Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~
Everything I wrote below is my opinion, you don't have to agree with it, and if you have any questions feel free to ask me in game.

[General]

1. Basically your slider velocity choice is the biggest problem here, it's way too slow, if you really want to take my suggestion seriously, I would say some diffs need a revamp because of sv change, try comparing your map to ranked ones with the same bpm and you will see the difference. Here's what I recommend:
   
   1. Beginner : 0.80
   2. Standard : 1.00
   3. Advanced : 1.20
   4. The rest are fine, but in my opinion these difficulties have too low slider velocity, you don't need to change if you don't agree with me though.
2. You should take a look at your difficulty setting as well(AR,HP,OD) and then try comparing this with other ranked maps.

So basically changing slider velocity will cause you a revamp so I'll just give you a quick opinion of each diff instead.

[Beginner]

1. Recheck your DS pls it's quite inconsistent, you used 1.9 DS on 00:04:540 (1,2,3,4) and then 1.8 on 00:09:874 (1,2) so better do the same thing throughout the map. You can see DS value in the top-right corner in the editor, they are shown in yellow numbers.
2. Also I saw you did fade out the volume with green lines in this diff so make sure to do this in every diffs for consistency.
3. If you changed your slider velocity and you find it hard to put long sliders, try using a denser rhythm instead. From what I read in the thread, this was named as Easy before so if you feel like making it back to Easy then I recommend you to use a denser rhythm, I'll give you a few examples:
   
   1. 00:07:207 (3) - Can be made into a 3/2 repeat slider, there's a sound on 00:07:707 so you can put a reverse there.
   2. 00:31:874 (2) - This can be made into either a 1/1 repeat slider or a 1/1 slider + circle, there's a sound on 00:32:207 and you don't wanna miss it.
   3. Generally Easy consists with most 1/1 rhythms(meaning that almost every white ticks are mapped with objects) while Beginner consists with 2/1 rhythms(objects on every 2 white ticks)

[Standard]

1. I'll treat this diff as Normal.
2. DS stuff I said in Beginner also applies here as well.
3. Try not to make too much sv changes, something like 0.80-1.20 from green lines is acceptable but if possible try not to go further than that, mainly because players in this level aren't capable of handling big sv changes yet. In my opinion, this section 00:36:540 should use a faster slider velocity than 0.5 not only because the reason I mentioned earlier but making things too slow will make the gameplay too boring.
4. In Standard/Normal will occasionally filled with 1/2 rhythms, so red ticks are mapped occasionally, but most white ticks are mapped unless there's no sound on those ticks then they can be skipped. So I suggest adding some objects on red ticks, that would make the gameplay become more exciting.

Advanced is just like Standard with a bit denser rhythm and small jumps + patterns, it's not really much different from Normal so you would already understand the general idea of it.

[Hard]

1. 00:06:374 (2) - NC needs to be put on when you changed slider velocity so player can know what's going on.
2. 00:19:707 - This beat should be clickable instead of 00:19:874 because it's more prominent, I suggest removing the repeat from 00:19:207 (4) and start another slider on 00:19:707 instead.
3. 00:25:124 - There's a sound here, you can add a circle here and make it a triplet with 00:25:040 (2,3) .
4. 00:27:457 (2) - Unsnapped.
5. 00:36:207 (4,5) - Just my preference but the overlap is kinda hard to read so would be nice if you can space them a bit more.
6. 00:45:707 - There's a sound here so I recommend adding a circle.
7. 00:52:207 (4,5,6) - Would be a waste to put them all together, with 3 circles you can create some patterns for a better impact at the end.

So yeah, you don't have to give me kudosu if this mod didn't help you.
Good luck~

helpful mod. Thanks a lot

PolkaMocha wrote:

Mother of overmap.

From my mod queue.

mod

General:
BG seems a bit out of place for the song. Could be me though.

Beginner:

The over all circle slider ratio is very bad.

00:08:540 (4,1) - Beginner players will confuse (1)s tail for it's head because it is closer to the end of (4). Make the transition more obvious.

00:14:207 (2,3,1) - This overlap is unsightly and confusing for beginner players; they will have no idea how to play this. Avoid overlaps and make the pattern bit more simple.

00:15:207 (1,1) - Combos should be a different color from the last.

This giant slider overlap pattern is a mess. Very lazily mapped and hard to follow. Consider remapping.

00:28:540 (1,2) - Blanketing needs work.

00:36:540 (1) - Mapping this part would do better than a spinner.

00:46:874 (3) - Spacing needs to be consistent in beginner difficulties.

Standard:

00:07:207 (1,3) - Normal players will skip right to 3 after 1 because it is closer. Make 2 more visible in the line of flow.

00:20:540 (1,2,3) - Players might be confused about what plays next. Make the flow a bit more obvious.

00:23:540 (2,4) - This overlap is unsightly and makes things harder to read. Consider moving things around t get rid of this.

00:25:874 (1) - Spacing needs to be fixed.

00:29:874 (2,3) - Again with fixing the overlap.

00:31:207 (3,4) - These bow and arrow patterns only work if the tail is not under the slider body. Redo this part.

00:33:874 (1,2) - Blanketing needs work.

00:35:207 (2,1) - Spacing needs work.

Advanced:

00:04:540 (1,2) - Blanketing needs work.

00:05:290 (2,3,4,5) - Advanced is between normal and hard. This pattern is ridiculously over done considering that.

00:10:624 (5,6,7,8) - ^

00:12:207 (3,4,1) - Stacking these at this AR causes them to look like a triplet. Space these out.

00:12:540 (1,1) - Avoid this rather unattractive overlap by moving things around.

00:15:207 (1,2,3) - Poor confusing spacing making this very unreadable. Check distance snap and redo this.

00:16:207 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Redo this whole part with fixed spacing please.

00:19:207 (1,2,3,4) - ^

00:21:290 (2) - Confusing for advanced players as to where this happens in the timeline during play.

00:25:874 (1,2,3,1,2) - Not a very readable slider pattern. Consider adjusting slider lengths.

I'll stop here. As the same spacing and readability errors just pop up throughout the rest of the spread. Consider simplifying and neatening things up. Some guides on the wiki may help you out a bit.

Good luck with your map!

fixed, thanks for modding

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hi~ M4M request from #modreqs

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/469141

Another

This is so hard to sightread with AR9, with all the overlaps and shit, it's just so hectic having all of those weird patterns everywhere. I would bump this up to maybe 9.3 or 9.5 if you're going to have patterns like those.

00:14:207 (3,2) - Overlap just looks off
00:10:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing feels insanely awkward, i would make this into just a straight stream
00:24:540 (1,1) - The time window to hit these two without breaking is really difficult...
00:32:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Those are really the only specific mods i could gather. But this overall is just difficult to read with this AR and all these patterns everywhere. Make this just, flow cleaner and less hectic

Hard

00:04:540 (1,2,3) - For this i would just delete 2 and extend 1 to be right above 3, sounds cleaner and looks nicer.
00:07:207 (1,2) - Really similar note as the one above, just make this easier to read by moving 2 out from under 1.
00:26:874 (3,1,2) - Ugly overlap with 3 and 2

As for advanced, there are a lot of overlaps that just don't look as neat as they should be. This is a fun looking map, just the readability needs to be improved

Good luck

O-Moei wrote:

Hello !, NM from #modreqs. Ack !. Catchy !. Hope I can be helpful here !. Sorry, I'd just mod Beginner and Standard, gonna AFK soon.

General :
Has not picking Combo Colors ? Try to match 4 Combo Colors with the BG Characters' Hair Color. Seemed nice !

Beginner :
00:08:540 (4) - Can Smoother the blanket
00:13:207 (1) - I don't hear NC here
00:28:540 (1) - Remove NC and start NC here 00:31:207 (3) -
00:31:207 (5) - Start NC and remove NC here 00:31:874 (1) -
00:33:207 (5) - I heard strong sound here. Maybe you'd replace the SliderEnd with a Circle ?. If you'd do, start NC there and remove NC here 00:34:540 (1) -
00:39:540 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:874 (3) - I heard strong sound again here. Maybe you'd replace the SliderEnd with a Circle ?. If you'd do, start NC there then remove NC here 00:47:540 (1) -
00:51:207 (1) - Remove NC and NC here 00:52:540 (2) - as a Closing Scene. Lot of good mapper did that a lot
00:48:207 (2,3) - Notes too far (Checked from AIMod)

Standard :
00:13:874 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:540 (1) - Remove NC and start NC here 00:31:207 (5) -
00:33:874 (1) - Remove NC
00:47:290 (1) - SpinnerEnd Audio volume 10%

Good luck ! >w</

fixed, thanks for modding

doykyoto wrote:

sorry late update
im very busy right now
and i didn't want to online even i have spare time, sorry for being not responsibility.

i will give NM since HD still has many problems with

doy's NM

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: [M3-2016spr C-15b] [JK] saradisk - LOLMOdemo - http://www.Video-Lagu.COM -.mp3
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PreviewTime: 25874
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:LOLMO(demo)
TitleUnicode:LOLMO（demo）
Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:zosanfc
Version:doy's NM
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:kantai collection kancolle doykyoto
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thanks

Bubblun wrote:

From #modreqs

Beginner

SPOILER

00:05:874 (2) - Can this curve a little more (extend if have to) that way it gets blanketed better? fixed
00:08:540 (4) - Curve this just a little more. It makes it look better. fixed

Standard

SPOILER

00:27:207 (2) - Curve this a bit, it looks bad next to 3 because it's a straight slider going into a curved one. nah it looks ok

Advanced

SPOILER

00:32:207 (3) - Replace each end of the slider with a hit circle. The song is emphasizing a "bum-bum" not a "bum-bum-bum" actually it's 4 sounds start at blue tick but i put it in red tick
00:43:207 (2,1) - I think it looks better if you remove 1, and change the slider to this: http://puu.sh/pM7pm/06dd70a6f1.jpg fixed

Hard

SPOILER

00:05:040 (2) - Add a zig-zag thingy in the middle of the slider. (Don't remember what it's called, but it look like this: http://puu.sh/pM7Bs/6cc8ab87b0.jpg&#41 nah, the old one is fine
00:09:874 (1,2) - Curve the ends of these sliders into each other. nope
00:13:040 (2) - Curve this slider so it blankets 3 the slider is small, so i can't curve it, it's ugly
00:17:874 (1,2) - Curve the ends of these sliders into each other. nah 2
00:28:540 (1,2) - Curve the start of 1 so it blankets 2, and curve the end of 2 so it blankets 3. fixed

Another

SPOILER

00:12:040 (2) - Fix this overlap. fixed
00:17:707 (3) - ^ fixed
00:18:874 (1,2) - Make the ends of these sliders curve towards the 3rd slider. nah
00:20:790 (2) - Fix this overlap. fixed
00:33:374 (2) - ^ fixed

doykyoto wrote:

here is the HD update

doy's HD

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [M3-2016spr C-15b] [JK] saradisk - LOLMOdemo - www.Video-Lagu.COM -.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 25874
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:LOLMO(demo)
TitleUnicode:LOLMO（demo）
Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:zosanfc
Version:doy's HD
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:kantai collection kancolle doykyoto
BeatmapID:1008248
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"aJxyf0M.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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192,192,52374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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sorry for being late

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

add "Adot" on tags since it was his new username right now '3' forgot XD, fixed

yaleufeu wrote:

Ayy, I'm here from my modding queue !

Another

Hitsounds volume are way too high, lower them overall
00:25:540 (5) - Make a slider there until it reaches there 00:25:790, the direction of the slider aims the next one to follow the instrumental
00:37:207 (1) - Remove the hitsound
00:39:207 (1) - Finish hitsound on the beginning of the slider
00:40:374 (1) - Clap hitsound on all ticks
00:40:957 (3) - Clap hitsound on the end of the slider
00:41:874 (1) - Finish hitsound on the beginning of the slider
00:43:040 (1,2,3) - Clap hitsound on both single notes, and one at the beginning of the slider
00:43:457 (4) - Clap hitsound on the end of the slider
00:43:707 (5) - Same here
00:44:540 (1) - Finish hitsound on the beginning of the slider
00:45:040 (2) - Clap hitsound on all ticks
00:45:707 (1) - Clap hitsound on all ticks
00:46:040 (2) - Check aiMod
00:46:290 (3) - Remove the clap hitsound on the beginning of the slider
00:46:540 (1) - Remove the clap hitsound on the ending of the slider, make a clap hitsound on the beginning of the slider
00:46:874 (1) - Remove the clap hitsound on the ending of the slider
00:47:207 (1) - Finish hitsound

That's all for me, I hope I helped you

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

self mod owo

Hotaru's EZ

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [M3-2016spr C-15b] [JK] saradisk - LOLMOdemo - www.Video-Lagu.COM -.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 25874
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:LOLMO(demo)
TitleUnicode:LOLMO（demo）
Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:zosanfc
Version:Hotaru's EZ
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:kantai collection kancolle Adot P i k u -[Hotaru]-
BeatmapID:1031784
BeatmapSetID:464839

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"aJxyf0M.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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25874,-100,4,2,5,15,0,1
36540,-100,4,2,5,15,0,0


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Jusenkyo wrote:

Piku's Rain

1. 00:06:124 (2,1) - This did not put a hdash, but 00:27:457 (2,1) - here yes, still the same sound could add to the hdash you maintain consistency. | Actually I wouldn't agree with it being the same sound, it's a bit stronger in the kiai section.
2. 00:28:540 (1,2,3,4) - This part I find it very difficult, if you reduce distance or add hdash to fit, it would be easier. | Reduced spacing
3. 00:31:207 (1,2,3) - ^, the same. | ^, Same
4. 00:40:540 (1,2) - These sliders think they're upside down, ie should first go the longest and after the short, as you did 00:37:874 (1,2) - here, if you do'd keep consistency as it is the same sound. | Not sure what you meant here, but I think I fixed it correctly
5. 00:37:874 (1,2) - Needs a hdash, To maintain consistency 00:44:457 (8,1) -here. | Did you paste the wrong time stamp?
6. Is all I could find, it is a very good map, although the sounds of the songs are a bit confusing and sometimes used overmap. Don't use it.

I hope I can help, and if I did, I'd appreciate me know, luck with the map.

osu file format v14

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Artist:saradisk
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Creator:zosanfc
Version:Piku's Rain
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:kantai collection kancolle Adot P i k u -[Hotaru]-
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P i k u wrote:

Jusenkyo wrote:

Piku's Rain

1. 00:06:124 (2,1) - This did not put a hdash, but 00:27:457 (2,1) - here yes, still the same sound could add to the hdash you maintain consistency. | Actually I wouldn't agree with it being the same sound, it's a bit stronger in the kiai section.
2. 00:28:540 (1,2,3,4) - This part I find it very difficult, if you reduce distance or add hdash to fit, it would be easier. | Reduced spacing
3. 00:31:207 (1,2,3) - ^, the same. | ^, Same
4. 00:40:540 (1,2) - These sliders think they're upside down, ie should first go the longest and after the short, as you did 00:37:874 (1,2) - here, if you do'd keep consistency as it is the same sound. | Not sure what you meant here, but I think I fixed it correctly
5. 00:37:874 (1,2) - Needs a hdash, To maintain consistency 00:44:457 (8,1) -here. | Did you paste the wrong time stamp?
6. Is all I could find, it is a very good map, although the sounds of the songs are a bit confusing and sometimes used overmap. Don't use it.

I hope I can help, and if I did, I'd appreciate me know, luck with the map.

Thank you for the mod!

Update

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: [M3-2016spr C-15b] [JK] saradisk - LOLMOdemo - www.Video-Lagu.COM -.mp3
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Title:LOLMO(demo)
TitleUnicode:LOLMO（demo）
Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:zosanfc
Version:Piku's Rain
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:kantai collection kancolle Adot P i k u -[Hotaru]-
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Lilyanna wrote:

hi nm from my queue


Standard
00:24:540 (4,1) - imo kinda overlapping try something no because it's very hard to read with new players

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00:36:540 (1,1,1,1,2) - maybe avoid the sv change in normal u have advanced use that there it's fine i think
00:27:207 (2,3) - this may look better fixed

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Hard
00:08:874 - there is beat here why u dont do like u did here 00:07:207 (1,2) - same here 00:11:540 - add note at white tcik fixed
00:12:874 - ^ fixed
00:14:207 - ^ the downbeat feels like it needs to be clicked for me but i think i don't have to add a note on that time
00:27:457 (2,3) - imo this doesnt look appealing and it flow wierd fixed i think
00:36:540 (5) - nc maybe nope
00:50:874 (4) - maybe change to two circle notes like u did here 00:49:540 (3,4) - just for rythm consistency fixed
i hope this helped
Good luck

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey from modding queue for NM ^^

Beginner:

Changing SV on this difficulty level is usually a bad idea ^^ well, i'll consider about this, i think it's fine on my map

00:15:207 (1,1) - kinda weird looking fixed
00:25:874 (1,2,3) - map a little more here imo okay, fixed

I guess that's it ^^

Standard:

Also avoid SV changes here ^^

00:13:874 (5,1,2) - realign i don't really understand this means you means stack?
00:21:207 (3,4) - blanket is not perfect, I think you'll need more points fixed
I agree with Lilyanna on the 00:27:207 (2,3) -

Advanced:

Hm nothing to add ^^

Hard:

Make this ar7 imo AR7 incuming

00:30:124 (2,1) - this overlaps too much fixed that i think...
00:36:624 (1) - replace that, this doesn't fit at all okay, fixed

That's it ^^ Consider gradually lowering volume at the end on all maps i'll but not now lel

Len wrote:

from q

General:

1. add tick hitsounds is better!
2. the diff gap between Hard and Another isnt good. i think you have to add Insane I'll consider all this because it's very hard to find good GD

Beginner:

1. what do you think about change the diff name to Easy okay changed
2. 00:15:207 - i dont know why you added 0.5sv greenline here! was confused if everyone say that... i'll change to 0.75sv (i need you comeback to see TTvTT
3. 00:23:207 (1,1,2) - no overlap pls even you did blanket.......
4. 00:39:874 (3) - make a awesome http://puu.sh/qfGEY/04284cacc7.jpg

Standard:

1. 00:31:207 (5) - nc fixed

Advanced:

1. 00:15:207 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - im not sure about this. suddenly distance changed in this part, beat is slower so i think this reasonable

Hard:

1. diff name should be "Hyper" changed

Another:

1. ar9 is better fixed
2. 00:09:457 (5,6) - lazy stack miss fixed
3. 00:10:124 (2,3) - ^ fixed
4. 00:12:040 (2) - make a jump? no need to stack on 1's tail imo fixed
5. 00:16:207 (1,2,3,4) - this maps bpm isnt 60 pls fixed
6. 00:24:207 (2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed
7. 00:24:540 (1,1) - so loud fixed
8. 00:25:540 (5) - add nc is better fixed
9. 00:32:375 (4,5) - just wtf fixed
10. 00:37:707 (1,2,3) - i dont know why u stacked with 00:37:540 (3) - because it's handedness when i play it
11. 00:43:207 - no drum clap thx..... i don't remember i did that XD btw fixed

goodluck!

Thanks for all the mod I hope you guys can comeback and check it again

No_sync wrote:

hi! Hii Senpie >w<)b

zonsanfc's bring me here to mod hotaru diff only! :3

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3

General Hotaru's EZ

I think the OD, for this diff is too low, might the HP too.
Suggestion: OD=7 | HP=6.5 | For me if only the OD is increased will be enough. (at least a bit) I'm Not Pretty Sure if I Increase OD into 7 since it's Just E icon Difficulty but i'll increase it into 6.5 '3')b

I think the diff in general have some notes left, like 00:04:874 to 00:05:540. Up to you because is a EZ diff... ahh about this part.. i follow the pitch owo since the sound has same Volume also Majority Heard on my left Ears xD and it's okay since the snaps just 2/1

Hotaru's EZ

I think you need move notes a bit, especially those kicks... the snares can be "stairs" (consecutive between columns) but the kicks need to be separated from at least 1 or 2 columns.
That will help to understand what sounds are more loud. Oki oki

00:00:874 (874|2) - to |0| naisu

00:01:540 (1540|0) - to |3| re arrangedi other ways XD

00:01:707 (1707|3,1874|2) - ^^ for evade jacks, move these notes one line/column to left. ^

00:02:207 (2207|0) - to |3| oki

00:02:874 (2874|1) - to |0| nice

00:03:207 (3207|2) - to |3| oki dess

00:03:540 (3540|3) - to |1| noo Dess :> i'ts For Ballance

00:03:707 (3707|0,3874|1,4040|2) - Ctrl+H not ballance :<

00:04:207 (4207|0) - to |3| Noo dess :>

00:04:540 (4540|2) - Move to |0| And a note for cymbal/(soft finish) here, in |1|. added and arranged In Other ways.. For ballance ofc

00:04:874 (4874|0) - to |3| Keep

00:06:124 (6124|2) - to |0| keep for now i guess.. It's More ballance Imo

00:06:374 (6374|1) - to |2| ^

00:07:207 (7207|0) - I dont hear a cymbal clearly here, if you hear that add a note in |1|. Ahh... Actually i Hear it.. But it's Too faint.. and also i add 2 cymbal For Emphasis Too :3

00:08:874 (8874|1) - to |0| For Sure '3')b

00:09:374 - Add a note in |1| Nope i guess.. Too Faint Right There

00:09:540 (9540|3,9707|2) - Ctrl+G For Ballance Keep

00:09:874 (9874|0) - Add a note in |1| cymbal. . . . i see a pattern here mmm... Same as before xD

00:10:874 (10874|2,11040|1,11207|0) - Ctrl+J Arranged in other ways

00:11:540 (11540|2) - to |0| i move it to 3 For ballance xD

00:12:207 (12207|0) - to |3| keep

00:14:207 (14207|3) - to |0| keep For Now.. For Ballance

00:14:540 (14540|2) - to |3| ^

00:15:207 (15207|0) - to |2| and add a note in |3| for cymbal. re arranged in other ways

00:15:540 (15540|2) - to |0| ^

00:16:874 (16874|2) - to |3| oki dess

00:17:874 (17874|1) - to |3| Keep For Now

00:18:207 (18207|2) - to |1| ^

00:18:874 (18874|3,19207|1,19540|2) - One column to the left... hmmm I guess i keep It For Now

00:19:540 - ^^moved, to |2| ^

00:19:874 (19874|0) - to |1| ^

00:20:207 (20207|1) - to |3| ^

00:20:540 (20540|3) - to |0| and add a note for cymbal in |1| added and also re arranged

00:20:874 (20874|1) - to |3| Keep

00:21:540 (21540|1) - to |0| oki

00:21:874 (21874|0) - to |3| oki

00:22:207 (22207|2) - to |1| keep

00:22:874 (22874|0) - to |3| keep i folow the pitch

00:23:207 (23207|1) - i think is only a kick... might a cymbal. Is just a note. if was cymbal, add in |0|... up to you. There's a cymbal But It's a lil bit faint soo yeah just 1 xD

00:23:540 (23540|2) - to |3| keep For Now I Have a reason for this :>

00:25:874 (25874|0) - cymbal... Add a note in |1| okii

00:26:207 (26207|1) - to |3| Keep For Now I'm Not really sure

00:26:874 (26874|3) - to |1| Noo Dess :> For Ballance

00:27:207 (27207|1) - to |3| ^

00:27:540 (27540|2) - to |1| ^

00:28:540 (28540|1) - to |3| and add a note in |2| for cymbal. keep It's a lilbit more Slow Than Other Sound

00:28:874 (28874|3) - to |0| keep i guess

00:29:540 (29540|1) - to |2| keep For ballance

00:30:207 (30207|2) - to |0| ^

00:30:540 (30540|3,30874|1) - move these notes one column to the left... And 00:30:707 - Add a note in |1| add Note and arranged in other ways

00:31:207 (31207|2) - snare + kick... Add a note in |3|oki

00:32:874 (32874|2) - to |3| Nooo Dess

00:34:207 (34207|2) - to |0| oki

00:35:207 (35207|0) - to |3| oki

00:35:540 (35540|2) - to |1| keep For Now i guess

00:35:874 (35874|1) - to |3| ^

00:36:207 (36207|3) - to |0| ^

00:36:540 (36540|2) - ... Add a note in |1|. cymbal. I Forgot about it xD

00:38:207 (38207|1) - to |3| keep i guess For ballance

00:38:540 (38540|2) - to |0| keep For Now It's For ballance

00:39:207 (39207|3,39207|0) - Just saying, here is a doblenote, and here: 00:41:874 (41874|0) - doesnt. . .
I think you need add that note... well lets continue: aahh about this.. Actually The Part You Point Out it's Really Good For Emphasis Soo yep i accept it owo)b

00:40:207 (40207|1) - to |0| oki

00:40:874 (40874|2) - to |1| keep :>

00:41:207 (41207|1) - to |3| ^

00:41:540 (41540|3) - to |0| ^

00:41:707 (41707|2) - to |1| ^

00:41:874 (41874|0) - to |3| and because 00:39:207 (39207|3,39207|0) thing, add a note in |2|. Nah I guess

00:42:374 (42374|2) - to |0| keep for now

00:42:540 (42540|1) - to |3| ^

00:42:874 (42874|3) - to |1| ^

00:43:540 (43540|1) - to |0| ^

00:45:374 (45374|1,45540|2) - Ctrl+G Not Ballance :>>>

00:47:874 (47874|1) - to |0| Nope :<<

00:48:207 (48207|0) - to |3| No dess Keep

00:48:540 (48540|1) - to |2| Keep

00:48:874 (48874|2) - to |1| ^

00:49:207 (49207|3) - to |2| ^

00:49:374 - Add a note here is left... in |1|. oki

00:49:540 (49540|1) - to |0| nope for ballance

00:49:874 (49874|3) - Add a note in |2| is like a cymbal... added in other ways

00:52:374 (52374|1) - to |3| Nope i guess

00:52:540 (52540|2) - its like 00:49:874 (49874|3) for me, add a note in |1|. Nope I guess it's Faint

I enjoy more the last part, than those clowns sounds in the start and middle of the song to be honest, lol.

Hope you like this, bye! jaa >w<)/ have a nice day

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Len wrote:

from q

Piku:

1. overdose? | Yeah that thought crossed my mind, but I'm waiting for other people to say something about this
2. 00:06:124 (2) - x280 is good | Yeah

goodluck!

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64,320,6374,6,0,L|80:296,17,27.9999988079071,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
168,224,7207,6,0,L|336:224,2,167.999992847443,4|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,7957,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,296,8124,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,264,8207,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,240,8290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,8374,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,192,8457,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,144,8540,6,0,P|480:224|456:304,1,167.999992847443,0|4,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,8874,2,0,L|176:320,2,111.999995231628,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,9374,1,0,1:0:0:0:
120,216,9540,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,168,9624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,112,9707,1,0,1:0:0:0:
120,64,9790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,144,9874,6,0,L|456:144,1,111.999995231628,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,10124,2,0,L|120:240,2,167.999992847443,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,288,10790,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,288,10874,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,240,10957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,11040,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,136,11124,1,0,1:0:0:0:
400,112,11207,6,0,L|480:192,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,11457,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,328,11707,2,0,L|56:160,1,167.999992847443,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,12040,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,176,12207,5,0,1:0:0:0:
296,208,12374,1,0,1:0:0:0:
40,136,12540,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,128,12707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,12874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,304,13040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,13124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,304,13207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,13290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,232,13374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,232,13457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,232,13540,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,13624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,13707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,88,13791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,296,13874,6,0,L|432:296,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,14207,2,0,L|32:296,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,14540,2,0,L|432:184,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,256,14874,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,232,14957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,176,15040,1,0,1:0:0:0:
152,152,15124,1,0,1:0:0:0:
296,312,15207,6,0,L|464:312,2,167.999992847443,4|0|4,1:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,15957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,16124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,168,16207,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,256,16374,1,4,3:0:0:0:
328,208,16457,1,4,3:0:0:0:
296,168,16540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,192,16707,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,136,16790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,72,17040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,17207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,17290,1,4,3:0:0:0:
272,48,17374,1,4,3:0:0:0:
416,88,17540,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,256,17707,1,4,3:0:0:0:
248,208,17790,1,4,3:0:0:0:
80,144,17874,6,0,P|40:232|80:312,1,167.999992847443,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,18374,1,4,3:0:0:0:
112,208,18624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,264,18790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,18874,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,160,18957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,19040,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,88,19124,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,88,19207,6,0,P|40:160|96:224,1,167.999992847443,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,19540,2,0,L|328:272,1,111.999995231628,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,216,19874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,176,19957,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,120,20040,2,0,L|280:160,1,111.999995231628,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,20290,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,264,20374,1,8,1:0:0:0:
280,312,20457,1,8,1:0:0:0:
448,160,20540,6,0,L|440:328,1,167.999992847443,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,344,20874,1,8,3:0:0:0:
256,328,21040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,256,21207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,21290,1,4,3:0:0:0:
344,160,21374,1,4,3:0:0:0:
200,80,21540,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,64,21707,1,4,3:0:0:0:
328,104,21790,1,4,3:0:0:0:
160,192,21874,6,0,L|80:272,1,111.999995231628,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,320,22124,1,4,3:0:0:0:
248,272,22290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,256,22457,1,4,3:0:0:0:
88,200,22540,1,4,3:0:0:0:
72,144,22624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,22790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,136,22874,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,192,23040,1,4,3:0:0:0:
360,240,23124,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,320,23207,6,0,L|112:240,1,111.999995231628
192,184,23457,2,0,L|312:64,1,167.999992847443,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,23874,1,4,3:0:0:0:
152,104,23957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,224,24124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,168,24207,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,160,24374,1,4,3:0:0:0:
432,320,24540,6,0,L|424:280,2,27.9999988079071,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
376,248,24707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,24790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,152,24874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,24957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,48,25040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,16,25124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,56,25207,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,80,25249,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,104,25290,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,32,25374,5,0,1:0:0:0:
240,72,25457,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,120,25540,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,136,25624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,176,25707,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,224,25790,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,304,25874,6,0,L|168:304,1,111.999995231628,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,216,26124,2,0,L|224:216,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,128,26374,2,0,L|168:128,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,40,26624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,32,26790,1,0,1:0:0:0:
432,72,26874,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,128,26957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,184,27040,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,224,27124,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,280,27207,5,0,1:0:0:0:
384,288,27457,1,8,1:0:0:0:
40,304,27707,6,0,L|24:272,18,27.9999988079071,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,304,28540,6,0,L|208:304,1,111.999995231628
320,352,28790,2,0,L|320:240,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,29040,2,0,L|376:56,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,96,29290,2,0,L|320:96,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,29540,6,0,L|200:248,1,111.999995231628,0|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,29790,1,8,1:0:0:0:
424,272,29874,2,0,L|432:160,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,30124,2,0,L|312:56,1,167.999992847443,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
32,48,30540,5,0,1:0:0:0:
48,104,30624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,152,30707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,30790,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,200,30873,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,248,30957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,31040,1,8,1:0:0:0:
152,304,31124,1,8,1:0:0:0:
320,328,31207,6,0,L|400:248,1,111.999995231628,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,240,31457,2,0,L|312:128,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,31707,2,0,L|320:112,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,31957,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,216,32207,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,208,32374,5,0,1:0:0:0:
200,96,32540,2,0,L|368:96,2,167.999992847443,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,33207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,33290,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,88,33374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,248,33540,2,0,L|88:208,1,55.9999976158142,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,33707,2,0,L|296:256,1,55.9999976158142,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,33874,5,4,1:0:0:0:
16,216,34040,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,152,34207,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,48,34374,1,0,1:0:0:0:
456,96,34457,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,152,34540,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,208,34624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
456,264,34707,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,304,34790,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,336,34874,5,0,1:0:0:0:
248,312,34915,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,34957,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,256,35040,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,232,35082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
200,208,35124,1,0,1:0:0:0:
288,80,35207,6,0,L|280:248,1,167.999992847443,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,216,35540,2,0,L|120:328,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,320,35874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,272,35957,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,224,36040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,36207,1,0,1:0:0:0:
232,104,36249,1,0,1:0:0:0:
224,128,36290,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,176,36374,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,200,36415,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,224,36457,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,296,36540,6,0,P|416:216|352:128,1,223.999990463257,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,37040,2,0,L|208:80,1,111.999995231628,4|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,72,37540,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,176,37707,1,0,1:0:0:0:
456,192,37874,6,0,L|464:80,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,38124,2,0,L|288:336,1,167.999992847443,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,312,38540,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,336,38707,2,8,L|160:288,4,27.9999988079071
312,232,39040,1,8,1:0:0:0:
48,288,39207,6,0,L|56:64,1,223.999990463257,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,39707,2,0,L|120:144,2,111.999995231628,4|0|0,3:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,200,40207,1,4,3:0:0:0:
232,272,40374,1,0,1:0:0:0:
376,120,40540,6,0,L|384:232,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
216,296,40790,2,0,L|208:128,1,167.999992847443,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
472,288,41207,2,0,L|392:208,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,120,41540,1,8,1:0:0:0:
256,96,41707,1,8,1:0:0:0:
88,336,41874,6,0,P|32:248|88:152,1,223.999990463257,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,42374,1,4,3:0:0:0:
344,232,42540,2,0,L|424:152,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,42874,2,0,L|200:224,1,111.999995231628,4|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
344,200,43207,6,0,L|424:120,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,43457,2,0,L|136:40,1,167.999992847443,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,40,43874,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,40,44040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,44207,1,0,3:0:0:0:
360,96,44290,1,0,3:0:0:0:
360,152,44374,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,200,44457,1,0,3:0:0:0:
168,344,44540,6,0,L|160:120,1,223.999990463257,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,45040,1,4,3:0:0:0:
160,176,45207,2,0,L|152:64,1,111.999995231628,0|4,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
320,40,45540,1,4,3:0:0:0:
184,56,45707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,216,45874,6,0,L|448:216,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,46124,2,0,L|152:280,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,46374,1,0,1:0:0:0:
360,96,46540,6,2,L|368:144,7,27.9999988079071,2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,272,46874,2,2,L|296:320,7,27.9999988079071
368,320,47207,1,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,47374,12,0,52540,0:0:0:0:

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

No_sync wrote:

hi! Hii Senpie >w<)b

zonsanfc's bring me here to mod hotaru diff only! :3

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3

General Hotaru's EZ

I think the OD, for this diff is too low, might the HP too.
Suggestion: OD=7 | HP=6.5 | For me if only the OD is increased will be enough. (at least a bit) I'm Not Pretty Sure if I Increase OD into 7 since it's Just E icon Difficulty but i'll increase it into 6.5 '3')b

I think the diff in general have some notes left, like 00:04:874 to 00:05:540. Up to you because is a EZ diff... ahh about this part.. i follow the pitch owo since the sound has same Volume also Majority Heard on my left Ears xD and it's okay since the snaps just 2/1

Hotaru's EZ

I think you need move notes a bit, especially those kicks... the snares can be "stairs" (consecutive between columns) but the kicks need to be separated from at least 1 or 2 columns.
That will help to understand what sounds are more loud. Oki oki

00:00:874 (874|2) - to |0| naisu

00:01:540 (1540|0) - to |3| re arrangedi other ways XD

00:01:707 (1707|3,1874|2) - ^^ for evade jacks, move these notes one line/column to left. ^

00:02:207 (2207|0) - to |3| oki

00:02:874 (2874|1) - to |0| nice

00:03:207 (3207|2) - to |3| oki dess

00:03:540 (3540|3) - to |1| noo Dess :> i'ts For Ballance

00:03:707 (3707|0,3874|1,4040|2) - Ctrl+H not ballance :<

00:04:207 (4207|0) - to |3| Noo dess :>

00:04:540 (4540|2) - Move to |0| And a note for cymbal/(soft finish) here, in |1|. added and arranged In Other ways.. For ballance ofc

00:04:874 (4874|0) - to |3| Keep

00:06:124 (6124|2) - to |0| keep for now i guess.. It's More ballance Imo

00:06:374 (6374|1) - to |2| ^

00:07:207 (7207|0) - I dont hear a cymbal clearly here, if you hear that add a note in |1|. Ahh... Actually i Hear it.. But it's Too faint.. and also i add 2 cymbal For Emphasis Too :3

00:08:874 (8874|1) - to |0| For Sure '3')b

00:09:374 - Add a note in |1| Nope i guess.. Too Faint Right There

00:09:540 (9540|3,9707|2) - Ctrl+G For Ballance Keep

00:09:874 (9874|0) - Add a note in |1| cymbal. . . . i see a pattern here mmm... Same as before xD

00:10:874 (10874|2,11040|1,11207|0) - Ctrl+J Arranged in other ways

00:11:540 (11540|2) - to |0| i move it to 3 For ballance xD

00:12:207 (12207|0) - to |3| keep

00:14:207 (14207|3) - to |0| keep For Now.. For Ballance

00:14:540 (14540|2) - to |3| ^

00:15:207 (15207|0) - to |2| and add a note in |3| for cymbal. re arranged in other ways

00:15:540 (15540|2) - to |0| ^

00:16:874 (16874|2) - to |3| oki dess

00:17:874 (17874|1) - to |3| Keep For Now

00:18:207 (18207|2) - to |1| ^

00:18:874 (18874|3,19207|1,19540|2) - One column to the left... hmmm I guess i keep It For Now

00:19:540 - ^^moved, to |2| ^

00:19:874 (19874|0) - to |1| ^

00:20:207 (20207|1) - to |3| ^

00:20:540 (20540|3) - to |0| and add a note for cymbal in |1| added and also re arranged

00:20:874 (20874|1) - to |3| Keep

00:21:540 (21540|1) - to |0| oki

00:21:874 (21874|0) - to |3| oki

00:22:207 (22207|2) - to |1| keep

00:22:874 (22874|0) - to |3| keep i folow the pitch

00:23:207 (23207|1) - i think is only a kick... might a cymbal. Is just a note. if was cymbal, add in |0|... up to you. There's a cymbal But It's a lil bit faint soo yeah just 1 xD

00:23:540 (23540|2) - to |3| keep For Now I Have a reason for this :>

00:25:874 (25874|0) - cymbal... Add a note in |1| okii

00:26:207 (26207|1) - to |3| Keep For Now I'm Not really sure

00:26:874 (26874|3) - to |1| Noo Dess :> For Ballance

00:27:207 (27207|1) - to |3| ^

00:27:540 (27540|2) - to |1| ^

00:28:540 (28540|1) - to |3| and add a note in |2| for cymbal. keep It's a lilbit more Slow Than Other Sound

00:28:874 (28874|3) - to |0| keep i guess

00:29:540 (29540|1) - to |2| keep For ballance

00:30:207 (30207|2) - to |0| ^

00:30:540 (30540|3,30874|1) - move these notes one column to the left... And 00:30:707 - Add a note in |1| add Note and arranged in other ways

00:31:207 (31207|2) - snare + kick... Add a note in |3|oki

00:32:874 (32874|2) - to |3| Nooo Dess

00:34:207 (34207|2) - to |0| oki

00:35:207 (35207|0) - to |3| oki

00:35:540 (35540|2) - to |1| keep For Now i guess

00:35:874 (35874|1) - to |3| ^

00:36:207 (36207|3) - to |0| ^

00:36:540 (36540|2) - ... Add a note in |1|. cymbal. I Forgot about it xD

00:38:207 (38207|1) - to |3| keep i guess For ballance

00:38:540 (38540|2) - to |0| keep For Now It's For ballance

00:39:207 (39207|3,39207|0) - Just saying, here is a doblenote, and here: 00:41:874 (41874|0) - doesnt. . .
I think you need add that note... well lets continue: aahh about this.. Actually The Part You Point Out it's Really Good For Emphasis Soo yep i accept it owo)b

00:40:207 (40207|1) - to |0| oki

00:40:874 (40874|2) - to |1| keep :>

00:41:207 (41207|1) - to |3| ^

00:41:540 (41540|3) - to |0| ^

00:41:707 (41707|2) - to |1| ^

00:41:874 (41874|0) - to |3| and because 00:39:207 (39207|3,39207|0) thing, add a note in |2|. Nah I guess

00:42:374 (42374|2) - to |0| keep for now

00:42:540 (42540|1) - to |3| ^

00:42:874 (42874|3) - to |1| ^

00:43:540 (43540|1) - to |0| ^

00:45:374 (45374|1,45540|2) - Ctrl+G Not Ballance :>>>

00:47:874 (47874|1) - to |0| Nope :<<

00:48:207 (48207|0) - to |3| No dess Keep

00:48:540 (48540|1) - to |2| Keep

00:48:874 (48874|2) - to |1| ^

00:49:207 (49207|3) - to |2| ^

00:49:374 - Add a note here is left... in |1|. oki

00:49:540 (49540|1) - to |0| nope for ballance

00:49:874 (49874|3) - Add a note in |2| is like a cymbal... added in other ways

00:52:374 (52374|1) - to |3| Nope i guess

00:52:540 (52540|2) - its like 00:49:874 (49874|3) for me, add a note in |1|. Nope I guess it's Faint

I enjoy more the last part, than those clowns sounds in the start and middle of the song to be honest, lol.

Hope you like this, bye! jaa >w<)/ have a nice day

Thanks >w<)b
Here's Updateto Dessu
Sorry for taking Too Long ;w;
It's really hard to find A Good HS For This map ;w;

Hotaru's EZ

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P i k u wrote:

Len wrote:

from q

Piku:

1. overdose? | Yeah that thought crossed my mind, but I'm waiting for other people to say something about this
2. 00:06:124 (2) - x280 is good | Yeah

goodluck!

Thank you

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320,352,28790,2,0,L|320:240,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,29040,2,0,L|376:56,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,96,29290,2,0,L|320:96,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,29540,6,0,L|200:248,1,111.999995231628,0|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,29790,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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320,224,30124,2,0,L|312:56,1,167.999992847443,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
32,48,30540,5,0,1:0:0:0:
48,104,30624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,152,30707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,30790,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,200,30873,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,248,30957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,31040,1,8,1:0:0:0:
152,304,31124,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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312,240,31457,2,0,L|312:128,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,272,31957,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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56,208,32374,5,0,1:0:0:0:
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408,88,33374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,304,33874,5,4,1:0:0:0:
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472,208,34624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
456,264,34707,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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248,312,34915,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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184,256,35040,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,232,35082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
200,208,35124,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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456,320,35874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,272,35957,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,224,36040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,36207,1,0,1:0:0:0:
232,104,36249,1,0,1:0:0:0:
224,128,36290,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,176,36374,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,200,36415,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,224,36457,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,296,36540,6,0,P|416:216|352:128,1,223.999990463257,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,37040,2,0,L|208:80,1,111.999995231628,4|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,72,37540,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,176,37707,1,0,1:0:0:0:
456,192,37874,6,0,L|464:80,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,38124,2,0,L|288:336,1,167.999992847443,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,312,38540,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,336,38707,2,8,L|160:288,4,27.9999988079071
312,232,39040,1,8,1:0:0:0:
48,288,39207,6,0,L|56:64,1,223.999990463257,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,39707,2,0,L|120:144,2,111.999995231628,4|0|0,3:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,200,40207,1,4,3:0:0:0:
232,272,40374,1,0,1:0:0:0:
376,120,40540,6,0,L|384:232,1,111.999995231628,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
216,296,40790,2,0,L|208:128,1,167.999992847443,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,120,41540,1,8,1:0:0:0:
256,96,41707,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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304,40,43874,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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Bow Queue

1. Okay, as in, I can not completely mod this. Because even though it's a really short song, the map itself is just chaotic. The spacing is really big, and easy to be misread. And spacing and density wise, is quite a jump from your Hyper. Patterns like 00:05:457 - / 00:05:540 - / 00:05:707 - could be read as a 1/2 rhythm, rather than a 1/4 rhythm. Based upon the spacing that you've used here. It also does not help that you jump from AR 7 in your Hyper to AR 9 in your Another. Are you planning to add a difficulty inbetween the two of these? Because that would be highly recommended to make the spread flow a lot easier.
2. Again, spacing. Things like 00:08:540 - and 00:08:790 - should be spacing about as far as the tail of the slider at 00:08:540 - and the circle + slider at 00:09:124 - + 00:09:207 - But they can be a bit further. Not basically in the opposite direction, like you currently have it.
3. 00:09:457 - / 00:09:540 - / 00:09:707 - This could be read as a 1/2 rhythm rather than the 1/4 mapping you have here, like at 00:05:457 -
4. 00:09:874 - / 00:10:124 - / 00:10:207 - / 00:10:457 - Basically the same as above, except a lot worse in terms of spacing for readability.
5. 00:10:790 - to 00:11:124 - If you're going to have a stream that leads into 00:11:207 - at least have them connected to each other. As is, most people would wind up missing 00:11:207 - completely because they would assume there is a pause inbetween notes.
6. 00:11:207 - / 00:11:457 - / 00:11:540 - You see here is a good example for better spacing to use for 1/4 patterns like this. It would be a lot better if you could implement this over the course of the whole map though, because again your spacing is pretty inconsistent.
7. 00:11:874 - and 00:12:040 - These also should be a bit closer, considering the bpm and it being a 1/4 slider with a note directly after.
8. 00:12:207 - and 00:12:374 - These two sliders have the same problem as 00:09:540 -
9. Honestly from the above on, the spacing just gets even bigger and more inconsistent. I get that harder difficulties aren't supposed to have super consistent spacing, but I hope you can understand what I mean by inconsistent. Because jumps will not be consistent, that's why they're called jumps. But just the basic patterns you are using, are not even consistent with each other, when the music does not change enough to call for such spacing.
10. Overall, I think that this difficulty will need a lot of work to be actually readable and enjoyable to play.