Hellzero wrote:

It's perfect map! ^^

Beren's Hana
02:41:630 - What is this timing point?

Robin's Machi
Perfect

Star~ good job

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi

Normal
00:25:501 (1,2,3) - sounds bad i think, it's not following for the music or words, replaced by slider 00:25:501 - 00:25:824 or short returning slider
01:01:953 (1) - not simmetrical, but i do not pay attention to it
01:19:695 (1,2,3) - same problem ^
01:24:856 (1,2,3) - ^
01:31:308 (1) - new combo
02:49:050 (1) - ^

Beren's Hana
All is good, but i don't sure about this new combos on 3 circles, may be someone will say that it's wrong

Nice map, star

Joshua Lost wrote:

真的是新手么 （雾

Krisom wrote:

General-
·Currently, your star2.png is a bit big, wich makes the cursor look tiny, please use this one and remember to fullsubmit.

SPOILER

[attachment=1:81a51]star2.png[/attachment:81a51]

·Also, you might want to use this spinner background, it does not has the "Osu!" in the BG so it looks cleaner imo.

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[attachment=0:81a51]spinner-background.png[/attachment:81a51]

Hana-
I personally don't think it's necesary to spam new combos at the antijumps like 00:12:921 (1,1,1) -, but that's me. If you decide to remove them, be sure to do it on all the antijumps.
This diff is very well constructed! Good job!

Machi-
01:01:953 (1) - This heart looks a bit messy, I made you a more symmetrycal one if you want to replace it, I left the code below.

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216,384,61953,6,0,B|152:272|24:272|24:152|100:40|184:40|224:88|256:146|256:146|288:88|328:40|412:40|488:152|488:272|360:272|296:384,1,1040

02:42:598 (1,2,3) - Looks weird in-game, because (2) stacks with (3), and it appears over (1). I'd say move (2) and (3) away if you wanna make this look not-awkward
03:25:824 (2,3) - ^, but this looks weirder, possibly unstack (2) out of (1) or (3)
Very nice map fir the easiest diff, Try to avoid tiny overlaps with sliders later though, they are visually unappealing for such a lovely map.

Tell me when you fix, this map is pretty much ready for a bubble.

AngelHoney wrote:

all suggestions~

All

remove soft-hitclap.wav (44 bytes..Orz ?
Source / Stack are not same on all diffs

Robin's Machi

00:24:856 - add a note ?
00:26:147 (3) - move to 00:26:469 ?
00:32:598 - add a note ?
00:35:179 -
01:01:630 -
01:01:953 (1) - o_o''
01:20:340 (3) - move to 01:20:663 ?
01:24:211 -
01:25:501 (3) - move to 01:25:824 ?
01:42:598 (5) - remove ?
01:52:276 - silence?
01:57:437 (5) - remove ?
02:08:727 (1) - return - 1?

Beren's Hana

fine~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Beren

[General]
- I suggest to use the spinner from Krisom, it's better than the one with osu writing
- Just like Angel Honey said, the source is different in both diff. Remove the "Case Closed" from the source in Beren's diff, you can put Case Closed in the tags~

[SB]
- Why did you used DFKoIn-W4 for the SB font? well it's fine, I just find it funny because that font usually used for something scary or creepy xD
- hmmm... extend the effects of SB 7 (00:42:921) to 00:44:211, cause the vocal is still on that lyric but the SB is already gone
- same with above, extend SB 7 (01:52:598) to 01:53:888
- SB 16 (01:01:953) is very late.The scale and fade should start on 01:01:630
- the SB 7 (03:03:888), fade out too fast. Extend it to 03:05:824
- ok, SB 46 is obviously fade out too fast, don't make it suddenly appear then gone like that. Extend the scale and fade out of SB 46 (make it like SB 16)
- SB 47 appear too fast than the vocal, start the effects of SB 47 on 03:25:179

[Robin's Machi]
00:10:663 (2) - kinda too random, it doesn't follow anything. I suggest to remove this
00:37:759 (3) - ^
01:20:340 (3) - ^
01:25:501 (3) - ^
01:47:437 (3) - ^
00:42:598 - decrease the audio for this timing section, I can still hear the end of the spinner
01:01:953 (1) - please use the code provide by Krisom, it's pretty

[Beren's Hana]
NICE!!!
00:12:921 (1,1,1) - I'm agree with Vass_Bass and Krisom about this, the new combo is too redundant. You should make them all in a same combo
02:30:985 (1) - remove NC

Nice Map!!! Kinda disappoint with the BG cause it's not related to detective conan, but it's ok
Good Luck
~STAR

wanhyrzh wrote:

好图好歌好皮肤好故事板！
……除了等rank我还能说啥呢>_<
对我来说，打起来听起来很舒服，让人nazi的心情都消失了（喂
总之节奏下得很舒服，总体和歌配合的不错
以后可能要多考虑一下摆放的形状，还有变速的运用，让图变得更有趣~
不过要怎么把图做的既舒服又有趣的确是个难题……通常一有趣就鬼畜了（误

另外，不知道你想不想增加几个skin...
喜欢就拿去用吧~
不用kd.
[attachment=0:e4169]skins.rar[/attachment:e4169]

祝早日RANK~

Joshua Lost wrote:

真的是新手么 （雾

同问lol 新手是什么

还有，这个比啊澈那张温柔多了……

"Detective Connan"

Sallad4ever wrote:

about the source the name Case Closed came from English language released, the Japanese release should be Detective Conan, but because there is already a ranked version of the same song using Case Closed idk which is the more suitable anymore :o

Krisom wrote:

Just other 2 things.-

·You'll have to change the artist to Mai Kuraki intead of Kuraki Mai, this is to avoid artists getting mixed up badly in the beatmap selection screen, as there is alredy one map of this same song ranked with the artist as Mai Kuraki. Remember, when changing the artist's name you have to do a full submission and not exit the editor to avoid creating a duplicate.
·Correct source seems to be "Case Closed: Crossroad in the Ancient Capital", please fix this and move "Detective Connan" to tags (make sure the tags and source are the same on all diffs when doing this)

Do not kudosu this, tell me when fixed and I shall bubble.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.
*If you have something to ask, PM me*

[General]
1. The title should be "Time After Time". Yes, capitals.
2. Put a space between "Time" and "~Hana". [!]
3. I suggest the source: "Detective Conan - Case Closed: Crossroad in the Ancient Capital"
4. Remove "Case", "Closed", "in", and "the" from tags since they have been covered by the source.
5. This map will be greater with kiais. Put it whether at 00:43:888 & 01:53:566 & 03:05:824 or only 03:05:824. But I suggest you the first choice. It depends on you.

[Storyboard]
Nothing's wrong. Everything's fine.

[Robin's Machi]
00:11:308 (3) - Based on the combo pattern, this should be new combo.
00:24:856 (7) - Doesn't make sense. Hmm, how about move it forward one 1/2 tick.
00:32:598 (4) - ^
00:37:759 (3) - ^
00:59:372 (2) - Add finish
01:24:534 - Add note here.
01:36:469 (3) - Based on the combo pattern, this should be new combo.
01:42:276 (4) - Doesn't make sense. Hmm, how about move it forward one 1/2 tick. Or maybe just remove it.
01:47:437 (3) - ^
01:58:727 (4,5,6) - Stack them properly.
03:00:340 (5) - Add new combo. [?]

[Beren's Hana]
-- There's something bothering me. The random three 1/4 streams are kinda distracting me.

00:40:018 (5) - Remove the repeat. Then extend it one 1/4 tick.
00:43:243 (2) - ^ [?]
00:56:953 (2) - Remove this. [?]
01:27:921 (2) - Move this two 1/4 ticks forward.
01:49:695 (5) - Remove the repeat. Then extend it one 1/4 tick.
01:52:920 (2) - ^ [?]
02:49:534 - Add a note here.
03:26:469 (1) - Make it stop like [Robin's Machi]

Let Krisom do the bubble.

Krisom wrote:

Sorry I took so long. Good luck with the rank.

VanMoNky wrote:

Argh, sorry, I made a mistake, I thought this was the map I'm modding. I was going to give star, but I did in the wrong thread.

Once again, I'm so sorry for popping it.

James2250 wrote:

-The source doesn't need to be so long, move Detective Conan to tags and just keep 'Case Closed: Crossroad in the Ancient Capital' or you can name it Detective Conan:Crossroad in the Ancient Capital (seems to depend which country you want to follow)
-The end of the hp bar kind of blends into the hp background for me and might be hard for people to see it while playing, separate the colors slightly more?

Robin's Machi:
00:26:792 (1,2,3,4) - would look nicer if patterns like these didn't overlap as much
00:44:534 (3,1) - ^
01:35:501 (2,3) - ^
02:56:792 (8,1,2) - ^
03:13:566 (8,1) - ^

Beren's Hana:
03:26:469 (1) - extend this spinner? Sounds odd where it ends at the moment

Should be fine for rank after small fixes~

James2250 wrote:

Took too long to get back to this, anyway~

Rebubbled~