1. Easy (1.44 stars, 57 notes)
2. Expert (4.99 stars, 214 notes)
3. Hard (3.42 stars, 154 notes)
4. Insane (4.41 stars, 208 notes)
5. Normal (2.05 stars, 90 notes)

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Fanteer wrote:

Hi

Easy
00:37:974 (1) - I think you can put 4 notes after spinner That would be unrankable cuz i need spinner recovery time for newbies

Normal
00:37:974 (1) - ^ ^
01:02:307 (2,3) - that the spacing ? Theres nothing wrong with it ~ or?

Hard
00:17:308 (5,1) - REMOVE OVERLAP Didnt remove overlap since its easily readable but changed it a little
Expert
00:41:974 (1,1,1,1) - to make it more diverse so you can do http://puu.sh/pllN1/efea05d380.jpg That would become too easy ~ i dont want pros to DT this xd

I'm sorry for the VERY little mod, All I could - wrote

misakiakill wrote:

hy!~
Quick Mod
[Easy]
Perfect
[Normal]
00:54:641 (2) - i guess this repeat slider should put on white tick Nope ~ They are supposed to be this way
00:55:974 (4) - this slider can be like that too if you want. ^

[Expert]
00:40:641 (1) - put Normal sampleset? you might have noticed but i didnt put normal here in all difficulties cuz there is no kick sound
00:43:974 (4,5) - i dont know why,i think the placement in here is uncomfortable well ~ its completely rankable , i will change it if someone else notices it

sorry im mod it little.your map is like perfect
and sorry for bad english

-Harpuia- wrote:

M4M!

[General]

1. I recommend being able to "hit" the last spinner across all difficulties. Like putting a hitcircle for example. Its not a big deal but i might do it in i/x if someone else says about it

[E]

1. 00:23:307 (1) - I suggest making this face the other way. ok
2. 00:24:641 (2) - I think you forgot to change the white anchor to a red anchor here. nah , i did that on purpose :3
3. 00:49:974 (3,1) - (Minor) Avoid overlaps (slider-heads of each sliders). ok

[N]

1. 00:11:974 (2,1) - Fix Blanket. Making blanket there wasnt my intention lo but i will think about it
2. 00:16:641 (3) - Curve this less? I guess? Then you could just fix 00:17:641 (4) - afterwards. i dont see anything wrong with the current pattern
3. 00:28:641 (1) - Position this in a way that the slider kinda forms a triangle with 00:27:974 (5) - . I can't describe it well ._. i understood but didnt change it for now
4. 00:29:974 (3,4) - Fix blanket. Ok sir
5. 00:45:974 (1,2,3,4) - For a symmetrical-ish look, position them like this: They already look like that .-. or?
   
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6. 00:51:307 (1) - Put this a little bit to the left for a better flow. ok

[H]

1. I'm not quite sure about the AR here .-. whats wrong with it? owo seems fine to me
2. 00:19:974 (3,4) - For a hard diff., unstacking these is a good idea imo. well its not that bad of a thing since i have seen it in millions of Hard ranked diffs
3. 00:22:641 (3,4) - Blanket these. ok
4. 00:25:307 (3,4) - Unstack. same as above
5. 00:27:307 (1,2) - Blanket these. ok
6. 00:30:641 (3,4) - Unstack. same as above
7. Kiai seems pretty good. :3

[I]

1. 00:22:641 (3) - I suggest curving this upwards instead. ok
2. 00:23:307 (1) - Same as above, but to the right instead. nope :3
3. 00:40:641 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this jump more symmetrical. wow how did they get messed up .-.
4. 00:38:641 (4,6) - Blanket. ok
5. 00:46:307 (2,4) - Fix blanket. Blanket there wasnt my intention and if i fix it , it will ruin this 00:46:307 (2,3,5,6,1,2) - rectangular patter
6. 00:47:807 (3,4,5) - Fix stack lol idk what was wrong with it but i remapped that thing

[X]

1. 00:43:974 (4,5) - I'm not quite sure about how 00:44:307 (5) - is positioned. But if you'd like to keep it, just fix ze blanket :3. Fixed blanket
2. 00:53:974 (1,2,3) - lol that ds. Consider decreasing the distance. That was intended :3
3. Nothing much to point out on this diff.

Sorry for the noob mod.
I hope it helped tho

6th wrote:

Hey

[Easy]
00:16:641 (3) - Bad idea. It makes 00:17:308 - 00:17:974 - unclickable even if they are clickable earlier. fixed it , i guess
00:20:974 (2) - Minor spacing issue that would make the pattern look better if fixed. Fixed
00:22:974 (4) - ^, etc Fixed
00:45:307 (3,1) - Having a different flow from 00:44:974 (2,3) - would be nice since they sound different i didnt understand what u r trying to say , maybe u linked the wrong time .w.

[Normal]
00:25:974 (1,2,3) - Make spacing between them the same, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5358065 Fixed
00:29:807 (2) - First time you're using 1/2. Using stack will confuse 99% of beginners considering the fact that it has not been mapped before lol Changed pattern i guess
00:31:307 (1) - Rotate it 90° anti-clockwise to add some movement its not necessary anymore since i changed the last pattern
00:49:307 (2) - Everything looks tidy and clear so try to make it symmetrical http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5358080 Fixed
00:53:307 - The song gets less intense here so try moving 00:53:307 (5,6) - down or up. this will make me move all the notes after it again , so idk . i will think about it
00:57:557 - Why do you suddenly skip it ? u might not have noticed but i did the same with the same pattern~ well it was intended
01:01:974 (1,2,3,4) - Wow, getting to 1,5x from 1,2x in Normal is a bit... harsh. And tbh I don't get how it can be more spaced than 01:03:307 (1,2,3,4) - which is much more intense lol i seriously dont know how that happened lol but its fixed

[Hard]
00:16:641 - Feels so empty, it ruins the flow. Tbh, everything gets really slow here 00:15:308 (1,2,3) - and it's kind of boring ): added circle in meedle
00:19:807 (2,3) - Place it further from previous object because of the stack Fixed
00:28:307 - looks soso. made blanket there
00:38:307 (2,3) - Don't make the flow horizontal. It sounds the same as 00:37:974 (1,2) - which uses diagonal. + why circles here 00:38:641 (3,4) - instead of slider ? Fixed
00:45:641 (5,1) - Not connected that well Fixed
00:59:307 (1) - Increase spacing ok
01:01:641 (5) - Dropoff makes it bad to play. Make it follow previous slider's tail i dont get what u r trying to say here again ;w;

[Insane]
wow
00:49:974 (1,2) - I hate pointing blankets out Fixed XD
00:49:307 (5) - Stack with (1) like you did with 00:45:974 (1,4) - ? instead of that i made blanket there
00:47:307 (1,2) - No reason to be stacked with previous circles or even to follow previous pattern's flow since it sounds totally different i did it on purpose owo


[Expert]
00:13:308 (3,3) - Needs some emphasize in hardest diff.i dont understand what u r trying to tell me here , i will ask u ingame xD
00:25:641 (5) - should blanket with (4) as (1) does with (2). Move it to (x;300) That will ruin the zigzag pattern but still i will think about this
00:50:807 (7) - NC if you want to make it harder having a 3 notes combo would be lame i guess
00:48:141 (8) - ^ ^
00:53:974 (1,2,3) - Pretty fast compared to next patterns. Not really
01:03:641 (1,2,1,2) - Those sliders ruin the momentum imo i will consider about this

Good luck, really cool map

kwk wrote:

m4m

Normal

1. 00:25:974 (1,2,3) - keep these same gap Pattern was changed from last mod
2. 00:31:307 (1) - curve this? oki
3. 00:43:307 (1,2) - suggest you change these to curves so it goes into 00:44:641 (3,4,5) - smoothly oki
4. 00:53:641 (6,1) - this isnt very nice, probably ctrl+h and center it between 5 and 6 oki

Hard

1. 00:19:308 (1,2,3,4) - flows better if (2,3) is above 1 and not a fan of stacking notes on both slider start and end.. i changed the pattern there a bit
2. 00:27:974 (3,4,1) - probably could make 3 blanket 4 already did that from previous mod
3. 00:38:307 (2,3,4) - move 4 to x:348 y Pattern was changed from previous mod
4. 00:37:974 (1,2,4,5,1,2,3,4) - decide on a spacing and keep these consistent ^
5. 00:44:807 (2,3) - these and all the subesquent end on a downbeat and they feel rather unsatisfying to play. suggest you use triplets and/or note+note+1/2 sliders Its not that big of a deal but i will consider about this

Insane

1. 00:15:308 (4) - remove NC? oki
2. 00:17:308 (4) - slider+note instead? i m not pretty sure what u maent to say here
3. 00:18:641 (2) - angle this? oki
4. 00:21:974 (1) - remove NC? oki
5. 00:23:307 (1) - flows slightly better if u ctrl+h changed the pattern alittle to my own accord
6. 00:53:974 (1,2,3) - maybe better to space 2 in between (1,3) i like the current pattern more here
7. 00:59:307 (1,2,3) - have your blanket spacing be the same between (1,2) and (2,3) thats not necessary , also if i do that i will have a really ugly looking overlap to take care of
8. 00:56:141 - not sure if you want to intentionally skip this beat since its rather significant I did the same in many sections in both insane and extra and that was intended
9. 00:50:224 (2,3) - 00:57:974 (1,2,3) -00:57:307 (5,6) - for these should use the same blanket spacing as this 00:58:641 (6,7) - its more visually appealing/consistency its not that big of a deal , sometime stacks make it look less spaced and the intensity of the song is not same everywhere anyway
   

Expert

1. 00:14:641 (3,1) - curve these? nope :3
2. 00:19:308 (1) - curve? flows better into next pattern Did and made blanket there ~ nice suggestion owo
3. 00:46:307 (2,3) - smaller jump since i dont think its emphasised that much and its the biggest jump in ur map.. lol yes , thanks for pointing this , idk why i did this and what was i thinking while doing this .-.

looks solild though

Yahuri wrote:

From queue~
doing 3 diffs cuz i couldnt find many errors XD

General
ya need more custom hitsounds dude Not having custom hitsounds is rankable owo~

Easy
00:56:641 (1,2) - 2 looks too close to the body of slider 1 Fixed
00:59:307 (1,2) - DS Fixed

Normal
00:11:974 (2,1) - blanket? Fixed

Hard
00:21:307 (3) - need clap? Fixed
00:45:974 (1,3) - blanket Fixed
00:57:974 (1,2) - sliders look too close to each other for this section of the music They only look close but in reality they are far away :3 xd

well, dont really see much wrong with what i've seen of the mapset
Good luck!

Merhur wrote:

Hiya~

So here is my promised mod

General
I noticed during my testplays that every single time I was a bit late on the error meter so I looked at the offset and increasing it by 4 worked and the metronome sounded more in sync with the music ( just listen to it with the music slowed down to 25% ) so I suggest you increasing it too ( so it would be 11,312 ) It was 11313 before xd but thanks , changed to 11312

Easy

This one is already pretty good ^_^
00:53:641 (4,1) - I suggest blanketing these just because i think it would look better oki

I couldn't really find any issues in Normal and Hard...

Insane

00:49:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern here was really confusing for me. It took me literally 6 tries just to read it right and even than I got a few 100s. Even if it's just happens to me, that patters is surely a moderate difficulty spike at least. I suggest you to try something different. its a pattern i stole from skystar's mapping xd and theres nothing really wrong with it so i will leave it as it is for now

Expert

This diff is easier than it should be. It should be higher than 5.25 stars otherwise this is just another Insane ( you could rename it to Another too if you want or make it harder ). Thats not a problem , the map is only 40 seconds long ~ it would be alot harder with same spacing if the map was long so yea dont worry about this
00:53:978 (1,2,3) - I think this huge increasae of DS here is really unnecessary. You used a good DS here for example 00:49:311 (5,6,7) - and the songs pace is the same in both situations. Using 1.0x DS would make it look like this: http://puu.sh/poJN4/829152fc0c.jpg After applying this and testing it out it worked for me so i suggest you to do this too. it wasnt really that hard , idk why was everyone complaining about it . well i did something about it
01:03:307 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This spacing here also a big difficulty spike for no reason. Decreasing the distance between the circles worked like magic for me ( DS 1.0x ). well ~ That spacing matches the intensity of the song at that point

Overall this mapset is pretty good already so good job! Sorry that this mod is really short :/

Good luck!~

-Nya- wrote:

Hey~ M4M here.

General:

1. The BG has to be 1366X768. It’s an easy fix. will do it
2. You can add a hitsound file to silence the sliderslides: [url]http://puu.sh/poNW5/77b6159dac.wav not sure if it was necessary but i used it owo thanks[/url]

Expert:

1. 00:11:345 (1) –This circle isn’t snapped correctly. Snap it to 00:11:304 – i did it on purpose in all diffs ~ if i snap it to 00:11:304 - it sounds too early so yea i used 1/8 grid for this , i will see what others say about it
2. 00:12:637 (1) –I suggest placing a small jump here to emphasize the beat on the head of the slider.
3. 00:17:970 (1) –A small jump would be nice here as well. This is an Expert diff afterall
4. 00:19:970 (3,4) –I usually discourage stacks like this since it disrupts flow. Rather unstack. There might be other places as well. its fine imo
5. 00:26:637 (2,4) –Try to avoid this overlap? Just place 00:27:637 (4,5) – somewhere else (lower it)
6. 00:28:637 (1) –A small jump here would be nice as well.
7. 00:31:303 (1) –Remove NC here to be consistent with 00:20:637 (5,6) –
8. 00:46:970 (5) –The tail of this slider might be overlapping the body of the slider too much, making it hard to distinguish the shape. I suggest changing the shape entirely: changed it in a bit different way
   
   Picture

   
   Not sure if you’ll like my shape >.< But your current shape may be an issue.
9. 00:49:637 (7) –Be careful with sliders like this as well. i guess its fine
10. 00:50:803 (7) –Not a pretty shape. It looks a bit crammed to me. Either straighten it or curve it.
11. 00:58:637 (6) –I think it can be a nice pattern if you shorten this slider to this tick: 00:58:803 – and then add a circle here: 00:58:887 – this was on purpose and there are alot of patterns like that in the map
    
    Picture

    
12. 01:00:803 (2,6,7,8) –This overlap doesn’t look that good. Try to avoid the overlap for neatness reasons.
13. 01:04:637 (1) –If you listen to the music/vocals closely, you’ll hear that it actually ends here: 01:10:387 – This applies to all diffs with this slider at the end. did it in this diff but idk about the rest , i dont want to overmap them much . i might do it in insane aswell but not in e/n/h

Insane:

1. Why is your HP higher than your Expert’s HP? I highly suggest lowering this HP for a better balanced spread.
2. 00:11:345 (1) –This has to be snapped correctly as well. same reason as above
3. 00:14:470 (2,4) –Try to avoid this overlap.
4. 00:41:637 (6,1) –This flow can be improved. Move the slider more to the left. Like this:
   
   Picture

   
5. 00:51:970 (4,1) –A stack here will look good.
6. 00:49:303 (5,6,7) –This is the only place where you stacked a double-circle like this. I guess it isn’t really an issue but for consistency I guess unstacking would be good. its oki

Hard:

1. HP 6 for a Hard is a bit too high imo. 5 would fit better. Also for a better balanced spread.
2. 00:11:345 (1) –Snap correctly. same reason as above
3. 00:19:970 (3,4) –Like I mentioned in the Expert, I usually discourage stacks like this. Unstacking this will result in a better flow.
4. 00:47:303 (1,7) –You can try rearranging the pattern so these two objects stack.
5. 00:58:220 –You can place a circle here to catch that beat.

Normal:

1. Lift the HP a bit. Mappers usually use 3 for an Easy diff. Lift this one to 4.
2. 00:11:345 (1) –Snap correctly. same reason as above
3. 00:52:637 (3,4,5,6) –Perhaps make this pattern a bit more exciting by placing it in a curve. A straight line is a bit meh.

Easy:

1. Maybe AR 3? The current AR feels too low.
2. 00:55:970 (4,1) –Not the best flow. It can be improved by doing something like this:
   
   Picture

   

Great mapset~
Here’s a star~!

100bit wrote:

Hey, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

1. Change "orien" to "orient" (metadata from Youtube)

Easy

1. 00:11:345 (1) - 1/8 isn't allowed in Easy-diffs, lol. but its allowed in my map xd
2. 00:20:970 (4) - nc?
3. 00:21:970 (5) - make sliderpoints a bit away from each other sorry i like the current shape
4. 00:24:637 (2) - strange slider... (just a suggestion, tbh it's normal slider xdxd) Yea its fine
5. 00:57:637 (2) - move a bit down for better flow

Normal

1. Change OD to 4
2. 00:11:970 (2) - move to x=332 y=164 for better blanket
3. 00:14:637 (3,2) - stack (your pattern isn't a stack)
4. 00:22:970 (5,1) - move 5 a bit down and 1 a bit right

Hard

1. 00:25:137 (2,3) - stack here and don't stack 00:25:303 (3,4)
2. 00:30:637 (3,4) - ^ Both are fine imo
3. 00:56:303 (5) - move a bit right
4. 01:04:637 - add note here and start slider from 01:04:720 (suggestion) i will think about it

Good luck!
{end of mod}

1. your hardest diff imo should be named Insane since expert diffs start from 5.25* as far as im aware, if im wrong please tell me
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   [Expert] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:43:303, ends on 00:53:637
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:53:970, ends on 01:04:720
   
   All of the other diffs = Kiai #1: Starts on 00:43:303, ends on 00:53:637
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:53:970, ends on 01:04:637

1. seem alright

1. seems ok

1. consider a spinner from 00:09:970 to 00:11:304 sounds better than that singular note at the start imo
2. 00:37:970 (1,2,3,4) - make these 5 note streams more often in this part rather than the normal 00:40:637 (1,2,3) - it sounds so much better http://puu.sh/ppcut/12eb602326.jpg

C00L wrote:

Hey light mod
Diff checked - Expert

[General]

1. your hardest diff imo should be named Insane since expert diffs start from 5.25* as far as im aware, if im wrong please tell me They say highest difficulty can have a custom name xd
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: oh yes , thanks . fixed
   [Expert] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:43:303, ends on 00:53:637
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:53:970, ends on 01:04:720
   
   All of the other diffs = Kiai #1: Starts on 00:43:303, ends on 00:53:637
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:53:970, ends on 01:04:637

[Hitsounds]

1. seem alright

[Timing]

1. seems ok

[Expert]

1. consider a spinner from 00:09:970 to 00:11:304 sounds better than that singular note at the start imo imo its not needed
2. 00:37:970 (1,2,3,4) - make these 5 note streams more often in this part rather than the normal 00:40:637 (1,2,3) - it sounds so much better http://puu.sh/ppcut/12eb602326.jpg ok sir

seems good

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

C00L wrote:

[General]
[list]
[*]your hardest diff imo should be named Insane since expert diffs start from 5.25* as far as im aware, if im wrong please tell me They say highest difficulty can have a custom name xd aaaah yes your right totally forgot about that x-x


seems good

Thanks ouo