solfa feat. KOTOKO - Fancy Game !?

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_Meep_
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 22 June 2016 at 1:48:23 PM

Artist: solfa feat. KOTOKO
Title: Fancy Game !?
Source: My Fair Gentleman!
Tags: Kotoko solfa _meep_ Fancy Game !? chuable chuablesoft eroge visual novel galgame
BPM: 175
Filesize: 16855kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lvl 25 (2.33 stars, 117 notes)
  2. Lvl 65 (4.14 stars, 341 notes)
  3. Lvl 75 (4.88 stars, 327 notes)
  4. Lvl Meep? (5.44 stars, 388 notes)


Download: solfa feat. KOTOKO - Fancy Game !?
Download: solfa feat. KOTOKO - Fancy Game !? (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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http://puu.sh/tkKSM/7e14a09b76.osz old map

Special Thanks to RogueKitten,Exa,CookieKivi.

31/5 Created Lvl 25 and Lvl Meep?.
1/6 Created Lvl 75 and Lvl 65.
Changed BG and flipped BG for diff Meep to allow players to see the girl at the piano
5/6 Nerfed Lvl 75 a bit.
6/6 Changed some notes.
Exa
12:59 Exa: yo
12:59 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/990634 solfa feat. KOTOKO - Fancy Game !? [Meep?]]
12:59 Exa: wanna discuss some stuff?
12:59 _Meep_: Yea
12:59 _Meep_: I'd love suggestions <3
12:59 Exa: What I'll give are more like advice XD
13:00 Exa: But lets get to it
13:00 _Meep_: Yayy
13:00 Exa: So first things first you must be confident that your timing is right
13:00 Exa: That means having a correct offset and BPM
13:00 _Meep_: Yea,I know that some parts have pretty weird timings
13:00 _Meep_: The BPM feels right,I don't know about the offset however.
13:01 Exa: Wait, let me try some stuff out
13:01 _Meep_: Go ahead :D
13:02 Exa: So the BPM is correct
13:02 Exa: But the offset is definitely not
13:02 _Meep_: Yea
13:02 _Meep_: I can't figure out the offset
13:03 Exa: try out 181 offset
13:03 _Meep_: With 179 bpm?
13:04 Exa: yup
13:04 _Meep_: kk
13:04 Exa: actually do 183
13:04 _Meep_: I think I should go a bit slower
13:04 _Meep_: just now I tapped till it reached 175.40
13:04 Exa: And its universal, meaning it doesn't change
13:05 _Meep_: Oh,ok XD
13:05 _Meep_: so I'll try 183
13:05 Exa: and yeah, the BPM is not exactly right
13:05 Exa: I checked again and it is off
13:05 Exa: let me find the correct one
13:06 _Meep_: I tried till 175.40,see what u get
13:06 Exa: Nah there's no way its decimal
13:06 Exa: Do 175
13:06 Exa: seems fine on my end
13:07 _Meep_: ok,leme try
13:07 _Meep_: offset 181?
13:07 Exa: 183
13:07 Exa: bpm 175
13:07 _Meep_: kk
13:08 Exa: Also you should make sure that your objects start on red and white ticks as a majority
13:08 Exa: if there are 1/4 beats, use the blue ticks
13:08 Exa: and of course if there are 1/8 use the yellows
13:08 _Meep_: I can't
13:08 Exa: ?
13:08 _Meep_: I have to map the sliders in 1/4 and snap them in 1/6
13:08 Exa: why?
13:08 _Meep_: It doesn't sound right if its mapped in 1/3 or 1/6
13:09 Exa: Because it's not 1/3 or 1/6
13:09 Exa: It's 1/2 and 1/4
13:09 _Meep_: But the note placements sound better in 1/6 -.-
13:09 Exa: On my end, with the BPM and offset that I gave you, they sound perfect on 1/2 and 1/4 because that's where the beats of the song are
13:10 Exa: It's not about how they sound when they are placed, it's about whether or not there is a beat there
13:10 _Meep_: The beat is there,the note isn't (When it is 1/2 or 1/4)
13:10 _Meep_: Thats why I tried 1/3 and 1/6 and it worked
13:10 Exa: I don't get what you mean
13:10 Exa: if there is a beat, you can place a note (hircircle)
13:11 _Meep_: Let me try to resnap everything to 1/4
13:11 Exa: Make sure the [http://puu.sh/pblXF/7e679e925e.jpg Beat Snap Divisor] is 1/2 or 1/4
13:12 _Meep_: Try to snap the starting notes to 1/4 or 1/2
13:12 _Meep_: you'll feel like wtf is dis -.-
13:12 Exa: ...It sound perfectly right to me
13:13 Exa: Can you please show me your timing setup panel and how you've snapped them on the timeline?
13:13 _Meep_: Wait,I think because I snapped it infront just now XD
13:13 Exa: You can slow the song down [http://puu.sh/pbm3M/a817fe5b36.jpg here] if you are not sure if there is a beat somewhere
13:13 Exa: Make sure that you snap notes on red and white ticks that contain actual beats
13:14 _Meep_: Must it always be on those?
13:14 Exa: If there is a beat yes
13:14 Exa: If there are beats on blue ticks, use blue ticks
13:14 Exa: Sometimes there are beats that follow a 1/3 or 1/6 rhythm, but that's quite rare
13:15 Exa: I am going though the song now and haven't yet found 1/3 or 1/6 rhythm
13:15 _Meep_: Im trying to snapp everything to 1/4 now
13:15 Exa: Make sure there are beats where you snap them
13:15 _Meep_: Yea
13:15 Exa: Remember: 1/2 = red and white, 1/4 = red, white and blue
13:16 _Meep_: got it
13:16 Exa: Nope, as far as I can tell, the song has no 1/3 or 1/6 rhythms
13:17 Exa: Snapping should look like [http://puu.sh/pbmd2/3c76ad44ba.jpg this]
13:17 Exa: Or like [http://puu.sh/pbmef/64e2e21e77.jpg this] if there are 1/4 beats
13:17 _Meep_: Yeah,they're all on reds and whites now
13:18 Exa: Careful so that you also use 1/4 when needed
13:18 Exa: 00:27:868 - like here, this is a 1/4 beat
13:18 Exa: of the vocals
13:19 _Meep_: Im always using 1/4 XD
13:19 Exa: But there are not always beats on 1/4
13:19 _Meep_: Yea
13:19 Exa: You must use 1/2 or 1/4 according to whether or not there are beats there
13:19 _Meep_: must 1/2 really be used sometimes?
13:20 Exa: 1/2 must be used 98% of the time
13:20 Exa: 1/4 must be used when there are beats
13:20 Exa: 00:27:868 - This is a 1/4 beat
13:20 Exa: for example ^
13:20 Exa: Something like that is not always there
13:20 Exa: You can take a look at other maps to better understand how this works
13:21 _Meep_: Wait a min,leme go snap everything.. XD
13:21 Exa: Alright
13:25 _Meep_: done
13:25 _Meep_: lol
13:25 Exa: sound better?
13:25 _Meep_: I guess
13:25 Exa: egh, still not sure?
13:25 Exa: Imma do it for you cause I have no idea what you did
13:25 _Meep_: The last note
13:25 Exa: ?
13:26 _Meep_: The last note after the spinner
13:26 _Meep_: I can't get it to sound right -.-
13:26 Exa: can you send me the time?
13:26 _Meep_: How
13:26 Exa: just select the note, do ctrl+c to copy, open the chat and do ctrl+v to past it in here
13:27 _Meep_: 01:31:954 (1) -
13:27 Exa: alright gimmie a sec
13:27 _Meep_: Maybe its just me,idk
13:27 _Meep_: is it wrong?
13:28 Exa: 01:31:725 - The slider should end here
13:28 Exa: 01:31:897 - the note should be here
13:28 Exa: Don't use 1/3, 1/6, 1/4 to get a sound right
13:29 Exa: Once you have the correct BPM and offset, using 1/2 will get it right for you
13:29 _Meep_: then use wat -.-
13:29 Exa: 12
13:29 Exa: 1/2
13:29 Exa: You have offset 175 and BPM 183 still right?
13:29 _Meep_: Yes
13:29 Exa: 01:31:897 - If yes there should be a red tick on this timestamp
13:29 _Meep_: Wait no
13:29 Exa: .....................
13:30 _Meep_: Leme go change it XXD
13:30 _Meep_: Just now it was 174.89
13:30 _Meep_: for bpm
13:30 _Meep_: and 183 for offset >_>
13:30 _Meep_: But it sounded right tbh
13:30 Exa: It's supposed to be 175
13:31 Exa: That's why you couldn't get the last sound
13:31 _Meep_: Is there a way to autosnap all notes?
13:31 Exa: 99.99999% of the time, the offset is not decimal
13:31 Exa: http://puu.sh/pbmO5/4843629d74.png
13:31 _Meep_: So offset 175 and BPM 183?
13:31 Exa: But it's not very reliable so you should check back
13:31 Exa: yup
13:32 _Meep_: dafuq -.-
13:32 _Meep_: everytime I check the snap to new timing boxes,it unchecks itself
13:33 Exa: Never happened to me before, don't know why that happens
13:33 Exa: Try just resnapping a small portion
13:33 Exa: Don't resnap them all now
13:33 Exa: Just resnap some of them to see that the timing is right
13:34 _Meep_: Hmm
13:34 _Meep_: Wait
13:35 _Meep_: Ima update and send you the 174 bpm one,see if its right,I cant seem to snap the ones in 183,and it sounds too fast in1 83,the triples are faster
13:35 Exa: 175 bpm
13:35 Exa: not 174
13:35 Exa: it's 175 bpm and 183 offset
13:35 _Meep_: U said 183 bpm ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
13:35 _Meep_: look up XD
13:36 Exa: http://puu.sh/pbmZI/f9fa0aea46.png
13:36 Exa: Oh yeah I said it reverse once
13:36 _Meep_: XD
13:36 _Meep_: Then I repeated,and u said yes again
13:36 Exa: It's 175 BPM and 183 offset
13:36 Exa: yeah I thought I said it right
13:36 _Meep_: Kk now it sounds pretty good
13:36 Exa: thank god >.<
13:37 _Meep_: Updated it.
13:37 _Meep_: I changed some notes as well
13:37 Exa: Looks much better aint it?
13:37 Exa: Alright, I just wanted to help with the timing since it looked pretty messed up
13:38 Exa: Imma post the IRC in the thread \o/
xJLuke
Man, this is so kawaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see this map on ranked list :3. Love ya senpai
RogueKitten
This is unrankable even by looking at the difficulty names.
I believe that the ranking criteria states that only the highest difficulty of a map can have a custom name, so the "Amateur Game" should be renamed to Normal and "Veteran" to Insane. The "Meep" difficulty, although being the highest difficulty, is also an unrankable name because naming difficulties after the creator of the map is unrankable now (the only exception for that is a guest difficulty, and then it still must signify what difficulty it is).
Also, the file was about 16MB, so you should compress the mp3. Files should be under 10MB unless they have a video or complex storyboard, so it looks like the mp3 is not compressed.
I will download the map and provide modding for the actual map.

EDIT: being retarded, there is a video, no need to compress mp3, it is fine
Topic Starter
_Meep_
Thanks for the feedback,I will change the names as you said and thanks for modding <3
RogueKitten
Oh wow that was quick reply :3
Also, I was being retarded and didn't notice there was a video, so you don't have to change the mp3. :3

Normal
00:27:954 (2,1,1,1) - This would be very confusing to a new player (seeing that it's a Normal difficulty).
00:30:183 (3) - This slider looks very strange. It might be better off replaced with a spinner or a more standard slider.
00:41:325 (1) - This slider is very strange as well. It would probably be better as a normal slider. It is very hard to read for a new player.
01:00:525 (5) - That is a lot of repeats on the slider. I think that you should try a more interesting way to map this.
01:17:325 (8) - Another weird slider. Maybe a spinner or more standard slider would play better?
01:21:096 (1) - This has a lot of repeats as well and could be very confusing to the player. Try mapping this a different way.
01:23:839 (1,2,3,4) - This would be very confusing to a new player.
01:27:953 (1,1) - The slider starts very quickly after the spinner. Try shortening the spinner by one or two ticks so that the player has more reaction time.

I'm going to look into the Insane and Extra difficulties next! :3
RogueKitten
Insane
00:05:668 (1) - This slider is slowed down for no reason. This messed me up when I was playing it. Change it to normal slider velocity?
00:08:411 (1,2) - More slowed down sliders. I see that the vocals are a little slower at these sliders, but I think it would play better to have them at the normal slider velocity still.
00:12:868 (1) - Another slow slider.
00:18:525 (2) - Another slow slider.
00:30:697 (6) - This slider is similar to the weird slider I pointed out in the Normal difficulty. I think it would play well if it was replaced with a spinner.
00:34:811 (8) - I think the repeats on this slider might be overmapped. Maybe replace it with a spinner or make it slower with no repeats so that it goes to the same place in the same time?
00:41:325 (3,4,5) - More slow sliders. Sorry that I keep pointing out these slow sliders, but they really bug me for some reason...
00:43:211 (6) - I feel like this slider should go 2 ticks longer to fully represent the vocals.
00:50:926 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I think this stream is awkwardly shaped. It doesn't play well. I think it should be a faster stream that covers more distance.
00:58:811 (1) - This hitcircle breaks the flow of the stream. Try adjusting it so that the stream runs right into it and that it is part of the circular stream.
01:00:525 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Again, slow sliders.
01:03:783 (4) - Slow slider.
01:06:525 (3) - This slider looks weird. Replace it with a spinner or a more standard slider.
01:17:325 (4) - Another strange slider. Replace it with a spinner or a more standard slider.
01:32:068 (1) - On all the other difficulties, this last note is not a spinner. It makes the Insane difficulty 2 seconds longer than the other ones. For consistency, replace the spinner with a simple hitcircle.
Topic Starter
_Meep_
I'll change those for the normal,but I feel that the slow ones in the insane mode should stay. I initially wanted to throw off players and get them to rage at the insane mode since it's ultimate annoying speed changes every few seconds. It's meant to be that, I really don't feel that it's needed to be changed.
Other than that,I'll take into consideration everything else you said,thanks for helpin <33 :):):):):):):):):):):)

Edit : Slow sliders were added to stop a player's momentum in speed when he/she's going too fast or slow,thats how I feel,I also added it in places such as 01:00:525 (1,2,3,1,2,3) to match the flow of the song
RogueKitten
Extra
00:05:668 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why is there a new combo for every slider here? This should be replaced with just one combo.
00:10:554 (1) - In the Insane difficulty, the part after this slider is mapped. Why is there a break here? This was acceptable in the Normal difficulty, but this makes no sense because it is the highest difficulty and every opportunity for more difficulty should be taken.
00:16:082 (1) - Also map the break after this.
00:30:354 (4) - Weird slider... replace with a spinner?
00:34:982 (3,1,2,3,4) - This confused me when I playtested it. Replace it with a slider or make it a straight, more spaced stream.
00:41:325 (4) - Weird slider, replace with a spinner or more standard slider?
00:45:440 (7,1) - This plays strangely. Maybe replace it with a quick slider that goes for one tick?
00:48:182 (7) - Another weird slider, replace it with a more standard slider?
00:49:554 (1,2,3,4) - Large jumps suddenly. This messed me up while I was playtesting it and it does not flow well. Nerf the jumps a little.
00:50:925 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Very strange stream. Make this a very quick and fast stream that covers more distance. It will make it more challenging (this is very easy for an Extra difficulty, so it needs to be harder anyway.)
01:01:383 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps came out of nowhere. This is a very sudden difficulty spike. I would suggest nerfing this a little.
01:06:011 (3) - Another weird slider, replace it with either a spinner or a more standard slider.
01:17:325 (1) - Another weird slider, replace it with either a spinner or a more standard slider.
01:19:040 (1,2,1) - Push this triple forwards, it was awkward to play for me because it went backwards into the slider and then went forwards. If the first circle of the triple started a gridspace after the slider, it would flow better.
RogueKitten

_Meep_ wrote:

I'll change those for the normal,but I feel that the slow ones in the insane mode should stay. I initially wanted to throw off players and get them to rage at the insane mode since it's ultimate annoying speed changes every few seconds. It's meant to be that, I really don't feel that it's needed to be changed.
Other than that,I'll take into consideration everything else you said,thanks for helpin <33 :):):):):):):):):):):)

Edit : Slow sliders were added to stop a player's momentum in speed when he/she's going too fast or slow,thats how I feel,I also added it in places such as 01:00:525 (1,2,3,1,2,3) to match the flow of the song
I was thinking that was what you were going for there, but it's not really adding difficulty, it's just annoying to play. I would suggest fixing those slider speeds, but it is your map after all :)

(No kudosu)
RogueKitten
I did some searching and this song seems to come from some sort of anime or visual novel named "My Fair Gentleman!" (I'm guessing a visual novel, I ran into videos that were 18+ blocked when I searched it. I'm going to look over the video, I'm afraid there could be some NSFW parts of it that should be edited.) So add "My Fair Gentleman!" as the source.

EDIT: This is a bit much. I was able to see under a couple skirts, there was a lot of breast shown, and in one case it seemed a girl was holding someone under her breasts. Another time the girl was blushing with her tongue sticking out in pleasure, and I've watched enough hentai to know what that means.
I think you should get someone to censor this video or just remove the video entirely. Xexxar maps a lot of eroge songs and he censors his videos and they're ranked fine. Try checking his maps out and edit your video based off of it.

EDIT: Also censor the Insane background. It looks as if she is about to remove her shirt, and based on her expression, in someone's presence. (Normal and Extra backgrounds are okay though!)
RogueKitten
omg i am so sorry for posting so much XD

(No kudosu)
Topic Starter
_Meep_
8-)

RogueKitten wrote:

I did some searching and this song seems to come from some sort of anime or visual novel named "My Fair Gentleman!" (I'm guessing a visual novel, I ran into videos that were 18+ blocked when I searched it. I'm going to look over the video, I'm afraid there could be some NSFW parts of it that should be edited.) So add "My Fair Gentleman!" as the source.

EDIT: This is a bit much. I was able to see under a couple skirts, there was a lot of breast shown, and in one case it seemed a girl was holding someone under her breasts. Another time the girl was blushing with her tongue sticking out in pleasure, and I've watched enough hentai to know what that means.
I think you should get someone to censor this video or just remove the video entirely. Xexxar maps a lot of eroge songs and he censors his videos and they're ranked fine. Try checking his maps out and edit your video based off of it.

EDIT: Also censor the Insane background. It looks as if she is about to remove her shirt, and based on her expression, in someone's presence. (Normal and Extra backgrounds are okay though!)
For your first edit,I think I can fix the slider for 00:30:183 (3) - In the normal modes and other modes to cover the card in the breasts. The 'girl was holding someone under her breasts' is clearly a lap pillow .-..The one that was sticking out the toungue wasn't in ectasy,she was just sitting on the boy's lap -.-(I think that was the one you were referring to)

Edit 2: I feel that looking under a few skirts is nothing compared to the stella-rium BG by Tsukuyomi .-.


Back to the eroge gallery to find another BG~~~
nyu -
ayy

rougekitten shoudn't get that much kudos.

you are only allowed to give him kudos for ONE post. .w.

rouge you can be happy if no bn comes here to see.
lol


and fix the beatmap description thingy.
i hate when you just copy the beatmap info in forum. -hides-
looks not good.

If you have questions feel free to pm me ingame.

00:00:183 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this patterns are good if you didn't overlapped so much with the circles and stuff. Keep in mind that overlap is mostly ugly and not very readable. If you do overlap don't make it that often or try underlapping. Fix this errors in the whole diff/map
00:54:697 (5) - this is unrankable just to mention
00:56:068 (1) - spinner doesn't fits here. delete and make it a slider or smth.
01:00:354 - add circle.
01:06:011 (3) - unrankable slider. players have to see where they have to aim.
01:13:382 (2) - fix the overlap to 01:12:868 (3) -
01:19:040 (2) - thats unrankable too i guess. put the slider at least like this http://puu.sh/pcB2k.jpg so its rankable again
01:21:782 (2) - delete. add circle

eh.. what i wanted to say...

i made a banner for this beatmap!

Topic Starter
_Meep_
Thanks for the banner <3 I'll keep in mid what you said and change accordingly.
Trinoline
i like your creative mapping style :D keep it up ;) and good bg + sogn choice lol
Topic Starter
_Meep_

My Angel Kuon wrote:

i like your creative mapping style :D keep it up ;) and good bg + sogn choice lol
Thanks! Hope you like it when It's ranked.
MBomb
Please only give modders one kudosu, unless very significant changes have been made between posts (such as multiple mods in between). I've denied all kudosu I've seen unfit in this thread, but it's best to avoid this happening again as this will cause issues in the ranking process.
Topic Starter
_Meep_
Thank you,this was my first map and I did not know of the rules about kudosu,thanks. :3
RogueKitten

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Please only give modders one kudosu, unless very significant changes have been made between posts (such as multiple mods in between). I've denied all kudosu I've seen unfit in this thread, but it's best to avoid this happening again as this will cause issues in the ranking process.
Oh, I had been wondering. I had negative kudosu and I was like "wtf, why did you remove them?". Thx for clearing it up. Since you left one kudosu from the Normal mod, it's ok. I was new to modding as well. Now that I have negative kudosu I'm going to probably mod Meep's other maps to get back into positive kudosu.
:3
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