I love this song! *-* Star~

Design mod is gogo

you need to make a Easy ;p

Normal
you need to set a preview point for the map

00:20:554 (1) - i found this was rather ugly and didn't really play that good, a timing like this does play better to the flow of your map


Hard
00:11:387 (1) - space this note more so it has the same spacing as the combo before, just feels odd for this to start on such a closer spacing
00:51:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this whole part would flow much better by keeping the slower slider speed going through it
01:21:720 (4) - make this longer so it ends on the next red tick rather then the blue, flows sooo much better xD
01:49:387 - 01:53:720 add a break at this point to be consistant with the other time, this empty space is kinda just a pointless hp drain xD
02:12:721 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - again would be much better to keep the slower slider speed here
02:27:387 (3,1) - this jump didnt really suit your map, maybe space this normal and it does increase the fun
02:38:054 (3,1) - same, reason behind me saying these is because all the map before it dont have a jump like this, so that really makes it feel out of place

Insane

00:05:720 (3) - this dont really work as a stack, makes it horridly hard to notice the timing of it
00:24:387 (1,2,3,4) - i found this rather blind and confusing to read :/
00:50:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream really dont suit such a soft part of the map, i do advise to nuke this stream xD
00:51:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - again i kinda think the faster slider speed here dont really suit
01:12:554 (3,1) - these being soooo close kills the flow of the combo after, it makes it feel like a mistake rather than a pattern, i advise to give this the same spacing as the combo before, you will need to respace it abit but it would make it play MUCH better
01:16:054 (1) - i kno this note is for pattern, but it really needs removing, it dont suit the map and by removing it it flows much better to the vocals you are following, just try it and you will see
01:21:720 (1) - make this longer onto the red tick to flow to the vocals much better
(suggestion) 01:26:554 - maybe add a note here
01:45:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - again i found this abit confusing to read, i cant say why though, it seems to make sense but when i play it feels wrong
02:26:054 (4,1) - i would advise to space these more apart, atm it feels like this is a 1/4 note rather than a 1/2
02:32:720 (3,1) - hmmm this one seems to work though, maybe give the above one the same pattern as you did here


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maps are fun, just need to check some of them stuff out and make a easy, i do think you break your flow abit, and hopefully that mod will help to improve your maps greatly

best of luck

jericho2442 wrote:

Design mod is gogo

you need to make a Easy ;plol ok.I make it

Normal
you need to set a preview point for the mapdone!

00:20:554 (1) - i found this was rather ugly and didn't really play that good, a timing like this does play better to the flow of your map
done!

Hard
00:11:387 (1) - space this note more so it has the same spacing as the combo before, just feels odd for this to start on such a closer spacingdone!
00:51:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this whole part would flow much better by keeping the slower slider speed going through it no
01:21:720 (4) - make this longer so it ends on the next red tick rather then the blue, flows sooo much better xDdone!
01:49:387 - 01:53:720 add a break at this point to be consistant with the other time, this empty space is kinda just a pointless hp drain xDdone!
02:12:721 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - again would be much better to keep the slower slider speed hereno
02:27:387 (3,1) - this jump didnt really suit your map, maybe space this normal and it does increase the fundone!
02:38:054 (3,1) - same, reason behind me saying these is because all the map before it dont have a jump like this, so that really makes it feel out of placedone!

Insane

00:05:720 (3) - this dont really work as a stack, makes it horridly hard to notice the timing of itI put far
00:24:387 (1,2,3,4) - i found this rather blind and confusing to read :/done!
00:50:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream really dont suit such a soft part of the map, i do advise to nuke this stream xDno
00:51:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - again i kinda think the faster slider speed here dont really suitno
01:12:554 (3,1) - these being soooo close kills the flow of the combo after, it makes it feel like a mistake rather than a pattern, i advise to give this the same spacing as the combo before, you will need to respace it abit but it would make it play MUCH betterdone!
01:16:054 (1) - i kno this note is for pattern, but it really needs removing, it dont suit the map and by removing it it flows much better to the vocals you are following, just try it and you will see no
01:21:720 (1) - make this longer onto the red tick to flow to the vocals much betterdone!
(suggestion) 01:26:554 - maybe add a note hereno
01:45:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - again i found this abit confusing to read, i cant say why though, it seems to make sense but when i play it feels wrongdone!
02:26:054 (4,1) - i would advise to space these more apart, atm it feels like this is a 1/4 note rather than a 1/2no
02:32:720 (3,1) - hmmm this one seems to work though, maybe give the above one the same pattern as you did hereno


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maps are fun, just need to check some of them stuff out and make a easy, i do think you break your flow abit, and hopefully that mod will help to improve your maps greatly

best of luck

thank you mod >w<"_!

good map!!!


すごく好きな譜面です～！

General:
- Shoudln't the source be "Idolmaster"? At least that is what the BG is telling me lol.
- Inconsistent tags. The tags should be the same on every diff.
- I'd like a general better use of the Snip hitsound. At some points you really overuse it and then you don't use it at all.

Easy:
00:04:054 (2) - Short repeat sliders with more than one repeat are confusing for Beginner players.

That's actually everything. Insane was pretty fun.

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Shoudln't the source be "Idolmaster"? At least that is what the BG is telling me lol.done!
- Inconsistent tags. The tags should be the same on every diff.done!
- I'd like a general better use of the Snip hitsound. At some points you really overuse it and then you don't use it at all.done!

Easy:
00:04:054 (2) - Short repeat sliders with more than one repeat are confusing for Beginner players.done!

That's actually everything. Insane was pretty fun.wow thank you :3

thank you for mod

Alright fine. Bubbled.

Rukarioman wrote:

Alright fine. Bubbled.

thank you bubbled :3

star

あいます

offset +9ms ?

Alace wrote:

offset +9ms ?

done!
Resnap All notes,just timing line
thank you :3

>ω<

Fine set go ahead XD

ps. I won't pick Idolmaster into Idolm@ster :3

arien666 wrote:

>ω<

Fine set go ahead XD

ps. I won't pick Idolmaster into Idolm@ster :3

wow thank you bubble :3

<Easy>
02:34:063 (3,4) - remove claps and use whistles ?

<Normal>
00:20:563 (1) - remove the clap on the slider end ?
00:27:396 (3) - remove clap XD
02:34:063 (1,2,3) - use whistles here ?

<Hard>
02:34:063 (1,2,3,4) - use whistles here ?
02:42:063 (1,2,3) - remove claps www

<Insane>
00:14:063 (1,2,3) - add whistles ?
00:26:229 (2) - add clap on the slider end
00:26:563 (3) - remove clap
00:27:396 (1) - remove clap
00:30:063 (1) - ^
00:44:896 (2) - add clap on the end
01:05:730 (8) - remove finish
01:22:063 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - claps don`t sound really good here
01:40:729 (1) - remove clap
01:48:729 (1) - ^
02:02:063 (5) - ^
02:24:396 (6) - remove finish
02:34:063 (1,2,3,4,5) - use whistles ?
02:42:063 (1,2,3) - remove clap

btw i think custom soft-hitwhistle doesn`t fit the song well, default softwhistle is much better
i mean the section 00:32:229~00:38 and 01:53:563~01:59:40
usually, finish+clap at the same note don`t sound really good, it sounds good in a few cases,in fact, i think your hitsounds are pretty good
you just overused hitsounds a bit, call me back to recheck the map on 3/16

Alace wrote:

<Easy>
02:34:063 (3,4) - remove claps and use whistles ?no
　
<Normal>
00:20:563 (1) - remove the clap on the slider end ?done!
00:27:396 (3) - remove clap XDdone!
02:34:063 (1,2,3) - use whistles here ?no

<Hard>
02:34:063 (1,2,3,4) - use whistles here ?no
02:42:063 (1,2,3) - remove claps wwwdone!www

<Insane>
00:14:063 (1,2,3) - add whistles ?done!
00:26:229 (2) - add clap on the slider enddone!
00:26:563 (3) - remove clapdone!
00:27:396 (1) - remove clapdone!
00:30:063 (1) - ^done!
00:44:896 (2) - add clap on the enddone!
01:05:730 (8) - remove finishdone!
01:22:063 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - claps don`t sound really good hereRemove All clap
01:40:729 (1) - remove clapdone!
01:48:729 (1) - ^done!
02:02:063 (5) - ^done!
02:24:396 (6) - remove finishdone!
02:34:063 (1,2,3,4,5) - use whistles ?no
02:42:063 (1,2,3) - remove clapdone!


btw i think custom soft-hitwhistle doesn`t fit the song well, default softwhistle is much better
i mean the section 00:32:229~00:38 and 01:53:563~01:59:40
usually, finish+clap at the same note don`t sound really good, it sounds good in a few cases,in fact, i think your hitsounds are pretty goodwow thank you :3
you just overused hitsounds a bit, call me back to recheck the map on 3/16

overused hitsounds...XDDhaha

thank you for MOD :3

OK rebubble time

Alace wrote:

OK rebubble time

thank you :3

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Heart Time.

wow

glaz

One of my favourites