Hey o/
M4M from my queue
GeneralThe .mp3 has a really odd bitrate of 177 kbps. While that's rankable, do you think it would be possible to get an mp3 of the song with 192 kbps for optimal quality?
SV on Kantan and Futsuu might be a bit too high.
Kantan00:12:487 (9,11) - Ctrl + G, By putting the katus on the main white ticks you would follow the melody more closely, doesn't change the structure of the section but sounds better imo
00:15:230 (13,15) - ^
00:17:973 (17,19) - ^
00:20:716 (21) - k to follow above suggestion
00:22:773 (24) - kat is a bit too high pitch here, if you want to make this one stand out a D would work better
00:29:630 (36) - k to follow the pitch of the vocals and for pattern consistency
00:32:373 (41) - maybe a kat (kinda unsure about this myself though, same reason as above)
00:42:487 - how about adding a K here? The music would certainly justify it. If it's too hard to play for a Kantan, you could delete 00:41:973 (53). But the music here kind of requires a note imo
01:11:458 (96,97,98) - k k k would sound better here
01:16:944 (106,107,108) - k k d? To follow the vocals again
01:22:430 (117) - Has the same pitch as 01:21:744 (116), so a kat would fit well. Would also contrast better with the low pitch 01:23:116 (118)
01:25:173 (122) - same as above
Futsuu00:05:630 (7,8) - Ctrl + G would follow the pitch of the vocals better
00:10:258 (16,17) - While this follows the vocals well, it might be a bit surprising/hard in this slow and easy intro section. Wait for other modders opinion on this before you change it though.
00:11:801 (19,20) - Ctrl + G sounds better and would be consistent with 00:15:230 (28)
00:17:973 (35) - k see above
00:20:716 (43,44) - Ctrl + G ^
00:46:601 (116) - How about a 1/2 dk pattern at 00:46:430 and a single d at 00:47:116? Would fit the vocals perfectly and be interesting to play. Maybe a little hard for Futsuu though ^^
Following suggestions belong together to improve this short section and make it sound a bit better.
- 00:52:601 - add a d
00:52:944 (134,135) - Ctrl + G
00:53:973 (137,139) - delete
00:54:316 (138) - remove finish
I am a bit concerned that the Futsuu, especially towards the end, might a bit hard compared to the Kantan. But wait for other modders opinions on this as well
Muzukashii00:22:773 (71,72) - Finishers on these would be justified
00:49:516 (182) - Move it back to 00:49:687, that would play better
00:51:316 (192) - delete, it hurts the flow a bit. Plays better without, it's just a bit much here
01:15:401 (327) - Delete, sounds a lot better and more consistent without it
Oni00:37:858 (164,165,166,167) - I like it :3
00:47:801 (208) - k to follow what the drums play. Also makes this pattern a bit more interesting than just monocolor dons
01:18:316 (428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440) - I am a bit unsusre about this pattern. The drums in the music only really start picking up at 01:19:001 and it feels a bit forced/unfitting here. Probably best to get another opinion on this though
Considering that this hasn't been modded yet it's already in a pretty good state, well done.
Good luck!