00:00

RVMathew wrote:
Hi there. NM request.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

Before I start, the slider art is nice. Kudos for that.

General
1) Hitsounds: Remove either the sliderslide hitsound or the slidertick hitsound. When I was playing it, I felt that the slidertick hitsound was annoying to hear, so I would remove that one. I'll consider it

2) 00:22:021 To me the hitfinish doesn't seem right, but it is not much of a concern yet. I feel like the hitfinish is a rather calm one so that's why I used it in a hard part

3) Add Bara- to tags if he collabing. I was just waiting for KwaN to tell me the correct metadata

Blooming Dream
1) 00:38:436 (2) - Are the hitsounds here supposed to be like that? What I mean is that shouldn't the clap be at the end of slider 2 instead of at the head? Right now it feels a bit weird playing that, but it may have been intentional. It was intentional to kinda match the sounds of 00:39:002 (3)

2) 00:42:115 (4) - Missing a clap? I assume that may be the case considering for 00:40:134 (1,2) - you added a hitclap on note 2. Fixed

3) 00:46:785 (1) - Being Mr.Anal here; shift the slider 1 pixel down so it is perfectly tucked underneath the end of 00:46:360 (3). It doesn't allow me

4) 00:59:379 When I was playing this, the slider speed was nice and quick, and it was fun until you decide to stop mapping here, which just kills all the excitement. I think it is much better to map this whole area. Because it wasn't finished yet, I am still gonna map it xD

5) 01:57:115 till the chorus. Note how the music here is much quieter and calmer compared to the earlier section? You can try using a slower slider velocity multiplier for this section, say 0.5x and make the volume around 40-50%, to reflect the calm part of the song. I'll add the quieter volume but I'll not add the SV change because I like to leave it at constant SV vs. changing SV in Bara's part

6) 02:22:021 (1) - You are missing a finish here. I'll change if mentioned again because it was intentional

7) 02:51:461 Again the empty area. I think the break time for this section is too long, so map some parts as you see fit. I am interested as to why you do not map this area though? Again, just unfinished

Final Thoughts
I found the rhythm to be solid, and the slider art is really nice imo. However, there are some things that irk me, such as not mapping certain parts of the song, which do deserved to be map. Overall though, this is good stuff. Thanks!

Good luck, and sorry if the mod did not help (I have not modded in a long time).

It helped, thanks for modding!

Edit: Bara-, sure, when I update it next

Wishkey

774 posts

Joined September 2011

Wishkey 2016-07-03T09:51:32+00:00

Heyo!

From my queue

Blooming Dream

00:17:493 (1) - could add a drum finish here aswell for the bell sound like you did with 00:22:021 (3) -
00:22:021 (3) - NC
00:26:549 (1) - ,00:31:077 (1) - ,00:35:606 (1) - why no finishes here? Its such a powerful intro, whistles are a bit underwhelming imo if you keep the whisles tho add one 00:35:606 (1) -
00:40:134 (1) - drum finishis for the bell?
00:55:842 (1,2,3,4) - bit inconsist NC with the rest of the map where you did like 00:46:785 (1,1,2,3) - , 01:09:426 (1,1,2,3) - etc
00:57:681 (4) - bit off screen while playing
01:18:059 (1) - soft addition on tail here? will make the head stand out more and the tail sounds like the regular claps
01:48:059 (3) - NC
01:48:625 (4) - would start it at 01:48:908 - instead, so you have the break thing not falling in the slider and you catch the increasing piano that starts here wiith the new slider
01:54:851 (1) - this short spinner is gonna be really hard to clear for easy players since they don't have much room to prepare for it aswell, a long slider art or smting would be better here
02:01:643 (2,1) - these felt kinda out of place with the rythm choice and really loud hitsounds when its kinda a break in the song. I'd reduce the volume/delete the hitsounds and maybe follow a rythm like this to catch all the drums and make the beginning of the vocals clickable
02:18:625 (1) - goes offscreen a bit
02:22:021 (1) - no hitsound for this? alrdy made it stand out in the song might aswell hitsound it
02:48:625 (2) - NC like the similar ones
02:51:455 (3,4) - could make this into 2 sliders instead to catch the louder drums of 02:52:162 -
02:54:851 (1,2,3) - felt really weird to play
03:06:172 (1) - could add a finish/clap since you got all the buildup leading to this
03:10:700 (4,1,2) - bit weird to change the shapes/NC on this spot since (4,1) sounds a like and (2) gets added a new instrument yet its the same as (1) kinda also breaks your NC pattern in terms of downbeats
03:34:332 (1) - could hitsound the snares here?
03:38:436 (2) - - 05:02:209 (2) -, 02:03:342 (1) - only NC changes for the collab in the kiai are after these 3/2 sliders, could make them consistent throughout the kiais if you want
04:11:549 (4,1) - bit mixed about this, plays and sound good and all but its the first 1/2 in 4 minutes. Kinda feels a bit late to introduce them and stacking them. I can see most new players miss here because of the hitburst and sudden 1/2 stacked under
05:21:879 (1) - NC
05:16:926 (3) - 0.9DS?
05:24:568 (1) - could make this 1/1 longer so you land on the piano

Nice collab!

Only thing that might be a bit worrying for me is the introduction of the 1/2 stacks that late in the song for an easy diff, rest should be fine after you got the offscreen objects out of the way
GL with ranked!

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-03T11:21:22+00:00

Hey~

General

Theres one thing that bugged me a bit .. its that the movement between objects is way slower that SV but since its the same throughout the whole map .. i guess you are okay with that

General

AR 6.1 ? uhhh this might be too high
00:57:681 (4) - uhhh aimod?? this appears offscreen to me ;;
01:11:266 (3) - a bit to the right would be better
01:20:889 (1,2,3) - not a very nice play
01:49:474 (1,1) - stack properly
02:12:964 (2) - a bit higher would be better
02:14:096 (1) - appears offscrean to me .. aimod is blind
02:18:625 (1) - ^
02:20:323 (3) - its a bit too much towards the right side imo
02:59:379 (1) - 2off4me
03:43:530 (3,4) - they dont flow well
03:47:492 (2) - bend towards left from end?
04:36:738 (1) - add an anchor at like 118,201 to make it look more nicer like http://puu.sh/pOGYr/1089937ffc.jpg

Thats pretty much all i could find .. sorry for short mod but maps looks good to me =w=

GL!~

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-03T17:36:16+00:00

Wishkey wrote:
Heyo!

From my queue

Blooming Dream

00:17:493 (1) - could add a drum finish here aswell for the bell sound like you did with 00:22:021 (3) Done
00:22:021 (3) - NC ^
00:26:549 (1) - ,00:31:077 (1) - ,00:35:606 (1) - why no finishes here? Its such a powerful intro, whistles are a bit underwhelming imo if you keep the whisles tho add one 00:35:606 (1) ^
00:40:134 (1) - drum finishis for the bell? ^
00:55:842 (1,2,3,4) - bit inconsist NC with the rest of the map where you did like 00:46:785 (1,1,2,3) - , 01:09:426 (1,1,2,3) - etc ^
00:57:681 (4) - bit off screen while playing ^
01:18:059 (1) - soft addition on tail here? will make the head stand out more and the tail sounds like the regular claps I'll leave it for consistency
01:48:059 (3) - NC Done
01:48:625 (4) - would start it at 01:48:908 - instead, so you have the break thing not falling in the slider and you catch the increasing piano that starts here wiith the new slider I think it sounds better where it is
01:54:851 (1) - this short spinner is gonna be really hard to clear for easy players since they don't have much room to prepare for it aswell, a long slider art or smting would be better here Gave more space
02:01:643 (2,1) - these felt kinda out of place with the rythm choice and really loud hitsounds when its kinda a break in the song. I'd reduce the volume/delete the hitsounds and maybe follow a rythm like this to catch all the drums and make the beginning of the vocals clickable Hope it's better now
02:18:625 (1) - goes offscreen a bit Oops, done
02:22:021 (1) - no hitsound for this? alrdy made it stand out in the song might aswell hitsound it The guitar declines in volume so that position is emphasis enough
02:48:625 (2) - NC like the similar ones Done
02:51:455 (3,4) - could make this into 2 sliders instead to catch the louder drums of 02:52:162 I will leave it for consistency
02:54:851 (1,2,3) - felt really weird to play I will fix if mentioned again cause it plays fine imo
03:06:172 (1) - could add a finish/clap since you got all the buildup leading to this Done
03:10:700 (4,1,2) - bit weird to change the shapes/NC on this spot since (4,1) sounds a like and (2) gets added a new instrument yet its the same as (1) kinda also breaks your NC pattern in terms of downbeats ^

Rest is for Bara-
03:34:332 (1) - could hitsound the snares here?
03:38:436 (2) - - 05:02:209 (2) -, 02:03:342 (1) - only NC changes for the collab in the kiai are after these 3/2 sliders, could make them consistent throughout the kiais if you want
04:11:549 (4,1) - bit mixed about this, plays and sound good and all but its the first 1/2 in 4 minutes. Kinda feels a bit late to introduce them and stacking them. I can see most new players miss here because of the hitburst and sudden 1/2 stacked under
05:21:879 (1) - NC
05:16:926 (3) - 0.9DS?
05:24:568 (1) - could make this 1/1 longer so you land on the piano
Nice collab!
Only thing that might be a bit worrying for me is the introduction of the 1/2 stacks that late in the song for an easy diff, rest should be fine after you got the offscreen objects out of the way
GL with ranked! Thanks!

Thanks for modding!

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Hey~

General
Theres one thing that bugged me a bit .. its that the movement between objects is way slower that SV but since its the same throughout the whole map .. i guess you are okay with that
Yes I am tbh

General
AR 6.1 ? uhhh this might be too high Is 5.7 better?
00:57:681 (4) - uhhh aimod?? this appears offscreen to me ;; Yup, done
01:11:266 (3) - a bit to the right would be better Done
01:20:889 (1,2,3) - not a very nice play Will fix if mentioned again cause it plays fine imo
01:49:474 (1,1) - stack properly Oh yes, done
02:12:964 (2) - a bit higher would be better Should be a triangle with the previous objects
02:14:096 (1) - appears offscrean to me .. aimod is blind Mhm, yes it is
02:18:625 (1) - ^ ^
02:20:323 (3) - its a bit too much towards the right side imo Same as last red answer
02:59:379 (1) - 2off4me Thats fine imo

Rest is for Bara-
03:43:530 (3,4) - they dont flow well
03:47:492 (2) - bend towards left from end?
04:36:738 (1) - add an anchor at like 118,201 to make it look more nicer like http://puu.sh/pOGYr/1089937ffc.jpg
Thats pretty much all i could find .. sorry for short mod but maps looks good to me =w= Thanks

GL!~

Thanks for modding!

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

tatemae 2016-07-04T06:25:34+00:00

yo

00:45:936 (2,3) - make like this 00:43:672 (2,3) -
01:53:719 (3) - Aesthetically, curve it less
01:54:851 (1) - the spinner is like really short already, but i think it can still be acceptable...
05:02:209 (2,3) - Can you blanket better?
05:16:360 (2,3) - ^

Nice sliders, good luck~

MrJoghurt

71 posts

Joined December 2015

MrJoghurt 2016-07-05T21:37:19+00:00

DT3's Part (german irc mod)

2016-07-03 20:33 st_stefan: mmmh wegen dem mod ich schreib einfach mal dich hier wegen den sachen an
2016-07-03 20:34 _DT3: Klar :D
2016-07-03 20:39 st_stefan: 01:05:181 (1) - ich versteh nicht wieso der spinner hier beginnt und nicht auf dem stärkeren schlag einen halben beat früher
2016-07-03 20:39 _DT3: Hast du schon was gefunden? :)
2016-07-03 20:39 st_stefan: :D
2016-07-03 20:40 st_stefan: ist schwierig so einfache sachen sind meißt einfach zu mappen
2016-07-03 20:40 _DT3: :D
2016-07-03 20:40 _DT3: Ok, das habe ich übersehen, mein Fehler
2016-07-03 20:40 st_stefan: außerdem ist das schon ein fehlerunterschied von 2000 hitobjekten und 200
2016-07-03 20:41 _DT3: Stimmt
2016-07-03 20:44 st_stefan: 01:30:511 (1) - würd die NC eins später legen wegen der akustik im hintergrund
2016-07-03 20:44 st_stefan: 01:32:776 (1) - würd dann die eins vorlegen
2016-07-03 20:45 st_stefan: 01:33:342 (2) - und hier eine machen
2016-07-03 20:45 st_stefan: so wie sie jetzt sind sind sie auf jeden fall mal komisch
2016-07-03 20:46 _DT3: Na ja, die dienen einerseits zur Einheitlichkeit
2016-07-03 20:47 st_stefan: naja aber ich kann bei denen eigentlich keine einheitlichkeit erkennen dann müsste 01:31:643 (3) - vllcht eine sein dann währs einheitlich
2016-07-03 20:48 st_stefan: wenns alle zwei slider ist
2016-07-03 20:48 _DT3: Das kann ich ruhig machen
2016-07-03 20:48 st_stefan: deine entscheidung
2016-07-03 20:49 st_stefan: 01:53:719 (3) - villcht hier auch eine ?
2016-07-03 20:49 _DT3: Scheint gut
2016-07-03 20:50 _DT3: Im übrigen, bei mir musst du nur bis hier: 03:12:398 (1) - modden, der Rest ist von Bara-
2016-07-03 20:51 st_stefan: ok
2016-07-03 20:53 st_stefan: 01:54:285 (4) - villeicht hier nen slider draus machen ist eigentlich der gleiche liedteil wie bei 01:52:587 (1,2) - 
2016-07-03 20:53 st_stefan: werd später weitermodden ich geh jetzt erstmal essen
2016-07-03 20:54 st_stefan: :D
2016-07-03 21:51 st_stefan: so jetzt weiter
2016-07-03 21:52 _DT3: Ok, aber wahrscheinlich nur kurz bei mir
2016-07-03 21:53 st_stefan: 01:29:804 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - da hattest du ja dann jeden 2ten slider ne nc machst würd ich das hier auch machen

didn't find anything in the second part

Good luck with your mapset

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-07T14:52:41+00:00

SherryCherry wrote:
yo

00:45:936 (2,3) - make like this 00:43:672 (2,3) - The positioning is intentional to add some variety
01:53:719 (3) - Aesthetically, curve it less Ok
01:54:851 (1) - the spinner is like really short already, but i think it can still be acceptable... Oh well...

Rest is for Bara-

05:02:209 (2,3) - Can you blanket better?
05:16:360 (2,3) - ^

Nice sliders, good luck~

Thanks for the short mod!

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2016-07-09T13:58:26+00:00

God I'm so lazy

SPOILER

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382,144,232587,2,0,P|390:90|369:44,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,62,233153,2,8,B|269:102|269:102|286:143,2,78.7500030040742,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,233719,12,4,235983,0:0:0:0:
135,45,238247,6,8,L|130:149,1,90.9999958343508,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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291,305,239379,2,8,P|223:323|157:279,2,136.499993751526,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,235,240511,6,8,P|431:217|499:259,2,136.499993751526,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,318,241643,2,8,L|438:126,1,181.999991668702
352,82,242492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,51,242776,6,8,L|149:48,1,90.9999958343508
164,148,243342,2,8,L|57:151,1,90.9999958343508
39,244,243908,2,8,L|223:240,1,181.999991668702
273,155,244757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,55,245040,6,8,P|321:67|371:185,1,181.999991668702
310,261,245889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,284,246172,2,0,B|168:295|168:295|123:283|123:283|77:295,2,136.499993751526,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,315,247304,6,2,B|331:309|331:309|346:337|346:337|369:307|369:307|398:320|398:320|449:339|516:295|485:229,1,272.999987503052,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,248436,2,2,B|396:136|396:136|351:152|351:152|310:139|263:151,1,181.999991668702
170,184,249285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
94,250,249568,6,0,L|79:346,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,352,250134,2,0,L|194:256,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,166,250700,2,0,P|226:167|291:260,1,181.999991668702
315,353,251549,1,10,0:0:0:0:
315,353,251691,6,2,B|369:353|369:353|438:292,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,200,252398,2,0,L|448:104,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,59,252823,2,2,P|401:71|314:47,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,86,253530,2,2,P|177:73|119:83,1,90.9999958343508,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,170,254096,6,14,L|174:222,1,45.4999979171754
266,254,254521,2,14,L|268:202,1,45.4999979171754
360,170,254945,2,14,L|362:222,1,45.4999979171754
361,215,255511,6,10,B|317:220|317:220|199:297,1,181.999991668702,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,284,256360,6,2,B|54:286|54:286|88:153|88:153|92:122|72:86|46:82,1,272.999987503052,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,17,257492,2,2,P|164:65|167:195,1,181.999991668702
233,261,258342,1,10,0:0:0:0:
233,261,258483,6,2,L|381:260,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,304,259191,2,0,P|469:267|454:208,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,171,259615,2,2,P|425:127|458:44,1,136.499993751526,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,35,260323,2,0,L|246:35,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,18,260747,6,2,P|237:65|214:171,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,226,261455,2,0,P|278:269|280:315,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,362,261879,2,2,P|235:335|150:363,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,329,262587,2,2,P|52:283|66:226,1,90.9999958343508,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,157,263153,6,14,L|124:100,1,45.4999979171754
207,162,263577,2,14,L|221:219,1,45.4999979171754
304,157,264002,2,14,L|318:100,1,45.4999979171754
401,162,264426,2,14,L|415:219,1,45.4999979171754
498,157,264851,2,14,L|519:60,1,90.9999958343508
422,35,265418,6,14,B|375:28|375:28|332:36|332:36|283:28,2,136.499993751526,14|6|6,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,266408,12,0,267681,0:0:0:0:
88,50,276738,6,0,B|112:84|108:121|108:121|137:97|182:83|220:108|248:143|279:173|264:235|212:302|155:288|103:268|75:229|94:198|94:198|126:205|155:183,1,560,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,192,279568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,256,280134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,280700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,192,281266,6,0,B|321:122|321:122|305:66,2,105
310,192,282681,6,0,P|254:169|165:181,1,140,12|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,252,283530,2,0,B|106:232|100:187|100:187|53:172|53:172|34:106,1,210,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,57,284662,6,0,L|172:46,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,105,285228,2,0,L|292:116,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,85,285794,2,0,P|354:126|284:189,1,140
208,183,286643,1,12,0:0:0:0:
208,183,286785,6,8,B|172:177|172:177|78:194,1,105,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,116,287492,2,0,L|155:102,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,76,288059,6,0,B|238:68|269:65|269:65|264:186|264:186|300:153|354:149|354:149|352:95|352:95|339:78|326:37|357:-2,1,420
417,49,290040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,28,290323,6,0,B|507:65|487:95|465:126|423:129|423:129|430:272|430:272|399:208|337:206|292:254,1,420,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
358,297,292304,1,8,0:3:0:0:
289,332,292587,6,4,L|177:336,2,105
262,259,293719,2,4,L|150:255,2,105
237,185,294851,2,4,L|128:157,2,105
256,192,295983,12,8,300228,0:0:0:0:
400,312,301077,6,12,L|407:274,1,35
407,278,301502,6,0,B|355:286|355:286|245:276,1,157.500006008148,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,182,302209,2,0,L|364:192,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,109,302775,2,0,P|255:88|161:185,1,210.000008010865
184,274,303624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,353,303907,6,0,B|81:364|33:340|33:340|34:279,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,341,305039,2,0,P|290:331|340:334,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,365,305605,2,8,P|426:339|423:312,1,52.5000020027161,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,313,306030,6,0,P|413:236|423:131,1,157.500006008148,12|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,74,306737,2,0,L|260:72,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,21,307303,2,0,P|173:76|279:165,1,210.000008010865
354,220,308152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
441,257,308435,6,0,B|439:306|439:306|356:379,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,163,309567,2,0,L|443:54,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,67,310134,2,8,L|353:122,1,52.5000020027161,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,120,310558,6,0,B|297:115|297:115|167:118,1,157.500006008148,12|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,67,311265,2,0,P|104:122|120:179,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,311832,2,0,P|203:275|168:378,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,245,312964,6,0,P|109:294|71:347,2,105.000004005432,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,156,313813,1,8,0:0:0:0:
138,90,314096,2,0,L|298:91,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,169,315228,6,0,L|352:170,2,157.500006008148,4|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,226,316360,2,0,P|109:280|130:326,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,330,316926,2,8,P|281:335|311:346,2,78.7500030040742,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,317492,12,4,319757,0:0:0:0:
161,188,320889,5,4,0:0:0:0:
161,188,321879,6,0,B|159:149|175:106|175:106|91:103|32:180|74:277|138:286|195:293|248:242|241:168,1,472.500018024445,4|12,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,91,323436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,47,323719,2,8,B|399:40|399:40|460:41,1,105.000004005432
477,136,324285,6,0,B|481:162|471:190|455:220|423:236|373:248|329:199|329:199|258:143|188:196|155:254|186:298|202:340|234:359|281:360|346:352|341:307|341:307|296:290|276:264,1,700,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,198,327398,5,2,0:0:0:0:
196,125,327681,6,0,P|190:87|196:48,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,54,328247,2,0,P|280:88|274:123,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,194,328813,2,0,P|283:209|356:147,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,113,330511,2,0,L|76:176,1,35,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,147,330936,6,0,P|124:147|183:196,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,284,331926,6,0,P|328:292|363:289,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,249,332526,1,2,0:0:0:0:
425,249,332692,2,0,P|437:295|407:353,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,352,333374,2,0,L|334:353,1,35,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,314,333895,6,0,L|199:313,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,245,334821,6,0,P|106:198|111:166,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,132,335626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,86,335978,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,336330,12,0,341625,0:0:0:0:

Thanks! I believe I fixed all except the stack, since I use them quite often. It has to come once

Hokichi

825 posts

Joined June 2015

Hokichi 2016-07-10T02:13:42+00:00

Hai! Mod upon Turtle's request ^^

VIRGIN CODE

[General]
Check AIMod please Wait, some of the objects are map with no DS?

[Blooming Dream]
00:37:870 (1,3) - Overlapped
01:09:426 (1,1) - Maybe move the third node of 01:09:426 (1) - to improve the blanket a bit?
01:10:700 (2,1) - Overlapped ;;-;; Consider stacking them perhaps? Like 01:19:757 (2,1) -
02:00:370 (1,2) - Improve this blanket as well
01:12:964 (3) - Maybe add finish hitsound at the reverse?
01:53:153 (2) - Move this to the left a little bit
02:07:870 (2,4) - More overlap ;;-;;
02:11:691 (1,1) - And... Improve the blanket here
02:12:964 (2,3) - Idk, try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5575293
02:23:011 (1,2) - Move 02:24:285 (2) - to the right a bit to stack them properly
02:37:304 (2,3) - Either move 02:37:870 (3) - up a bit or down a bit, to make it look better
02:45:653 (1) - This spinner shoud end at 02:46:785 -
03:05:040 (3,4) - Slightly improve this blanket
03:18:059 (2,3) - Adjust 03:18:059 (2) - red node a little bit so 03:18:625 (3) - can blanket it better
03:48:059 (3,1) - Slightly improve this too
04:50:323 (1,2) - ^
OMG the last part. You are a timing master

Well... That's all I've got. Good luck
I'm looking forward to see this ranked ^^

lazygirl

506 posts

Joined February 2016

lazygirl 2016-07-11T06:44:56+00:00

Hey from my modding queue for NM.

This is the first time I see such a long <2* map so yeah haha :p

I'd increase the stacking value, normal map players probably would have trouble reading stacks like 00:54:992 (2,1) - but this is maybe just me ^^

00:00:500 (1) - I'd start this at 2:764, since before that it's mostly just a little noise, the spinner feels right for the riser that starts at 2:764
00:20:040 (1) - a little awkward of a shape, the angle might look better in the dead center of the slider
02:11:691 (1,1) - blanketting isn't right here
03:44:662 (1,2) - the 2 is not well aligner hehe
04:07:304 (1) - beginning of this slider looks odd
04:11:549 (4,1) - maybe too fast compared to the global difficulty of the map
04:12:398 (2,3) - move 2 a little to the right for better alignment imo
05:08:435 (1,2) - alignment

Quite a nice map, flow is great, slider design is good, blanketting is mostly perfect. Good luck getting this ranked ^^

Last edited by lazygirl 2016-07-12T10:51:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-11T16:16:06+00:00

Hokichi wrote:
Hai! Mod upon Turtle's request ^^
VIRGIN CODE

[General]
Check AIMod please Wait, some of the objects are map with no DS?

[Blooming Dream]
00:37:870 (1,3) - Overlapped That's fine imo
01:09:426 (1,1) - Maybe move the third node of 01:09:426 (1) - to improve the blanket a bit? I added an extra node if it helps
01:10:700 (2,1) - Overlapped ;;-;; Consider stacking them perhaps? Like 01:19:757 (2,1) I tried stacking, but it would ruin the blanket ;-;

02:00:370 (1,2) - Improve this blanket as well Yup
01:12:964 (3) - Maybe add finish hitsound at the reverse? Isn't consistent and too loud for that part imo
01:53:153 (2) - Move this to the left a little bit But that ruins the triangle
02:07:870 (2,4) - More overlap ;;-;; Same as last reply to overlaps ;-:
02:11:691 (1,1) - And... Improve the blanket here K ^^
02:12:964 (2,3) - Idk, try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5575293 I am not so sure, ruins some stacking...
02:23:011 (1,2) - Move 02:24:285 (2) - to the right a bit to stack them properly Yup
02:37:304 (2,3) - Either move 02:37:870 (3) - up a bit or down a bit, to make it look better Moved up
02:45:653 (1) - This spinner shoud end at 02:46:785 - I like the current one better
03:05:040 (3,4) - Slightly improve this blanket Eh... Ok

Rest for Bara-

03:18:059 (2,3) - Adjust 03:18:059 (2) - red node a little bit so 03:18:625 (3) - can blanket it better
03:48:059 (3,1) - Slightly improve this too
04:50:323 (1,2) - ^
OMG the last part. You are a timing master Stole from koreapenguins mapset

Well... That's all I've got. Good luck
I'm looking forward to see this ranked ^^ Thanks ^^ Same

Thanks for modding, Hoki! ^^

lazyboy007 wrote:
Hey from my modding queue for NM.

This is the first time I see such a long <2* map so yeah haha :p

I'd increase the stacking value, normal map players probably would have trouble reading stacks like 00:54:992 (2,1) - but this is maybe just me ^^

00:00:500 (1) - I'd start this at 2:764, since before that it's mostly just a little noise, the spinner feels right for the riser that starts at 2:764 But the sounds stay prominent from 00:00:500 to the end to the spinner. I'll fix if mentioned again
00:20:040 (1) - a little awkward of a shape, the angle might look better in the dead center of the slider Looks good
02:11:691 (1,1) - blanketting isn't right here Fixed in the previous mod

Rest for Bara- Wow, first mod where bara has more points than me

03:44:662 (1,2) - the 2 is not well aligner hehe
04:07:304 (1) - beginning of this slider looks odd
04:11:549 (4,1) - maybe too fast compared to the global difficulty of the map
04:12:398 (2,3) - move 2 a little to the right for better alignment imo
05:08:435 (1,2) - alignment

Quite a nice map, flow is great, slider design is good, blanketting is mostly perfect. Good luck getting this ranked ^^ Thanks!

Thanks for modding!

Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

510 posts

Joined August 2013

Xilver15 2016-07-12T08:52:06+00:00

m4m from queue

[Blooming Dream]

Keep in mind this is an easy diff so there's not much I can point out here

01:09:426 (1) - i don't like the idea of starting on vocals, you could probably start on white tick and it'd work just fine
01:48:625 (2) - this rhythm is kind of lackluster, i would just place a note on top of 01:49:474 (1) - personally https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591055
01:54:851 (1) - extend to white tick maybe?
02:24:285 (2) - not sure how readable this overlap will be
02:43:530 (1) - you could define this shape a little bit better i think https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591067
02:52:587 (1) - too close to the previous note, you should space this out a bit
03:05:040 (3) - ctrlg?
03:12:964 - i don't really understand the idea behind slowing this part down. you didn't do it for the first verse and you shouldn't really mess with SV in an easy diff to begin with
03:46:785 (1) - could probably increase this curve a bit more
05:10:558 (1) - same here i think
05:24:285 (1) - wait what why does it stop so late LOL

gl c:

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-12T14:17:20+00:00

Xilver wrote:
m4m from queue

[Blooming Dream]

Keep in mind this is an easy diff so there's not much I can point out here

01:09:426 (1) - i don't like the idea of starting on vocals, you could probably start on white tick and it'd work just fine Doesn't sound good imo, I like the current one better, also gives more variety
01:48:625 (2) - this rhythm is kind of lackluster, i would just place a note on top of 01:49:474 (1) - personally https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591055 I mean, it sounds good, follows the vocals nicely, but I'd like to stay with the current pattern for consistency, DS concistency in my part and aesthetics
01:54:851 (1) - extend to white tick maybe? That was intentional but I can fix it
02:24:285 (2) - not sure how readable this overlap will be Will fix if mentioned again
02:43:530 (1) - you could define this shape a little bit better i think https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591067 Won't make it as curved, but tried to make it more symmetrical
02:52:587 (1) - too close to the previous note, you should space this out a bit For DS reasons, I won't fix it
03:05:040 (3) - ctrlg? Oops, left it from a test xD
03:12:964 - i don't really understand the idea behind slowing this part down. you didn't do it for the first verse and you shouldn't really mess with SV in an easy diff to begin with Well, 1. For the reasons stated in the beatmap description. And 2. Bara- has used this in the past and it was fine

Rest for Bara-

03:46:785 (1) - could probably increase this curve a bit more
05:10:558 (1) - same here i think
05:24:285 (1) - wait what why does it stop so late LOL

gl c:

Thanks for modding!

DeletedUser_6181859

DeletedUser_6181859 2016-07-12T16:26:34+00:00

Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
If you change little things from my mod - do not give kudosu. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

Nothing here!

Blooming Dream

05:16:785 - rip perfect DS (check AIMod)
00:36:172 (2,4) - i think this stack can be improved
00:37:870 (1,3) - fix overlap if possible
00:48:059 (2,1) - ^
01:10:700 (2,1) - stack?
02:07:870 (2,4,1) - this pattern looks ugly too because you have overlaps here
03:12:398 (1,1) - improve stack
03:33:059 (4) - move a bit up for better flow imo
03:37:021 - circle here?
03:53:153 (3) - change red sliderpoint to standard for semi-identical with 03:52:587 (2)
04:05:040 (1) - move last sliderpoint to x=368 y=184 for better blanket

Good luck!
{end of mod}

Hanabi Project

19 posts

Joined August 2015

Hanabi Project 2016-07-12T16:33:27+00:00

here is my mod

Blooming Dream

00:54:992 (2) - i would put this note on the previous white tick, otherwise it feels weird to me
01:12:681 (2) - u should probably move this note on the previous red tick if u want to follow the vocal (imo it's better like this, if i was a new player i would have clicked earlier, but feel free to ignore this)
01:12:964 (3) - ^
01:13:813 (4) - ^
01:14:096 (1) - ^
01:21:738 (2,3) - ^
02:05:889 (2,3,4,1) - ^
02:51:172 (2,3,4,1) - ^
03:31:926 (2,3,4) - ^
05:08:152 (4,1) - ^
01:48:625 (2) - it feels better when the slider starts on the red tick and ends on the white
01:54:285 (2) - u could perhaps use a kick slide for this
02:45:653 (1) - u could maybe extend it to 02:47:351
03:22:869 (2) - this slider could be a little faster, it feels weird
05:16:360 (2,3) - these objects are too far

great song, great map, good luck !

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-12T17:00:06+00:00

100bit wrote:
Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
If you change little things from my mod - do not give kudosu. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.
Song and beatmaps
Nothing here!
Blooming Dream
05:16:785 - rip perfect DS (check AIMod) for Bara-
00:36:172 (2,4) - i think this stack can be improved It doesn't let me
00:37:870 (1,3) - fix overlap if possible I'll fix if mentioned again cause it's fine imo
00:48:059 (2,1) - ^ I left the overlap but tried to make it more aesthetical
01:10:700 (2,1) - stack? Ok, found a way to fix
02:07:870 (2,4,1) - this pattern looks ugly too because you have overlaps here Did a really big fix

Rest for Bara-
03:12:398 (1,1) - improve stack
03:33:059 (4) - move a bit up for better flow imo
03:37:021 - circle here?
03:53:153 (3) - change red sliderpoint to standard for semi-identical with 03:52:587 (2)
04:05:040 (1) - move last sliderpoint to x=368 y=184 for better blanket
Good luck!
{end of mod}

Thanks for modding!

H4TSUN3 M1KU wrote:
here is my mod

Blooming Dream
00:54:992 (2) - i would put this note on the previous white tick, otherwise it feels weird to me Sure
01:12:681 (2) - u should probably move this note on the previous red tick if u want to follow the vocal (imo it's better like this, if i was a new player i would have clicked earlier, but feel free to ignore this) For consistency reasons and me not liking 200 BPM+ 1/2, I won't fix this
01:12:964 (3) - ^ ^
01:13:813 (4) - ^ ^
01:14:096 (1) - ^ ^
01:21:738 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:05:889 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
02:51:172 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^

For Bara-

03:31:926 (2,3,4) - ^
05:08:152 (4,1) - ^

01:48:625 (2) - it feels better when the slider starts on the red tick and ends on the white ^
01:54:285 (2) - u could perhaps use a kick slide for this This was something fixed in a previous mod and it also emphasizes good, so I'll leave it
02:45:653 (1) - u could maybe extend it to 02:47:351 Spinner recovery time is necessary here

Rest for Bara-

03:22:869 (2) - this slider could be a little faster, it feels weird
05:16:360 (2,3) - these objects are too far

great song, great map, good luck !

Although I had to decline the suggestions with moving to the last red/white tick cause of personal preferences, thanks for modding!

Ayya Novak

121 posts

Joined February 2015

Ayya Novak 2016-07-13T11:30:02+00:00

hey, i'm from my modding queue, and i don't see ANY flaws in your map.
really, i dunno what to fix.

good luck ranking i guess. <3

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-13T11:49:34+00:00

avalanche wrote:
hey, i'm from my modding queue, and i don't see ANY flaws in your map.
really, i dunno what to fix.

good luck ranking i guess. <3

Ok, nevertheless, thanks for checking the map!

DeletedUser_6181859

DeletedUser_6181859 2016-07-13T15:05:34+00:00

Heyo again.
I see your BG have non-rankable resolution, can I help you? new BG 1366x768
Also: 02:17:917 - new rip perfect ds lel
Don't give kudosu.

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-13T16:23:57+00:00

100bit wrote:
Heyo again.
I see your BG have non-rankable resolution, can I help you? new BG 1366x768
Also: 02:17:917 - new rip perfect ds lel
Don't give kudosu.

Thanks 100bit for the BG! I'll update it ASAP
I fixed the DS in the mods, I was doing a test and didn't change it back

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2016-07-14T04:03:16+00:00

DON'T GIVE KUDOSU, AND NO THIS IS NOT THE FOR THE M4M

02:59:379 (1) - Is this even legal for people using 4:3 ratio?

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-14T05:24:19+00:00

N0thingSpecial wrote:
DON'T GIVE KUDOSU, AND NO THIS IS NOT THE FOR THE M4M

02:59:379 (1) - Is this even legal for people using 4:3 ratio?

Tbh I don't know, I have to consult somebody about it. Anyways, thanks for checking the map nevertheless!

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Foxy Grandpa 2016-07-14T21:22:17+00:00

Hi, from my queue~

-I don't typically mod normals but I want to get to every mod in my queue so, here goes nothing ^^;

so weird hearing a 200bpm song with a 2 star diff ;-;

[Blooming Dream]

00:00:641 - Spinner should start here.
02:11:266 (1,1) - Don't really see the point in having the second NC there
02:45:653 (1) - I think this spinner should be extended to around 02:47:492 - so you can get more of a ring out effect with the music going on in the background and have the spinner end where the vocals start.
03:12:964 - This seemed like a really weird transition with the abrupt slider velocity change when the music doesn't really change.
04:55:983 (1) - Spinner starts at a really weird spot, I think starting 04:57:681 (1) - here and ending it 05:00:794 - here would sound better.
05:36:330 (1) - This should end on 05:41:095 -

Sorry i couldn't really give a more detailed mod but this looks really cool! Good luck

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2016-07-15T08:55:22+00:00

I'm a lazy man :c

General

BPM / Offset: Sound fine
Folder: All Audio is fine ^^
Metadata: Artist name: Mizuki Nana
AiMod: Seems fine

Blooming Dream

00:46:360 (3,1) - This could throw players off. Due to the star rating the playerbase attracted would likely be new players who've only had the game for a short while. I am unsure if they will be able to understand stacking and other slightly more complex patterns.

00:48:059 (2,1) - Not a fan of this stacking, kind of cramps everything up imo

00:52:021 (2,3,4) - The flow of sliders here is inconsistent, at first you make a flow by joining slider ends, and now it's forced off that flow idea and kind of skews downward.

00:54:851 (2,1) - (as mentioned about stacking earlier)

01:17:776 (3,1,1) - The second stack I can understand, (still a bit iffy in a normal) but the first stack halts the map prematurely, the song itself is still in motion until the second stack so why is it halted short?

01:24:002 - Profound beat here, why is it avoided?

01:25:134 - ^

01:49:474 (1,1) - Too much here, there is even a missed beat, definitely a trip up here, even I was expecting a note 1 beat earlier >.>

02:10:842 (2,1,1) - (Same as 01:17:776 (3,1,1) )

02:18:059 (3,1) - Space out the middle section of this blanket for a consistent gap between the sliders.

02:56:266 (3,1,1) - ^^

02:57:681 (1,2,3) - Again questionable flow inconsistencies here, it's always up to you what you deem to be an ample flow technique but I think this kinda breaks up consisteny, don't you think? x.x

02:59:379 (1) - Don't quote me on this but I think this will overlap the scoreboard.

03:02:492 - Profound beat as in the previous suggestion on the topic.

03:03:625 - ^

03:08:294 (1) - I believe the slider curve can look nicer with just two white anchor points like in this image:

Slider

03:15:229 (1) - Move this up just a touch so the blanket is complete.

04:11:549 (4,1) - I think this is the only time when there has been a 1/2 stack, could throw players off I am unsure.

04:18:342 (3,1) - ^

04:36:738 (1) - The last straight line triggers me, but I can't think of something to make it blanket the blanket orz

04:42:681 (1,2) - Ctrl+G the first slider and check the approach circle against the blanket.

04:48:059 (1,1) - Maybe move the last red anchor down for a consistent length between the two sliders (If that made sense?)

04:50:323 (1,2) - Give me blanketing

Lovely map, like the sliders especially ^^ Good luck in rank

Konge

238 posts

Joined November 2012

Konge 2016-07-17T02:03:09+00:00

Hi. NM req from my queue. Sorry for the delay.
Light mod, no kd.

[Blooming Dream]

drum-hitfinish doesn't fit the song very well. Please find another one.
01:24:002 - 01:25:134 - Add note?
04:36:738 (1) - Move left a bit.

Pretty well and I don't have much to say. So have a star.

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-17T12:41:58+00:00

FoxyGrandpa wrote:
Hi, from my queue~

-I don't typically mod normals but I want to get to every mod in my queue so, here goes nothing ^^;

so weird hearing a 200bpm song with a 2 star diff ;-;

[Blooming Dream]
00:00:641 - Spinner should start here. True
02:11:266 (1,1) - Don't really see the point in having the second NC there Kinda is there for emphasis on the first object
02:45:653 (1) - I think this spinner should be extended to around 02:47:492 - so you can get more of a ring out effect with the music going on in the background and have the spinner end where the vocals start. Tbh, I'd love to do that, but there has to be a decent amount of spinner recovery time
03:12:964 - This seemed like a really weird transition with the abrupt slider velocity change when the music doesn't really change. Well, Bara likes having different SV... He said it's ok...

Rest for Bara-
04:55:983 (1) - Spinner starts at a really weird spot, I think starting 04:57:681 (1) - here and ending it 05:00:794 - here would sound better.
05:36:330 (1) - This should end on 05:41:095 -
Sorry i couldn't really give a more detailed mod but this looks really cool! Good luck

Thanks for modding!

-Space- wrote:
I'm a lazy man :c

General

BPM / Offset: Sound fine
Folder: All Audio is fine ^^
Metadata: Artist name: Mizuki Nana KwaN actually said it's Nana Mizuki since she puts that name on all of her albums
AiMod: Seems fine
Blooming Dream

00:46:360 (3,1) - This could throw players off. Due to the star rating the playerbase attracted would likely be new players who've only had the game for a short while. I am unsure if they will be able to understand stacking and other slightly more complex patterns. Well, ok

00:48:059 (2,1) - Not a fan of this stacking, kind of cramps everything up imo I don't know if the overlap is better here but ok

00:52:021 (2,3,4) - The flow of sliders here is inconsistent, at first you make a flow by joining slider ends, and now it's forced off that flow idea and kind of skews downward. Exactly that's what I meant to do, (4) kinda seems important to me here si I inserted a little "flow break"

00:54:851 (2,1) - (as mentioned about stacking earlier) I think that they are enough beats apart for this to be possible

01:17:776 (3,1,1) - The second stack I can understand, (still a bit iffy in a normal) but the first stack halts the map prematurely, the song itself is still in motion until the second stack so why is it halted short? Well, emphasis reasons but you're right

01:24:002 - Profound beat here, why is it avoided? I feel like the sliders are on the more important beats so I left out that beat for emphasis

01:25:134 - ^ ^

01:49:474 (1,1) - Too much here, there is even a missed beat, definitely a trip up here, even I was expecting a note 1 beat earlier >.> True xD Added

02:10:842 (2,1,1) - (Same as 01:17:776 (3,1,1) ) Did the same

02:18:059 (3,1) - Space out the middle section of this blanket for a consistent gap between the sliders. Had to change stuff there around anyway cause of the last fix

02:56:266 (3,1,1) - ^^

02:57:681 (1,2,3) - Again questionable flow inconsistencies here, it's always up to you what you deem to be an ample flow technique but I think this kinda breaks up consisteny, don't you think? x.x Same as before

02:59:379 (1) - Don't quote me on this but I think this will overlap the scoreboard. Tbh I don't know

03:02:492 - Profound beat as in the previous suggestion on the topic. Same as before

03:03:625 - ^ Same as before

03:08:294 (1) - I believe the slider curve can look nicer with just two white anchor points like in this image:

Slider

Rest for Bara-

03:15:229 (1) - Move this up just a touch so the blanket is complete.

04:11:549 (4,1) - I think this is the only time when there has been a 1/2 stack, could throw players off I am unsure.

04:18:342 (3,1) - ^

04:36:738 (1) - The last straight line triggers me, but I can't think of something to make it blanket the blanket orz

04:42:681 (1,2) - Ctrl+G the first slider and check the approach circle against the blanket.

04:48:059 (1,1) - Maybe move the last red anchor down for a consistent length between the two sliders (If that made sense?)

04:50:323 (1,2) - Give me blanketing

Lovely map, like the sliders especially ^^ Good luck in rank

Thanks for modding! I think this is the biggest fix yet ^^

23konG wrote:
Hi. NM req from my queue. Sorry for the delay.
Light mod, no kd.
[Blooming Dream]
drum-hitfinish doesn't fit the song very well. Please find another one. It's fine at the start
01:24:002 - 01:25:134 - Add note? As mentioned earlier, I don't want to add a note there

For Bara-
04:36:738 (1) - Move left a bit.
Pretty well and I don't have much to say. So have a star. Oh wow. Thanks!

Thanks for checking!

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-07-20T14:55:11+00:00

Hi!

[General]

Unused hitsounds:
1. soft-hitnormal3.wav
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
1. soft-hitfinish.wav
You should tell something like "[timestamp] - [timestamp] >> mapped by [Name]" in the beatmap description.

[Blooming Dream]

00:17:493 - Conflict volume settings between timing lines.
00:27:964 - I don't think there's any reason to use 0.5 SV here right?
00:54:851 (2,1) - The drum roll is going on here so it doesn't really call for a pause movement, adding a circle on 00:55:134 or change 00:54:851 (2) to a 1/1 slider would express the drum roll better.
00:57:681 - 01:19:191 - Offscreen in 800x600 resolution.
01:05:040 (1) - This spinner should start on 01:05:889 instead, there are strong beats on 01:05:040 - 01:05:464 - 01:05:889 and the song is still hyping up on these places so putting a spinner before that feels like aaa climax ruined.
01:25:134 - Optional but a circle can be added here since there's an instrument on this beat unlike 01:24:002 .
01:34:474 - Add finish? The rhythm changed a bit after this point.
01:54:851 (1) - Should end on 01:55:842 to match a cymbal.
02:10:842 (2) - I don't hear anything here though? If anything 02:10:700 - 02:10:983 are a lot stronger.
02:34:474 - I was expecting a finish or some hitsounds here.
02:45:653 (1) - That sound(idk what to call) is still going on after the spinner so it's kinda waste to stop a spinner here, how about making a long slider art instead of this and end it on either 02:47:492 or 02:47:634 .
03:04:474 - Add clap? It's the same sound as 03:05:606 .
01:34:474 - 03:14:450 - I guess these parts are mapped by different mappers but it's still bugging me cuz I don't know why you decided to use different slider velocities while the intensity on these places are just the same.
03:28:813 (1,2) - Just my preference but I was expecting hitsounds on sliderticks here like 01:49:474 (1,2,1,2) .
04:48:059 (1) - Ending this on 04:49:049 and then add something on 04:49:757 ? The cymbal is around there and it would give a nice pause before 04:49:757 too.
04:55:983 (1) - The spinner is kinda long though? It's a bit boring considering how the song is hyping up, I suggest map normally and then start the spinner either on 04:57:115 - 04:58:106 .

idk why I have problems with spinners but oh well, good luck!

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-20T21:45:03+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi!

[General]

Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitnormal3.wav
Oops, must have accidentally added that xD
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
soft-hitfinish.wav
I will try to remove the delay
You should tell something like "[timestamp] - [timestamp] >> mapped by [Name]" in the beatmap description.
Will add later

[Blooming Dream]

00:17:493 - Conflict volume settings between timing lines. Yup, fixed
00:27:964 - I don't think there's any reason to use 0.5 SV here right? No xD
00:54:851 (2,1) - The drum roll is going on here so it doesn't really call for a pause movement, adding a circle on 00:55:134 or change 00:54:851 (2) to a 1/1 slider would express the drum roll better.Well, the prominent sounds (guitar) are silent there but I can add in a note
00:57:681 - 01:19:191 - Offscreen in 800x600 resolution. I tried
01:05:040 (1) - This spinner should start on 01:05:889 instead, there are strong beats on 01:05:040 - 01:05:464 - 01:05:889 and the song is still hyping up on these places so putting a spinner before that feels like aaa climax ruined. Imo, starting it there sounds weird
01:25:134 - Optional but a circle can be added here since there's an instrument on this beat unlike 01:24:002 . For Consistency Reasons, nah
01:34:474 - Add finish? The rhythm changed a bit after this point. True, added
01:54:851 (1) - Should end on 01:55:842 to match a cymbal. Why did I not do that? xD
02:10:842 (2) - I don't hear anything here though? If anything 02:10:700 - 02:10:983 are a lot stronger. If you listen closely, you can hear the pitch decrease 02:10:417 - 02:10:842 - 02:11:266 - Important enough for me to highlight
02:34:474 - I was expecting a finish or some hitsounds here. ...Ofc xD
02:45:653 (1) - That sound(idk what to call) is still going on after the spinner so it's kinda waste to stop a spinner here, how about making a long slider art instead of this and end it on either 02:47:492 or 02:47:634 . I want to keep it for consistency
03:04:474 - Add clap? It's the same sound as 03:05:606 . 03:04:474 (2) - The hitsounds here are kinda to show the pitch increase, the lower pitch has no hitsound, the higher pitch has one
01:34:474 - 03:14:450 - I guess these parts are mapped by different mappers but it's still bugging me cuz I don't know why you decided to use different slider velocities while the intensity on these places are just the same. I mean, Bara- said it was ok, but Idk...

Rest for Bara-
03:28:813 (1,2) - Just my preference but I was expecting hitsounds on sliderticks here like 01:49:474 (1,2,1,2) .
04:48:059 (1) - Ending this on 04:49:049 and then add something on 04:49:757 ? The cymbal is around there and it would give a nice pause before 04:49:757 too.
04:55:983 (1) - The spinner is kinda long though? It's a bit boring considering how the song is hyping up, I suggest map normally and then start the spinner either on 04:57:115 - 04:58:106 .
idk why I have problems with spinners but oh well, good luck!

Thanks for modding and thanks for shooting a star, Electoz!

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2016-07-21T12:04:00+00:00

Hello From my queue.

[General]

■ You should be to change the Romanised Artist Name : Nana Muzuki (X) -> Mizuki Nana (O).

[Blooming Dream]

The difficulty is really so many missed finish sounds. Please put to find. also I think the kiai time N:C1 hitclap sound is not good fit. I recommend to change S:C1 sound is better.

■ 00:59:379 (3,4) You should be to change the 1/2 rhythm. because this part is guitar emphasized. I think you make the follow guitar rhythm here.
■ 01:22:021 (3) The slider head put finish sound.
■ 01:39:002 (4) I don't heard this point hitclap sound. remove it.
■ 01:41:266 (1) The slider head add finish sound.
■ 01:43:530 (1) You are missing the slider head and repeat point finish sound.
■ 02:11:266 (1) You should be the check this stack notes.
■ 02:45:653 (1) The spinner rhythm a little short imo. electronic piano sound end point is 02:47:492 here. and vocal start point. Anyways I mean the move to spinner end 02:47:492 is better.
■ 02:48:625 (1) Unnecessary NC.
■ 02:53:719 (1) ^
■ 02:56:549 (1) Please consistency NC here.
■ 02:57:681 (1) Unnecessary NC.
■ 03:02:776 (1) ^
■ 03:10:417 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) You should be consistency NCs here.

Good luck for ranking :3

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2016-07-21T18:43:32+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
Hello From my queue.

[General]

■ You should be to change the Romanised Artist Name : Nana Muzuki (X) -> Mizuki Nana (O).
As KwaN said, Metadata should be correct like that. I can quote it in the description

[Blooming Dream]

The difficulty is really so many missed finish sounds. Please put to find. also I think the kiai time N:C1 hitclap sound is not good fit. I recommend to change S:C1 sound is better. I mean, imo the hitclap is fine but Bara- got the hitsounds so idk...

■ 00:59:379 (3,4) You should be to change the 1/2 rhythm. because this part is guitar emphasized. I think you make the follow guitar rhythm here. Everybody is saying I should use 1/2 but I think it's fine and tbh, I don't like using 1/2 with such high BPM
■ 01:22:021 (3) The slider head put finish sound. I don't see why
■ 01:39:002 (4) I don't heard this point hitclap sound. remove it. Yup, done
■ 01:41:266 (1) The slider head add finish sound. Same as before, I don't see why
■ 01:43:530 (1) You are missing the slider head and repeat point finish sound. What?
■ 02:11:266 (1) You should be the check this stack notes. Oh that's the reason the SR went 0.1 higher...
■ 02:45:653 (1) The spinner rhythm a little short imo. electronic piano sound end point is 02:47:492 here. and vocal start point. Anyways I mean the move to spinner end 02:47:492 is better. Well, 1. It is longer than some other spinners and those were fine and 2. Spinner Recovery is required
■ 02:48:625 (1) Unnecessary NC. Wasn't pointed out with earlier patterns so I'll leave it, it also fits imo
■ 02:53:719 (1) ^ ^
■ 02:56:549 (1) Please consistency NC here. ^
■ 02:57:681 (1) Unnecessary NC. ^
■ 03:02:776 (1) ^ ^
■ 03:10:417 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) You should be consistency NCs here. ^

Good luck for ranking :3

Thanks for modding!

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2016-07-26T13:35:26+00:00

too much to reply to (but I fixed like everything so not that it matters

)

SPOILER

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82,152,203719,2,8,P|87:114|108:83,1,70
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392,272,206549,6,8,P|425:212|402:157,2,105
344,125,207964,2,0,P|391:96|475:112,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,183,208813,6,0,B|501:255|501:255|433:254|433:254|425:307|366:321,1,210,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,281,211077,6,0,P|162:305|105:270,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,194,211926,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,194,212068,2,0,B|101:85|101:85|126:60|157:51,1,175,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,25,213059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
306,33,213342,6,0,L|383:40,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,112,213908,2,0,L|322:119,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,214332,12,0,215606,0:0:0:0:
112,72,217021,5,4,1:0:0:0:
112,72,217304,6,4,L|105:110,1,35,4|4,1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
105,106,217728,6,0,B|157:98|157:98|267:108,1,157.500006008148,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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199,274,219002,2,0,P|257:295|351:198,1,210.000008010865
328,110,219851,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,31,220134,6,0,B|431:20|479:44|479:44|478:105,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,43,221266,2,0,P|222:53|172:50,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,19,221832,2,8,P|86:45|89:72,1,52.5000020027161,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,71,222257,6,0,P|99:148|89:253,1,157.500006008148,12|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,310,222964,2,0,L|252:312,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,363,223530,2,0,P|339:308|233:219,1,210.000008010865
158,164,224379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
71,127,224662,6,0,B|74:75|74:75|174:18,2,157.500006008148,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,221,225794,2,0,L|69:330,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,317,226360,2,8,L|159:262,1,52.5000020027161,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,264,226785,6,0,B|211:278|211:278|334:265,1,157.500006008148,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,317,227492,2,0,P|408:262|392:205,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,228059,2,0,P|309:109|344:6,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,139,229191,6,0,P|403:90|441:37,2,105.000004005432,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,228,230040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,294,230323,2,0,L|214:293,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,215,231455,6,0,L|160:214,2,157.500006008148,4|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,144,232587,2,0,P|390:90|369:44,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,62,233153,2,8,B|269:102|269:102|286:143,2,78.7500030040742,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,233719,12,4,235983,0:0:0:0:
135,45,238247,6,8,L|130:149,1,90.9999958343508,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,132,238813,2,8,L|235:236,1,90.9999958343508
291,305,239379,2,8,P|223:323|157:279,2,136.499993751526,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,235,240511,6,8,P|431:217|499:259,2,136.499993751526,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,318,241643,2,8,L|438:126,1,181.999991668702
352,82,242492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,51,242776,6,8,L|149:48,1,90.9999958343508
164,148,243342,2,8,L|57:151,1,90.9999958343508
39,244,243908,2,8,L|223:240,1,181.999991668702
273,156,244757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,54,245040,6,8,P|321:66|371:184,1,181.999991668702
310,261,245889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,284,246172,2,0,B|168:295|168:295|123:283|123:283|77:295,2,136.499993751526,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,315,247304,6,2,B|331:309|331:309|346:337|346:337|369:307|369:307|398:320|398:320|449:339|516:295|485:229,1,272.999987503052,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,248436,2,2,B|396:136|396:136|351:152|351:152|310:139|263:151,1,181.999991668702
209,234,249285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,234,249426,6,2,L|188:376,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,310,250134,2,0,L|122:214,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,145,250700,2,0,P|269:172|290:256,1,181.999991668702
315,353,251549,1,10,0:0:0:0:
315,353,251691,6,2,B|369:353|369:353|438:292,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,197,252398,2,0,L|438:101,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,58,252823,2,2,P|400:70|313:46,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,86,253530,2,2,P|177:73|119:83,1,90.9999958343508,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,170,254096,6,14,L|174:222,1,45.4999979171754
266,254,254521,2,14,L|268:202,1,45.4999979171754
360,170,254945,2,14,L|362:222,1,45.4999979171754
361,215,255511,6,10,B|317:220|317:220|199:297,1,181.999991668702,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,284,256360,6,2,B|54:286|54:286|88:153|88:153|92:122|72:86|46:82,1,272.999987503052,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,17,257492,2,2,P|164:65|167:195,1,181.999991668702
233,261,258342,1,10,0:0:0:0:
233,261,258483,6,2,L|381:260,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,304,259191,2,0,P|469:267|454:208,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,171,259615,2,2,P|425:127|458:44,1,136.499993751526,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,35,260323,2,0,L|246:35,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,18,260747,6,2,P|237:65|214:171,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,226,261455,2,0,P|278:269|280:315,1,90.9999958343508,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,362,261879,2,2,P|235:335|150:363,1,136.499993751526,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,329,262587,2,2,P|52:283|66:226,1,90.9999958343508,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,157,263153,6,14,L|124:100,1,45.4999979171754
207,162,263577,2,14,L|221:219,1,45.4999979171754
304,157,264002,2,14,L|318:100,1,45.4999979171754
401,162,264426,2,14,L|415:219,1,45.4999979171754
498,157,264851,2,14,L|519:60,1,90.9999958343508
422,35,265417,6,14,B|375:28|375:28|332:36|332:36|283:28,2,136.499993751526,14|6|6,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,266408,12,0,267681,0:0:0:0:
89,52,276738,6,0,B|112:84|108:121|108:121|137:97|182:83|220:108|248:143|279:173|264:235|212:302|155:288|103:268|75:229|92:197|92:197|126:203|155:183,1,560,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,192,279568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,256,280134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,280700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,192,281266,6,0,B|321:122|321:122|305:66,2,105
310,192,282681,6,0,P|254:169|165:181,1,140,12|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,252,283530,2,0,B|106:237|100:187|100:187|53:172|53:172|34:106,1,210,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,57,284662,6,0,L|172:46,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,105,285228,2,0,L|292:116,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,85,285794,2,0,P|354:126|284:189,1,140
208,183,286643,1,12,0:0:0:0:
208,183,286785,6,8,B|172:177|172:177|78:194,1,105,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,116,287492,2,0,L|155:102,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,76,288059,6,0,B|238:68|269:65|269:65|264:186|264:186|300:153|354:149|354:149|352:95|352:95|339:78|326:37|357:-2,1,420
417,49,290040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,28,290323,6,0,B|507:65|487:95|465:126|423:129|423:129|430:272|430:272|401:207|337:214|310:239,1,420,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
358,297,292303,1,8,0:3:0:0:
289,332,292587,6,4,L|177:336,2,105
262,259,293719,2,4,L|150:255,2,105
237,185,294851,2,4,L|128:157,2,105
295,235,295983,2,0,B|320:201|309:162|309:162|345:170|384:159|410:116|406:79,1,210,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,297115,12,4,299379,0:0:0:0:
400,312,300794,5,12,0:0:0:0:
400,312,301077,6,12,L|407:274,1,35
407,278,301502,6,0,B|355:286|355:286|245:276,1,157.500006008148,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,182,302209,2,0,L|364:192,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,110,302775,2,0,P|255:89|161:186,1,210.000008010865
184,274,303624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,353,303907,6,0,B|81:364|33:340|33:340|34:279,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,341,305039,2,0,P|290:331|340:334,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,365,305605,2,8,P|426:339|423:312,1,52.5000020027161,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,313,306030,6,0,P|413:236|423:131,1,157.500006008148,12|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,74,306737,2,0,L|260:72,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,21,307303,2,0,P|173:76|279:165,1,210.000008010865
354,220,308152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
441,257,308435,6,0,B|439:306|439:306|356:379,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,163,309567,2,0,L|443:54,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,67,310134,2,8,L|353:122,1,52.5000020027161,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,120,310558,6,0,B|301:105|301:105|191:121,1,157.500006008148,12|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,67,311265,2,0,P|104:122|120:179,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,311832,2,0,P|203:275|168:378,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,245,312964,6,0,P|109:294|71:347,2,105.000004005432,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,156,313813,1,8,0:0:0:0:
138,90,314096,2,0,L|298:91,2,157.500006008148,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,169,315228,6,0,L|352:170,2,157.500006008148,4|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,226,316360,2,0,P|109:280|130:326,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,267,316926,2,8,B|294:271,2,78.7500030040742,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,317492,12,4,319757,0:0:0:0:
161,188,320889,5,4,0:0:0:0:
161,188,321879,2,0,B|159:149|175:106|175:106|91:103|32:180|74:277|138:286|195:293|248:242|241:168,1,472.500018024445,4|12,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,91,323436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,47,323719,2,8,B|399:40|399:40|460:41,1,105.000004005432
477,136,324285,6,0,B|481:162|471:190|455:220|423:236|373:248|329:199|329:199|258:143|188:196|155:254|186:298|202:340|234:359|281:360|346:352|341:307|341:307|296:290|276:264,1,700,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,125,327681,6,0,P|190:87|196:48,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,54,328247,2,0,P|280:88|274:123,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,194,328813,2,0,P|283:209|356:147,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,113,330511,2,0,L|76:176,1,35,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,147,330936,6,0,P|124:147|183:196,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,284,331926,6,0,P|328:292|363:289,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,249,332526,1,2,0:0:0:0:
425,249,332692,2,0,P|437:295|407:353,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,352,333374,2,0,L|334:353,1,35,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,314,333895,6,0,L|199:313,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,245,334821,6,0,P|106:198|111:166,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,132,335626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,86,335978,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,336330,12,0,341095,0:0:0:0:

Oh, DT, can you please add a kiai at 04:07:304 - 04:16:290 and at 04:16:360 - 04:27:681 ?
it feels a bit weird to send you all the timingpoints for something that small

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