1. Delusion (3.03 stars, 1178 notes)

5urface wrote:

Hey n1do
Sorry for the late reply, I was really busy irl.

M4M from my queue

General
I feel like the SV could be a bit higher. Especially in the slower sections with 1.0 BPM multiplier it doesn't feel that comfortable. But then again I suck horribly at low BPM maps so this might just be me. this SV should be fine
Heh. "funnypicturename.jpg" It's at 1365x768 resolution though which kinda bugs me, there was probably a small mistake while downscaling it. If you would switch that out with 1366x768 that would be awesome ^^ fixed

Oni
How about adding dons after the first 2 kats in the k k k k patterns at 00:01:502, 00:02:154, 00:06:719 and 00:07:371. This would be more interesting to play, add a little bit of variety and sound better imo no to the first two spots, and added to the last two
00:57:262 (171) - d to follow the pitch of the vocals ok
00:58:567 (176) - k would sound a bit better here no, would rather this be a d since the vocals are still low overall in pitch
01:39:654 (320,321) - another drumroll instead? To follow how you previously mapped this sound the drums are different for that part, so no
01:40:958 (325,326,327,328,329) - I am a bit unsure about these 1/8 patterns here. While alright to play they are a rather sharp contrast to the difficulty of the patterns around them and don't seem to fit. Maybe it's better to consistently use drumrolls for these? hmmm, not sure about this part either. will get other players' opinions on this
01:45:523 (355) - K would sound and fit better ok
01:49:925 (372) - A bit awkward to play, as this one note follows the vocals instead of the beat like the surrounding notes. It is a bit unexpected and might be better if you mapped this to the beat instead, even if it doesn't sound as good. 2 notes at 01:49:762 and 01:50:415 would fit well. made 01:49:762 into dk and left 01:50:415 as is
03:40:958 (780,781,782,783,784) - Still not sure about these... without the contrasting drumrolls they didn't feel as out of place as the previous ones though. same as the other 1/8 suggestion, will wait for players opinions

Overall it plays well but feels a bit monotone due to its length and reoccuring patterns. That however is due to the song itself and not bad mapping.
The mapping is mostly very consistent so I didn't want to interfere with your general structure too much as that would break more than it might improve.
Hope this was at least a bit helpful and sorry again for the delay.

Good luck!

Midnaait wrote:

Hi, from Ｍ Ｅ Ｍ Ｅ Ｓ Taiko Modding Queue :^)

d=don k=kat D=Big don K=Big kat
// //=Suggestion

[General]

Check .osu file and change that to 1.4 pls
fixed, why does osu do this

Change BG Coordinates to 0,50. Looks better for me at least
yep

0,0

0,50

Snap kiais into the 4/1 ticks (The big white ones) no, the reason why they're snapped to yellow ticks is because if the kiai activated on the white tick, the player would not get the kiai bonus for the note the kiai's snapped to if he hits earlier than -/+0ms, so i don't want bullshit leaderboards because of this
ew soft hitsounds shaddup

[Oni]

01:07:697 - How about moving this note 1/4 to the right to follow the voice? (Should look like dd dk) no, the voice hits 1/1 here. made this into ddk k instead
01:24:817 (275,276) - // Delete for a little 1/1 break to emphasize the voice // sure
01:42:752 - // Delete this or change to k? // i think it would make this too difficult as it is, so no
01:49:599 - I think you forgot a note there no, done on purpose to emphasize background vocals
02:16:502 - Change to d? ok
02:51:067 - ^ ok
03:29:871 - You forgot a finish there woops, fixed
04:42:262 - Change to k? would make the following two k's weaker, so no

Hope it's okay (I suck at modding slow maps rip)
Good luck :^)

yassu- wrote:

M4M

General

・song step→design→Enable Countdown untick ok

・BG　1365*768→1366*768 the background is at 1366x768 though

Oni

at first, K is preferable to use when you want to change and very emphasis.

second, the green lines unless there is reason, please to fit the circle. see reply to last mod for my reasoning

thirdly, it is not recommended to frequently use the 1/4big in like this a gentle song.　ex)　dddkkkD　

based on it will mod.


・00:09:328　00:09:980　add k pattern ok

・00:11:610　00:32:480　00:48:132　00:49:436　01:32:480　01:45:523　02:06:393　03:03:784　03:19:436　change to D

changed 00:11:610　01:32:480　01:45:523　03:19:436　, no to 00:32:480　00:48:132　00:49:436　02:06:393 because of voice emphasis, no to 03:03:784 because the following two D's would be weaker and i want to reflect the intensity of the song decreasing

・00:15:197　change to dd kd pattern changed

・00:49:110　change to k? pitch is still low and it makes the build up weaker, so no

・00:55:958　02:29:871　04:29:871　change to D 　It is better not to use the K in continuous.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　It eliminates the sense of incongruity. changed first two, but third one is already a D

・00:55:958　02:29:871　04:19:436　change to here kiai start point see above

・01:35:089　03:09:002　change to here kiai end point see above

・01:49:110　change to dddkd k made into ddkk dk instead

・02:40:306　change to K 01:06:393 pattern good catch, changed

・04:06:393　change to k changed

・04:15:849(898,899,900,901,902)　change to dkdkd this part is mapped to the general pitch of the violin and not the single notes, so no

・04:29:708　04:40:143　delete this is the most intense part of the song. notes aren't overlapped by the finishers, are opposite colors, and it fits so no

・05:09:018　red line volume60%　green line volume70%? ? ?　please unification fixed

・05:19:615　change to here slider start point 05:19:778　because it overlaps with circle

fixed

good lack ^^

Nyan wrote:

[Oni]

00:49:762 - add a don ok
01:34:436 (305) - remoe Finish ok
01:49:110 (372,373,374,375,376,377) - dd kddk no, leaving that as it is because it fits the background vocals and drums already
02:21:067 (493,494,495,496) - kkkk(1/6) or k__kk(1/8) 1/8 k kkk actually fits the cymbals here, so no
03:09:654 (671) - kat ok
03:09:980 (672) - don no, would rather map to that synth (?) instead of drums here
04:36:230 - add a don ok
04:57:262 (1065) - add Finish ok
04:59:871 (1074,1075,1076,1077,1078,1079,1080) - dkd kkkkD made into dkd dkkkD instead

k3v227 wrote:

HI. Rip bancho = modding spree I guess.

[Oni]

General:

- Finishers after 1/4 are a little taboo but I think they fit the song nicely.

- Mapping to the vocals is okay imo, but adding some 1/4 triples (hybrid of the vocals and drums) could help the feel of the map a little. Especially during builds and the kiai sections when there is energy.


Proposals:

00:32:154 (97) - Change to d; to reflect the tom-tom drum. ok

00:51:393 (158,159,160,161,162,163) - Should all be finishers imo; the drums are low tom-tom + snare for all of these notes. made all but 159 a finisher, 159 is quieter than the others

01:17:969 - Add d. ok

01:23:839 - Add k. i don't hear anything here, so no

01:51:067 (381) - Change to k. ok

01:51:882 (385) - Change to k. ok

01:53:023 (389,390) - Ctrl + g. vocal goes down in pitch here so no

02:02:480 (426) - Move to 02:02:643 i hear nothing on that spot, so no

02:25:306 (512,513,514,515,516,517) - All finishers; same reasoning as before. made all but 513 a finisher, same as before

02:28:241 - Add d. ok

02:57:099 - Add d here. i hear nothing here, so no

02:57:589 (630) - Change to d. this note is the same pitch as the one before it so no

03:29:871 (760,761,762,763,764,765,766,767,768,769,770,771,772,773,774,775,776,777,778) - Could use some color variation imo... this part is all the same thing in terms of pitch sadly

03:51:393 (838,839,840,841,842,843) - All finishers. made all but 839 a finisher, same reason

04:11:936 - Add d; Seems that you're just trying to map the vocals here, but this small gap feels a little empty for the build in the music. made this d ddd for drums

04:14:871 (900,901,902) - All finishers. no change since 901 is quieter

04:18:132 (913,914,915,916,917,918,919) to 04:19:273 - Could add a 1/4 before the finisher on the start of the kiai. Suggestion: kdkkdkdkd. made into kdkkddk D

04:28:893 (957,958,959,960,961,962,963) - Change to kdkkddK. this is mapped to the background violin so no

04:38:023 - Add d. ok

04:38:512 - Add d. ok

04:44:219 (1020) - Change to d. this fits the background chimes so no

04:44:382 - Add k. ok

04:47:317 - Add k. wouldn't be as consistent as similar sections before it so no

04:54:328 (1055) - Change to k? overall pace of the song is going down here so no

05:19:289 (1149) - Change to k. would make the finisher after it illegal so no

Cute song :3

-Kev

Taikocracy wrote:

wow who thought i'd be back

00:13:893 (31,32) - i'd use kkd here to bring out the bass and vocal hit on 00:14:219 - ok
00:17:806 (46,47) - same thing here kind of, except this is more optional because the instrument sounds like it's being cut off at this spot, a don could go here if you'd like one to be there would rather map to vocals in this section, so no change
00:24:328 (69,70) - refer to #1 ok
00:49:436 (152,153,154,155) - could go k d d k instead to emphasize the bass drum hits as oppose to the vocals, which works better imo as a transition from the off-beat rhythm changed to K d d k, as there's a crash at the K i think
00:56:936 (171,172,173) - kkd maybe to show that note 173 is lower in pitch than 171 and 172 when compared vocally pitch is still high enough here, so no change
01:16:012 (239,240,241,242,243) - idk if i recommend using a 1/8 kkk here, i'd simply just make it k k d d because it will have the same effect, but if you really want to keep it then i recommend kkd k d instead, note 242 is a snare hit and higher than 243, 241 would be a d just to help it flow a little bit better than kkk k changed to kkd d d, i want to keep the 1/8 simple enough to introduce this into the map
02:21:067 (478,479,480,481,482,483) - same thing for here^ did same thing as above
02:36:067 (534,535,536,537) - could be kkdkd if you want because of the drum hit between notes 536 and 537 ok
02:49:925 (587,588,589,590,591) - same as 01:16:012 - same change as above
03:20:089 (701,702,703,704,705,706) - imo this should be kdkkd k instead because there's a clear drum hit on 03:20:252 - and ignoring it for the sake of this pattern sounds really off-putting ok
03:40:958 (772,773,774,775,776) - for all the other patterns like it as well, although i clearly understand the choice of improv here, it's inappropriate as this section is still fairly calm, improv in a calm section like i've written below isn't really appropriate i don't want to ignore the drums in the background, and the idea is introduced enough with the sliders in the first section like this, so no change
04:00:849 (844,845,846) - i recommend deleting 844 and 845 for the sake of simplicity in this section, it's calm so the improv isn't really needed i agree with the simplicity, but i'm only going to remove 846 so this section isn't too boring and make sure the vocals are represented in this part
04:39:002 (989,990,991,992,993,994,995,996,997) - i struggle liking this patterning, dk dkdkkd sounds much more appropriate seeing as 991 isn't really mapped to any concrete sound changed to dk ((kkd))dkkD to remain consistent with the patterns before it
04:59:871 (1070,1071,1072,1073,1074,1075,1076,1077) - dkddkdkkd reflects the music better as the current patternage skips the drum beat on 05:00:360 - and the triplet sounds kind of weird too ok

really minor things, overall the map is fine and has some potential due to it's simplicity

Vulkin wrote:

Fateful Journey
idk why, just felt like saying it

-Delusion-
The diff is way too polished imo, the only thing that i could try is to give small suggestions in how to follow drums, and because of it, its going to be like a mod that i used to do back when i started modding
Note patterns like for ex ddkdk are in 1/4
00:14:871 (35) - Maybe k? could follow the drums a bit ok
00:18:784 (50) - ^ ok
00:22:371 (63,64) - Ctrl+G because ^ ok
00:28:893 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9630639 ^ only changed 88 to k, i want the guitar in the background to be represented here
00:41:773 - I think this sounds more like dkdkkd snare is only present in d"kkk"dd, so no change
00:50:252 - add a d maybe? for the drum ok
01:15:197 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9630655 could follow drums somewhat better this would ruin the difficulty progression of the kiai's, as i want to keep a 1/4 gap here, so no change
01:16:828 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9630664 ^ changed it to this instead
01:23:023 - kdkkd it's 1/2 here for vocals, and i want to keep this kiai easy enough for difficulty progression, so no change
01:26:121 - could really add a k here for the drums same as above, no change
01:27:262 (289) - not sure why, but this could sound better as K i want to represent the comparatively low pitch to this half of the kiai in this part, so no change
01:35:415 - i dont think putting that many sliders is a good idea this introduces players to the 1/8 streams in the map, so no change
01:40:958 - i dont hear anything where you placed the 1/8, might want to remove them mapped to drumrolls, so no change
01:59:545 - kdkkd changed to dkd k
02:03:132 (428) - maybe k? higher pitch than previous note imo still a low pitch compared to the notes after it, no change
02:05:904 (440) - and this k because previous note (k) is the same pitch with drum ok
02:21:719 (496) - maybe k? i hear a tom here, so no change
02:41:773 - maybe a d here for the drums? ok
02:50:415 (606) - maybe k? ok
02:55:958 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9630747 way too many k's for this part, and the way i mapped this part i'm 100% sure i balanced vocals and drums enough, no change
03:00:034 (645,646) - Ctrl+G so the k follow durms and d voices ok
04:20:904 - a k could follow for drums ok
04:23:023 - kdkkd this is mapped to background violin (?), so no change
04:25:306 (949) - k ok
04:25:632 - kdkkd would ruin the triplet scheme i have going here, no change
04:26:610 (955) - k mapped to voal, no change
04:28:893 - ddkdkkD ok
04:41:284 - ddkkd k ok
04:46:502 - ddkdk changed to ddkkk instead, i want the vocals to pop out here like in the other sections
04:48:947 (1051) - maybe move to 04:49:599 - for drums ok

sorry if the mod doesnt help at all, orz
its too good for me LOL

Raphalge wrote:

[if you think bubbleman has beaten me, you are Delusional.] shut up omg

00:25:632 (75,76,77,78) - re-arrange into 2 doubles for consistency with the rest of the section? ok
01:16:502 (247) - change to k for the higher pitch bass? I also think a lot of players would recognize the kkddk pattern and having an easier time hitting it. ok
01:41:284 (329) - change to k to maximize simplicity? can change 01:42:915 (340) - to k to keep it unique with its loud drums no change on first part because i'd be mapping k to nothing, but ok on second part
01:51:882 - add d? skipping the "mi" in "himitsu" sounds kinda weird imo added at 01:52:045 - instead because that's when she says "mi"
02:21:719 (489) - change to k for the same playability stuff as 01:16:502 (247) but also to maximize contrast between it and 02:22:045 (490) - ? i think i'll leave it as d here to hint at the difficulty increase, so no change
02:57:589 (626) - change to d for basically no reason? I have no idea why but it being k bothers me vocal is high here, so no change
03:19:110 (706) - change to k? it's the highest pitched note in the pattern and would provide nice contrast between it and the coming finisher ok
03:43:893 (800) - change to k to match the previous 2 1/8's? there might be a very subtle change in sound that I'm missing but k d d at the end of it sounds nice. ok
03:44:871 (807) - sounds like there's some more higher pitch bass here, change to k for that and also the k d d reason from before? i mapped this part to the drumroll, which is always a d sound anyway, so no change
04:01:175 - skipped sound? d would sound fine here imo there's no note here to emphasize the vocal break, so no change
04:54:002 (1060) - 04:54:654 (1062) - change to K for vocal emphasis? Would also flow a bit better I think. ok
05:19:778 (1) - shorten the spinner end to 05:23:039 - ? Sounds like the audible part of the reverb cuts out there i hear the reverb end at 05:23:202 - so i moved the end there

I hope a lot of the suggestions weren't too subjective. Really nice map, osu needs more low bpm!!!

Astolfo wrote:

https://gyazo.com/023f76ed55d497af7e6b9dc4be2150af

general:
od6? with this low bpm and the 1/8 rolls its hard to acc kinda owo.. 5 or 5.something better od6 to avoid notelock in 1/8's, and because od5 is lame

dif:
00:06:067 - to 00:10:958 - feel this is undermapped , not sure how to go about it but there are a lot of snare sounds in this section that could be mapped made some triples to fit the snare
01:19:273 - k here since this whole section is followin the vocal p much a 5-stream would be out of place here, and the pattern would be awkward to read in the first place, so no change
01:26:121 - also since u mapped that previous triple snare sound this one should be mapped too 5-stream would be out of place here, no change
01:35:741 - i thought there was a guideline for not having sliders at a low bpm because it acts as double bpm for the ticks but its not there anymore ok
but i still dont recommend sliders at this bpm for the same reason it introduces the players more to the 1/8 drumrolls, so no change
also why does it change here ? 01:39:654 - hi-hat is introduced here, and i want to map to that
01:49:762 - kinda random double.. 01:48:295 (367) - this ccan be removed and 01:49:110 - can be changed to ddkkd k ok
01:54:654 - kkd triple for the snare sound ok
id put a d on 02:05:578 - just for the sake of playing more comfortably tbh 1/4 doubles are poo (in this case 1/8 but u get it) would create a difficulty spike in this calmish section, and there's nothing to map there so no change
02:07:860 - snare sound ok
02:10:469 - ^ ok
02:23:349 - this little part is rly off i think dkk ddkdK sounds a lot better changed to D dkkkd K instead, and changed some notes before it
02:39:165 - add k and delet 02:39:491 (556) - ok
02:54:817 (617) - k owo ok
02:56:936 - kkkdk here then 02:56:936 - this triple remove middle note, theres no vocal part on the middle part i think you messed up the links here, but changed to kkk k d k
03:09:002 - to 03:29:545 - missing some snare sounds if u wanna map all of them, u can go and check ur self added some notes here so it builds up better to the long stream near the end of this section
03:40:795 (780,781) - no good pattern right here brother change first to d and ill do anything i promise made into kd((kdddk)) instead,
i want to represent voice here too
03:55:958 - try and only follow the drum stuff here it feels off with the vocal stuff mapped especially this double 04:00:849 (853,854) - when theres a clear hard downbeat note on the next white tick added some notes, and changed double to dkd i guess
04:11:936 - feel this is mapped very off, this goes exactly to the drum beat if u wanna use https://gyazo.com/5c47c13df33adbfe9b6c976852eb9879
(890 is on 1/3) removed the first note from the triple instead, i want to keep this part simple enough
04:22:534 (930) - d owo violin hits a high note here, no change
oki this last kiai in the beginning some triples feel out of place and then some snare stuff isnt being followed whats reasoning behind that (example 04:22:371 (929,930,931,932,933,934) - ) rushed mapping on my part, changed a lot of shit here
04:39:491 (1000) - new combo or u die tonight Nope
05:12:605 (1128,1129,1130,1131,1132) - dddkd sound better but poo pattern so idk changed to dkdkd instead


sorry picky gay mod probably the best mod i've gotten tbh

Sinnoh wrote:

how many people misread this as harumachi

Sinnoh wrote:

how many people misread this as harumachi