HeatKai wrote:

[taiko]

OD + 1

00:05:162 (8) - move to 00:05:273 Ok
00:12:384 (x) - add a note yay

aabc271 wrote:

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]

00:11:606 - ( 30 ~ 143 ) This part is probably more difficult than the other parts of the diff, making the diff spread bigger. Consider simplifying a bit ? No, it's fine

00:48:665 - ( 1 ) Move the starting point of the spinner a 1/4 backward so that it won't stack the previous note like this ? No

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Verdi's Taiko]
Use Normal, not Soft.

00:07:828 (17) - don?
00:23:273 (125) - don?

Los streams no le quedan tanto a la cancion. Si fuera mas con el piano o lo que sea, seria mas correcto, pero como que namas agregas un stream y luega ya... ESO ME OFENDE :_< pero, eh, no esta TAN mal :_>

Luego unos rithmos (ritmos) como que cambias de dificultad, en ves de quedar constante, aunque el rithmo de la bateria or whatever sigue constante, y tambien la trompeta. No esta tan mal, y talvez es tu estilo, preo namas digo, no es tan mal que tienes que cambiarlo :3

Half map, lol. Con que este bien el mapeador con eso, esta bien.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Verdi's Taiko]
Use Normal, not Soft.

00:07:828 (17) - don?
00:23:273 (125) - don?

Los streams no le quedan tanto a la cancion. Si fuera mas con el piano o lo que sea, seria mas correcto, pero como que namas agregas un stream y luega ya... pero, eh, no esta TAN mal

Luego unos rithmos como que cambias de dificultad, en ves de quedar constante, aunque el rithmo de la bateria or whatever sigue constante, y tambien la trompeta. No esta tan mal, y talvez es tu estilo, preo namas digo, no es tan mal que tienes que cambiarlo :3

Half map, lol. Con que este bien el mapeador con eso, esta bien.

Verdisphena wrote:

Thanks for mods, also thanks to HeatKai for the bg

1. It seems BG.jpg and Sb.jpg are same picture,if so please delete SB.jpg then du a full-submit. Just use "BG.jpg" instead of "SB.jpg" of the SB code in osu file.

1. 00:31:312 (1) - Add finish?
2. 00:43:861 (1) - ^
3. 00:46:998 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 00:53:273 (1) - ^
5. 00:56:410 (1) - ^
6. 00:59:547 (1) - ^

1. 00:31:312 (1) - Add finish?
2. 00:53:273 (1) - ^
3. 00:56:410 (1) - ^
4. 00:59:547 (5) - ^

1. 02:05:726 (1) - Add finish?
2. 02:48:471 (3) - Finish instead of clap sounds better IMO

1. 00:46:606 spinner - Remove whistle sounds better IMO
2. 01:08:567 - This custom slidertick sound really sounds bad, keep it the default maybe better
3. 01:50:430 - 0% volume is unrankable, please use at least 5%
4. 02:17:099 - same to 01:08:567, how about just use default soft hitsound

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. It seems BG.jpg and Sb.jpg are same picture,if so please delete SB.jpg then du a full-submit. Just use "BG.jpg" instead of "SB.jpg" of the SB code in osu file.

貌似不这样会黑屏
notes are all fine, just some finish sound suggestions

[Easy]

1. 00:31:312 (1) - Add finish?
2. 00:43:861 (1) - ^
3. 00:46:998 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 00:53:273 (1) - ^
5. 00:56:410 (1) - ^
6. 00:59:547 (1) - ^

All fixed
[Normal]

1. 00:31:312 (1) - Add finish?
2. 00:53:273 (1) - ^
3. 00:56:410 (1) - ^
4. 00:59:547 (5) - ^

All fixed
[Hard]

1. 02:05:726 (1) - Add finish? Fixed
2. 02:48:471 (3) - Finish instead of clap sounds better IMO

that's all

Thank you very much

Breeze wrote:

Now I know why you used 2 same pic.
one as BG and one do a scale and fade out effect, sorry, my fault.
Now it looked good enough for a bubble

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Tenshi-nyan's Lunatic]
00:03:606 (3,4,5,1,2) - Due to the way these are setup it's pretty hard to tell the spacing change from 5 to 1 to 2, to fix it, using the new combo on 5 would be a good idea, in fact, it fits better with the song. K
00:08:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's pretty confusing to have 2 doubles and a single right after, i'd suggest you unstack the doubles and use a regular stream instead. K
01:09:743 (4,5,6) - This sudden rythm change is breaking the nice flow of the map :< Added a note there.
01:21:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why are you accelerating the spacing in here?
01:30:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Because I like it. It's kinda original. Not gonna fix this.
01:32:096 (1,2) - Spacing error Hmm I don't see where? Replaced them with a slider, though.
02:03:373 (2,3,4) - Once again why spacing acceleartion here? Hmm never noticed those spacing mistakes. Fixed~
01:49:743 (1,1) - Spinner is too short for the next note to be so soon, sorry but i disagree with this. Replaced with a slider.

Other diffs are pretty good, good job!

Popping over spacing issues on Tenshi's map.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Fixes.

http://puu.sh/5Or3

Sakura Hana wrote:

Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry for the delay ;_;

In [Lunatic] 00:12:273 (12) This slider has the end unsnapped because it goes through a red line i recommend to split it into 3 circles instead to fix it, that's all.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

4 week old bubble

1. Timing: I felt it was quite wonky and I couldn't really figure it out and be that precise so thankfully Lybydose was able to help us here.

1. 00:47:390 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ehm. I don't think this is a good idea. The horn surely doesn't follow this rhythm and I can't find anything else in the music that does either. You need to change this.
2. 01:23:861 (3,1) - You should probably lower this spacing. As it is now it's a bit sudden, don't you think?
3. 01:58:436 (1,2,3,4) - This is quite awkward. I suggest that instead of the other triplet, you make another kick slider and unstack it. You have a time signature change here and it potentially screws the rhythm over, considering it starts on a blue tick of a previous time signature. Also, I feel that 01:59:449 (4) should be a new combo instead of 01:59:648 (1) cause that follows the music better (if you really want to leave this is a triplet that is, I still think you should change it to a kick slider).
4. 02:46:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same thing here, it's extremely difficult and distracting because you can't hear anything besides the horn, which requires 1/3 ticks.

1. 00:05:273 (8) - This note sounds incredibly off. You have a piano at 00:05:162, why not move it there?

1. 00:04:940 (5) - I feel you're better off without this note. Consider removing it. There is nothing in the music there, the piano is on a blue tick too.
2. 01:44:253 (6) - You should place a new combo here, the combo is much much longer than any other in this section.

Love wrote:

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Can I make a 2nd taiko? (inner oni)

Verdisphena wrote:

Sorry for the late reply, thanks love and Pheon

1. 00:47:390 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just wrong. It's better than it was before (1/4 over 1/3), but you are still doing it wrongl, using 1/3 over 1/2. This is closest you can do to follow the music properly. The other bunch of 1/3 notes really don't fit here.
   This same thing applies to 02:46:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) too.
2. 01:59:253 (2,3,4) - I keep asking you to unstack this from the repeater. You don't know when the repeating slider will end, making this sort of unreadable. By the time the repeater ends you don't have almost any reaction time to notice when to click these.

1. Tickrate 4 is definitely not needed. Use 1 to keep it standard.
2. Use normal hitsounds at 80% volume, since it appears that would be the new standard to use. It actually sounds better on the default skin too.

1. 02:49:648 (1,2) - I would suggest that you make a slider out of these two. The reason is, you have a BPM change here, and just having 2 circles could be hard to read. This is only a suggestion.
2. 02:55:425 (4,5,1) - Instead of these, try this. While yours isn't wrong, I think this is much better because it follows the music much better. Also a suggestion only.

lolcubes wrote:

[Tenshi-nyan's Lunatic]

1. 00:47:390 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just wrong. It's better than it was before (1/4 over 1/3), but you are still doing it wrongl, using 1/3 over 1/2. This is closest you can do to follow the music properly. The other bunch of 1/3 notes really don't fit here.
   This same thing applies to 02:46:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) too.
2. 01:59:253 (2,3,4) - I keep asking you to unstack this from the repeater. You don't know when the repeating slider will end, making this sort of unreadable. By the time the repeater ends you don't have almost any reaction time to notice when to click these.