Bluekrait wrote:

[Mir's Insane]

1. 00:05:406 (4,1,2) - Try slider slider circle instead to match vocals. 00:07:982 (4,1,2) - circle slider slider fits better in these parts because the vocal isn't adding anything. So by alternating slider slider circle and circle slider slider in these respective parts, you can create some nice variation!
2. 00:10:559 (4,1,2) - ^
3. 00:15:713 (4,1,2) - ^ - Not trying to follow vocals for any of these lol
4. 00:16:679 (4,5) - Fix blanket
5. 00:52:004 (1) - hithistle is jarring >.<
6. 01:03:518 (4,1) - Placing 4 above 1 instead of below creates better flow from 01:03:277 (3) - doesn't make much of a difference
7. 01:11:437 (2) - I would add a drum hitsound on this phantom note just for the sake of continuity.
8. 01:11:974 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nitpicking aesthetics here, can you make this stream more curvy? As it is right now, the curve on 01:12:403 (5) doesn't match the stream preceding it. Also would be nice if you could make it blanket 01:12:618 (1) - adjusted

Renumi wrote:

regular neck hyper lmfao
updated (thanks all for expressing your hype!!)

CucumberCuc wrote:

[Insane]
00:02:990 (4,1) ctrl+g? - why? ruins flow
00:39:548 (2,3) make curve? - again for what reason?

CucumberCuc wrote:

[Easy]
00:01:255 (2,1) x1.13 far It's fine. The offset changes there so visual distance is a better indicator here
00:41:078 maybe put circle? prefer not to

1. 00:12:170 (1) - use whistle+finish at hitsounding on this cause you used on 00:01:863 (1) -
2. 00:21:832 (1) - NC prob? Spacing between the before one and this is a little huge
3. 00:32:140 (1) - ^
   I think nothing more to point out, nice diff and consistent

1. Lol why OD 1,9 xD using 2,0 shouldn't be that brutal (?)
2. I think SV is a little high... I'm considering it's a 90~bpm song but there are someparts that are still hard to follow for newest players
3. Hmm it's totally up to you, but you could delete 00:00:289 (1,2) - and let the voice mapping for higher diffs. I've tested the Beginner one and this and I think this could better without these two sliders cause I felt them a little unnecesary :c
4. 00:17:967 (2) - this reverse slider is a little hard. I know you're making this a little more interesting than the beginner one but you should still follow the Easy criteria about this kind of sliders :3
5. 00:53:292 (3) - considering the SV on the diff I think these reverses are a little hard to follow for novice players, consider they're not familiarized with this kind of sliders and could easily get a slider break on there. Try using slider + circle instead
6. 01:13:906 (3) - Same comment about reverses, also this slider is a little strange for new players D:
   That's all, I think diff is nice about consistency and DS using, but some sliders are a little hard (considering the SV)

1. 00:04:278 (5,1) - I feel this overlap is a little unnecesary, maybe try using DS to make them separated
2. 00:06:855 (5,1) - ^
   Well it depends on you, but it's not that recomendable on this diffs I think :c. Maybe instead changing all of them you could alternate cause they're a kind of repetitive through the song (also I'm not pointing everyone cause I think you got the point <3)
3. 00:40:192 (3) - use finish here probably
   That's all I think ^^

• 
  fun diff I enjoyed at playing

1. 00:11:847 (5,6) - why both claps? maybe use deleting the first clap
2. 00:17:001 (5,6,1) - hmmm this feels a little strange. This rest the smooth through the whole map, maybe you could make the spacing between 00:17:001 (5,6) - a little closer
3. 00:29:885 (5,6,1) - ^ just a little more could be enough imo
4. 00:40:192 (1) - use finish + clap at the end of the slider
5. 01:16:805 (2,3,4,5) - the jump between them is fun, but could make a little more closer 4 and 5 to don't break the calm flow through the song
   nothing more, nice one

xfraczynho wrote:

[Mir's Insane]

• 
  fun diff I enjoyed at playing - thanks!

1. 00:11:847 (5,6) - why both claps? maybe use deleting the first clap - it's just some added flair I think, I didn't do the hitsounds but I don't think it's bad
2. 00:17:001 (5,6,1) - hmmm this feels a little strange. This rest the smooth through the whole map, maybe you could make the spacing between 00:17:001 (5,6) - a little closer
3. 00:29:885 (5,6,1) - ^ just a little more could be enough imo
4. 00:40:192 (1) - use finish + clap at the end of the slider - no clap, finish is a good idea tho
5. 01:16:805 (2,3,4,5) - the jump between them is fun, but could make a little more closer 4 and 5 to don't break the calm flow through the song
   nothing more, nice one

Well nothing more to point out, really nice song and quiet so I enjoyed ^^ best of lucks and hope this can helps!

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3 yo~

[Normal]
00:16:679 (4,1) slightly are close mmh
00:38:581 (3,1) slightly far reeee
00:55:225 (2,4) and 00:59:090 (4,1) different range reeee e

Mir wrote:

At least put in the effort to explain yourself and your points, most of your mods just consist of "far" or "too close" or "curve?" and it doesn't explain anything about why to the mapper. In my case, I don't see what your point is so I don't wanna do it.

P.S. If it's not much help the map - i gave kudosu eeeeep thanks for checking though o: (i apreciate the kudosu a lot, thanks for that too!)
also understand that i can't give you kd in this situation since no change was really applied, i appreciate the look through nonetheless!

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi! Mod as requested on my queue. I really feel the mapset good enough (also I could say ready for rank) but I still can give you some little suggestions that could help.
Also don't worry about moding my map, I'm still waiting for the GD but ty anyways "waiting for the gd",, pm me in-game im a bit confuzzled on that >.<

Just a comment: What about the name? Idk if it's from some TV program but if it's the case you should use (TV Size) instead. Other case you should try Short Ver. metadata check in description please look eee ;;

[Renbery's Beginner]

1. 00:12:170 (1) - use whistle+finish at hitsounding on this cause you used on 00:01:863 (1) - the first whistle thing was to emphasize the start of the song, and i wanted to save that combo for later on in the song >.< (i'm replying to this cause i did hitsounds hh)
   I think nothing more to point out, nice diff and consistent thank you!

[Normal]

1. 00:04:278 (5,1) - I feel this overlap is a little unnecesary, maybe try using DS to make them separated hmmm, can't really do that :c
2. 00:06:855 (5,1) - ^ eeep
   Well it depends on you, but it's not that recomendable on this diffs I think :c. Maybe instead changing all of them you could alternate cause they're a kind of repetitive through the song (also I'm not pointing everyone cause I think you got the point <3) yeah i got you but ;w;" it's not unrankable or considered "bad" to use overlaps in normal difficulties! a lot of them utilize such more often than not; like i hope i don't sound stern, but, open up any normal diff in a recently ranked map and you'll see what i mean sdfsaf
3. 00:40:192 (3) - use finish here probably wanted to save the finish for other stronger stuff in the song ;w;
   That's all I think ^^ thank you for checking, i appreciate it!

Well nothing more to point out, really nice song and quiet so I enjoyed ^^ best of lucks and hope this can helps! thank youuuuuuuuuu!!

xfraczynho wrote:

[Renbery's Beginner]

1. 00:12:170 (1) - use whistle+finish at hitsounding on this cause you used on 00:01:863 (1) -
2. 00:21:832 (1) - NC prob? Spacing between the before one and this is a little huge
3. 00:32:140 (1) - ^
   I think nothing more to point out, nice diff and consistent

uh I'll let renumi reply to this


[nubery's Easy]

1. Lol why OD 1,9 xD using 2,0 shouldn't be that brutal (?) it doesn't really make a difference
2. I think SV is a little high... I'm considering it's a 90~bpm song but there are someparts that are still hard to follow for newest players Trust me, it's fine. The song is 93 bpm mapped as 186 bpm so a high base SV is required. In the end it's the same effective SV as most easy diff's of this range
3. Hmm it's totally up to you, but you could delete 00:00:289 (1,2) - and let the voice mapping for higher diffs. I've tested the Beginner one and this and I think this could better without these two sliders cause I felt them a little unnecesary :c
   I prefer how it currently is. Mapping it doesn't add any extra difficulty to the map itself so it's just a design decision
4. 00:17:967 (2) - this reverse slider is a little hard. I know you're making this a little more interesting than the beginner one but you should still follow the Easy criteria about this kind of sliders :3 It's just holding down a key, there's nothing difficult about that. So trust me, it's fine.
5. 00:53:292 (3) - considering the SV on the diff I think these reverses are a little hard to follow for novice players, consider they're not familiarized with this kind of sliders and could easily get a slider break on there. Try using slider + circle instead What about those sliders makes them difficult? Do you mean the fact they're 1/2 ? Again this is fine because it's mapped double bpm. So they're effectively white tick to white tick reverses
6. 01:13:906 (3) - Same comment about reverses, also this slider is a little strange for new players D: same as above
   That's all, I think diff is nice about consistency and DS using, but some sliders are a little hard (considering the SV)

Monstrata wrote:

Polka's Regular Neck Hyper

What is this diff name? Unless you have a good reason for using it, please change it to something else. Polka's Hyper is fine This things background used to be different. It had a girl with a big neck so I called it Polka's Big Neck Hyper. But then the bg changed so now regular neck..
HP 6 instead. Current HP is too high for the skill required to play this map . k
00:00:289 (1) - Unsnapped fixed

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tatatat wrote:

The background image is too big at 1336x768. The maximum allowed resolution is 1280x720.
oh no oh no oh no. I think I dun messed up

appleeaterx wrote:

present day, heh, present time, AHAAHAHAHAhAaHAHhAHHAHAHhHAhhahHAHHAHhA

pishifat wrote:

storyboard creepiness was enhanced a little too far when i saw july 6th in the bottom
i was wondering like "how does the storyboard know what day it is today"

diffs that map the vocals-only intro bit at 00:00:289 - mess up the storyboard. like the tv thing just pops up while objects are fading in. should like make it appear earlier or fade in or whatever you storyboard folk do

pishifat wrote:

storyboard creepiness was enhanced a little too far when i saw july 6th in the bottom
i was wondering like "how does the storyboard know what day it is today"