riya(eufonius) - Traveler's tale · forum

0109-

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2016-08-16T16:42:27+00:00

Lasse wrote:
[general]
triggered
can't you find it in 1366x768 ?

[hitsounding]
based on highest diff
01:00:067 (5) - add clap for the snare? sounds weird
01:24:282 (1) - missing finish fixed
you could really add some soft whistles in some spots, the song has so many high pitched sounds ; /
like 01:25:782 - 01:27:710 (1,1,1,1) - etc fixed

[i]
00:05:424 (1) - rather audible piano on red tick, how about 1/2 repeat slider instead? fixed
00:07:567 (2,4) - there are so many spots to place 4 without getting this awful overlap, even something like http://i.imgur.com/jSfl62J.jpg would look better fixed
00:11:853 (7,1) - jump here is suddenly pretty huge without anything in the music to indicate it. how about a pattern similar to http://i.imgur.com/BPSnEND.jpg ? spacing fixed but the pattern remain unchanged
00:13:567 (4) - now this could use more spacing to emphasize the cymbal and maybe also a break in flow for that, maybe stack on 00:12:067 (1) - head or move to 177/309 so it makea triangle with 00:13:996 (1,2) - enlarged the distance
00:15:067 (1) - // 00:16:782 (1) - why the nc? doesnt really make sense to me, when you look at the other patterns fixed
00:18:067 (2) - what is this following? completely skips vocal/drum on 00:18:282 - http://i.imgur.com/XgFUrLs.jpg works better fixed
00:23:853 (3) - why is this extended to 3/4, when there is a clear piano on 00:24:067 - ? there isnÄt even a strong held sound => 1/2 is much better fixed
00:30:067 (2) - similar, 1/2 repeat or circle+slider fit the song much better fixed
other sliders with that "skipping" issue: 00:45:496 (2) -fixed 01:40:782 (1) - will keep this slider, the beat wasn't so prominent
00:46:353 - why would you completely ignore vocal+drum suddenly?? fixed
01:01:353 (4,5,6,1) - use the spacing from 5-1 also for the other overlap to make it much cleaner fixed
01:23:210 (4,6,7,1) - check this with stacking enabled, it looks horrible ingame http://i.imgur.com/NuElcLU.jpg fixed
01:29:210 (2) - how about breaking the pattern here to fit with sudden added cymbal? for example http://i.imgur.com/z6mZQx1.jpg looks good
01:42:282 - would make this clickable since it's so different from the drums the repeat slider is mapped to it fits the drum

[h]
00:14:424 (1,2) - would unstack this like 00:15:282 (3,4) - because of cymabl/music is pretty much same fixed
01:34:460 (6) - 00:10:460 (6) - removing those would fit better with the spread difficulty/density wise it would make the gap between hard and insane larger
00:30:710 (4,1) - stacked cymbal why. doesntmake much sense with your other patterning fixed
01:42:067 (3) - could just map this as 1/1 or something instead of using wrong snap to make it easier ^x2

[n]
00:01:139 (2) - at some spots, like here your spacing is off a bit. this is normally not an issue, but with the ds you picked it looks really bad bacause of how weird the overlap looks, just go voer the map and fix those to make it look much nicer fixed
00:15:496 (3,5) - bit hard to read for normal fixed
00:28:353 (2,3) - somethinh like http://i.imgur.com/nFtKoBC.jpg would look cleaner and have a nice movement fixed
00:30:710 (3,1) - why is such a strong sound stacked, but then 00:33:710 (3,4) - is spaced? actually just stack 00:33:710 (3,4) - for consistency with other 1/2 circle => slider patterns fixed
01:19:567 (2,1) - same stacking thing here. only having two of them spaced like that seems a bit random/weird fixed
01:05:853 (2,3) - how about ctrl-g o nthis rhythm? would fit the song/strong sounds better fixed

gl

thanks for modding

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2016-08-17T02:24:50+00:00

Lasse-> nice point fixed, ty!

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0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2016-08-17T12:44:25+00:00

Updated

Shoga

232 posts

Joined January 2015

Shoga 2016-08-19T06:31:05+00:00

star heare, star there...k bye.

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-08-19T10:38:51+00:00

Have a star xd

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2016-08-25T15:45:50+00:00

Hii

NM from my queue

Difficulties

Garden's Easy

00:18:710 (2,3) - blanket :
~~

zzz

Normal

warning in AiMod
00:36:924 - add a circle
00:40:567 (3,1) - blanket with the tail of slider 3

Hard

00:03:496 - add a circle
01:21:496 (2,3,4) - blanket
01:24:282 (1,2) - overlap and here 01:23:853 (4,1) blanket
01:42:817 - add a circle

Insane

00:23:746 - add a circle
00:28:347 - add a circle
00:30:067 (2) - remove slider inverse and put 4 note after the slider (a little stream)

GOOD LUCK!

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2016-08-26T06:06:50+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:
Normal
warning in AiMod fixed
00:36:924 - add a circle too hard for a normal diff
00:40:567 (3,1) - blanket with the tail of slider 3 fixed
Hard
00:03:496 - add a circle that would be overmapped
01:21:496 (2,3,4) - blanket not necessary
01:24:282 (1,2) - overlap and here 01:23:853 (4,1) blanket already blanket
01:42:817 - add a circle no
Insane
00:23:746 - add a circle no, that's so weird
00:28:347 - add a circle i can't find that point @@
00:30:067 (2) - remove slider inverse and put 4 note after the slider (a little stream) that would be overmapped
GOOD LUCK!

Thanks for modding

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-08-26T15:24:42+00:00

[garden]

fine

[normal]

00:00:282 (1,2,3,4,1) - why these have 1.2x spacing when after these spacing are all 1.1x , it would be better to make thing more consistent to make thing play more better
00:17:424 (1,2,3) - starting 1/2 rhythm off like this is so sudden for a player imo player will not really can play this properly since it start so sudden with the new rhythm here lol , i think starting thing with something more simple would make it a bit more better to advance the rhythm here so try use this rhythm instead ?
SPOILER
01:22:567 (1,2) - subjective stuff - i think the aesthetic here can be improve a bit by make 01:22:567 (1) - looks like 01:23:210 (2) - so i think pattern like this has better aesthetic
SPOILER
01:36:067 (3) - that red anchor point at the tail make this slider looks really bad lol , consider delete that red anchor point
SPOILER

some beat could use finish as hitsound like 00:10:567 - 00:12:067 - 00:15:496 - , etc mostly if you can hear the cymbal or something sound like that in the music it would be good idea to add finish to those beat to make the feedback feel great , garden diff did hitsound really good so you can use that diff as an example

[hard]

00:14:424 (1,2,3,4) - try to make spacing more consistent ? ( use 1.4x spacing ) it would make thing feel better and play more natural
00:59:853 (3,1) - mmm i think the 1/4 spacing here is a bit too much for hard diff here , it pretty unexpected here since the previous ones you do the usual low 1/4 spacing but here you just increase it a lots right away so i think lower spacing here to the usual low 1/4 spacing would make more sense for a player
01:38:639 (2,3) - this is the only time you do 1/2 rhythm for stack at the slider tail so i think player won't notice or react to this really well so i would suggest you to unstack them so that it will make thing go more natural
01:41:639 (1,2) - this jumps is really unexpected and too much for hard diff consider lower it or just use the usual spacing for this one , with the current spacing it's just make player go "wtf" and miss easily
01:40:782 (1) - hmm what is this nc for ? i don't think it really necessary there so consider removing it ?
01:42:067 (3) - pretty curious here , why do you use 1/4 snapping here when you do 1/6 snapping in insane , i listen to the beat tho and also think that the beat should be on 1/6 instead of 1/4 lol , consider changing snap to 1/6 or use 1/2 slider instead since 1/6 might be too hard or confusing

same issue with the lacking of finish hitsound like normal diff

[insane]

00:02:853 (6) - ending this on white tick sound better imo , the red tick there doesn't really have any beat that sound really noticeable much so ending on white tick instead would make rhythm sound better tbh
00:39:282 (5,1) - can increase spacing a bit to emphasis the (1) better imo , try to move (1) to around x36 y188 ?
00:42:924 (1) - don't see any reason for this to have nc the instrument still same like it's continue from the last one so i think delete nc here would make more sense
01:16:996 (5,4) - better stack for better aesthetic xd
01:22:782 (2,4) - not a really good blanket here , try improve a bit it a bit
01:24:067 (6,7,1) - is this intenttionally ? would be better to just stack them properly
01:40:782 (1) - same as hard about nc
01:42:710 (5) - this note feel weird and out of place imo , the beat here 01:42:496 (4) - actually support for stop feeling but you still map thing after that so it make rhythm here pretty weird imo , i think this rhythm just feel a bit better to play
SPOILER

same issue with the lacking of finish hitsound like normal and hard diffs

the lacking of finish hitsound is the issue here for me , might as well add them to give a better feedback for those cymbal beat

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0109- 2016-08-26T16:38:19+00:00

All fixed

, thanks for modding

Garden

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Garden 2016-08-27T10:44:49+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:
Garden's Easy
00:18:710 (2,3) - blanket : blanket this doesnt look nice with previous object imo, i fixed a bit to make it look nicer with slider tail of 00:17:424 (1) -
~~
zzz

thx~

update

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@thai0109 i happened to find some missing finish here 00:58:353 (4) - in ur normal. in case u forgot to add sth in lower diff, what about checking ur highest diff's hitsounds carefully and then copy it to hard and normal? its the easiest way to keep ur hitsounding patterns consistent.

0109-

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Topic Starter

0109- 2016-08-27T15:11:32+00:00

fixed

Iceskulls

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Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-08-28T14:38:02+00:00

hard
00:59:853 (3,1) - doesn't seems to be fixed when you said "all fix" , what i mean is use lower 1/4 spacing to something like this 1.3x would be a bit more reasonable to play

insane
01:24:067 (6,7,1) - the stack looks really bad , you can just use auto stack there or just adjust spacing for each notes a bit to make them equal

these notes can add finish hitsound to add some emphasis to the beat and make the hitsound pattern a bit more consistent, these apply to normal , hard and insane

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[metadata]
http://never-island.com/product.html
the official site here show the artist to be "riya(eufonius)"

SPOILER

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxGUHWcf5To
the official opening movie from frontwing also show artist to be "riya(eufonius)"

SPOILER

same with the Elements Gardens who i think is the music composer
https://twitter.com/_ElementsGarden/sta ... 4084694016

so I think

Artist : riya(eufonius)

would be the better solution for this

or you can try to get more opinion about the metadata here

call me back after you make sure everything is fine

0109-

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Topic Starter

0109- 2016-08-28T17:00:39+00:00

Updated with some exceptions:
- 00:16:782 - a finish sound here seems not so nice since the beat was going down

- About the artist: I'm pretty sure about it since i put "eufonius" in the tags. It would look so awful like this ingame so I decided to keep it.

Ty

Iceskulls

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Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-08-28T17:12:28+00:00

the tags is there just to help people finding the map easily

iirc metadata must be correct with the official one

I still believe the metadata is not really seems to be the correct one according to the official metadata i have found
or do you somehow have others official metadata that can be use as reference to show that artist can be "riya"

0109-

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Topic Starter

0109- 2016-08-29T06:32:44+00:00

Fixed after asking KwaN

Iceskulls

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Iceskulls 2016-08-29T14:18:35+00:00

yea lol

0109-

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Topic Starter

0109- 2016-08-29T14:19:24+00:00

OMG my 1st bub

LMT

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LMT 2016-08-29T14:39:32+00:00

HYPEEEEE

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-08-29T14:58:38+00:00

only fixed a stack on hard and the bg resolution (1365x768 => 1366x768)
planning to qualify something else today, so I'll leave this to Celsius
gl with your first qualify!

Iceskulls

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Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-08-29T15:11:50+00:00

recheck
and ok now

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2016-08-29T15:14:15+00:00

As #3 Vietnamese ranked mapper.
Congratulation to you, thai.
Welcome to Osu mapping community, #5 Vietnamese ranked mapper :'( finally this day.

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