1. Hard (3,86 stars, 476 notes)
2. Insane (4,59 stars, 690 notes)
3. Muzukashii (3,18 stars, 883 notes)
4. Oni (4,27 stars, 1145 notes)
5. Pure Hate (5,04 stars, 632 notes)

FuturistigSan wrote:

Ich werd mal versuchen ne Std map draus zu machen

1. You need to make slowdowns more gradual using more timing points, eg. before 01:15:080 (144), this is really annoying to read when the notes overlap, or just remove them all for simplicity.
2. You may as well let the first kiai end on the white tick 01:15:080 and let the second start on 02:55:679 and end on 03:18:673. Doesn't make much sense to have it snapped to the red tick.
3. Finishes in the section like 00:49:571 (108,109,110,111,112) feel too strong imo, normal d d dkd would be fine, you could instead use some on 00:54:960 for example.
4. Would be nice if you slowly increase note density from 00:54:960 instead of having a 1/2 chain, also for emphasis it would be good to remove 00:54:960.
5. I think you should shorten the spinner 00:12:565 to end on 00:13:643 and add a note on 00:14:182.
6. Beginning feels somewhat random, why not use 00:01:787 d and 00:03:942 k etc. and remove 00:04:122 and change 00:05:379 (7,8,9) to kdd or so for instrument emphasis.
7. Streams starting on 00:17:595 feel really weird because you have more support to map 1/4 from 00:19:032 and in the whole part before 00:17:236 where there are louder drums if you listen carefully and then you map 1/4 directly in the middle of it where there is less support. This doesn't make a lot of sense imo.
8. Why is there a note on 00:43:553 when the 1/4 ends on 00:43:463. You could remove both 00:43:553 (69,70) imo.
9. Finishes like 00:44:361 (74) don't really emphasize anything, you could remove them here and move this note to 00:44:541 and 00:45:439 to 00:45:260 or so.
10. I think you could remove 02:04:391 and 02:04:571 (437) for better emphasis of the instruments starting on 02:04:661 and 02:03:942.
11. I think you could change 02:26:307 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30) to normal 1/2 d and have 02:26:936 K for better emphasis.
12. Overall, I think you could maybe use a few larger spacing for better emphasis, eg. move 00:56:846 to 00:56:667 for instruments and 00:57:565 to 00:57:206 for the drums, then remove 00:57:655 and 00:57:745 for emphasis of the part starting on 00:57:834.

snowball112 wrote:

Heya, random mod, just going to focus on Oni for now

1. You need to make slowdowns more gradual using more timing points, eg. before 01:15:080 (144), this is really annoying to read when the notes overlap, or just remove them all for simplicity.ok
2. You may as well let the first kiai end on the white tick 01:15:080 and let the second start on 02:55:679 and end on 03:18:673. Doesn't make much sense to have it snapped to the red tick. your are right, nice
3. Finishes in the section like 00:49:571 (108,109,110,111,112) feel too strong imo, normal d d dkd would be fine, you could instead use some on 00:54:960 for example. i dont know what you are meaning imo
4. Would be nice if you slowly increase note density from 00:54:960 instead of having a 1/2 chain, also for emphasis it would be good to remove 00:54:960. mh i dont want to remove that because .. why should i delete the first note of a combo
   
5. I think you should shorten the spinner 00:12:565 to end on 00:13:643 and add a note on 00:14:182. mhh ok but just for the oni
   
6. Beginning feels somewhat random, why not use 00:01:787 d and 00:03:942 k etc. and remove 00:04:122 and change 00:05:379 (7,8,9) to kdd or so for instrument emphasis. you can hear that i map the beginning on voclas so i dont Need to chnage that
   
7. Streams starting on 00:17:595 feel really weird because you have more support to map 1/4 from 00:19:032 and in the whole part before 00:17:236 where there are louder drums if you listen carefully and then you map 1/4 directly in the middle of it where there is less support. This doesn't make a lot of sense imo. oh yeah i just overheard that
   
8. Why is there a note on 00:43:553 when the 1/4 ends on 00:43:463. You could remove both 00:43:553 (69,70) imo.
9. Finishes like 00:44:361 (74) don't really emphasize anything, you could remove them here and move this note to 00:44:541 and 00:45:439 to 00:45:260 or so. that doesnt make sense for me
10. I think you could remove 02:04:391 and 02:04:571 (437) for better emphasis of the instruments starting on 02:04:661 and 02:03:942.
11. I think you could change 02:26:307 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30) to normal 1/2 d and have 02:26:936 K for better emphasis. nope
    
12. Overall, I think you could maybe use a few larger spacing for better emphasis, eg. move 00:56:846 to 00:56:667 for instruments and 00:57:565 to 00:57:206 for the drums, then remove 00:57:655 and 00:57:745 for emphasis of the part starting on 00:57:834.

Good luck

Eeveesenpai_4_u wrote:

but with that sympathizing i dont really care .-. desu BN's will care about
and who likes spacing .-. resting is something that i dont really care about .-. thi is oni not muzu...desu some breaks are recomenden in Oni too, but they mostly looks like this 01:07:535 - 01:10:409 -

• Insane

  HP 6 to 7
  CS 3 to 4 (never seen a Insane with cs 3)
  
  00:19:032 (1) - this notes sounds better when you place it like this
  
  
  00:26:577 - i more recomend to delete this notes for a breaks, so it's more
  
  00:29:181 (2) - delete this note, there's no sound behind
  
  00:50:649 (5,10,14) - new combo
  
  01:00:349 (4) - sounds here like a 3 note stream in the music, your choice, let the old note or change to stream (with circle or sliderstream)
  
  00:59:631 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is normal for Insane, but why so Easy here? 01:03:224 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe shou should make it harder with some sliders
  01:56:397 (2,3,4) - ^same here
  02:04:301 - here you should add 2 or 3 sliders in this part
  
  01:10:230 (5) - delete for a little break
  
  01:10:409 (5) - new combo?
  
  01:15:080 - start spinner here
  
  02:15:439 - why no sliders in this long part?
  
  02:33:403 - drum sound here, you can add a note here if you want
  02:36:278 - ^same here
  02:39:152 - and here
  02:42:026 - and also here
  
  03:06:278 (1,2,3,4) - this notes as square jump would be nice
  
  
  03:15:798 - start spinner here
  
  03:17:236 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) -
  
  this is better for the sound
  
  03:22:266 - addnote for sound
  
  you should add some hitsounds likce clap

• Muzukashii

  hp 4 to 5
  od 3 to 4 od 3 is recommended for Futsuu
  
  00:06:637 - add d 00:07:176 - add k sounds betteri think
  
  00:19:751 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - xxx xxx X in muzukashii? it's not heavy, but i think you should change the 2nd tripple to d only stream
  
  spinner end here 01:17:775 - this short spinner and a long break? sounds not like a good idea, make it longer, the break is after the D
  
  01:26:038 (29) - k to heavy for not skilled player with tripple behind
  01:37:535 (88) - ^same here
  
  01:35:200 (81) - sounds not like a good position for a big note, change to d
  
  01:38:613 (95) - sounds better when d
  
  please make this part 00:50:828 - like this part 01:42:206 -
  
  01:54:242 (22,23,24,25,26,27) - change to kkddkk
  
  01:55:319 (28) - sounds perfect for a finisher
  02:09:691 (82) - ^same here
  
  02:29:810 (56) - easier with K
  02:35:559 (79) - ^same here
  02:41:307 (106) - ^and here
  
  02:45:619 (126) - sounds better if you change this to d, so it's better with 02:44:541 (120,121,122,123,124) -
  
  03:17:775 (282,283,284,285,286,287) - ctrl (strg in german i think) + g
  
  03:30:170 (341) - better K here, is a lot easier with the dkdkd before

• Oni

  03:09:870 (282,283,284,285,286) - this sounds better with kkddk
  
  03:29:451 (392,393,394,395,396) - dkk d k plays better with the music here

O T C M wrote:

random mod

Eeveesenpai_4_u wrote:

but with that sympathizing i dont really care .-. desu BN's will care about
and who likes spacing .-. resting is something that i dont really care about .-. thi is oni not muzu...desu some breaks are recomenden in Oni too, but they mostly looks like this 01:07:535 - 01:10:409 -

01:46:697 - add kiai here in every diff

• Insane

  HP 6 to 7
  CS 3 to 4 (never seen a Insane with cs 3)
  
  00:19:032 (1) - this notes sounds better when you place it like this
  
  
  00:26:577 - i more recomend to delete this notes for a breaks, so it's more
  
  00:29:181 (2) - delete this note, there's no sound behind
  
  00:50:649 (5,10,14) - new combo
  
  01:00:349 (4) - sounds here like a 3 note stream in the music, your choice, let the old note or change to stream (with circle or sliderstream)
  
  00:59:631 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is normal for Insane, but why so Easy here? 01:03:224 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe shou should make it harder with some sliders
  01:56:397 (2,3,4) - ^same here
  02:04:301 - here you should add 2 or 3 sliders in this part
  
  01:10:230 (5) - delete for a little break
  
  01:10:409 (5) - new combo?
  
  01:15:080 - start spinner here
  
  02:15:439 - why no sliders in this long part? nah i wanted that part without sliders so it is ok^^
  
  
  02:33:403 - drum sound here, you can add a note here if you want i cant do that because in this part i focused on the guitar so ^^
  
  02:36:278 - ^same here
  02:39:152 - and here
  02:42:026 - and also here
  
  03:06:278 (1,2,3,4) - this notes as square jump would be nice
  
  
  03:15:798 - start spinner here
  
  03:17:236 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) -
  
  this is better for the sound
  
  03:22:266 - addnote for sound
  
  you should add some hitsounds likce clap

nah i cant add hitsounds because i dont know how or when i Need too use them

• Muzukashii

  hp 4 to 5
  od 3 to 4 od 3 is recommended for Futsuu
  
  00:06:637 - add d 00:07:176 - add k sounds betteri think i dont add this because i focused on the guitar agin
  
  00:19:751 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - xxx xxx X in muzukashii? it's not heavy, but i think you should change the 2nd tripple to d only stream
  
  spinner end here 01:17:775 - this short spinner and a long break? sounds not like a good idea, make it longer, the break is after the D
  
  01:26:038 (29) - k to heavy for not skilled player with tripple behind i dont understand can you explain it to me next time but i fixed it
  
  01:37:535 (88) - ^same here
  
  01:35:200 (81) - sounds not like a good position for a big note, change to d
  
  01:38:613 (95) - sounds better when d
  
  please make this part 00:50:828 - like this part 01:42:206 -
  
  01:54:242 (22,23,24,25,26,27) - change to kkddkk
  
  01:55:319 (28) - sounds perfect for a finisher
  02:09:691 (82) - ^same here
  
  02:29:810 (56) - easier with K
  02:35:559 (79) - ^same here
  02:41:307 (106) - ^and here
  
  02:45:619 (126) - sounds better if you change this to d, so it's better with 02:44:541 (120,121,122,123,124) -
  
  03:17:775 (282,283,284,285,286,287) - ctrl (strg in german i think) + g
  
  03:30:170 (341) - better K here, is a lot easier with the dkdkd before

• Oni

  03:09:870 (282,283,284,285,286) - this sounds better with kkddk
  
  03:29:451 (392,393,394,395,396) - dkk d k plays better with the music here

enjoy your day, hope it is usefull for you