Aqours - Kimi no Kokoro wa Kagayaiteru kai?

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-NanoRIPE-
hi a noob modder here'
Aqours <3

[Easy]
hi emillia

00:01:099 (1) - set the sampleset to soft?
00:13:131 (2) - ctrl j for better flow
00:15:274 (2,4) - stacked (for better placement)
00:16:923 (1,2,3) - bad flow imo
00:27:472 (1,2) - blanket pls :>
00:29:450 (3,2) - overlap (maybe try to stacked it?)
00:37:033 (3,4) - if i'm is you i will increase the slider and blanket it
00:40:329 (3,2) - stacked?
01:07:857 (2) - move little bit up? for better placement
02:12:967 (1,2,3,4) - make variation (it looks boring if you just add 1/1 sliders)
02:18:901 (2) - remove clap (it looks unnecessary)

your diff style like rizia

[Normal]
00:01:428 (1) - same as easy
00:14:285 - make it clickable please (strong beat there)
00:47:088 - try this rhythm http://prnt.sc/c3f92p
01:51:373 (1) - unnecessarey nc
01:53:351 (4) - make the sliderend on white tick (looks awkward imo)
01:57:142 - drag the break here (same as easy)
02:39:835 - add spinner here?

nice diff

[Hard]
hi bara ~

00:10:824 - move the circle here (vocal emphatize)
01:11:813 (6,7) - remove these circle and add a slider?
01:29:285 (1) - <3
01:48:241 (6) - ctrl j (it looks bad if you make the slider same as (4) imo)
02:20:549 (2) - cut the slider here and add a circle on the red tick for better rhythm
02:43:296 - make a 1/2 slider here same as 02:49:230 (3,4)
02:51:868 (8,1) - too close xd
03:11:518 (1) - why not spinner?

GL! ~
Topic Starter
Pentori

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

hi a noob modder here' oo fast mod
Aqours <3

[Normal]
00:01:428 (1) - same as easy it is soft?
00:14:285 - make it clickable please (strong beat there) oops
00:47:088 - try this rhythm http://prnt.sc/c3f92p mm that causes 3/2 gap :/
01:51:373 (1) - unnecessarey nc for the finish and shows 3/2 gap
01:53:351 (4) - make the sliderend on white tick (looks awkward imo) how? they use different rhythms
01:57:142 - drag the break here (same as easy) oo good suggestion
02:39:835 - add spinner here? hm nah i can't otherwise there won't be enough recovery time

nice diff
GL! ~
thanks :3

gders: did some tweaking with the breaks so that they're all consistent and make sense with other diffs
edit: oo thanks for the stars nanoripe!
Bara-
Okay wtf is wrong with the site
I lost a mod recently, and a reply to this mod
Basically, I fixed all except
02:20:549 (2) - cut the slider here and add a circle on the red tick for better rhythm There is a whoosh increasing in intensity
02:43:296 - make a 1/2 slider here same as 02:49:230 (3,4) Will keep for now since I think it looks nice B), change unless more people say so
Thanks!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58379
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi no Kokoro wa Kagayaiterukai?
TitleUnicode:君のこころは輝いてるかい?
Artist:Aqours
ArtistUnicode:アクア
Creator:Pentori
Version:Bara's Hard
Source:ラブライブ!サンシャイン!!
Tags:SnowNiNo_ estellia- Emillia Bara- love live sunshine school idol project festival
BeatmapID:1041408
BeatmapSetID:464706

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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Topic Starter
Pentori
did u take into account this mod?
p/5379294/
kek
Bara-
Fml
Will do that soon
MokouSmoke
hi hi~
  1. grey combo color is a little dull compared to rest, would suggest using a more vivid color
  2. 01:07:527 - 01:07:857 - would be nice to have soft-whistles here for bass drum and vocal emphasis
  3. nino's diff has default-soft hitsounds at 03:07:033 - when I think it should be S:C1
  4. bara's diff follows percussion starting at 01:24:835 - so I would specifically hitsounds some of those notes to match that
Sunshine:
  1. 00:55:659 (1,2,1) - I would prefer if 1/1 and 3/2 spacing was more distinct here. Since there's like zero intensity between 00:55:989 (2,1) - maybe try stacking them?
  2. 01:35:219 (3,4) - I completely misread this as 1/4 my first time playing. Suggest you either NC both sliders or reduce spacing between sliderheads (like you do at 01:37:857 (3,4,1) - don't trust DS for 1/4 since people usually only pay attention to sliderhead) to make it more obvious
  3. 01:44:450 (3,4,5) - try a 1/6 repeat slider + note to follow piano instead? I think it works well since this is highest diff
  4. nice, gj here
  1. 00:11:648 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend you start jumps with smaller spacing (first one at like 2.0x) as current transition from 00:10:164 (1,2,3,4) - feels really abrupt since drum sounds aren't very loud from the start
  2. 01:19:560 - even if you don't prioritize vocals, this one is still pretty strong. also would be nice to avoid 3/2 gap
  3. 01:22:197 - current way is fine, but you can map this piano sound here if you want since you kinda follow it at 01:20:219 (1) - 01:22:857 (1) - the 3/1 gap feels large
  4. 02:45:274 (4) - this one looked a little funny to me compared to others. would raise the slidertail a little higher or move the red node to the left
  1. wow, this plays fast. felt more like a hyper diff than a hard
  2. 00:13:956 (1,1) - would move this 4 pixels down and right since autostack screws up your structure
  3. 00:22:527 (2) - hahaha you ran out of space. but seriously, just move this offgrid to [-4,77] for spacing and visuals. it would still be fine in-game
  4. 00:30:109 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I would keep the DS more constant here. while the spacing kinda matches the song, the visuals look really uneven because the notes are already so close together. like 00:31:758 (2,3,4) - looks especially bad with all the different visual spacings between notes
  5. 00:45:934 (1,2,3) - make these exactly 1.40x it's nazi, but also pretty obvious in game because of the super close spacing between notes
  6. 00:51:703 (2,3) - don't get why this is 1.35x spacing while the strong sound at 00:53:022 (2,3,1) - get only 1.2x. that followpoint bothers me lol
  7. 00:58:461 (1) - would split this into two repeat sliders to make drum/vocal sound clickable like you kinda do at 01:09:011 (6,7) - also i personally hate curved stubby sliders but whatevs
  8. 00:59:120 (1,2,3) - you follow vocals here, so make 01:01:758 (1,2,3) - the same rhythm for consistency. the drum sound at 01:02:417 - is even louder here, so at least 01:02:417 - should be clickable imo
  9. 01:11:319 (5,6) - same here. 01:11:648 - has bass drum + vocal, 01:11:978 - has snare and vocal, but 01:11:813 - has just bass drum. plz make the stronger sounds clickable
  10. 01:24:752 (2) - would remove this. Song is calming down and you did something by lowering SV, but this triplet is anti-calm. also lets 01:24:670 (1) - have a little more emphasis. same thing at 01:27:060 (2) -
  11. 01:29:285 (1) - you mapped all those faint percussion sounds and then skip everything here with a slider? if anything your rhythm density in this section should be reversed lol
  12. 01:35:219 (3,1) - kinda risky for a hard diff since this is the only time you do it
  13. 01:47:747 (4,5,6) - keep visual spacing even
  14. 01:48:571 (7) - 1/4 sounds here are super faint compared to 01:48:901 (8) - I think simplifying to 1/2 rhythm would be better here. Even higher diffs don't map the 1/4
  15. 02:03:901 - you sure you want to pull the break?
  16. 02:13:296 (1) - 02:14:615 (1) - etc... these are really fast for a hard diff. why not use 1.2x SV like your first kiai section?
  17. 02:35:055 (4,5) - nerf this a bit, the spacing is kinda unfair to lower level players.
  18. 02:20:219 (3) - break this into two 1/2 sliders, it ignores too many sounds imo
  19. 02:40:741 (3) - not sure what this note is following. it really ruins the emphasis on 02:40:824 (4) - which is the start of the drumline
  20. 03:03:077 (1) - maybe move this down a little bit, it felt uncomfortably close to HP drain bar during test play lol
  21. 00:37:362 (3,2) - 00:44:450 (1,3) - 01:50:879 (2,1) - fail stacks
  22. quite a few blankets could still be polished if you care. the ones that bothered me in-game: 00:30:109 (1,2,1) - 00:53:022 (2,3,1) - 02:05:055 (1,1) -
  23. I actually think this diff is quite good. not sure how the mod got this long lol

ok, gonna stop here. hope this helps and good luck~
Topic Starter
Pentori

MokouSmoke wrote:

hi hi~
  1. grey combo color is a little dull compared to rest, would suggest using a more vivid color matches their uniforms, i'll change it once i get more opinions
  2. 01:07:527 - 01:07:857 - would be nice to have soft-whistles here for bass drum and vocal emphasis good point, also added it to second kiai across all diffs
  3. nino's diff has default-soft hitsounds at 03:07:033 - when I think it should be S:C1 oops
  4. bara's diff follows percussion starting at 01:24:835 - so I would specifically hitsounds some of those notes to match that good idea.
Sunshine:
  1. 00:55:659 (1,2,1) - I would prefer if 1/1 and 3/2 spacing was more distinct here. Since there's like zero intensity between 00:55:989 (2,1) - maybe try stacking them? i used stacking here to stop movement after big jumps eg 00:57:637 (7,1) - so therefore i would prefer some cursor movement here to distinguish the two
  2. 01:35:219 (3,4) - I completely misread this as 1/4 my first time playing. Suggest you either NC both sliders or reduce spacing between sliderheads (like you do at 01:37:857 (3,4,1) - don't trust DS for 1/4 since people usually only pay attention to sliderhead) to make it more obvious hm im going to have to get another opinion on this, the music indicates some very obvious 1/1's so there shouldnt be a reason to play 1/4. also reducing ds more than it already is kinda ruins the rotating pattern i have going
  3. 01:44:450 (3,4,5) - try a 1/6 repeat slider + note to follow piano instead? I think it works well since this is highest diff oo didn't realise it was 1/6
  4. nice, gj here

ok, gonna stop here. hope this helps and good luck~
thank you for the mod and star !
Bara-

Hobbes2 wrote:

hello :d
[Bara's Hard]

00:46:593 (2,3) - I'd move these a bit further apart, it's a bit tight having these two this close. It's fine

00:49:725 (4,5,6,7) - I'd increase SV for this part considering the increase in intensity. but I did not :C. I prefer current's

01:31:923 (1,2,3) - having the gap between 1 and 2 and the gap between 2 and 3 be of equal size would make this look better.

02:03:571 - I suggest having a spinner start here (or if you want to be consistent with how the other diffs have it, 02:03:901) that ends at 02:04:890

02:28:461 (4,5,6) - Hm, there isn't much 1/4 in this diff up until this point so having a sudden 5 length stream in this diff feels out of place. Perhaps a triplet into reverse slider instead? It fits the song really well

02:49:890 (1) - this shape o_o the bend at the end of it is kinda weird lol

02:51:868 (8,1) - The blanket is inconsistent, notice at the leftside the gap is smaller than on the right side I already fixed it, but I maybe didn't save it, idk

MokouSmoke wrote:

hi hi~
[Bara]
  1. wow, this plays fast. felt more like a hyper diff than a hard
  2. 00:13:956 (1,1) - would move this 4 pixels down and right since autostack screws up your structure
  3. 00:22:527 (2) - hahaha you ran out of space. but seriously, just move this offgrid to [-4,77] for spacing and visuals. it would still be fine in-game I can't. The editor doesn't allow circles/sliderstarts outside of the grid. It moves them back after you save it
  4. 00:30:109 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I would keep the DS more constant here. while the spacing kinda matches the song, the visuals look really uneven because the notes are already so close together. like 00:31:758 (2,3,4) - looks especially bad with all the different visual spacings between notes
  5. 00:45:934 (1,2,3) - make these exactly 1.40x it's nazi, but also pretty obvious in game because of the super close spacing between notes
  6. 00:51:703 (2,3) - don't get why this is 1.35x spacing while the strong sound at 00:53:022 (2,3,1) - get only 1.2x. that followpoint bothers me lol
  7. 00:58:461 (1) - would split this into two repeat sliders to make drum/vocal sound clickable like you kinda do at 01:09:011 (6,7) - also i personally hate curved stubby sliders but whatevs
  8. 00:59:120 (1,2,3) - you follow vocals here, so make 01:01:758 (1,2,3) - the same rhythm for consistency. the drum sound at 01:02:417 - is even louder here, so at least 01:02:417 - should be clickable imo
  9. 01:11:319 (5,6) - same here. 01:11:648 - has bass drum + vocal, 01:11:978 - has snare and vocal, but 01:11:813 - has just bass drum. plz make the stronger sounds clickable
  10. 01:24:752 (2) - would remove this. Song is calming down and you did something by lowering SV, but this triplet is anti-calm. also lets 01:24:670 (1) - have a little more emphasis. same thing at 01:27:060 (2) - But this is how the music goes...
  11. 01:29:285 (1) - you mapped all those faint percussion sounds and then skip everything here with a slider? if anything your rhythm density in this section should be reversed lol lmao, this slider fits the guitar
  12. 01:35:219 (3,1) - kinda risky for a hard diff since this is the only time you do it
  13. 01:47:747 (4,5,6) - keep visual spacing even
  14. 01:48:571 (7) - 1/4 sounds here are super faint compared to 01:48:901 (8) - I think simplifying to 1/2 rhythm would be better here. Even higher diffs don't map the 1/4
  15. 02:03:901 - you sure you want to pull the break?
  16. 02:13:296 (1) - 02:14:615 (1) - etc... these are really fast for a hard diff. why not use 1.2x SV like your first kiai section?
  17. 02:35:055 (4,5) - nerf this a bit, the spacing is kinda unfair to lower level players.
  18. 02:20:219 (3) - break this into two 1/2 sliders, it ignores too many sounds imo
  19. 02:40:741 (3) - not sure what this note is following. it really ruins the emphasis on 02:40:824 (4) - which is the start of the drumline
  20. 03:03:077 (1) - maybe move this down a little bit, it felt uncomfortably close to HP drain bar during test play lol
  21. 00:37:362 (3,2) - 00:44:450 (1,3) - 01:50:879 (2,1) - fail stacks
  22. quite a few blankets could still be polished if you care. the ones that bothered me in-game: 00:30:109 (1,2,1) - 00:53:022 (2,3,1) - 02:05:055 (1,1) -
  23. I actually think this diff is quite good. not sure how the mod got this long lol

ok, gonna stop here. hope this helps and good luck~
Thanks!!
osu file format v14

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Title:Kimi no Kokoro wa Kagayaiterukai?
TitleUnicode:君のこころは輝いてるかい?
Artist:Aqours
ArtistUnicode:アクア
Creator:Pentori
Version:Bara's Hard
Source:ラブライブ!サンシャイン!!
Tags:SnowNiNo_ estellia- Emillia Bara- love live sunshine school idol project festival
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90,143,148461,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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112,180,148625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
130,192,148708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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319,125,153818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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343,125,153983,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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406,78,155055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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360,194,156208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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240,24,160659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,52,160824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
315,57,160906,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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160,303,162307,2,0,L|55:283,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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454,121,164450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,121,164533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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30,81,166923,2,0,P|20:37|26:-1,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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339,131,167747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,231,167912,2,0,P|348:282|327:319,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,349,168241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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332,219,170384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,271,170549,2,0,P|198:275|159:259,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,162,170879,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Monarch
[Sunshine] 00:02:747 (2,3) - I don't think these big jumps are deserved considering the gap is smaller than 00:04:395 (2,3) - (in time) and the sound is less intense and yet the jump is bigger in 00:02:747 (2,3) -

00:07:197 (3,4) - jump should be bigger than 00:08:022 (5,6) - due to sound intensity imo

00:13:296 (2,2) - isn't quite blanketed
http://puu.sh/qExpr/5b18330372.jpg


00:16:923 (1) - you've mapped this as 1/2 but the sound that its following lasts for 1/1 like this 00:18:077 (1) -

00:29:450 (1,2,1) - blanket is off
http://puu.sh/qExDX/5598d017f6.jpg


00:39:670 (2,1,2) - same issue here
http://puu.sh/qExIQ/2611c04618.jpg


01:00:769 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this jump pattern is a bit weird

01:39:670 (6,1) - big jump here but 01:40:329 (2,3) - here is small even though intensity is the same

02:32:252 (4,1) - 02:33:077 (2,3) - same problem here ^

[NiNo's Insane]

I'm not gonna go over every single blanket that is ever so slightly off because to be frank I don't think you'll care enough, so I'll list a few, fix them to your liking
00:03:736 (1,2) -

00:28:626 (1,2) -

00:44:120 (6,1) - (the fade of this note overlaps the slider

01:01:758 (1,2) -

01:48:241 (2,4) -



00:25:659 (4) - I don't see why the jump is on this note, if anything it should be on this one 00:25:989 (1) -

01:30:109 (3,4,5,6) - maybe more emphasis on intensity here?

i think this 02:17:582 (3,4,5) - pattern should be emphasised more here 02:28:131 (3,4,5) - , possibly by moving 02:28:296 (4) - more up and to the right

02:45:274 (4) - maybe turn into 3 circles?
Topic Starter
Pentori

Monarch wrote:

[Sunshine] 00:02:747 (2,3) - I don't think these big jumps are deserved considering the gap is smaller than 00:04:395 (2,3) - (in time) and the sound is less intense and yet the jump is bigger in 00:02:747 (2,3) - the sliders are held and therefore the player has plenty of time to move to the next note. the reason 00:04:395 (2,3) - is closer is because i want flow

00:07:197 (3,4) - jump should be bigger than 00:08:022 (5,6) - due to sound intensity imo yes but it would ruin the blanket aesthetic. in play this isn't very noticeable so i dont think this needs to be changed

00:13:296 (2,2) - isn't quite blanketed blanketing fully makes the slider very round which i dont like fine
http://puu.sh/qExpr/5b18330372.jpg


00:16:923 (1) - you've mapped this as 1/2 but the sound that its following lasts for 1/1 like this 00:18:077 (1) - i want the claps to be clickable. plus this is the hardest diff

00:29:450 (1,2,1) - blanket is off 00:29:780 (2) - is just a rotation of 00:29:450 (1) - and rotating it by 1 degree makes it off and i dont want to move around slider points or else the sliders won't look identical. also in play this really isn't noticeable.. ok
http://puu.sh/qExDX/5598d017f6.jpg


00:39:670 (2,1,2) - same issue here this one is fine
http://puu.sh/qExIQ/2611c04618.jpg

01:00:769 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this jump pattern is a bit weird care to elaborate? it places emphasis on correct notes and uses intuitive back and forth flow

01:39:670 (6,1) - big jump here but 01:40:329 (2,3) - here is small even though intensity is the same pattern is like this so things can be stacked. i could reduce the spacing of 01:39:670 (6,1) - to be the same but i really dont think its necessary because the jump doesn't feel too out of place

02:32:252 (4,1) - 02:33:077 (2,3) - same problem here ^ now in this case, intensity isn't the same. i can clearly here a more stressed vocal on 02:32:582 (1) - compared to 02:33:241 (3)
zz i really wish you hadn't put spoilerboxes in spoilerboxes because they just glitch out
hanyuu_nanodesu
Hey, super late M4M from which queue? I can't tell anymore.....
Sorry for the wait, I was busy last few weeks @-@

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[Emillia's Easy]
  1. Some DS problem...
  2. 00:27:472 (1,2) - Considering you're following vocal before, I guess you better follow vocal here too... you can make the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/qGTq0/02e959c775.jpg beside, the sound here 00:28:626 is bigger than big white tick for this part so I think that <- rhythm would fit much better.
  3. 00:29:450 (4,2) - Not sure if this is on purpose, but I guess overlap pattern like this is not really good for Easy (?) :/ I guess you can fix it yourself if you want.
  4. 00:36:044 (2,3) - Well maybe you can try something like this http://puu.sh/qGTAn/2af8f37136.jpg for some more variation and I think it would fit better too since the bigger sound here 00:36:538 got mapped with slider's head that make it emphasized better.
  5. 00:38:022 (1,2) - Similar to this 00:27:472 (1,2) - This case, the sound here 00:39:175 is even much bigger so it feels weird if it's ignored. I guess I have to make this high suggestion.
  6. 00:40:659 (1,2) - Why don't make symmetric shape to give slightly symmetric feeling http://puu.sh/qGTJg/6f907ccf39.jpg
  7. 00:45:604 (3) - If it was me, since I mainly following drum not vocal, and this vocal note is pretty weak, and there's a polarity problem with prev note, I would just delete this note since it would make the polarity problem less problematic since there would be longer time to read the next approach circle. But well, it's you mapping, and I guess you're mainly following vocal (?) and if so, just let this slip by.
  8. 00:45:934 (1,2) - The blanket could be improved, lol. Move second anchor to (164, 161). Btw, since the sound here 00:47:417 is pretty big, maybe you can adjust the slider shape more so the red anchor would fall on that sound. Or since I think that sound is bigger and the vocal note is longer than this 00:47:088 maybe it would be better to change the rhythm to http://puu.sh/qGU2d/19f5f2e3d2.jpg or maybe http://puu.sh/qGU3b/5ed91e4d8d.jpg for staying simple.
  9. 00:53:351 add note to cover big vocal? feel pretty empty without anything here.
  10. 00:55:164 (3) - umm... the sound is here 00:55:989 but you just ignore it and map the big white tick after that instead... it feels very weird imo. Really better do it like this http://puu.sh/qGUbC/8f69f310b0.jpg
  11. 01:18:736 (2,3) - Just blanket this...
  12. 01:30:769 (1) - Unless you're doing this on purpose, I suggest you to change this.... Ehm... these 01:30:769 (1,2,3) - into something like this http://puu.sh/qGUqe/825970d096.jpg since the big sound is here 01:31:099 but it's only mapped with slider tail so it become less emphasized. Similar with this sound 01:31:923
  13. 01:49:230 (1,2,3) - These too, need some adjustment so the big sound would be emphasized correctly. Try something like this http://puu.sh/qGUBV/0ee15f46b6.jpg or maybe more variation on (3). what's important is these sounds 01:49:725 01:50:384 01:51:373 got emphasized.
  14. 02:38:681 (1) - Lol, maybe you can do it like this http://puu.sh/qGULc/13abbd7a4a.jpg to blanket (3)'s body since it looks neater imo.
  15. 02:55:000 (1,2) - Yeah maybe you could try something like this http://puu.sh/qGUQj/ed1c9ff449.jpg fits better imo.
  16. 03:08:381 (1,1) - Is this thing even allowed in Easy? (I'm not sure myself)
  17. It's good, just need some improvement in rhythm especially emphasizing stuff.


[Normal]
  1. Maybe AR 5 for better diff spread? It's very close to Easy yet very far to Hard currently...
  2. 00:04:395 (2,4) - I think you told me not to stack in your mod, lol such irony xD I don't know, maybe just remove (3)'s reverse since there's no really significant sound here 00:05:549 to avoid the stack
  3. 00:13:461 (5) - maybe just remove this since it's pretty weak. It's very contrast to 00:13:131 (4) - while they mapped almost similarly so the emphasize at 00:13:131 (4) - kinda decreased because of this.
  4. 00:38:516 (2) - Lol why the anchor tho xD if you want to keep it straight, just remove it please. But somehow I suggest to do something like this http://puu.sh/qGVIV/0b5242bbdb.jpg ((2) blanketing (5)'s body) for neater look.
  5. 00:39:175 (3) - Maybe do it like this 00:36:538 (3,4) - to emphasize the drum
  6. 00:40:000 (4) - ayyy better use circles like here 00:29:449 (5,6) - because of very big sound (to emphasize) and consistency (the sound is symmetric to this sound 00:29:449 (5,6) - ) purpose.
  7. 00:45:934 (1,2,3,4,5) - Somehow I have feeling this is more complex than the previous part while this part is more silent than the prev... hmmm.... maybe you could simplify this 00:45:934 (1,2) - by merging it into one long slider since the sound here 00:46:263 not really significant.
  8. 00:47:912 (6,7) - unnecessary too for silent part imo, you can keep (7) for vocal but I think it better to just use circle for (6) even though there's trumpet sound but it's pretty weak here 00:48:077
  9. 00:51:703 (2,3) - Why not this for symmetrical rhythm http://puu.sh/qGW4f/c113bf70cf.jpg ? too crowded I guess... then maybe this http://puu.sh/qGW5A/9d27db6a79.jpg
  10. The rest are fine~


[Sunshine]
  1. Maybe AR 9 or 9.1 since the SR is only 5.08 and somehow 9.2 seems too fast for it. 182 BPM is not that fast either....
  2. 00:02:418 (1,2,3) - Lol, is that farjump is really necessary. I'm more concerned about you do this at silent part.... It's okay for fast part but this part is pretty silent and it's the start of the map as well so I think it might be a bit throw off. But well what do I know, I'm a n00b after all.
  3. 00:45:109 (1) - I think this meant to end at blue tick (?) if not, I suggest you to do it because reason.
  4. 00:56:813 (2,3) - Change this into 1/2 slider so the group of circles here 00:57:142 (4,5,6,7) - would be more focused at vocal thus emphasize them better.
  5. 01:14:120 (3,5,6,1) - Why not just like this http://puu.sh/qGWYv/2c8f437698.jpg looks better that way imo.
  6. 01:35:219 (3,4) - no ending these at blue tick?
  7. 02:03:901 (1) - Maybe for extra you could actually use sets of 1/2 circle pattern instead of spinner? This is a total waste of rhythm >< Please use circles, it would make wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy better lead up to the chorus. And please don't say "consistency"
  8. 02:39:175 (4,5,1) - maybe just stick to vocal for this part since there's no really any other sound than vocal http://puu.sh/qGXjM/8b05d4284f.jpg
  9. 02:52:857 (2) - Maybe you can do wave like this http://puu.sh/qGXo0/a95f8818a2.jpg
  10. The rest seems good :D


Nice map
Good luck~
Have this

Edit : I feel itchy

Pentori wrote:

Monarch wrote:

[Sunshine]
00:13:296 (2,2) - isn't quite blanketed blanketing fully makes the slider very round which i dont like
http://puu.sh/qExpr/5b18330372.jpg
Then you could move 00:13:626 (2) - further away http://puu.sh/qGXYl/edb52ec872.jpg

Edit 2 :

Pentori wrote:

Monarch wrote:

[Sunshine]
00:29:450 (1,2,1) - blanket is off 00:29:780 (2) - is just a rotation of 00:29:450 (1) - and rotating it by 1 degree makes it off and i dont want to move around slider points or else the sliders won't look identical. also in play this really isn't noticeable..
http://puu.sh/qExDX/5598d017f6.jpg
Actually, rotating (2) by -2° with origin at the selection center will do the trick....
Topic Starter
Pentori

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hey, super late M4M from which queue? I can't tell anymore..... my queue aha
Sorry for the wait, I was busy last few weeks @-@

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[Normal]
  1. Maybe AR 5 for better diff spread? It's very close to Easy yet very far to Hard currently...
  2. 00:04:395 (2,4) - I think you told me not to stack in your mod, lol such irony xD I don't know, maybe just remove (3)'s reverse since there's no really significant sound here 00:05:549 to avoid the stack mm you overlapped in easy. i think this ok because of 2.2 sr
  3. 00:13:461 (5) - maybe just remove this since it's pretty weak. It's very contrast to 00:13:131 (4) - while they mapped almost similarly so the emphasize at 00:13:131 (4) - kinda decreased because of this.
  4. 00:38:516 (2) - Lol why the anchor tho xD if you want to keep it straight, just remove it please. But somehow I suggest to do something like this http://puu.sh/qGVIV/0b5242bbdb.jpg ((2) blanketing (5)'s body) for neater look. i prefer it this way. have the anchor for natural curves
  5. 00:39:175 (3) - Maybe do it like this 00:36:538 (3,4) - to emphasize the drum i want to express held vocal
  6. 00:40:000 (4) - ayyy better use circles like here 00:29:449 (5,6) - because of very big sound (to emphasize) and consistency (the sound is symmetric to this sound 00:29:449 (5,6) - ) purpose.
  7. 00:45:934 (1,2,3,4,5) - Somehow I have feeling this is more complex than the previous part while this part is more silent than the prev... hmmm.... maybe you could simplify this 00:45:934 (1,2) - by merging it into one long slider since the sound here 00:46:263 not really significant.
  8. 00:47:912 (6,7) - unnecessary too for silent part imo, you can keep (7) for vocal but I think it better to just use circle for (6) even though there's trumpet sound but it's pretty weak here 00:48:077 its fine imo. having 2 circles wouldnt suit the theme of how i used my single taps
  9. 00:51:703 (2,3) - Why not this for symmetrical rhythm http://puu.sh/qGW4f/c113bf70cf.jpg ? too crowded I guess... then maybe this http://puu.sh/qGW5A/9d27db6a79.jpg i wanted to end the rhythm chain here and want to use two beats 00:52:197 (3) - for vocals
  10. The rest are fine~


[Sunshine]
  1. Maybe AR 9 or 9.1 since the SR is only 5.08 and somehow 9.2 seems too fast for it. 182 BPM is not that fast either.... upon most playtests people prefer 9.2
  2. 00:02:418 (1,2,3) - Lol, is that farjump is really necessary. I'm more concerned about you do this at silent part.... It's okay for fast part but this part is pretty silent and it's the start of the map as well so I think it might be a bit throw off. But well what do I know, I'm a n00b after all. as i said to the other modder. this plays as a held slider and because players abuse slider leniency this isn't actually a jump
  3. 00:45:109 (1) - I think this meant to end at blue tick (?) if not, I suggest you to do it because reason. hm i nah i originally had it ending on blue tick and i really didnt like the way it played because its a 1/1 slider. just mappers preference really.
  4. 00:56:813 (2,3) - Change this into 1/2 slider so the group of circles here 00:57:142 (4,5,6,7) - would be more focused at vocal thus emphasize them better. the intensity does that already.
  5. 01:14:120 (3,5,6,1) - Why not just like this http://puu.sh/qGWYv/2c8f437698.jpg looks better that way imo.
  6. 01:35:219 (3,4) - no ending these at blue tick? theres are different to 00:29:450 (1,2) - and arent claps so i want to distinguish that
  7. 02:03:901 (1) - Maybe for extra you could actually use sets of 1/2 circle pattern instead of spinner? This is a total waste of rhythm >< Please use circles, it would make wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy better lead up to the chorus. And please don't say "consistency" tbh it feels really bad to lead into a jump pattern right after a break. i might include the vocals like nino but i need to think about it for now
  8. 02:39:175 (4,5,1) - maybe just stick to vocal for this part since there's no really any other sound than vocal http://puu.sh/qGXjM/8b05d4284f.jpg the piano
  9. 02:52:857 (2) - Maybe you can do wave like this http://puu.sh/qGXo0/a95f8818a2.jpg too curvy imo
  10. The rest seems good :D


Nice map
Good luck~
Have this ty :)

Edit : I feel itchy

Pentori wrote:

[Sunshine]
00:13:296 (2,2) - isn't quite blanketed blanketing fully makes the slider very round which i dont like
http://puu.sh/qExpr/5b18330372.jpg
Then you could move 00:13:626 (2) - further away http://puu.sh/qGXYl/edb52ec872.jpg

Edit 2 :

Pentori wrote:

[Sunshine]
00:29:450 (1,2,1) - blanket is off 00:29:780 (2) - is just a rotation of 00:29:450 (1) - and rotating it by 1 degree makes it off and i dont want to move around slider points or else the sliders won't look identical. also in play this really isn't noticeable..
http://puu.sh/qExDX/5598d017f6.jpg
Actually, rotating (2) by -2° with origin at the selection center will do the trick....
mm okay i fixed those two as well
no reply = fixed
thanks!!
Emilia
remapped, the last time i did this it was trash

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Topic Starter
Pentori
:o
Mint
Won't be iconing this, but you probably want to fix 01:12:307 (1) - in Easy (offscreen).
Good luck! (no kds)
Loony
Hello there, I think it's morning in your timezone so good morning ehh now I think it's afternoon, so good afternoon! I've just finished modding, sorry for pointing out only visual stuff but these are only I could find >.<
[Normal]
  1. 00:23:351 (5) - How about Ctrl + G and Ctrl + H and after that move to the previous position. Imo it looks better, for example there's more variety because this 00:22:033 (1) is curved upwards and before changing this 00:23:351 (5) one's first curve was also upwards (hope you know what I mean)
  2. 01:06:373 (5,2) - The same as above, but more visible example. Maybe make this 01:06:373 (5) one curved in the opposite way to this 01:07:527 (2) one, so they look like that:
  3. 01:19:560 (6) - Try making it curved in a diffrent, opposite way:
  4. 02:46:263 (5,3) - Here's an another example of the same situation... I know I'm so nazi lol
[Bara's Hard]
  1. 00:50:384 (6,2) - Sorry I don't like this little overlap. Maybe move 00:51:703 (2) so the distance between the three circles in these 00:50:384 (6,1,2) is the same
  2. 01:12:308 (1) - Just a minor thing: you could rotate it so this pattern 01:11:813 (6,1,2) is kinda symetrical, in spite of being lightly rotated
  3. 01:38:516 (1,2,3,4) - Is that DS inconsistence intentional? I would make it consitance for this pattern, imo it will look better
  4. 01:47:747 (4,5,6) - There is no need for this triangle to be a dirty triangle. I mean, make this pattern a perfect triangle by moving this 01:48:077 (5) note for example
  5. 02:06:208 (1,2,3) - Maybe also a nice looking triangle?
[NiNo's Insane]
  1. 00:26:813 (3,4,1) - Triangle again, make it pefrect, make it shine!
  2. 00:37:033 (2,3,4,1) - Do you see these for points? You could make a really nice tetragon here, just for esthetical reasons
  3. 00:58:461 (1,2,1) - Triangle again x2, please, make it perfect as well
  4. 01:01:758 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 01:09:011 (3,1) - Ugly overlap, do me a favor and fix it please
  6. 02:07:362 (1,1,2) - Triangle x3
  7. 02:09:340 (2,3,4) - ^
  8. 02:10:824 (2,3,4) - I don't know why, but I just don't like this pattern. It's okay if you like it, but comparing to the whole insanely beautiful diff, this just doesn't match. Maybe try changing?
  9. 02:12:307 (3,4,1) - Triangle x4 (yaay, I know...)

I know I know, I'm not gonna mod Sunshine diff, but it's just because it's so shining with beauty that my advices wouldn't really help :oops:
Good good luck with ranking! ;)
Topic Starter
Pentori

Loony wrote:

Hello there, I think it's morning in your timezone so good morning ehh now I think it's afternoon, so good afternoon! I've just finished modding, sorry for pointing out only visual stuff but these are only I could find >.<
[Normal]
  1. 00:23:351 (5) - How about Ctrl + G and Ctrl + H and after that move to the previous position. Imo it looks better, for example there's more variety because this 00:22:033 (1) is curved upwards and before changing this 00:23:351 (5) one's first curve was also upwards (hope you know what I mean) very good point!
  2. 01:06:373 (5,2) - The same as above, but more visible example. Maybe make this 01:06:373 (5) one curved in the opposite way to this 01:07:527 (2) one, so they look like that:
    i actually like the way the slider leads into the next since the flow points downwards. so keeping this
  3. 01:19:560 (6) - Try making it curved in a diffrent, opposite way:
    same here, the slider points to the next one
  4. 02:46:263 (5,3) - Here's an another example of the same situation... I know I'm so nazi lol for this one since the next slider 02:49:890 (1) - curves up i think it'd be better to keep it

I know I know, I'm not gonna mod Sunshine diff, but it's just because it's so shining with beauty that my advices wouldn't really help :oops:lol
Good good luck with ranking! ;)
thanks!
Krimek
After a half year it's finally time for a mod again! m4m from queue~

[General]
  • I'm kinda unsure about 01:24:670 - . In all diffs except Easy you placed the objects there with a clap. But the sound you were probably following is on 01:24:615 - , 1/6 earlier. I think it's okay to keep it on 1/4 in the normal diff but I'd recommend to fix it in the higher diffs.

    Suggestions for Hard and Sunshine:
  1. Bara's Hard: Since you used 1/6 sliders there already, you can actualy start this rythm already on 01:24:615 -.
  2. Sunshine: I think using a slider instead of a circle and ending it on the blue tick would work out the best.

    I really have no suggestion how you can fix it on the Insane diff without ruining the pattern/spacing, but I think you can go for something similar like in the Sunshine diff.


[Emillia's Easy]
  1. 00:03:736 (1) - This slider hits the HP bar, please try to avoid it. It doesn't look good and feels weird to play, especially for an easy diff.
  2. 02:29:450 (2) - Same with this one. Also the slider end goes to y: -1. Objects should be within the grid.
  3. 00:34:725 (3) - This blanket can be definetly improved.


[Normal]
  1. Not a big deal, but how about letting the break already end on 02:01:758 - , a little bit earlier as it does right now, but it's more fitting to the music. Suggested the same on NiNo's Insane, so I'd recommend you two to think about it to make it equal in both diffs.


[Bara's Hard]
  • I'm the worst when it comes up to mapping or judging Hard diffs, sorry :/
    But the diff looks pretty neat!


[NiNo's Insane]
  1. 00:25:659 (4) - If you want this to be that spaced, you should increase spacing on 00:25:494 (3) - as well.
    Also the slider starts on a redtick and has a clap on its tail. It doesn't really emphasize good this way. 00:25:494 (3,4) - Strg + G rythm?
  2. 00:32:417 (4) - this one is twice as spaced as 00:31:758 (2) -, but their emphasis is similar. Please keep it evenly.
  3. 00:32:747 (1) - & 00:35:384 (1) - I think these finisher want more attention. Give them more spacing please.
    00:43:296 (1) - I think this one should be right since it works well as a build-up.
  4. 00:48:406 (5) - This one is so easy to missread. Please don't stack it with the sliderend. I think placing it x:148|y:256 should be okay.
  5. 00:53:681 (1) - The slider feels kinda unfitting. It's just a personal opinion, but I don't think such shape represents the vocals that well. (It's not like their voice is shaky or something like that lol)
  6. 01:30:604 (6) - How about a 5/4 slider here? I think this would have a nice effect. Something like this:
  7. 01:33:901 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - Imo this pattern would work out better if you place 01:35:549 (2) - x:172|y:128 and fix 01:35:055 (2) - this stack so the sliders are equal close to each others.
  8. It's sad that you mapped 01:53:846 (1) - but ignored 01:55:329 - .
  9. It makes not a big difference, but maybe let the break already end 02:01:758 - , a little bit earlier as it does right now, but it's more fitting to the music.
  10. 02:06:208 (1,2,1,1) - Don't you think this NCing fits way better?
  11. 03:08:212 (4) - Rotate it by 180° so it flows straight to the circle.


[Sunshine]
  1. 00:12:637 (7) - How about playing it x:232|y:56? This would have a great effect with 00:13:296 (2) - what makes it look like 00:12:802 (8,1) - . Hope you get what I mean.
    Same with 00:57:472 (6,7,1,2) - , 01:18:571 (1,2,1,2) - & 02:37:692 (1,2,1,2) - .
  2. 00:37:362 (3,4,5,6) - You could make this jump look more symetrical by using even distance and angle let's call it a starshape, like this:
    Your curent placement looks sloppy to me.
  3. 00:45:109 (1) - I think it makes more sense if you let it end on the blue tick right after. That's what your doing with the upcoming slider as well.
    Also I recommend silencing the slider ends.
  4. 00:45:109 (1,1,1) - so many NCs... Is NC on 00:45:109 (1) - that necessary?
  5. 00:49:230 (1) - You can emphasize the stream in the background by placing a shortslider instead of a circle.
  6. 01:01:428 (6) - This is way too close for a clap sound. Please add more spacing.
  7. 01:30:769 (1) - Silence the sliderend please. (If you emphasize the sound in the background, you should shorten the slider then instead.)
  8. 01:35:219 (2,3) - You shouldn't emphasize these sounds like that. It needs more spacing. This way it just takes away the movement although this part stands out of the whole section. How about something like this:
  9. 01:37:857 (3,4) - Same again. My suggestion:
  10. 01:44:615 (4) - a 1/2 slider would fit better imo since 01:44:780 (5) - isn't that worth being clickable.
  11. 02:26:648 (3,4) - 2 Sliders that start on a redtick and have heavy sounds on sliderend. Use this instead?
  12. 03:00:109 (5,6,1) - This one looks pretty weird and confused me while playing (specially with hardrock).
  13. 03:06:208 (2,3) - Please use DS1.4 as you did here 03:05:384 (4,1) - . I know you want to decrease your spacing, but having a cick that close feels weird to me.


This set looks really neat. Most suggestions are for better emphasize or aesthetics. GL o/
Topic Starter
Pentori

Krimek wrote:

After a half year it's finally time for a mod again! m4m from queue~

[General]
  • I'm kinda unsure about 01:24:670 - . In all diffs except Easy you placed the objects there with a clap. But the sound you were probably following is on 01:24:615 - , 1/6 earlier. I think it's okay to keep it on 1/4 in the normal diff but I'd recommend to fix it in the higher diffs. this is something out of my control really. although the drum might be on the 1/6, it would be really weird to play and would feel off because of the vocal on 01:24:670 - so i'm going to keep it as is

    Suggestions for Hard and Sunshine:
  1. Bara's Hard: Since you used 1/6 sliders there already, you can actualy start this rythm already on 01:24:615 -.
  2. Sunshine: I think using a slider instead of a circle and ending it on the blue tick would work out the best.

    I really have no suggestion how you can fix it on the Insane diff without ruining the pattern/spacing, but I think you can go for something similar like in the Sunshine diff.


[Normal]
  1. Not a big deal, but how about letting the break already end on 02:01:758 - , a little bit earlier as it does right now, but it's more fitting to the music. Suggested the same on NiNo's Insane, so I'd recommend you two to think about it to make it equal in both diffs. tbh i dont even know why the break is like that o_o. i just got rid of the early entrance


[Sunshine]
  1. 00:12:637 (7) - How about playing it x:232|y:56? This would have a great effect with 00:13:296 (2) - what makes it look like 00:12:802 (8,1) - . Hope you get what I mean.
    Same with 00:57:472 (6,7,1,2) - , 01:18:571 (1,2,1,2) - & 02:37:692 (1,2,1,2) - . my intention was to actually stack those notes there
  2. 00:37:362 (3,4,5,6) - You could make this jump look more symetrical by using even distance and angle let's call it a starshape, like this:
    Your curent placement looks sloppy to me. cool!
  3. 00:45:109 (1) - I think it makes more sense if you let it end on the blue tick right after. That's what your doing with the upcoming slider as well.
    Also I recommend silencing the slider ends. oke
  4. 00:45:109 (1,1,1) - so many NCs... Is NC on 00:45:109 (1) - that necessary? they all have noticeable sv changes so yes
  5. 00:49:230 (1) - You can emphasize the stream in the background by placing a shortslider instead of a circle. ok
  6. 01:01:428 (6) - This is way too close for a clap sound. Please add more spacing. i dont want to ruin pattern ;w; plus its not a rule to have high ds on every clap
  7. 01:30:769 (1) - Silence the sliderend please. (If you emphasize the sound in the background, you should shorten the slider then instead.) its soft sampleset and it really isn't noticeable because of the loud hitsounding. i would but i dont think it's really necessary
  8. 01:35:219 (2,3) - You shouldn't emphasize these sounds like that. It needs more spacing. This way it just takes away the movement although this part stands out of the whole section. How about something like this:
  9. 01:37:857 (3,4) - Same again. My suggestion:
    hm with these two, this is like a gimmick that makes the player go "oh! something different is happening" and i do this to slow down flow to build up to the finish on 01:35:879 (1)
  10. 01:44:615 (4) - a 1/2 slider would fit better imo since 01:44:780 (5) - isn't that worth being clickable. maybe if it was insane, but becos this is hardest diff im letting the drum on 01:44:780 (5) - be clickable
  11. 02:26:648 (3,4) - 2 Sliders that start on a redtick and have heavy sounds on sliderend. Use this instead? im showing the strong vocals here. i could change it for more pp, but its up to mappers interpretation
  12. 03:00:109 (5,6,1) - This one looks pretty weird and confused me while playing (specially with hardrock). huH? this is normal
  13. 03:06:208 (2,3) - Please use DS1.4 as you did here 03:05:384 (4,1) - . I know you want to decrease your spacing, but having a cick that close feels weird to me. i actually did this to let the sliders overlap. the small variance in ds isn't really noticeable in play too


This set looks really neat. Most suggestions are for better emphasize or aesthetics. GL o/
thank you!
kunka
Hi.
From your Q.
Sunshine

  1. 00:07:939 - I think that there is the sound. Would you add a circle?
  2. 01:23:186 (2,3,4,5,1) - Would you make modifications for the placement of the beautiful star?
  3. 01:30:769 (1) - The rhythm is good. However, I think that there is not a sound here. So, I felt it unnaturally. 1/3 thinks me to be beautiful snap here. Please confirm it. http://puu.sh/qPRVK.jpg
  4. 01:49:725 (3) - You forget to pick up 01:49:890 - . try this pls http://puu.sh/qPS6d.jpg
  5. 01:57:142 - Would you add a circle? w
  6. 02:03:901 (1) - The rhythm is good. However, I feel a sense of incongruity very much. I think that I become the good rhythm by adding a circle to 02:03:571 -
  7. 02:51:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is suggestion. I think that I can express these rhythmically. try this pls http://puu.sh/qPSHP.jpg
NiNo's Insane

  1. I think that balance of the OD is not good. Because the hard diff is 5, 7~7.5 is desirable.
  2. 00:43:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Would you adopt a vertical flow? For example, would you move 00:44:285 (7) - in x82y206?
  3. 02:50:879 - There is a sound. I recommend the addition of the circle.
  4. 02:59:780 (3) - This is suggestion. I recommend 1/2 slider×2. I think that it becomes the good vocal follow. http://puu.sh/qPTOr.jpg
Bara's Hard

  1. 00:43:296 (1,2,3,1) - I think that a flow of 00:43:296 (1) - and the 00:43:791 (2) - is not so good. In addition, I think that I become beautiful when 00:43:296 (1) - and the 00:43:791 (2) - use the same slider it. When you do not adopt it, I recommend the correction of the blanket of the 00:43:791 (2,3) - at least.
  2. 01:11:813 (6) - I feel the rhythm oddly. I think that I have to pick up 01:11:978 - http://puu.sh/qPUpj.jpg
  3. 01:25:494 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/qPUun.jpg
  4. 02:08:846 (1,2) - It is not parallel. I recommend a correction.
  5. 02:33:818 (5,7) - I think it to be overmap. I recommend that I remove it.
Normal

  1. 01:51:373 (1) - I didn't feel the need of the nc.
  2. 01:57:142 - It's the same as Sunshine diff.
  3. 02:03:571 - ^
Emillia's Easy

  1. I think that the widescreen support is not necessary
  2. 00:03:736 (1) - It kinda overlaps with hp bar. I recommend a correction.
gl ;)
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