1. Crowning Moment (7.84 stars, 1239 notes)

Tatsuyu wrote:

k just a few things

dont quote me on this, but offset might be 1,457 instead of 1,475, some of the streams sound a little off, this might work better Might get someone to double-triple check.

00:03:452 (14) - Change to hitcircle, theres a pause after this that the end of this slider currently doesn't allow you to hear there are strong drums in the back.
00:05:581 (14) - ^ same
01:04:781 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - this overLAP is overKILL, move out of overlapping with the last 6 notesProbably will move a bit.
01:12:765 (1,2,3,4) - come on now Bruh
01:32:986 (1) - Kiai should probably start here Contemplated it but the instruments don't come in till later.

- e - v - b- wrote:

might need a new pair of pants after seeing those patterns
in all seriousness though, I can't see this being ranked while 01:13:847 - 01:19:967 are how they are

1. I'd probably bump down the HP because lets face it, 7.5 is really high for a map that is essentially deathstreams.
2. Consider adding 'happy hardcore' to the tags

1. So, I have no clue whats going on but some streams sound super incredibly off at points. Take 00:11:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for example, 00:11:386 (6,7) - is the most noticeable. The 7 sounds like its coming after the strike of the actual key. I'm not really sure if its just your offset or if the BPM gets swingy or something in these streams, but its something that was really distracting to me so it may be distracting to others.
2. Actually, continuing the song on 50%, I notice it 00:11:585 (1,2,3,4) - here pretty easily as well, so consider moving your offset a few ms earlier perhaps.
3. 00:23:226 (8,1) - Is this stream jump because you ran out of room? You didn't do this in other places with the same sounds/intensities so it seems a little bullshit to me, to put it bluntly. I'm keeping that there since that was my first thought. When double checking I noticed you changed stream DS here instead, why is that? I don't notice anything changing musically that would warrant a sudden consistent DS change.
4. 00:24:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This stream's melody has the similar 4 note type pattern you were using in places like 00:21:696 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but you didn't map it that way, is it because you're following the drums now? I'd recommend trying to see if you can tweak it back to the 4 pattern in my opinion, because I think consistency in a map that will receive a lot of flak for being 'overmapped' (not true) and 'mapped for difficulty' needs to be 1000% consistent so you can dismiss all the potential DQ attempts instantly.
5. 00:33:936 (9,10,11,12) - I mean, I know that these are meant to just be part of the stream, but the chords in the background are super loud and should probably be emphasized in someway. You currently have one of the chords on the slider end of 00:34:202 (11) - which just looks a bit awkward to me.
6. 00:39:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This stream is unusually hard to aim since the curve is so tight. On a stream like you had here 00:37:661 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - its fine since you have that slight jump to help un-cramp it a bit.
7. 00:45:377 (5) - Unstacked blanket
8. 00:49:235 (13,1) - Is just a visually awkward transition. Also, 13 looks like its curved too tightly for the rest of the stream leading up to it (making it kind of look like an egg rather than a circle).
9. 00:56:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You mapped this entirely different to the same music when you're clearly following the same sounds. I mean, what you have is acceptable, but it just irks me.
10. 00:59:213 (5,6,1) - Have this map gotten a lot of playtesting yet? I feel like this part is really annoying to sight read because the other instances with this rhythm you used a repeating slider.
11. 01:05:333 (1) - Why not keep the placement of this consistent with the placement pattern of the previous combo? (Place the 1 partially overlapping the 9.)
12. 01:15:976 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't get why you ditched the overlap theme right here, theres nothing different instrumentally or intensity wise.
13. 01:32:472 (1,2,3,4) - These would probably be better as circles, musically speaking. Or muted slider ends, I just don't hear what the slider ends are hitting.
14. 01:45:244 (7,8) - In my opinion, these sounds should be mapped out instead of using kick sliders.
15. 01:48:038 (2) - Unstacked blanket.
16. 01:51:630 (1,2,3,4) - Ironically, I think the spacing should be increased here since the music gets more intense.
17. 01:53:226 (1) - Move this entire slider slightly to the right. as you have it now the stream doesn't quite flow smoothly into it.
18. 01:56:419 (1,2,3,4) - Unsnapped object ends according to AI.
19. 01:56:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - A deceleration stream would be really freaking cool to see here.
    
    Overall its a really solid map that embodies the music fairly well. You did a good job for doing this so fast~! gdpl0x :^)

Reddit wrote:

Wouldnt it be better to wait for the full version of this song to come out before mapping it? also do you plan on other difficulties for this possibly? Good luck on this map man