Tonoicutzu's Easy:
Drumroll from sliders are kinda loud in the beginning, perhaps lower volume of the first section by 10%.
00:37:189 (2) - I disagree very much with this kind of slider. As a beginning player I hated short sliders that repeated more than once, because it's hard to tell when to let go and move on to the next note if you have not listened to the music a lot. I think it could be sensibly replaced with a slider like:
and still achieve the same effect. Since this is easy, you don't need to hit every single note anyways.
Other places with this kind of slider that should be fixed:
SPOILER00:40:188 (1) -
00:51:489 (4) -
00:58:344 (4) -
01:06:912 (6) -
01:09:911 (5) -
01:15:052 (1) -
01:37:330 (6) -
01:49:754 (6) -
01:56:609 (5) -
01:13:767 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda hard in easy, replace with sliders instead?
01:35:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
Normal:
Many slider lengths are off, my guess is that you did this in 1/3rd timing at first and then corrected it. However, slider lengths were not recalculated. I'd suggest adjusting your beat snap divisor to 1/4th for now, going to Timing> Recalculate Slider Lengths, to fix it, then going back to 1/2 beat snap divisor. The following mod assumes you've done that first.
You've got spacing issues throughout the map, I'd recommend going through the map using distance snapping for almost all notes. Also, I'm not sure jumps fit a normal difficulty.
00:10:628 (4) - Shorten repeat to the white tick.
00:22:623 (2) - Why not just stack this under (1)? Or move it away.
00:30:335 (4) - The two lines are not parallel. Move startpoint left 1 grid.
00:34:619 (2) - Again, stack or move away.
00:52:774 (5) - Extend to the long white tick.
00:54:488 (6) - ^
00:56:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What's with this spacing?
01:05:198 (4) - Extend slider so it falls on 1/2 beats.
01:06:484 (6,7) - ^
01:09:911 (1,2) - ^
01:20:621 (1,2,3,4) - Stack these properly.
01:28:119 (4) - Extend to fit on 1/2 beats.
01:29:404 (8) - ^
01:32:403 (1) - ^
01:35:830 (2) - Make this repeat once, or extend.
01:36:687 (4) - Extend to fit on 1/2 beats.
01:37:330 (1) - ^
01:47:398 (1) - Kinda soon after spinner, maybe delete.
01:49:325 (2,3) - Extend
01:51:682 (3) - ^
01:55:752 (2) - Stack properly under (1)
01:55:752 (2) - Extend, while keeping it symmetrical.
Hard:
Adjust your volumes; in the beginning it's too loud, and I think 0% volume is not allowed. Some spacing issues too, for streams of notes you generally want to obey distance snap.
00:38:475 (1,2,3,4) - Equidistant spacing but different rhythm. Consider fixing, even though it's a hard it should still follow distance snap.
00:42:116 (3) - Make it repeat once more
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Aborted because I think there's a timing issue. Though the map plays fine for the most part, that's because you made it work with 1/8th. A key clue is that you're in 1/8th beat for a song that doesn't need it. I'm not sure how to fix it, but try posting in this thread:
viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795&start=0&st=0&sk=t&sd=aWhich will find you someone to time it properly. While you're at it, fix the spacing and play through hard a couple times. notes should fall on 1/4th beats instead of 1/8th. Make sure to fix across all maps.
Starred, because the patterns and rhythm were pretty nice even though the timing is off. When you fix it feel free to ask for a recheck.
