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Kayano
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Kayano
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月13日 at 15:58:53

Artist: Minase Inori
Title: harmony ribbon
BPM: 137
Filesize: 12191kb
Play Time: 06:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ribbon (4.16 stars, 875 notes)
Download: Minase Inori - harmony ribbon
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水瀬いのり 2nd Single
『harmony ribbon』絶賛発売中！♫

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Last edited by Kayano , edited 8 times in total.
Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Vert
m4m

[ribbon]
没必要用大圈吧，还是cs4好，ar好像也有些低（？）8.5比较好，毕竟是个I
stack leniency 2没问题吗
没sb是不是要把widescreen support 关了
00:20:071 (2) - 放上面可能flow好一些？x192 y200这样
00:22:480 (3,4) - 感觉离得有点近
00:32:991 (4) - nc
02:14:158 (1,2) - 和前面都是同一个方向不是太好，既然nc了可以考虑换个方向转个90度之类的
04:22:261 (2,3,4) - 不好
05:48:538 (3,4) - 不如干脆就放个五连

美丽，图和曲都不错，gl
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
怎么mp3那么大

[Ribbon]
  1. 00:28:830 (2,4) - 感觉这个太近了 ar又不是很高 建议放远点
  2. 00:33:429 (6,1) - 感觉这里flow有点不太好 看看是不是可以改改排列
  3. 00:45:910 (1,3) - 这里挡我觉得并不好 也是因为ar并不高 把箭头移开吧
  4. 01:05:947 - 这里不加个圈跟下鼓?
  5. 01:09:341 - 这里我也觉得可以跟下1/4的音
  6. 01:27:735 (7) - 这里听不到1/8啊 感觉放1/4就可以了啊
  7. 01:34:961 (1,2,3) - 这里flow感觉也有点奇怪 也许可以改一改
  8. 01:44:049 - 这种鼓完全可以跟一根啊...
  9. 01:51:604 (4,5) - 感觉这种放得很近的意义并不大 我觉得可以放远点,,,不过要是你喜欢就留着吧
  10. 02:31:786 - 02:35:180 - 跟前面的一样都建议放点1/4
  11. 02:53:575 (7) - 还是建议1/4
  12. 03:21:604 (8) - 我觉得把这个滑条拆成两个圈好点 03:21:823 - 这里在滑条尾巴上感觉不太好
  13. 03:43:611 - 不加个圈?
  14. 03:49:633 (10) - 也是建议换成两个圈
  15. 04:26:421 (7) - 这个音并不是很明显啊...也是建议换成1/4就可以了
唔 好多1/4都空了 感觉没啥必要 跟上会好玩点 不然音乐有1/4打的时候全是1/2 有点蛋疼
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
as you ingame reqs

[General]

这种基本上是看着非常难受系列,搞一下
SPOILER

还是觉得 CS:4 比较好

[Ribbon]

00:26:421 - +note

00:54:012 (3) - 没平行啊 而且换换这个试试
SPOILER

02:26:640 (5,6,7,8) - 比前面1234 ds变化好大 试试24ctrl+g

02:56:421 (5,6) - 不是很喜欢4-5这个flow ,试试ctrl+h+g
SPOILER

03:21:604 (8) - 滑条尾长白有点那啥= = 拆2note? 9放后面1上

03:49:633 (10) - ^

04:54:450 (10) - ^

04:17:662 (4,1) - 这样比较好看
SPOILER

04:39:560 (4) - 没叠到好难受

04:47:224 (3) - ctrl+g接1顺些

04:55:983 (3,3,3,3) - 后面几个这种都比较适合俩单点

05:22:042 (5,6,7,8,9) - 卧槽,不带这样复制的

05:59:706 (1) - ♫
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
m4m
[O nijam]
od高了？6.5大概就可以吧

01:20:071 (5,6) - 01:27:735 (7,1) - 02:45:910 (5,6) - 这一类，个人感觉间距1.0都是很合适的，好看也好打一点
02:53:794 (1,3,4) - 这里刚好碰到，不是很好看
03:39:341 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这里这个排列必要不是很大……而且减少了一点可玩性，展开排吧？
03:37:589 (1,2) - NC改到2吧？
03:49:195 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里……打起来挺强硬的……顺着放过去挺好的→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5264625
04:44:158 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5264631 原来的样子突然折一下 playing的感觉上不是很好

我建议kiai部分还可以加更多1/4打击点，现在基本上都是用短滑来处理的，并不认为比直接放三连啊什么的效果更好，相互配用可以让这张图更好玩

啊 曲子真好听

图好厉害啊
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Kayano
Vert

Vert wrote:

m4m

[ribbon]
没必要用大圈吧，还是cs4好，ar好像也有些低（？）8.5比较好，毕竟是个I 打算照顾一下HR和DT
stack leniency 2没问题吗 没问题
没sb是不是要把widescreen support 关了 你书的队
00:20:071 (2) - 放上面可能flow好一些？x192 y200这样 我觉得下面爽
00:22:480 (3,4) - 感觉离得有点近 稍微拉远了那么一点
00:32:991 (4) - nc why
02:14:158 (1,2) - 和前面都是同一个方向不是太好，既然nc了可以考虑换个方向转个90度之类的 等我哪天有想法了把这个梗换掉 我也觉得不太好
04:22:261 (2,3,4) - 不好 改了
05:48:538 (3,4) - 不如干脆就放个五连 舒缓段了不打算放

美丽，图和曲都不错，gl

ZZHBOY

ZZHBOY wrote:

怎么mp3那么大

[Ribbon]
  1. 00:28:830 (2,4) - 感觉这个太近了 ar又不是很高 建议放远点 好
  2. 00:33:429 (6,1) - 感觉这里flow有点不太好 看看是不是可以改改排列 我觉得还行
  3. 00:45:910 (1,3) - 这里挡我觉得并不好 也是因为ar并不高 把箭头移开吧 不会挡到 反应时间应该也挺充足的 主要不知道挪到哪里比较好就保持原样了
  4. 01:05:947 - 这里不加个圈跟下鼓?
  5. 01:09:341 - 这里我也觉得可以跟下1/4的音
  6. 01:27:735 (7) - 这里听不到1/8啊 感觉放1/4就可以了啊 我能听到 不过还是改了 打着有点奇怪
  7. 01:34:961 (1,2,3) - 这里flow感觉也有点奇怪 也许可以改一改 看我什么时候能想到点子改了它
  8. 01:44:049 - 这种鼓完全可以跟一根啊...
  9. 01:51:604 (4,5) - 感觉这种放得很近的意义并不大 我觉得可以放远点,,,不过要是你喜欢就留着吧 为了我自己看着好看
  10. 02:31:786 - 02:35:180 - 跟前面的一样都建议放点1/4
  11. 02:53:575 (7) - 还是建议1/4
  12. 03:21:604 (8) - 我觉得把这个滑条拆成两个圈好点 03:21:823 - 这里在滑条尾巴上感觉不太好 滑条尾在长白线上确实不是很好我也知道 我再考虑下吧 还是想降低难度
  13. 03:43:611 - 不加个圈?
  14. 03:49:633 (10) - 也是建议换成两个圈
  15. 04:26:421 (7) - 这个音并不是很明显啊...也是建议换成1/4就可以了 嗯
唔 好多1/4都空了 感觉没啥必要 跟上会好玩点 不然音乐有1/4打的时候全是1/2 有点蛋疼

no comment = 这张图我只跟了非常明显的无法回避的1/4 主要还是送分不想做太难

moonlightleaf

moonlightleaf wrote:

as you ingame reqs

[General]

这种基本上是看着非常难受系列,搞一下 尼克杨.jpg
SPOILER

还是觉得 CS:4 比较好

[Ribbon]

00:26:421 - +note ok

00:54:012 (3) - 没平行啊 而且换换这个试试 我复制粘贴转过来的肯定平行的呀 你那个我感觉一般
SPOILER

02:26:640 (5,6,7,8) - 比前面1234 ds变化好大 试试24ctrl+g 和00:59:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 差不多 我感觉玩家手暖了稍微大一点ds应该没问题

02:56:421 (5,6) - 不是很喜欢4-5这个flow ,试试ctrl+h+g 前面两秒到这一整段都很蠢 我有想法了就改掉
SPOILER

03:21:604 (8) - 滑条尾长白有点那啥= = 拆2note? 9放后面1上 ZZH

03:49:633 (10) - ^

04:54:450 (10) - ^

04:17:662 (4,1) - 这样比较好看 确实可以 不过我想让3和4照样靠近 自己改了下
SPOILER

04:39:560 (4) - 没叠到好难受 本来没打算叠的 你这么说那我就叠起来咯

04:47:224 (3) - ctrl+g接1顺些 我觉得不坏

04:55:983 (3,3,3,3) - 后面几个这种都比较适合俩单点 Lost梗

05:22:042 (5,6,7,8,9) - 卧槽,不带这样复制的 很强势

05:59:706 (1) - ♫

Hakurei Yoru

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

m4m
[O nijam]
od高了？6.5大概就可以吧 AR8OD7不是很正常么 快140bpm了 我还加了0.2

01:20:071 (5,6) - 01:27:735 (7,1) - 02:45:910 (5,6) - 这一类，个人感觉间距1.0都是很合适的，好看也好打一点 第一个没地方放了 第二个改成1/4了 第一个和第三个拉开到0.6x了 再大不好看了
02:53:794 (1,3,4) - 这里刚好碰到，不是很好看 这个梗很蠢 有想法我会改掉
03:39:341 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这里这个排列必要不是很大……而且减少了一点可玩性，展开排吧？ 姑且后面我改了一小段 这里我暂时没什么想法
03:37:589 (1,2) - NC改到2吧？好
03:49:195 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里……打起来挺强硬的……顺着放过去挺好的→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5264625 不错
04:44:158 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5264631 原来的样子突然折一下 playing的感觉上不是很好 改了

我建议kiai部分还可以加更多1/4打击点，现在基本上都是用短滑来处理的，并不认为比直接放三连啊什么的效果更好，相互配用可以让这张图更好玩 嗯 我尽量改改

啊 曲子真好听

图好厉害啊

谢谢大家 :D
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
应邀
[Ribbon]
其实你完全可以直接AR9CS4
tags里填一下专辑？
00:32:991 (4) - 最好NC了
01:13:064 (1) - 不减速一下？
02:12:407 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 前面02:12:407 (2,3,4,5) overlap 效果不错 不过到02:14:158 (1) NC后还都挤一起就不太好看了 多利用一下纵向空间
02:38:903 (1) - 同01:13:064 (1)
03:06:932 (5,6,7,8) 与03:06:056 (1,2,3,4) 旋律是不同的 建议换一种摆法 并同时NC
04:55:107 (1,2,3,4) - 后面一串串这样的好蛋疼
Others nothing to say. Nice map !
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
hihihi
[莉波]
  1. 00:32:991 (4) - 这个空拍感觉会误读，要不加个NC
  2. 00:35:399 (1) - 这个滑条中间的琴感觉不要漏好些
  3. 00:57:078 (2) - 中间的鼓很响啊，最好别漏
  4. 01:42:626 (2) - ^
  5. 01:46:129 (4) - ^
  6. 02:19:414 (3) - ^
  7. 02:22:918 (4) -
  8. 04:09:122 (1) - 缩短到04:11:750 然后再长白线加个note
  9. 04:48:976 (4,1) - 换下NC？
  10. 04:55:107 (1,2,3,4) - 用类似这样的排列比较好
感觉没什么好说的，很强
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Kayano
KaedekaShizuru

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

应邀
[Ribbon]
其实你完全可以直接AR9CS4 AR9太高了 CS我想保持这样
tags里填一下专辑？这是单曲= =
00:32:991 (4) - 最好NC了 换梗了
01:13:064 (1) - 不减速一下？ 不了 感觉不需要
02:12:407 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 前面02:12:407 (2,3,4,5) overlap 效果不错 不过到02:14:158 (1) NC后还都挤一起就不太好看了 多利用一下纵向空间 嗯改掉了
02:38:903 (1) - 同01:13:064 (1)
03:06:932 (5,6,7,8) 与03:06:056 (1,2,3,4) 旋律是不同的 建议换一种摆法 并同时NC 跟歌词决定三个三个一组
04:55:107 (1,2,3,4) - 后面一串串这样的好蛋疼 改了下
Others nothing to say. Nice map !

Mei

Mei wrote:

hihihi
[莉波]
  1. 00:32:991 (4) - 这个空拍感觉会误读，要不加个NC 换梗了
  2. 00:35:399 (1) - 这个滑条中间的琴感觉不要漏好些 改了
  3. 00:57:078 (2) - 中间的鼓很响啊，最好别漏 这里在舒缓段 我想尽量只跟vocal 不舒服的地方再跟点鼓 这里感觉滑条带过的感觉会比强行加个点好得多
  4. 01:42:626 (2) - ^
  5. 01:46:129 (4) - ^
  6. 02:19:414 (3) - ^
  7. 02:22:918 (4) -
  8. 04:09:122 (1) - 缩短到04:11:750 然后再长白线加个note 不了 舒缓段 想让转盘转到这儿
  9. 04:48:976 (4,1) - 换下NC？ 换梗了 就不用加NC了
  10. 04:55:107 (1,2,3,4) - 用类似这样的排列比较好好 改了
感觉没什么好说的，很强
感谢mod :)
Jervis
46 posts
Joined June 2012
Jervis
祈之助這個聲線 戀愛了
silent and good map :D
[Crz]Makii
450 posts
Joined November 2014
[Crz]Makii
来了
[Ribbon]
  1. 01:07:370 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ... 全选出来以后 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5302152 这个7的位置十分蛋疼...x161y270 建议位置
  2. 01:16:129 (3,4) - 稍微有一点点大，把4和6点的位置对调感觉更舒服
  3. 01:31:896 (2) - 有点难受，离1的尾巴近了点，考虑拉远？
  4. 03:48:976 (5,8,10) - 白线上的音可以whistle
  5. 05:59:706 (1) - 神
摸不出啥东西。。感觉已经很不错了，射个星~
gl~
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,361 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
As requested last month

[Ribbon]
00:09:341 (2,3) - This jump plays quite weird.
00:22:480 (3,4) - Regular spacing.
01:04:304 (3,4) - Could be easily misread as 1/4 (Same for latter patterns)
01:05:618 (2,3) - triplet?
01:14:596 (3,4) - Plays weird with antiflow. Ctrl+G 4

Call me back when you get 15sp
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
[Ribbon] 感覺好像漏了很多finish沒加?
  1. 01:09:998 (4) - 感覺加個NC區別這個大跳會比較好點
  2. 03:36:494 (1) - 好像忘了加finish
  3. 03:36:713 (2) - 後面白線的音漏放? 建議還是跟鼓一下
  4. 04:14:158 (3) - 跟人聲的話把這note也加了跟vocal
  5. 05:06:932 (4) - 同03:36:494 (1)
  6. 05:15:253 (3) - 同樣也試試加看看finish
  7. 05:19:195 (6) - 同上
  8. 05:20:947 (1) - 同上
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Kayano
Crz Sword

[Crz]Sword wrote:

来了
[Ribbon]
  1. 01:07:370 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ... 全选出来以后 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5302152 这个7的位置十分蛋疼...x161y270 建议位置 不了 按弧线摆的
  2. 01:16:129 (3,4) - 稍微有一点点大，把4和6点的位置对调感觉更舒服 Changed in my way
  3. 01:31:896 (2) - 有点难受，离1的尾巴近了点，考虑拉远？换了个位置
  4. 03:48:976 (5,8,10) - 白线上的音可以whistle 不好听
  5. 05:59:706 (1) - 神
摸不出啥东西。。感觉已经很不错了，射个星~
gl~

Regraz

Regraz wrote:

As requested last month

[Ribbon]
00:09:341 (2,3) - This jump plays quite weird. Fixed
00:22:480 (3,4) - Regular spacing. moved a little closer
01:04:304 (3,4) - Could be easily misread as 1/4 (Same for latter patterns) Fixed
01:05:618 (2,3) - triplet? Fixed
01:14:596 (3,4) - Plays weird with antiflow. Ctrl+G 4 Changed in my way

Call me back when you get 15sp

smallboat

smallboat wrote:

[Ribbon] 感覺好像漏了很多finish沒加? 加了一大部分 有那么一两个你说的我没加 因为加了感觉不怎么好听
  1. 01:09:998 (4) - 感覺加個NC區別這個大跳會比較好點 还好吧 不是很想加
  2. 03:36:494 (1) - 好像忘了加finish 加了
  3. 03:36:713 (2) - 後面白線的音漏放? 建議還是跟鼓一下 好
  4. 04:14:158 (3) - 跟人聲的話把這note也加了跟vocal 好
  5. 05:06:932 (4) - 同03:36:494 (1) 这个地方加finish我觉得不是很好听，相对的，我在05:05:180 - 加了个finish，后面基本也一样，不单独回复了
  6. 05:15:253 (3) - 同樣也試試加看看finish
  7. 05:19:195 (6) - 同上
  8. 05:20:947 (1) - 同上

Thanks for modding! ;)
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
star
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
I think some English mods are required...?
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Kayano

sahuang wrote:

I think some English mods are required...?
BNs and QATs don't care so much about this I think, they only care the quality of maps.
As for me, everyone is welcomed to put a mod written by Chinese, English or even Japanese on my map's forum (I can't post in Japanese through).
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
bub #1
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
#2 Bubbled
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,361 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Recheck no kudosu
01:48:538 (3,1,2,3) - This feels quite awkward when playing. Jump should be at 3 to 1 instead of 01:48:976 (1,2,3) -
Also the stack-on-slider-head pattern works not that nice here. Better not to do that

01:51:604 (4,5) - This antijump plays weird. Better change the position of 5

05:01:458 (4,1) - Seems too close.
05:15:472 (4,1) - ^
05:29:486 (4,1) - ^

Call me back when fixing those above!
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Kayano

Regraz wrote:

Recheck no kudosu
01:48:538 (3,1,2,3) - This feels quite awkward when playing. Jump should be at 3 to 1 instead of 01:48:976 (1,2,3) -
Also the stack-on-slider-head pattern works not that nice here. Better not to do that 我觉得01:48:538 (3,1) - 不跳也可以 这个flow应该还是可以接受的 至于01:49:414 (2,3) - 是和01:46:786 (5,6) - 成对用的 只用一个的话感觉很奇怪

01:51:604 (4,5) - This antijump plays weird. Better change the position of 5

05:01:458 (4,1) - Seems too close.
05:15:472 (4,1) - ^
05:29:486 (4,1) - ^

Call me back when fixing those above!
Others all fixed :)
Thanks Regraz for recheck and ZZHBOY, smallboat for bubbles. Really appreciate it.
Mafumafu
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Mafumafu
OK
forgot to mention: why not add some tags? Like label, lyric, composer etc?
btw do you have a reliable metadata source?

and also the stack leniency is not normal

check aimod for unsnapped notes.
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Kayano
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Kayano

Regraz wrote:

OK
forgot to mention: why not add some tags? Like label, lyric, composer etc? these are not useful information for searching to me so I didn't want to add them. We have ranked map with no tags like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/359472 so I think it is ok
btw do you have a reliable metadata source? http://www.kingrecords.co.jp/cs/g/gKICM-1662/

and also the stack leniency is not normal Changed to 3

unsnapped notes: 05:25:982 (4) - 05:27:734 (4) - 05:29:486 (4) - Fixed
Mafumafu
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Mafumafu
Since unsnapped notes are unrankable issues, have to rebubble due to the BN rules. Please call ZZH and smallboat for qialification!
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY
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smallboat
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smallboat
Discuss with mapper, just say some opinion but no change and looks fine. So let it Approved
KaedekaShizuru
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KaedekaShizuru
恭喜哦尼酱~！
Kyouren
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Kyouren
Gratzz :3
rui
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rui
Good map. Fun
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