Mir's Insane
00:05:083 (3) - Ctrl+G fits your sharp angle flow pretty well, compare it with 00:02:346 (2,3) - 00:03:634 (3,4) - . You lack emphasis here unnecesarily.
00:13:297 (1,2) - Feels a bit too close together for your regular structure. Consider 1's placement in relation to 00:13:941 (3) - and try and reposition 2 to respect this visual distance.
00:21:027 (1,2,3) - You curved the sliders too much and its causing the blanket to be off.
00:31:334 (5,2) - object-border overlap is really unpolished imo...
00:31:495 (1,2) - Eh, overlap
01:09:075 (2,1) - 3/10 blanket
01:15:517 (2,3,4) - I feel like 3+4 could have stacked with 2 or something. Like in my head, the overlap seems unnecessary, and also there are cleaner patterns that could potentially be set up with this arrangement, thats why i point it out
Polka's Hyper
00:32:140 (1,1) - This sliderborder overlap triggers me xd.
00:35:038 (5) - NC
00:52:004 (1) - I would remove NC here and NC beginning on 00:52:648 (3) - then NC on 00:55:063 (2) - here instead. This is a good place to highlight the 5 repeat sliders as their own individual combo and one of the few examples of where i'd really recommend deviating from the standard NC rhythm cuz it just works better visually xD.
01:11:329 (1,2) - I would make this a 2/3 slider instead so you can begin the stream on a more natural note (red tick). Beginning on a 2/3 note is quite awkward for players.
Mk's Hard
00:16:357 (5) - Okay this is really hard to read especially with the overlaps.
00:22:477 (1,2) - If you bend slider 1 a bit more you can do something like:00:24:731 (7,1) - Blanket?
00:47:494 (2,3,4) - Doesn't flow well imo.
01:04:243 (6) - Stack with 01:04:565 (1) - to avoid the anti-jump
Normal
00:58:445 (3,4) - Blanket
01:00:378 (2,3) - ^
Pretty clean. Go through ti for blankets one more time though thanks.
nubery's Easy
00:14:746 (1,4) - In the future try to overlap sliders like this. It makes the pattern look a bit messy. Idk if its possible to salvage this now, so if you find it too hard to fix, its whatever.
01:19:060 (1,2) - This pattern can be improved visually imo. First, try and make 01:17:771 (1,1) - parallel. Then try and fit 01:19:704 (2) - in a way that makes it structurally equidistant with 01:17:771 (1) - 's head.
Renbery's Beginner
00:55:225 (3,1) - The spacing is too big. Compare it to 01:00:378 (2) - .
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Pretty clean patterns overall. I think the set could still benefit from some minor polishing, like fixing blankets, avoiding unnecessary / unclean overlaps, etc... feel free to ask for another mod or two, or go over the set yourself and self-mod. You can call me back when you feel the set is ready, but I won't be happy if I see blanket issues still, cuz they're not something I should be pointing out
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00:05:083 (3) - Ctrl+G fits your sharp angle flow pretty well, compare it with 00:02:346 (2,3) - 00:03:634 (3,4) - . You lack emphasis here unnecesarily.
00:13:297 (1,2) - Feels a bit too close together for your regular structure. Consider 1's placement in relation to 00:13:941 (3) - and try and reposition 2 to respect this visual distance.
00:21:027 (1,2,3) - You curved the sliders too much and its causing the blanket to be off.
00:31:334 (5,2) - object-border overlap is really unpolished imo...
00:31:495 (1,2) - Eh, overlap
01:09:075 (2,1) - 3/10 blanket
01:15:517 (2,3,4) - I feel like 3+4 could have stacked with 2 or something. Like in my head, the overlap seems unnecessary, and also there are cleaner patterns that could potentially be set up with this arrangement, thats why i point it out
Polka's Hyper
00:32:140 (1,1) - This sliderborder overlap triggers me xd.
00:35:038 (5) - NC
00:52:004 (1) - I would remove NC here and NC beginning on 00:52:648 (3) - then NC on 00:55:063 (2) - here instead. This is a good place to highlight the 5 repeat sliders as their own individual combo and one of the few examples of where i'd really recommend deviating from the standard NC rhythm cuz it just works better visually xD.
01:11:329 (1,2) - I would make this a 2/3 slider instead so you can begin the stream on a more natural note (red tick). Beginning on a 2/3 note is quite awkward for players.
Mk's Hard
00:16:357 (5) - Okay this is really hard to read especially with the overlaps.
00:22:477 (1,2) - If you bend slider 1 a bit more you can do something like:00:24:731 (7,1) - Blanket?
00:47:494 (2,3,4) - Doesn't flow well imo.
01:04:243 (6) - Stack with 01:04:565 (1) - to avoid the anti-jump
Normal
00:58:445 (3,4) - Blanket
01:00:378 (2,3) - ^
Pretty clean. Go through ti for blankets one more time though thanks.
nubery's Easy
00:14:746 (1,4) - In the future try to overlap sliders like this. It makes the pattern look a bit messy. Idk if its possible to salvage this now, so if you find it too hard to fix, its whatever.
01:19:060 (1,2) - This pattern can be improved visually imo. First, try and make 01:17:771 (1,1) - parallel. Then try and fit 01:19:704 (2) - in a way that makes it structurally equidistant with 01:17:771 (1) - 's head.
Renbery's Beginner
00:55:225 (3,1) - The spacing is too big. Compare it to 01:00:378 (2) - .
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Pretty clean patterns overall. I think the set could still benefit from some minor polishing, like fixing blankets, avoiding unnecessary / unclean overlaps, etc... feel free to ask for another mod or two, or go over the set yourself and self-mod. You can call me back when you feel the set is ready, but I won't be happy if I see blanket issues still, cuz they're not something I should be pointing out
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