Sandpig wrote:

Dream

01:00:726 - it would be better to follow the vocal here like: While this doesn't sound bad, I like following the beat more here (someone else said that the vocals switch to 1/6 beat, so I'd prefer not to map exactly that for most of it)



01:03:126 - try rhythm like this: This doesn't sound half bad actually, but I'd prefer it the way it is



01:04:926 (9,10,11) - you can increase the distance for them I'm pretty bad with jumps but OK, let's see how this works out XD
01:09:426 (1,2) - stack? OK
01:16:326 (8,9,10) - these three notes play really bad, I'd recommand a spinner(01:16:026 - 01:17:226) here instead I actually quite like these, would you mind telling me why you don't like them? Maybe I can change them or something


Smile

looks fine


Cry

fine

ShadowLord wrote:

4th Mod!

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good!

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3 Changed

SPOILER

[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals? Gonna keep this since it's the same in Cry
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe? I don't really like this here, sorry

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe? Hmm, I think that'd be too much whistle
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2) OK, added

HellDawn wrote:

Cry
00:19:326- finish. Don't think this fits sorry
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note Spacing looks fine here? Not too sure what you mean by "preview note" sorry ...
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle I think clap sounds better
01:01:026- Add a note OK

Good luck,Nice mapset

Tanmak wrote:

Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.



Your message is too short.

Verdisphena wrote:

General:
Offset: 143? I am not very good with timing, so I am going to leave it as is so I don't mess anything up

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 - Sorry ... what's T? O_O
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note Done
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap No
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note OK

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this I'm not entirely sure if I did what you thought but I changed the slider point slightly

SPOILER

01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - ) I think this is OK

Cry:
AR -1 OK
Check the spacing

Fine

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.

EvianBubble wrote:

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.

Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry

net45291 wrote:

As per your Request

Mod ( ' w ')/

General

Nothing

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo No for consistency's sake
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ? Added but softer
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ? I think whistle fits better here
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo No
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz I think ... you are right O_O Although ... I don't think a note would fit here, sorry

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ? Yea
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz I added note here with quiet finish and deleted the next one

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ? Done

That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This

qilliam wrote:

lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note

Byakugan249 wrote:

Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point OK
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point Done
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4) No, purposely not aligned
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point Kind of looks funny and messed up spacing so keeping this
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point. Yep
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point Moved one grid right
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5) Nah, I kinda like the not alignedness here

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point Looks better as is
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point OK
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point Done
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up I think you have the wrong note / timing here? At any rate, I think this part is fine
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point Sure

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point I think the spacing is better untouched
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point. Did the middle one but keeping the end
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point OK
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point Think this looks better as is
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point It curves around better without changes
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up Gonna keep this since it's not really grid snapped atm (for spacing)
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point I like it better as is

Alright this is the best i can do. GL

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many) LOL that's fine haha XD


[General]
fine (offset fine to me)

[Cry]
00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better. I think the current starting point sounds better, sorry

00:21:726 (1) - Curve more. OK

01:06:426 (1) - Curve it. This looks better straight IMO

[Smile]
00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC I think my original combos fit better, sorry
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point Done
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward. Sorry I like having the last note by itself

[Dream]
00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here. OK, changed
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third. Er, there is no finish here XD I don't think I will add to the last bit though I think it clashes with the whistle on (1) of the next beat
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this. Yea, sorry I think notes fit better here

Nice song and good map.

Good luck for ranking~~

1. 01:11:076 (6) - Add clap?

1. Circle Size+1?

1. Can you make the pink combo colour a little bit stronger? It's kind of hard to distinguish in some parts of the song because of how it blends with the video~
2. What is HM.flv doing in the folder? After a quick check in the .osu files, it looks like you don't use it for anything. You should remove it. Sorry if you have to FS. Also:
   
   SPOILER

   13 MB, WTF? Something must be wrong here specially because the map weights 11 MB when downloaded...
   
3. Since the english version of the source anime is "Wandering Son", you should remove the from the tags.
4. About the timing:
   The timing felt off in some parts. I tried timing it correctly and got these three sections:
   
   SPOILER

   1. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 128
   2. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 55318
   3. BPM: 96,00 Offset: 85318
   
   I'll try to get someone to check it. In the meanwhile, you do the same.

1. It would feel nicer to play if it had OD 4 imo :3

L i d a N wrote:

Hey :3

[Dream]

1. 01:11:076 (6) - Add clap? Don't really like how it sounds there, sorry

[Cry]

1. Circle Size+1? You mean bigger? No ... I don't like the largest size, sorry

Couldn't find more, nice map

narakucrimson wrote:

Heyya Evian!

[General]

1. Can you make the pink combo colour a little bit stronger? It's kind of hard to distinguish in some parts of the song because of how it blends with the video~ Hmm OK, I hope the new one is better
2. What is HM.flv doing in the folder? After a quick check in the .osu files, it looks like you don't use it for anything. You should remove it. Sorry if you have to FS. Also: Weird ... you must have an old version of the map. This is what you should be getting. I've full submitted just in case, though
   
   SPOILER

   13 MB, WTF? Something must be wrong here specially because the map weights 11 MB when downloaded...
   
3. Since the english version of the source anime is "Wandering Son", you should remove the from the tags. OK
4. About the timing:
   The timing felt off in some parts. I tried timing it correctly and got these three sections: I'm not sure about timing either, so I'm not going to change anything for now. I'll try to ask a BAT or someone to check it, since I'm not too good at stuff like this :S
   
   SPOILER

   1. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 128
   2. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 55318
   3. BPM: 96,00 Offset: 85318
   
   I'll try to get someone to check it. In the meanwhile, you do the same.

[Smile]

1. It would feel nicer to play if it had OD 4 imo :3 Changed

Fix those things, and all that will remain is doing a timing check~
Oh and if you change the timing now, remember to resnap everything in every difficulty. Don't forget about resnapping the kiais!

Good luck!