1. Extra (5.65 stars, 2011 notes)

Thank you both for Mod

O-Moei wrote:

Hello ! from #modreqs. OMFG !!! Demetori !!!. I hope I can be helpful here ! XD

General :
I suggest AR 9,6 You are probably right on this, but I will wait for more input from others

Extra :
00:40:718 (1) - Start again the New Combo from here will be lovelier Fixed!
01:29:528 (1) - Remove the New Combo here will be nice Fixed!
02:06:015 (6) - 05:33:582 (6) - Changing this circles into a nice-shaped slider with low SV will be extra GREAT ! XD I agree! It works so I added one

Nah, I guess just that. No doubt, everything is well-mapped like another Demetori XD. I hope I'm correct, helpful and not changing tha style. Good luck

snoopeh wrote:

hello
from modding q
so let's begin:
01:47:366 (1,2,3,4,5) - needs curve Don't think it's necessary but if more people complain about this, I can change
03:10:393 (2,3,4) - needs more space Fixed!
optional: 03:31:474 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - stream From the test plays I have watched, nobody has complained, but if more people want stream then I can change
03:45:258 (8,9) - circles to differ Are you talking about the spacing?
04:28:880 (1,2) - not sure about the hitsounds here Yes I used wrong hitsounds, fixed! I may need to redo all hitsounds in the future

map is very well done, needs more attention! have fun!

LigerZero wrote:

no kudosu

source added "東方Project" Fixed
tags added "The Shining Needle Castle Sinking in the Air stage 5 theme seija kijin touhou Kishinjou Double Dealing Character 愧人贖悪 Kijin Shokuaku Evil People as the True Object of Salvation comiket88 c88" Fixed

background change to seija kijin (you can search in google or from another beatmap demetori) in resolution 1366x768 Am I required to have a seija kijin background?

LeQuack wrote:

Hey here's a mod for you (I don't mod much maps at this diff so idk how helpful this will be

- All the green timing points at the start are unnecessary as nothing is mapped (There are also others scattered throughout such as 00:40:475) Yes, I am still deciding if I want to map the beginning our not. Still not sure yet, so I will leave it until then. The other ones need to be removed yes, most of them are from messing around with hit-sounds but thanks for pointing them out

- I think right now a lot of the hit-sound volumes are too loud and overpower the song i recommend having them be more like the timing section at 03:35:528 (Maybe even a bit quieter) Will fix once I've finished adding/editing hit-sounds! Thanks for pointing this out as well

01:22:069 (2) - This should be NC to be consistent with previous patterns Fixed
01:32:772 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Because the music is building i think it makes sense if the DS was to increase after each note. This isn't of super importance though and it might be a pain to try and implement True! I have always looked at this part and though it was pretty dull. I will mess around with it
02:23:853 (8) - should start on the white tick and have two notes where it is currently I think you're right but I will get a second opinion on this
03:23:366 (3,4,5,6) - I think it would be cool to make these 1/4 sliders to match the pitch squeals (I'm not a guitarist so they might not be called that ) I like the idea and see where you're coming from but I will probably just keep it as it is.
03:28:069 (1) - I can't actually play the map however from the editor it looks like after the slider you should be going down to the second note. If it is the case that this is confusing to read i would recommend either not having the note below the slider or swapping the order in which you hit the (1) and (2) notesI can see how it can be confusing, but I do the same thing in the previous jumps for it and testplayers haven't had a problem with it yet.
04:22:717 (1) - Remove NC Fixed!

Map's really cool! good luck with it

thypse wrote:

hey there~
about the hitsounds, i think the default soft-hitnormal doesnt rly fit the song, so here a little suggestion: http://puu.sh/p8lkV/e4bb012f4d.wav

btw very nice map =)

Map is updated! Deleted unused inheriting points, etc. If someone could mod for hitsounds, that would be amazing

xNyamx wrote:

hi

I'm modding bigginer.
I'm not good at english. sorry.
I dont check stream part.

01:40:069 (4) - nc Fixed!

02:41:528 (5,6) - unstack Not sure what you mean. Turn into jump?

03:10:393 (2,3,4,5) - a little confused　please widen a spase of there circles. I've been trying to find a solution for this for awhile, I will wait for more suggestions before I change

04:35:366 (7) - nc Fixed!

i think need some break times. any suggestions where?

gl

Ora wrote:

xNyamx wrote:

hi

I'm modding bigginer.
I'm not good at english. sorry.
I dont check stream part.

01:40:069 (4) - nc Fixed!

02:41:528 (5,6) - unstack Not sure what you mean. Turn into jump?
yes

03:10:393 (2,3,4,5) - a little confused　please widen a spase of there circles. I've been trying to find a solution for this for awhile, I will wait for more suggestions before I change

e.g. 03:10:393 (2,3,4,5) - [combo num2-4]DS1.0 ,[4-5]DS 2.6


Accordingly,
DS of 03:12:339 (1,2,3,4) - 1.0→1.1
DS of 03:12:988 (1,2,3,4) - 1.0→1.2
and change there position (03:12:339 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )



04:35:366 (7) - nc Fixed!

i think need some break times. any suggestions where?


e.g. 03:12:988 (1,2,3,4) - change to 03:12:988 (1,2,3,4,5) -


03:13:637 (5) - ~ 03:24:015 (1) - break time

gl!

gl

Thanks for the mod! Every little thing helps ^_^

NextNaix wrote:

English is bad ... can i use shift+f12..



00:59:285 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273536 maybe you can use it? because 00:58:961 (2,3) - move to 00:59:285 (4,5) - is so nearly.. I won't change because 00:59:610 (6,7,1) - is the same pattern and 00:59:610 (6,7,1) - will be too far from 00:59:366 (5) -

01:05:042 (4) - ↑ ctrl+g maybe I will test out

01:06:177 (1) - i think is not very well ,may be you can → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273550 I think that will mess up spacing, and testplayers have no problem with that

01:06:826 (5) - use a 1/4 silder? I will get a 2nd opinion, but you may be right

01:09:420 (6) - and many more like ↑ just a advice. maybe you want control this diffcult

01:24:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - nice pattern~ but 01:26:123 (2,3) - is not very match this → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273577 just a advice Changed! I might need to fix more later

01:27:907 (8) - ctrl+g maybe Changed, if it causes problems then I will change back

01:32:772 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe you can → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273583(looks not good XD) or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273589 Yes, I need to redo this section, I need more suggestions

02:04:393 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273521 Fixed!

02:31:961 (1) - move to 02:31:150 (2) - not need so nearly i think Fixed!

03:13:637 (1) - set not so nearly Fixed!

03:18:339 (7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273642 I will think about this change

03:31:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273639 i think this more funny same^

04:26:285 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273662 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273666 I need more suggestions for this part, but you are correct, it needs change

05:14:771 (4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5273668 I think it's fine where it is for now, flows well where it is atm

05:15:825 (3,4) - move up a little Nice catch! Fixed

nice map and nice for play it!

Bulldog wrote:

Hello here from #modreqs for a m4m My map : t/460929 (Just the extra and insane). I hope i can be of some help

Extra

00:41:772 (4,5,6,7) - maybe curve the 5 so it flows a little downward Ex: Fixed!

00:57:988 (4,5) - personaly i would rather these be attached to the sliders like : just so it feels better with flow but thats just me. I'll try it out for now

01:07:961 (1,2) - why stack these? I mean its cool but idk why they are stacked instead of following a normal stream flow changed for now

01:12:501 (1,2) - really harsh jump from many test plays there has been no problems with that kick-slider, and it's really not that big of a jump

01:21:420 (7,8,9,10,11) - maybe something more curvy rather than a strait stream like this : nah I think it's fine, gives the map more diversity and it flows fine the way it is

02:22:880 (5,1) - weird flow imo the stream could maybve be brought to the left a tiny bit, but unless more people want it changed then I will keep

03:38:042 (6,7,8,1) - this feels off for the stream same as above, if more people want it changed then I will, otherwise from the testplays I've watched it seems ok

04:22:880 (7) - could be moved up a tad bit fixed!

Nice map. You could use a little more variety but it is a 5 min map so that is hard to do. I hope i was of some help and good luck with the map.

Hobbes2 wrote:

moderoni from queue

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00:38:611 (1) - It'd be cool if the little indents in the slider lined up with the slider ticks Fixed!
01:01:637 (2,3,4) - be consistent with the slowdown here and move it near 01:01:311 (1). Makes no sense for a random jump from the first to the second then having it slowed down. It actually does make sense, you hear a loud finish and then 3 smaller taps
01:08:366 (6) - NC Fixed!
02:06:015 (1) - I'd reshape so it doesn't overlap with 02:05:691 (4) Okay, I'll bookmark for now
04:00:664 (2) - move to the left a little Fixed!
04:01:637 (1) - I'm not an expert on long streams but I think this one would look better if the notes around here 04:02:285 (1,2,3) didn't intersect with the notes around here - 04:01:637 (1,2,3) I asked around #modhelp and was told it is fine
05:03:176 (10) - NC should be on this note not the one after Really? I feel like the NC should start on the white tick where the deep sounding streams kick in


I'm not great at modding really streamy maps because I suck at long streams, but I tried to point out what i could. Hope I helped!

Good luck! The map, aesthetically, looks very nice.

-Vanilla wrote:

From my m4m Queue

01:26:285 (3,4,5,6) - I think this could be raised to make more of a square shape to match the jumps from before? Not too sure how I can change that without remapping that entire part, I'll get a second opinion on this section

01:54:826 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe this slider could align with the stream after it? Make sure to have 01:54:988 (6) be parallel if you make the change I'll try it out for now, if it doesn't feel right I'll change it back

01:55:637 (1) - Something about this slider makes it look like its off-centered from the stream. Might just be my eyes. Not really sure what you mean by offcentered, uhhhhhhhhhhh

01:59:366 (7,3) - Stack Stacked!

02:05:691 (4,1) - Maybe you could do something with the (1) slider to make a blanket for (4) Good call! Fixed



02:16:069 (9) - Perhaps angle this so it matches the stream? I think it looks good right now but maybe it will look better to some other people this way Good find! fixed

02:16:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is the only case for a while where the stream is completely stacked, maybe try to spread it out a bit more maybe, I'll mess around with it

02:38:610 (1) - I feel like this slider can be a bit faster, maybe you can do something pretty with a higher SV? I don't think it's too big of a problem. I got a lot of my inspiration from the other ranked version of this, specifically the SV for these parts


03:06:501 (5) - This slider overlaps 03:06:826 (7) more than the others do Nice catch! fixed the DS

03:10:880 (5) - This SV doesn't bug me as much, but if you change the other SV thing then you should make this one the same. Same from above ^

03:29:366 (2,3) - Did you mean to blanket this? I didn't but I could mess around with it to make it look nicer

03:40:474 (7,8,9,2) - Maybe try to blanket this? Not too big of a deal, plus it will mess up all my DS's

04:15:907 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - Maybe some stacking here can clean this up. It plays and reads fine but you never know who might be using EZ mod Yeah I might have to remap that entire part if it becomes a problem

04:59:852 (1,8) - You have the curve for a blanket here, but it wouldn't even be noticeable. Your decision I'll just keep it as is, will just cause DS problems

05:41:528 (9,3) - Try to stack this ok

Great map, Great flow, Great hitsounds!

I wish you luck on ranking this

Fantabulicious wrote:

I can't really help out here, so I threw you a star. Good luck getting ranked, this is a really good map!

However, I'll still look over it later and try to nitpick a bit.

missa1912 wrote:

hi! from #modreq, sorry for bad english ;w;

General

• Seems fine, probably increase a bit the OD, but that just an opinion I was thinking about 8.7, but I probably won't go more than 9. I will see what the majority of people think.
• Have you thought about changing the name of the diff(? im not saying Extra Stage (like every Demetori map xD), maybe something related to the lyrics idk

Extra

01:55:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - move this to the right to stack 01:54:826 (5,5) - Fixed!
04:33:744 (4,5,6) - i dont hear a triple here, maybe is just me I will ask for a second opinion tomorrow, but you could be right

i couldnt find anything else, awesome map also shot a star :3

General

1. Choose combo colors
2. Disable widescreen support since u got no SB

Extra

1. 00:49:312 (9) - start nc from this note instead
2. 00:58:555 (1) - add finish on sliderhead
3. 01:03:258 (5,6) - dont make these touch 01:02:772 (2,3) - ~ looks ugly to me
4. 01:08:772 (1) - remove nc
5. 01:14:772 (9) - add repeat or add circle at 01:14:934 -
6. 01:49:150 (1) - remove finish from sliderhead
7. 02:11:042 (1) - remove nc
8. 02:17:042 (7) - start nc from here
9. 02:19:150 (5) - finish
10. 02:38:610 (1) - the red anchor point should be exactly in middle, its not
11. 02:41:447 - u need an object here
12. 02:50:123 (5) - start nc from here
13. 05:15:257 (9) - ^
14. 05:21:582 (10,1) - nazi blanket

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

General

1. Choose combo colors Not too sure how to do this, I mapped with a skin that only has 2 colors so that might have messed it up.
2. Disable widescreen support since u got no SB I think I will end up making a simple storyboard, but if I don't how do I disable that?

Extra

1. 00:49:312 (9) - start nc from this note instead ok
2. 00:58:555 (1) - add finish on sliderhead ok
3. 01:03:258 (5,6) - dont make these touch 01:02:772 (2,3) - ~ looks ugly to me imo, it flows fine, and I don't really see a need to change
4. 01:08:772 (1) - remove nc ok
5. 01:14:772 (9) - add repeat or add circle at 01:14:934 - not sure what you mean, I don't hear anything to map to in that space
6. 01:49:150 (1) - remove finish from sliderhead thanks!
7. 02:11:042 (1) - remove nc ok
8. 02:17:042 (7) - start nc from here ok
9. 02:19:150 (5) - finish ok
10. 02:38:610 (1) - the red anchor point should be exactly in middle, its not If you play it, the slider ends up in that anchor point at exactly halfway through (the red tick is the halfway mark)
11. 02:41:447 - u need an object here I understand what you're saying, but I mapping it so that part follows the guitar and then switches to the drums, back and forth
12. 02:50:123 (5) - start nc from here ok
13. 05:15:257 (9) - ^ ok
14. 05:21:582 (10,1) - nazi blanket uhhhh?

Thats all from me ~ GL!~

SkyLifeHope wrote:

IDC if you don't accept my mod4mod
because
If you dont, i'll still get kudosu which is fine by me

05:33:582 (6) - Wouldn't it feel better if there was a spinner after this?

Oh.

That was all i can find
wow this beatmap is really good!

Ora wrote:

Thanks for the mods everyone! I will try to get to get to "Hey lulululu"'s m4m by this weekend (eventhough it was never accepted).

SkyLifeHope wrote:

IDC if you don't accept my mod4mod
because
If you dont, i'll still get kudosu which is fine by me

05:33:582 (6) - Wouldn't it feel better if there was a spinner after this?

Oh.

That was all i can find
wow this beatmap is really good!

I can't give any kudosu for this mod, sorry man. As for the spinner...it's possible but it really isn't needed. Thanks for trying

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, as requested by Mardoka :^)

General

1. Nothing to say

Extra

1. 01:22:555 (2,4) - Collides Fixed!
2. 02:03:420 (1) - The wave could be a bit better like this http://prntscr.com/avw65y ( t/208596 ) to make better blankets made it a little better. It's a short slider so it's pretty hard to make it more curvy
3. 03:22:069 (3,6) - Collides Fixed
4. 03:25:961 (7,8) - Why not only a slider like here 03:24:664 (3) - and here 03:27:258 (3) - ? It would be better imo I'm not mapping the guitar screeches here, although it looks like I am
5. 03:49:474 (6,2) - Maybe you could just stack 2 with 6's sliderend so you could change the note placement of 03:50:610 (3) - so it wouldn't collide with 03:49:799 (1) - Just moved 3 to clean it up
   
6. 04:53:366 (1) - I must say that I don't really like this shape if you could change it I would love you forever changed to just a normal curve! I agree, not sure what I was doing there...

Hmm not much to say, awesome map
Good luck!