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ShadowLord wrote:

4th Mod! :)

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job :)

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good! :)

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3 Changed



[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals? Gonna keep this since it's the same in Cry
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe? I don't really like this here, sorry

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job :)

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe? Hmm, I think that'd be too much whistle :P
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2) OK, added
Thanks! Finally, another mod! Haha XD
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Cry
00:19:326- finish.
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle
01:01:026- Add a note

Good luck,Nice mapset
posted

HellDawn wrote:

Cry
00:19:326- finish. Don't think this fits sorry
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note Spacing looks fine here? Not too sure what you mean by "preview note" sorry ...
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle I think clap sounds better
01:01:026- Add a note OK

Good luck,Nice mapset
Thanks for your mod :)
posted
Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
posted
General:
Offset: 143?

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 -
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this

01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - )

Cry:
AR -1
Check the spacing

Fine
posted

Tanmak wrote:

Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
Haha OK, thanks for looking :)

Verdisphena wrote:

General:
Offset: 143? I am not very good with timing, so I am going to leave it as is so I don't mess anything up

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 - Sorry ... what's T? O_O
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note Done
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap No
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note OK

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this I'm not entirely sure if I did what you thought but I changed the slider point slightly

01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - ) I think this is OK

Cry:
AR -1 OK
Check the spacing

Fine
Thank you :D
posted
[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better

Looks good.
posted

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
posted
As per your Request

General


Nothing :P

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ?
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ?
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ?
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ?

That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This
posted

EvianBubble wrote:

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note
posted
Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4)
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point.
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5)

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point.
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
posted

net45291 wrote:

As per your Request

General


Nothing :P

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo No for consistency's sake
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ? Added but softer
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ? I think whistle fits better here
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo No
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz I think ... you are right O_O Although ... I don't think a note would fit here, sorry

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ? Yea
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz I added note here with quiet finish and deleted the next one

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ? Done

That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This
Thanks, your mod was helpful :)

qilliam wrote:

lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note
Oh OK XD I added it :P
posted

Byakugan249 wrote:

Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point OK
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point Done
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4) No, purposely not aligned
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point Kind of looks funny and messed up spacing so keeping this
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point. Yep
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point Moved one grid right
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5) Nah, I kinda like the not alignedness here

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point Looks better as is
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point OK
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point Done
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up I think you have the wrong note / timing here? At any rate, I think this part is fine
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point Sure

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point I think the spacing is better untouched
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point. Did the middle one but keeping the end
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point OK
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point Think this looks better as is
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point It curves around better without changes
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up Gonna keep this since it's not really grid snapped atm (for spacing)
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point I like it better as is

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
Thanks a lot! :)
posted
Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many) :P


[General]
fine (offset fine to me)

[Cry]
00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better.

00:21:726 (1) - Curve more.

01:06:426 (1) - Curve it.

[Smile]
00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward.

[Dream]
00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here.
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third.
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this.

Nice song and good map.

Good luck for ranking~~
posted

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many) :PLOL that's fine haha XD


[General]
fine (offset fine to me)

[Cry]
00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better. I think the current starting point sounds better, sorry

00:21:726 (1) - Curve more. OK

01:06:426 (1) - Curve it. This looks better straight IMO

[Smile]
00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC I think my original combos fit better, sorry
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point Done
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward. Sorry I like having the last note by itself

[Dream]
00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here. OK, changed
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third. Er, there is no finish here XD I don't think I will add to the last bit though I think it clashes with the whistle on (1) of the next beat
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this. Yea, sorry I think notes fit better here

Nice song and good map.

Good luck for ranking~~
Thanks a lot for your mod :)
posted
Hey :3

[Dream]
  1. 01:11:076 (6) - Add clap?


[Cry]
  1. Circle Size+1?


Couldn't find more, nice map :)
posted
Heyya Evian!

[General]
  1. Can you make the pink combo colour a little bit stronger? It's kind of hard to distinguish in some parts of the song because of how it blends with the video~
  2. What is HM.flv doing in the folder? After a quick check in the .osu files, it looks like you don't use it for anything. You should remove it. Sorry if you have to FS. Also:
    13 MB, WTF? Something must be wrong here specially because the map weights 11 MB when downloaded...
  3. Since the english version of the source anime is "Wandering Son", you should remove the from the tags.
  4. About the timing:
    The timing felt off in some parts. I tried timing it correctly and got these three sections:
    1. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 128
    2. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 55318
    3. BPM: 96,00 Offset: 85318

    I'll try to get someone to check it. In the meanwhile, you do the same.


[Smile]
  1. It would feel nicer to play if it had OD 4 imo :3


Fix those things, and all that will remain is doing a timing check~
Oh and if you change the timing now, remember to resnap everything in every difficulty. Don't forget about resnapping the kiais!

Good luck!
posted

L i d a N wrote:

Hey :3

[Dream]
  1. 01:11:076 (6) - Add clap? Don't really like how it sounds there, sorry


[Cry]
  1. Circle Size+1? You mean bigger? No ... I don't like the largest size, sorry


Couldn't find more, nice map :)
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything :P

narakucrimson wrote:

Heyya Evian!

[General]
  1. Can you make the pink combo colour a little bit stronger? It's kind of hard to distinguish in some parts of the song because of how it blends with the video~ Hmm OK, I hope the new one is better
  2. What is HM.flv doing in the folder? After a quick check in the .osu files, it looks like you don't use it for anything. You should remove it. Sorry if you have to FS. Also: Weird ... you must have an old version of the map. This is what you should be getting. I've full submitted just in case, though
    13 MB, WTF? Something must be wrong here specially because the map weights 11 MB when downloaded...
  3. Since the english version of the source anime is "Wandering Son", you should remove the from the tags. OK
  4. About the timing:
    The timing felt off in some parts. I tried timing it correctly and got these three sections: I'm not sure about timing either, so I'm not going to change anything for now. I'll try to ask a BAT or someone to check it, since I'm not too good at stuff like this :S
    1. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 128
    2. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 55318
    3. BPM: 96,00 Offset: 85318

    I'll try to get someone to check it. In the meanwhile, you do the same.


[Smile]
  1. It would feel nicer to play if it had OD 4 imo :3 Changed


Fix those things, and all that will remain is doing a timing check~
Oh and if you change the timing now, remember to resnap everything in every difficulty. Don't forget about resnapping the kiais!

Good luck!
Thanks a lot. I will try to get someone to check the timing :P
Lol and you said you would have to take a while ... XD

EDIT: I asked lolcubes and he said that the timing was great. Will ask around for more opinions but I think the current one is OK :O
posted
I don't know, 00:55:326 (1) sounds off to me, and 01:26:526 (6) feels too early. Please get someone else to confirm that :O
posted
Was asked for timing help.

Timing very accurately this map would be extremely difficult as the piano goes faster or slower at times, but this timing should be good enough to be played:

offset 136 || BPM 100,010
offset 85978 || BPM 99,000
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