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Mogsworth wrote:

Quite a lot of nitpicking will be going on here, especially in the hitsound department.

Slidertick: 2 (The map feels rather empty otherwise) Sorry, but I really don't like slidertick 2

I also think you should add a custom comboburst or two, perhaps of the two main characters? Lol I always forget about comboburst since I disable them :P I can try finding some pictures though, let's see how that goes :P

Cry:
  1. 00:18:426 (1) - Remove the Whistle.
  2. 00:18:726 (2) - Only the last point should have a Whistle. This combo is fine I think. Otherwise it sounds kind of empty
  3. 00:23:526 (3) - The first point should have a Whistle, not the first. ... Eh?
  4. 00:31:326 (1) - Remove the Whistle. Done
  5. 00:37:326 (2) - ^
  6. 00:37:926 (4) - Add a Whistle. OK
  7. 00:38:826 (2) - Remove the Whistle. Sure
  8. 00:42:726 (4) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint. Done as well
  9. 00:43:626 (1) - Only the second point of this should have a Whistle. This is fine
  10. 00:45:726 (3) - Add a Whistle to the first point. Doesn't fit with its surrounding hitsounds IMO
  11. 00:51:426 (3) - Remove the Whistle.
  12. 00:51:726 (4) - Add a Whistle to the endpoint. Sounds better as is
  13. 00:52:926 (1) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint. OK
  14. 01:02:526 (1) - Remove the Finish from the starting point, add a Clap to the endpoint. Originally didn't have the finish but I like it now. Don't think clap fits
  15. 01:04:926 (5) - Finishes on both points. Wow, fits in nicely. Lowered the volume though
  16. 01:06:426 (1) - Second point should have a Whistle. Keeping it on clap (I don't like two hitsounds at once)
  17. 01:12:126 (1) - Remove the Finish, place a Whistle on the endpoint. I'm keeping the finish, but endpoint hitsounds have been changed already (not your suggestion though)
  18. 01:14:526 (1,2) - Shorten these both by 1/4 (I think they'll be easy enough for a beginner and they'll sound better). Put Claps on both endpoints instead of Whistles (so each slider is Finish, Clap). Although the sliders would fit better shorter, it would be the sound as Smile and I think these fit quite well, actually. Sorry, not changing anything here


Smile:
  1. 00:18:726 (2) - Remove the Whistle. No
  2. 00:22:626 (2) - ^
  3. 00:22:926 (3) - Put a Whistle on the endpoint.
  4. 00:23:826 (4) - Remove the Whistle. Did this part. No idea what I was hitsounding to lol
  5. 00:43:026 (5) - ^
  6. 00:43:626 (1) - ^
  7. 00:49:026 (4) - ^ Keeping this one
  8. 00:50:526 (2) - Remove the Whistle from the last point. This too
  9. 01:04:926 (4) - Add a Finish to each point. Kept whistle for the middle, otherwise done
  10. 01:06:726 (2) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle. Don't think it would fit
  11. 01:12:126 (1) - Place a Clap on the endpoint. No
  12. 01:14:526 (1,2) - Add Claps to the endpoints of these sliders. I think whistle sounds better here
  13. 01:25:626 (2) - Make this perfectly diagonal with 3. It looks ugly otherwise. Fixed


Dream:
  1. 00:13:926 (4) - Remove the Whistle. Going right into a second Whistle after this just does not sound aesthetically pleasing. OK
  2. 00:18:426 (1) - ^. It feels a little too busy for the start of a phrase. Sorry, I really do like this pickup whistle :P
  3. 00:23:826 (5) - ^. See 00:13:926 (4). This sounds better to me than the first one, sorry (no clue why though lol)
  4. 00:31:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This phrase feels just plain wrong. How come? In other phrases you're at least mapping to clear instrumental patterns whereas here it's a mixture of both that is confusing at best and downright wrong at worst. It doesn't feel right in the map's flow, change it. All right, I deleted (2) and (4) so it fits more with the piano part. I think the last half is fine, I personally quite like how it flows. Hope that this is better for you
  5. 00:51:126 (3) - Add a Whistle to the last point. I don't like the sound of this, sorry
  6. 00:53:826 (2) - Remove the Whistle from the last point. It creates a nice-sounding delay that's consistent with the previous note. Hmm, OK. I added it 'cus I thought it would be like a build up, but your way works too
  7. 01:04:926 (9,10,11) - This sounds too weak for what you're mapping to. Add Finishes to these three beats. As I did previously, only to the ones on the end.
  8. 01:06:726 (2) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle. No
  9. 01:14:976 (3,7) - I'd replace the Whistles with Claps, to emphasize the end of the drumkit''s part. I don't really like claps here, sorry
Thank you for such a thorough mod :)
posted
inb4 this was bubbled =.="

[Cry]
01:02:526 (1) - clap at the end of the sliders
nothing much i guess

[Smile]
00:28:926 (6) - new combo
00:29:226 (1) - remove the new combo
00:42:726 (4) - new combo
01:23:526 (4) - this slider sounds weird O.o

[Dream]
00:26:526 (4) - new combo
nothing i guess o.o

nice map i hope you it get ranked soon >~<
posted
I'm sticking to my guns on the Claps I suggested, since they fit in with the rest of the surrounding hitsounds. The rest is subjective, even if I think they sound ugly otherwise.

Really, the slidertick makes the map sound less empty. It's boring.

Also, find a comboburst.
posted

-Sekai- wrote:

inb4 this was bubbled =.=" Ha! If you knew my luck with these things you wouldn't be saying that lol XD

[Cry]
01:02:526 (1) - clap at the end of the sliders Sorry ... I know you and Mogs said this but I really don't think it fits here >_<
nothing much i guess

[Smile]
00:28:926 (6) - new combo
00:29:226 (1) - remove the new combo Going to keep it this way for consistency (all the other diffs are like that)
00:42:726 (4) - new combo I think then this would be too short ... sorry D:
01:23:526 (4) - this slider sounds weird O.o Eh ... how do you mean? I think it fits OK >_<

[Dream]
00:26:526 (4) - new combo Sorry, this doesn't really feel like a NC to me :S
nothing i guess o.o

nice map i hope you it get ranked soon >~<
Sorry I didn't change anything ... but thank you anyways :P

Mogsworth wrote:

I'm sticking to my guns on the Claps I suggested, since they fit in with the rest of the surrounding hitsounds. The rest is subjective, even if I think they sound ugly otherwise.

Really, the slidertick makes the map sound less empty. It's boring.

Also, find a comboburst.
OK, I'll compromise your claps - I changed the whistles to claps for the first one, but kept whistle on the second. I was going for the "emptiness" actually, I thought it fit in OK. Trying to find a comboburst, but it's harder than I expected - you have to get the chara on a clear BG or else it turns up as a really odd rectangle O_O I tried doing it myself but it just looked really ugly -_-" So I am going to try and ask someone for help :P

EDIT: It appears I've found a way to make it look less ugly :P
posted
Little mod, they are semi-perfect xD :)

Dream:

00:37:926 (4) - Waypoint to create a good blanket: http://puu.sh/4IaS
01:24:126 (6) - New combo
01:24:726 (1) - No new combo

Smile:

00:15:726 (2) - Move it at x:168 y:192?
00:16:926 (4) - New combo?
00:26:526 (3) - ^
00:28:926 (1) - ^
00:29:226 (1) - No new combo
01:04:926 (4) - New combo?
01:07:326 (4) - ^

Cry:

Perfect.

Okay, good maps. I hope it will be ranked soon ~
posted

Chewin wrote:

Little mod, they are semi-perfect xD :)

Dream:

00:37:926 (4) - Waypoint to create a good blanket: http://puu.sh/4IaS Teehee, blankets XD (Read: done. Or at least I tried my best ...)
01:24:126 (6) - New combo
01:24:726 (1) - No new combo Done

Smile:

00:15:726 (2) - Move it at x:168 y:192? Looks cleaner but too far I think, so not changing
00:16:926 (4) - New combo? No
00:26:526 (3) - ^
00:28:926 (1) - ^
00:29:226 (1) - No new combo
01:04:926 (4) - New combo?
01:07:326 (4) - ^ These I want to keep consistent w/ the other diffs

Cry:

Perfect.

Okay, good maps. I hope it will be ranked soon ~
Thank you very much :) I hope so too haha XD
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Dream

01:00:726 - it would be better to follow the vocal here like:



01:03:126 - try rhythm like this:



01:04:926 (9,10,11) - you can increase the distance for them
01:09:426 (1,2) - stack?
01:16:326 (8,9,10) - these three notes play really bad, I'd recommand a spinner(01:16:026 - 01:17:226) here instead


Smile

looks fine


Cry

fine
posted

Sandpig wrote:

Dream

01:00:726 - it would be better to follow the vocal here like: While this doesn't sound bad, I like following the beat more here (someone else said that the vocals switch to 1/6 beat, so I'd prefer not to map exactly that for most of it)



01:03:126 - try rhythm like this: This doesn't sound half bad actually, but I'd prefer it the way it is



01:04:926 (9,10,11) - you can increase the distance for them I'm pretty bad with jumps but OK, let's see how this works out XD
01:09:426 (1,2) - stack? OK
01:16:326 (8,9,10) - these three notes play really bad, I'd recommand a spinner(01:16:026 - 01:17:226) here instead I actually quite like these, would you mind telling me why you don't like them? Maybe I can change them or something


Smile

looks fine


Cry

fine
Thanks! Sorry for the late reply >_<
posted
4th Mod! :)

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job :)

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good! :)

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3



[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals?
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe?

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job :)

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe?
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2)
posted

ShadowLord wrote:

4th Mod! :)

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job :)

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good! :)

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3 Changed



[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals? Gonna keep this since it's the same in Cry
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe? I don't really like this here, sorry

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job :)

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe? Hmm, I think that'd be too much whistle :P
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2) OK, added
Thanks! Finally, another mod! Haha XD
posted
Cry
00:19:326- finish.
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle
01:01:026- Add a note

Good luck,Nice mapset
posted

HellDawn wrote:

Cry
00:19:326- finish. Don't think this fits sorry
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note Spacing looks fine here? Not too sure what you mean by "preview note" sorry ...
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle I think clap sounds better
01:01:026- Add a note OK

Good luck,Nice mapset
Thanks for your mod :)
posted
Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
posted
General:
Offset: 143?

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 -
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this

01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - )

Cry:
AR -1
Check the spacing

Fine
posted

Tanmak wrote:

Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
Haha OK, thanks for looking :)

Verdisphena wrote:

General:
Offset: 143? I am not very good with timing, so I am going to leave it as is so I don't mess anything up

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 - Sorry ... what's T? O_O
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note Done
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap No
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note OK

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this I'm not entirely sure if I did what you thought but I changed the slider point slightly

01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - ) I think this is OK

Cry:
AR -1 OK
Check the spacing

Fine
Thank you :D
posted
[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better

Looks good.
posted

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
posted
As per your Request

General


Nothing :P

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ?
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ?
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ?
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ?

That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This
posted

EvianBubble wrote:

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note
posted
Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4)
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point.
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5)

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point.
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
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