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Nakazawa Masatomo - Jellyfish Song

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Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freitag, 10. Februar 2017 at 18:30:32

Artist: Nakazawa Masatomo
Title: Jellyfish Song
Source: DRAMAtical Murderer
Tags: dmmd dramatical murderer nakazawa masatomo clear yaoi shounen ai boys love video game
BPM: 130
Filesize: 8221kb
Play Time: 03:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Daydreaming (1,22 stars, 107 notes)
  2. Dreaming (1,64 stars, 147 notes)
  3. Trance (2,47 stars, 236 notes)
Download: Nakazawa Masatomo - Jellyfish Song
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Nakazawa Masatomo - Jellyfish Song


#1 (Ranked)
✦ MAPSET ✦
- Daydreaming
- Dreaming
- Trance


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✦ MODDERS ✦
  1. Prophecy
  2. Regraz
  3. PolkaMocha
  4. Krimek(Timing)
Prophecy
Maybe you should gather some mod before BN checking this., Random mod here (yaoi <3)

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[General]
  1. You didn't set the preview time
  2. Audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps, Consider recompressing to CBR 192kbps or VBR ~1.0
  3. The offset or BPM is wrong, consider to find someone to check.
[DayDreaming]
  1. Uninherited timing point conflict with Trance difficulties.
  2. 00:11:059 (1) - the red line should be about 60% volume or lower, too loud.
  3. 00:44:290 (1,2) - these two note is offbeat, check again where you put these notes.
  4. 00:50:751 - actually you can ignore this beat in Easy difficulties. Take this as a reference (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5460704)
Your mapset need more polish before you're going to request a BN check. GL~
Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__

Prophecy wrote:

Maybe you should gather some mod before BN checking this.Yes, I asked Regraz. c:, Random mod here (yaoi <3)

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[General]
  1. You didn't set the preview time Don't know how to xd
  2. Audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps, Consider recompressing to CBR 192kbps or VBR ~1.0 Would be nice if you could help me with this :/
  3. The offset or BPM is wrong, consider to find someone to check.
I'll change this soon

[DayDreaming]
  1. Uninherited timing point conflict with Trance difficulties. changed it
  2. 00:11:059 (1) - the red line should be about 60% volume or lower, too loud. changed it
  3. 00:44:290 (1,2) - these two note is offbeat, check again where you put these notes.
  4. 00:50:751 - actually you can ignore this beat in Easy difficulties. Take this as a reference (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5460704)
changed it

Your mapset need more polish before you're going to request a BN check. GL~
Thanks for the Mod ~
Prophecy
Timing >
Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__
Thanks, changed it.
Mafumafu
Clear <3
Well, before I could get to this map, I'd like to recommend you reading those two first!

1. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping

2. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria and https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria

The first is about the basics of beatmapping, and the second one is the current ranking criteria which are the stuffs you have to obey when beatmapping.

Please use such setting for timing panel: http://puu.sh/pNR15/1a95014fa3.png

You can still call me in-game or forum-pm later on after carefully checking the links above and modifying your map!

No kudosu for this post.
Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__
Thank you! I changed the timing and I read all the sites you sent to me.

But there was written that spinners shouldn't be longer then 5-7 seconds.
Make sure that your spinners are a reasonable length. Aim for a maximum spinning time of about 5-7 seconds; any longer can cause the player's wrist to get sore. If your spinner must be longer, then check with a BN to see if it's acceptable.
But I have some spinners that are longer.Ehm is it okay?And I'll add hitsounds to my map.
Mafumafu
It's ok as long as it's not 10 second spinners because it's really exhausting
btw you dont need to put the title in the tags
also remove "slow", "easy"
you can add Clear to the tags tbh
Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__
Thanks, I updated the beatmap(I checked combo colors, hitsounds, spinners(one is 15 seconds :/ ) and I remade some jumps in Trance and some sliders and I changed the tags )
Prophecy
General:
the timing (offset) maybe wrong.

DayDreaming:

Too much spinner, consider to reduce it.
00:17:164 (1) - Curved slider would be better.
01:07:010 (3) - you don't need to make this type of slider in this difficulites.
01:12:087 (3) - ^
02:00:087 (1,2) - blanket fix
02:02:395 (3,4) - ^
02:03:318 (4) - wrong timing snap
02:11:626 (2) - curve slider


NO KDS pls
Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__

Prophecy wrote:

General:
the timing (offset) maybe wrong.

DayDreaming:

Too much spinner, consider to reduce it.
00:17:164 (1) - Curved slider would be better.
01:07:010 (3) - you don't need to make this type of slider in this difficulites. I like it xd I think it's more varied with it
01:12:087 (3) - ^
02:00:087 (1,2) - blanket fix
02:02:395 (3,4) - ^
02:03:318 (4) - wrong timing snap
02:11:626 (2) - curve slider


NO KDS pls why? It was very helpful for me o:
Thanks for the mod! :D
Changed everything except the 2nd thing.
MoE-Ayase
Please rank this Phanny </3
Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__

MoE-Ayase wrote:

Please rank this Phanny </3
Okay </3
polka


[General:]
  • Ill just look at easy. Sorry but it's been a long day ; ;
[Easy:]
  • Fast SV for beginners...
    00:17:126 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
    [list:1337]02:18:049 (2,3) - ^
00:18:511 (2) - Fix spacing
  • 03:00:511 (3,1) - ^
00:25:434 (1) - Bend it to vocals.
00:47:126 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time. Remove spinner.
02:07:895 (3) - NC
02:30:049 - No SV changes in easy. It's too hard for beginners to read. It's not needed here anyway.
02:30:049 - Break bits starting here are weird. Just map the whole thing. They've had a break before the chorus anyway.
02:48:972 (3) - Skipped over a beat Id rather see mapped.
03:04:664 (2,3) - Stacking is bad for easy difficulties. At this time proximity, it's too hard for beginners to read.
03:20:126 (1) - Silence spinner end
Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__
Thanks for the mod!! I'll reply to it soon.

EDIT: I replied to it
Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__

PolkaMocha wrote:



[General:]
  • Ill just look at easy. Sorry but it's been a long day ; ;
[Easy:]
  • Fast SV for beginners...
    00:17:126 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved improved
    [list:1337]02:18:049 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:18:511 (2) - Fix spacing fixed
  • 03:00:511 (3,1) - ^ ? it's spaced right
00:25:434 (1) - Bend it to vocals. it's fine like this
00:47:126 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time. Remove spinner. done
02:07:895 (3) - NC done
02:30:049 - No SV changes in easy. It's too hard for beginners to read. It's not needed here anyway. removed
02:30:049 - Break bits starting here are weird. Just map the whole thing. They've had a break before the chorus anyway. remapped the whole part
02:48:972 (3) - Skipped over a beat Id rather see mapped. it's mapped now
03:04:664 (2,3) - Stacking is bad for easy difficulties. At this time proximity, it's too hard for beginners to read. true, changed it
03:20:126 (1) - Silence spinner end silenced it
Topic Starter
__Phantomhive__
I'll update this soon with a new mapped part and hitsounds.

After this I'll look for a final mod and a BN.
I hope it'll get ranked in march.
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