1. Hard (3.47 stars, 680 notes)
2. Lonely (4.27 stars, 913 notes)

O-Moei wrote:

Hello !, from your toilet !. Hehe, just kidding . Who ? I feel lonely X'D . I hope I can be helpful here.

General :
Still have no hit sounds ?. Here's mine suit with this song I guess http://puu.sh/p96PI/cb68508744.rar
Countdown Enabled ?. Just my opinion, but this kind of song need no Countdown XD . But no problem if you want to keep it

Lonely :
00:32:162 (1) - Here, the audio is too high too follow the rhythm X'D . Consider reducing a little
04:30:472 (1) - Oh ! lower the audio for this spinner end will be lovelier

Nah, that's all I can give. I hope I'm correct and not changin the style XD . Good luck !

Flutternye wrote:

Hello, just trying to put in some of my input, hope you don't mind my critique

Some things I noticed

Lonely:
00:45:895 (2) - This jump is a little out of place, and seems to be too far away relative to the jumps beforehand.
01:48:219-02:15:61 (2) - I would realllllly like you to relieve some of this constant jumping by inserting some sliders, perhaps every other beat you could insert short sliders, this would really help relieve the player in my mind.

To sum it up: I really like what you have so far, and I think if you added more difficulties, it could be a cool map.

mezelyus wrote:

You should ask other people but I think the offset is too early as it is. Here's my suggestion:

1. Offset: 70ms BPM: 142.00

JsKingBoo wrote:

first mod, oh god what am I doing

hard diff (3.47) because I'm too bad to play lonely

00:32:162 (7) - Jump kind of feels awkward since the same tune has been played before without the increased distance variation
00:35:120 (5) - 00:35:542 (7) - Same reason as above, the distance between the notes is awkward.
03:17:796 (5) - This note goes partially off the left side of the screen. It's slightly annoying.
03:27:514 (6) - This note goes slightly harder off the left side of the screen. It's slightly more annoying.

hard diff looks ok outside of that.

1. 00:20:351 (5,7) - Stack these properly
2. 00:27:112 (5,6,7) - My problem with this is that players aren't actually gonna move their cursor to follow the sliders, they can just stay stationary in the middle and have no movement, which when you've got three notes ascending in pitch doesn't really work
3. 00:38:943 (8) - A whistle is more fitting than a finish since theres really no sound for the finish to follow in the music
4. 00:40:210 (1) - What I don't like about this whole kiai section is that you've completely missed out on the sick drumline and only focused on the boring 1/2 spam, it would be a whooole lot more interesting and fun to play if you mapped to the drums instead, I'll still comment on your jumps I guess
5. 00:40:633 (2,5) - This kind of overlap is pretty ugly since they're only slightly touching, I'd make them overlap more like 00:42:112 (8,3) - . While I'm talking about overlaps, I'll also mention you should keep overlaps throughout the map consistent, as in the same overlap for every single one. This is good for aesthetics and design
6. 00:45:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Normally in jump spam sections you should try and keep the same jump angles in each combo, which you've done for (1,2,3,4) but then the angle on (4,5,6) is way larger so doesn't play great
7. 00:46:760 (6) - You've started a slider on a weak beat and then ended it on a REALLY strong beat, where ideally you should try and make the strong beat clickable rather than not clickable (i.e. use circles intead)
8. 01:04:929 (4,5,6,7,8) - Why not make this a geometric star rather than the messy star it is right now
9. 02:40:633 (1) - Id probably just turn this into a circle since there's no real reason for the sliderend and it doesn't represent anything

Cheesecake wrote:

Hi, from discord

[Lonely]

1. 00:20:351 (5,7) - Stack these properly
2. 00:27:112 (5,6,7) - My problem with this is that players aren't actually gonna move their cursor to follow the sliders, they can just stay stationary in the middle and have no movement, which when you've got three notes ascending in pitch doesn't really work
3. 00:38:943 (8) - A whistle is more fitting than a finish since theres really no sound for the finish to follow in the music
4. 00:40:210 (1) - What I don't like about this whole kiai section is that you've completely missed out on the sick drumline and only focused on the boring 1/2 spam, it would be a whooole lot more interesting and fun to play if you mapped to the drums instead, I'll still comment on your jumps I guess
5. 00:40:633 (2,5) - This kind of overlap is pretty ugly since they're only slightly touching, I'd make them overlap more like 00:42:112 (8,3) - . While I'm talking about overlaps, I'll also mention you should keep overlaps throughout the map consistent, as in the same overlap for every single one. This is good for aesthetics and design
6. 00:45:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Normally in jump spam sections you should try and keep the same jump angles in each combo, which you've done for (1,2,3,4) but then the angle on (4,5,6) is way larger so doesn't play great
7. 00:46:760 (6) - You've started a slider on a weak beat and then ended it on a REALLY strong beat, where ideally you should try and make the strong beat clickable rather than not clickable (i.e. use circles intead)
8. 01:04:929 (4,5,6,7,8) - Why not make this a geometric star rather than the messy star it is right now
9. 02:40:633 (1) - Id probably just turn this into a circle since there's no real reason for the sliderend and it doesn't represent anything

It looks like I haven't said a lot but most of these things can be repeated for the rest of the map so I'm relying on your intuition to fix things rather than me point out every single place
Overall I'd recommend reconsidering the rhythms you use and work on aesthetics
Good luck

squirrelpascals wrote:

02:03:450 - From here on you have a 3/4 kick pattern your ignoring. I would highly suggest making some of these jumps triples and adjusting your hitsounds to follow this

ex. (triple at 02:04:506 - with circle 7 hitsounded with a kick)


no kds - i really want to mod this later

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi from modreqs
General
Nice song but u need to work more on placing jumps looks a little random to me

Lonely

00:25:422 (1,3) - stack
00:29:224 (2,4) - ^
00:52:253 (9,4) - ^
02:41:900 (2,1) - make blanket nicer
02:41:900 (2,3) - dont overlap move 3 to the left
03:05:986 (1,5) - same here
03:08:943 (8,1,2) - change pattern blanket can be better and 8 overlaps 2
03:10:633 (4,5) - stack it well
03:53:520 (2,5) - same here
03:55:210 (2,7) - ^

im new with modding so i hope i helped a little gl with ur map !

erlinadewi- wrote:

waw. another marshmello ;3

GL~