Finished the first chorus off.

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Droney's Sextastic Orgasm].osu

here's my difficulty without hitsounds, will get them tomorrow

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [iMuffin's Complicated].osu

double post to post updated map with hitsounds. hope they are good

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [iMuffin's Complicated].osu

You actually ACCEPTED an iMuffin guest diff? [/troll]
EDIT: It's actually pretty good.

updates

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [iMuffin's Hard].osu

Finished the second chorus.

I'll be sure to finish it this weekend.

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Droney's Sextastic Orgasm].osu

MY MASTERPIECE IS COMPLETE!



Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Droney's Sextastic Orgasm].osu

Moddan my own map like a boss.

Rukarioman's Extreme:
Likely the best difficulty that is (and ever has been) in this mapset. Awesome job.

Powerdrone's Insane:
I definitely think that the Approach Rate is a tad too low for an Insane. Or even, way too low. Increase by at least two ticks please =(

02:41:986 (3) - Hidden repeat, you bastard!
02:48:586 (3) - Spacing to the next note


iMuffin's Challenging:
00:28:786 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - You're only stacking the notes below the slider ends here? Could try to make something more interesting, sir!
02:51:586 (6) - Hiding that slider below the circles looks homosexual, man!

Lizzehb's Hard:
You definitely need more hitsounds in this. Quite honestly, it sounds very bland most of the time.
Also, maybe try to experiment with less obvious rhythms than you're using here. While it certainly isn't bad to stay with the exact rhythm of the song, you could try to combine different rhythms you hear and try to have your map capture a lot of different aspects of the song. Makes your map way more interesting!

RandomJibberish's Normal:

Larto's Easy:

updates

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [iMuffin's Hard].osu

Here is the finla version I have. Thanks for the appreciation of my diff^^

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Rukario's Insane].osu

Larto wrote:

Powerdrone's Insane:
I definitely think that the Approach Rate is a tad too low for an Insane. Or even, way too low. Increase by at least two ticks please =( Lies.

02:41:986 (3) - Hidden repeat, you bastard! Sowwy, I thought it was okay because of the last pattern. Easily changeable.
02:48:586 (3) - Spacing to the next note I'll check this out later...

I'll make edits once I get back from fencing. <3

Larto wrote:

Lizzehb's Hard:
You definitely need more hitsounds in this. Quite honestly, it sounds very bland most of the time.
Also, maybe try to experiment with less obvious rhythms than you're using here. While it certainly isn't bad to stay with the exact rhythm of the song, you could try to combine different rhythms you hear and try to have your map capture a lot of different aspects of the song. Makes your map way more interesting! I wasn't even done with the hit sounds.~ And the only place I thought I could change the rhythm of the notes was in the beginning. (I stole some of your whistle ideas from your insane.)

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Lizzehb's Hard].osu

nice song!

star~★

Kill me now! Kill me now! 8D

[General]
- The mp3 file is 320kbps >< ; I made for you a 128kbps file song: http://www.mediafire.com/?susmfdxr2rb54d5
- lol lot of guests! Nice, but I really wanted to see a Hard made by you, Larto! u_u

[iMuffin]
Why does these slider arrows look reversed? XD (Fix them!)


Nice as usual, have a star <3 Kill me now!

There's a really bizarre glitch that seems to only happen with this mapset.

Those are almost the exact same slider. One only has its last point stretched to the right. There are only 2 points on the slider.

What the hell?

Question:

Is the slider at 00:51:886 (8) alright?

Fixed the other things from Larto's modding though.

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Powerdrone's Insane].osu

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[Larto's Easy]

Can you rename this to Easy? it's you map you know.

other than that, nothing.

[Lizzehb's Hard]

00:11:686 (1) - align with (4)
00:15:286 (4) - align with (3)
00:15:586 (1) - align with (1)
00:15:886 (2) - align with (7)
00:17:986 (8) - align with (6)

The rest are awesome.

*star*

community map go!

Lardo's Easy
00:57:586 - Move the start of the break to here?
01:26:386 (1,1) - You can overlap these better than that, unless they're supposed to stick out for readability concerns?
01:55:186 - Same as first?

RJ's normal
Same break suggestions as Larto's.

Lizzehb's Hard
Same break suggestions...

iMuffin's Challenge
A lot of these sliders look iffy.
01:45:586 (1,2,3) - Like these. They need WORK.
02:09:286 (8) - Sounds better without this.
02:19:186 (1) - Move endpoint one tick up (grid 4) to fix the backbounce.
02:22:786 (6) - Make this vertical.
02:23:986 (1,2,3,4) - Ugly sliders!
02:36:586 (3) - See 2:19, except move tick down.
02:38:386 (1,2) - Move ticks one to the left, grid 4. I've had this happen before to me, it's an easy fix.
02:51:586 (6) - You know the drill.

Powerdrone's Insane
02:17:686 (5) - Spacing

Rukario's Insane
Clean.

TAKE MY STAR

Here are the updates

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [iMuffin's Challenging].osu

[Song Folder]
Not sure about the VBR mp3 bitrate http://puu.sh/1aGx

[All difficulties]
Slider tick rate 2 seems to be more fitting to me. (Also note how all sliders look prettier now?)

[Rukario]
Hp Drain -1

[Powerdrunk]
02:19:186 (1,3) - I strongly disagree with these, try something more circular for your loop sliders. also lol with Slider tick rate 2 http://puu.sh/1aHg

[iMuffin]
00:51:586 (1) - If you already used an slider for 00:49:186 (2) I recommend u use another one here, spinner's kinda short imo.
01:14:386 (2) - I dont think clapping the whole slider fits, i think just use claps on start and end, sounds better.
01:30:436 (4) - Add a clap for consistence with 01:28:036 (4)
01:51:586 (2) - Would look better if you make this one a copy of 01:50:386 (1) since it has a better shape.
01:53:986 (6) - ^ and rotate.

[Lizzehb]
Why does this diff has lower star rating and higher max score than iMuffin's? (This happens even with slider tick rate 1)
I cant say those Z-smooth sliders look good at all when they are so short, maybe use just a linear slider or a simple curve?
00:18:886 (1,2) - I cant say i like these overlaps, but it's up to you whether to change or not.
01:45:586 (1,1,1,1) - I think these look better in a single combo.
02:07:186 (1,2,3) - and 02:07:786 (3,4,5) - and 02:08:686 (6,7,8) - Spacing errors.

[RJ]
Since i think you like your sliders to be perfect 01:10:786 (4,5) - (4)'s distance towards (5) isnt the same throughout the whole slider
01:17:986 (2,3) - ^
01:20:386 (4,5) - ^
If you dont mind these misalignments then dont worry just some slider nazi stuff

[Larto]
I guess this is the only diff where slider tick rate 2 doesnt really look pretty on some sliders.
01:47:986 (3) - Slider end is touching the hp bar.
02:28:786 (1) - Note touching the hp bar.
02:48:061 (1) - Hmm i dont think the start note to this is really needed, you could pretty much start the spinner in there instead.

Whew that was quite a bit, although mostly just some minor nazi stuff, call me back for recheck when you need, starring for now

here's my fixes

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [iMuffin's Challenging].osu

HP-1 also agree with Tick Rate 2

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Rukario's Insane].osu

Again we are all done before Droney. (almost)

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Lizzehb's Hard].osu

Made the second verse cooler, while silmultaneously fixing the issue. Magic.

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [RJ's Normal].osu

Fixed~

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Powerdrone's Insane].osu

"iMuffin" "Muffin" is missing from tags on Rukario's diff

No kudosu, call me back after this simple fix for bubble

Edit: Ok let's try Bubbled~

-As mentioned earlier did you check your mp3? (The average bitrate seems to be around 208, getting slightly too high)
-Use tick rate 2 on every difficulty? Seems to fit more with the song
-Offset might need approx +5, not 100% on that~

Larto's Easy:
02:11:686 (1) - seems to follow the flow more starting at 02:11:986 in my opinion
02:51:586 (1,2) - no silent notes plz

RandomJibberish's Normal:
01:26:386 (1,2,3,1) - odd spacing on patterns like this (not a big fan of anti jumps)
02:50:386 (1) - end at 02:52:186 like the other difficulties? (sounds better)

iMuffin's Hard:
-Some sliders in this difficulty could look much better if smoothed out more (00:28:786 (1), 00:31:186 (1) etc)
00:10:036 (2,5) - nazi: stack these?
01:28:786 (1) - again could look nicer and easier to read
02:23:986 (1,2,3,4) - as an entire pattern doesn't look very neat
02:45:586 (5,6,7) - might as well go through and clean up some stacking~
02:51:586 (6) - no silent notes/sliders plz

Lizzehb's Challenging:
-Still some very odd looking sliders
02:51:586 (1,2,3) - no silent notes plz

Powerdrone's Insane:
02:31:186 (1,2) - stuff like this could look better in general
02:51:586 (3,4,5) - no silent notes plz

Rukarioman's Extreme:
-Ahhhh more than three slider speed---anyway
02:51:586 (1) - ~

As you can tell I really disapprove of silent notes/sliders being used (and I think most players will agree) if you could change them
Call me back after fixes and I will rebubble~

Step 1: Go into the editor
Step 2: Select "Open Difficulty"
Step 3: Switch diffs between verses
Step 4: ???
Step 5: This is a stupid meme so I'm not going to say "Profit".

Fixed the silent slider and removed some green lines that screwed with the sliderslide and tick.

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Rukarioman's Extreme].osu

James2250 wrote:

-As mentioned earlier did you check your mp3? (The average bitrate seems to be around 208, getting slightly too high)
-Use tick rate 2 on every difficulty? Seems to fit more with the song
-Offset might need approx +5, not 100% on that~

The mp3 was encoded at V2, which should be enough for VBR mp3s. I tried reencoding it to V2, and the average bitrate changed to 205. Not a big success.
Powerdrone disagrees with Tick Rate 2 being used on his difficulty, and on Easy it just sounds kind of ugly due to the long sliders. Though i could do it on Easy. In fact, I will.
And I reallyreallyreallyreally doubt that anyone can hear an actual difference between the offsets if I add +5. I'll add +3 just to be sure it's in the middle. Larto logic!

okay fixed the problems

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [iMuffin's Hard].osu

KILL ME NOW

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [RandomJibberish's Normal].osu

Hey.

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Powerdrone's Insane].osu

Larto wrote:

James2250 wrote:

-As mentioned earlier did you check your mp3? (The average bitrate seems to be around 208, getting slightly too high)
-Use tick rate 2 on every difficulty? Seems to fit more with the song
-Offset might need approx +5, not 100% on that~

The mp3 was encoded at V2, which should be enough for VBR mp3s. I tried reencoding it to V2, and the average bitrate changed to 205. Not a big success.
Powerdrone disagrees with Tick Rate 2 being used on his difficulty, and on Easy it just sounds kind of ugly due to the long sliders. Though i could do it on Easy. In fact, I will.
And I reallyreallyreallyreally doubt that anyone can hear an actual difference between the offsets if I add +5. I'll add +3 just to be sure it's in the middle. Larto logic!

Larto logic is the best logic.

Pleaser reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
Seems fine.

Larto's Easy
00:30:439 (2) - Too far from previous slider. The spacing surprised me enough to make me combobreak.
01:28:039 (2,2) - Stack them ? I think it'd look better.
02:07:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this is too hard to play for new players.
02:37:189 (3,4,1) - Spacing... Although there's a new combo and stuff, this kind of thing is really confusing.

RandomJibberish's Normal
00:11:989 (3,4) - The spacing here...
00:16:789 (1,2) - ... is the same as here...
00:19:189 (1,2) - ... then is back to what it was before.
And the time gap between the two first patterns isn't the same.
This happens several times in the map and there isn't a single time when I wasn't surprised.
This spacing change causes things like...
00:47:989 (1,2) - ... to be extremely surprising and hard to play.

iMuffin's Hard
00:10:789 (4,5) - (5) is hidden under (3) and its hitburst, making the rhythm a bit hard to read, because that (5) is unexpected.
00:09:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - For this kind of pattern, I think it sounds better if (3) has a clap.
00:28:789 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue. They are all 1/1 and aren't spaced the same way.
00:38:389 (1) - This might be too hard to catch so soon after the spinner.
01:15:889 (5) - I think it would be better if this was a 1/2 repeat slider, for pattern symmetry purposes.
01:31:189 (1) - Why is this slider linear-like while all the others are curved ?
01:35:989 (1) - This might be too hard to catch so soon after the spinner.
01:50:389 (1) - Same. Especially after that short spinner.
02:13:789 (7,8,9,10,1) - Rather than this clap patter, I think it would be better to make a crescendo here with only normal hitsounds, maybe a finish for the last note.
02:43:189 (1) - Why is this slider linear-like while all the others are curved ?

Lizzehb's Challenging
00:14:089 (6,7,1,2,3) - This part was extremely hard for me to play. I couldn't figure out the timing even after three tries.
01:14:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And so was this one.
01:20:389 (4,1,2) - Spacing. They aren't spaced evenly despite having the same time gap...

Powerdrone's Insane
01:09:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The 1/1 here was genuinely surprising.
02:19:189 (1,2,3,4) - This combo's spacing is bad: (1,2,3) are spaced with 0,9x and (3,4) with 1,2x. Besides, (4) should stack with 02:22:789 (4) - but doesn't - it looks rather bad.
02:31:189 (1,2) - On top of being extremely surprising, I don't even think that kind of jump is playable.

Rukarioman's Extreme
OD is quite high for such high BPM.
Also, more than three unique slider speeds are used in the diff.
00:13:639 (4) - The whistle here sounds bad - it sounds like it comes out of nowhere.
01:38:389 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: they aren't spaced evenly despite having the same time gap.

Odaril wrote:

Rukarioman's Extreme
OD is quite high for such high BPM. Seems alright to me
Also, more than three unique slider speeds are used in the diff. DO we need to really talk about this?
00:13:639 (4) - The whistle here sounds bad - it sounds like it comes out of nowhere. Indeed, removed
01:38:389 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: they aren't spaced evenly despite having the same time gap. Whoopsy, my bad. Fixed

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Rukarioman's Extreme].osu

Rukarioman wrote:

Odaril wrote:

Rukarioman's Extreme
OD is quite high for such high BPM. Seems alright to me
Also, more than three unique slider speeds are used in the diff. DO we need to really talk about this?
00:13:639 (4) - The whistle here sounds bad - it sounds like it comes out of nowhere. Indeed, removed
01:38:389 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: they aren't spaced evenly despite having the same time gap. Whoopsy, my bad. Fixed

Actually, I forgot to write the rest of what I had in mind: it's perfectly fine seeing I didn't even realize there were more than 3 slider speeds while testplaying.

Odaril wrote:

Lizzehb's Challenging
00:14:089 (6,7,1,2,3) - This part was extremely hard for me to play. I couldn't figure out the timing even after three tries. Should be more simple now.
01:14:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And so was this one. Changed note spams into sliders, rearranged some notes.
01:20:389 (4,1,2) - Spacing. They aren't spaced evenly despite having the same time gap... Hmm that's strange AI and DC were both like lol put that note there. If it's still awkward there I can change it to a slider.

Ily, have my babies.

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [Lizzehb's Challenging].osu

Odaril wrote:

iMuffin's Hard
00:10:789 (4,5) - (5) is hidden under (3) and its hitburst, making the rhythm a bit hard to read, because that (5) is unexpected.i can clearly see the approach circle on 5
00:09:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - For this kind of pattern, I think it sounds better if (3) has a clap.we'll have to agree to disagree then
00:28:789 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue. They are all 1/1 and aren't spaced the same way.fixed
00:38:389 (1) - This might be too hard to catch so soon after the spinner.it's not really that hard
01:15:889 (5) - I think it would be better if this was a 1/2 repeat slider, for pattern symmetry purposes.done
01:31:189 (1) - Why is this slider linear-like while all the others are curved ?for some difference
01:35:989 (1) - This might be too hard to catch so soon after the spinner.it's not really that hard
01:50:389 (1) - Same. Especially after that short spinner.same
02:13:789 (7,8,9,10,1) - Rather than this clap patter, I think it would be better to make a crescendo here with only normal hitsounds, maybe a finish for the last note.i think it sounds nice
02:43:189 (1) - Why is this slider linear-like while all the others are curved ?for some difference

anyway here's the update

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [iMuffin's Hard].osu

Spacing still isn't perfect but it should be less confusing

Download: The Good Natured - Be My Animal (Larto) [RandomJibberish's Normal].osu