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[Twilight]
00:06:367 (2) - check this slider it doesn't seem to be snapped to your timing point http://puu.sh/v0Umq/2451f02540.jpg
or actually, a lot of them are not snapped properly, check ai mod http://puu.sh/v0UqN/c78637ef04.jpg so im not going to mention these anymore
00:22:064 (1) - delete whistle on sliderbody
00:23:026 (6,7,8,9) - is this timed properly? 7 sounds way too early to me
01:22:721 (5) - you can nc this
01:46:495 (1) - end the slider at the red tick sounds better to me
02:20:382 (4,5) - should just snap these on the purple ticks. for some reason ai mod does not mention this
02:25:276 (4) - nc maybe
02:29:242 (2,3) - check the spacing (remember ds changes when you change bpm, even though they are both 1.2 one of them is clearly too close)
02:45:791 (3) - sounds better ending at the red tick tbh
03:09:340 - missing a note here maybe
03:10:919 - ^ here too if you add that one
03:34:067 (1) - uh i think notes would fit this part more than a spinner actually
04:28:002 - break
05:45:308 (1,2) - switch NC for consistency with 05:41:668 (4,1) -
Check timing and all your snaps, I'm almost certain there's more mistakes I couldn't find/wasn't sure on. Good luck!
[Twilight]
especially with the blue one, its hard to seeRanking Criteria Guidelines wrote:
Avoid using combo colors, slider borders or hitcircleoverlays with ~50 luminosity or lower. Dark colors like these impact readability of approach circles with low background dim and the other elements partially give up their functions as borders.
00:06:367 (2) - check this slider it doesn't seem to be snapped to your timing point http://puu.sh/v0Umq/2451f02540.jpg
or actually, a lot of them are not snapped properly, check ai mod http://puu.sh/v0UqN/c78637ef04.jpg so im not going to mention these anymore
00:22:064 (1) - delete whistle on sliderbody
00:23:026 (6,7,8,9) - is this timed properly? 7 sounds way too early to me
01:22:721 (5) - you can nc this
01:46:495 (1) - end the slider at the red tick sounds better to me
02:20:382 (4,5) - should just snap these on the purple ticks. for some reason ai mod does not mention this
02:25:276 (4) - nc maybe
02:29:242 (2,3) - check the spacing (remember ds changes when you change bpm, even though they are both 1.2 one of them is clearly too close)
02:45:791 (3) - sounds better ending at the red tick tbh
03:09:340 - missing a note here maybe
03:10:919 - ^ here too if you add that one
03:34:067 (1) - uh i think notes would fit this part more than a spinner actually
04:28:002 - break
05:45:308 (1,2) - switch NC for consistency with 05:41:668 (4,1) -
Check timing and all your snaps, I'm almost certain there's more mistakes I couldn't find/wasn't sure on. Good luck!