Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many)
[General]fine (offset fine to me)
[Cry]00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better.
00:21:726 (1) - Curve more.
01:06:426 (1) - Curve it.
[Smile]00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward.
[Dream]00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here.
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third.
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this.
Nice song and good map.
Good luck for ranking~~