1. Futsuu (2.15 stars, 207 notes)
2. Kantan (1.37 stars, 125 notes)
3. Muzukashii (3.06 stars, 343 notes)
4. Oni (4.04 stars, 462 notes)

• 00:52:601 - add a d
  00:52:944 (134,135) - Ctrl + G
  00:53:973 (137,139) - delete
  00:54:316 (138) - remove finish

5urface wrote:

Hey o/
M4M from my queue

General
The .mp3 has a really odd bitrate of 177 kbps. While that's rankable, do you think it would be possible to get an mp3 of the song with 192 kbps for optimal quality? I'll keep this in mind, but for now I'll stick with the one I have since it's not a huge issue
SV on Kantan and Futsuu might be a bit too high. I'll think about changing this

Kantan
00:12:487 (9,11) - Ctrl + G, By putting the katus on the main white ticks you would follow the melody more closely, doesn't change the structure of the section but sounds better imo This sounds nice. Changed.
00:15:230 (13,15) - ^
00:17:973 (17,19) - ^
00:20:716 (21) - k to follow above suggestion
00:22:773 (24) - kat is a bit too high pitch here, if you want to make this one stand out a D would work better Agreed
00:29:630 (36) - k to follow the pitch of the vocals and for pattern consistency It was a d to avoid repetition, but yeah, it sounds way better as a k. Changed
00:32:373 (41) - maybe a kat (kinda unsure about this myself though, same reason as above) I think eithert a d or k fits well here. I'm keeping a d to avoid repitition.
00:42:487 - how about adding a K here? The music would certainly justify it. If it's too hard to play for a Kantan, you could delete 00:41:973 (53). But the music here kind of requires a note imo This section is really tough to map for a kantan I really want to avoid the red ticks, so I've tried to map it so that even though it doesn't match the song too well it's easy to read and play (the simple 2/1 k d k patterns). I agree that what I have doesn't fit well, but I feel that adding a note at 00:42:487 is very unintuitive for a beginner player who doesn't know the song well.
01:11:458 (96,97,98) - k k k would sound better here Sure, changed.
01:16:944 (106,107,108) - k k d? To follow the vocals again Changed
01:22:430 (117) - Has the same pitch as 01:21:744 (116), so a kat would fit well. Would also contrast better with the low pitch 01:23:116 (118) Agreed, changed
01:25:173 (122) - same as above ^

Futsuu
00:05:630 (7,8) - Ctrl + G would follow the pitch of the vocals better I'm trying to match the piano here, so I think it's fine as is.
00:10:258 (16,17) - While this follows the vocals well, it might be a bit surprising/hard in this slow and easy intro section. Wait for other modders opinion on this before you change it though. Again, this is mapped to match the piano. I'll wait and see what other modders have to say about it.
00:11:801 (19,20) - Ctrl + G sounds better and would be consistent with 00:15:230 (28) Sure, changed
00:17:973 (35) - k see above Changed
00:20:716 (43,44) - Ctrl + G ^ ^
00:46:601 (116) - How about a 1/2 dk pattern at 00:46:430 and a single d at 00:47:116? Would fit the vocals perfectly and be interesting to play. Maybe a little hard for Futsuu though ^^ Ahhh, I'm really not a fan of mapping to vocals I'll keep it as is.
Following suggestions belong together to improve this short section and make it sound a bit better. This feels a little empty to me, but I'll give it a go anyway. Changed.

• 00:52:601 - add a d
  00:52:944 (134,135) - Ctrl + G
  00:53:973 (137,139) - delete
  00:54:316 (138) - remove finish

I am a bit concerned that the Futsuu, especially towards the end, might a bit hard compared to the Kantan. But wait for other modders opinions on this as well It probably is. Futsuu is my worst diff for mapping since I don't really know how difficult I should make it. I won't change anything else just yet, but I'm very open to ideas to reduce the difficulty and make it fit better as a futusu.

Muzukashii
00:22:773 (71,72) - Finishers on these would be justified Agreed
00:49:516 (182) - Move it back to 00:49:687, that would play better I don't like leaving the first beat of a bar empty, but this seems to fit the song, so I've changed it.
00:51:316 (192) - delete, it hurts the flow a bit. Plays better without, it's just a bit much here Sure, removed.
01:15:401 (327) - Delete, sounds a lot better and more consistent without it Okay, removed

Oni
00:37:858 (164,165,166,167) - I like it :3 :3
00:47:801 (208) - k to follow what the drums play. Also makes this pattern a bit more interesting than just monocolor dons Sounds good, changed.
01:18:316 (428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440) - I am a bit unsusre about this pattern. The drums in the music only really start picking up at 01:19:001 and it feels a bit forced/unfitting here. Probably best to get another opinion on this though I agree. Removed 01:18:744 (433) and 01:18:916 (435)


Considering that this hasn't been modded yet it's already in a pretty good state, well done.
Good luck! Thanks

numbermaniac wrote:

Hi Aloda! Saw this in somebody else’s mod queue (looks upwards), so just out of curiosity I had a look at it. There’s some important issues in Muzukashii I thought I’d make note of.

I wonder if maybe 80-90% volume might be better in some parts. Maybe. I'll look into it.
00:10:258 (21,22,23) - 00:22:258 (68,69,70) - 00:49:173 (179,180,181) - 00:51:230 (191,192,193) - 00:52:601 (201,202,203) - 00:53:287 (206,207,208) - 00:59:973 (238,239,240) - 01:00:658 (242,243,244) - 01:02:030 (250,251,252) - 01:02:544 (254,255,256) - 01:03:744 (260,261,262) - 01:04:773 (266,267,268) - and loads more: In Muzukashii you generally don’t want multicolour triplets. ddd and kkk are the ones you want to stick to. The occasional ddk or kkd might be alright, but don’t overuse them. Currently your triplets are of many different colours which is really hard to play and most likely unrankable. I've changed the kdk and dkk, but I honestly think that ddk and kkd are just as easy as ddd and kkk, even for a less experienced player. In fact, the guide you've linked below groups them with ddd and kkk as simple patterns. I'm open to changing some of them, but I feel that most of them are fine.

00:56:030 (219,220,221,222,223) - No. You may be one of the best in Australia, but not all of us are (especially me). 5-plets should never be more than one colour in Muzukashii. dkkkd is evil Removed 00:56:116 (220)

00:51:230 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - I feel like the triplets are a little dense here. Not entirely sure, but it feels like maybe a bit too many. Removed a couple of notes. Hopefully it plays better now.

[Futsuu]

The kiai is a bit full of 1/1s. I would recommend some 2/1 spacings occasionally. You might want to look at this if you haven't already. Added in a couple of 2/1 gaps

Most of this map is pretty good though . Good luck! Thanks!

Aloda wrote:

Muzu and Futsuu are my least favourite diffs to map since I'm not really sure how difficult they should be and I always end up over or undermapping them Thanks a lot for your suggestions

numbermaniac wrote:

Btw, some tiny OD/HP settings:

Kantan - OD 3. You can make the HP 8 if you want.
Futsuu - OD 4.
Muzukashii - HP 5
Oni - Maybe HP 5.

Raediaufar wrote:

[Oni]

click

00:16:687 (47) - I don't think alternate is really fit over here, suggest to delete Removed. Also removed 00:13:773 (33).

00:20:201 (65) - seems offbeat, delete? the rhythm is weird imo Sounds weird to me without it. No change

00:21:487 (71) - move to 00:21:316 - seems more fit Moved

00:25:601 (95) - d? it just sounds really weird if you put k there. Also plays better imo Okay

00:30:144 (123,124) - ctrl + G, more fit to the sound (it's really fit to the vocal sound =w=) Sure

00:33:744 - if you map the 1/3 piano here it would be MUCH more interesting That sounds really nice. Added


00:37:858 (165,166,167,168) - kddk Sure

01:14:716 (405) - k ? Keeping this as a d to match the vocal pitch

01:19:858 (442) - delete, give it some break dude Removed

[Muzukashii]

click

00:13:687 (29) - k, this one just should be k. d feels really weird Honestly, k feels weirder to me

00:18:316 - kinda disagree with how you do the rhythm over here. Try to look my suggest below and see if like it Sure, I'll give this a go
- 00:18:830 (51) - delete this
- 00:19:173 - add d
- 00:19:344 (53) - delete
- 00:19:516 (53,54) - ctrl + G

just try to apply it first and see if you like it :3

00:30:144 - add d, and delete 00:30:316 (104) - Done

00:32:544 (115) - delete, add big K here 00:32:887 - and delete 00:33:058 (118) - , should be better =w= Put a small k in instead. Seems to play better to me.

00:39:744 (139) - k , try to listen the piano pitch Changed

00:39:916 (140) - move to 00:40:087 - the previous is seems offbeat I'm not so sure about this, but changed anyway

00:40:430 (142) - k, piano pitch Changed

01:13:859 (312) - d, give em some relax after hitting those k lol Sure

01:26:373 - add k Added

I'm not good enough to mod kantan and futsuu actually so sorry for no mod on those ;w; No worries :3

solid map :3 Thanks!

Nyan wrote:

[General]

+8ms to all offset. +3 seems better to me
(suggestion)Delete all notes after 01:22:430 to ensure the end of the song I don't think so

[Kantan]

SliderMultiplier:1.3999998544693 ->1.4

no problem in pattern

[Futsuu]

SliderMultiplier:1.3999998544693 -> 1.4

00:42:830 (96,97) - d k Changed
00:44:030 (99) - move to 00:43:858 Moved
00:49:516 (114) - move to 00:49:344 No change
00:57:744 (137) - add Finish no change
01:01:516 (148,149,150,151) - k d k _ d Changed
01:12:488 (184,185,186,187) - k k k _ d Changed
01:20:373 (210) - remove Finish Removed
01:20:887 (212) - add Finish No change
01:21:744 (214) - move to 01:21:573 and add Finish Moved
01:22:430 (216) - add Finish No change

[Muzukashii]

SliderMultiplier:1.3999998544693 -> 1.4
00:11:458 - add a don Added
00:43:344 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156) - d d k d _ d k d Changed
00:49:001 (175,176,177,178) - kkk k Changed
01:00:658 (235,236,237) - ddd Changed
01:02:544 (247,248,249) - kkk Changed
01:03:573 (252,253,254,255) - ddd k No change
01:10:944 (293,294,295) - ddd No change
01:14:716 (315,316,317,318) - ddd k Changed
01:20:373 (345) - remove Finish Removed
01:20:716 (346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355) - Changed

01:20:887 (347) - add Finish No change
01:21:573 (350) - add Finish No change
01:22:430 (355) - add Finish No change

[Oni]

SliderMultiplier:1.3999998544693 -> 1.4
00:43:344 (188,189,190,191,192,193,194) - d d k d _ d k d Changed
01:20:373 (444) - remove Finish Removed
01:21:058 (450) - remove Removed
01:22:430 (458) - add Finish No change

katacheh wrote:

Hi~ from my queue!

General

Offset is not really accurate... (My opinion: 1519→1529) Changed to 1522 instead

Kantan

00:56:376 () - add k No change

Futsuu

00:23:461 (47) - add finish

00:46:433 () - add d Added

00:47:804 () - add d

00:49:176 () - add k
00:49:347 () - add d
00:49:519 (114) - move to 00:49:690 () -

Muzu

00:55:004 (207) - move to 00:54:833 () - No change

00:56:376 (216) - k (make triplets same color in muzu)

01:03:747 (254,255,256) - kkk

01:04:604 (259,260,261,262) - k ddd

01:10:776 (293,294,295,296) - d kkk

01:16:347 (325) - delete Removed and added a d at 01:16:176

01:21:576 (351) - k Changed

Oni

00:09:290 (20) - move to 00:09:319 () - Moved
00:09:519 (21) - move to 00:09:576 () - Moved

00:10:604 () - missing note here? add d No?

00:26:033 () - add d and delete 00:26:204 (98,99) - →to fit the vocal Removed 98 and 99 but no new note added.
00:31:519 () - ^ add d and delete 00:31:690 (132,133) - ^

00:37:861 (165,166,167,168) - k d k ? 1/3 ?

00:42:490 (185) - add finish Tentatively added

00:54:833 (263) - add finish and delete 00:55:004 (264) - Changed to k instead. No note removed.

00:55:176 (265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279) - This pattern is a bit hard for an Oni... Maybe change a pattern.

Smallwu wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue

General

Offset 1526 (I think 1522 is too fast) Honestly, it seems fine to me as is. I'm keeping it unless some other people agree with you

Turn off Widescreen Support Somehow Kantan, Futsuu and Muzu had it on while Oni didn't. Turned off

Open .osu with txt
Ctrl+F "Events"
You can see this

"0,0,"ss+(2016-06-09+at+11.23.53).jpg",0,100"
Before the change --> After the change

Nice

Muzukashii

I think 00:09:322 and 00:09:579 need to add d. Because you follow the piano here. Added

00:21:922 (67) - D Changed

00:22:264 - 00:22:950 - Because 00:22:350 no drum sound Changed to something slightly different

00:36:493 (130,131,132,133) - K D K K (130) can be D or K No change

00:39:236 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - dddk kddk kk Follow pitch Changed

00:49:350 (180) - d Sure

00:49:693 (181,182,183,184,185) - d d k d k Sounds good

00:55:179 (210) - k 00:55:264 - Add d (kdk) Changed/added

00:57:407 (220) - D Changed

00:57:750 - 00:58:779 - Sure

01:01:865 (245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - k ddd k ddd k I like that Sounds nice, changed

01:07:350 - 01:08:379 - I don't really want to use a 5-plet so I made it d ddk instead

01:08:722 - 01:09:750 -

Remove 01:17:807 (333) and add k on 01:18:150 Changed

The end of song is strange
Remove 01:26:379 (370) and add a Spinner [01:26:379 - 01:27:236] I think that's better I think it sounds fine as it is, no change

Oni

00:09:579 (21) - d To highlight last piano sound (22) Sure

00:21:236 (69,70,71) - kkd Changed

Remove 00:22:350 (76) Because here no drum sound Removed

00:22:436 (76,77,78) - kkd Changed

00:33:750 (144,145,146,147,148,149,150) - k d d k d d K Changed

00:35:122 (153) - k? (Suggest) I prefer this as d, no change

00:37:864 (162,163,164,165) - k k k d Follow pitch Changed

00:39:236 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - dddkdkddk kk Sure, changed

00:57:407 (277) - D Changed

Remove 01:26:379 (479) and add a Spinner [01:26:379 - 01:27:236] Like Muzukashii I think it sounds fine as it is, no change

GL with Rank！

• 00:55:179 - Changed this stream to make it a little easier
  01:18:150 (425) - Removed to make this section play a little better - I think it felt a little awkward to play before
  01:19:179 (433) - d -> k
  01:21:750 (449,452) - Removed to make the end of the map feel a little less jarring (also made a similar change to the muzu)

numbermaniac wrote:

Btw, in the Muzu:

00:55:179 (209,210,211) - kdk isn't allowed in Muzukashii. You could do a kkk here instead.