17:25 DaPiePiece: Hey you wanted a mod right?
17:25 Itasha_S13: Yes
17:25 Itasha_S13: Iiiif you want m4m, please send me your map first
17:25 DaPiePiece: Just a mod, I don't have any finished maps at the moment
17:25 Itasha_S13: Oke
17:25 Itasha_S13: thanks :p
17:25 DaPiePiece: you want it in game or on the forums?
17:26 Itasha_S13: as you wish ~
17:26 DaPiePiece: I'll mod you ingame, a bit easier
17:26 Itasha_S13: Oke
17:29 DaPiePiece: alright so far I can say is that's it's really good
17:29 Itasha_S13: Ohuu thanks :p im glad
17:30 DaPiePiece: I'd put HP7 on a 5.5 star map, but that's your choice
17:30 Itasha_S13: Hmm maybe I will consider chaning it to 6.5
17:30 Itasha_S13: 6 its too easy right?
17:31 DaPiePiece: yeah a bit
17:31 DaPiePiece: alright
17:32 DaPiePiece: 00:12:475 (6) - I'd stack this on the slider right after, to emphasize on the piano note
17:32 DaPiePiece: 00:15:218 (6) - same here
17:32 DaPiePiece: 00:17:618 (5) - you do it here
17:33 Itasha_S13: stack with slider end?
17:33 DaPiePiece: 00:17:618 (5) - same thing, I'd stack on the slider after
17:33 DaPiePiece: No on the next slider
17:33 DaPiePiece: as in :
17:34 DaPiePiece: 00:26:189 (6,1) - stack these for example
17:34 DaPiePiece: 00:30:475 (4) - space this a bit more
17:34 DaPiePiece: 00:44:532 (6) - I'd blanket the with the slider before
17:37 DaPiePiece: 01:34:418 (3) - I'd place a note on the red tick. Your choice to do so or not, but I'd do it
17:37 Itasha_S13:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576259317:37 Itasha_S13: like this?
17:37 Itasha_S13: the blanket.
17:38 Itasha_S13: 01:34:589 - there is not any sound to click, But I will make it a slider
17:38 DaPiePiece:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576259817:38 DaPiePiece: or like this
17:38 DaPiePiece: Yeah it's your choice. I'd place a note since it feels empty
17:38 DaPiePiece: you can make that a slider too
17:40 DaPiePiece: 01:43:847 (6) - space this more
17:40 DaPiePiece: 01:44:532 (8) - I'd space this too more
17:41 DaPiePiece: 01:45:732 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this flow better
17:41 DaPiePiece: either space a bit mor, either change the form of the stream
17:42 Itasha_S13:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576262017:42 DaPiePiece: 01:50:018 (8) - note on the white tick, there is a syllable. Either slider either circle
17:43 DaPiePiece: like that but make the slider flow better after the stream
17:43 DaPiePiece: 01:57:561 (7,8,1) - fix this
17:44 DaPiePiece: 02:01:418 (2,3) - space more? Feels a bit awkward
17:44 DaPiePiece: 02:01:418 (2,3) - same
17:44 Itasha_S13: You sended me the same time
17:45 Itasha_S13: also.. I'm using the same spacing in all these parts, with doubles
17:45 DaPiePiece: oh sorry
17:45 DaPiePiece: same pattern like a slider after
17:45 Itasha_S13: I will space it just a biiitt more
17:45 DaPiePiece: 02:05:961 (5) - well I mean it feels a bit awkward
17:46 DaPiePiece: You need to snap the cursor from the slider end
17:46 DaPiePiece: You can make the slider go into that pattern a bit more
17:46 DaPiePiece: I'd space more, but there are other solutions
17:46 Itasha_S13: what about just ctrl+g?
17:47 Itasha_S13: 02:05:961 (5) - for this, I mena
17:48 DaPiePiece: I'd still move it a bit to the left, for the cursor velocity
17:48 Itasha_S13: 02:05:961 (5) - this?
17:48 Itasha_S13: Oke
17:48 DaPiePiece: yeah
17:49 DaPiePiece: 02:02:104 (5,6) - I'd curve these two. They just feel better when moving the cursor in a arc rather than snapping
17:50 Itasha_S13:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576267317:50 DaPiePiece: your choice. I'd curve
17:50 Itasha_S13: Like that? so I make the same in the one before
17:50 DaPiePiece: 02:16:075 (1) - space this away from the stream. Like move it more up and more left
17:51 DaPiePiece: Yeah like that is fine
17:51 DaPiePiece: 02:16:075 (1) - fix this
17:51 Itasha_S13: wrong timing x)
17:52 DaPiePiece: 02:50:018 (2) - move this to the left a bit
17:52 Itasha_S13: Done
17:52 DaPiePiece: 02:50:875 (5) - slider or if you want leave it like that
17:53 DaPiePiece: 03:04:075 (4) - to the right a bit
17:54 DaPiePiece: 03:25:075 (4) - make this flow better
17:54 DaPiePiece: 03:29:275 (6) - reduce the spacing
17:54 Itasha_S13: Actually it plays well, I will just rotate a bit so its less edgy
17:55 DaPiePiece: 03:33:389 (1,1,1) - emphasize this bit more by either spacing either making it flow differently
17:56 DaPiePiece: 03:36:389 (8) - fix this so it flows better
17:56 Itasha_S13: Same, it plays well and its intentional to make a change in the movement because the "wubbb thing" changes
17:57 Itasha_S13: I moved a bit tho
17:57 DaPiePiece: well, your choice, I'd make it flow better
17:57 DaPiePiece: also I must say that the way you mapped the chorus is quite unique and I like it
17:57 Itasha_S13:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576272117:58 DaPiePiece: 03:37:847 (1,2,3) - I'd move that a bit to the right to flow better
17:58 DaPiePiece: Yeah perfect like that
17:58 DaPiePiece: so it does point ou the "wub" and flows
17:59 DaPiePiece: 03:38:361 (5) - I would rotate this to face the bottom right corner, but your choice
18:00 DaPiePiece: 03:44:189 (1,2,3) - not to sure about this pattern. I'd change it to make it different. It flows awkwardly into the stream imo
18:01 Itasha_S13:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576275218:01 Itasha_S13: You mean like this?
18:01 DaPiePiece: 03:49:847 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - space this entire part more
18:02 DaPiePiece:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576275618:02 DaPiePiece: I mean like this. But your way is fine too
18:02 Itasha_S13: I changed the next slider too
18:02 Itasha_S13: I will let my way :p
18:03 DaPiePiece: 03:51:38make this horizontal to the slider
18:03 DaPiePiece: oh that didn't work..
18:03 DaPiePiece: 03:51:389 (3) - make this horizontal to the slider
18:04 DaPiePiece: 03:51:561 (1) - move this a bit down to the left
18:04 Itasha_S13:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576276918:04 DaPiePiece: yeah actually that's good too
18:04 Itasha_S13: Oke, and I changed the slider shape for the flow
18:04 DaPiePiece: 03:55:589 (8,1) - fix this
18:04 Itasha_S13:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576277418:05 Itasha_S13: Someone else pointed that in other mod
18:05 DaPiePiece: idk that much what you want to do there, expanding slider or separate close streams?
18:05 Itasha_S13: but I don't really understand what he meant because it was not very well explained
18:06 Itasha_S13: So I have to move the 1 from the 8 ?
18:06 DaPiePiece: what did you wanna make there>?
18:06 Itasha_S13:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576278418:06 Itasha_S13: Well, change the stream spacing
18:06 DaPiePiece: so expand it
18:07 Itasha_S13: ecause the song changes
18:07 DaPiePiece: yeah change that so it actually expands better
18:07 DaPiePiece: 04:02:361 (2) - space this more to the right
18:07 DaPiePiece: 04:03:047 (4) - to the left
18:08 DaPiePiece: 04:03:732 (6) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576279818:08 DaPiePiece: 04:05:104 (2) - to the right
18:08 DaPiePiece: 04:05:789 (4) - to the left
18:09 DaPiePiece: 04:14:875 (4) - to the left
18:09 DaPiePiece: 04:22:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - love this part
18:10 DaPiePiece: 04:53:618 (1,2,3) - move to the left a bit down
18:11 DaPiePiece: 05:00:647 (9,10,11) - make this curve
18:12 DaPiePiece: from 04:22:247 (1) - to 05:07:675 (2) - very well done
18:13 DaPiePiece: 05:15:732 (4) - move this to the lef
18:13 DaPiePiece: *left
18:14 DaPiePiece: 06:00:132 (1,1,1) - same thing. either space more either change the flow to make it stand out
18:16 DaPiePiece: 06:47:789 (6) - raise this
18:16 DaPiePiece: 06:51:218 (4) - reduce the spacing, this is way to big of a jump
18:17 DaPiePiece: and that's it
18:18 DaPiePiece: TBH the map got a lot better later on
18:19 Itasha_S13: Hehm thanks, post on forum
18:20 DaPiePiece: yeah will
18:20 DaPiePiece: even though I suck at these types of maps
18:20 DaPiePiece: was a pleasure modding, gl on ranked this is a fun map to play
18:20 Itasha_S13: Thanks