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Breeze
Now I know why you used 2 same pic.
one as BG and one do a scale and fade out effect, sorry, my fault.
Now it looked good enough for a bubble
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Breeze wrote:

Now I know why you used 2 same pic.
one as BG and one do a scale and fade out effect, sorry, my fault.
Now it looked good enough for a bubble
Thanks a lot :D
Sakura
[Tenshi-nyan's Lunatic]
00:03:606 (3,4,5,1,2) - Due to the way these are setup it's pretty hard to tell the spacing change from 5 to 1 to 2, to fix it, using the new combo on 5 would be a good idea, in fact, it fits better with the song.
00:08:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's pretty confusing to have 2 doubles and a single right after, i'd suggest you unstack the doubles and use a regular stream instead.
01:09:743 (4,5,6) - This sudden rythm change is breaking the nice flow of the map :<
01:21:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why are you accelerating the spacing in here?
01:30:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:32:096 (1,2) - Spacing error
02:03:373 (2,3,4) - Once again why spacing acceleartion here?
01:49:743 (1,1) - Spinner is too short for the next note to be so soon, sorry but i disagree with this.

Other diffs are pretty good, good job!

Popping over spacing issues on Tenshi's map.
Tenshi-nyan

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Tenshi-nyan's Lunatic]
00:03:606 (3,4,5,1,2) - Due to the way these are setup it's pretty hard to tell the spacing change from 5 to 1 to 2, to fix it, using the new combo on 5 would be a good idea, in fact, it fits better with the song. K
00:08:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's pretty confusing to have 2 doubles and a single right after, i'd suggest you unstack the doubles and use a regular stream instead. K
01:09:743 (4,5,6) - This sudden rythm change is breaking the nice flow of the map :< Added a note there.
01:21:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why are you accelerating the spacing in here?
01:30:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Because I like it. It's kinda original. Not gonna fix this.
01:32:096 (1,2) - Spacing error Hmm I don't see where? Replaced them with a slider, though.
02:03:373 (2,3,4) - Once again why spacing acceleartion here? Hmm never noticed those spacing mistakes. Fixed~
01:49:743 (1,1) - Spinner is too short for the next note to be so soon, sorry but i disagree with this. Replaced with a slider.

Other diffs are pretty good, good job!

Popping over spacing issues on Tenshi's map.
Fixes.

http://puu.sh/5Or3
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Fixes.

http://puu.sh/5Or3
Uploaded

And sorry for the delay :(
Sakura
Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry for the delay ;_;

In [Lunatic] 00:12:273 (12) This slider has the end unsnapped because it goes through a red line i recommend to split it into 3 circles instead to fix it, that's all.
Tenshi-nyan

Sakura Hana wrote:

Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry for the delay ;_;

In [Lunatic] 00:12:273 (12) This slider has the end unsnapped because it goes through a red line i recommend to split it into 3 circles instead to fix it, that's all.

http://puu.sh/7BxP fixes in here.

Hope Impossible will upload it, lol.
Sakura
orz Bad news my computer broke ;_; so i wont be able to recheck this until i get ti repaired (hoping this weekend/next weekend)
Topic Starter
Dotsu
Uploaded
Sakura
And of course i forget to recheck this until today

T_T

Sorry Rebubbled~

Next time please send me a PM to reminds me :<
Tenshi-nyan
4 week old bubble

Lybydose
Timing:

1829,444.444444444444,4,2,1,41,1,0
12489,392.156862745098,4,2,1,50,1,0
117587,392.156862745098,5,2,1,65,1,0
119452,392.156862745098,4,2,1,51,1,0
169648,444.444444444444,4,2,1,61,1,0
180314,392.156862745098,4,2,1,61,1,0
lolcubes

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

4 week old bubble
Well then let's intervene.

[General]
  1. Timing: I felt it was quite wonky and I couldn't really figure it out and be that precise so thankfully Lybydose was able to help us here.
[Tenshi-nyan's Lunatic]
  1. 00:47:390 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ehm. I don't think this is a good idea. The horn surely doesn't follow this rhythm and I can't find anything else in the music that does either. You need to change this.
  2. 01:23:861 (3,1) - You should probably lower this spacing. As it is now it's a bit sudden, don't you think?
  3. 01:58:436 (1,2,3,4) - This is quite awkward. I suggest that instead of the other triplet, you make another kick slider and unstack it. You have a time signature change here and it potentially screws the rhythm over, considering it starts on a blue tick of a previous time signature. Also, I feel that 01:59:449 (4) should be a new combo instead of 01:59:648 (1) cause that follows the music better (if you really want to leave this is a triplet that is, I still think you should change it to a kick slider).
  4. 02:46:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same thing here, it's extremely difficult and distracting because you can't hear anything besides the horn, which requires 1/3 ticks.
[Verdi's Taiko]
  1. 00:05:273 (8) - This note sounds incredibly off. You have a piano at 00:05:162, why not move it there?
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:940 (5) - I feel you're better off without this note. Consider removing it. There is nothing in the music there, the piano is on a blue tick too.
  2. 01:44:253 (6) - You should place a new combo here, the combo is much much longer than any other in this section.
Easy looked okay.

Unfortunately, due to wonky timings, I can only return your bubble to you once you apply fixes. :/
Tenshi-nyan

Lybydose wrote:

Timing:

1829,444.444444444444,4,2,1,41,1,0
12489,392.156862745098,4,2,1,50,1,0
117587,392.156862745098,5,2,1,65,1,0
119452,392.156862745098,4,2,1,51,1,0
169648,444.444444444444,4,2,1,61,1,0
180314,392.156862745098,4,2,1,61,1,0
Can you put that so I understand it?


Actually, never mind.

Applied cubes' mod to the streams, and fixed the timing (lol)

http://puu.sh/aqQX
Verdisphena
\o/
I change some things.
Come on, rank this ~

Download: ZUN - Cinderella Cage ~ Kagome-Kagome (impossiblexu) [Verdi's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Dotsu
Everything's done
Love
Taiko Mod

General:

HP +1
00:01:717 - 153 BPM timing section here please, for the hidden players.
Hitsound - Normal 100%

Mods:

00:07:828 (16) - k
00:12:051 (34,35) - d
00:15:038 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - shorten this stream please
00:16:214 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - ^
00:19:351 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103) - ^
00:23:469 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) - ^
00:24:645 (137,138) - dd - 1/6th roll would be too hard for kkd----
00:48:567 (279) - remove and take the spinner after it, move it here, extend the spinner
01:10:038 (107) - remove finish
01:10:332 (108) - ^


Flow: 3/5
Creativity: 2/5

You could have less streams and follow the drum more instead of the rest of the music. Or at least follow the drums and use the piano in the background, the streams were very off.
Sorry Verdi ;w;

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Can I make a 2nd taiko? (inner oni)
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Love wrote:

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Can I make a 2nd taiko? (inner oni)
Sorry I don't want to add more diffs
Pheon
Hello there, I've thought of a few mods regarding the taiko difficulty. They're suggestions, mostly due to consistency. Please look into them. ^^

00:40:528 (227) - Change into k? you're using kkdd or dkkd throughout most of it, using kddd here feels odd.
01:10:038 (107,108) - I suggest removing these finishes, as Love mentioned already.
01:17:979 (148) - Change into k? It'd fit more with the d k d k d which precedes it.

The things which struck me the most are the inconsistent use of kdd and kkd. In most cases, I'd prefer kkd over kdd (easier to play, sounds better, etc.). Also, where parts in the music sound the same, you invert the taikos (ddkkd turns into kkddk, etc.). This seems inconsistent to me. :\

Hopefully, anything I posted here was useful.
Verdisphena
Sorry for the late reply, thanks love and Pheon

Download: ZUN - Cinderella Cage ~ Kagome-Kagome (impossiblexu) [Verdi's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Verdisphena wrote:

Sorry for the late reply, thanks love and Pheon
Uploaded
Topic Starter
Dotsu
:)
lolcubes
[Tenshi-nyan's Lunatic]
  1. 00:47:390 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just wrong. It's better than it was before (1/4 over 1/3), but you are still doing it wrongl, using 1/3 over 1/2. This is closest you can do to follow the music properly. The other bunch of 1/3 notes really don't fit here.
    This same thing applies to 02:46:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) too.
  2. 01:59:253 (2,3,4) - I keep asking you to unstack this from the repeater. You don't know when the repeating slider will end, making this sort of unreadable. By the time the repeater ends you don't have almost any reaction time to notice when to click these.
[Verdi's Taiko]
  1. Tickrate 4 is definitely not needed. Use 1 to keep it standard.
  2. Use normal hitsounds at 80% volume, since it appears that would be the new standard to use. It actually sounds better on the default skin too.
[Normal]
  1. 02:49:648 (1,2) - I would suggest that you make a slider out of these two. The reason is, you have a BPM change here, and just having 2 circles could be hard to read. This is only a suggestion.
  2. 02:55:425 (4,5,1) - Instead of these, try this. While yours isn't wrong, I think this is much better because it follows the music much better. Also a suggestion only.
That's it!
Tenshi-nyan

lolcubes wrote:

[Tenshi-nyan's Lunatic]
  1. 00:47:390 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just wrong. It's better than it was before (1/4 over 1/3), but you are still doing it wrongl, using 1/3 over 1/2. This is closest you can do to follow the music properly. The other bunch of 1/3 notes really don't fit here.
    This same thing applies to 02:46:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) too.
  2. 01:59:253 (2,3,4) - I keep asking you to unstack this from the repeater. You don't know when the repeating slider will end, making this sort of unreadable. By the time the repeater ends you don't have almost any reaction time to notice when to click these.

Can you give me the code to fix 00:47:390 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8)? I really cannot read how to fix this sh*t from that tiny picture.
Verdisphena
lolcubes

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Can you give me the code to fix 00:47:390 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8)? I really cannot read how to fix this sh*t from that tiny picture.
SPOILER
360,136,47390,1,2
344,184,47521,1,0
304,224,47652,1,0
256,256,47783,2,0,B|219:277|176:264,1,80,4|0
96,240,48175,1,8
104,152,48371,2,0,B|104:112|136:80,1,80,0|4

There you go.
Tenshi-nyan
Now I can update this:

http://puu.sh/mj2R
Topic Starter
Dotsu
Uploaded
lolcubes
And, here I am! Sorry for the wait, I am extremely busy lately.
Too bad you couldn't get a hold of a MAT as I told you to try, but meh. ;x;

In any case, everything checks out here, have a rebubble!
Let's go for the rank!
LKs
xuuuu哥
Beuchi
Hello old bubble! :)

[General]
- spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png and spinner-osu.png are missing from the skin. You must add these, even if you're going to use the default ones.
- I'd increase the volume of the hitsounds a bit, soft hitsounds are barely audible on the loud parts of the song :/

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]
- Why is it not mapped to the end? Would it be possible to do so?
- No kiai time?
- One of Reisen's bunny ears is cut, which makes it look weird when you're playing the map: http://puu.sh/tjDW It'd be nice if you could fix this little thing :P

[Hard]
00:37:194 (6) - Fix the spacing here? This sudden jump feels very weird.

[Tenshi-Nyan's Lunatic]
00:08:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - All these spacing changes in one combo don't look good, you should add a New Combo at 00:09:384 (6) and 00:11:717 (10).
01:18:763 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think these overlapped triangles completely break the flow of the map, I think it would be way better if you move them away from each other, I made this as a suggestion, but you can of course do your own pattern :P http://ha.ppy.sh/ss/317
01:23:665 (2,3) - I also think this antijump doesn't feel that good :c
01:26:998 (7,8) - ^
01:27:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - As I said with the previous one, I think you should move these away from each other, having jumps and antijumps so close is a bit weird, and the song doesn't actually change that much :/
01:33:077 (2,3) - Last pattern like this was an antijump but this one (which is exactly the same) has a bigger spacing? o_O
01:56:606 (2,3) - Move these further away? Antijump+jump feels weird, again :/
01:58:371 (1) - I think it sounds really weird when this starts in a 1/8 note, why don't you add a long slider like XU (can I call you XU? xP) did at the rest of the diffs? I think it sounds way better, since the music is already at a weird beat on that part :P
02:33:177 (9) - Another weird antijump >.<;
02:48:177 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end!!

Call me back for a recheck, nice map! :)
Tenshi-nyan

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hello old bubble! :)

[General]

[Tenshi-Nyan's Lunatic]
00:08:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - All these spacing changes in one combo don't look good, you should add a New Combo at 00:09:384 (6) and 00:11:717 (10). added a bunch of new combos.
01:18:763 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think these overlapped triangles completely break the flow of the map, I think it would be way better if you move them away from each other, I made this as a suggestion, but you can of course do your own pattern :P Re-worked the triangle combos. I like them the way they are, so I just increased the distances.
01:23:665 (2,3) - I also think this antijump doesn't feel that good :c changed some anti-jumps. Not all, but some.
01:26:998 (7,8) - ^
01:27:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - As I said with the previous one, I think you should move these away from each other, having jumps and antijumps so close is a bit weird, and the song doesn't actually change that much :/
01:33:077 (2,3) - Last pattern like this was an antijump but this one (which is exactly the same) has a bigger spacing? o_O
01:56:606 (2,3) - Move these further away? Antijump+jump feels weird, again :/
01:58:371 (1) - I think it sounds really weird when this starts in a 1/8 note, why don't you add a long slider like XU (can I call you XU? xP) did at the rest of the diffs? I think it sounds way better, since the music is already at a weird beat on that part :P I don't like those wriggly sliders.
02:33:177 (9) - Another weird antijump >.<;
02:48:177 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end!! uhh I hope it's fixed now?
Heh, didnt think that I'd have to check this map again. Such old stuff. One of my first works, actually.

http://puu.sh/ttru
Verdisphena
:o

Beuchi-chan wrote:

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]
- Why is it not mapped to the end? Would it be possible to do so? It's fine like it is, if i map to the end, i'll need more mods to the taiko, so no i'll leave this
- No kiai time? Kiai Added
- One of Reisen's bunny ears is cut, which makes it look weird when you're playing the map: http://puu.sh/tjDW It'd be nice if you could fix this little thing :P Not a big deal
Thanks Beu

Download: ZUN - Cinderella Cage ~ Kagome-Kagome (impossiblexu) [Verdi's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hello old bubble! :)

[General]
- spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png and spinner-osu.png are missing from the skin. You must add these, even if you're going to use the default ones.
- I'd increase the volume of the hitsounds a bit, soft hitsounds are barely audible on the loud parts of the song :/
[Hard]
00:37:194 (6) - Fix the spacing here? This sudden jump feels very weird.
All done
DarkDunskin

Verdisphena wrote:

It's fine like it is, if i map to the end, i'll need more mods to the taiko, so no i'll leave this
I would mod your Taiko asap when you are going to map it to the end.
It feels so uncomfortable being interrupted in the middle of the song :/
Verdisphena
DarkDunskin
Just seen it, as promised I'll mod it right now~

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]
What I most notice in this Taiko is that you miss tons of really nice Finish-Placements.
I would like to see it if you could add a few more when you hear them clearly in the song.
If you insist, I would give you a modified Ver of your Taiko with my Finish-Pattern suggestions.

Other than that:
- 00:15:626 - 00:17:096 - A Stream that guides the piano would fit here ^^
- 00:48:567 - Shorten the Slider by 1/4, move it to the red Tick and add a Note + Finish.
- 01:33:273 (240) - To map that part closer to the Trumpets you'll need to add a note here and at 01:54:253 -
- 01:56:018 - I would add two `xxxxx` Combos between these two Big Notes, it feels a bit empty.
- 02:21:412 (137) - Same as above, feels a bit empty like this~
- 02:30:824 (4) - Like the Spinner, shorten it by 1/4, move it to the red Tick and add a Note + Finish please~
- 02:35:922 (15,16,17,18) - Doesn't play so well using 1/6 here, 1/4 ddk should be enough.

Nice Taiko in Verdi Style~
Much better since you mapped it to the end now.
Well done :D
Verdisphena
I fix a lot of thing in my way, like 01:56:018 - and 00:48:567

Thank you so much DarkDunskin :D

Download: ZUN - Cinderella Cage ~ Kagome-Kagome (impossiblexu) [Verdi's Taiko Oni].osu
Beuchi
Hi again :)

[Tenshi-nyan's Insane]
01:58:371 (1) - I'm sorry but this still bugs me, it sounds too weird and isn't correctly in synch with the music :/ Since you don't want to do a long spinner, what about adding a spinner?

Everything else is fine, happy to see the taiko fully mapped, good job Verdis :)
Tenshi-nyan

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi again :)

[Tenshi-nyan's Insane]
01:58:371 (1) - I'm sorry but this still bugs me, it sounds too weird and isn't correctly in synch with the music :/ Since you don't want to do a long spinner, what about adding a spinner?

Everything else is fine, happy to see the taiko fully mapped, good job Verdis :)
Whoah completely forgot about this and nobody informed me.
Yeah, I replaced it with a spinner.

http://puu.sh/z7k4
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