EvianBubble wrote:

Thanks for the extra mod! Are you sure you don't want a kudosu? ;O

I'm sure ~ Good luck with your map >w< By the way now I'm curious about the anime xD

Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Cry]
01:01:344 (3) - Move 1 Grid up

[Smile]
01:23:544 (4) - Move 1 Grid up

[Dream]
00:40:944 (1) - Move first sliderpoint 1 grid up
01:01:944 (5) - New Combo
01:01:944 (5) - Remove New Combo
01:04:344 (2) - If ^ New Combo
01:06:444 (8) - New Combo
01:07:344 (1) - If ^ Remove New Combo
01:25:044 (2) - Move first sliderpoint 1 Grid up


Nice Map
Have a Star~

lovhin456 wrote:

I'm sure ~ Good luck with your map >w< By the way now I'm curious about the anime xD

Haha, well you could always start watching it? XD

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Cry]
01:01:344 (3) - Move 1 Grid up This is fine

[Smile]
01:23:544 (4) - Move 1 Grid up OK

[Dream]
00:40:944 (1) - Move first sliderpoint 1 grid up Done
01:01:944 (5) - New Combo Nah, I don't think that warrants a new combo
01:01:944 (5) - Remove New Combo
01:04:344 (2) - If ^ New Combo
01:06:444 (8) - New Combo Actually on second though, I'm going to keep this for consistency
01:07:344 (1) - If ^ Remove New Combo
01:25:044 (2) - Move first sliderpoint 1 Grid up Done

Nice Map
Have a Star~

Thanks! Wow, fast mod

All Suggestion :3

[General]
offset 2,552 (?)

[Cry]
00:09:144 (1) - start here?00:09:744

[Smile]
fine

[Dream]
00:29:844 (2,3,4,5) - how?00:36:744 (1,2,3,4) - how?00:59:844 add note?
01:01:794 ^
01:04:944 (5) - new combo?

nice map~

Hey, here's my mod. Green stuff can be ignored completely, they are merely a design opinion.

[General]:

1. The video file looks weird to me. I cannot open it in any player properly (it works in osu though). However, the video file has sound. Since you're using your mp3 for the map you should remove the sound from the video. Also, it is using 1280x720 resolution with h264 codec. This will put an insane load on weaker machines. I suggest you re-encode this to 800x600 at most (black bars on top and bottom), will also reduce the file size while the quality won't be affected much.
2. Mp3 quality seems a bit low, have you tried to find a better raw/sub for the song and rip it from there?

[Cry]:

1. Why not use the biggest circles for this diff? Most easy diffs use that. Doesn't look that bad though.

[Smile]:

1. -

[Dream]:

1. 01:02:544 (1) - End this slider at 01:03:144 and add 3 circles on the red, blue and white tick. After that add a circle on the red tick as well, so the combo doesn't look empty. Also, add clap at the end of the slider. It could look something like this, 2-3-4-5 is a mirror of 6-7-8-1.
2. 01:04:944 (9) - New combo.

Couldn't really find any wrong stuff apart from the video file. I strongly suggest to do the change on the Dream diff, because that long slider doesn't fit the difficulty profile.
Hope this helped and good luck. :3

edit: correction, the video is .flv not h264, still it deals a huge blow on weaker machines. :3

val0108 wrote:

All Suggestion :3

[General]
offset 2,552 (?) I am not sure about this either, so I am just going to keep what I have so it doesn't mess up lol ^_^"

[Cry]
00:09:144 (1) - start here?00:09:744 Nah, I like where it starts and the pause after

[Smile]
fine

[Dream]
00:29:844 (2,3,4,5) - how? I didn't do this exact thing but I did do something like this, nice suggestion!

00:36:744 (1,2,3,4) - how? No

00:59:844 add note? Nah
01:01:794 ^
01:04:944 (5) - new combo? OK

nice map~

Thanks

lolcubes wrote:

Hey, here's my mod. Green stuff can be ignored completely, they are merely a design opinion.

[General]:

1. The video file looks weird to me. I cannot open it in any player properly (it works in osu though). However, the video file has sound. Since you're using your mp3 for the map you should remove the sound from the video. Also, it is using 1280x720 resolution with h264 codec. This will put an insane load on weaker machines. I suggest you re-encode this to 800x600 at most (black bars on top and bottom), will also reduce the file size while the quality won't be affected much. All right. Unfortunately I don't know much about encoding and such, but I'll try to find some video help
2. Mp3 quality seems a bit low, have you tried to find a better raw/sub for the song and rip it from there? Well my computer says it's 192kbps which is the max, unless it's wrong, so I don't think I'll need to change this

[Cry]:

1. Why not use the biggest circles for this diff? Most easy diffs use that. Doesn't look that bad though. I personally don't like the biggest circles, because they are TOO big IMO and look very cluttered >_<

[Smile]:

1. -

[Dream]:

1. 01:02:544 (1) - End this slider at 01:03:144 and add 3 circles on the red, blue and white tick. After that add a circle on the red tick as well, so the combo doesn't look empty. Also, add clap at the end of the slider. It could look something like this, 2-3-4-5 is a mirror of 6-7-8-1. Used most of this suggestion but I put (5) on the blue tick
2. 01:04:944 (9) - New combo. I put the new combo at (5) as suggested above

Couldn't really find any wrong stuff apart from the video file. I strongly suggest to do the change on the Dream diff, because that long slider doesn't fit the difficulty profile.
Hope this helped and good luck. :3

Thank you very much

If you get me the source, I can make the video file for you.
As for mp3, while it's 192kbps it's a really bad rip. Just saying, it's not like it's the end of the world. :p

Kudosu Star

Sorry for the delay

[Timing]
+9 on offset

[Cry]
01:21:144 (1) - Is this supposed to have slidingwhistle? It sounds a bit rough

[Dream]
01:03:894 (5) - 1/4 later and space away a bit?
01:07:344 (1) - This sounds better for me if placed 1/4 earlier and extended by 1/4
01:13:344 (3,4,5) - This sounds better for if placed 1/4 earlier on start of vocal; add beat 01:13:644 ?
01:14:694 - Add beat?
01:15:294 - ^
01:15:594 - ^

[Overall]
Mapset is good and diffspread too, song is also nice.
Good job

lolcubes wrote:

If you get me the source, I can make the video file for you.
As for mp3, while it's 192kbps it's a really bad rip. Just saying, it's not like it's the end of the world. :p

Sorry for uber late reply, but TBH I don't really remember where I got the video, I might have just cut the file after I watched it? XD Audio sounds fine to me, so ... whatever lol XD

LuPiiTa wrote:

:D

XD Thanks!

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Kudosu Star

Thank you very much!

Kite wrote:

Sorry for the delay

[Timing]
+9 on offset Like I said, I am not sure about timing but I think this is OK so I will keep it

[Cry]
01:21:144 (1) - Is this supposed to have slidingwhistle? It sounds a bit rough Yes it was intentional, but I removed it

[Dream]
01:03:894 (5) - 1/4 later and space away a bit? Nah I tried that, I think it sounds better here
01:07:344 (1) - This sounds better for me if placed 1/4 earlier and extended by 1/4 Well yea the vocals are a bit odd, but I think it sounds all right here
01:13:344 (3,4,5) - This sounds better for if placed 1/4 earlier on start of vocal; add beat 01:13:644 ? Meh, no thanks
01:14:694 - Add beat? OK
01:15:294 - ^
01:15:594 - ^

[Overall]
Mapset is good and diffspread too, song is also nice.
Good job

Thank you

Nothing found and star

As per mod request from queue~

[General]
- Timing for this is tricky, ah haha.

[Cry]
-Consider increasing circle size by 1 Might wanna reconsider my obsession with large size easy. T_T

[Smile]
- =)

[Dream]
- 00:10:644 - Feel like missing a beat here, no?
- 00:21:744 (1) - Not sure if the whistle at the slider end here is intended. Doesn't seem to fit overall hitsounding.
- 00:40:944 (1,2,3) - Whistle at slider head and (3) instead?
- 00:43:644 (1) - Consider removing the whistle here?

Kinda lost track over Dream's hitsounding(dreamy! D:), but overall a fine map to play with.

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Nothing found and star

Late, but thanks

Soul-less wrote:

As per mod request from queue~

[General]
- Timing for this is tricky, ah haha. Unfortunately so haha XD

[Cry]
-Consider increasing circle size by 1 Might wanna reconsider my obsession with large size easy. T_T Don't like the largest size personally, it's too crowded >_<

[Smile]
- =)

[Dream]
- 00:10:644 - Feel like missing a beat here, no? Aight, added
- 00:21:744 (1) - Not sure if the whistle at the slider end here is intended. Doesn't seem to fit overall hitsounding. Removed
- 00:40:944 (1,2,3) - Whistle at slider head and (3) instead? OK, changed
- 00:43:644 (1) - Consider removing the whistle here? Nah, I like it

Kinda lost track over Dream's hitsounding(dreamy! D:), but overall a fine map to play with.

Thank you very much

[dream]
00:26:994 (6) - 1 grid up

sry can't find any problem

Smile:
00:45:744 (1) - 1 Grid down to fit the curve better

Dream:
00:48:744 (2) - Move midpoint 1 grid up 1 grid left, and endpoint 1 grid right, to curve around (3,4) properly.

As expected for a +50 or so map, virtually error-free. Plays quite nicely, starred!

yangzd88 wrote:

[dream]
00:26:994 (6) - 1 grid up OK

sry can't find any problem

No problem, thanks for looking ^_^

akrolsmir wrote:

Smile:
00:45:744 (1) - 1 Grid down to fit the curve better Done

Dream:
00:48:744 (2) - Move midpoint 1 grid up 1 grid left, and endpoint 1 grid right, to curve around (3,4) properly. Looks good

As expected for a +50 or so map, virtually error-free. Plays quite nicely, starred!

Thank you for your help. Yea, I've been trying to get MAT / BAT attention, but you know ...

hihi~

[Dream]
00:33:144 (5) - 1grid right
00:56:844 (6) - 1grid down & lef
01:08:244 (2) - 1grid down
01:14:244 (7) - 1grid up
01:22:644 (3) - 1grid down

[Smile]
fine

[Cey]
fine

All suggestion
nice map =~=d
nice hitsounding! I like this

[Cry]
01:00:144 (1) hwo about adjust this slider more symmetrical?

[Smile]
fine

[Dream]
fine

good!
(no kudosu plz this post)

The beatmap is great and doesn't need more to get ranked, but I though doing those would be nice...

Cry:
01:16:944 - Whistle instead of finish, or turn the volume down a bit on this point for the finish~

Good luck getting this ranked, Kudo star~

Holoaz wrote:

hihi~

[Dream]
00:33:144 (5) - 1grid right
00:56:844 (6) - 1grid down & lef
01:08:244 (2) - 1grid down
01:14:244 (7) - 1grid up
01:22:644 (3) - 1grid down

[Smile]
fine

[Cey]
fine

All suggestion
nice map =~=d
nice hitsounding! I like this

Fixed everything, thanks! I think the spacing's way better now lol XD

banvi wrote:

[Cry]
01:00:144 (1) hwo about adjust this slider more symmetrical? Hmm OK, I moved the middle point up a bit

[Smile]
fine

[Dream]
fine

good!
(no kudosu plz this post)

Lol OK, thanks anyway~

Hushu wrote:

The beatmap is great and doesn't need more to get ranked, but I though doing those would be nice...

Cry:
01:16:944 - Whistle instead of finish, or turn the volume down a bit on this point for the finish~ OK, and I did it with the other diffs as well

Good luck getting this ranked, Kudo star~

Thanks a lot!

Halo

[smile]
AR+1?

NICE BONUS 80000!

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

Halo

[smile]
AR+1? OK

NICE BONUS 80000!

Thanks

Dream
00:55:494 (2) - You may not need a note here, up to you
01:14:544 (1,2,3) - You dont have the right DS between those three beats, it makes 01:14:994 (3) - hard to read, how could I possible to know it is a beat on blue stick if you make the ds same as it on red stick
01:15:294 (4,5,6,7) - ^
I didnt recall if there any other stuffs like this during playing, but I think you should check them. thats all

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

Dream
00:55:494 (2) - You may not need a note here, up to you I think I"ll keep this
01:14:544 (1,2,3) - You dont have the right DS between those three beats, it makes 01:14:994 (3) - hard to read, how could I possible to know it is a beat on blue stick if you make the ds same as it on red stick OK I moved (3)
01:15:294 (4,5,6,7) - ^
I didnt recall if there any other stuffs like this during playing, but I think you should check them. thats all

Thanks ^_^

hi

[General]
- there must be a ritardando near the end of song, because moving your notes on 01:25:944 and 01:26:544 to the later yellow line fit the music better, but i'm not good at timing them, you should find someone and add 2 red sections there
- hitsound: suggest lower the volume of first section too, suggest using a complete silent sliderslide (sliderslide is noisy, esp. during 0:29~0:38 section), lower the volume of claps in KIAI, it's making a great contrast to other hitsounds.

[Cry]
- fine

[Smile]
<00:33:144> (4,1,2) slightly inconsistent spacing
- either <00:59:844> (5) new combo here instead, or <01:09:744> (2) new combo here instead, for consistency

[Dream]
- fine ( i got SS first run )
<00:35:394> (6,7) slightly inconsistent spacing
<01:01:944> ^, between (5,6) and (8,1)

really nice, i can do some more spacing nazi but that really doesn't matter
star.

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[General]
- there must be a ritardando near the end of song, because moving your notes on 01:25:944 and 01:26:544 to the later yellow line fit the music better, but i'm not good at timing them, you should find someone and add 2 red sections there Huh, I haven't noticed this. Thanks, I will seek timing help
- hitsound: suggest lower the volume of first section too, suggest using a complete silent sliderslide (sliderslide is noisy, esp. during 0:29~0:38 section), lower the volume of claps in KIAI, it's making a great contrast to other hitsounds. Lowered volume in Kiai. I'll also try experimenting with the sliderslide

[Cry]
- fine

[Smile]
<00:33:144> (4,1,2) slightly inconsistent spacing (4) moved one grid left
- either <00:59:844> (5) new combo here instead, or <01:09:744> (2) new combo here instead, for consistency Oh, I didn't notice that. Changed on the second, thanks!

[Dream]
- fine ( i got SS first run )
<00:35:394> (6,7) slightly inconsistent spacing Moved down one grid ish
<01:01:944> ^, between (5,6) and (8,1) Moved slightly with grid snap off

really nice, i can do some more spacing nazi but that really doesn't matter
star.

Thanks a lot!

Just a little explaination here..The vocal and guitar of last part are off beat rather a ritardando...There are marimba beat at 01:25:066 and bass at 01:26:566...

But yeah, players might follow the vocal/guitar

...After a few test plays, new timing isn't a good idea, and I don't think players can follow...

don't kds since I didn't clarify this in the first place

All it's fine, I have only suggestion, the BG is very simple, please change. =) no kudos please.

Star.

Selee wrote:

Just a little explaination here..The vocal and guitar of last part are off beat rather a ritardando...There are marimba beat at 01:25:066 and bass at 01:26:566...

But yeah, players might follow the vocal/guitar

...After a few test plays, new timing isn't a good idea, and I don't think players can follow...

don't kds since I didn't clarify this in the first place

Oh I see ... well OK, at least I don't have to change the timing then XD

eldnl wrote:

All it's fine, I have only suggestion, the BG is very simple, please change. =) no kudos please.

Star.

All right, I'll be looking for some. Thanks for checking

[Cry]

Fine

[Smile]

01:02:544 (1) - Delete whistle and add finish
01:12:144 (1) - ^

[Dream]

01:02:544 (1) - Delete whistle and add finish

Star~

Coming from my riddle modqueue~
Next time read the rules please though~

First of all, you seem to use many whistles in your mapset (for me it's a tad too much already~)
Well some suggestions (basically what I would think would be better,~)

Dream

00:13:944 (4) - I would remove the whistles here~
00:23:844 (5) - ^
00:31:344 (1) - ^
00:32:844 (4) - ^, this one seems fine to me when the one at 00:31:344 (1) is removed though...
00:34:044 (1) - ^ and add a whistle at the start of 00:34:344 (2) then.
00:37:344 (3) - I would remove the whistle at the beginning and add it to the end and add one to the beginning of 00:37:944 (4) too then~
00:38:844 (1) - I would probably remove the whistle at the end here, but I'm not too sure~ :3
00:43:644 (1) - I would remove the whistle here and add to the beginning of 00:44:544 (4).
01:02:094 (6,7,8) - I would add a whistle at 6 and remove them from 7+8
01:06:444 (4) - Meh, I would remove the whistle from here as well~

Smile

00:21:744 (1) - I would add a whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end~,I would remove the whistle from 00:22:644 (2) then too~
00:22:944 (3) - I would add a whistle at the beginning~
00:31:944 (2) - I would add a whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end~
00:34:044 (1) - Meh I would remove this whistle~
00:43:644 (1) - I'm not sure about this one, feels fine, but removing the whistle here is also "ok" probably~
00:45:744 (1) - Add whistle at the end? o.o
00:48:744 (3) - ^
00:49:344 (5) - Uhm, I would again remove the whistle from the beginning~

Cry

00:13:344 (2) - I would add a whistle at the beginning~
00:21:144 (4) - I would remove this whistle~
00:21:744 (1) - I would add a whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end~
00:22:944 (2) - I would add a whistle here too then~
00:29:244 (1) - I would add a whistle to the end of this slider~
.......

Gawd this is getting tiring.... pretty late here too~ ;_;
Other than the whistles I would place partly different, I didn't find anything wrong with your mapset~
Spacing seems fine and it pretty much plays good as well~

Star for you~ (going to mention AGAIN, read the rules of my queue next time please~ :/)

Edit: Oops, forgot to check the box, sry ;_;

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Cry]

Fine

[Smile]

01:02:544 (1) - Delete whistle and add finish Don't really think it fits here
01:12:144 (1) - ^ OK but softer

[Dream]

01:02:544 (1) - Delete whistle and add finish Did it quietly here, think it fits quite well, thanks

Star~

Thank you very much! Sorry I'm a little late lol ^_^"

Yomeiro wrote:

Coming from my riddle modqueue~
Next time read the rules please though~

First of all, you seem to use many whistles in your mapset (for me it's a tad too much already~)
Well some suggestions (basically what I would think would be better,~)

Dream

00:13:944 (4) - I would remove the whistles here~ Hmm, removed on the beginning
00:23:844 (5) - ^ Mm, this one is OK
00:31:344 (1) - ^
00:32:844 (4) - ^, this one seems fine to me when the one at 00:31:344 (1) is removed though... Hmm OK agree with these, (1) doesn't fit so I removed it
00:34:044 (1) - ^ and add a whistle at the start of 00:34:344 (2) then. I like this here so I am going to add it but keep the one on (1) too
00:37:344 (3) - I would remove the whistle at the beginning and add it to the end and add one to the beginning of 00:37:944 (4) too then~ It doesn't sound bad with the whistle on the end, but I am going to keep it on the beginning. Added the one on (4) though
00:38:844 (1) - I would probably remove the whistle at the end here, but I'm not too sure~ :3 Mm, sounds all right to me
00:43:644 (1) - I would remove the whistle here and add to the beginning of 00:44:544 (4). Hmm, I kept it but moved the whistle on the slider to the beginning from the end
01:02:094 (6,7,8) - I would add a whistle at 6 and remove them from 7+8 Hmm, I like this actually but I am going to keep it, since I want a whistle on (8) and then it would be the same as the next "stream" ... so for variety, shall we say
01:06:444 (4) - Meh, I would remove the whistle from here as well~ Merp, keeping this

Smile

00:21:744 (1) - I would add a whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end~,I would remove the whistle from 00:22:644 (2) then too~ No, because that's the same as the previous combo and I want something different here
00:22:944 (3) - I would add a whistle at the beginning~ Since I didn't change the previous, this would be overkill I think
00:31:944 (2) - I would add a whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end~ I really liked it there, but changed it
00:34:044 (1) - Meh I would remove this whistle~ Mm, no, I like this
00:43:644 (1) - I'm not sure about this one, feels fine, but removing the whistle here is also "ok" probably~ Well I am going to keep this just because I think it sounds kind of strange without it XD
00:45:744 (1) - Add whistle at the end? o.o Think it sounds a bit too heavy, I like it both at the beginning and the end, so I will just keep it
00:48:744 (3) - ^ Again, sounds good here and on (4) but not on all, so keeping this
00:49:344 (5) - Uhm, I would again remove the whistle from the beginning~ Meh, no

Cry

00:13:344 (2) - I would add a whistle at the beginning~ Mm, I want this closer to (1) since (3) doesn't have any hitsounds on it
00:21:144 (4) - I would remove this whistle~ OK
00:21:744 (1) - I would add a whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end~ I like it better where it is
00:22:944 (2) - I would add a whistle here too then~
00:29:244 (1) - I would add a whistle to the end of this slider~ Oh, good idea
.......

Gawd this is getting tiring.... pretty late here too~ ;_;
Other than the whistles I would place partly different, I didn't find anything wrong with your mapset~
Spacing seems fine and it pretty much plays good as well~

Star for you~ (going to mention AGAIN, read the rules of my queue next time please~ :/)

Edit: Oops, forgot to check the box, sry ;_;

Thanks for modding this even though I didn't read D; I SWEAR I did ... completely my fault though, I was pretty good about that too >_<
So I thank you again for this thorough mod. Yea I don't really have many "patterns" I suppose but meh lol XD

Finde dude mod go !

[Generall]

Too much whistles in every diff imo >.>
You could add a spinner with an silence end on every diff. 01:26:844 - 01:29:244
[Cry]

00:09:144 (1) - don't like the wistle here. didn't fit the music imo
01:16:344 (3) - a normal slider like (01:15:444) would look better here imo. Something like this

looks fine.

[Smile]

00:43:644 (1,2) - You use 3 times the same patterns..pls change the patterns here because there is a new stanza and dat whistle sounds bad too here ._. Sorry i can't explain it better.

looks fine too.

[Dream]

fine.


not much to say here. Could be ranked right now imo.

gl!

[overall]:
Fine

[Dream]:

1. 00:31:494 (x) - add note
2. 01:03:444 - http://puu.sh/2khp Suggestion~
3. 01:26:844 - added spinner? end 01:28:944 -

[Smile]:

1. 00:09:144 (2) - repeat 1time? better
2. 01:25:644 (2) - ^
3. 01:26:844 - added spinner? end 01:28:944 -

[Cry]:

1. 00:29:244 (1) - 1gird right (gird level 4)
2. many spacing miss I think spacing x0.9 note put better

All diff nice map<3
Fight>~</

-Lennox- wrote:

Finde dude mod go !

[Generall]

Too much whistles in every diff imo >.> D; OK I will go through and maybe change some :S
You could add a spinner with an silence end on every diff. 01:26:844 - 01:29:244 Mm, nah, I don't really like that idea
[Cry]

00:09:144 (1) - don't like the wistle here. didn't fit the music imo D; I think it's OK
01:16:344 (3) - a normal slider like (01:15:444) would look better here imo. Something like this OK, changed

looks fine.

[Smile]

00:43:644 (1,2) - You use 3 times the same patterns..pls change the patterns here because there is a new stanza and dat whistle sounds bad too here ._. Sorry i can't explain it better. Well I kind of did this on purpose so ... yea :S Well but if other people don't like it I'll change it, sure

looks fine too.

[Dream]

fine.


not much to say here. Could be ranked right now imo.

gl!

Thanks! I'll be trying to catch MAT / BAT attention haha XD

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:
Fine

[Dream]:

1. 00:31:494 (x) - add note Done
2. 01:03:444 - http://puu.sh/2khp Suggestion~ Sounds all right but I like my version better
3. 01:26:844 - added spinner? end 01:28:944 -

[Smile]:

1. 00:09:144 (2) - repeat 1time? better I want this silence here on purpose, sorry
2. 01:25:644 (2) - ^ Meh, OK
3. 01:26:844 - added spinner? end 01:28:944 - No sorry, I don't like these endings

[Cry]:

1. 00:29:244 (1) - 1gird right (gird level 4) Lol level 4 is there even such thing? XD Well I turned off snap and moved it right then
2. many spacing miss I think spacing x0.9 note put better

All diff nice map<3
Fight>~</

Thanks! Will try my best

~Cry~
01:02:544 (1) – finish on beginning of slider?
01:11:994 (1) – finish at the beginning of this slider?

~ Smile~
00:37:344 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
01:02:544 (1) – finish on beginning of slider?
01:06:444 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing

~Dream~
00:17:244 (4,5,6) – arrange them so that they’re more of an equal distance from each other (ie: keep spacing consistent – right now 5 is closer to 6 and further away from 4. You might have to turn off grid snap to achieve this)
00:23:544 (4) – spacing.
00:40:344 (4) - ^
00:42:144 (3) - ^
00:45:744 (6) – spacing (nazi)
00:46:644 (7) - ^
01:11:994 (1) – finish at the beginning of this slider?
01:19:344 (1,2,3) – inconsistent spacing

~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Haneii wrote:

~Cry~
01:02:544 (1) – finish on beginning of slider? I feel like I did this before so OK XD
01:11:994 (1) – finish at the beginning of this slider? Mmm, sure

~ Smile~
00:37:344 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing OK I moved (3) one down, should be better now
01:02:544 (1) – finish on beginning of slider? Might as well for consistency
01:06:444 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing Turned off grid snap and moved it a bit

~Dream~
00:17:244 (4,5,6) – arrange them so that they’re more of an equal distance from each other (ie: keep spacing consistent – right now 5 is closer to 6 and further away from 4. You might have to turn off grid snap to achieve this) Fixed
00:23:544 (4) – spacing. OK, should be fixed now
00:40:344 (4) - ^
00:42:144 (3) - ^
00:45:744 (6) – spacing (nazi)
00:46:644 (7) - ^
01:11:994 (1) – finish at the beginning of this slider? I don't want to do it here since it's not actually on beat 1
01:19:344 (1,2,3) – inconsistent spacing Done

~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Thank you!

[Cry]
Hitsounds: Use whistles only on small white ticks before and after the big white ticks. I won't spam this post with "remove whistle" "add whistle". See: http://puu.sh/2AgO and remove/place whistles as shown. During KIAI use clap instead of whistle or use both at the same time - whichever you think sounds better. After you've done that, add whistles/claps as posted below.
00:14:544 (1) - add whistle to starting point
00:24:144 (4) - add whistle
00:38:544 (1,2,3) - (1) and (3) are too far away from (2), move (2) to 154/60 to fix spacing
00:49:944 (X) - adding a note here would help in pickung up the pace, add whistle if you do. Also fix spacing by placing (3,X,4) without gridsnap
01:14:544 (1) - start = finish, end = clap (+whistle)
01:15:444 (2) - ^
01:16:344 (3) - start = whistle + finish, end = finish

[Smile]
Try the same thing with the hitsounds as in [Cry].
01:00:144 (1) - gap between (1) and (2) could be more consistent by adjusting position of the starting point and curve it exactly around (2)...details details

Except for the hitsounds this is pretty good.

[Dream]
Again use the hitsound pattern from above. Interesting and good map!


Map itself is pretty good but the hitsounds need a major overhaul. Try using the pattern I gave you and everytime you want to add something besides this pattern, listen to the song and match it exactly to the beat (not the melody).

~star

Such a calm song ^_^

General
- Try adding a silent slider sound file for this map, sounds really nice with it! PM me if you're interested.

Dream
00:21:744 (1) - (nazi) move the middle slider point up one
00:37:944 (4) - (nazi) move the second and third slider ticks right one.
01:21:144 (1,2) - New combo on 2 instead of 1

Everything is good for the other diffs. really liked this