all fixed ~Beuchi-chan wrote:
Hello~
Remember these are just suggestions you can totally ignore.
~General~
- Delete the following unnecessary files (remember to full submit the next time you update):- About the rest of the skin... Do you really need to skin the ranking screen? Why don't you skin the hitcircles instead? And by the way, the ranking screen doesn't seem to show even having the skin files on the folder so maybe you should just remove all the files =(
- ranking-a-small, ranking-b-small, etc... - None of the diffs have breaks long enough to show them so you don't need these.
- Tegomass - Kiss~Kaerimichi no Love Song~ (TV SIZE) (heatwave95).osb - Yes, I know I shouldn't tell you to delete an .osb, but this one has a wrong title of the map. You don't have to do it though, I'm just sayin' xP
- I'm pretty sure you will need a new timing section for the slow part at the end. I, unfortunately, can't help you with this so you might need to ask an expert timer ;x;
~mekadon's Normeasy~
- Maybe call it just Easy? I don't think it's that hard o-o;
00:16:629 (4,5) - Fix the spacing here! (You might want to turn off the Gird Snap to do it)
00:18:447 (1,1) - Please, don't use jumps on the easier diffs! ;_;
00:22:992 (x) - This break is kinda non-sense imo, maybe remove it and map the gap?
00:24:356 (x) - If you don't fix the above issue, you should add a note here anyways. It sounds pretty weird right now.
00:26:629 (3,4) - Please, don't use jumps on the easier diffs! ;_;
00:40:719 (5,6,7) - ^
00:57:992 (2,1) - ^
01:05:719 (9,1) - ^
01:15:265 (1) - This note is too close to spinners. Being the easiest diff, you should leave some recovery time for newbies!
01:15:720 (1) - Finish the slider 1/1 earlier? (previous white tick).
01:19:129 (1) - Start the spinner 1/2 earlier (white tick). Leave the end where it was.
~Normal~
00:05:947 (7) - Add a New Combo here.
00:06:174 (8) - Unrankable slider. Please, move the endpoint away from the startpoint to a place where it's perfectly visible. Right now it can be confusing.
00:13:220 (3) - Fix spacing here!
00:14:356 (3,4) - ^
00:31:629 (6) - ^
00:37:992 (2) - ^
00:45:492 (4) - ^
01:24:356 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is completely off. You need a new timing section for this if you want to map it.
~31's Taiko~
- Not sure if the slowdowns at te beginning are allowed... I guess they are?
~Hw&TS's Taiko~
- No problems here!
~Heat's Sliders~
- I think you should remove the "~" on the name of the diff.
00:13:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack the endpoints/startpoints properly, some of them aren't correctly stacked.
00:38:901 (5) - Hidden slider, please move this one somewhere else.
01:02:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Totally inconsistent spacing, please fix this D:
01:16:629 (x) - Add something here? This empty space is so unintuitive...
01:24:356 (1) - This spinner is... probably too long
This still needs a lot of work. [Heat's Sliders] isn't bad but the arrangement of the sliders feels pretty random sometimes (probably because of the inconsistent spacing)... If you're working with sliders you should make sure to make smooth patterns and forms (if you're working with curve sliders).
Good luck~ :3
Need someone to check 1881 taiko ~
except mekadon's ~