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posted

Chewin wrote:

Little mod, they are semi-perfect xD :)

Dream:

00:37:926 (4) - Waypoint to create a good blanket: http://puu.sh/4IaS Teehee, blankets XD (Read: done. Or at least I tried my best ...)
01:24:126 (6) - New combo
01:24:726 (1) - No new combo Done

Smile:

00:15:726 (2) - Move it at x:168 y:192? Looks cleaner but too far I think, so not changing
00:16:926 (4) - New combo? No
00:26:526 (3) - ^
00:28:926 (1) - ^
00:29:226 (1) - No new combo
01:04:926 (4) - New combo?
01:07:326 (4) - ^ These I want to keep consistent w/ the other diffs

Cry:

Perfect.

Okay, good maps. I hope it will be ranked soon ~
Thank you very much :) I hope so too haha XD
posted
Dream

01:00:726 - it would be better to follow the vocal here like:



01:03:126 - try rhythm like this:



01:04:926 (9,10,11) - you can increase the distance for them
01:09:426 (1,2) - stack?
01:16:326 (8,9,10) - these three notes play really bad, I'd recommand a spinner(01:16:026 - 01:17:226) here instead


Smile

looks fine


Cry

fine
posted

Sandpig wrote:

Dream

01:00:726 - it would be better to follow the vocal here like: While this doesn't sound bad, I like following the beat more here (someone else said that the vocals switch to 1/6 beat, so I'd prefer not to map exactly that for most of it)



01:03:126 - try rhythm like this: This doesn't sound half bad actually, but I'd prefer it the way it is



01:04:926 (9,10,11) - you can increase the distance for them I'm pretty bad with jumps but OK, let's see how this works out XD
01:09:426 (1,2) - stack? OK
01:16:326 (8,9,10) - these three notes play really bad, I'd recommand a spinner(01:16:026 - 01:17:226) here instead I actually quite like these, would you mind telling me why you don't like them? Maybe I can change them or something


Smile

looks fine


Cry

fine
Thanks! Sorry for the late reply >_<
posted
4th Mod! :)

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job :)

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good! :)

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3



[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals?
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe?

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job :)

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe?
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2)
posted

ShadowLord wrote:

4th Mod! :)

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job :)

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good! :)

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3 Changed



[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals? Gonna keep this since it's the same in Cry
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe? I don't really like this here, sorry

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job :)

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe? Hmm, I think that'd be too much whistle :P
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2) OK, added
Thanks! Finally, another mod! Haha XD
posted
Cry
00:19:326- finish.
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle
01:01:026- Add a note

Good luck,Nice mapset
posted

HellDawn wrote:

Cry
00:19:326- finish. Don't think this fits sorry
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note Spacing looks fine here? Not too sure what you mean by "preview note" sorry ...
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle I think clap sounds better
01:01:026- Add a note OK

Good luck,Nice mapset
Thanks for your mod :)
posted
Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
posted
General:
Offset: 143?

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 -
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this

01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - )

Cry:
AR -1
Check the spacing

Fine
posted

Tanmak wrote:

Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
Haha OK, thanks for looking :)

Verdisphena wrote:

General:
Offset: 143? I am not very good with timing, so I am going to leave it as is so I don't mess anything up

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 - Sorry ... what's T? O_O
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note Done
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap No
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note OK

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this I'm not entirely sure if I did what you thought but I changed the slider point slightly

01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - ) I think this is OK

Cry:
AR -1 OK
Check the spacing

Fine
Thank you :D
posted
[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better

Looks good.
posted

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
posted
As per your Request

General


Nothing :P

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ?
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ?
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ?
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ?

That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This
posted

EvianBubble wrote:

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note
posted
Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4)
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point.
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5)

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point.
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
posted

net45291 wrote:

As per your Request

General


Nothing :P

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo No for consistency's sake
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ? Added but softer
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ? I think whistle fits better here
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo No
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz I think ... you are right O_O Although ... I don't think a note would fit here, sorry

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ? Yea
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz I added note here with quiet finish and deleted the next one

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ? Done

That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This
Thanks, your mod was helpful :)

qilliam wrote:

lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note
Oh OK XD I added it :P
posted

Byakugan249 wrote:

Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point OK
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point Done
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4) No, purposely not aligned
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point Kind of looks funny and messed up spacing so keeping this
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point. Yep
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point Moved one grid right
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5) Nah, I kinda like the not alignedness here

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point Looks better as is
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point OK
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point Done
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up I think you have the wrong note / timing here? At any rate, I think this part is fine
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point Sure

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point I think the spacing is better untouched
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point. Did the middle one but keeping the end
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point OK
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point Think this looks better as is
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point It curves around better without changes
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up Gonna keep this since it's not really grid snapped atm (for spacing)
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point I like it better as is

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
Thanks a lot! :)
posted
Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many) :P


[General]
fine (offset fine to me)

[Cry]
00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better.

00:21:726 (1) - Curve more.

01:06:426 (1) - Curve it.

[Smile]
00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward.

[Dream]
00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here.
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third.
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this.

Nice song and good map.

Good luck for ranking~~
posted

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many) :PLOL that's fine haha XD


[General]
fine (offset fine to me)

[Cry]
00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better. I think the current starting point sounds better, sorry

00:21:726 (1) - Curve more. OK

01:06:426 (1) - Curve it. This looks better straight IMO

[Smile]
00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC I think my original combos fit better, sorry
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point Done
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward. Sorry I like having the last note by itself

[Dream]
00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here. OK, changed
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third. Er, there is no finish here XD I don't think I will add to the last bit though I think it clashes with the whistle on (1) of the next beat
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this. Yea, sorry I think notes fit better here

Nice song and good map.

Good luck for ranking~~
Thanks a lot for your mod :)
posted
Hey :3

[Dream]
  1. 01:11:076 (6) - Add clap?


[Cry]
  1. Circle Size+1?


Couldn't find more, nice map :)
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