halo kak ~

[General]
nggk ada ~

[Mudah]
00:15:046 (2,3) - blanket lah ~ biar lebih rapi gitu huheue :>
00:26:194 (3,4) - too close for me
00:30:128 (2,3) - blanket (y)
01:50:456 (3,1) - nggk di stack aja sekalian :3
01:58:981 (5) - remove Nc terus NC yang slider selanjutnya
02:24:882 (3) - geser kebawah dikit pls :3 biar enak flownya coba (112,118)

[Normal]
00:37:997 (1) - curve slider (agar blanket dengan circle selanjutnya)
01:04:226 (1,2) - patternya kayak berlawanan arahnya ~ (coba geser ke kanan slider (2) )
01:10:620 (4) - pindahkan ke (63,113) biar enak flownya atau curve slider :>
02:24:882 (4,1) - sama dengan sebelumnya ~ (coba geser ke kiri (18,173) )

[Hard]
00:46:521 (3,4) - blanket?
01:18:489 (4) - increase curve (karena ada slider 01:17:997 (3) yg ngeblanket :3 )
01:22:587 (1,2) - jauh amat ~ (nggk konsistent dengan 01:24:226 (1,2) )
01:55:702 (1,2) - overlep ~
01:59:800 (2,3) - bad pattern (menurutku circle yang berada di samping tengah slider lurus itu kurang bagus)

GL ~ kak ;w; maaf short mod

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

halo kak ~

[General]
nggk ada ~

[Mudah]
00:15:046 (2,3) - blanket lah ~ biar lebih rapi gitu huheue :> blanket gimana orang itu jauh-_-
00:26:194 (3,4) - too close for me kujauhin dikit
00:30:128 (2,3) - blanket (y)
01:50:456 (3,1) - nggk di stack aja sekalian :3 easy diff jgn stack de
01:58:981 (5) - remove Nc terus NC yang slider selanjutnya ini sengaja buat ikut vocal
02:24:882 (3) - geser kebawah dikit pls :3 biar enak flownya coba (112,118) ok

[Normal]
00:37:997 (1) - curve slider (agar blanket dengan circle selanjutnya) nope
01:04:226 (1,2) - patternya kayak berlawanan arahnya ~ (coba geser ke kanan slider (2) ) enak kok waktu gameplay
01:10:620 (4) - pindahkan ke (63,113) biar enak flownya atau curve slider :> ntar repot ganti tempat slider selanjutnya lul
02:24:882 (4,1) - sama dengan sebelumnya ~ (coba geser ke kiri (18,173) )

[Hard]
00:46:521 (3,4) - blanket? ngga intend blanket disini
01:18:489 (4) - increase curve (karena ada slider 01:17:997 (3) yg ngeblanket :3 ) ok
01:22:587 (1,2) - jauh amat ~ (nggk konsistent dengan 01:24:226 (1,2) ) emg mau jump itu niatnya
01:55:702 (1,2) - overlep ~ on purpose
01:59:800 (2,3) - bad pattern (menurutku circle yang berada di samping tengah slider lurus itu kurang bagus) ok ku stack aja

GL ~ kak ;w; maaf short mod

makasih ya

Yo. I was searching for some goodshit gochuumon images and found this.

http://www.zerochan.net/2006414#full

the japanese text below isn't there so maybe you could replace it.
only problem is you can see that it's kinda scanned, however you can probably find a way to reduce the "scan dots" somewhat lol

gl.

[Extrarirurain]

1. i think this map is ok for od8
2. 01:04:144 (1) - remove finish
3. 02:32:997 (4,5) - it look like this on playing, why not directly make the rhythm like this

[Insane]

1. 01:04:144 (2) - same
2. 01:11:767 (1,2,3,4,1) - i would say its hard for an insane, change to kick slider like hardest diff?

omg i love this song
also very fun map
call me back if you want

Mira-san wrote:

Yo. I was searching for some goodshit gochuumon images and found this.

http://www.zerochan.net/2006414#full

the japanese text below isn't there so maybe you could replace it.
only problem is you can see that it's kinda scanned, however you can probably find a way to reduce the "scan dots" somewhat lol

gl.

i dont really mind with the text anyway, also i cant do something about the scan dots so i'd prefer the current bg. thanks though :3

Rizia wrote:

[Extrarirurain]

1. i think this map is ok for od8
2. 01:04:144 (1) - remove finish
3. 02:32:997 (4,5) - it look like this on playing, why not directly make the rhythm like this

[Insane]

1. 01:04:144 (2) - same
2. 01:11:767 (1,2,3,4,1) - i would say its hard for an insane, change to kick slider like hardest diff?

omg i love this song
also very fun map
call me back if you want

fc in 1pc xd

changed OD on extra to 8 but reduced the hp drain to 7, fixed the others


thanks !
updated ~

pls kk Momochi, teh artists spam ekss diiii.

poi PUI?!?? POHHiiih, POIHH!??! no poi 4 u ,

bubbled

mochi so pro :3 already bubbled :33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

gratz :3

pret kape 3 menit. yoweslah

placeholder sek

Easy :
- 00:06:521 - onok cymbal e, finish?
- 00:32:751 (1,2) - coba digae blanket ae? ben rapi ngono design e
- 00:34:062 (3) - ga terlalu paham melok opo iki. nang redtick iku drum tapi ga keras, luwih kroso seng 00:34:390 - tapi di skip, 00:34:718 - trumpet e iki yo banter
- 00:36:685 (3) - ^
- 01:48:817 (1) - finish? cymbal e krungu pol
- 01:51:440 - cymbal ojok di map pake slider's tail ta, kurang kroso ngono ga greget
- 01:55:374 - ^ lek stuju
- 02:28:161 (1) - miss whistle di endas e?
- 02:34:903 (2) - menurut ku di NC ae iki soal e kan offset e ganti, kadang iso bikin ngemiss gara2 offset telat

Normal :
- HP 3,5 ae? ben ga adoh2 jarak e mbe Hard
- 00:09:800 (2) - 1/2 slider repeat ae? soale drum nang 00:09:964 - podo karo 00:09:800 - rasa e aneh ae
- 00:07:177 (2) - lek misal stuju mbe di atas iki sisan
- 00:19:636 (1) - miss whistle? soal e vocal e podo mbe 00:14:390 (1) - tapi iku onok whistle e nang endas
- 01:41:276 - cymbal ojok di map pake slider's tail ta, kurang kroso ngono ga greget (2)
- 02:10:456 (2) - coba 1/2 slider terus circle? ben konsisten mbe prev kiai seng onok 1/2 e. 1/1 kabeh yo keroso rada plain ngono
- 02:34:903 (2) - podo karo easy

Hard :
- 00:20:456 (3,4) - coba ctrl+g en, flow e iku rada mbulet zig zag e, iso rawan miss gara2 zig zag campur ngejump 2x, jadi lek tak rasa ctrl+g en tapi tetep jump buat 00:20:784 (1) - ben lebih frenli la
- 00:32:259 (6) - nc gae sv change
- 00:42:915 (5) - coba 272,120 ben ngejump e konsisten? soal e next iku piye2 cymbal, rasa e aneh lek luwih cedek
- 00:51:440 (4) - iki kudu nc, iso2 kebaca 1/2 gara2 anti jump
- 01:42:259 (1,2,3,4) - krn musik e lagi agak kalem, coba 2 1/2 slider pake konsisten spacing ae? soal e jump2 mu nang kene lebih serem dari biasa e
- 02:17:669 - cymbal ojok di map pake slider's tail ta, kurang kroso ngono ga greget (3)

Insane :
- 01:28:817 (4,1) - consider reduce, jump e terlalu kuat imo
- 00:32:259 (2) - nc gae sv change
- 00:51:440 (4) - podo karo hard

Extra :
- 00:24:800 - drum e banter iki, coba ga usah di gae jump ke stanza tapi triplet ae?
- 00:32:259 (2) - nc gae sv change
- 00:40:948 (2,2) - ^

kesamber opo arek iki sampe ngemap e angel2 ngene

celuk maneh mari ngecek, lagu apik ngene ga manggil gd sedih gw

Xinely wrote:

pret kape 3 menit. yoweslah

placeholder sek

Easy :
- 00:06:521 - onok cymbal e, finish? ga banter nemen kok
- 00:32:751 (1,2) - coba digae blanket ae? ben rapi ngono design e ok
- 00:34:062 (3) - ga terlalu paham melok opo iki. nang redtick iku drum tapi ga keras, luwih kroso seng 00:34:390 - tapi di skip, 00:34:718 - trumpet e iki yo banter niate ben gampang ae se, biasane lak akeh easy diff spam 3/2 ngene .3.
- 00:36:685 (3) - ^
- 01:48:817 (1) - finish? cymbal e krungu pol yo okee
- 01:51:440 - cymbal ojok di map pake slider's tail ta, kurang kroso ngono ga greget y
- 01:55:374 - ^ lek stuju seng iki wez kadung tak keep ae y
- 02:28:161 (1) - miss whistle di endas e? engga kok
- 02:34:903 (2) - menurut ku di NC ae iki soal e kan offset e ganti, kadang iso bikin ngemiss gara2 offset telat ok

Normal :
- HP 3,5 ae? ben ga adoh2 jarak e mbe Hard ok
- 00:09:800 (2) - 1/2 slider repeat ae? soale drum nang 00:09:964 - podo karo 00:09:800 - rasa e aneh ae aku prefer 1/1 ae cek gampang
- 00:07:177 (2) - lek misal stuju mbe di atas iki sisan
- 00:19:636 (1) - miss whistle? soal e vocal e podo mbe 00:14:390 (1) - tapi iku onok whistle e nang endas ga kok, kan aku iki ngopi LUL
- 01:41:276 - cymbal ojok di map pake slider's tail ta, kurang kroso ngono ga greget (2) ok ganti note
- 02:10:456 (2) - coba 1/2 slider terus circle? ben konsisten mbe prev kiai seng onok 1/2 e. 1/1 kabeh yo keroso rada plain ngono y
- 02:34:903 (2) - podo karo easy k

Hard :
- 00:20:456 (3,4) - coba ctrl+g en, flow e iku rada mbulet zig zag e, iso rawan miss gara2 zig zag campur ngejump 2x, jadi lek tak rasa ctrl+g en tapi tetep jump buat 00:20:784 (1) - ben lebih frenli la y
- 00:32:259 (6) - nc gae sv change podo mbe ex
- 00:42:915 (5) - coba 272,120 ben ngejump e konsisten? soal e next iku piye2 cymbal, rasa e aneh lek luwih cedek aku ga nggae snapping wkwkwkw yowes fix
- 00:51:440 (4) - iki kudu nc, iso2 kebaca 1/2 gara2 anti jump
- 01:42:259 (1,2,3,4) - krn musik e lagi agak kalem, coba 2 1/2 slider pake konsisten spacing ae? soal e jump2 mu nang kene lebih serem dari biasa e iki sengaja tak note ben keroso phasechange e sakdurunge instrumen maen
- 02:17:669 - cymbal ojok di map pake slider's tail ta, kurang kroso ngono ga greget (3) iki yaopo kadung reverse e, asik" ae wah prosoku

Insane :
- 01:28:817 (4,1) - consider reduce, jump e terlalu kuat imo yo
- 00:32:259 (2) - nc gae sv change podo mbe extra
- 00:51:440 (4) - podo karo hard oke la added

Extra :
- 00:24:800 - drum e banter iki, coba ga usah di gae jump ke stanza tapi triplet ae? ga sepiro kerungu dadi aku prefer jump ae
- 00:32:259 (2) - nc gae sv change aku ga seneng single nc, lagian keeping cek onok follow point e
- 00:40:948 (2,2) - ^ podo

kesamber opo arek iki sampe ngemap e angel2 ngene mboh gara" momoka ngomong insane gampang yowes aku ngebut gae extra lol

celuk maneh mari ngecek, lagu apik ngene ga manggil gd sedih gw pingine kabeh diff tak garap dewe soale wkwkw

btw aku mari takon kwan karo alacat mau jare title e sing bener "rarirurein" duduk "rariru rain" yowes tak ganti mesisan gaopo kan ? timbangane kenek diskualifikasi '-'

thx ce

Easy :
- 01:48:817 (1) - ga onok finish nang endas e terus nang kene 01:51:440 (1) - onok, gae konsisten wae (all diffs sisan)

Xinely wrote:

Easy :
- 01:48:817 (1) - ga onok finish nang endas e terus nang kene 01:51:440 (1) - onok, gae konsisten wae (all diffs sisan)

musik e banter dadi ga keroso lak ga onok lol. fix

Qualified ~

yeahhhhhhh more gochiusa please!!!

sendpie <3

02:34:903 (1,2,3) - these arent timed properly. The bpm lowers by about 10 at the start of the new timing section. You can hear 3 is slightly early as a result.

Changing the BPM to 173 will produce a more accurate rhythm.

While I'm here, why are there so many hit whistles in this chorus: 01:14:718 (3) - specifically why does this have a slider slide whistle, it just makes this section sound like a whistle mess with no real focus

Hey, just stopping by to confirm that timing is off. The first offset is early (and on the wrong stanza, btw) and the ending has very wonky timing. I'll post a correct timing when I have it.

Sorry that this is a 6th day disqualification. Shiro will be helping with the correct timing, so please be patient and good luck!

This works fine.

Shiro wrote:

This works fine.

I still think something like 170-175 for the last timing point is more appropriate. With that timing it sounds rather late on the last notes using 165

Xexxar wrote:

Shiro wrote:

This works fine.

I still think something like 170-175 for the last timing point is more appropriate. With that timing it sounds rather late on the last notes using 165

170 would match the drum. I went for the instruments, which are more prominent.

Xexxar wrote:

02:34:903 (1,2,3) - these arent timed properly. The bpm lowers by about 10 at the start of the new timing section. You can hear 3 is slightly early as a result.

Changing the BPM to 173 will produce a more accurate rhythm.

While I'm here, why are there so many hit whistles in this chorus: 01:14:718 (3) - specifically why does this have a slider slide whistle, it just makes this section sound like a whistle mess with no real focus i see, could you give me example which one should be deleted ? i reduced some whistle by myself though

Shiro wrote:

This works fine.

okay im using this timing, thanks !

updated for the meantime

I agree to Xexxar
I hear 165BPM is rather late. The feeling that 172~173BPM is natural
anyway, remove last green line

lol why that last greenline there, removed.
i changed the last timing to 170 since it sounds best for me, waiting if there're still someone who want to threw their opinion
updated

edit : fixed tags that pyonypyon said

A mistake of the tags,It should be 徳井青空 村川梨衣

[Hard]
01:01:283 (4) - slider end
02:33:087 (4) - slider reverse / end

call me back

Suggestion of some whistle
00:15:874 - Missing whistle
00:17:021 - 00:17:349 - swap whistle, 00:19:644 - I think that you follow the vocal. maybe...
01:02:923 (1) - whistle? The sound that a musical instrument, a vocal have a big
01:04:726 (3) - addddd
01:06:529 - Missing whistle.consistent with 02:04:234 -
01:13:415 - ^
01:18:988 (2) -
01:59:644 - consistent with 01:01:939 -
02:06:038 - swap 02:06:202 - ? if u fix 02:06:857 - add
02:22:267 (4) -
02:22:923 - swap 02:23:251 -
02:27:185 - swap 02:27:349 -
02:27:841 - missing whistle
02:30:300 (5) - add? 02:29:808 (2,3,4,5) - The feeling that four whistle has good

that's all.

Rizia wrote:

[Hard]
01:01:283 (4) - slider end
02:33:087 (4) - slider reverse / end

call me back

done ~

-Nanaka- wrote:

Suggestion of some whistle
00:15:874 - Missing whistle even if it has vocal i dont think it need it
00:17:021 - 00:17:349 - swap whistle, 00:19:644 - I think that you follow the vocal. maybe...
01:02:923 (1) - whistle? The sound that a musical instrument, a vocal have a big its fine imo
01:04:726 (3) - addddd
01:06:529 - Missing whistle.consistent with 02:04:234 -
01:13:415 - ^
01:18:988 (2) -
01:59:644 - consistent with 01:01:939 - deleted the other ones
02:06:038 - swap 02:06:202 - ? if u fix 02:06:857 - add
02:22:267 (4) -
02:22:923 - swap 02:23:251 -
02:27:185 - swap 02:27:349 -
02:27:841 - missing whistle
02:30:300 (5) - add? 02:29:808 (2,3,4,5) - The feeling that four whistle has good

that's all.

the others is fixed, thanks so much nanaka ! <3

rebub

tanoshii nee

grats kak

Congrats!

g

thanks everyone ! ><

What anime is this?