hi, from my queue~
omg わけしまかのん~
[General]
Might want to add tags to your difficulties, since Star Storm is the only one that has tags.
The SR difference between Easy and Normal are a bit too small. Either nerf Easy or buff Normal.
Also, try looking for a better mp3, this one is... a bit too quiet. If you need work on the mp3, pm me in forums.
Please, please, PLEASE, figure out a better pattern for you hitsounds, its just everywhere, and near the end, its not even fully hitsounded. Please work on the hitsounds.
Onto the mod.
[Star Storm]
- 00:11:461 (2) - Slider ends on an emphasis point, which isn't really a good thing.
- 00:13:628 (1) - Not really a necessary reverse slider, and that includes 00:18:961 (1) - too.
- 00:27:961 (3,4) - Do something here that'll make the DS distinctive, people will confuse it as a 1/2.
- 00:30:628 (6,7) - Why not lower it a bit like what you did with 00:30:462 (5) - ?
- 00:39:461 (3,4) - DS suddenly got closer, weird transition.
- 00:42:294 (4,1) - Adapt to the overlap, please.
- 00:56:294 (1) - Should be the same as 00:53:628 (1) - , to keep consistency.
- 01:16:128 (5) - Why did you put a reverse slider when you could just triple 01:16:128 - ?
- 01:21:128 (5,1) - Too close, awkward transition.
- 01:42:294 (4) - Reverse slider kind of ruins momentum and excitement in kiai, try something else.
- 01:44:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Just feels very unreasonable to add cross jumps here, they emphasize anything, other than the increase in SR. Please do something here that'll give players a better experience of the song.
- 01:46:794 - You missed a note here.
- 01:50:961 (6) - Should be starting 01:50:794 - . You're also missing 01:51:128 - .
- 02:07:628 - This is 1/6, so map it in 1/6.
[Extra]
First of all, here are the unsnapped notes:
- 01:40:128 (2) -
- 01:53:961 (2) -
- 01:54:294 (3) -
Back to the mod.
- 00:15:544 - Missed a note here.
-00:24:294 (1,2) - Sudden change in DS here.
- 00:26:128 (9,1) - Again, another sudden change in DS here.
- 00:52:878 - Missed another note here.
- 01:11:128 - Missed a huge emphasis point here.
- 01:54:628 (4,5,1) - Inconsistent DS.
- 01:56:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Do a better job of blanketing 01:55:961 (5) - .
- 02:07:628 - Similar to Snow Storm, these are 1/6.
[Conclusion]
Its a... decent map. Theres still a lot of work needed, a lot more polishing, and a lot more clean up. Too many inconsistencies that it'll become redundant. Please, take another look at the hitsounds and fix them up. They're not following much and isn't helping the song.
Other than that, good luck.
omg わけしまかのん~
[General]
Might want to add tags to your difficulties, since Star Storm is the only one that has tags.
The SR difference between Easy and Normal are a bit too small. Either nerf Easy or buff Normal.
Also, try looking for a better mp3, this one is... a bit too quiet. If you need work on the mp3, pm me in forums.
Please, please, PLEASE, figure out a better pattern for you hitsounds, its just everywhere, and near the end, its not even fully hitsounded. Please work on the hitsounds.
Onto the mod.
[Star Storm]
- 00:11:461 (2) - Slider ends on an emphasis point, which isn't really a good thing.
- 00:13:628 (1) - Not really a necessary reverse slider, and that includes 00:18:961 (1) - too.
- 00:27:961 (3,4) - Do something here that'll make the DS distinctive, people will confuse it as a 1/2.
- 00:30:628 (6,7) - Why not lower it a bit like what you did with 00:30:462 (5) - ?
- 00:39:461 (3,4) - DS suddenly got closer, weird transition.
- 00:42:294 (4,1) - Adapt to the overlap, please.
- 00:56:294 (1) - Should be the same as 00:53:628 (1) - , to keep consistency.
- 01:16:128 (5) - Why did you put a reverse slider when you could just triple 01:16:128 - ?
- 01:21:128 (5,1) - Too close, awkward transition.
- 01:42:294 (4) - Reverse slider kind of ruins momentum and excitement in kiai, try something else.
- 01:44:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Just feels very unreasonable to add cross jumps here, they emphasize anything, other than the increase in SR. Please do something here that'll give players a better experience of the song.
- 01:46:794 - You missed a note here.
- 01:50:961 (6) - Should be starting 01:50:794 - . You're also missing 01:51:128 - .
- 02:07:628 - This is 1/6, so map it in 1/6.
[Extra]
First of all, here are the unsnapped notes:
- 01:40:128 (2) -
- 01:53:961 (2) -
- 01:54:294 (3) -
Back to the mod.
- 00:15:544 - Missed a note here.
-00:24:294 (1,2) - Sudden change in DS here.
- 00:26:128 (9,1) - Again, another sudden change in DS here.
- 00:52:878 - Missed another note here.
- 01:11:128 - Missed a huge emphasis point here.
- 01:54:628 (4,5,1) - Inconsistent DS.
- 01:56:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Do a better job of blanketing 01:55:961 (5) - .
- 02:07:628 - Similar to Snow Storm, these are 1/6.
[Conclusion]
Its a... decent map. Theres still a lot of work needed, a lot more polishing, and a lot more clean up. Too many inconsistencies that it'll become redundant. Please, take another look at the hitsounds and fix them up. They're not following much and isn't helping the song.
Other than that, good luck.