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今天太累..懒着用E文了...

BPM: 174.000

改BPM后Slider Velocity除2

tick rate 改到1会好不少吧

Title: Ambivalent World 用这个http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919 改title/artist 省的重复上传

mp3结尾怎么还带循环? 砍了吧

kiai在01:20:826结束就好

hard的countdown取消掉

你需要个preview point...Timing--Add preview point

加个空白sliderbody.wav吧..

Hard加些AR, 1/4三连和1/2的都没法分出来...而且堆得满屏都是不好看

Normal不用太追求人声 1/4的话对于Normal过难了 00:51:344 (9) - 如果实在想加这种 用滑杠代替

normal注意下note和滑杠的取舍

短歌就别留太多空白了

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/47697 看这张 参考着做吧

反正最后都要砍了重练 ╮(╯_╰)╭

嘛 坑开多了就好了 加油咯

PS: queue别乱贴 看好规则 乱贴会被讨厌

谢谢阿....
正在改...
对我很有帮助~

newest version.

guest diff xD
或许做的很渣 @.@
赶出来的 因为明天就开学了 /.

have fun

Download: Sawashiro Miyuki - Ambivalent World(TV Size) (6800cube) [fanzhen's Insane].osu

能作出来已经很感谢了~

看到你在群里找MOD～就来帮忙了～～～刚刚开始学MOD～～所以水平不好～～凑合看看吧～～

[总体]
offset：479（建议可以找神TIMING测测～我也不肯定～～之前的感觉不合适）
BPM应该没有错
加个三星以下的EZ～不然好像是不能RANK
音效声音太大～很吵～改小点一般非KIAI用5就差不多了


[normal]
00:23:065 (4,5) - SPACING
00:25:823 (3,4) - ^
00:26:685 (4,5) - ^
00:27:375 (5,6) - ^
00:48:065 (2,3) - ^
00:48:582 (3,4) - ^
00:49:099 (4,5) - ^
00:49:444 (5,6) - ^
00:49:789 (6,7) - ^
00:50:134 (7,8) - ^
00:50:479 (8,9) - ^
00:50:823 (9,10) - ^
00:57:547 (11,12) - ^
01:05:823 (5,6) - ^

nor难度开AIMOD最好是别留SPACING问题


[hard]
00:19:099 (6,7,8) - SPACING
00:22:547 (1,2) - ^
呃～～看了以下～～这个难度所有的问题都差不多～～还是距离问题～～～一组同颜色的COMBO内SPACING不要乱变啊～～那样图根本打不了～～～举个例子～在同一组COMBO内～明明刚才两个NOTE是隔了一拍距离怎么长～～～接下来两个NOTE明明隔得是相同的拍子，但是距离看起来像连打或者大跳～～～那样根本就打不了

[insane]
问题和HARD一样～～建议刚开始做图掌握不好距离～就从头开DS排到尾～～～这样至少BAT或者MAT在看你图的时候～基本上不会拿距离说事

[fanzhen's Insane]
00:20:309 -补个NOTE？～或者和后面的1变成一个SL
00:37:033 -补NOTE
00:22:895 (2) - NEW COMBO
00:24:447 (6) - ^
00:24:964 (8) - ^
00:23:240 (3) - ^
01:07:206 (2) - ^
01:07:551 (3) - ^
01:09:620 (8) - ^
01:18:930 (4) - ^
01:19:447 (7) - ^
01:19:964 (10) - ^
这个难度感觉问题不大～～NEW COMBO主要是为了让跳更好理解一点～～～改不改随意

STAR~~~

谢谢XINHE~~
很认真负责呢~~

你做的LOVE PLUS刷分图我很喜欢~~

STAR
XD.....

xinhe wrote:

[fanzhen's Insane]
00:20:309 -补个NOTE？～或者和后面的1变成一个SL
00:37:033 -补NOTE 不用吧 @.@
00:22:895 (2) - NEW COMBO
00:24:447 (6) - ^
00:24:964 (8) - ^
00:23:240 (3) - ^
01:07:206 (2) - ^
01:07:551 (3) - ^
01:09:620 (8) - ^
01:18:930 (4) - ^
01:19:447 (7) - ^
01:19:964 (10) - ^
这个难度感觉问题不大～～NEW COMBO主要是为了让跳更好理解一点～～～改不改随意

new combo啥的 @.@

2-19 add kiai and some notes redownload plz

Download: Sawashiro Miyuki - Ambivalent World(TV Size) (6800cube) [fanzhen's Insane].osu

感谢fanzhen0019~
咱的图实在很渣。。

STRESS~~~KUD还没给我～～～>.<

咱是用手机。。。用电脑以后一定给~很喜欢你的图的说~

>.<谢谢～～～

嗯 送星星来咯 祝6800神触和18a神触百年好合 祝SA神触打败18a 成功夺得6800美人 过上幸福日子

疼 之前打不来星星~ 还是祝你们三人三角恋喜剧开场也喜剧收场哈~~ 小心被NICE BOAT了哦~

FLY .....
不要吐这种嘈= =
还是谢谢你~
XINHE 你的 KD~

FLY LIGHT去尼玛的
你个渣B<stress>

Hi. You've asked me to mod your map when my queue was full, but I decided to do it anyway. Sorry for the delay.

[General]
Preview Points are not set on all maps except for fanzhen's Insane. You can do it in Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview Point.
Interesting timing set you have.. don't you think that claps are too loud when compared with the rest of the song? Also, needs more hitsounds..

[Normal]
00:19:447 (5) - make this 1 tick shorter so it would follow lyrics better?
00:26:689 (4) - move this to 00:26:516 so it would follow lyrics better?
01:05:309 (4) - move this to 01:05:223 and make it 1 tick longer so it would follow lyrics better?
Maybe map empty sections like 01:07:895 - 01:09:792 and 01:12:895 - 01:15:309 ? No breaks, no notes.. not cool.

[Hard]
There are unsnapped notes here. Please use AIMod (File -> AIMod) to find and fix them.
01:24:964 (1) - make finish of this slider silent?

[fanzhen's Insane]
All good. Please remember that Preview Points should be the same for all diffs.
Also, consider making normal sound sections 10% less loud.

[Insane]
00:14:792 (1) - nazi: 1 grid down.
00:21:861 (5) - remove clap at and and add it at 00:22:206 (6) ? OR add a finish at 00:22:206 (6) ?
01:25:309 (1) - make finish of this slider silent?

Sorry....I hadn't see your queue was full...
Thank you very much~I'll give you 1kd~
my english is bad...XD..

offset:10853 变更必须Resnap all notes！
[Insane]
音效做的不行，再下点心
00:10:654 (3) - 这note下的不好。我试着放了下，觉照这样放置会比较好

00:10:827 - 这里应该有个note
00:38:412 (8) - remove new combo
00:44:447 (1) - ^
01:01:861 (8) - new combo
01:03:240 (1) - remove newcombo
01:13:068 (4) - new combo
01:18:413 (4) - ^
01:23:930 (5) - ^
00:43:240 (3) - 距离和后面一样，放远些
01:04:620 (7) - new combo
01:24:275 (6) - 没人能意识到这是个1/4note，必须改
01:25:309 (1) - spinner的开始和结束位置请做出修改
[fanzhen's Insane]
用n-hitnormal的连打还是用s-whistle比较好

感谢~
很有价值的MOD~
KD~

Lec being with the General stuff before doing anything else...

General:
Change title to have capital letter on the start of each word in the title (Miyuki Sawashiro - Ambivalent World) and
Better mp3 please... you can use this MP3.

Thanks...i think i fixed the letter...

(If you changing title, full submission.)
mm... ok... Proper mod:

General:
Offset 10 857
BPM 174 002 (Timing Setup Panel) - Yes, it is a very small change ^^'
I would do 0,5 for tick rate or 0

Easy:
Approach Rate: 3, HP Drain Rate: 3 or 4, Overall Difficulty: 3 or 4
0:19:477 - End it at 0:19:822
0:40:511 - End it at 0:40:856
0:44:649 - Move to 0:44:304
0:44:994 - Move to 0:44:649 and repeat
0:55:683 - Move to 0:56:028
0:59:132 - End it at 0:59:649
1:00:511 - End it at 1:01:028
1:03:787 - Move to 1:03:614 please~
1:05:338 - Move to 1:05:166 please~
1:07:580 - Move to 1:07:407

Normal:
0:19:447 - End it at 0:19:792
0:23:068 - Too hard for normal, make it a circle or remove
0:29:275 - Remove circle, copy the slider at 0:28:068 to 0:29:102 and turn it vertically, then repeat it
0:47:895 - Too random, remove
0:48:068 - New combo
0:51:861 - Random, remove pls~
0:57:551 - Maybe New Combo
1:05:223 - Move 1/2 tick before, end it at 1:05:654

fanzhen is a guest mapper? I can't see his nickname in Tags.

Preview Points aren't set,please,add them to all diffs at 00:47:982.

Kiai times are so different,it'd be better if you keep it the same in all difficulties.And start it from 00:48:068.

And..in the title..is there shouldn't be a space between World and (TV Size)?

[Easy]
00:19:447 (5) - Finish it at 00:19:620.
00:20:999 - Add a note?
00:21:171 - Remove this one and add a single note to 00:21:516?
00:21:861 (1) - Change to finish.
00:42:551 (2) - Clap sounds bad.
00:46:689 - ^
00:48:068 (2) - ^
01:04:620 (3) - ^
01:10:137 (1) - ^
At first it wasn' really bad,but then..ugh..you don't follow any rhytm.
It's so random.Sometimes I need to wait like 3 seconds for a single hit and sometimes there're some hard patterns like 00:52:206 (1,2,3,1).
Map should be common,please,try to keep some rhytm next time,and about hitsounds - they're too loud,reduce volume.
Claps doesn't fit this song at all.You need to use whistles,add more of them.

[Normal]
Again,claps.Remove them.
And volume too,also add more whistles.
00:56:344 (9,10) - Move both of them to the previous red ticks(00:56:171,00:56:516)
Don't have to much to say,again,I can see a lot of spaces during the map,you could map them too.

[Hard]
What's with OD? Why it's on the lowest tick?
00:30:137 (1,1,1) - Combo spam,remove.
1/4 doesn't really fit this song..and again these claps..argh.

[fanzhen]
00:32:895 (1) - Finish?
00:38:413 (1) - ^
00:41:171 - ^
00:42:551 (1) - ^
00:48:068 (1) - ^
01:04:620 (1) - ^
01:09:878 (x) - Too loud for normal hitsounds.
01:20:482 (1,1,1) - Combo spamming.
Nice difficulty.

[Insane]
Uh,okay.

Sorry for poor mod,but your difficulties need a lot of more work.

i had fixed the map~thanks~
kd~

Hello 6800cube ^^

[General]

Preview Point ~ installed on all the diff ~ here 00:48:068

images must be the same size ! in this case 1024x768

Tags : add fanzhen ?

everywhere to do the same time Kiai

00:48:068 - start kiai and finish kiai 01:18:413

[Easy]

00:22:551 (1) - delete new combo

00:28:068 (3) - new combo

00:49:447 (3) - ^

00:52:206 (6) - ^

01:12:551 (4) - ^

[Normal]

00:19:447 (5) - finish on the white tick

00:45:309 (7) - delete. and start spinner

00:49:102 (5) - new combo

00:51:171 (11) - ^

00:51:861 (1) - delete new combo

00:57:551 (11) - new combo

thanks and kd~

Hi, here some Mods:

[Easy]
#The hitsounds are too loud. Try lowering the volume by 3 or 4.
#You are not using different hitsounds to give the player a rythm to follow. (e.g. beat-beat-clap-beat-beat-clap-...). As it is now, the map is not (much) fun to play.
#No preview point set.
#You should place Kiai for special parts in a song (e.g. chorus) and have a nice rythm to follow in there. I always say: The Kiai is the party button. When it starts it has to bee kick-ass. Please rethink your Kiai time + notes & rythm within.

- 00:47:464 ~ Is this Kiai start wanted? It's in the middle of the slider ö,ö
- 01:07:551 ~ I don't like this. Sounds wrong somehow.

[Normal]
#The hitsounds are too loud. Try lowering the volume by 3 or 4.
#You are not using different hitsounds to give the player a rythm to follow. (e.g. beat-beat-clap-beat-beat-clap-...). As it is now, the map is not (much) fun to play.
#No preview point set.
#Note placement is a little better here within Kiai. But it lacks hitsounds

- 00:19:997 ~ (5) Slider ends on red tick
- 00:54:964 ~ (5) new combo
- 00:56:689~ (10) new combo
- 01:03:240 ~ (1,2,3,4) this part of the combo is too slow. Place some more notes.

[Hard]
#The hitsounds are too loud. Try lowering the volume by 3 or 4.
#You are not using different hitsounds. Please use them.
#HP Drain and OA-Diff can be set higher. Like +2 or +3 at least. It should be "Hard" right?^^

- 00:43:930 ~ (1,2,3,4,5,6) Everything in that place ? ._. Doesn't look good in my opinion.
- 01:00:482 ~ (5) new combo

[Insane]
#The hitsounds are too loud. Try lowering the volume by 3 or 4.
#A lot of claps, mostly misplaced (no rythm). Please rearrange those.
#No preview point set.
#A lot of other modders told me you shouldn't place notes before your offset. If you want the notes to be before the actual offset, set the offset earlier (before the first note).

- 01:01:516 ~ (7) place exactly under 6 (down 1 grid)
- 01:13:758 ~ Why'd you put a break here? Continue the stream you started at, don't end it in its middle ö,ö !


Also, for all maps, think about mapping the break. It'd be better without a break.

Have a star^^*

thanks~
already fixed all problems above that~

很紧张的曲子呢~值得一试。

[general].
offset is 5330; it's best to keep the offset as early as possible. Otherwise, +20 offset.
set a preview point to the same for all maps. I don't like how it sounds at 3500.
crop your backgrounds to 4:3 at the most, try not to get widescreen stuff (though that's not a problem).
your video is absolute crap, and it still has audio. I made you 2 versions: a good one and a crappy one, both of which are infinitely better than the one you have now: http://puu.sh/12oJ

[easy]
00:20:309 (1,2,3) - one of these could be a slider
00:30:654 (5,1) - please be careful with these offbeat things. When possible, use sliders, since they do not require you to be completely accurate.
01:00:481 (1,2) - spacing (you can use AImod to get most of these, press ctrl shift A)

[normal]
00:20:654 (2) - take off one repeat, move the tail so it's not blocking (3)
00:23:068 (4,5) - make these offbeat sliders (start on red tick, go to next red tick), move 6 to red tick before.
00:26:516 - slider here to 00:27:033 -
00:28:068 (1) - http://puu.sh/12oK
00:31:689 (2) - take off one repeat, move the tail so it's not blocking (3)
00:51:171 (1,1,3) - can you think about making long sliders instead of short ones? keep the same beats, but switch which beats are connected to the next one via a slider. 00:52:378 - could be a repeating slider (as an example).
00:58:240 (2,4) - make it 1/2 shorter (red tick) and move (3) back one, and delete (4) its a double note (again AIMod will catch these)
01:03:240 (1,2,3,4) - I like circle slider circle circle circle, but not really the instant sliders. You could leave (3) as well.
01:07:033 (3,4) - again, circle slider
01:07:723 - why no notes?
01:12:895 - ^

[hard]
00:18:068 (4) - if you HAVE to put something on this beat, make it the end of a slider please. Otherwise delete it.
00:38:413 (1) - make it 2 sliders
00:39:792 (1) - ^
00:43:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really like this, even if it is a little confusing
00:46:689 - This is the correct rhythm here, but as it's difficult to read I would suggest replacing the 1/6ths with straight 1/4ths. http://puu.sh/12p8 Normally I'm a nazi about mapping to the beat, but 6th drum rolls simply sound bad, and every normal person would assume these are sets of 3, not 4.
00:49:964 (1,2) - This is kiai time/chorus. Time to map the beat, not the lyrics.
01:10:913 (6,11) - overmapped.
01:13:758 (5) - if you HAVE to put something on this beat, make it the end of a slider please. Otherwise delete it.
01:16:171 (2) - if you have to map the lyrics, do it right. This should be on the next blue tick. Otherwise, keep mapping the beat.
01:16:602 (4) - overmapped
01:18:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There should be nine beats in this, so make the spinner start right after the 9th. Make the pattern so that 1,2,3 are in a line or just make 3 repeating sliders.
01:24:016 (2,3) - overmapped. Move these somewhere before (1).
01:26:689 - end slider here.

[world]
00:16:602 (9) - overmapped
00:20:740 (3) - ^
00:26:947 (7) - ^ but I could approve of this one because of the lyrics there.
00:32:292 (4) - overmapped
00:38:327 - add a note
00:51:689 (3,4) - overmapped
01:00:654 (4,5) - ^
01:09:620 (8,9,10,11,12) - I don't like the slider, and the finish needs to be on 12, not 9. 01:09:275 - make this a slider into 8 and map the 5 drum beats properly.

[insane]
I don't like this map very much, so very few "fixes" and more general stuff.
You've got a lot of long sliders. Slider tick rate 2 then.
00:05:137 (1) - delete
00:09:275 (7) - what a waste. map either the solo guitar or the rhythm guitar/drums. If you do the rhythm/drums, then make them jumps
00:12:206 (5,6,7) - don't put claps on red ticks. Try to follow a clapping pattern putting them on beats 2 and 4 (beats x:1 and x:3 if you look at the "timing" tab). Use whistles if you want to put something on red ticks.
00:17:120 (2) - practically every single on of the triples you did in this map is overmapped.
00:24:447 (8) - normally, you shouldn't start a slider on a red tick, and certainly shouldn't have a repeated selection of offbeat sliders, but this map is just full of exceptions. (8) however needs to be a circle circle. It's almost never a good idea to slide over or onto the downbeat (beat 1, beat x:0 in the "timing" tab).
00:38:154 (6) - this one is just funny to point out because you can move it 1/4th before or after and it won't be overmapped (so you can safely put a triple on either of those beats, just not this one).
01:04:620 (11) - I doubt this slider is rankable
01:23:930 (1) - generally if you do something in hard, you won't replace it with something easier in insane.

good job on everything except insane. Since the guest diff is insane enough, you get my star.

IceBeam wrote:

[fanzhen]
00:32:895 (1) - Finish? added thx4 ur sound modding
00:38:413 (1) - ^ ^
00:41:171 - ^ ^
00:42:551 (1) - ^ ^
00:48:068 (1) - ^ ^
01:04:620 (1) - ^ ^
01:09:878 (x) - Too loud for normal hitsounds. changed
01:20:482 (1,1,1) - Combo spamming. changed
Nice difficulty. oh,thank u it's my 2nd map xD

redownl plz :3

Download: Sawashiro Miyuki - Ambivalent World(TV Size) (6800cube) [fanzhen's Insane].osu

Uh, your mp3 is bad.
The beginning part is cropped.

Please get a better mp3.
There's many on the web.

I will mod until then.

~~

Oops it's "world"
I'll change the diffname when I have time

加油~

ya o/

[Easy]
00:20:999 (2,3,1) - spacing
01:00:137 (2) - x:208 y:296
01:04:620 (5) - New combo
01:18:413 (1) - end 01:21:171 add finish

[Normal]
00:21:861 (1) - add finish
00:27:378 (5) - ^
00:32:895 add note?
00:40:482 (1,2) - how? http://puu.sh/1aWH
00:41:171 (1,2,3,5) - add finish
00:56:344 (1) - Remove new combo
00:58:930 (4) - o_0!?
01:18:413 (1) - Easy diff again

[Hard]
00:21:861 (1) - add finish
00:31:516 (1) - end 00:32:551 add finish
00:48:068 ~ 00:48:413 abit kiaitime...lol
00:48:068 (1) - add finish
00:54:447 (1) - Remove new combo
00:59:102 (1) - add finish
01:01:861 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:05:482 (1) - Remove new combo
01:10:137 (1) - add finish
01:11:171 (8) - new combo
01:14:275 (8) - ^
01:18:413 (1,4,7) - add finish and whistle
01:21:171 (1) - add finish
01:24:964 (1) - start 01:24:620 end 01:26:689 add finish.Remove clap

[fanzhen's World]
00:16:344 (7) - add finish
00:20:309 (1,5) - ^ first slider (00:20:309 and 00:20:999)
00:46:689 (1,5) - Remove clap
00:56:344 (1) - ^
00:57:723 (1,2,3,4) - how? http://puu.sh/1aXi
01:10:482 (1,3,1) - add clap
01:19:447 (7) - new combo?

[Insane]
Irregular many claps o_0
00:09:275 (7) - plz slider end 00:09:620
00:10:999 (4) - Remove. then,00:10:826 add note
00:38:068 (5,6) - how?fit music http://puu.sh/1aXw
00:38:413 (8) - add finish
00:48:068 (1) - ^ first slider
00:58:930 (6) - New combo
01:03:758 (8) - ^
01:08:585 (4,7) - add finish(01:08:758 and 01:09:275)
01:13:930 (1) - supin end 01:15:309
01:18:413 (1,3,5) - add finish first slider
01:19:878 add timing line.then,30 ~ 40 volume plz.
01:23:930 (1,2,3) - add finish
01:24:620 (1) - Remove clap

starr~

thank Val~~~
i will fix them
hope you like this map~~
(but my english is bad... XD)