Atsuko Asahi & Manaka Kataoka - Tobidase Doubutsu no Mori Ho

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zeborg
I've kinda adjusted the 1st hour part. And yes, it's hell lot of messy.
I'll try tweaking the 3rd hour part in a while, till then here's what I have so far.

[TimingPoints]
528,500,4,1,0,100,1,0
6146,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
9691,500,4,1,0,100,1,0
11816,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
13771,521.739130434783,4,1,0,100,1,0
17476,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
21934,674.157303370787,4,1,0,100,1,0
23287,491.803278688525,5,1,0,100,1,0
26606,491.803278688525,4,1,0,100,1,0
34545,521.739130434783,4,1,0,100,1,0
40201,521.739130434783,4,1,0,100,1,0
43461,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
47603,521.739130434783,4,1,0,100,1,0
51385,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
55813,674.157303370787,4,1,0,100,1,0
57161,491.803278688525,4,1,0,100,1,0
68595,895.522388059701,4,1,0,100,1,0
126355,750,4,1,0,100,1,0
207849,789.473684210526,4,1,0,100,1,0
300239,545.454545454546,3,1,0,100,1,0
383926,750,5,1,0,100,1,0
387677,750,4,1,0,100,1,0
431495,750,4,1,0,100,1,0
454216,909.090909090909,4,1,0,100,1,0
491483,909.090909090909,4,1,0,100,1,0
Topic Starter
polka

Sliproads wrote:

Sorry for the long wait : P, here's the timing points for the 110bpm section, just ctrl+p at these times and the first section should be done.
00:00:538
00:06:242
00:11:859
00:17:523
00:21:886
00:34:431
00:40:021
00:45:748
00:51:338
00:55:838

Good luck with the map : )
Implemented a few, thanks!
Topic Starter
polka

zeborg wrote:

I've kinda adjusted the 1st hour part. And yes, it's hell lot of messy.
I'll try tweaking the 3rd hour part in a while, till then here's what I have so far.

[TimingPoints]
528,500,4,1,0,100,1,0
6146,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
9691,500,4,1,0,100,1,0
11816,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
13771,521.739130434783,4,1,0,100,1,0
17476,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
21934,674.157303370787,4,1,0,100,1,0
23287,491.803278688525,5,1,0,100,1,0
26606,491.803278688525,4,1,0,100,1,0
34545,521.739130434783,4,1,0,100,1,0
40201,521.739130434783,4,1,0,100,1,0
43461,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
47603,521.739130434783,4,1,0,100,1,0
51385,571.428571428571,4,1,0,100,1,0
55813,674.157303370787,4,1,0,100,1,0
57161,491.803278688525,4,1,0,100,1,0
68595,895.522388059701,4,1,0,100,1,0
126355,750,4,1,0,100,1,0
207849,789.473684210526,4,1,0,100,1,0
300239,545.454545454546,3,1,0,100,1,0
383926,750,5,1,0,100,1,0
387677,750,4,1,0,100,1,0
431495,750,4,1,0,100,1,0
454216,909.090909090909,4,1,0,100,1,0
491483,909.090909090909,4,1,0,100,1,0
I made some changes after putting in a couple of yours; thanks.
Hobbes2
Good luck with timing this monstrosity, I say this because 2 A.M. in particular is an absolute nightmare (tried to map that one myself a while back but gave up because it had some of the weirdest timing I've seen)

As a quick comment, the offset of your final timing point so far should be 454,793

EDIT -

So I talked with Polka on irc to get all the timing points right, so the song should be fully timed now. Woo! Good luck with mapping this ~

16:48 Hobbes2: Hey, this might be easier to help time if we just talk about it on here, if that's fine with you.
16:49 PolkaMocha: Thats chill
16:49 PolkaMocha: I love you by the way
16:49 Hobbes2: Glad to help :p
16:49 PolkaMocha: lowkey
16:49 Hobbes2: So I've been looking at 12:00 AM, the BPM is definitely 85
16:49 PolkaMocha: IM GLAD UR GLAD
16:49 Hobbes2: offset is tricky because I cant exactly figure out what the downbeat is supposed to be
16:49 Hobbes2: atm im thinking offset 166 with 3/4 measure
16:50 PolkaMocha: I dont care about downbeats I just want an offbeat
16:50 PolkaMocha: *offset
16:50 Hobbes2: 166 should work then
16:50 PolkaMocha: tbh I dont think this song has a solid measure
16:50 Hobbes2: yea thats true
16:50 Hobbes2: 3/4 or 4/4 probably doesn't matter
16:50 PolkaMocha: The little guitar bits seem to just kind of happen wherever
16:50 Hobbes2: yeah
16:50 PolkaMocha: Like the guitar player just kinda /does/
16:51 Hobbes2: I actually think they're 1/12, but that could be a coincidence
16:51 PolkaMocha: Wait how does that work
16:51 Hobbes2: guitar guy literally wasn't in the room it sounds like
16:51 PolkaMocha: Yeah no kidding
16:51 PolkaMocha: Hold da fuq
16:51 PolkaMocha: That beat literally goes to nothing please explain
16:52 Hobbes2: As far as I can tell, you won't be able to map some parts of this song lol
16:52 Hobbes2: Unless the BPM changes for a very short amount of time
16:52 PolkaMocha: ;-;
16:52 Hobbes2: which I don't think it does
16:52 PolkaMocha: ;-;-;-;
16:52 PolkaMocha: I want to map every fucking inch of this
16:52 Hobbes2: let me look again
16:53 PolkaMocha: I would do it but timing songs on my laptop makes it run rlly slow .-.
16:53 Hobbes2: o god its 1/6
16:53 Hobbes2: rip you
16:54 PolkaMocha: wot
16:54 Hobbes2: alright so as of this second, the bpm is 85 and the offset is 132
16:54 Hobbes2: animal crossing pls
16:55 Hobbes2: why is this so complex x_x
16:55 PolkaMocha: SHouldnt the offset be when the guitar does the thing
16:56 Hobbes2: Well not necessarily
16:56 Hobbes2: in this specific case, I'd say no
16:56 Hobbes2: because then the claps are off
16:56 PolkaMocha: Shitsu
16:56 Hobbes2: I'm gonna get some professional help from music friend one sec
16:56 PolkaMocha: I want to map those claps
16:56 PolkaMocha: pls do
16:58 Hobbes2: Alright so the reason is I say 132 for offset is partly because it makes this part match up perfectly
16:58 Hobbes2: 00:23:426 -
16:58 PolkaMocha: Oh shit
16:58 PolkaMocha: so if nothing else matches
16:58 PolkaMocha: but that part
16:58 Hobbes2: and the claps in that area all sound perfect
16:58 PolkaMocha: there must be two BPMS...
16:59 Hobbes2: like just listening near that with all the claps, the claps are weird themselves but match the 85 bpm
16:59 Hobbes2: i cant figure out this guitar
16:59 PolkaMocha: Fuck that guitar
16:59 PolkaMocha: I can just 1/16 that shit
16:59 PolkaMocha: I just want the beat to match up
16:59 PolkaMocha: with the little drum bits
17:00 Hobbes2: in that case, I should be right
17:00 Hobbes2: hopefully ;-;
17:00 PolkaMocha: Does what we have match all drum bits?
17:01 Hobbes2: yeah
17:01 Hobbes2: also, guitar seems to be 1/12
17:01 Hobbes2: for future reference
17:01 PolkaMocha: o
17:01 PolkaMocha: Thas fair
17:01 PolkaMocha: okiedokie smokey
17:01 Hobbes2: yee
17:02 PolkaMocha: so does our current bpm fit all drum bits
17:02 Hobbes2: yep, even when its fading out
17:03 PolkaMocha: I fucking love you
17:03 Hobbes2: 01:05:073 and 01:05:779 are examples of near the fade out
17:04 Hobbes2: when the bpm matches the claps
17:04 PolkaMocha: I wont map the fade out anyway
17:04 PolkaMocha: doin' a spinnar
17:05 Hobbes2: yeye but it confirms the bpm is right and doesn't randomly change
17:05 Hobbes2: if it still works after a loop
17:05 PolkaMocha: True
17:05 PolkaMocha: THis is beautiful
17:05 PolkaMocha: Thank your so much forever I am eternally in debt to you
17:06 Hobbes2: Like I said before, glad to help!
17:06 Hobbes2: quick comment,
17:06 Hobbes2: 1. Offset: 132ms BPM: 85.00
17:06 Hobbes2: smh ignore that
17:06 PolkaMocha: coo
17:06 Hobbes2: 01:08:602
17:06 Hobbes2: here if you want to map these like 3 notes
17:06 PolkaMocha: Combine all of your help into the first timing post
17:07 Hobbes2: you should set an offset there with the 67 bpm
17:07 PolkaMocha: I wont map those
17:07 Hobbes2: oh ok
17:07 PolkaMocha: Its all good in the hood desu
17:07 PolkaMocha: Im adding you btw
17:07 Hobbes2: I'll do the same then
17:07 PolkaMocha: If theres ever anything I can do for you please let me know
17:07 Hobbes2: 1:00 AM sounds perfect
17:07 Hobbes2: I assume these are in order
17:07 PolkaMocha: 8'D
17:07 Hobbes2: by time
17:07 PolkaMocha: Yupyup
17:08 PolkaMocha: 12 to 6~
17:08 Hobbes2: 2:00 AM was a nightmore z_z
17:08 PolkaMocha: But you did it \o/
17:08 Hobbes2: I spent like 20 minutes tapping it out and getting frustrated before I just did it by ear starting at 70 and going up 1 BPM at a time
17:08 Hobbes2: probably not the most effecient way of doing it but
17:08 Hobbes2: it worked lol
17:08 PolkaMocha: Thats what I did!
17:08 PolkaMocha: But I stopped at 80 lmao
17:09 Hobbes2: lol
17:09 Hobbes2: I guess I can just copy this whole thing and put it in the forum? or should I just summarize the changes
17:09 Hobbes2: ill summarize
17:09 PolkaMocha: Yay I can map and storyboard nowwww
17:09 PolkaMocha: Um
17:09 PolkaMocha: you could do a /savelog
17:09 PolkaMocha: and then copy paste into your first forum post
17:09 Hobbes2: that'll work
17:10 PolkaMocha: along with any other help you provided in the other posts
17:10 PolkaMocha: Just put everything into the posted I kd'd ya for
17:10 Hobbes2: 207,873 for the timing point there
17:10 Hobbes2: offset that is
17:10 Hobbes2: its like a few ms off the one you have now but I think ti's more accurate
17:10 PolkaMocha: What is it
17:11 Hobbes2: for 3:00 am
17:11 PolkaMocha: I meant what is the offset
17:11 Hobbes2: o
17:11 Hobbes2: 207,873, you have 207,849 now
17:12 PolkaMocha: DOne thank you
17:12 PolkaMocha: You are a beautiful human being
17:14 Hobbes2: 4:00 AM, the offset is 300,253, you have 300,239, but the difference is almost negligble so I may not be right
17:14 Hobbes2: You be the judge for this one
17:15 PolkaMocha: 300,251 works good
17:15 Hobbes2: kk
17:15 Hobbes2: 5 am sounds perfect
17:16 PolkaMocha: Woot
17:17 Hobbes2: 6:00 am 454,811 sounds correct.
17:17 Hobbes2: you had 454,793
17:17 Hobbes2: w8
17:18 Hobbes2: I gave you that one didnt i
17:18 Hobbes2: lol oops
17:18 PolkaMocha: lmao
17:18 Hobbes2: well 454,811 is right
17:18 Hobbes2: forget past me
17:18 Hobbes2: he was wrong
17:19 PolkaMocha: What a bitch
17:19 PolkaMocha: Changed
17:19 Hobbes2: alrighty, then i'll /savelog this and edit the kudosu'd post
Topic Starter
polka

Hobbes2 wrote:

Good luck with timing this monstrosity, I say this because 2 A.M. in particular is an absolute nightmare (tried to map that one myself a while back but gave up because it had some of the weirdest timing I've seen)

As a quick comment, the offset of your final timing point so far should be 454,793
Ah that fits! Yay!
Hobbes2
Alright, so I've been looking at this and your timing point at 126,335 (the song 2 am) should have a bpm of 82, not 76. Ugh, that took me way to long to time lol.

Will edit this post with future timing stuff if I find any.

EDIT 1 - First timing point: offset 114 BPM 85 (song: 12:00 AM)

The BPM is for sure right but the offset I can't seem to figure out where the downbeats are supposed to be so the offset is probably wrong.

EDIT 2 - For 12:00 AM, try offset 166 BPM 85 3/4 measure. This seems to be correct if I'm not mistaken.

EDIT 3 - See kudosu'd post for IRC timing stuff
Topic Starter
polka

Hobbes2 wrote:

Alright, so I've been looking at this and your timing point at 126,335 (the song 2 am) should have a bpm of 82, not 76. Ugh, that took me way to long to time lol.

Will edit this post with future timing stuff if I find any.
The kudos I gave you will count for all ya timing help.

This fits perfect thank you so much.
Hobbes2
its back
Topic Starter
polka

Hobbes2 wrote:

its back
stalkin ass bitch

ya it is ha
riffy
Made a few suggestions via IRC. Mostly just spacing/hitsounding. Pointed out that timing could be improved.

10:52 PolkaMocha: Hey there heart throb are you taking mod reqs rn
10:53 Bakari: yeah, I have 0 maps to mod rn
10:53 PolkaMocha: oh perfect
10:53 *PolkaMocha is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1002859 Kazumi Totaka, Manaka Kataoka, and Atsuko Asahi - 12 A.M. ~ 6 A.M. [Twilight]]
10:54 PolkaMocha: If you accept dont mod the metadata tho cuz I need to fix that ouo
10:54 PolkaMocha: and if you need a mod in return just hmu
10:56 Bakari: I've tried checking metadata with one of these sets
10:56 Bakari: it was something deep and dark
10:56 Bakari: nobody had a clear idea of what was up with it
10:56 PolkaMocha: animal crossing?!
10:56 PolkaMocha: Oh
10:56 PolkaMocha: yeah
10:56 PolkaMocha: rip
10:57 PolkaMocha: We decided on one of my map forums
10:57 PolkaMocha: after arguing forever
10:57 PolkaMocha: they just list two kiddos in the credits under MUSIC
10:57 PolkaMocha: and thats it so ive just been using them
10:57 PolkaMocha: but this metadata is wrong I gotta fixxu
10:57 Bakari: oh
10:57 Bakari: a storyboard
10:58 PolkaMocha: YA
10:58 PolkaMocha: FOR ONCE
10:59 Bakari: should I do an IRC check?
10:59 Bakari: or do you prefer a regular mod on the forum?
11:00 PolkaMocha: Uhhhhhhhhhh
11:00 PolkaMocha: if its easier for you to IRC we can do that
11:01 Bakari: it doesn't really matter for me, pick whatever way you prefer
11:01 PolkaMocha: irc is cool
11:01 PolkaMocha: lemme shut my other conversations up one sec
11:02 PolkaMocha: OKIE DOKE
11:02 Bakari: "hey, dude, that's a nice chat now get the hell out of here, imma do some irc modding"
11:02 *PolkaMocha is away: IRC mod but type anyway Ill look when Im done @u@
11:02 PolkaMocha: Lmao basically
11:02 PolkaMocha: alrighty
11:02 Bakari: you actually did that, wow
11:02 Bakari: alright, starting with the SB stuff
11:02 PolkaMocha: HAJIMEMASHOU
11:02 PolkaMocha: Yeah lel
11:02 Bakari: since you use scaled 4:3 background
11:03 PolkaMocha: Wait
11:03 PolkaMocha: SB isnt mine
11:03 PolkaMocha: idk if I should take mods for it ;-;
11:03 PolkaMocha: Here Ill juust take notes and pass along
11:03 PolkaMocha: continue mb
11:03 Bakari: oh, is it still wip, btw?
11:04 PolkaMocha: Yah
11:04 Bakari: they might fix it later, anyways
11:04 Bakari: let's move on
11:04 Bakari: boring general stuff
11:04 PolkaMocha: okie doke
11:05 Bakari: you really shouldn't mute both sliderslide and slidertick
11:05 Bakari: if players can't hear a slider, why would you place it?
11:05 PolkaMocha: Your right
11:05 PolkaMocha: I might take that out
11:05 PolkaMocha: *meant to
11:05 Bakari: aimod unsnapped stuff
11:05 PolkaMocha: WHich once should I get rid of
11:06 Bakari: it depends
11:06 Bakari: I'd keep the sliderslide
11:06 Bakari: so, that we could hear ticks
11:06 Bakari: a few ticks every now and then are okay, constant background noise produced by sliders isn't
11:07 PolkaMocha: I kepts slider slide
11:07 PolkaMocha: fixed snappy business
11:08 Bakari: I just realized
11:08 Bakari: that someone actually wrote these pieces of music
11:08 Bakari: in case somebody plays the game at 3 am
11:09 PolkaMocha: LMAO
11:10 Bakari: 00:11:205 (5) - shouldn't the slider be longer?
11:10 Bakari: 00:11:602 - like untill here
11:11 PolkaMocha: Uhhhh maybe
11:11 PolkaMocha: I just didnt want to have people be confused
11:11 PolkaMocha: on how long to hold it
11:11 PolkaMocha: but okay I dragged it out until 00:11:514
11:12 Bakari: I'm kinda confused with snapping stuff in general
11:12 PolkaMocha: Yeah me too
11:12 Bakari: like it works, but there's 1/16 snapping :V
11:12 PolkaMocha: 12 am was a weird timing
11:13 PolkaMocha: Im just going to wait until a timing QAT finds their way here and barks at me
11:13 PolkaMocha: because Ive given up trying to find help
11:13 Bakari: 00:14:161 (5,7) - then these are noticeably off
11:13 Bakari: try poking pishifat
11:13 PolkaMocha: Slow down the playback I dont think so
11:13 PolkaMocha: OH
11:13 PolkaMocha: THEY ARER
11:13 PolkaMocha: Fixed
11:14 PolkaMocha: I scooted (5) and (6) a tad to the right
11:14 PolkaMocha: and they sound okay now
11:14 Bakari: 00:22:014 (1,2) - these two could be a slider
11:14 PolkaMocha: I had that but it looked complicated
11:14 PolkaMocha: Ill add it back
11:14 Bakari: so players don't have to readjust in the middle of a stream
11:15 Bakari: slider will work as a single circle here
11:15 Bakari: with the only difference of making the second sound
11:15 PolkaMocha: Okay
11:15 PolkaMocha: Added back
11:16 Bakari: 00:42:870 - the beat is fairly strong, could use an individual clickable circle
11:16 Bakari: you'd have to mute (3)'s tail, though
11:17 PolkaMocha: Mmmm I'll leave it for now because I like the simplicity
11:17 Bakari: this would also help you to get rid of the slidertick, which doesn't sound quite natural
11:17 PolkaMocha: Actually
11:17 PolkaMocha: I think I kept the silent tick
11:17 Bakari: and this would be consistent with 00:45:109 (4,5) -
11:18 PolkaMocha: Well those are two different rhythms
11:18 PolkaMocha: Im going to keep this because Id like to keep things simple for this part
11:18 PolkaMocha: Ill keep the idea in mind though
11:18 Bakari: 00:48:691 (3) - i will mention that as well just for the sake of making the log longer
11:18 PolkaMocha: lol
11:18 Bakari: in case you ever get back to this, remember that this requires the same change :p
11:19 PolkaMocha: got it
11:20 Bakari: 00:56:303 (4) - there are three individual notes and theyt are louder/higher than the previous ones. try to use circles? http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/nSyI8lZ2.jpg
11:20 PolkaMocha: Well I already used circles before that so I feel it will be overkill
11:20 PolkaMocha: Plus I like how the slider captures how the notes feel slightly held
11:21 Bakari: nothing is an overkill on 67 BPM :p
11:21 Bakari: alrighty, as long as you like it
11:21 Bakari: we have no problem
11:21 PolkaMocha: \o/
11:21 Bakari: 01:10:183 (3) - I'd really prefer just a single whistle
11:21 PolkaMocha: Ill keep it in mind for when others potentially bring it up
11:21 Bakari: 01:17:348 (3) - same whistle thing
11:21 PolkaMocha: I agree but using the hitsounds to their full capability is important
11:22 Bakari: oh
11:22 PolkaMocha: They are meant to animate the map and give it some pizazz
11:22 Bakari: we can try to get that finish thing and make it quieter
11:22 PolkaMocha: So I feel by adding that, it makes this part feel more original then the rest of the whistley bits, and is a nice unique way to finish the part
11:22 PolkaMocha: I can turn it it down though yeah
11:22 Bakari: yeah
11:23 Bakari: actually I'd go for something fancy here
11:23 Bakari: keep the volume, so the whistle is just as loud as it is now
11:23 Bakari: and add a custom finish hitsound with reduced volume
11:23 PolkaMocha: Okay so what I did was
11:24 Bakari: so there is some soft echo-like finish hitsound
11:24 PolkaMocha: I thought keeping the whistle quuiet would be cool too
11:24 PolkaMocha: so all of the finishes got reduced to 30
11:24 PolkaMocha: and the really quiet one got reduced to 20
11:24 PolkaMocha: however the other parts in between are still at 40
11:25 PolkaMocha: It sounds way better and less brash
11:25 Bakari: works as well, nice
11:26 PolkaMocha: \o/
11:27 Bakari: 02:20:885 (6,1) - I'd give these two some increase in spacing, so they don't overlap
11:27 Bakari: kinda like 5-6
11:28 PolkaMocha: 02:20:885 (6) - was a jump
11:28 PolkaMocha: so I went back to normal spacing\
11:28 PolkaMocha: plus ths was a pretty edgy design so spacing them out makes them a little too out of my style
11:28 Bakari: you know that slider to slider jumps are way easier to hit, right?
11:29 PolkaMocha: Yeah
11:29 Bakari: I mean you can drop the slider at practically any moment and still get a 300
11:29 PolkaMocha: Im just syaing I dont want to jump if I dont need to
11:29 Bakari: fair enough
11:29 PolkaMocha: If I spaced those out, they would be inconsistent with all of the other notes within the same prosimity getting overlapped
11:30 PolkaMocha: *proximity
11:30 PolkaMocha: and I would get shit for that too so ouo;
11:31 Bakari: I don't think anyone would ever complain about a few minor spacing changes at this bpm :D
11:31 Bakari: anyway, moving on
11:31 Bakari: 02:41:876 (2) - this is for whoever checks the timing next
11:31 PolkaMocha: Tru, but I dont agree when people say you can be lazier because its lower bpm
11:31 PolkaMocha: Ok
11:31 Bakari: yes it works and the slidertick doesn't show up in-game
11:32 PolkaMocha: It sounds find to me but mmk
11:32 Bakari: but it makes the slider pretty heavy in terms of accuracy
11:32 PolkaMocha: 02:41:876 (2) - ?
11:32 Bakari: yeah
11:32 PolkaMocha: How is this heavy
11:32 Bakari: for some reason players don't see, they are required to hold it untill the end
11:32 PolkaMocha: the OD is really low
11:33 PolkaMocha: Well I feel the OD is a low enough that they wont take a major hit from this tbh
11:33 PolkaMocha: And I really have no idea how to fix it to be more precise ouo;
11:33 Bakari: just for testing purposes set the tickrate to 0,5 and drop the slider earlier
11:33 Bakari: then try the same with tick rate 1
11:34 PolkaMocha: idk how
11:34 Bakari: it's just an extra comment on why we should check timings
11:34 PolkaMocha: OH for whoever reads this
11:34 PolkaMocha: @no one
11:34 Bakari: just point that out
11:34 PolkaMocha: k
11:35 Bakari: if anyone says that the timing doesn't need to be checked
11:35 PolkaMocha: Oh ok
11:35 Bakari: 03:02:498 (4) - try to reduce the volume on the clap? the sound gets kinda cut off
11:36 PolkaMocha: okay
11:36 PolkaMocha: reduced to 35
11:37 Bakari: I've actually started putting some effort into hitsounding less than a year ago
11:37 Bakari: so I am still quite new to this whole thing
11:37 PolkaMocha: I put effort I think
11:37 PolkaMocha: starting yesterday
11:38 Bakari: 03:10:655 (2,3) - try to space them a bit closer, s they are not misread as something like 03:09:077 (5,6) -
11:38 PolkaMocha: spaced with DS
11:38 Bakari: 03:16:971 (2) - same thing about reducing volume
11:39 PolkaMocha: reduced
11:39 Bakari: http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/XkjlvycB.jpg you could try sometihng like this
11:39 PolkaMocha: oh ok
11:41 Bakari: 04:15:184 (2,3) - being the only stack in this part it feels pretty random
11:41 PolkaMocha: Well I couldnt space them out in a way that wouldnt make them ugly
11:41 Bakari: http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/C6H2NpRB.jpg
11:41 PolkaMocha: and another slider would have just been crowded
11:42 Bakari: some spicy tilted square
11:42 PolkaMocha: okay
11:42 PolkaMocha: Yeah thats hot im down
11:43 Bakari: 04:43:178 (4,1) - this being the only jump in this part feels quite weird
11:43 PolkaMocha: isnt really a jump
11:43 Bakari: can we introduce a few smaller jumps on the downbeats before, so it gets more consistent?
11:43 PolkaMocha: you dont even have to move in the sliders direction to play it
11:43 PolkaMocha: Ummm... that'd be a lot of work to re sound and all
11:44 PolkaMocha: Ill keep it unless more modders point it out
11:44 Bakari: that'd require just moving a few combos a few grids on the left/right, actually
11:44 Bakari: but yeah, you decide
11:45 Bakari: 05:13:930 - try to lower the volume here? it gets quiet mid-slider
11:46 PolkaMocha: There really is no where to move things around to make a nice jump, and to be fair, it really doesnt play like one
11:46 Bakari: then let's keep it as it is, as long as you are happy with the way it works
11:46 PolkaMocha: done
11:46 PolkaMocha: okay
11:47 PolkaMocha: done for the slider volume I mean
11:47 PolkaMocha: I gradually lowered it by 10 every 1/4 tick
11:47 Bakari: 05:40:477 (2) - and maybe mute the tail here?
11:47 Bakari: by mute I men a 5% volume at the tail
11:47 Bakari: 05:44:095 (2) - same
11:47 PolkaMocha: ok
11:48 Bakari: ok, that's about it
11:48 PolkaMocha: yaaaay
11:48 Bakari: just the timing stuff that really confuses me
11:48 Bakari: everything else is okay
11:48 PolkaMocha: me too
11:48 PolkaMocha: I think what happened was
11:48 PolkaMocha: Me and some buddies got it timed right
11:48 PolkaMocha: and then I cut the mp3 from 8 minutes to 6
11:49 PolkaMocha: then to 5
11:49 PolkaMocha: so that caused me to re adjust a lot of them
11:49 PolkaMocha: and I think maybe some points got lost in transition idk
11:49 Bakari: could be so
11:49 Bakari: audio editing software tends to screw up timings

Pretty neat marathon, actually.

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Best of luck!
Topic Starter
polka
o/ thanks bakari
Renumi
this beat is lit
Topic Starter
polka

Renumi wrote:

this beat is lit
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there is no beat
Stingy
holy frick ?

02:57:234 (1) - I don't think you care, but the sides aren't even c: Loosen the left half or tighten the first half
03:18:303 (3,1) - Parallel pls c:
03:43:548 (1,2) - Make the path linear pls you know how picky I am
03:51:729 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Uuuhm this is definitely Monstrata pp mapping B^) kds pls
Topic Starter
polka

Stingy wrote:

holy frick ? :arrow:?

02:57:234 (1) - I don't think you care, but the sides aren't even c: Loosen the left half or tighten the first half :arrow:ok
03:18:303 (3,1) - Parallel pls c: :arrow::arrow:they are...
03:43:548 (1,2) - Make the path linear pls you know how picky I am :arrow:it is
03:51:729 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Uuuhm this is definitely Monstrata pp mapping B^) kds pls :arrow:what
thanks. Will update once 7 ji and 8 ji gets qualified
Plaudible
11:36 PolkaMocha: Maxxxxx you should mod something for me
11:36 Plaudible: hold up
11:36 Plaudible: gota eat fud
11:36 Plaudible: but i b bek soon
11:37 PolkaMocha: k
11:48 Plaudible: ok
11:48 Plaudible: im bek dad
11:50 PolkaMocha: Wb missed u
11:51 *PolkaMocha is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1002859 Kazumi Totaka, Manaka Kataoka, and Atsuko Asahi - 12 A.M. ~ 6 A.M. [Twilight]]
11:52 Plaudible: oo
11:52 Plaudible: can i irc pls
11:52 PolkaMocha: Ummm in a minute
11:53 Plaudible: im getting many cancers
11:58 PolkaMocha: ok
11:58 PolkaMocha: update
11:58 PolkaMocha: also why
11:58 PolkaMocha: delete the map you have
11:58 PolkaMocha: and redl
12:00 Plaudible: oh ok
12:02 PolkaMocha: do it once more because I added the skin
12:02 PolkaMocha: x)
12:02 Plaudible: omfg
12:04 Plaudible: omfg
12:04 Plaudible: u did something for this?
12:04 *Plaudible is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1097128 Ariel Winter - Sofia The First]
12:04 Plaudible: u disgusting
12:04 PolkaMocha: ^u^
12:04 PolkaMocha: Its dead lol
12:04 Plaudible: ok honestly
12:04 Plaudible: the whole intro bugs me
12:04 Plaudible: XD
12:04 PolkaMocha: Sorry ono
12:04 Plaudible: especially with how
12:04 Plaudible: simple the rhythm is in this song for the most part
12:05 Plaudible: it should be mapped pretty empty given how chill it is to start
12:05 Plaudible: likei 'd just make 00:00:749 (1) - a circle for examporu
12:05 PolkaMocha: It is pretty empty
12:05 PolkaMocha: Aw hell no
12:05 Plaudible: then stuff like 00:13:845 (2,3,4,5,6) -
12:05 PolkaMocha: thats ignoring the held note
12:05 PolkaMocha: that's single tappable its not that hard lol
12:05 Plaudible: not really, sometimes its better for emphasis on how empty it is >:V
12:06 PolkaMocha: I disagree sorry
12:06 Plaudible: 00:11:170 (5) - tfw mapping cricket chirp
12:06 Plaudible: 00:09:741 (2,3,4) - could be reverse slider to reduce density, feels excessive
12:06 PolkaMocha: Its not crickets lol
12:06 PolkaMocha: It's not that dense its 1/1 beats lol
12:06 Plaudible: also
12:06 PolkaMocha: Just skip this one dear god
12:06 Plaudible: why u ignore held sound at 00:14:551 (6) -
12:07 PolkaMocha: How am I supposed to map that without overcluttering
12:07 Plaudible: 00:13:845 (2,3,4,5) - reverse slider pls? </3
12:07 PolkaMocha: considering 00:15:055 (7) - happens right after
12:07 PolkaMocha: no ew
12:07 Plaudible: 00:22:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - nani the fuk's the spacing
12:07 PolkaMocha: 4 repeats on a slider lmao thats like non existent
12:07 PolkaMocha: its all distance snapped
12:08 Plaudible: even if OD is low as fuck to kinda make doing this not kill ur acc just
12:08 Plaudible: these weird rhythms imo would be better left unmapped or simplified @-@
12:08 PolkaMocha: I had my friend play it who'se only good for 2.8 stars down
12:08 PolkaMocha: and he had
12:08 PolkaMocha: NO trouble with that so
12:08 Plaudible: yea cause low OD
12:09 Plaudible: doesnt make it not cancer>:c
12:09 PolkaMocha: exaclty
12:09 PolkaMocha: so its not a problem
12:09 Plaudible: 00:24:189 (1,2) - im guessing ur doing this to the tinkly tink tink
12:09 PolkaMocha: yah crp suggested I
12:09 Plaudible: shouldnt it start at 00:23:537 (9) - the
12:09 PolkaMocha: find the bpm for it and do repeat sliders
12:09 PolkaMocha: Nah its stronger where I started it
12:10 PolkaMocha: plus stream -> slider art is difficult and ugly
12:10 Plaudible: at leas make the volume lower for thes
12:10 Plaudible: two sliders
12:10 Plaudible: cause the sounds sound so out of place >_<
12:10 PolkaMocha: the two end sliders?
12:10 Plaudible: fr
12:10 PolkaMocha: okay.
12:10 Plaudible: make the volume
12:10 Plaudible: in the whole start
12:10 Plaudible: louder for some of the louder sounds and way soft for the clicky shit
12:10 Plaudible: it's all the same and makes it weirdd
12:10 Plaudible: like 00:09:741 (2,3,4,5) -
12:10 Plaudible: especially 5
12:11 Plaudible: should be really quiet
12:11 PolkaMocha: lol
12:11 Plaudible: 00:11:987 (1) - is fine
12:11 PolkaMocha: Okay Ill mess with the volume a bit
12:11 Plaudible: ok that's where most my triggering was
12:11 PolkaMocha: Ill do it later though so we can keep going
12:11 Plaudible: 00:45:109 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - sexy
12:12 PolkaMocha: ty ty
12:12 Plaudible: cute sb
12:13 PolkaMocha: Isnt noffy amazing haha
12:13 PolkaMocha: its all so precious
12:14 Plaudible: 02:16:495 (3,1) - could you amke overlap prettier w/ 2
12:14 Plaudible: like pull it left a bit :<
12:14 PolkaMocha: no bc ds ono
12:14 PolkaMocha: I actually really like how that looks?
12:14 PolkaMocha: oh left
12:14 Plaudible: yee
12:15 Plaudible: dont put it like underneath the loopy bit imo
12:15 Plaudible: it loosk lik its a part of the loop further left
12:15 Plaudible: and is sexer imo
12:15 PolkaMocha: oj
12:15 PolkaMocha: ok
12:15 PolkaMocha: the farthest I can get it is
12:15 PolkaMocha: here
12:15 PolkaMocha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7607370
12:15 Plaudible: perfect
12:15 Plaudible: love it :ok_hand:
12:16 PolkaMocha: yeet
12:16 Plaudible: 03:09:077 (5,6) - slider instead maybe? owo
12:16 Plaudible: its like the same rhythm over and over, idk
12:16 PolkaMocha: I like them as duplets o3o
12:16 Plaudible: but makes it a bit more consistent
12:17 PolkaMocha: yeah but too much consistency becomes boring
12:17 Plaudible: 03:24:593 (3) - duplet daddy?
12:17 PolkaMocha: So I wanted to very it
12:17 PolkaMocha: *vary
12:17 Plaudible: 03:18:277 (3) - this one too tbh
12:17 Plaudible: 3 duplets like that = win
12:17 PolkaMocha: I dont think that first sound is strong enough for a duplet
12:17 Plaudible: nigga
12:17 PolkaMocha: same there sorry ono
12:17 Plaudible: its the same
12:17 PolkaMocha: it feels like a twist noice
12:17 Plaudible: like legit
12:17 PolkaMocha: *noise
12:17 Plaudible: all 3 are the same
12:17 PolkaMocha: I dont hear to seperate sounds sorry
12:17 Plaudible: OMFG POLKA
12:17 Plaudible: IMA SHANK UR NAN
12:18 PolkaMocha: soRRY
12:18 PolkaMocha: GO AHEAD YOU WONT WIN
12:18 PolkaMocha: SHE TEACHES KARATE
12:18 Plaudible: holy shit
12:18 Plaudible: ok nv
12:18 PolkaMocha: ○u○
12:18 Plaudible: but legit i will fite u over that, they're the same, 3 duplets would make it easier to interpret that </3
12:18 Plaudible: the duplet sticks out too much for something so similar
12:18 Plaudible: so pls do consider dad
12:18 PolkaMocha: I just tried it
12:19 PolkaMocha: and I dont like it sorry ;-;-;
12:20 PolkaMocha: sorrysorry ;-;
12:20 Plaudible: </3
12:20 Plaudible: kk
12:20 PolkaMocha: Ily tho
12:20 Plaudible: 03:51:729 (1) - seems like this part's the hardest in the song, my moddingassistant is buggy af tho so i cant check
12:20 Plaudible: this really where u want it to be?
12:20 PolkaMocha: probably is
12:20 PolkaMocha: Yeah sure
12:21 PolkaMocha: its the fastest song
12:21 PolkaMocha: intense focused sound
12:21 PolkaMocha: why not haha
12:21 Plaudible: kk
12:21 Plaudible: yknow tbh
12:21 Plaudible: i'd swap the rhythms
12:21 Plaudible: 03:56:639 (1) -
12:21 Plaudible: put these the part before
12:21 Plaudible: then the triangle small jumps where the reverse sliders are
12:21 Plaudible: cause they're just like
12:21 Plaudible: more intensey
12:22 PolkaMocha: Hmmm
12:22 PolkaMocha: sounds the same to me ono
12:22 PolkaMocha: plus I really likke 03:55:002 (1,2,3,1) -
12:22 PolkaMocha: this
12:22 Plaudible: well like
12:22 Plaudible: 03:51:729 -
12:22 Plaudible: vs
12:22 Plaudible: 03:39:911
12:22 Plaudible: oops
12:22 Plaudible: 03:59:911 -
12:23 Plaudible: the piano starts comin in
12:23 PolkaMocha: It sounds softer to me though
12:23 PolkaMocha: because the piano isnt as intense as the xylophone
12:23 PolkaMocha: or vibraphone or whatever the frick
12:23 Plaudible: but you use a lot of singles when the piano is the main part
12:23 Plaudible: 04:11:366 (2,3,4,5) -
12:23 PolkaMocha: do I?
12:23 PolkaMocha: No I do not
12:23 PolkaMocha: Oh hey there
12:24 PolkaMocha: Piano got really loud there for me idk
12:24 Plaudible: change that a tad then maybe
12:24 Plaudible: cause it sticks out with 4 singles
12:24 Plaudible: like single slider single idk
12:24 Plaudible: 04:34:928 (1) - clap here is absolute cancer it's so much louder than the music T_T
12:24 Plaudible: pls change
12:24 Plaudible: also holy shit those sheep are totally fucking each other
12:24 PolkaMocha: reduced to 35
12:25 PolkaMocha: yes they are dammit
12:25 Plaudible: 05:35:592 (5) - idk things like this i feel they should be both clickable
12:25 Plaudible: they're the same sound and sliders = strong to weak intensity
12:26 Plaudible: since u cant click ends
12:26 Plaudible: and it just feels wrong uwu
12:26 PolkaMocha: Yeah true
12:26 PolkaMocha: okay
12:26 Plaudible: kk das all i got
12:26 Plaudible: polka u better map harder shit modding e-h is boring
12:26 PolkaMocha: LOL
12:27 PolkaMocha: Uh well after this
12:27 PolkaMocha: I have another map at about 2.48 * hardest
12:27 PolkaMocha: OH
12:27 PolkaMocha: #12
12:27 PolkaMocha: KK bubblegum I think thats like 160 bpm
12:27 PolkaMocha: I'll make 4 star for that so stay tuned ouo
12:28 PolkaMocha: post log in thread for kd
12:28 Plaudible: `kk
12:28 Plaudible: tanks dad
Topic Starter
polka

Plaudible wrote:

11:36 PolkaMocha: Maxxxxx you should mod something for me
11:36 Plaudible: hold up
11:36 Plaudible: gota eat fud
11:36 Plaudible: but i b bek soon
11:37 PolkaMocha: k
11:48 Plaudible: ok
11:48 Plaudible: im bek dad
11:50 PolkaMocha: Wb missed u
11:51 *PolkaMocha is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1002859 Kazumi Totaka, Manaka Kataoka, and Atsuko Asahi - 12 A.M. ~ 6 A.M. [Twilight]]
11:52 Plaudible: oo
11:52 Plaudible: can i irc pls
11:52 PolkaMocha: Ummm in a minute
11:53 Plaudible: im getting many cancers
11:58 PolkaMocha: ok
11:58 PolkaMocha: update
11:58 PolkaMocha: also why
11:58 PolkaMocha: delete the map you have
11:58 PolkaMocha: and redl
12:00 Plaudible: oh ok
12:02 PolkaMocha: do it once more because I added the skin
12:02 PolkaMocha: x)
12:02 Plaudible: omfg
12:04 Plaudible: omfg
12:04 Plaudible: u did something for this?
12:04 *Plaudible is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1097128 Ariel Winter - Sofia The First]
12:04 Plaudible: u disgusting
12:04 PolkaMocha: ^u^
12:04 PolkaMocha: Its dead lol
12:04 Plaudible: ok honestly
12:04 Plaudible: the whole intro bugs me
12:04 Plaudible: XD
12:04 PolkaMocha: Sorry ono
12:04 Plaudible: especially with how
12:04 Plaudible: simple the rhythm is in this song for the most part
12:05 Plaudible: it should be mapped pretty empty given how chill it is to start
12:05 Plaudible: likei 'd just make 00:00:749 (1) - a circle for examporu
12:05 PolkaMocha: It is pretty empty
12:05 PolkaMocha: Aw hell no
12:05 Plaudible: then stuff like 00:13:845 (2,3,4,5,6) -
12:05 PolkaMocha: thats ignoring the held note
12:05 PolkaMocha: that's single tappable its not that hard lol
12:05 Plaudible: not really, sometimes its better for emphasis on how empty it is >:V
12:06 PolkaMocha: I disagree sorry
12:06 Plaudible: 00:11:170 (5) - tfw mapping cricket chirp
12:06 Plaudible: 00:09:741 (2,3,4) - could be reverse slider to reduce density, feels excessive
12:06 PolkaMocha: Its not crickets lol
12:06 PolkaMocha: It's not that dense its 1/1 beats lol
12:06 Plaudible: also
12:06 PolkaMocha: Just skip this one dear god
12:06 Plaudible: why u ignore held sound at 00:14:551 (6) -
12:07 PolkaMocha: How am I supposed to map that without overcluttering
12:07 Plaudible: 00:13:845 (2,3,4,5) - reverse slider pls? </3
12:07 PolkaMocha: considering 00:15:055 (7) - happens right after
12:07 PolkaMocha: no ew
12:07 Plaudible: 00:22:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - nani the fuk's the spacing
12:07 PolkaMocha: 4 repeats on a slider lmao thats like non existent
12:07 PolkaMocha: its all distance snapped
12:08 Plaudible: even if OD is low as fuck to kinda make doing this not kill ur acc just
12:08 Plaudible: these weird rhythms imo would be better left unmapped or simplified @-@
12:08 PolkaMocha: I had my friend play it who'se only good for 2.8 stars down
12:08 PolkaMocha: and he had
12:08 PolkaMocha: NO trouble with that so
12:08 Plaudible: yea cause low OD
12:09 Plaudible: doesnt make it not cancer>:c
12:09 PolkaMocha: exaclty
12:09 PolkaMocha: so its not a problem
12:09 Plaudible: 00:24:189 (1,2) - im guessing ur doing this to the tinkly tink tink
12:09 PolkaMocha: yah crp suggested I
12:09 Plaudible: shouldnt it start at 00:23:537 (9) - the
12:09 PolkaMocha: find the bpm for it and do repeat sliders
12:09 PolkaMocha: Nah its stronger where I started it
12:10 PolkaMocha: plus stream -> slider art is difficult and ugly
12:10 Plaudible: at leas make the volume lower for thes
12:10 Plaudible: two sliders
12:10 Plaudible: cause the sounds sound so out of place >_<
12:10 PolkaMocha: the two end sliders?
12:10 Plaudible: fr
12:10 PolkaMocha: okay.
12:10 Plaudible: make the volume
12:10 Plaudible: in the whole start
12:10 Plaudible: louder for some of the louder sounds and way soft for the clicky shit
12:10 Plaudible: it's all the same and makes it weirdd
12:10 Plaudible: like 00:09:741 (2,3,4,5) -
12:10 Plaudible: especially 5
12:11 Plaudible: should be really quiet
12:11 PolkaMocha: lol
12:11 Plaudible: 00:11:987 (1) - is fine
12:11 PolkaMocha: Okay Ill mess with the volume a bit
12:11 Plaudible: ok that's where most my triggering was
12:11 PolkaMocha: Ill do it later though so we can keep going
12:11 Plaudible: 00:45:109 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - sexy
12:12 PolkaMocha: ty ty
12:12 Plaudible: cute sb
12:13 PolkaMocha: Isnt noffy amazing haha
12:13 PolkaMocha: its all so precious
12:14 Plaudible: 02:16:495 (3,1) - could you amke overlap prettier w/ 2
12:14 Plaudible: like pull it left a bit :<
12:14 PolkaMocha: no bc ds ono
12:14 PolkaMocha: I actually really like how that looks?
12:14 PolkaMocha: oh left
12:14 Plaudible: yee
12:15 Plaudible: dont put it like underneath the loopy bit imo
12:15 Plaudible: it loosk lik its a part of the loop further left
12:15 Plaudible: and is sexer imo
12:15 PolkaMocha: oj
12:15 PolkaMocha: ok
12:15 PolkaMocha: the farthest I can get it is
12:15 PolkaMocha: here
12:15 PolkaMocha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7607370
12:15 Plaudible: perfect
12:15 Plaudible: love it :ok_hand:
12:16 PolkaMocha: yeet
12:16 Plaudible: 03:09:077 (5,6) - slider instead maybe? owo
12:16 Plaudible: its like the same rhythm over and over, idk
12:16 PolkaMocha: I like them as duplets o3o
12:16 Plaudible: but makes it a bit more consistent
12:17 PolkaMocha: yeah but too much consistency becomes boring
12:17 Plaudible: 03:24:593 (3) - duplet daddy?
12:17 PolkaMocha: So I wanted to very it
12:17 PolkaMocha: *vary
12:17 Plaudible: 03:18:277 (3) - this one too tbh
12:17 Plaudible: 3 duplets like that = win
12:17 PolkaMocha: I dont think that first sound is strong enough for a duplet
12:17 Plaudible: nigga
12:17 PolkaMocha: same there sorry ono
12:17 Plaudible: its the same
12:17 PolkaMocha: it feels like a twist noice
12:17 Plaudible: like legit
12:17 PolkaMocha: *noise
12:17 Plaudible: all 3 are the same
12:17 PolkaMocha: I dont hear to seperate sounds sorry
12:17 Plaudible: OMFG POLKA
12:17 Plaudible: IMA SHANK UR NAN
12:18 PolkaMocha: soRRY
12:18 PolkaMocha: GO AHEAD YOU WONT WIN
12:18 PolkaMocha: SHE TEACHES KARATE
12:18 Plaudible: holy shit
12:18 Plaudible: ok nv
12:18 PolkaMocha: ○u○
12:18 Plaudible: but legit i will fite u over that, they're the same, 3 duplets would make it easier to interpret that </3
12:18 Plaudible: the duplet sticks out too much for something so similar
12:18 Plaudible: so pls do consider dad
12:18 PolkaMocha: I just tried it
12:19 PolkaMocha: and I dont like it sorry ;-;-;
12:20 PolkaMocha: sorrysorry ;-;
12:20 Plaudible: </3
12:20 Plaudible: kk
12:20 PolkaMocha: Ily tho
12:20 Plaudible: 03:51:729 (1) - seems like this part's the hardest in the song, my moddingassistant is buggy af tho so i cant check
12:20 Plaudible: this really where u want it to be?
12:20 PolkaMocha: probably is
12:20 PolkaMocha: Yeah sure
12:21 PolkaMocha: its the fastest song
12:21 PolkaMocha: intense focused sound
12:21 PolkaMocha: why not haha
12:21 Plaudible: kk
12:21 Plaudible: yknow tbh
12:21 Plaudible: i'd swap the rhythms
12:21 Plaudible: 03:56:639 (1) -
12:21 Plaudible: put these the part before
12:21 Plaudible: then the triangle small jumps where the reverse sliders are
12:21 Plaudible: cause they're just like
12:21 Plaudible: more intensey
12:22 PolkaMocha: Hmmm
12:22 PolkaMocha: sounds the same to me ono
12:22 PolkaMocha: plus I really likke 03:55:002 (1,2,3,1) -
12:22 PolkaMocha: this
12:22 Plaudible: well like
12:22 Plaudible: 03:51:729 -
12:22 Plaudible: vs
12:22 Plaudible: 03:39:911
12:22 Plaudible: oops
12:22 Plaudible: 03:59:911 -
12:23 Plaudible: the piano starts comin in
12:23 PolkaMocha: It sounds softer to me though
12:23 PolkaMocha: because the piano isnt as intense as the xylophone
12:23 PolkaMocha: or vibraphone or whatever the frick
12:23 Plaudible: but you use a lot of singles when the piano is the main part
12:23 Plaudible: 04:11:366 (2,3,4,5) -
12:23 PolkaMocha: do I?
12:23 PolkaMocha: No I do not
12:23 PolkaMocha: Oh hey there
12:24 PolkaMocha: Piano got really loud there for me idk
12:24 Plaudible: change that a tad then maybe
12:24 Plaudible: cause it sticks out with 4 singles
12:24 Plaudible: like single slider single idk
12:24 Plaudible: 04:34:928 (1) - clap here is absolute cancer it's so much louder than the music T_T
12:24 Plaudible: pls change
12:24 Plaudible: also holy shit those sheep are totally fucking each other
12:24 PolkaMocha: reduced to 35
12:25 PolkaMocha: yes they are dammit
12:25 Plaudible: 05:35:592 (5) - idk things like this i feel they should be both clickable
12:25 Plaudible: they're the same sound and sliders = strong to weak intensity
12:26 Plaudible: since u cant click ends
12:26 Plaudible: and it just feels wrong uwu
12:26 PolkaMocha: Yeah true
12:26 PolkaMocha: okay
12:26 Plaudible: kk das all i got
12:26 Plaudible: polka u better map harder shit modding e-h is boring
12:26 PolkaMocha: LOL
12:27 PolkaMocha: Uh well after this
12:27 PolkaMocha: I have another map at about 2.48 * hardest
12:27 PolkaMocha: OH
12:27 PolkaMocha: #12
12:27 PolkaMocha: KK bubblegum I think thats like 160 bpm
12:27 PolkaMocha: I'll make 4 star for that so stay tuned ouo
12:28 PolkaMocha: post log in thread for kd
12:28 Plaudible: `kk
12:28 Plaudible: tanks dad
Thank you <3
newton-
hi, from queue
very cute hanayo pic xdddddd

[general]
  1. maybe for the storyboard you could make the sky lighten up as the time indicated gets further from midnight?
  2. same could go for combo colors, have them get progressively lighter as the song progresses to symbolize the day rising


[ twilight]
  1. generally: simplify rhythm pls
  2. 00:15:055 (7) - could have made this wave more symmetrical
  3. 00:27:802 (2) - instead of the overlap you have right now, how about you do something like this instead? 9not perfect but you get the idea lol)
  4. 01:16:452 (2,3) - blanket
  5. 01:44:300 - accidental break?
  6. 02:29:242 (2,3) - confusing to click because this isnt perfectly 1/2. consider making gap 1/2 to simplify rhythm.
  7. 03:08:813 (4,5) - ^ except 1/4
  8. 04:06:457 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythmically, 3rd white tick is stronger than 2nd
  9. 04:44:678 - white tick should be clickable


the lower the sr, the harder it is to find mistakes lol
good luck!
eeezzzeee
from m4m

[Twilight]

Ranking Criteria Guidelines wrote:

Avoid using combo colors, slider borders or hitcircleoverlays with ~50 luminosity or lower. Dark colors like these impact readability of approach circles with low background dim and the other elements partially give up their functions as borders.
especially with the blue one, its hard to see

00:06:367 (2) - check this slider it doesn't seem to be snapped to your timing point http://puu.sh/v0Umq/2451f02540.jpg
or actually, a lot of them are not snapped properly, check ai mod http://puu.sh/v0UqN/c78637ef04.jpg so im not going to mention these anymore
00:22:064 (1) - delete whistle on sliderbody
00:23:026 (6,7,8,9) - is this timed properly? 7 sounds way too early to me
01:22:721 (5) - you can nc this
01:46:495 (1) - end the slider at the red tick sounds better to me
02:20:382 (4,5) - should just snap these on the purple ticks. for some reason ai mod does not mention this
02:25:276 (4) - nc maybe
02:29:242 (2,3) - check the spacing (remember ds changes when you change bpm, even though they are both 1.2 one of them is clearly too close)
02:45:791 (3) - sounds better ending at the red tick tbh
03:09:340 - missing a note here maybe
03:10:919 - ^ here too if you add that one
03:34:067 (1) - uh i think notes would fit this part more than a spinner actually
04:28:002 - break
05:45:308 (1,2) - switch NC for consistency with 05:41:668 (4,1) -

Check timing and all your snaps, I'm almost certain there's more mistakes I couldn't find/wasn't sure on. Good luck!
Topic Starter
polka

newton- wrote:

hi, from queue
very cute hanayo pic xdddddd

[general]
  1. maybe for the storyboard you could make the sky lighten up as the time indicated gets further from midnight? :arrow:I dont think Id like that.
  2. same could go for combo colors, have them get progressively lighter as the song progresses to symbolize the day rising :arrow:THats actually not a bad idea. I'll think about it.


[ twilight]
  1. generally: simplify rhythm pls
  2. 00:15:055 (7) - could have made this wave more symmetrical :arrow:I didn't really want it to be. But I did neaten it up a little.
  3. 00:27:802 (2) - instead of the overlap you have right now, how about you do something like this instead? 9not perfect but you get the idea lol) :arrow:Thank you! I had no idea where to put it.
  4. 01:16:452 (2,3) - blanket :arrow:Fixed.
  5. 01:44:300 - accidental break? :arrow:It made one on its own but I guess it works xd
  6. 02:29:242 (2,3) - confusing to click because this isnt perfectly 1/2. consider making gap 1/2 to simplify rhythm. :arrow:Good point.
  7. 03:08:813 (4,5) - ^ except 1/4 :arrow:it is tho
  8. 04:06:457 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythmically, 3rd white tick is stronger than 2nd :arrow:ok
  9. 04:44:678 - white tick should be clickable :arrow:Not that big a deal in my opinion. I think its okay.


the lower the sr, the harder it is to find mistakes lol :arrow:haha
good luck!
Thank you! You were a huge help!
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