Ametrin wrote:

M4M
其实感觉也没什么好改的……也是强行摸

[GlazeE's Hard]
00:06:649(4,5,1) 打起来还是非常奇怪啊 这里节奏是 考虑一个大滑条糊过去吧 - 这里。。。。不用打滑条吧？
00:18:247(3,4) 重音在3的尾巴上？ 不如3单点4折返 强行和12对称一波
00:38:469(2) 挪下面点
00:46:691(3,4) 挪上面点 角度浅了
01:01:358(5) 也是重音在尾巴上（强迫症啊）

其他都改了ww

Xinely wrote:

Hard :
- 00:06:025 (3) - not really like with overlap to (2) as (2) covers up a bit the (3)'s tail makes a bit hard to read ok
- 00:06:802 (5) - it has inconsistency spacing between 0,63x and 0,68x ok
- 00:18:469 (4) - yep the overlap.. try ctrl+g and 328,200 instead ok
- 00:33:136 (4,1) - transition from the tail to catch (1)'s head is weird reallyyyyyyyyyyyy qwq i think it's not really weird qwq
- 00:43:580 - the string sound is quite strong so it will be nice to be mapped with clickable object like circle umm..but i dont think so..
- 00:47:136 - 00:50:691 - 00:51:136 - ^ ^
- 00:48:247 (2) - i would say ctrl+g, the vocal isnt strong and 00:48:691 - is stronger which feels weird mapped with normal spacing, better do jumps for both ok
- 01:06:469 (4) - feel weird why this slider only which is 1/2 slider repeat. 01:06:802 - has vocal which shouldnt be skipped when you do 01:03:802 (1,2,3) - due vocals ahhh im just follow the white line
- 01:09:580 (1) - 280,72 instead. do you want to make 1/8 jump? i dont think it is jump ;w;
- 01:22:469 (3,4) - click them and move to 360,144 for better flow what? im just code these 00:12:247 (1,2,3,4) -

Kencho wrote:

看了一下圖，感覺Hard的質量還能再提高點

[Hard]

1. 00:01:580 (1,2) - 和前面的DS來比這個靠太近，00:01:580 (1) - ctrl+G更好，然後把00:03:136 (2) - 旋轉90度來放 感觉那样好挤 不改啦
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:136 (3,4) - 這個節奏比較難讀，不如直接一個折返更好，刪掉00:13:802 (4) - 好像不会难读吧 应该打完00:12:247 (1) - 这个都知道是什么节奏了吧？
3. 01:08:914 (4,1,1,2,3) - 這裡間距不明顯，前面1/2的01:08:914 (4,1) - 跳那麼遠，後面1/1的01:09:580 (1,2,3) - 就太近了，你可以拉近1/2或者拉遠1/1，我個人建議拉遠1/1 改了下方向和ds
4. 00:57:802 - 這個空了很奇怪，你可以加個圓圈，但我更建議把00:57:358 (2) - 改成兩個圓圈+一個1/2滑條組成3連 改了
5. 01:06:469 (4,1) - 放遠一點 改了
6. 01:10:914 (1) - 這個的問題和00:56:691 (1,2) - 一樣，理應在00:57:802 - 加個圓圈，但是我更建議把節奏改成和改完的00:56:691 (1,2) - 一樣，也就是一個1/1滑條，然後兩個圓圈+1/2滑條的組合 改了
7. 01:22:469 (3,4) - 和00:13:136 (3,4) - 一樣的問題 一样不觉的难读0.0

ZZHBOY wrote:

hard:
还好吧..虽然有些不适合放hard里
几个地方:
00:05:469 (2,3) - 别叠 改了
00:06:802 (5) - 这种就别强行跟了 多放点1/2自然点 没事吧？
00:12:914 (2) - 这种完全可以用一个圈 00:13:025 - 还有人声 没事吧？
00:18:469 (4) - 折返箭头别被挡道 改了
00:21:469 (6,2) - 这种真的好垃圾 不如放两个圈 改了
00:30:691 (3) - 这种也是强行跟vocal了 改了
00:32:469 (3,4,1) - 这种都好丑的 改了
00:57:802 - 然后这种空出来也不是很好 都可以跟下 改了
好像好多地方都叠了 我觉得没啥必要 不如摆开
也没太差吧...

Xinely wrote:

from m4m

General :
- http://puu.sh/pTyL5/2ced6b7a47.png (also anime doesnt need in tags, it will set in genre) fixed 加anime是为了本地搜索
- i think you need an easy diff. current sv is quite fast for newbie with combined many of 1/2 rhythms (if agree you can make a bit harder your normal diff to make nice spread) bpm这么低，真的没问题啦，这歌即使ez也会用1/2呀

Normal :
- 00:05:136 (1) - somehow copy paste from shape even the position feels weird. like lazy to make new pattern or something 我个人还是蛮喜欢这种梗的……
- 00:12:247 (1,2) - try rotate -10 degree to not make sharp flow 感觉没什么区别0.0
- 00:14:025 (1) - change to finish instead, the music is cymbal 加了，clap也留着，都有
- 00:26:469 (1,2) - that would be better if their shape are same so like a mirror pattern ww 我觉得现在的形状挺舒服的
- 00:33:580 (1,3) - if their overlap can be avoid that would be nice for design. i still see a bit overlap in gameplay fixed
- 00:53:358 - somehow i feel weird with the little break like it doesnt necessary. try map more like http://puu.sh/pTx5H/f2c64fe2bc.jpg (follow vocal, map start from 00:53:136 - ) 不仅这张图，我个人喜欢放过没有伴奏的人声。而且这个难度其他地方我也是这么做的
- 01:09:580 (4) - the slider mapped better with 3 circles. all those musics in whiteticks all are strong qwq用一个折返滑条能够更好地表现出这三个音是一组的。因为难度低，间隔也大，note不一定会比滑条好

good luck ~

IamKwaN wrote:

boom了巴達獸

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References:
http://www.miwa-web.com/disco/archive/?SRCL-9093
http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/artist/miwa/ ... /SRCL-9093
http://www.flyingwitch.jp/goods/op.html

再boom

1. 00:03:802 (2,3) - a single slider would work better following the vocals, also the music is the same as 00:03:580 -.
2. 00:06:914 (1,2,3) - the spacing is really chaotic there and don't represent the song correctly IMO, since 2 and 3 has similar sounds in the music, why 3 is a jump and 2 is keeping spacing?
3. 00:15:802 - I'm wonder why you decide to end the spinner there, since 00:15:802 - is the start of the new section, not the end of the previous one.
4. 00:16:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is really calm music compared to 00:17:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yet both use similar spacing.
5. I don't get the rhythm, for example I get you're following the claps at 00:19:802 (4) - and ignoring the melody 00:20:025 -, but why you're not consistent, since you are following the melody at 00:20:469 (6) -
6. 00:30:025 (1,2) - use two 1/2 sliders instead? they would follow the instruments and vocals better.
7. 00:35:469 - starting streams at blue ticks its really annoying to play, I'd just start the stream at 00:35:358 (1) - were the new music section is starting.
8. 01:26:914 (1,2) - swap NC, since the music changes at 01:27:136 (2) - not in 01:26:914 (1) -

1. 00:24:914 (1,2) - you have a nice rhythm in all the before part, but this isn't that nice, since the sounds at 00:25:136 - 00:25:358 - needs click action and the sounds at 00:25:802 - 00:26:025 (2) - are separate from the rest, my suggestion:
   
2. 00:33:136 (4) - move this a bit down, its actually touching the HP bar and doesn't looks nice at all
3. 01:01:802 (1,1) - something went wrong with the NCs.

1. it is fine, I'm not a fan of the design of this map, I guess you can work on the visual parts and patterning a bit more, sometimes I feel you're just following the distance snap without creating patterns.

Natsu wrote:

GlazeE's Hard

1. 00:24:914 (1,2) - you have a nice rhythm in all the before part, but this isn't that nice, since the sounds at 00:25:136 - 00:25:358 - needs click action and the sounds at 00:25:802 - 00:26:025 (2) - are separate from the rest, my suggestion:
   
2. 00:33:136 (4) - move this a bit down, its actually touching the HP bar and doesn't looks nice at all
3. 01:01:802 (1,1) - something went wrong with the NCs.
   All fixed!

Pata-Mon wrote:

@小激光
我垃圾审美扭不动。最后那里，ez转盘后一小节不能放东西所以不行

@fm
主要你说的那几个地方都不是人声起点……人声基本都是红线音来着所以算啦

thanks for mod

神tm走过场

Ultimate Madoka wrote:

Pata-Mon wrote:

@小激光
我垃圾审美扭不动。最后那里，ez转盘后一小节不能放东西所以不行

@fm
主要你说的那几个地方都不是人声起点……人声基本都是红线音来着所以算啦

thanks for mod

神tm走过场

我给你补个论文如何？

Regraz wrote:

The quality of map is ok but I think it's not a nice idea that the creator only made one difficulty of the map, especially when it is the lowest difficulty.

Natsu wrote:

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Yomi's Broom

1. 00:03:802 (2,3) - a single slider would work better following the vocals, also the music is the same as 00:03:580 -.
   i prefer pattern now
2. 00:06:914 (1,2,3) - the spacing is really chaotic there and don't represent the song correctly IMO, since 2 and 3 has similar sounds in the music, why 3 is a jump and 2 is keeping spacing? changed
3. 00:15:802 - I'm wonder why you decide to end the spinner there, since 00:15:802 - is the start of the new section, not the end of the previous one. fix
4. 00:16:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is really calm music compared to 00:17:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yet both use similar spacing.
   i think its not really a big spacing change though
5. I don't get the rhythm, for example I get you're following the claps at 00:19:802 (4) - and ignoring the melody 00:20:025 -, but why you're not consistent, since you are following the melody at 00:20:469 (6) - i didnt donsider about vocal here, idk why but keep my old mind
6. 00:30:025 (1,2) - use two 1/2 sliders instead? they would follow the instruments and vocals better. ^
7. 00:35:469 - starting streams at blue ticks its really annoying to play, I'd just start the stream at 00:35:358 (1) - were the new music section is starting. i think its fine? really common pattern
8. 01:26:914 (1,2) - swap NC, since the music changes at 01:27:136 (2) - not in 01:26:914 (1) -k

sahuang wrote:

[Hard]

1. SV 1.0 is even lower than Normal 1.3... -
   

   sahuang wrote:

   My biggest concern is the sv in Hard, but it's fine to me and i had irc with other bns.

2. 01:00:691 (3,4) - too far away compared to 01:00:914 (4,5,6) - fixed
3. 01:07:358 (1,2,3) - 01:08:247 (1,2,3) - make them consistent with 01:00:247 (1,2,3) - 01:12:247 (5,6,7) - 01:18:025 (1,2,3) - etc.? - fixed
4. 01:18:914 (5,6,2) - the overlap is too random. - fixed
5. 01:26:914 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/qQai7/f1ca00f9de.jpg same for 01:00:691 (3,4,5) - don't point reverse slider to the circle cuz it's really hard to read and will ruin ds. - fixed
6. 00:33:580 (1,2) - very bad overlap. - keep, i dont think so
7. 01:09:580 (1,2) - swap NC? - keep, 人声在这里01:09:580 - 开始
8. 00:10:469 (3) - NC - fixed

Regraz wrote:

The quality of map is ok but I think it's not a nice idea that the creator only made one difficulty of the map, especially when it is the lowest difficulty.

sahuang wrote:

My biggest concern is the sv in Hard, but it's fine to me and i had irc with other bns.

Kencho wrote:

[GlazeE's Hard]

1. 00:25:136 (2,3) - 這個節奏改成這樣放比較好，http://puu.sh/qUZ0F/ba6450133c.jpg ，因為原本2的滑條尾是重音，原本那樣不太好，至於排列的話，建議1疊到2上然後3疊到4上就好了 - fixed
2. 00:20:914 (5) - 和00:21:802 (1) - NC互換 - fixed
3. 按照前面的NC套路，00:37:802 (1) - 和00:38:691 (3) - NC也要互換 - fixed
4. 01:08:247 (1) - 不需要NC - fixed
5. 01:23:247 - 個人建議這裡可以像主難度一樣加個轉盤到01:24:247 - ，當然別忘了幫轉盤尾加綠線降低音量。 - fixed

Kencho wrote:

Bubbled!

sahuang wrote:

Hard
00:40:025 (4) - 音效头上那个normal去掉
00:54:914 - 加个whistle，和主难度一样
01:09:136 (1) - 为什么没音效...
all fixed

sahuang wrote:

Recheck
Hard
00:40:025 (4) - 音效头上那个normal去掉
00:54:914 - 加个whistle，和主难度一样
01:09:136 (1) - 为什么没音效...

Broom
00:41:580 - 00:45:136 - 00:42:469 (1,2) - 滑条头都漏clap
00:47:802 (1,4) - 00:48:691 (4) - 00:52:247 (4) - 也是？